THE RAT-CATCHER’S DAUGHTER
by Laurence Housman · from The Blue Moon
Adapted Version
Once upon a time, there was a man named Mr. Greedy. He loved gold very much. He had a kind daughter named Lily. Lily was very pretty. Mr. Greedy wanted much gold. He looked at Lily. He thought about gold. He wanted to make money from her. He liked gold more than Lily. This made Lily sad.
A kind little gnome lived underground. He was the Golden Gnome. He saw Mr. Greedy. He saw Mr. Greedy loved gold very much. The Golden Gnome wanted to help Lily. One night, Mr. Greedy set a trap. The Golden Gnome went into the trap. He let the trap catch him. He waited there.
The next day, Mr. Greedy saw the gnome. The gnome was in the trap. "Let me go!" said the gnome. Mr. Greedy smiled. "What will you give me?" he asked. The gnome said, "I give you much gold." Mr. Greedy said, "No, not enough." He wanted to be the richest man in the world. He wanted Lily to marry Prince Leo.
The Golden Gnome thought. He said, "Lily must live underground. She must turn into gold. She must live there for three years." Mr. Greedy smiled. "Yes!" he said. "I want gold!"
The Golden Gnome made Mr. Greedy rich. Mr. Greedy had much gold. Lily went underground. She began to turn gold. She learned many good things.
Mr. Greedy loved his gold. He forgot about Lily. He loved his gold very much.
One day, Lily came to see him. She was partly gold. "Go back!" said Mr. Greedy. "You must be all gold!" Lily was sad. She went back underground. Another day, Lily came again. She was more gold. "Go back!" said Mr. Greedy. "Be all gold!" Lily was sad. She went back underground.
After three years, Lily was all gold. The Golden Gnome came. He told Lily, "Your father wanted this. He wanted gold."
Lily came out of the ground. People saw her. They looked at her strangely. Prince Leo saw Lily. He felt sad for her. He saw her kind heart. He saw her wisdom.
Prince Leo took Lily to his home. He loved Lily. But he wanted her to be human. He wanted her to be real.
The Golden Gnome came again. He said, "Lily can be human. Mr. Greedy must give back the gold."
Lily went to her father. "Please give back the gold!" she asked. Mr. Greedy said, "No! I love my gold!" He loved his gold more than Lily.
The Golden Gnome took the gold. Mr. Greedy gave back the gold. Mr. Greedy had no gold now. He was very sad.
The Golden Gnome helped Lily. He took away the gold. Lily was human again. She was very beautiful. She was kind and wise.
Lily went to Prince Leo. They were very happy. They got married. Mr. Greedy was alone. He was not happy. He had no gold. He was sad. It is good to be kind. It is not good to want too much. True beauty is inside.
Original Story
THE RAT-CATCHER’S DAUGHTER
Once upon a time there lived an old rat-catcher who had a daughter, the most beautiful girl that had ever been born. Their home was a dirty little cabin; but they were not so poor as they seemed, for every night the rat-catcher took the rats he had cleared out of one house and let them go at the door of another, so that on the morrow he might be sure of a fresh job.
His rats got quite to know him, and would run to him when he called; people thought him the most wonderful rat-catcher, and could not make out how it was that a rat remained within reach of his operations.
Now any one can see that a man who practised so cunning a roguery was greedy beyond the intentions of Providence. Every day, as he watched his daughter’s beauty increase, his thoughts were: “When will she be able to pay me back for all the expense she has been to me?” He would have grudged her the very food she ate, if it had not been necessary to keep her in the good looks which were some day to bring him his fortune. For he was greedier than any gnome after gold.
Now all good gnomes have this about them: they love whatever is beautiful, and hate to see harm happen to it. A gnome who lived far away underground below where stood the rat-catcher’s house, said to his fellows: “Up yonder is a man who has a daughter; so greedy is he, he would sell her to the first comer who gave him gold enough! I am going up to look after her.”
So one night, when the rat-catcher set a trap, the gnome went and got himself caught in it. There in the morning, when the rat-catcher came, he found a funny little fellow, all bright and golden, wriggling and beating to be free.
“I can’t get out!” cried the little gnome. “Let me go!”
The rat-catcher screwed up his mouth to look virtuous. “If I let you out, what will you give me?” “A sack full of gold,” answered the gnome, “just as heavy as myself—not a pennyweight less!”
“Not enough!” said the rat-catcher. “Guess again!”
“As heavy as you are!” cried the gnome, beginning to plead in a thin, whining tone.
“I’m a poor man,” said the rat-catcher; “a poor man mayn’t afford to be generous!”
“What is it you want of me?” cried the gnome.
“If I let you go,” said the rat-catcher, “you must make me the richest man in the world!” Then he thought of his daughter: “Also you must make the king’s son marry my daughter; then I will let you go.”
The gnome laughed to himself to see how the trapper was being trapped in his own avarice as, with the most melancholy air, he answered: “I can make you the richest man in the world; but I know of no way of making the king’s son marry your daughter, except one.”
“What way?” asked the rat-catcher.
“Why,” answered the gnome, “for three years your daughter must come and live with me underground, and by the end of the third year her skin will be changed into pure gold like ours. And do you know any king’s son who would refuse to marry a beautiful maiden who was pure gold from the sole of her foot to the crown of her head?”
The rat-catcher had so greedy an inside that he could not believe in any king’s son refusing to marry a maiden of pure gold. So he clapped hands on the bargain, and let the gnome go.
The gnome went down into the ground, and fetched up sacks and sacks of gold, until he had made the rat-catcher the richest man in the world. Then the father called his daughter, whose name was Jasome’, and bade her follow the gnome down into the heart of the earth. It was all in vain that Jasome’ begged and implored; the rat-catcher was bent on having her married to the king’s son. So he pushed, and the gnome pulled, and down she went; and the earth closed after her.
The gnome brought her down to his home under the hill upon which stood the town. Everywhere round her were gold and precious stones; the very air was full of gold dust, so that when she remained still it settled on her hands and her hair, and a soft golden down began to show itself over her skin. So there in the house of the gnome sat Jasome’, and cried; and, far away overhead, she heard the days come and go, by the sound of people walking and the rolling of wheels.
The gnome was very kind to her; nothing did he spare of underground commodities that might afford her pleasure. He taught her the legends of all the heroes that have gone down into earth, and been forgotten, and the lost songs of the old poets, and the buried languages that once gave wisdom to the world: down there all these things are remembered.
She became the most curiously accomplished and wise maiden that ever was hidden from the light of day. “I have to train you,” said the gnome, “to be fit for a king’s bride!” But Jasome’, though she thanked him, only cried to be let out.
In front of the rat-catcher’s house rose a little spring of salt water with gold dust in it, that gilded the basin where it sprang. When he saw it, he began rubbing his hands with delight, for he guessed well enough that his daughter’s tears had made it; and the dust in it told him how surely now she was being turned into gold.
And now the rat-catcher was the richest man in the world: all his traps were made of gold, and when he went rat-hunting he rode in a gilded coach drawn by twelve hundred of the finest and largest rats. This was for an advertisement of the business. He now caught rats for the fun of it, and the show of it, but also to get money by it; for, though he was so rich, ratting and money-grubbing had become a second nature to him: unless he were at one or the other, he could not be happy.
Far below, in the house of the gnome, Jasome’ sat and cried. When the sound of the great bells ringing for Easter came down to her, the gnome said: “To-day I cannot bind you; it is the great rising day for all Christians. If you wish, you may go up, and ask your father now to release you.”
So Jasome’ kissed the gnome, and went up the track of her own tears, that brought her to her father’s door. When she came to the light of day, she felt quite blind; a soft yellow tint was all over her, and already her hair was quite golden.
The rat-catcher was furious when he saw her coming back before her time. “Oh, father,” she cried, “let me come back for a little while to play in the sun!” But her father, fearing lest the gilding of her complexion should be spoiled, drove her back into the earth, and trampled it down over her head.
The gnome seemed quite sorry for her when she returned; but already, he said, a year was gone—and what were three years, when a king’s son would be the reward?
At the next Easter he let her go again; and now she looked quite golden, except for her eyes, and her white teeth, and the nails on her pretty little fingers and toes. But again her father drove her back into the ground, and put a heavy stone slab over the spot to make sure of her.
At last the third Easter came, and she was all gold. She kissed the gnome many times, and was almost sorry to leave him, for he had been very kind to her. And now he told her about her father catching him in the trap, and robbing him of his gold by a hard bargain, and of his being forced to take her down to live with him, till she was turned into gold, so that she might marry the king’s son. “For now,” said he, “you are so compounded of gold that only the gnomes could rub it off you.”
So this time, when Jasome’ came up once more to the light of day, she did not go back again to her cruel father, but went and sat by the roadside, and played with the sunbeams, and wondered when the king’s son would come and marry her. And as she sat there all the country-people who passed by stopped and mocked her; and boys came and threw mud at her because she was all gold from head to foot—an object, to be sure, for all simple folk to laugh at. So presently, instead of hoping, she fell to despair, and sat weeping, with her face hidden in her hands.
Before long the king’s son came that road, and saw something shining like sunlight on a pond; but when he came near, he found a lovely maiden of pure gold lying in a pool of her own tears, with her face hidden in her hair.
Now the king’s son, unlike the country-folk, knew the value of gold; but he was grieved at heart for a maiden so stained all over with it, and more, when he beheld how she wept. So he went to lift her up; and there, surely, he saw the most beautiful face he could ever have dreamed of. But, alas! so discoloured—even her eyes, and her lips, and the very tears she shed were the colour of gold! When he could bring her to speak, she told him how, because she was all gold, all the people mocked at her, and boys threw mud at her; and she had nowhere to go, unless it were back to the kind gnome who lived underground, out of sight of the sweet sun.
So the prince said, “Come with me, and I will take you to my father’s palace, and there nobody shall mock you, but you shall sit all your days in the sunshine, and be happy.” And as they went, more and more he wondered at her great beauty—so spoiled that he could not look at her without grief—and was taken with increasing wonder at the beautiful wisdom stored in her golden mind; for she told him the tales of the heroes which she had learned from the gnome, and of buried cities; also the songs of old poets that have been forgotten; and her voice, like the rest of her, was golden.
The prince said to himself, “I shut my eyes, and am ready to die loving her; yet, when I open them, she is but a talking statue!”
One day he saki to her, “Under all this disguise you must be the most beautiful thing upon earth! Already to me you are the dearest!” and he sighed, for he knew that a king’s son might not marry a figure of gold. Now one day after this, as Jasome’ sat alone in the sunshine and cried, the little old gnome stood before her, and said, “Well, Jasome’, have you married the king’s son?”
“Alas!” cried Jasome’, “you have so changed me: I am no longer human! Yet he loves me, and, but for that, he would marry me.”
“Dear me!” said the gnome. “If that is all, I can take the gold off you again: why, I said so!”
Jasome’ entreated him, by all his former kindness, to do so for her now.
“Yes,” said the gnome, “but a bargain is a bargain. Now is the time for me to get back my bags of gold. Do you go to your father, and let him know that the king’s son is willing to marry you if he restores to me my treasure that he took from me; for that is what it comes to.”
Up jumped Jasome’, and ran to the rat-catcher’s house. “Oh, father,” she cried, “now you can undo all your cruelty to me; for now, if you will give back the gnome his gold, he will give my own face back to me, and I shall marry the king’s son!”
But the rat-catcher was filled with admiration at the sight of her, and would not believe a word she said. “I have given you your dowry,” he answered; “three years I had to do without you to get it. Take it away, and get married, and leave me the peace and plenty I have so hardly earned!”
Jasome’ went back and told the gnome.
“Really,” said he, “I must show this rat-catcher that there are other sorts of traps, and that it isn’t only rats and gnomes that get caught in them! I have given him his taste of wealth; now it shall act as pickle to his poverty!”
So the next time the rat-catcher put his foot out of doors the ground gave way under it, and, snap!—the gnome had him by the leg.
“Let me go!” cried the rat-catcher; “I can’t get out!”
“Can’t you?” said the gnome. “If I let you out, what will you give me?”
“My daughter!” cried the rat-catcher; “my beautiful golden daughter!”
“Oh no!” laughed the gnome. “Guess again!”
“My own weight in gold!” cried the rat-catcher, in a frenzy; but the gnome would not close the bargain till he had wrung from the rat-catcher the promise of his last penny.
So the gnome carried away all the sacks of gold before the rat-catcher’s eyes; and when he had them safe underground, then at last he let the old man go. Then he called Jasome’ to follow him, and she went down willingly into the black earth.
For a whole year the gnome rubbed and scrubbed and tubbed her to get the gold out of her composition; and when it was done, she was the most shiningly beautiful thing you ever set eyes on.
When she got back to the palace, she found her dear prince pining for love of her, and wondering when she would return. So they were married the very next day; and the rat-catcher came to look on at the wedding.
He grumbled because he was in rags, and because he was poor; he wept that he had been robbed of his money and his daughter. But gnomes and daughters, he said, were in one and the same box; such ingratitude as theirs no one could beat.
Story DNA
Moral
Excessive greed leads to ruin and unhappiness, while true love values inner beauty over superficial wealth.
Plot Summary
A greedy rat-catcher, who exploits his rats for endless work, bargains his beautiful daughter, Jasome', to a golden gnome. In exchange for immense wealth and a royal marriage for Jasome', she must live underground for three years, transforming into pure gold. Her father repeatedly rejects her pleas for freedom, valuing her golden state over her happiness. When fully golden, Jasome' is scorned by others but loved by a prince who sees her inner beauty and wisdom. The gnome offers to reverse the transformation if her father returns his gold, but the rat-catcher refuses. The gnome then traps the father, reclaims his wealth, restores Jasome' to her human form, and she marries the prince, leaving her father impoverished and alone.
Themes
Emotional Arc
suffering to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Laurence Housman was an English writer and illustrator, part of the late Victorian and Edwardian era, known for his fairy tales and fantasy. This story reflects common fairy tale tropes of the period.
Plot Beats (15)
- A greedy rat-catcher, who re-releases rats to ensure future work, has a beautiful daughter named Jasome' and schemes to profit from her beauty.
- A benevolent gnome, observing the rat-catcher's greed, allows himself to be caught in a trap.
- The rat-catcher bargains with the gnome, demanding to become the richest man and for his daughter to marry the king's son.
- The gnome agrees, on the condition that Jasome' lives underground for three years to turn into pure gold, which the rat-catcher accepts.
- The gnome makes the rat-catcher the richest man, and Jasome' is forced underground, where she begins to turn golden and gains ancient wisdom.
- The rat-catcher delights in the golden spring that indicates his daughter's transformation and becomes obsessed with his wealth and rat-catching for show.
- At the first two Easters, the gnome allows Jasome' to visit her father, but he cruelly drives her back underground, fearing her gilding will be spoiled.
- After the third year, Jasome' is entirely gold; the gnome reveals her father's trickery and his forced hand in her transformation.
- Jasome' emerges, but is mocked by commoners for her golden appearance, though a prince finds her, is grieved by her state, but is captivated by her inner wisdom.
- The prince takes Jasome' to his palace, loving her despite her golden form, but laments that he cannot marry a 'talking statue'.
- The gnome reappears and offers to restore Jasome's human form if her father returns his gold.
- Jasome' pleads with her father, but he, admiring her golden form and clinging to his wealth, refuses to give back the gold.
- The gnome traps the rat-catcher, forcing him to return all the gold, leaving him impoverished.
- The gnome then spends a year removing the gold from Jasome', restoring her to her original, even more radiant, beauty.
- Jasome' returns to the prince, and they are married, while her father grumbles in rags about his lost wealth and 'ungrateful' daughter.
Characters
Jasome' ★ protagonist
Initially described as the 'most beautiful girl that had ever been born'. After three years underground, her skin, eyes, lips, and even tears are pure gold, giving her a statue-like appearance. After the gold is removed, she is 'the most shiningly beautiful thing you ever set eyes on'.
Attire: Not explicitly described initially, but likely simple, humble attire befitting a rat-catcher's daughter. While underground, she is adorned with gold dust. After transformation, her 'clothing' is her golden skin. After restoration, she would likely wear fine garments suitable for a princess, though not specified.
Wants: To escape her golden form and marry the king's son, to be free from her father's cruelty, and to return to a normal human life.
Flaw: Her initial obedience to her cruel father, her despair when mocked for her golden appearance, and her vulnerability to her father's greed.
She transforms from a beautiful but oppressed human girl into a golden 'talking statue' filled with wisdom, then back into a shiningly beautiful human, ultimately marrying the prince and escaping her father's influence.
Obedient, sorrowful, wise, resilient, loving, despairing. She is initially forced into her situation but learns to adapt and finds solace in the gnome's kindness and wisdom.
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A young woman standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a beautiful, serene face with soft features, long, flowing dark hair, and kind eyes. She wears a simple, flowing cream-colored linen dress. Her posture is graceful and slightly melancholic. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Rat-Catcher ⚔ antagonist
An old man, likely thin and wiry from his profession, with a 'screwed up mouth' when trying to appear virtuous. He becomes very rich, but eventually returns to rags and poverty.
Attire: Initially, simple, dirty clothes befitting a poor rat-catcher. After becoming rich, he wears fine, gilded clothes and rides in a gilded coach. He ends the story 'in rags' and poor.
Wants: To become the richest man in the world and to profit from his daughter's beauty, seeing her as an asset to be leveraged for wealth.
Flaw: Overwhelming greed and avarice, which ultimately leads to his downfall and loss of everything.
He rises from poverty to become the richest man in the world through a bargain with the gnome, but his continued greed and cruelty lead to him losing all his wealth and his daughter, returning to poverty and bitterness.
Greedy, cunning, avaricious, selfish, cruel, ungrateful, obsessed with money and his profession.
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An elderly man, thin and wiry, with a shrewd, avaricious expression. He has a long, pointed nose and thin lips, with a few wisps of grey hair. He wears tattered, dirty brown linen clothes and carries a small, empty golden rat trap in his hand. His posture is hunched and grumbling. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Gnome ◆ supporting
A 'funny little fellow, all bright and golden'. He is small and capable of being caught in a rat trap.
Attire: Not explicitly described, but his natural state is 'all bright and golden', suggesting his skin or form itself is golden, rather than wearing clothes.
Wants: To protect beauty from harm (specifically Jasome'), to uphold bargains, and to reclaim what was unjustly taken from him.
Flaw: Bound by bargains, even those made under duress.
He acts as a catalyst for the plot, initially tricked by the rat-catcher but ultimately orchestrating the rat-catcher's downfall and Jasome's transformation and restoration, fulfilling his role as a protector of beauty and enforcer of justice.
Kind, wise, observant, cunning (in dealing with the rat-catcher), just, and a lover of beauty.
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A small, stout gnome standing upright, facing forward, full body visible head to toe. His entire body is made of shimmering gold, with a smooth, metallic texture. He has a round, wise face with small, bright eyes and a slight, knowing smile. He wears no clothes, his golden form is his attire. He holds a small, heavy-looking sack of gold in his hands. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The King's Son ◆ supporting
A prince, likely handsome and noble in appearance. He is capable of lifting Jasome' and is described as having a 'grieved heart' when seeing her golden form.
Attire: Implied to be fine, royal attire befitting a prince, though not explicitly detailed. Likely rich fabrics and colors.
Wants: To find a suitable bride, to alleviate Jasome's suffering, and to marry the woman he loves, despite her unusual appearance.
Flaw: Initially hesitant to marry a 'figure of gold' due to societal expectations, but his love overcomes this.
He encounters Jasome' in her golden form, is initially grieved by her appearance but falls in love with her inner wisdom and beauty. He patiently waits for her transformation to be reversed, ultimately marrying her.
Compassionate, discerning (sees value beyond surface appearance), loving, patient, wise (appreciates Jasome's wisdom), honorable.
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A young man of noble bearing, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible head to toe. He has a kind, handsome face with dark, expressive eyes and short, neatly combed brown hair. He wears a richly embroidered tunic of deep blue velvet with silver trim, a white linen shirt underneath, and dark breeches. His posture is regal yet compassionate, with a gentle, loving expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Rat-catcher's Dirty Little Cabin
A small, unkempt dwelling, likely a simple timber or wattle-and-daub structure with a thatched roof, typical of a poor European peasant's home. It appears poorer than it actually is due to the rat-catcher's cunning. The interior would be dimly lit, with basic, worn furnishings.
Mood: Grubby, deceptive, avaricious, later becomes a place of wealth but still marked by greed.
The rat-catcher's home where he plots his schemes, where the gnome is caught in a trap, and where Jasome is forced to go underground.
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A cramped, dimly lit interior of a poor, half-timbered European peasant's cabin. The rough-hewn wooden beams of the ceiling are visible, and the walls are plastered with a rough, uneven texture. A small, grimy window lets in a sliver of weak morning light, illuminating dust motes in the air. On a simple, worn wooden table, a crude rat trap sits prominently. The floor is packed earth, and a few tattered rags lie in a corner. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Gnome's Underground Home
A subterranean dwelling, far below the town, filled with an abundance of gold and precious stones. The very air is thick with gold dust, settling on surfaces. It is a place of ancient knowledge, forgotten legends, and lost songs.
Mood: Magical, opulent, ancient, nurturing, yet also a prison for Jasome.
Jasome' lives here for three years, slowly turning to gold, learning ancient wisdom from the gnome. It is her sanctuary from her father's greed.
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A cavernous underground chamber, glowing with a soft, diffused golden light emanating from the very rock formations. Walls are veined with shimmering gold and studded with uncut precious stones like rubies and emeralds. The air is thick with fine gold dust, catching the light. Small, intricate furnishings carved from solid gold are scattered around, and a clear, still pool of water reflects the golden ambiance. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Roadside by the Palace
A rural road leading to the king's palace, likely a well-trodden dirt path or simple cobblestone track, bordered by fields or woods. It is exposed to the elements and the gaze of passersby.
Mood: Exposed, vulnerable, initially hopeful, then despairing, later a place of encounter and rescue.
Jasome, now entirely gold, sits here after leaving the gnome, hoping for the king's son but instead facing mockery, until the prince finds her.
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A sun-drenched, winding dirt road in a European countryside, leading towards a distant, grand palace with stone walls and turrets. Wild grasses and clusters of wildflowers line the edges of the path. Golden afternoon sunlight streams down, creating dappled patterns on the ground. A few scattered, weathered rocks provide seating. The sky is clear and bright blue. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
King's Palace
A grand and opulent royal residence, likely of a European medieval or Renaissance style, with large halls, courtyards, and chambers designed for royalty. It offers comfort and protection.
Mood: Regal, protective, initially a place of quiet sorrow for Jasome, later joyful for the wedding.
Jasome is brought here by the prince, where she lives in safety and is loved despite her golden state, and where she eventually marries the prince.
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A vast, sunlit hall within a European Renaissance-style palace. High, arched windows with intricate leaded glass overlook a formal garden. The walls are adorned with large, richly woven tapestries depicting historical scenes. The floor is polished marble, reflecting the light. Ornate, carved wooden furniture and velvet drapes add to the opulence. Sunlight streams in, creating bright patches on the floor. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.