THE BURNING ROSE
by Laurence Housman · from The Field of Clover
Adapted Version
Noodle has a very important job. Princess Melilot needs help. Noodle must find a magic rose. The rose is very special. It is in a giant's dream. Noodle will bring it back.
Noodle starts his trip. He rides his Magic Plough. The plough goes very fast. Noodle has a magic ring. The ring helps Noodle.
Noodle sees a giant. The giant is very big. He sleeps on the sand. A soft cloud is over his head. The cloud holds a dream.
Noodle climbs up. He goes to the giant's ear. He puts his magic ring to his lips. Noodle sings a sweet song. The giant hears him. Noodle goes into the dream. He sees a garden. Many roses grow there.
Noodle calls his Magic Plough. The plough comes to him. It flies into the dream. It is ready to go fast. Noodle needs to escape.
The garden has many roses. They are red and pink. They smell very sweet. The sweet smell makes Noodle sleepy. He must stay awake.
Noodle tries to pick a rose. The roses get angry. They make loud noise. They get very hot. Noodle feels the heat.
Noodle tries to run. The roses are too hot. He cannot escape. He needs help now.
Noodle calls his friends. They are Fire-eaters. They come to help. They eat the hot fire. The roses stop burning. The Fire-eaters get very big.
Noodle can pick a rose. He pulls it hard. The rose is strong. He pulls it again. Now he holds the rose.
The giant wakes up. He is very angry. The dream gets messy. It gets very hot. Noodle and the Magic Plough fly up. They fly high in the air.
Noodle rides fast. The Magic Plough goes down. They go down the giant's body. The giant tries to catch them. Noodle is quick.
Noodle gets away. He leaves the giant. He goes back home. He goes to Princess Melilot.
The Old Nurse sees Noodle. She is very happy. She smells the sweet rose. The rose smells so good.
Noodle puts the magic rose on Princess Melilot. Her heart starts to beat. It beats strong and true. She opens her eyes. She smiles a sweet smile. She remembers everything.
Love is very strong. It made Noodle brave. It made Princess Melilot well.
Original Story
THE BURNING ROSE
he told him how he was to go, across the desert southward, till he found a giant, longer in length than a day's journey, lying asleep upon the sand. Over his head, it was told, hung a cloud, covering him from the heat and resting itself against his brows; within the cloud was a dream, and within the dream grew the garden of the Burning Rose. Than this she knew no more, nor by what means Noodle might gain entrance and become possessor of the Rose.
Noodle waited for no more; he mounted upon the Galloping Plough, and pressed away over the desert to the south. For three days he travelled through parched places, refreshing himself by the way with the water of the Thirsty Well, calling on the Well-folk for the replenishment of his crystal, and turning the draught to wine by the sweetness of his magic ring.
At length he saw a cloud rising to him from a distance; like a great opal it hung motionless between earth and heaven. Coming nearer he saw the giant himself stretched out for a day's journey across the sand. His head lay under the colours of the dawn, and his feet were covered with the dusk of evening, and over his middle shone the noonday sun.
Under the giant's shadow Noodle stopped, and gazed up into the cloud; through the outer covering of its mists he saw what seemed to be balls of fire, and knew that within lay the dream and the garden of the Burning Rose.
The giant laughed and muttered in his sleep, for the dream was sweet to him. 'O Rose,' he said, 'O sweet Rose, what end is there of thy sweetness? How innumerable is the dance of the Roses of my Rose-garden!'
Noodle caught hold of the ropes of the giant's hair, and climbed till he sat within the hollow of his right ear. Then he put to his lips the ring, the Sweetener, and sang till the giant heard him in his sleep; and the sweet singing mixed itself with the sweetness of the Rose in the giant's brain, and he muttered to himself, saying: 'O bee, O sweet bee, O bee in my brain, what honey wilt thou fetch for me out of the Roses of my Rose-garden?'
So, more and more, Noodle sweetened himself to the giant, till the giant passed him into his brain, and into the heart of the dream, even into the garden of the Burning Rose.
Far down below the folds of the cloud, Noodle remembered that the Galloping Plough lay waiting a call from him. 'When I have stolen the Rose,' thought he, 'I may need swift heels for my flight.' And he put the Sweetener to his lips and whistled the Plough up to him.
It came, cleaving the encirclement of clouds like a silver gleam of moonlight, and for a moment, where they parted, Noodle saw a rift of blue sky, and the light of the outer world clear through their midst.
The giant turned uneasily in his sleep, and the garden of the Burning Rose rocked to its foundations as the edge of things real pierced into it.
'While I stay here there is danger,' thought Noodle. 'Surely I must make haste to possess myself of the Rose and to escape!'
All round him was a garden set thick with rose-trees in myriads of blossom, rose behind rose as far as the eye could reach, and the fragrance of them lay like a heavy curtain of sleep upon the senses. Noodle, beginning to feel drowsy, stretched out his hand in haste to the nearest flower, lest in a little while he should be no more than a part of the giant's dream. 'O beloved Heart of Melilot!' he cried, and crushed his fingers upon the stem.
The whole bough crackled and sprang away at his touch; the Rose turned upon him, screaming and spouting fire; a noise like thunder filled all the air. Every rose in the garden turned and spat flame at where he stood. His face and his hands became blistered with the heat.
Leaping upon the back of his Plough, he cried, 'Carry me to the borders of the garden where there are open spaces! The price of the Princess is upon my head!'
The Plough bounded this way and that, searching for some outlet by which to escape. It flew in spirals and circles, it leaped like a flea, it burrowed like a mole, it ploughed up the rose-trees by the roots. But so soon as it had passed they stood up unharmed again, and to whatever point of refuge the Plough fled, that way they all turned their heads and darted out vomitings of fire.
In vain did Noodle summon the Well-folk to his aid; his crystal shot forth fountains of water that turned into steam as they rose, and fell back again, scalding him.
Then with two deaths threatening to devour him, he brandished the ring, calling upon the Fire-eaters for their aid.
They laughed as they came. 'Here is food for you!' he cried. 'Multiply your appetites about me, or I shall be consumed in these flames!'
'Brandish again!' cried they—the same seven whom he had fed. 'We are not enough; this fire is not quenchable.'
Noodle brandished till the whole garden swarmed with their kind. One fastened himself upon every rose, a gulf opposing itself to a torrent. All sight of the conflagration disappeared; but within there went a roaring sound, and the bodies of the Fire-eaters crackled, growing large and luminous the while.
'Do your will quickly and begone!' cried the Fire-eaters. 'Even now we swell to bursting with the pumping in of these fires!'
Noodle seized on a rose to which one hung, sucking out its heats. He tugged, but the strong fibres held. Then he locked himself to the back of the Plough, crying to it and caressing its speed with all names under heaven, and beseeching it in the name of Melilot to break free. And the Plough giving but one plunge, the Rose came away into Noodle's hand, panting and a prisoner. All blushing it grew and radiant, with a soft inner glow, and an odour of incomparable sweetness. He seemed to see the heart of Melilot beating before him.
But now there came a blast of fire behind him, for the Fire-eaters had disappeared, and all was whirling and shaken before his eyes; and the Plough sped desperately over earthquake and space. For the plucking of the Rose had awakened the giant from his sleep; and the dream shrivelled and spun away in a whirl of flame-coloured vapours. Leaping into clear day out of the unravelment of its mists, Noodle found himself and his Plough launching over an edge of precipice for a downward dive into space. The giant's hair, standing upright from his head in the wrath and horror of his awakening, made a forest ending in his forehead that bowered them to right and to left. Quitting it they slid ungovernably over the bulge of his brow, and went at full spurt for the abyss.
Dexterously the Plough steered its descent, catching on the bridge and furrowing the ridge of the nose; nine leagues were the duration of a second.
The giant, thinking some venomous parasite was injuring his flesh, aimed, and a moment too late had thumped his fist upon the place. But already the Plough skirting the amazed opening of his mouth was lost in the trammels of his beard. Thence, as it escaped the rummaging of his fingers, it flew scouring his breast, and inflicted a flying scratch over the regions of his abdomen. Then, still believing it to be the triumphal procession of a flea, he pursued it to his thigh, and mistaking the shadow for the substance allowed it yet again to escape. At his knee-cap there was but a hair's-breadth between Noodle and the weight of his thumb; but thereafter the Plough out-distanced his every effort, and, with Noodle preserved whole and alive, sped fast and far, bearing the Burning Rose to the heart of the beloved Melilot.
The crone was aware of his coming before she heard him, or saw the gleam of his Plough running beam-like over the land. From her seat by the Princess's bower she clapped her hands, and springing to his neck ere he alighted: 'A long way off, and a long time off,' she cried, 'I knew what fortune was with you; for when you plucked off the Rose, and bore it out of the heart of the dream, the scent of it filled the world; and I felt the sweetness of youth once more in my blood.'
Then she led him to the Princess, and bade him lay the Rose in her breast, that her heart might be won back into the world. Looking at her face again, Noodle saw how memory had made it more beautiful than ever, and how between her lips had grown the tender parting of a smile. Then he laid the Rose where the movement of the heart should be; and presently under the white breast rose the music of its beating.
'Ah!' cried the old nurse, weeping for happiness, 'now her heart that loved me is come back, and I can listen all day to the sound of it! You have brought memory to her, you have brought love; now bring breath, and the awakening of her five senses. Surely the light of her eyes will be your reward!'
Story DNA
Moral
True love and courage can overcome impossible obstacles and restore what is lost.
Plot Summary
Noodle embarks on a perilous quest to retrieve the Burning Rose, hidden within the dream of a colossal sleeping giant, to restore Princess Melilot's lost heart and memory. Using his magical Galloping Plough and a 'Sweetener' ring, he enters the giant's dream, where he faces a garden of fiery, sentient roses. With the help of summoned Fire-eaters, he plucks the Rose, causing the dream to collapse and awakening the giant. Noodle makes a daring escape down the giant's body and successfully delivers the Rose to Melilot, whose heart and memory are restored, though her full awakening is still anticipated.
Themes
Emotional Arc
challenge to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Laurence Housman was an English writer and illustrator, known for his fairy tales and fantasy works in the late 19th and early 20th centuries, often with a mystical or allegorical bent.
Plot Beats (15)
- Noodle is given a quest to find the Burning Rose, located within a giant's dream, to save Princess Melilot.
- He sets off on the Galloping Plough, using his magic ring and the Thirsty Well for sustenance.
- Noodle finds the enormous sleeping giant, whose head is under a cloud containing his dream.
- He climbs into the giant's ear and uses his magic ring to sing sweetly, entering the giant's dream and the garden of the Burning Rose.
- Noodle summons the Galloping Plough into the dream for a swift escape.
- The garden is filled with countless, fragrant roses that try to put Noodle to sleep.
- When Noodle tries to pluck a rose, all the roses turn on him, screaming and spouting fire.
- His attempts to escape or use the Well-folk's water fail against the intense flames.
- Noodle summons the Fire-eaters, who consume the flames from the roses, swelling to bursting.
- He seizes the opportunity to pluck a rose, which resists fiercely but eventually comes into his hand.
- The plucking awakens the giant, causing the dream to disintegrate into fiery chaos, and Noodle and the Plough are launched into the air.
- They make a dangerous, high-speed descent down the giant's body, narrowly escaping his attempts to swat them.
- Noodle successfully escapes the giant and returns to the Princess's bower.
- The old nurse, sensing his success, greets him joyfully, noting the scent of the Rose filled the world.
- Noodle places the Burning Rose on Princess Melilot's breast, and her heart begins to beat again, restoring her memory and a smile.
Characters
Noodle ★ protagonist
Lean and agile build, capable of climbing and quick movements. His face and hands are blistered by fire during his escape from the Burning Rose garden, indicating a fair or sensitive complexion.
Attire: Practical, durable clothing suitable for desert travel and climbing, possibly made of linen or sturdy wool in muted earth tones. He would likely wear sturdy boots.
Wants: To obtain the Burning Rose to win back the Princess's heart, driven by love and a sense of duty or quest.
Flaw: Can be impulsive, as seen when he hastily grabs the nearest rose, triggering the garden's defense. He also seems to rely heavily on his magical items for solutions.
He successfully completes his perilous quest, demonstrating his bravery and resourcefulness, and ultimately brings healing and love back to the Princess.
Brave, resourceful, determined, quick-thinking, and somewhat audacious (climbing into a giant's ear). He is driven by a clear goal.
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A young man with a lean, agile build, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a determined expression, with some faint red blistering on his face and hands. He wears practical, sturdy linen tunic and trousers in muted earth tones, with a leather belt and sturdy brown boots. He holds a simple crystal vial in one hand, and a golden ring with a single, smooth, dark stone is visible on his finger. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Giant ⚔ antagonist
Immensely long, described as 'longer in length than a day's journey'. His body is so vast that his head lies under the colors of dawn, his feet are covered with the dusk of evening, and his middle shines with the noonday sun. He has a massive brow, a long nose, and a beard.
Attire: None, he is described as lying on the sand, covered by a cloud. His 'clothing' is the landscape itself.
Wants: To enjoy his sweet dream undisturbed. His primary motivation is self-preservation and comfort.
Flaw: His deep sleep makes him vulnerable to intrusion. His immense size makes him slow to react to small disturbances.
He is disturbed from his ageless sleep by Noodle's actions, briefly experiencing wrath and attempting to crush the intruder, before presumably returning to his slumber after Noodle escapes.
Peaceful and dream-filled when asleep, enjoying the sweetness of his dream. Wrathful and destructive when awakened and disturbed, perceiving Noodle as a 'venomous parasite'.
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An ancient, colossal male giant, lying prone across a vast desert landscape, facing forward, full body visible head to toe. His skin is like weathered rock and sand, deeply furrowed with age, with a long, gnarled beard and hair like thick, dark ropes. A large, opalescent cloud rests against his brow, partially obscuring his upper face. His eyes are closed in deep slumber. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Galloping Plough ◆ supporting
A magical plough, capable of swift movement across land and through air. It is described as having 'swift heels' and appearing like a 'silver gleam of moonlight' when cleaving clouds. It can burrow like a mole and leap like a flea.
Attire: None, it is a tool.
Wants: To serve Noodle and carry out his commands, especially to ensure his escape and success.
Flaw: None apparent, it is a powerful magical item.
Remains a steadfast and crucial companion to Noodle, enabling his journey and escape, and ultimately delivering him and the Rose to the Princess.
Loyal, obedient, and incredibly swift. It responds to Noodle's calls and caresses, showing a degree of sentience and affection.
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A magical, antique wooden plough with gleaming silver metal blades, suspended mid-air, facing forward, full body visible head to toe. It has an elegant, streamlined design, with a faint silver glow emanating from its edges, suggesting speed and magic. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Burning Rose ⚔ antagonist
Initially appears as one of myriad roses in a garden, but when disturbed, it screams and spouts fire. After being plucked, it is described as 'blushing', 'radiant', with a 'soft inner glow', and an 'odour of incomparable sweetness'. It is strong and resistant, with 'strong fibres'.
Attire: None, it is a flower.
Wants: To protect itself and remain within the giant's dream. Once captured, its motivation shifts to fulfilling its purpose for the Princess.
Flaw: Can be forcibly plucked by a determined individual, especially with aid from Fire-eaters.
Transforms from a dangerous, fiery guardian into a radiant, sweet, and healing object once plucked, fulfilling its destiny to restore the Princess.
Fiercely defensive and aggressive when threatened, screaming and spouting fire. Once captured, it becomes beautiful, radiant, and sweet, embodying the 'heart of Melilot'.
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A single, perfect rose, facing forward, full body visible head to toe. Its petals are a deep, rich crimson, with a soft, warm golden light emanating from its core, suggesting an inner fire. The stem is thick and thorny, but the bloom itself is exquisitely beautiful and appears to pulse gently. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Crone ◆ supporting
An old woman, likely frail but with surprising agility, as she springs to Noodle's neck. Her appearance suggests wisdom and a deep connection to magic or fate.
Attire: Simple, practical clothing suitable for an old nurse or attendant, possibly a dark, homespun dress or cloak, reflecting her role and age.
Wants: To see the Princess restored to health and happiness. She is driven by love and loyalty.
Flaw: None apparent, she seems to be a source of wisdom and support.
She begins the story waiting for the Princess's restoration and ends it weeping with happiness as her wish is fulfilled.
Wise, perceptive, joyful, and deeply caring, especially for the Princess. She possesses foresight, knowing Noodle's success before he arrives.
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An elderly woman with a kind, deeply wrinkled face and bright, knowing eyes, facing forward, full body visible head to toe. Her white hair is pulled back simply. She wears a dark, homespun linen dress with a simple apron. Her posture is slightly stooped but she has an alert, joyful expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Princess ○ minor
Described as beautiful, with her memory making her even more so. She is initially in a state of suspended animation or illness, with a 'white breast' and a heart that needs to be 'won back into the world'. After the Rose is placed, a 'tender parting of a smile' grows between her lips.
Attire: Fine, delicate nightwear or a simple white gown, suitable for someone in a state of illness or suspended animation, likely made of soft linen or silk.
Wants: To be restored to life and love.
Flaw: Her current state of unresponsiveness, requiring external intervention.
She is transformed from an unresponsive figure into a living, smiling person with a beating heart, signifying her return to life and love.
Her personality is not directly shown, as she is in a state of suspended animation. However, her 'heart that loved me' (the nurse) suggests she is loving and kind.
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A beautiful young woman with a serene, pale face and closed eyes, lying peacefully, facing forward, full body visible head to toe. Her long, elegant dark hair is spread around her head. She wears a simple, flowing white linen gown. A faint, tender smile is just beginning to form on her lips. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
The Desert Southward
A vast, parched expanse of sand stretching southward, under a sky that transitions from dawn colors at one end to evening dusk at the other, with the noonday sun directly overhead in the middle. It is a desolate, endless landscape.
Mood: Vast, desolate, journey-like, awe-inspiring due to the giant's scale
Noodle's journey to find the giant and the initial sighting of the giant and the cloud.
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A vast, golden-orange desert landscape under a clear sky, stretching to the horizon. In the distance, a colossal, recumbent figure is barely discernible, partially obscured by a shimmering, iridescent cloud that hangs low. The sand is rippled and wind-swept, with subtle variations in color from pale gold to deep ochre. The air shimmers with heat haze. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The Cloud/Giant's Dream
An immense, opal-like cloud, motionless between earth and heaven, resting against the giant's brows. Its outer covering is misty, but within, balls of fire are visible, hinting at the dream and the garden it contains. It is a gateway to another reality.
Mood: Mysterious, ethereal, gateway-like, magical
Noodle's entry into the giant's dream via his ear, a transition point.
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A swirling, iridescent cloud, like a giant opal, seen from a close perspective. Wisps of mist curl and part to reveal glimpses of fiery, glowing spheres deep within. The texture of the cloud is soft and luminous, with shifting colors of pink, blue, and gold. The giant's immense, weathered ear, with ropes of hair, is visible at the edge of the frame, providing a sense of scale. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The Garden of the Burning Rose
A vast, enclosed garden, dense with countless rose-trees in full blossom, stretching as far as the eye can see. The air is heavy with an intoxicating, sleep-inducing fragrance. When disturbed, the roses turn and spout fire, creating a conflagration.
Mood: Intoxicating, overwhelming, beautiful but dangerous, fiery, chaotic
Noodle attempts to pluck the Rose, leading to a fiery battle and the eventual acquisition of the Rose.
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An overwhelming, dense garden filled with countless rose bushes, their blossoms a vibrant, impossible red, stretching into a hazy, fragrant distance. The air is thick with an oppressive, golden-orange glow from the roses, which are actively spouting small, controlled flames. The ground is obscured by the sheer density of the plants. The atmosphere is both beautiful and intensely dangerous, with a sense of claustrophobic heat. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The Giant's Body (Awakened)
The colossal body of the awakened giant, now a landscape of precipices, ridges, and valleys. His hair stands upright like a forest, his brow bulges, and his nose forms a bridge and furrow. His mouth is an 'amazed opening', and his beard is a tangle of 'trammels'. His skin is a vast, living terrain.
Mood: Perilous, immense, chaotic, terrifying, exhilarating
Noodle's desperate escape from the giant's awakening, traversing his body as a landscape.
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A dramatic, close-up landscape view of a colossal, awakened giant's face and upper body, rendered as a perilous terrain. His hair forms a dense, dark forest against a clear, bright sky. The skin is textured like weathered rock, with deep furrows and ridges. A vast, open mouth, like a chasm, is visible in the distance. The perspective is from a small flying object, emphasizing the immense scale and the dizzying heights and depths. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.