THE PRINCESS MELILOT

by Laurence Housman · from The Field of Clover

fairy tale quest hopeful Ages 8-14 1886 words 9 min read
Cover: THE PRINCESS MELILOT

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 425 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Noodle had a special magic plough. It could run very fast. But one day, Noodle was very tired. He fell off the plough. He fell asleep on soft grass. The plough ran away. Noodle lost it.

Noodle woke up. The plough was gone. He was very sad. "I miss my plough," he said. "I must find it." So Noodle walked and walked. He looked for a very long time. He did not stop.

One day, Noodle saw a big palace. It was very quiet. The gates were open. Noodle went inside the garden. He saw his magic plough! It was on the grass. Many men pulled at it. They tried to move it. But it did not move.

Then Noodle saw a girl. She stood very, very still. She was like a pretty statue. She did not move at all. She did not see or hear. Her feet were stuck to the ground. She was Princess Lily. She was so pretty. Noodle liked her very much. He wanted to help her.

An Old Nurse stood near her. She was crying. "Who is she?" Noodle asked. "She is Princess Lily," said the Old Nurse. "Her bad step-sisters did this. The Bad Queen helped them too. They made a big spell. Now Princess Lily sleeps and sleeps. She cannot wake up. She cannot move at all."

"The spell has four parts," said the Old Nurse. "She cannot remember things. She cannot feel happy inside. She cannot breathe well. And her feet are stuck. We need magic water for her eyes. We need a magic rose. We need magic air. And we need the plough."

"I am the plough's friend!" said Noodle. He blew on his magic ring. The plough heard his call. It ran back to Noodle fast. It was happy to see him! The men were very surprised. The Old Nurse smiled big.

The Old Nurse was very happy now. She clapped her hands. "Good! You can help her!" she said. "First, help her remember things. Use your magic water. Put it on her eyes. Then she will remember."

Noodle had a magic crystal too. He asked it for special water. Two blue drops of water came. Noodle was very careful and gentle. He put the drops on Princess Lily's eyes.

Princess Lily's eyes blinked a little! She started to remember things. But she still could not see. She still could not hear yet. "Good!" said the Old Nurse. "Now find the magic rose. Be brave, Noodle!" Noodle was brave. He was ready to help more.

Original Story 1886 words · 9 min read

THE PRINCESS MELILOT

hen Noodle, carrying the crystal with him, set foot once more upon dry land, straightway he was again upon the back of the Galloping Plough, with the world flying away under him. But now weariness came over him, and his head weighed this way and that, so that earth and sky mixed themselves before his gaze, and he was so drugged with sleep that he had no wits to bid the Plough slacken from its speed. Therefore it happened that as they passed a wood, a hanging bough caught him, and brushed him like a feather from his place, landing him on a green bosom of grass, where he slept the sleep of the weary, nor ever lifted his head to see the Plough fast disappearing over hill and valley and plain, out of sound of his voice or sight of his eye.

When Noodle awoke and found that the Plough was gone, he was bitter against himself for his folly. 'So poor a use to make of so noble a steed!' he cried; 'no wonder it has gone from me to seek for a worthier master! If by good fortune I find it again, needs must I do great things by its aid to be worthy of its service.' So he set out, following the furrow of its course, determined, however far he must seek, to journey on till he found it.

For a whole year he travelled, till at length he came, footsore and weary, to a deserted palace standing in the midst of an overgrown garden. The great gates, which lay wide open, were overrun with creepers, and the paths were green with weeds. That morning he had thought that he saw far away on the hills the gleam of his silver Plough, and now hope rose high, for he could see by its track that the Plough had passed before him into the garden of the palace. 'O my moonbeam,' he thought, 'is it here I shall find you at last?'

Within the garden there was a sound of cross questions and crooked answers, of many talking with loud voices, and of one weeping apart from the rest. When he got quite close, he was struck still with awe, and joy, and wonder. For first there lay the Galloping Plough in the middle of a green lawn, and round it a score of serving-men, tugging at it and trying to make it move on. Near by stood an old woman, wringing her hands and begging them to leave it alone: 'For,' cried she, 'if the Plough touches but the feet of the Princess, she will be uprooted, and will presently wither away and die. Of what use is it to break one, if the other enchantments cannot be broken?'

In the centre of the lawn grew a bower of roses, and beneath the bower stood the loveliest princess that ever eye beheld; but she stood there motionless, and without sign of life. She seemed neither to hear, nor see, nor breathe; her feet were rooted to the ground; though they seemed only to rest lightly under her weight upon the grass, no man, nor a hundred men, could stir her from where she stood. And, as the spell that held her fast bound to the spot, even so was the spell that sealed her senses,—no man might lift it from her. When Noodle set eyes upon her he knew that for the third time his heart had been stolen from him, and that to be happy he must possess her, or die.

He ran quickly to the old woman, who, unregarded by the serving-men, stood weeping and wringing her hands. 'Tell me, said Noodle, 'who is this sleeper who stands enchanted and rooted like a flower to earth? And who are you, and these others who work and cry at cross purposes?'

The old woman cried from a wide mouth: 'It is my mistress, the honey-jewel of my heart, whom you see here so grievously enchanted. All the gifts of the fairies at her christening did not prevent what was foretold of her at her birth. In her seventeenth year, as you see her now, so it was told of her that she should be.'

'Does she live?' asked Noodle; 'is she asleep? She is not dead; when will she wake? Tell me, old woman, her history, and how this fate has come upon her.'

'She was the daughter of the king of this country by his first wife,' said the old woman, 'and heir to the throne after his death; but when her mother died the king married again, and the three daughters he had by his second wife were jealous of the beauty, and charm, and goodness which raised their sister so high above them in the estimation of all men. So they asked their mother to teach them a spell that should rob Melilot of her charms, and make them useless in the eyes of men. And their mother, who was wise in such arts, taught to each of them a spell, so that together they might work their will.

'One day they came running to Melilot, and said, "Come and play with us a new game that our mother has taught us!" Then they began turning themselves into flowers. "I will be a hollyhock!" said one. "And I will be a columbine!" said another; and saying the spell over each other they became each the flower they had named.

'Then they unloosed the spells, and became themselves again. "Oh, it is so nice to be a flower!" they cried, laughing and clapping their hands. But Melilot knew no spell.

At last, seeing how her sisters turned into flowers, and came back safe again, "I will be a rose!" she cried; "turn me into a rose and out again!"

Then her three sisters joined their tongues together, and finished the spell over her. And so soon as she had become a rose-tree, the three sisters turned into three moles, and went down under the earth and gnawed at the roots.

Then they came up, and took their own forms again, and sang,—

"Sister, sister, here you are now,

Till the ploughman come with the Galloping Plough!"

Then they turned into bees, and sucked out the honey from the roses, and coming to themselves again they sang,—

"Sister, here you must doze and doze,

Till they bring you a flower of the Burning Rose!"

'Then they shook the dewdrops out of her eyes, crying,—

"Sister, your brain lies under our spell,

Till water be brought from the Thirsty Well!"

'Then they took the top blossom of all, and broke it to pieces, and threw the petals away as they cried,—

"Sister, your life goes down for a term,

Till they bring you breath from the Camphor-Worm!"

'And when they had done all this, they turned her back into her true shape, and left her standing even as you see her now, without warmth, or sight, or memory, or motion, dead saving for her beauty, that never changes or dies. And here she must stand till the spells which have been fastened upon her have been unloosed. No long time after, the wickedness of the three sisters and of their cruel mother was discovered to the king, and they were all put to death for the crime. Yet the ill they had done remained; and the king's grief became so great to see his loved daughter standing dead before him that he removed with his court to another place, and left this palace to the care of only a few serving-men, and myself to keep watch and guard over the Princess.

'So now four-fold is the spell that holds her, and to break the lightest of them the water of the Thirsty Well is needed; with two of its drops laid upon her eyes memory will come back to her, and her mind will remember of the things of the past. And for the breaking of the second spell is needed a blossom of the Burning Rose, and the plucking of that no man's hand can achieve; but when the Rose is laid upon her breast, her heart will belong to the world once more, and will beat again under her bosom. And for the breaking of the third spell one must bring the breath of the Camphor-Worm that has lain for a whole year inside its body, and breathe it between her lips; then she will breathe again, and all her five senses will return to her. And for the last spell only the Galloping Plough can uproot her back to life, and free her feet for the ways of earth. Now, here we have the Galloping Plough with no man who can guide it, and what aid can it be? If these fools should be able to make it so much as but touch the feet of my dear mistress, she will be mown down like grass, and die presently for lack of earth; for only the three other charms I have told you of can put whole life back into her.'

'As for the mastery of the Plough,' said Noodle, 'I will fetch that from them in a breath. See, in a moment, how marvellous will be the uplifting of their eyes!' He put to his lips the firestone ring—the Sweetener—and blew but one note through it. Then in a moment the crowd divided hither and thither, with cries of wonder and alarm, for the Plough turned and bounded back to its master quickly, as an Arab mare at the call of her owner.

The old woman, weeping for gladness, cried: 'Thou art master of the Plough! Art thou master of all the other things as well?'

He said: 'Of one thing only. Tell me of the Burning Rose and the Camphor-Worm; what and where are they? For I am the master of the ends of the earth by reason of the speed with which this carries me; and I am lord of the Thirsty Well, and have the Fire-eaters for my friends.'

The old woman clapped her hands, and blessed him for his youth, and his wisdom, and his courage. 'First,' she said, 'restore to the Princess her memory by means of the water of the Thirsty Well; then I will show you the way to the Burning Rose, for the easier thing must be done first.'

Then Noodle drew out the crystal and breathed in it, calling on the Well-folk for the two drops of water to lay on Princess Melilot's eyes. Immediately in the bottom of the cup appeared two blue drops of water, that came climbing up the sides of the glass and stood trembling together on the brim. And Noodle, touching them with the firestone ring to make the memory of things sweet to her, bent back the Princess's face, and let them fall under her closed lids.

'Look!' cried the faithful nurse, 'light trembles within those eyes of hers! In there she begins to remember things; but as yet she sees and hears nothing. Now it is for you to be swift and fetch her the blossom of the Burning Rose. Be wise, and you shall not fail!'


Story DNA fairy tale · hopeful

Moral

True love and unwavering determination can break even the most powerful enchantments.

Plot Summary

Noodle loses his magical Galloping Plough and spends a year searching for it. He discovers it at a deserted palace, where the beautiful Princess Melilot stands enchanted, rooted to the ground and lifeless. An old nurse explains that Melilot was cursed by her jealous step-sisters and step-mother with a four-fold spell, requiring water from the Thirsty Well, a blossom from the Burning Rose, breath from the Camphor-Worm, and the Galloping Plough to break. Noodle, revealing his mastery over the Plough and the Well, uses water from the Thirsty Well to restore Melilot's memory, marking the first step in breaking her enchantment.

Themes

perseverancelove and devotionovercoming evilredemption

Emotional Arc

despair to hope to partial triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three (spells), personification (Galloping Plough)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: happy (implied, but not yet reached in this excerpt)
Magic: Galloping Plough (magical steed), crystal (for summoning), firestone ring/Sweetener (for control and sweetening memory), transformation spells (into flowers, moles, bees), enchantments (rooted to ground, loss of senses), Thirsty Well (magical water), Burning Rose (magical flower), Camphor-Worm (magical creature)
Princess Melilot (symbol of beauty and innocence trapped by evil)Galloping Plough (symbol of speed and mastery)The crystal/firestone ring (symbols of power and connection to magic)

Cultural Context

Origin: English
Era: timeless fairy tale

Laurence Housman was an English writer and illustrator, active in the late 19th and early 20th centuries, known for his fairy tales and fantasy.

Plot Beats (10)

  1. Noodle, carrying a crystal, is accidentally thrown from his Galloping Plough and falls asleep, losing his magical steed.
  2. He awakens, regrets his carelessness, and vows to find the Plough, following its furrow for a year.
  3. Noodle arrives at a deserted palace and finds the Galloping Plough surrounded by serving-men trying to move it.
  4. He sees the enchanted Princess Melilot, rooted to the ground like a flower, lifeless but beautiful, and falls in love.
  5. Noodle speaks to an old nurse, who explains Melilot's enchantment: her jealous step-sisters and step-mother turned her into a rose, then cast four spells upon her.
  6. The nurse details the four spells: loss of memory (Thirsty Well), loss of heart (Burning Rose), loss of breath/senses (Camphor-Worm), and being rooted (Galloping Plough).
  7. Noodle reveals he is the master of the Galloping Plough and the Thirsty Well, using his firestone ring to call the Plough to him.
  8. The nurse, overjoyed, tells Noodle to first restore Melilot's memory using the Thirsty Well water.
  9. Noodle uses his crystal to summon two drops of water from the Thirsty Well, which he places on Melilot's eyes.
  10. Light trembles in Melilot's eyes, indicating her memory is returning, and the nurse urges Noodle to find the Burning Rose next.

Characters 5 characters

Noodle ★ protagonist

human young adult male

Lean and agile from his travels, with a determined yet sometimes weary expression. His build suggests endurance rather than brute strength.

Attire: Practical, durable travel clothes suitable for long journeys, likely made of sturdy linen or wool in muted earth tones, perhaps a simple tunic and breeches, worn and somewhat dusty from his year of travel.

Wants: To find and regain mastery of the Galloping Plough, and then to awaken and possess Princess Melilot, whom he has fallen in love with.

Flaw: His initial carelessness and weariness that led to him losing the Plough; his heart is easily stolen by beauty, making him vulnerable.

Begins as regretful and searching, then transforms into a determined hero who uses his magical abilities to overcome seemingly impossible enchantments, driven by love.

The firestone ring on his finger, glowing faintly, as he commands the Galloping Plough.

Determined, resourceful, regretful (initially for losing the Plough), courageous, deeply smitten by Princess Melilot, and quick-witted.

Image Prompt & Upload
A young man standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a lean, agile build, sun-kissed skin, and intelligent, focused eyes. His dark hair is practical and slightly disheveled from travel. He wears a sturdy, earth-toned linen tunic, simple breeches, and worn leather boots. A silver firestone ring with a subtle glow is visible on his right hand. His expression is determined and resolute. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Princess Melilot ◆ supporting

human young adult female

The loveliest princess ever beheld, she stands motionless and rooted to the ground like a flower. Her beauty is preserved despite her enchanted state, suggesting a delicate yet perfect form.

Attire: A beautiful, regal gown, perhaps made of fine silk or brocade, in soft, natural colors (like cream, pale rose, or light green) to reflect her connection to flowers, possibly adorned with subtle floral embroidery. It would be a formal court dress of the period.

Wants: To be freed from the enchantment and regain her life, senses, and memory.

Flaw: Completely vulnerable and helpless due to the four-fold enchantment placed upon her.

Begins as a beautiful, enchanted statue. Her arc is to be gradually awakened and restored to life through Noodle's efforts.

Standing perfectly still and beautiful, rooted to the ground amidst a bower of roses, with her eyes closed.

Currently inert due to enchantment. Prior to the spell, she was described as possessing great beauty, charm, and goodness.

Image Prompt & Upload
A young woman standing perfectly still and upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has an exquisitely beautiful face with delicate features, fair skin, and long, flowing light-colored hair styled elegantly. Her eyes are closed. She wears a formal, flowing gown of pale rose silk with subtle floral embroidery, appropriate for a princess. Her bare feet appear to be lightly resting on grass, but are visibly unmoving. Her expression is serene and peaceful, as if in a deep sleep. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Old Woman (Princess's Nurse) ◆ supporting

human elderly female

Frail and aged, with a wide mouth that often expresses distress or joy. Her hands are frequently wrung in worry or clapped in excitement.

Attire: Simple, practical, and worn clothing befitting a long-serving nurse or attendant, likely a dark, modest dress or gown made of sturdy fabric like wool or linen, perhaps with a plain apron. Her attire would reflect her long vigil and lack of courtly finery.

Wants: To see Princess Melilot freed from her enchantment and restored to life.

Flaw: Her age and inability to break the enchantments herself; her emotional vulnerability regarding the Princess.

Remains constant in her devotion, serving as a guide and emotional support for Noodle, and experiencing renewed hope as the enchantments are broken.

Wringing her hands in distress or clapping them in joy, always near the enchanted Princess.

Loyal, devoted, distressed, hopeful, knowledgeable about the enchantments, and easily moved to tears of sorrow or joy.

Image Prompt & Upload
An elderly woman, frail and slightly hunched, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a wrinkled face, a wide mouth, and sparse grey hair pulled back in a simple bun. Her eyes are filled with deep concern. She wears a dark, practical linen dress and a plain apron. Her hands are clasped together, wringing in worry. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Three Step-Sisters ⚔ antagonist

human young adult female

Though described as jealous of Melilot's beauty, their own appearance is not detailed. They would likely be attractive in their own right, but perhaps with a hint of malice in their expressions.

Attire: Fine, fashionable court dresses, perhaps in rich, contrasting colors to Melilot's softer tones, reflecting their vanity and desire to outshine her. Details like elaborate embroidery or jewels would emphasize their status and pride.

Wants: To rob Princess Melilot of her charms and beauty, thereby elevating themselves in the eyes of others and securing their own position.

Flaw: Their overwhelming jealousy and cruelty ultimately led to their discovery and death.

They succeed in enchanting Melilot but are later discovered and put to death for their crime.

Transforming into moles to gnaw at Melilot's roots, or into bees to suck her honey.

Jealous, cruel, cunning, deceptive, and malicious.

Image Prompt & Upload
Three young women, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. Each has a cunning and slightly malicious expression. They wear elaborate, fashionable court dresses in rich, contrasting colors like deep emerald, ruby red, and sapphire blue, adorned with intricate embroidery and jewels. Their hair is styled in sophisticated updos. One holds a small, dark, gnarled branch. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Queen (Step-Mother) ⚔ antagonist

human adult female

Unspecified, but as a queen and practitioner of dark arts, she would likely possess a commanding presence and a beauty that is perhaps cold or severe.

Attire: Opulent and dark royal robes, perhaps of heavy velvet or brocade, adorned with jewels, reflecting her power and sinister nature. Her attire would be designed to intimidate and impress.

Wants: To empower her own daughters and diminish Princess Melilot, likely to secure her daughters' position or her own influence.

Flaw: Her wickedness and the eventual discovery of her crimes.

She orchestrates the enchantment of Melilot but is later discovered and put to death for her crimes.

Teaching her daughters the dark spells, perhaps with a sinister smile.

Cruel, wise in dark arts, manipulative, and supportive of her daughters' jealousy.

Image Prompt & Upload
An adult woman with a commanding presence, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has sharp features, piercing dark eyes, and a severe expression. Her dark hair is styled in an elaborate, regal fashion. She wears opulent, dark velvet royal robes adorned with large, dark jewels, and a heavy golden crown. Her posture is rigid and imposing. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 2 locations
No image yet

Overgrown Palace Garden

outdoor morning Implied temperate climate, possibly spring or summer given the roses and green lawn.

A once-grand garden now completely neglected, with great gates overrun with creepers and paths green with weeds. In the center is a green lawn with a bower of roses.

Mood: Desolate, melancholic, yet with a glimmer of hope and ancient magic.

Noodle arrives, finds the Galloping Plough, and discovers the enchanted Princess Melilot, learning of her curse.

Overgrown great gates with creepers Weed-choked paths Green lawn Bower of roses Galloping Plough (silver, magical) Motionless Princess Melilot rooted to the ground
Image Prompt & Upload
A long-abandoned palace garden, with massive, ornate iron gates completely engulfed by thick, dark green ivy and flowering creepers. The once-manicured paths are now barely visible, covered in a carpet of vibrant green weeds and wild grasses. In the distance, a perfectly circular, emerald green lawn is visible, at its center a magnificent bower of deep red roses, their petals unfurling. Soft morning light filters through the overgrown trees, casting dappled shadows. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
No image yet

Rose Bower on the Lawn

outdoor morning Implied temperate climate, possibly spring or summer.

A central feature on the green lawn, a bower made of roses, beneath which Princess Melilot stands enchanted, rooted to the ground.

Mood: Magical, tragic, serene yet sorrowful.

Noodle first sees Princess Melilot and later administers the water from the Thirsty Well to restore her memory.

Bower of roses Princess Melilot (motionless, rooted) Green lawn Serving-men Old woman (nurse)
Image Prompt & Upload
At the heart of a perfectly manicured, dew-kissed green lawn, stands a lush, vibrant bower of climbing roses, their deep crimson and blush pink blossoms spilling forth. The morning sun casts a gentle, ethereal glow on the petals. Beneath the bower, a young woman stands motionless, her feet appearing to merge with the grass, her form serene and still. The air is soft and quiet, filled with the scent of roses. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.