THE MICE in COUNCIL
by Lida B. McMurry · from Fifty Famous Fables
Adapted Version
One day, all mice were very scared. They needed a plan.
Many mice came to a big meeting. They met in a quiet place. Big mice came. Small mice came. All mice were there. They looked very serious. They moved very quietly. They thought about many things.
Mr. Graypate was an old mouse. He was very smart. He knew many things. The mice chose him. He would lead the meeting. He would help them.
Mr. Longtail stood up. He spoke to all the mice. "The Big White Cat comes," he said. "The cat comes very quietly. Many mice are gone. My son is gone. We are all scared. We need a plan. We must be safe from the cat."
Other mice had ideas. "Let's fight the cat!" one mouse said. "No, too big!" another said. "Let's make the cat hungry!" another said. "No, too hard!" All ideas were not good.
Then Little Mouse stood up. It was very small. "I have an idea!" it squeaked. "We can put a bell on the cat. We tie the bell on the cat's neck. Then we hear the bell. We hear the cat coming. We can run away. We will be safe!"
All the mice clapped their paws. "Yes! Yes! A bell!" they said. "What a good idea!" They were very happy. They thought it was the best plan.
Mr. Longtail spoke again. "Who will bell the cat?" he asked. "Mr. Graypate, you choose. Who will do it?"
The mice looked at each other. No one spoke. One mouse said, "I am too small." Another said, "I am too slow." Another said, "I am too weak." They were all quiet.
Mr. Graypate asked, "Who will be brave? Who will bell the cat?" No mouse moved. No mouse wanted to go near the cat.
The mice felt sad. Their good idea could not work. No one was brave enough. One by one, they went home. They were still scared of the cat. It is easy to talk about a plan. Scary plans are hard to do.
Original Story
THE MICE IN COUNCIL
What a queer meeting that was down in the cellar! There were big mice, little mice, old mice, young mice, gray mice, and brown mice, all very sober and thoughtful.
At last an old mouse spoke up and said, "Shall we have Mr. Graypate for our chairman? All those who wish Mr. Graypate to be chairman will please hold up their right hands." Every mouse raised a tiny paw.
Mr. Graypate walked out to the front and took charge of the meeting. It was well that they chose him, for he was the wisest mouse in the whole country. Gazing over the crowd, he said, "Will Mr. Longtail tell us why we have met here? Mr. Longtail, come out in front where we can hear you."
Mr. Longtail walked slowly to the front. Then he stood upon his hind legs and said:
"My friends, I think you all know why we are here. Last night Mrs. Whitenose, whom we all love, and all her family were killed by the big white cat. The night before, while Mrs. Blackfoot was out hunting, all her cunning little babies were killed by the same cat. Early this week one of my finest boys was killed. You or I may be next.
"Must we bear this and do nothing at all to save our loved ones and ourselves? We have met here to make some plan for our defense."
Having spoken, Mr. Longtail walked back into the crowd.
Mr. Graypate arose and said:
"You have heard why we are here. Anyone who has a good plan for ridding us of the cat will please tell of it. The meeting is open to all."
"Let us all run at him suddenly when he is not looking for us, and each give him a bite. That would surely kill him," said one brave mouse.
"But how many of us do you think he would kill?" said another mouse. "I will not risk my life nor that of my family." "Nor I"; "nor I"; "nor I," said many other mice.
"Let us steal his food and starve him to death," suggested another.
"That will only make him hungrier for mice," they replied. "That will never do."
"I wish we might drown him," said another; "but I don't know how we could get him into the water."
At last a little gray mouse with a squeaky voice went up to the front and spoke:
"I have a plan that will surely work. If we could know when the cat is coming, we could get out of his way. He steals in upon us so quietly, that we can not escape. Let us find a little bell and a string. Let us put the bell on the string and tie the string around the cat's neck. As soon as we hear the bell, we can run and get out of the cat's way."
"A very good plan," said Mr. Longtail. "We will ask our leader to say which mouse shall put the bell on the cat's neck."
At this there was a great outcry. One said, "I am so little that I can not reach high enough to bell the cat." Another said, "I have been very sick and am too weak to lift the bell"; and so the excuses came pouring in.
At last Mr. Graypate called to the crowd, "Silence! I shall choose no one. Who will offer to bell the cat?"
It was very quiet in the meeting. One after another of the younger mice went out. None but the older ones were left. At last they too went sadly home. No one would bell the cat.
Story DNA
Moral
It is easy to propose a solution, but much harder to execute it, especially when it involves personal risk.
Plot Summary
A community of mice, terrorized by a predatory cat, holds a council to find a solution. After several impractical ideas are rejected, a young mouse proposes the ingenious plan of tying a bell around the cat's neck to warn them of its approach. The plan is met with enthusiastic approval until the question arises of who will actually perform the dangerous task. Faced with the personal risk, no mouse volunteers, and the meeting disperses in silence, leaving the problem unsolved.
Themes
Emotional Arc
hope to disillusionment
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This fable is a retelling of a much older story, 'Belling the Cat,' often attributed to Aesop, highlighting a universal human dilemma.
Plot Beats (10)
- A large council of mice gathers in a cellar, looking serious and thoughtful.
- Mr. Graypate is chosen as chairman due to his wisdom.
- Mr. Longtail explains the purpose of the meeting: the big white cat has killed many mice, and they need a plan for defense.
- Mice propose various plans, such as attacking the cat or starving it, but these are rejected as too dangerous or ineffective.
- A little gray mouse suggests tying a bell around the cat's neck so they can hear it coming and escape.
- The mice enthusiastically agree that this is a brilliant plan.
- Mr. Longtail suggests their leader choose someone to bell the cat.
- When asked who will bell the cat, all the mice make excuses or remain silent.
- Mr. Graypate asks for a volunteer, but no one steps forward.
- The mice, one by one, leave the meeting sadly, realizing no one will undertake the dangerous task.
Characters
Mr. Graypate ◆ supporting
A small, agile mouse with a slightly hunched posture from age. His fur is a uniform gray, showing signs of wear and wisdom rather than youthful vibrancy. He is of average mouse height and build, but his presence commands respect.
Attire: None, as he is a mouse. His natural fur is his covering.
Wants: To ensure the survival and safety of his community of mice from the predatory cat.
Flaw: His wisdom, while great, cannot overcome the fundamental fear and self-preservation instinct of the other mice, leaving him unable to implement the best plan.
He begins as the respected leader and remains so, but ends the story with the realization that even the wisest plan is useless without someone brave enough to execute it, leading to a sad, unresolved conclusion for the mice.
Wise, authoritative, patient, pragmatic, discerning.
Image Prompt & Upload
An elderly male mouse standing upright on his hind legs, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has uniform gray fur, dark bead-like eyes, and long, sensitive whiskers that twitch slightly. His posture is slightly hunched but authoritative. He has a thoughtful, slightly concerned expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Mr. Longtail ◆ supporting
A robust adult mouse, perhaps a bit larger than average, with a long, prominent tail that is often mentioned. His fur is likely brown, given the general description of mice in the story, and he appears well-fed and strong.
Attire: None, as he is a mouse. His natural fur is his covering.
Wants: To find a solution to the cat's predation, driven by the recent loss of his own son and other community members.
Flaw: While he can articulate the problem and support good ideas, he does not offer to take the dangerous action himself.
He begins as the one who articulates the problem and supports the bell plan, but ultimately, like the others, he is unable to overcome the fear of execution, ending without a resolution.
Earnest, concerned, articulate, supportive, practical.
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An adult male mouse standing upright on his hind legs, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has brown fur, dark alert eyes, and a very long, slender tail that extends behind him. His posture is earnest and slightly somber. He has a concerned expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Little Gray Mouse ◆ supporting
A small, unassuming mouse, likely on the younger side, with soft gray fur. Its size is emphasized when it speaks, suggesting it might be smaller or less imposing than the older, more established mice.
Attire: None, as it is a mouse. Its natural fur is its covering.
Wants: To find a practical solution to the cat problem, driven by a desire for safety and perhaps to prove its worth.
Flaw: Its cleverness in devising the plan is not matched by its willingness or ability to execute the dangerous part of it.
It begins as an unassuming mouse who then rises to propose the most brilliant plan, only to retreat into the crowd when the dangerous execution is discussed, highlighting the universal fear.
Clever, innovative, courageous (in proposing the idea), naive (about the execution), hopeful.
Image Prompt & Upload
A small, young adult mouse standing upright on its hind legs, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. It has soft light gray fur, bright dark eyes, and a slightly eager expression. Its posture is a bit nervous but determined. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Big White Cat ⚔ antagonist
A large, formidable cat, distinguished by its pure white fur. It moves silently and is highly effective at hunting mice, suggesting a lean, muscular build typical of a predator. Its size is a key factor in the mice's fear.
Attire: None, as it is an animal. Its natural fur is its covering.
Wants: Instinctual hunting and survival, driven by hunger for mice.
Flaw: None explicitly stated, but the mice's plan aims to exploit its quietness as a weakness.
The cat remains a static antagonist throughout the story, its nature and actions unchanged, serving as the central problem the mice cannot solve.
Predatory, cunning, silent, effective, relentless.
Image Prompt & Upload
A large adult cat, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. It has thick, pure white fur, piercing yellow eyes, and a lean, muscular build. Its expression is calm and observant, with a hint of predatory focus. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
The Cellar
A dark, cool, and somewhat damp underground space, likely with earthen or stone walls and floor, filled with various nooks and crannies, perhaps storage barrels or crates, providing ample hiding spots for mice. The air is still and quiet, save for the rustling of many tiny paws.
Mood: Sober, thoughtful, tense, and ultimately disheartened.
The mice hold their council to devise a plan against the cat, culminating in the 'belling the cat' idea and the subsequent failure to find a volunteer.
Image Prompt & Upload
A low-angle view inside a dimly lit, rustic European-style cellar. Rough-hewn stone walls rise to a low, arched ceiling, with a packed dirt floor. Scattered wooden barrels and crates cast long shadows. A large gathering of various small mice, some gray, some brown, are huddled together on the floor, their tiny eyes reflecting the faint ambient light. The atmosphere is hushed and serious. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
