THE KING'S SERVANT[\[4\]](#Footnote44)

by Maud Lindsay · from The Story-teller

fairy tale moral tale hopeful Ages 5-10 1776 words 8 min read
Cover: THE KING'S SERVANT[\[4\]](#Footnote44)

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 515 words 3 min Canon 100/100

Once, Hans was a kind servant. His king was happy. The Good King wanted to reward Hans. Hans could ask for three things. This was for his good work.

Hans told the king his wishes. "I want to see my mother. I want a horse to ride. I want to taste your special food." The Good King heard Hans.

The Good King gave Hans food. Hans tasted it. He heard new sounds. He understood all animals. He heard birds. He heard hens.

Hans rode his new horse. He went to see his mother. He saw an ant-hill. Many Ants lived there. Hans heard them talk. "The horse will step on us!" they cried. Hans moved his horse. He walked around the ant-hill.

Hans rode into a forest. He heard small cries. Two Little Birds were on the ground. They fell from their nest. "We need help!" they cried. Hans put them back. He put them in their nest.

Hans came to a stream. Three Fish were out of water. They could not breathe. "We will die!" they whispered. Hans understood the Fish. He put them in the stream. They swam away fast.

All animals thanked Hans. They promised help.

Hans came to a new land. A Mean King lived there. The Mean King stopped Hans. "You must do work for me," he said. Hans saw many seeds. All seeds were mixed up. "Sort them all," the king said.

Hans felt sad. He could not sort all seeds. Then he saw many Ants. They came through a crack. "We will help you," they said. The Ants sorted all the seeds. They worked all night long.

The Mean King was surprised. The seeds were all sorted. But he did not let Hans go. "Bring me a golden apple," he said. A Big Guard Creature watched the apple tree.

Hans felt sad again. He saw the Big Guard Creature. Then the Little Birds came. They flew to Hans. "We will help you," they said. They flew to the tree. They brought the golden apple to Hans.

The Mean King was surprised again. He did not let Hans go. He took off his ring. He threw it into the deep sea. "Go get my ring," he said. "Then you can go home."

Hans felt very sad. He could not get the ring. Then the Fish came to him. "We will help you," they said. They swam to the deep sea. They found the king's ring. They brought it to Hans.

The Mean King saw his ring. He was very surprised. He had no more tasks. He had to let Hans go. Hans was free now.

Hans went to his mother. He was very happy. Then he went to The Good King. Hans lived a good life. He was kind to all animals. He never went to the Mean King's land.

Hans was kind. His kindness came back to him. One good turn always deserves another! Hans lived a very happy life. He always remembered being kind. Being kind is the best thing. Hans never saw the Mean King again!

Original Story 1776 words · 8 min read

THE KING'S SERVANT[4]

here was once upon a time a faithful servant whose name was Hans. He served the king his master so long and so well that one day the king said to him:

"Speak, Hans, and tell me what three things do you most desire that I may give them to you as a reward for your faithfulness."

[4] Adapted with a free hand from Grimm's "White Snake."

It did not take Hans long to answer the king.

"If you please, your majesty," he said, "I should like best in all the world to go to see my mother; to have a horse on which to ride upon my journey; and to taste the food that lies hidden in the silver dish that comes each day to your majesty's table."

And when the king heard this he made haste to send for the silver dish and lifting the lid with his own hand he bade Hans taste of the food inside. What this food was, neither I nor anybody else can tell you, but no sooner had Hans tasted it than he understood what everything in the world was saying, from the birds in the tree-tops to the hens in the king's poultry yard.

"Good-bye, Hans," they called as Hans mounted the horse which the king gave him and rode away through the gate.

"Good-bye," said Hans, and he cantered off in fine style down the king's highway.

Before he had ridden far, however, he heard such a moaning and complaining by the roadside that he stopped his horse to see what the matter was; and—do you believe it?—it was the ant people whose ant-hill stood in the way, right where Hans was about to ride.

"See, see!" they cried, running to and fro in great alarm. "This giant of a man on his terrible horse will ride over our new house and crush us to death."

"Not I," said Hans. "If so much as one of you gets under my horse's hoofs it will be your fault and not mine;" and getting down from his horse he led him around the ant-hill and into the road on the other side.

"One good turn deserves another," cried the ant people running to and fro in great joy. "You have helped us, and we will help you some day;" and they were still saying this when Hans mounted his horse and rode away.

Now before long Hans came to a great forest and as he rode under the spreading branches of the trees he heard a cry for help in the woods.

"What can this be?" said Hans; but the very next minute he saw two young birds lying beneath a tree, beating their wings upon the ground and crying aloud:

"Alas! Alas! Who will put us into the nest again?"

"I, the king's servant and my mother's son; I will put you into the nest again," said Hans, and he was as good as his word.

"One good turn deserves another," called the birds when they were safe in their nest once more. "You have helped us, and we will help you some day."

Hans laughed to hear them, for though it was easy for him to help them he could not think what they might do for him.

Trot, trot, and gallop, gallop he rode through the forest till he came to a stream of water beside which lay three panting fishes.

"We shall surely die unless we can get into the water," they cried.

Their breath was almost gone and their voices were no louder than the faintest whisper, but Hans understood every word that they said; and he jumped from his horse and threw them into the stream.

"One good turn deserves another," they cried as they swam merrily away. "You have helped us, and we will help you some day."

Now it so happened that Hans came by and by to the land of a very wicked king who broke his promises as easily as if they were made of spun glass and who never thought of anybody but himself.

No sooner had Hans come into the land than the king stopped him and would not let him go on.

"No one shall pass through my kingdom," he said, "till he has done one piece of work for me."

Hans was not afraid of work. "Show it to me that I may do it at once," he said; "for I am hastening to see my mother."

Then the king took Hans into a room as large as a meadow where some of all the seeds in the world was stored. There were lettuce-seeds, and radish-seeds, flax-seeds and grains of rice, fine seeds of flowers and small seeds of grass, all mixed and mingled till no two alike lay together.

Hans had never seen so many seeds in all his life before; and when he had looked at them the king bade him sort them, each kind to itself.

"The lettuce-seed must be here, and the radish-seed there; the flax-seed in this corner and the grains of rice in another; the fine seeds of flowers must be in their place, and the small seeds of grass all ready for planting before you can pass through my kingdom and go on your way," he said; and when he had spoken he went out of the room and locked the door behind him.

Poor Hans! He sat down on the floor and cried—the tears rolled down his cheeks I do assure you—for he said to himself:

"If I live to be a hundred years old I can never do this thing that the king requires. I shall never see my mother or the good king, my master, again."

How long he sat there, neither I nor anybody else can tell you, but by and by he saw a little black ant creeping in through a crack in the floor. Behind it came another and another, like soldiers marching; one by one they came, till the whole floor was black with hundreds and hundreds of the ant people.

"You helped us, and we have come to help you," they said; and they set to work at once to sort the seed as the king required.

By the next day when the king came in to inquire how Hans was getting on, the work was done. The lettuce-seed was here and the radish-seed was there, the flax-seed in one corner, and the grains of rice in another; the fine seeds of flowers were in their place and the small seeds of grass were all ready for planting.

The king was astonished. He could scarcely believe his eyes; but he would not let Hans go.

"Such a fine workman must do one other piece of work before he passes through my kingdom," he said; and he took Hans out in the open country and pointed to an orchard far away.

"Bring me one golden apple that grows in that orchard and you shall go free," he said.

"Ah, what an easy task is this," said Hans, and he set off at once to the orchard.

But, alack, when he had come to the orchard gate it was guarded by a fiery dragon, the like of which he had never seen in all his life! "Come and be devoured!" it cried, as Hans came into sight.

Poor Hans! He sat down by the roadside and held his head between his hands and cried—the tears rolled down his cheeks I do assure you—for he said to himself:

"If I go into the orchard I shall be eaten alive by the dragon, and if I do not go I shall never see my mother or the good king, my master, again."

How long he sat there, neither I nor anybody else can tell you, but by and by he saw two birds flying through the air. Nearer and nearer they came till at last they reached the spot where Hans sat and lighted at his feet. And they were the very birds that Hans had helped. Their wings had grown strong enough by this time to carry them wherever they wanted to go and they flapped them joyfully as they cried:

"One good turn deserves another. You helped us, and we have come to help you."

It was no trouble for them to fly into the orchard high above the dragon's head; and almost before Hans knew they were gone they were back again bringing with them the golden apple that the king desired.

He was astonished when Hans took it to him. He could scarcely believe his eyes; but he would not let Hans go.

Instead he took a ring from his finger and threw it to the very bottom of the sea.

"Go and fetch me that ring," he said, "and you shall be free as the birds and the bees; but until it is upon my finger again you shall not pass through my kingdom."

Poor Hans! He sat down on the seashore and cried—the tears rolled down his cheeks I do assure you—for he said to himself:

"Who can do a task like this? I must either drown or stay here all the days of my life. I shall never see my mother or the good king, my master, again."

ONE OF THEM TOOK IT IN HIS MOUTH, AND SO BROUGHT IT SAFELY TO HANS.

How long he sat there, neither I nor anybody else can tell you, but by and by three little fishes came swimming to the shore.

"One good turn deserves another," they called, for they were the very fish that Hans had thrown into the stream. "You helped us, and we have come to help you."

Then down they went to the very bottom of the sea where the king's ring lay. One of them took it in his mouth and so brought it safely to Hans who ran with it to the king.

And when the king saw the ring he knew that he must let Hans go; he did not dare to keep him any longer.

So Hans mounted his horse and rode joyfully to his mother's home where he stayed till the time came when he must return to the good king, his master, which he did by another road.

He worked well and was happy serving his master faithfully, and making friends with birds and beasts, all the days of his life; but never again did he go to the wicked king's country. And I for one think he showed his good sense by that.



Story DNA fairy tale · hopeful

Moral

Acts of kindness, no matter how small, will be repaid in unexpected ways.

Plot Summary

Hans, a faithful servant, is rewarded by his good king with a magical ability to understand animals. On his journey home, he performs three acts of kindness, helping an ant colony, two birds, and three fish. He then encounters a wicked king who forces him to complete three impossible tasks: sorting countless seeds, retrieving a golden apple from a dragon-guarded orchard, and fetching a ring from the bottom of the sea. Each time, the animals Hans helped repay his kindness by completing the tasks for him. Finally free, Hans returns home, lives happily, and avoids the wicked king's land forever.

Themes

kindnessreciprocityperseverancegratitude

Emotional Arc

despair to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: sparse
Techniques: repetition (of 'one good turn deserves another'), direct address to reader ('do you believe it?', 'I do assure you'), rule of three (three wishes, three animals, three tasks)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person (Hans vs wicked king)
Ending: happy
Magic: understanding animal speech, animals performing impossible tasks (sorting seeds, retrieving objects from a dragon/sea)
the silver dish/food (source of magic)the golden apple (impossible treasure)the king's ring (ultimate impossible task)

Cultural Context

Origin: German (adapted from Grimm's 'White Snake')
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story reflects common European folk tale motifs of magical abilities, animal helpers, and the triumph of good over evil, often found in collections like Grimm's Fairy Tales.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. Hans, a loyal servant, is granted three wishes by his king.
  2. Hans wishes to visit his mother, have a horse, and taste the king's secret food.
  3. Upon tasting the food, Hans gains the ability to understand animals.
  4. On his journey, Hans saves an ant colony from being trampled by his horse.
  5. Hans rescues two fallen baby birds by returning them to their nest.
  6. Hans saves three gasping fish by throwing them back into the water.
  7. Each group of animals thanks Hans and promises to help him in return.
  8. Hans enters the land of a wicked king who demands he sort an impossibly large pile of mixed seeds.
  9. The ants arrive and sort all the seeds for Hans overnight.
  10. The wicked king, astonished, then demands Hans retrieve a golden apple from an orchard guarded by a dragon.
  11. The birds fly into the orchard, retrieve the golden apple, and bring it to Hans.
  12. The wicked king, still unwilling to release Hans, throws his ring into the deepest part of the sea and demands Hans retrieve it.
  13. The fish dive to the bottom of the sea, retrieve the ring, and bring it to Hans.
  14. The wicked king, having no more impossible tasks, is forced to let Hans go.
  15. Hans joyfully returns to his mother, then to his good king, living a happy life and avoiding the wicked king's country.

Characters 7 characters

Hans ★ protagonist

human young adult male

Average height and build, with a sturdy, capable physique from years of service. His features are honest and open, reflecting his good nature. He is not described with any specific scars or distinguishing marks.

Attire: Simple, durable servant's attire appropriate for a medieval European setting. This would include a tunic of sturdy linen or wool, likely in a muted color like grey, brown, or forest green, possibly with a leather belt. Practical breeches or hose and sturdy leather boots for riding and walking long distances. His clothes, while not luxurious, would be well-maintained, reflecting his diligent nature.

Wants: To serve his good king well, to see his mother, and to understand the world around him. Later, his primary motivation is to return home to his mother and his good king.

Flaw: Can be easily disheartened and prone to despair when faced with seemingly impossible tasks, often resorting to tears.

Begins as a faithful servant rewarded with a magical ability and a journey. He faces trials that test his resolve and kindness, learning that good deeds are always repaid. He grows in confidence and wisdom, ultimately returning home a more experienced and grateful man, continuing his life of service and compassion.

A young man in simple, practical servant's clothes, often with a look of earnest kindness, sometimes with tears on his cheeks when despairing.

Faithful, kind, compassionate, resourceful, persistent.

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A young man of average height and sturdy build, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has an honest, open face with kind, round brown eyes and short, neatly kept brown hair. He wears a practical, muted forest-green linen tunic, a simple brown leather belt, sturdy brown breeches, and tall leather riding boots. His posture is respectful but confident. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Good King ◆ supporting

human adult male

A regal and benevolent figure, likely of a mature age, with a dignified presence. His build would be appropriate for a king, perhaps slightly robust or stately, reflecting a life of comfort but also responsibility.

Attire: Rich, but not ostentatious, royal attire. Perhaps a deep blue or crimson velvet tunic or doublet, embroidered with subtle gold thread, over a fine linen shirt. A golden chain or pendant, and a simple, elegant crown or circlet. His clothes would be well-tailored and of high quality, reflecting his status as a good and just ruler.

Wants: To reward faithfulness and ensure the well-being of his kingdom and servants.

Flaw: None explicitly stated, but perhaps a slight naiveté in allowing Hans to travel alone through potentially dangerous lands.

Remains a consistent figure of good and justice, serving as the benchmark against which the Wicked King is contrasted.

A benevolent king with a kind face and a dignified, regal bearing, often seen with a subtle crown.

Generous, observant, just, appreciative, wise.

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An elderly king with a kind, wise face, a neatly trimmed silver beard and mustache, and a dignified, slightly robust build, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He wears a deep crimson velvet tunic with subtle gold embroidery, a fine white linen shirt underneath, and a simple golden circlet on his head. He holds a small, ornate silver dish with a lid in his hands. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Wicked King ⚔ antagonist

human adult male

A formidable and imposing figure, likely of a strong build, with a stern or cruel countenance. His features would suggest a lack of empathy and a penchant for breaking promises.

Attire: Opulent but perhaps slightly gaudy or dark-colored royal attire, reflecting his selfish nature. A heavy, dark brocade or silk robe, possibly in black, deep purple, or forest green, with excessive gold or silver embellishments. A large, elaborate ring on his finger. His clothing would be designed to intimidate.

Wants: To assert his power, to amuse himself by setting impossible tasks, and to prevent anyone from passing through his kingdom without proving their worth (or being trapped).

Flaw: His astonishment and inability to believe Hans's success, which ultimately forces him to keep his word. His pride prevents him from admitting defeat gracefully.

Remains unchanged in his wickedness, but is ultimately outsmarted and forced to concede by Hans's unexpected successes.

A stern-faced king in dark, opulent robes, often with a challenging or disbelieving expression.

Deceitful, selfish, cruel, demanding, astonished (when Hans succeeds).

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An adult king with a sharp, angular face, narrow dark eyes, and a severe expression, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has dark hair slicked back and a pointed dark goatee. He wears a heavy, dark purple brocade robe with excessive silver embellishments, and a large, ornate silver ring on his right index finger. His posture is arrogant and demanding. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Ant People ◆ supporting

insect (ant) ageless non-human

Tiny, black ants, moving in organized swarms. They are depicted as having distinct individual voices and collective intelligence.

Attire: Not applicable, as they are ants.

Wants: To protect their home and community, and to repay kindness.

Flaw: Vulnerability due to their small size.

They remain consistent in their nature, acting as a collective force of good.

Hundreds of tiny black ants swarming and working together with incredible speed and precision.

Alarmed, grateful, industrious, organized, loyal.

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Hundreds of tiny black ants swarming and working together on a flat surface, some carrying small seeds. Their antennae are twitching, and they move with incredible speed and precision. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Young Birds ◆ supporting

animal (bird) child non-human

Two small, fledgling birds, initially weak and unable to fly, with beating wings. Later, their wings grow strong.

Attire: Not applicable, as they are birds.

Wants: To return to their nest, and later, to repay Hans's kindness.

Flaw: Their initial helplessness and inability to fly.

They grow from helpless fledglings to strong, capable flyers, demonstrating the long-term benefits of kindness.

Two small, brown-feathered birds, one with a golden apple in its beak, flying gracefully.

Helpless, grateful, joyful, loyal.

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Two small, brown-feathered birds with bright, alert eyes, flying through the air. One bird holds a small, gleaming golden apple in its beak. Their wings are strong and spread wide. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Fishes ◆ supporting

animal (fish) ageless non-human

Three small, panting fish, initially out of water and struggling, later swimming merrily.

Attire: Not applicable, as they are fish.

Wants: To return to the water, and later, to repay Hans's kindness.

Flaw: Their inability to survive out of water.

They remain consistent in their nature, acting as a collective force of good.

Three small, silvery fish, one with a golden ring in its mouth, swimming gracefully underwater.

Desperate, grateful, merry, loyal.

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Three small, silvery fish with bright, round eyes, swimming gracefully underwater. One fish holds a small, ornate golden ring in its mouth. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Dragon ○ minor

magical creature (dragon) ageless non-human

A fiery dragon, unlike any Hans had seen, implying a formidable and terrifying appearance. It would be large, scaly, and likely possess features associated with fire-breathing dragons, such as sharp claws, teeth, and possibly wings.

Attire: Not applicable, as it is a dragon.

Wants: To guard the golden apples and devour intruders.

Flaw: Its inability to fly high enough to catch the birds, or perhaps its focus on ground-level threats.

Remains a static obstacle, serving only to highlight Hans's helplessness and the birds' capability.

A large, scaly, fiery-red dragon with sharp teeth and claws, guarding an orchard gate.

Fierce, territorial, predatory.

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A large, fearsome, scaly dragon with fiery-red scales, sharp claws, and glowing yellow eyes, coiled menacingly at an orchard gate. Its mouth is open, revealing sharp teeth. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 4 locations
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The King's Palace Courtyard

transitional morning clear, pleasant weather implied for travel

The outdoor area of the good king's palace, likely paved, where Hans mounts his horse to begin his journey. It's a place of departure and farewell.

Mood: hopeful, bustling with activity of departure

Hans receives his rewards and departs on his journey, understanding animal speech for the first time.

palace gate king's highway leading away Hans's horse
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A wide, paved courtyard of a medieval German palace, with a large, arched stone gatehouse in the background. Morning sunlight casts long shadows from the palace walls. The ground is made of large, irregular flagstones, worn smooth in places. Beyond the gate, a well-maintained dirt road stretches into the distance, flanked by low, rolling hills. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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The Wicked King's Seed Sorting Room

indoor daytime, extending into night indoors, so weather is not a factor, but the air might be dusty from the seeds

A vast, cavernous room, as large as a meadow, filled with an overwhelming mixture of countless seeds. The floor is likely rough, possibly stone or packed earth, with cracks where ants can enter.

Mood: overwhelming, hopeless, then miraculously industrious

Hans is given an impossible task, despairs, and is then aided by the ant people.

vast piles of mixed seeds cracks in the floor hundreds of ants locked wooden door
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A colossal, dimly lit, high-ceilinged room with rough-hewn stone walls and a packed earth floor. Piles of mixed seeds, ranging from tiny flower seeds to larger grains, are spread across the entire floor, creating a textured, multi-colored carpet. A single, small, barred window high on one wall lets in a weak shaft of daylight. Cracks are visible in the floor, through which hundreds of tiny black ants emerge. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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The Golden Apple Orchard Gate

outdoor daytime pleasant, sunny weather implied, contrasting with the danger

The entrance to a distant orchard, guarded by a fearsome, fiery dragon. The setting implies a rural, open country landscape leading up to the orchard.

Mood: terrifying, insurmountable, then relieved

Hans faces a deadly guardian to retrieve a golden apple and is helped by the birds he saved.

orchard gate fiery dragon golden apple trees (implied within) roadside where Hans sits
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A weathered wooden gate, partially overgrown with thorny bushes, marks the entrance to a lush, green orchard under a bright, clear sky. Beyond the gate, rows of fruit trees with dark green leaves are visible. In front of the gate, a massive, scaly dragon with glowing red eyes and wisps of smoke curling from its nostrils blocks the path. The ground leading to the gate is a dusty dirt road, with wild grasses and small wildflowers growing along its edges. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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The Seashore of the Wicked King's Kingdom

outdoor daytime clear, possibly breezy, typical coastal weather

A desolate seashore where the wicked king throws his ring into the sea. The water is deep, and the shore is a place of despair for Hans.

Mood: desperate, vast, then miraculous

Hans is tasked with retrieving a ring from the bottom of the sea and is helped by the fish he saved.

sandy or rocky shore vast expanse of the sea three small fish swimming to shore
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A wide, windswept seashore with a mix of fine sand and smooth, grey pebbles stretching to the horizon. The deep blue-green sea extends endlessly, with gentle waves lapping at the shore. In the distance, the coastline curves, suggesting a vast kingdom. The sky above is a clear, pale blue with a few wispy clouds. Three small, iridescent fish are visible just at the water's edge. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.