THE MAN and HIS FRIEND

by Robert Louis Stevenson · from Fables

fable moral tale satirical Ages all ages 179 words 1 min read
Cover: THE MAN and HIS FRIEND

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 415 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once there was a man named Mr. Grumpy. He had a friend named Mr. Chatter. Mr. Grumpy was angry. He spoke to Mr. Chatter. "You are not a good friend," Mr. Grumpy said. "You tricked me. I do not like this." Mr. Grumpy was very mad. Mr. Grumpy felt very upset. His face was red. Mr. Chatter listened.

Mr. Chatter made a funny face. He did not say much. He just turned around. Then Mr. Chatter walked away. He left Mr. Grumpy alone. Mr. Grumpy stood there. He watched his friend leave. He felt even angrier.

Later, time passed. Mr. Grumpy went to a special place. Mr. Chatter went there too. It was far away. The place was bright. A soft light shone. They stood before The Wise Judge. The Judge was very big. The Judge sat on a high seat. He looked at everyone.

The Wise Judge held a big book. The book was very old. It had many names. He looked at the pages. He read about Mr. Grumpy. He read about Mr. Chatter. The Judge knew all things. The Judge saw their fight. Mr. Grumpy looked good at first.

The Wise Judge spoke to them. "Who was wrong?" he asked. Mr. Grumpy spoke quickly. "He was wrong," Mr. Grumpy said. "Mr. Chatter said bad things. He said them behind my back." Mr. Grumpy pointed at his friend. He spoke very loudly. He wanted justice.

The Wise Judge asked more. "How did Mr. Chatter speak?" he said. "Did he talk about others?" Judge watched him. The Judge waited for an answer. His eyes were very keen.

Mr. Grumpy nodded his head. "Oh, yes," he said. "Mr. Chatter always said unkind things. He talked bad about everyone." He spoke angrily. He thought he was right.

The Wise Judge looked at Mr. Grumpy. "You chose this friend," he said. "He said unkind things. You knew this. That was not smart. We do not need such people here." Judge's voice was firm. He spoke with great wisdom. Mr. Grumpy listened closely.

So, Mr. Grumpy went to a corner. It was quiet and dark. The corner was far away. Mr. Grumpy felt small. He went there to think. He had much to consider. Mr. Chatter just waited. He waited for his turn.

Mr. Grumpy learned a lesson that day. It is important to choose good friends. Good friends do not say unkind words. Choose friends who are kind. Choose friends who are true. This is very wise.

Original Story 179 words · 1 min read

X.—THE MAN AND HIS FRIEND.

A man quarrelled with his friend.

“I have been much deceived in you,” said the man.

And the friend made a face at him and went away.

A little after, they both died, and came together before the great white Justice of the Peace.  It began to look black for the friend, but the man for a while had a clear character and was getting in good spirits.

“I find here some record of a quarrel,” said the justice, looking in his notes.  “Which of you was in the wrong?”

“He was,” said the man.  “He spoke ill of me behind my back.”

“Did he so?” said the justice.  “And pray how did he speak about your neighbours?”

“Oh, he had always a nasty tongue,” said the man.

“And you chose him for your friend?” cried the justice.  “My good fellow, we have no use here for fools.”

So the man was cast in the pit, and the friend laughed out aloud in the dark and remained to be tried on other charges.


Story DNA fable · satirical

Moral

One should be judged not only by their own actions but also by the company they keep and the standards they accept in others.

Plot Summary

A man quarrels with his friend, accusing him of deception. After both die, they appear before a celestial Justice of the Peace. The man, initially appearing blameless, condemns his friend for speaking ill of him. However, when pressed, the man admits his friend also spoke ill of others, revealing his own complicity in associating with such a person. The Justice, calling the man a fool, casts him into a pit, while the friend remains to face his own charges.

Themes

judgmenthypocrisyfriendshipself-awareness

Emotional Arc

pride to humility

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: sparse
Techniques: direct dialogue

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: afterlife judgment, celestial Justice of the Peace
the great white Justice of the Peacethe pit

Cultural Context

Origin: Scottish
Era: timeless fairy tale

Robert Louis Stevenson was a Scottish novelist and poet, known for works like 'Treasure Island' and 'Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde'. His 'Fables' often contain sharp, ironic morals.

Plot Beats (9)

  1. A man quarrels with his friend, accusing him of deception.
  2. The friend makes a face and leaves.
  3. Both the man and his friend die and appear before a Justice of the Peace.
  4. The Justice reviews notes about their quarrel, initially finding the man's character clear.
  5. The Justice asks who was in the wrong, and the man blames his friend for speaking ill of him behind his back.
  6. The Justice then asks how the friend spoke about others.
  7. The man admits his friend 'always had a nasty tongue'.
  8. The Justice condemns the man for choosing such a person as a friend, calling him a 'fool'.
  9. The man is cast into a pit, while the friend laughs and remains to be tried on other charges.

Characters 3 characters

The Man ★ protagonist

human adult male

Average height and build, with no particularly distinguishing features, suggesting a common man. His appearance is unremarkable, allowing his character flaws to stand out.

Attire: Simple, practical clothing of the late 19th century, perhaps a dark wool suit jacket, a plain white shirt, and dark trousers, indicating a respectable but not wealthy status. His clothes are neat but unadorned.

Wants: To be seen as blameless and morally superior, to justify his own actions, and to see his friend punished.

Flaw: His greatest weakness is his hypocrisy and lack of self-awareness. He is quick to judge others while being blind to his own significant flaws, particularly his poor judgment in choosing friends and his willingness to gossip.

He begins the story believing himself wronged and morally superior, but through the judgment of the Justice, he is revealed to be a fool and cast into the pit, experiencing a downfall due to his own character flaws.

His self-satisfied smirk that slowly fades into a look of shock and dismay.

Self-righteous, judgmental, hypocritical, naive, foolish.

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An adult man of average height and build, with a plain, somewhat self-righteous face. He has short, dark brown hair parted on the side, and small, dark eyes. He wears a dark grey wool suit jacket, a plain white collared shirt, and dark trousers. His posture is initially confident and upright, but with a slight, smug expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Friend ◆ supporting

human adult male

Likely of similar age and general appearance to the Man, but with a more expressive, perhaps cynical or mischievous face. His build might be slightly slighter or more angular, suggesting a less conventional character.

Attire: Similar to the Man, practical late 19th-century clothing, but perhaps slightly less formal or more worn, indicating a less concerned attitude towards appearances. Maybe a slightly rumpled tweed jacket and a loosely tied cravat.

Wants: To express his true feelings, even if unkind, and to amuse himself, even at others' expense.

Flaw: His 'nasty tongue' and tendency to speak ill of others, which is the initial cause of the quarrel.

He begins by quarreling and making a face, then dies. In the afterlife, he is initially in a worse position but ends up laughing at the Man's foolishness, suggesting a certain vindication or at least a less hypocritical nature than his former friend.

The mocking 'face' he makes at the Man, and his later triumphant laugh in the dark.

Sarcastic, irreverent, gossipy, perhaps cynical, unrepentant.

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An adult man of average height and a slightly slighter build, with a cynical, expressive face. He has slightly disheveled dark brown hair and narrow, observant dark eyes. He wears a rumpled dark tweed jacket, a light blue shirt, and a loosely tied dark cravat. His posture is casual and slightly defiant, with a hint of a smirk on his lips. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The great white Justice of the Peace ⚔ antagonist

magical creature ageless unknown

An imposing, ethereal figure, radiating authority and impartiality. Described as 'great' and 'white,' suggesting a luminous, almost blinding presence, not human in form but embodying ultimate judgment. Perhaps a tall, slender form, without distinct human features, glowing softly.

Attire: Flowing, seamless robes of pure, brilliant white light, appearing to be made of starlight or mist, without seams or earthly fabric. The robes might subtly shift and shimmer, emphasizing its non-corporeal nature.

Wants: To administer ultimate justice based on truth and character, not superficial appearances or self-serving narratives.

Flaw: None, as it represents ultimate, perfect justice.

Remains unchanged, serving as the immutable force of justice that reveals the true nature of the characters.

Its 'great white' luminous form, radiating an aura of absolute, impartial judgment.

Impartial, wise, discerning, stern, logical, unyielding.

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A tall, slender, androgynous figure made of pure, brilliant white light, standing upright and facing forward. Its form is ethereal and glowing, with no discernible human features, only a smooth, luminous 'head' and body. It wears flowing, seamless robes of shimmering white light that appear to be woven from starlight. Its posture is one of absolute stillness and unwavering authority. It holds a glowing, translucent scroll of light in its hands. Expression is one of serene, impartial judgment. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 3 locations
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The Mortal World (Unspecified)

outdoor

An ambiguous, everyday setting where the initial quarrel between the man and his friend takes place.

Mood: Tense, ordinary, mundane

The initial quarrel and separation of the two friends.

Two men Unspecified background elements implying a common setting
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A simple, unadorned outdoor space, perhaps a dusty village path or a quiet corner of a market square, with two figures in plain, period-neutral clothing standing in tense conversation. The light is even and neutral, casting soft, short shadows. The ground is packed earth with a few scattered pebbles. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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The Court of Great White Justice

indoor Eternal, unchanging

A celestial or otherworldly courtroom, dominated by a 'great white Justice of the Peace' and implied to be a place of ultimate judgment. It starts clear for the man but 'begins to look black' for the friend, suggesting a shift in atmosphere.

Mood: Solemn, austere, judgmental, eventually tense and foreboding

The judgment of the man and his friend, leading to the man's condemnation and the friend's temporary reprieve.

Great white Justice of the Peace Notes or records Two deceased men (the man and his friend) An implied 'pit' for casting out the judged
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An ethereal, vast courtroom with towering, smooth white marble pillars and an impossibly high, vaulted ceiling that glows with a soft, pure white light. A single, elevated dais at the far end holds a figure of immense, serene authority, partially obscured by light. The floor is polished, reflective white stone, with two figures standing humbly before the dais. The air is still and silent, filled with a sense of profound finality. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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The Pit of Condemnation

transitional Eternal darkness Unchanging, oppressive

A dark, unseen abyss where the condemned are cast. It is characterized by darkness and the sound of the friend's laughter.

Mood: Dark, desolate, final, with a chilling echo of mirth

The man is cast into the pit, signifying his ultimate damnation.

Darkness An unseen depth The sound of laughter
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A gaping, inky black chasm opening in the pristine white floor of the celestial court, radiating an absolute void. No light penetrates its depths, only a profound, consuming darkness. The edges of the pit are sharp and stark against the luminous white surroundings, suggesting an abrupt and terrifying transition. A faint, echoing sound seems to emanate from its unseen bottom. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.