Cinderella; or, the Glass Slipper
by Unknown · from Bo-Peep Story Books
Adapted Version
Cinderella was a kind girl. Her Stepmother was not nice. Javotte and her step-sister were not nice. Cinderella did many chores. She cleaned the house. She washed many dishes. She worked very hard. She was always good.
The Prince planned a big party. Step-sister Javotte was very happy. Her step-sister was happy too. They chose pretty dresses. They teased Cinderella. "You cannot go," they said. Cinderella felt a little sad.
Cinderella cried. Her Fairy Godmother appeared. "Do not cry," she said. She touched a pumpkin. It became a gold carriage. She touched some mice. They became fine horses. She touched some lizards. They became footmen. Cinderella's old dress changed. It was a pretty gown. She had glass slippers.
Fairy Godmother gave a warning. "You must come home soon," she said. "The magic ends at midnight. Your fine things will change back." Cinderella knew.
Cinderella went to the big party. All looked at her. She was so pretty. The Prince saw her. He liked her very much. He asked her to dance. They danced all night. Cinderella was very happy.
The clock struck. It was almost midnight. Cinderella knew the warning. She ran very fast. She ran down the stairs. One glass slipper fell off. She did not stop. She had to go home.
Cinderella was home. Her Stepmother and step-sisters came home. They talked about the party. "A pretty lady was there," said Step-sister Javotte. "The Prince liked her." Cinderella smiled. They did not know it was her.
Cinderella went to another party. The Prince liked her very much again. They danced and talked. Cinderella forgot the time. The clock struck midnight. She ran very fast. Her other glass slipper fell off. She ran all the way home. She was sad.
The Prince found the glass slipper. He really liked the pretty lady. He wanted to find her. He said, "I will marry the girl. Her foot must fit this slipper." He looked everywhere.
Many ladies tried the slipper. It was too small for them. Step-sister Javotte tried it. Her foot did not fit. Her step-sister tried it. Her foot did not fit either. No one could wear it.
Cinderella asked, "May I try?" Stepsister Javotte laughed. Her step-sister also laughed. "You are dirty," they said. "You cannot wear it." But the man said, "Yes, try it."
Cinderella put on the slipper. It fit her foot perfectly. All looked surprised. She took out the other slipper. It was from her pocket. She put it on too.
Fairy Godmother came back. She touched Cinderella with her wand. Her old clothes changed. She wore a pretty gown. It was very shiny. Step-sister Javotte was surprised. Her step-sister was also surprised. They knew it was Cinderella. She was the pretty lady.
Cinderella was kind to her step-sisters. She was not angry. The Prince came. He took Cinderella to his palace. They were very happy. Soon they got married. Cinderella was a princess.
Princess Cinderella was still kind. She let her step-sister Javotte live there. She let her step-sister live there too. She helped them find good husbands. They lived in the palace. Cinderella was good to all. This made her very happy.
Original Story
Cinderella; or, the Glass Slipper.
There once lived a gentleman, who, on becoming a widower, married a most haughty woman for his second wife. The lady had two daughters by a former marriage, equally proud and disagreeable as herself, while the husband had one daughter, of the sweetest temper and most angelic disposition, who was the complete counterpart of her late mother. No sooner was the wedding over, than the stepmother began to show her bad temper. She could not bear her stepdaughter's good qualities, that only showed up her daughters' unamiable ones still more obviously, and she accordingly compelled the poor girl to do all the drudgery of the household. It was she who washed the dishes, and scrubbed down the stairs, and polished the floors in my lady's chamber, and in those of the two pert misses, her daughters; and while the latter slept on good featherbeds in elegant rooms, furnished with full-length looking-glasses, their sister lay in a wretched garret on an old straw mattress. Yet the poor thing bore this ill treatment very meekly, and did not dare complain to her father, who was so besotted to his wife that he would only have scolded her.
When her work was done, she used to sit in the chimney corner amongst the cinders, which had caused the nickname of Cinderella to be given her by the family; yet, for all her shabby clothes, Cinderella was a hundred times prettier than her sisters, let them be drest ever so magnificently.
It happened that the king's son gave a ball, to which he invited all the nobility; and, as our two young ladies made a great figure in the world, they were included in the list of invitations. So they began to be very busy choosing what head-dress and which gown would be the most becoming. Here was fresh work for poor Cinderella; for it was she, forsooth, who was to starch and get up their ruffles, and iron all their fine linen; and nothing but dress was talked about for days together. “I,” said the eldest, “shall put on my red velvet dress, with my point-lace trimmings.” “And I,” said the younger sister, “shall wear my usual petticoat, but shall set it off with my gold brocaded train and my circlet of diamonds.” They sent for a clever tire-woman to prepare the double rows of quilling for their caps, and they purchased a quantity of fashionably cut patches. They called in Cinderella to take her advice, as she had such good taste, and Cinderella not only advised them well, but offered to dress their hair, which they were pleased to accept. While she was thus busied, the sisters said to her, “And pray, Cinderella, would you like to go to the ball!” “Nay, you are mocking me,” replied the poor girl; “it is not for such as I to go to balls.” “True enough,” rejoined they; “folks would laugh to see a Cinderella at a court ball.”
Any other but Cinderella would have drest their hair awry to punish them for their impertinence, but she was so good natured that she dressed them most becomingly. The two sisters were so delighted, that they scarcely ate a morsel for a couple of days. They spent their whole time before a looking-glass, and they would be laced so tight, to make their waists as slender as possible, that more than a dozen stay-laces were broken in the attempt.
The long-wished-for evening came at last, and off they set. Cinderella's eyes followed them as long as she could, and then she was fain to weep. Her godmother now appeared, and seeing her in tears inquired what was the matter. “I wish—-I wish,” began the poor girl, but tears choked her utterance. “You wish that you could go to the ball,” interrupted her godmother, who was a fairy. “Indeed I do!” said Cinderella, with a sigh. “Well, then, if you will be a good girl, you shall go,” said her godmother. “Now fetch me a pumpkin from the garden,” added she. Cinderella flew to gather the finest pumpkin she could find, though she could not understand how it was to help her to go to the ball. But, her godmother having scooped it quite hollow, touched it with her wand, when it was immediately changed into a gilt coach. She then went to the mousetrap, where she found six live mice, and bidding Cinderella let them out one by one, she changed each mouse into a fine dapple-grey horse by a stroke of her wand. She next considered what she should do for a coachman, when Cinderella proposed to look for a rat in the rat-trap. “That's a good thought,” quoth her godmother, “so go and see.” Sure enough, Cinderella returned with the rat-trap, in which were three large rats. The fairy chose one who had a tremendous pair of whiskers, and forthwith changed him into a coachman with the finest moustachios ever seen. She then said: “Now go into the garden, and bring me six lizards, which you will find behind the watering-pot.” These were no sooner brought, than they were turned into six footmen, with laced liveries, who got up behind the coach just as naturally as if they had done nothing else all their lives. The fairy then said to Cinderella: “Now here are all the means for going to the ball; are you not pleased?” “But must I go in these dirty clothes?” said Cinderella, timidly. Her godmother merely touched her with her wand, and her shabby clothes were changed to a dress of gold and silver tissue, all ornamented with precious stones. She next gave her the prettiest pair of glass slippers ever seen. She now got into the carriage, after having been warned by her godmother upon no account to prolong her stay beyond midnight, as, should she remain a moment longer at the ball, her coach would again become a pumpkin, her horses mice, her footmen lizards, while her clothes would return to their former shabby condition. Cinderella promised she would not fail to leave the ball before midnight, and set off in an ecstacy of delight. The king's son, on being informed that some great princess, unknown at court, had just arrived, went to hand her out of her carriage, and brought her into the hall where the company was assembled. The moment she appeared, all conversation was hushed, the violins ceased playing, and the dancing stopped short, so great was the sensation produced by the stranger's beauty. A confused murmur of admiration fluttered through the crowd, and each was fain to exclaim “How surpassingly lovely she is!” Even the king, old as he was, could not forbear admiring her like the rest, and whispered to the queen, that she was certainly the fairest and comeliest woman he had seen for many a long day. The ladies were all busy examining her head-dress and her clothes, in order to get similar ones the very next day, if, indeed, they could meet with stuffs of such rich patterns, and find workwomen clever enough to make them up.
After leading her to the place to which her rank seemed to entitle her, the king's son requested her hand for the next dance, when she displayed so much grace as to increase the admiration her beauty had raised in the first instance. An elegant supper was next brought in, but the young prince was so taken up with gazing at the fair stranger, that he did not partake of a morsel. Cinderella went and sat by her sisters, sharing with them the oranges and citrons the prince had offered her, much to their surprise, as they did not recognise her in the least.
When Cinderella heard the clock strike three-quarters past eleven, she made a low curtsey to the whole assembly, and retired in haste. On reaching home, she found her godmother, and after thanking her for the treat she had enjoyed, she ventured to express a wish to return to the ball on the following evening, as the prince had requested her to do. She was still relating to her godmother all that had happened at court, when her two sisters knocked at the door. Cinderella went and let them in, pretending to yawn and stretch herself, and rub her eyes, and saying: “How late you are!” just as if she was woke up out of a nap, though, truth to say, she had never felt less disposed to sleep in her life. “If you had been to the ball,” said one of the sisters, “you would not have thought it late. There came the most beautiful princess ever seen, who loaded us with polite attentions, and gave us oranges and citrons.”
Cinderella could scarcely contain her delight, and inquired the name of the princess. But they replied that nobody knew her name, and that the king's son was in great trouble about her, and would give the world to know who she could be. “Is she, then, so very beautiful?” said Cinderella, smiling. “Lord! how I should like to see her! Oh, do, my Lady Javotte, lend me the yellow dress you wear every day, that I may go to the ball and have a peep at this wonderful princess.” “A likely story, indeed!” cried Javotte, tossing her head disdainfully, “that I should lend my clothes to a dirty Cinderella like you!” Cinderella expected to be refused, and was not sorry for it, as she would have been puzzled what to do, had her sister really lent her the dress she begged to have.
On the following evening, the sisters again went to the court ball, and so did Cinderella, drest even more magnificently than before. The king's son never left her side, and kept paying her the most flattering attentions. The young lady was nothing loth to listen to him; so it came to pass that she forgot her godmother's injunctions, and, indeed, lost her reckoning so completely, that, before she deemed it could be eleven o'clock, she was startled at hearing the first stroke of midnight. She rose hastily, and flew away like a startled fawn. The prince attempted to follow her, but she was too swift for him; only, as she flew she dropped one of her glass slippers, which he picked up very eagerly. Cinderella reached home quite out of breath, without either coach or footmen, and with only her shabby clothes on her back; nothing, in short, remained of her recent magnificence, save a little glass slipper, the fellow to the one she had lost. The sentinels at the palace gate were closely questioned as to whether they had not seen a princess coming out; but they answered they had seen no one except a shabbily drest girl, who appeared to be a peasant rather than a young lady.
When the two sisters returned from the ball, Cinderella asked them whether they had been well entertained; and whether the beautiful lady was there? They replied, that she was; but that she had run away as soon as midnight had struck, and so quickly as to drop one of her dainty glass slippers, which the king's son had picked up, and was looking at most fondly during the remainder of the ball; indeed, it seemed beyond a doubt that he was deeply enamoured of the beautiful creature to whom it belonged.
They spoke truly enough; for, a few days afterwards, the king's son caused a proclamation to be made, by sound of trumpet, all over the kingdom, to the effect that he would marry her whose foot should be found to fit the slipper exactly. So the slipper was first tried on by all the princesses; then by all the duchesses; and next by all the persons belonging to the court: but in vain. It was then carried to the two sisters, who tried with all their might to force their feet into its delicate proportions, but with no better success. Cinderella, who was present, and recognised her slipper, now laughed, and said: “Suppose I were to try?” Her sisters ridiculed such an idea; but the gentleman who was appointed to try the slipper, having looked attentively at Cinderella, and perceived how beautiful she was, said that it was but fair she should do so, as he had orders to try it on every young maiden in the kingdom. Accordingly, having requested Cinderella to sit down, she no sooner put her little foot to the slipper, than she drew it on, and it fitted like wax. The sisters were quite amazed; but their astonishment increased ten fold, when Cinderella drew the fellow slipper out of her pocket, and put it on. Her godmother then made her appearance; and, having touched Cinderella's clothes with her wand, made them still more magnificent than those she had previously worn.
Her two sisters now recognised her for the beautiful stranger they had seen at the ball; and, falling at her feet, implored her forgiveness for their unworthy treatment, and all the insults they had heaped upon her head. Cinderella raised them, saying, as she embraced them, that she not only forgave them with all her heart, but wished for their affection. She was then taken to the palace of the young prince, in whose eyes she appeared yet more lovely than before, and who married her shortly after.
Cinderella, who was as good as she was beautiful, allowed her sisters to lodge in the palace, and gave them in marriage, that same day, to two lords belonging to the court.
THE STORY
OF
Beauty and the Beast.
Edited by Madame de Chatelain.
Story DNA
Moral
Goodness and humility will eventually be recognized and rewarded, while malice and pride lead to their own downfall.
Plot Summary
Cinderella, a kind and beautiful girl, is cruelly treated by her stepmother and stepsisters. When the prince hosts a ball, Cinderella is forbidden to go, but her fairy godmother magically transforms her and sends her with a warning to return by midnight. She captivates the prince but flees, leaving a glass slipper. At a second ball, she again flees at midnight, losing her other slipper. The prince searches for the slipper's owner, and when it fits Cinderella, her true identity is revealed. She marries the prince, forgiving her stepfamily.
Themes
Emotional Arc
suffering to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This version is attributed to Charles Perrault (1697), which popularized elements like the pumpkin, fairy godmother, and glass slipper, differentiating it from older, harsher variants.
Plot Beats (15)
- A kind girl, Cinderella, is subjected to cruel servitude by her stepmother and stepsisters after her father remarries.
- The King's son announces a grand ball, and the stepsisters prepare to attend, mocking Cinderella's desire to go.
- Cinderella's fairy godmother appears and, using magic, transforms common items into a magnificent carriage, horses, footmen, and a beautiful gown with glass slippers for Cinderella.
- The fairy godmother warns Cinderella that the magic will only last until midnight.
- Cinderella attends the ball, where her beauty captivates everyone, especially the prince, who dances only with her.
- Cinderella leaves just before midnight, losing one glass slipper on the stairs.
- Cinderella returns home, and her stepsisters recount the ball, unaware that the mysterious princess was Cinderella.
- Cinderella attends a second ball, again enchanting the prince, but forgets the time and flees hastily at the stroke of midnight, losing her second slipper.
- The prince, deeply enamored, declares he will marry the woman whose foot fits the glass slipper.
- The slipper is tried on by all the ladies in the kingdom, including the stepsisters, who fail to fit it.
- Cinderella asks to try on the slipper; her stepsisters mock her, but the attendant allows it.
- The slipper fits Cinderella perfectly, and she produces the matching slipper from her pocket.
- The fairy godmother reappears, transforming Cinderella's clothes into an even more magnificent gown, revealing her true identity to her stepsisters.
- Cinderella forgives her stepsisters and is taken to the palace, where she marries the prince.
- Cinderella, now a princess, allows her stepsisters to live in the palace and arranges their marriages to lords.
Characters
Cinderella
Slender and graceful, with an inherently beautiful form that shines through even in rags. Her movements are light and quick, like a startled fawn when she flees.
Attire: Initially, she wears shabby, dirty clothes, likely a simple, worn linen shift and perhaps a coarse apron, perpetually covered in cinders. For the ball, she wears a magnificent gown of gold and silver tissue, richly ornamented with precious stones, and the prettiest pair of glass slippers. After the ball, her clothes revert to their shabby state, but are later transformed into an even more magnificent version by her godmother.
Wants: Initially, her motivation is simply to survive her harsh life and perhaps find a moment of peace or joy. Later, it becomes to experience the ball and the attention of the prince, and ultimately, to find love and acceptance.
Flaw: Her meekness and reluctance to complain to her father make her vulnerable to her stepmother's cruelty. She is also prone to forgetting her godmother's warnings when enchanted by the prince's attention.
Transforms from an oppressed, meek servant girl into a beloved princess, finding happiness and forgiveness for her tormentors. She learns to embrace her true worth and finds her place in the world.
Sweet-tempered, angelic, good-natured, meek, forgiving, and kind. She endures ill-treatment without complaint and even helps those who mistreat her.
Fairy Godmother
No specific physical description is given, implying she appears as a benevolent, perhaps elderly, woman. Her presence is sudden and magical.
Attire: Not described, but likely appears in simple, yet elegant attire that befits a magical being, perhaps shimmering or subtly enchanted.
Wants: To help Cinderella achieve her dreams and find happiness, acting as a guardian and enabler.
Flaw: Her magic has limitations, specifically the midnight deadline, which she cannot override.
Remains a consistent figure of support, enabling Cinderella's transformation without undergoing significant change herself.
Benevolent, powerful, practical, and a little stern when giving warnings. She is a magical benefactor.
King's Son
A handsome young man, befitting a prince. He is described as being captivated by Cinderella's beauty and grace.
Attire: Wears the fine, formal attire of a prince attending a royal ball, likely rich fabrics like velvet and silk, possibly with embroidery and jewels, typical of 17th-18th century European court fashion.
Wants: To find a suitable bride, and specifically, to find the beautiful stranger who captivated him at the ball.
Flaw: His infatuation makes him somewhat oblivious to the true identity of Cinderella initially, and he is easily enchanted by beauty.
Falls in love with a mysterious stranger and embarks on a quest to find her, ultimately marrying her.
Charming, attentive, persistent, and deeply enamored. He is determined to find the mysterious princess.
Stepmother
Not explicitly described, but her haughty and disagreeable nature suggests a severe or imposing presence. She likely carries herself with an air of superiority.
Attire: Wears fashionable and expensive clothing befitting a woman of her social standing, but likely chosen for show rather than true elegance, perhaps in rich, dark colors to convey her severity.
Wants: To elevate her own daughters and suppress Cinderella, ensuring her daughters' social success and her own perceived superiority.
Flaw: Her pride and vanity blind her to Cinderella's true worth and lead to her downfall.
Remains consistently cruel and unyielding, ultimately humbled by Cinderella's success and forgiveness.
Haughty, disagreeable, cruel, jealous, and vain. She is deeply resentful of Cinderella's good qualities.
Javotte (Eldest Stepsister)
Not explicitly described as ugly, but her disagreeable nature makes her less attractive than Cinderella. She likely attempts to appear fashionable and slender, even to the point of discomfort.
Attire: Wears expensive but perhaps ill-chosen or overly elaborate gowns, such as a red velvet dress with point-lace trimmings, reflecting her vanity and desire to impress.
Wants: To secure a good marriage and social standing, and to outshine Cinderella.
Flaw: Her vanity and pride lead her to ridicule Cinderella, missing opportunities, and ultimately cause her humiliation.
Remains consistently unpleasant, but is ultimately humbled and forgiven by Cinderella, marrying a lord.
Proud, disagreeable, vain, mocking, and envious. She delights in belittling Cinderella.
Younger Stepsister
Similar to her sister, not explicitly described as ugly, but her disagreeable nature makes her less attractive than Cinderella. She also attempts to appear fashionable and slender.
Attire: Wears expensive and showy clothing, such as her 'usual petticoat' set off with a gold brocaded train and a circlet of diamonds, emphasizing her desire for opulence.
Wants: To secure a good marriage and social standing, and to outshine Cinderella.
Flaw: Her vanity and pride lead her to ridicule Cinderella, missing opportunities, and ultimately cause her humiliation.
Remains consistently unpleasant, but is ultimately humbled and forgiven by Cinderella, marrying a lord.
Proud, disagreeable, vain, mocking, and envious. She delights in belittling Cinderella.
Locations
Cinderella's Home
A modest, likely French 17th-century country house, with a wretched garret for Cinderella and elegant rooms for her stepsisters. The kitchen features a prominent chimney corner where Cinderella often sits among the cinders.
Mood: Oppressive, humble, domestic, with hidden magic
Cinderella endures her servitude, receives her nickname, and is transformed by her fairy godmother.
The Palace Ballroom
A grand, opulent ballroom in a French royal palace, likely late 17th or early 18th century, filled with nobility. It features space for dancing, a supper area, and a large clock.
Mood: Grand, festive, enchanting, bustling, then urgent
Cinderella dances with the prince, experiences her magical transformation, and flees at midnight, losing her glass slipper.
Palace Gates
The entrance to the royal palace, guarded by sentinels. It's a point of entry and exit, where Cinderella's transformation is noted by guards.
Mood: Guarded, observant, a threshold between worlds
Cinderella passes through the gates in her magnificent coach and later flees through them in her rags, unnoticed by the sentinels.