The Fair One with Golden Locks
by Unknown · from Bo-Peep Story Books
Adapted Version
A pretty princess lived far away. A King wanted to marry her. He sent a man to ask her. "Please marry my King," the man said. Princess Golden Hair said no. She did not want to marry.
Avenant was kind. He worked for the King. Avenant said, "I can help the King." Other men were not kind. They told lies to the King. The King was very cross. He sent Avenant to a tall tower.
Avenant was sad in the tower. The King heard him. The King felt a little sad too. He let Avenant go. Avenant said, "I can help you, King." The King sent Avenant. He went to Princess Golden Hair.
Avenant traveled far. He saw a Golden Carp. The fish was out of water. He put it back. The carp said, "Thank you." He saw a Crow. A big bird chased it. He saved the Crow. The crow said, "Thank you." He saw an Owl. It was in a net. He set it free. The owl said, "Thank you."
Avenant came to the palace. He asked the princess to marry. She said no. She gave Avenant a hard job. 'Find my lost ring,' she said. 'It is in the river.'
Avenant went to the river. The Golden Carp saw him. The carp thought of Avenant. It found the ring. It gave the ring to Avenant. Avenant was happy.
Avenant gave the ring to the princess. She was surprised. She gave Avenant another job. 'Make Galifron go away,' she said. 'He is a big, scary giant.'
Avenant went to find Galifron. The Crow saw him. The crow thought of Avenant. It helped Avenant scare Galifron. Galifron ran far away. Avenant showed the princess. Galifron was gone.
The princess was still not happy. She gave Avenant a third job. 'Bring me water of beauty,' she said. 'It is from a special fountain. Big dragons guard it.'
Avenant went to the fountain. The Owl saw him. The owl thought of Avenant. It got the water for Avenant. Avenant was very happy.
Avenant gave the water to the princess. She saw Avenant was kind. She saw Avenant was brave. She agreed to marry the King. They traveled to the King's land.
The King and Princess Golden Hair married. The Queen talked about Avenant. She said Avenant was good. The King became very jealous. He sent Avenant to a tall tower.
The Queen asked the King. She wanted Avenant back. The King said no. He was still very jealous.
The King had the water of beauty. He wanted to be more handsome. But his heart was not kind. The water made him look silly. He lost his royal power. He was not a good king.
The Queen thought of Avenant. She brought Avenant from the tower. She married Avenant. Avenant became the new King. He was a good king.
Avenant was kind. He became a good king. The King was jealous. He lost his crown. Be kind and good.
Original Story
The Fair One With Golden Locks.
There was once a princess who had such a beautiful head of hair, streaming down in curls to her feet, and brilliant as a sunbeam, that she was universally called the Fair One with Golden Locks. A neighbouring king, having heard a great deal of her beauty, fell in love with her upon hearsay, and sent an ambassador with a magnificent suite to ask her in marriage, bidding him be sure and not fail to bring the princess home with him. The ambassador did his best to fulfil the king's commands, and made as fair a speech as he could to persuade the lady; but, either she was not in a good temper that day, or his eloquence failed to move her, for she answered, that she thanked the king, but had no mind to marry. So the ambassador returned home with all the presents he had brought, as the princess would not accept anything of a suitor whom she refused, much to the grief of the king, who had made the most splendid preparations to receive her, never doubting but what she would come.
Now there happened to be at court a very handsome young man, named Avenant, who observed, that had he been sent to the Fair One with Golden Locks, he would certainly have persuaded her to come; whereupon some ill-natured persons, who were jealous of the favour he enjoyed, repeated his words to the king, as though he had meant to boast that, being handsomer than his majesty, the princess would certainly have followed him. This threw the king into such a rage, that he ordered poor Avenant to be thrown into a dungeon, where he had nothing but straw to lie upon, and where he would have died of exhaustion had it not been for a little spring that welled forth at the foot of the tower in which he was confined. One day, when he felt as if he were near his end, he could not help exclaiming: “What have I done? and what can have hardened the king's heart against the most faithful of all his subjects?” It chanced that the king passed by just as he uttered these words, and, being melted by his former favourite's grief, he ordered the prison door to be opened, and bid him come forth. Avenant fell at his feet, entreating to know the cause of his disgrace. “Did you not make game both of myself and my ambassador?” said the king; “and did you not boast, that had I sent you to the Fair One with Golden Locks, you would have prevailed on her to return with you?” “True, Sire,” replied Avenant; “for I should have set forth all your great qualities so irresistibly, that I am certain she could not have said nay. Methinks there is no treason in that.” The king was so convinced of his innocence, that he straightway released Avenant from prison and brought him back to the palace. After having given him a good supper, the king took him into his cabinet, and confessed to him that he was still so in love with the Fair One with Golden Locks, that he had a great mind to send him to obtain her hand, and meant to prepare a splendid equipage befitting the ambassador of a great nation. But Avenant said: “That is not necessary. Only give me a good horse and the necessary credentials, and I will set off to-morrow.”
On the following morning Avenant left the court, and set out alone on his journey, thinking as he went of all the fine things he should say to the princess, and stopping ever and anon, when any pretty conceit came into his head, to jot it down on his tablets. One day as he halted for this purpose in a lovely meadow by the side of a rivulet, he perceived a large golden carp that lay gasping upon the grass, having jumped so high to snap at the flies, that she had overreached herself, and was unable to get back into the water. Avenant took pity on her, and, gently lifting her up, restored her to her native element. The carp took a plunge to refresh herself, then reappearing on the surface she said: “Thanks, Avenant, for having saved my life. I will do you a good turn if ever I can.” So saying she dived back into the water, leaving Avenant greatly surprised at her civility.
Another time, he saw a crow closely pursued by a large eagle, when, thinking it would be a shame not to defend the weak against the strong, he let fly an arrow that brought the cruel bird of prey to the ground, while the crow perched upon a tree in great delight, crying: “It was very generous of you, Avenant, to help a poor crow like me. But I will prove grateful, and do you a good turn whenever I can.”
Avenant was pleased with the crow's good feelings and continued his journey; when, some days after, as he crossed a thick wood, he heard an owl hooting, as if in great distress. After looking about him on all sides, Avenant found the poor owl had got entangled in a net. He soon cut the meshes, and set him free. The owl soared aloft, then, wheeling back, cried, “Avenant, I was caught, and should have been killed without your help. But I am grateful, and will do you a good turn when I can.”
Such were the principal adventures that befel Avenant on his journey. When, at last, he reached the capital, where resided the Fair One with Golden Locks, it appeared so magnificent that he thought he should be lucky indeed if he could persuade her to leave such wonders, to come and marry the king, his master. He, however, determined to do his best; so, having put on a brocaded dress, with a richly-embroidered scarf, and hung round his neck a small basket, containing a beautiful little dog he had bought on the road, he asked for admittance at the palace gate with such graceful dignity that the guards all bowed respectfully, and the attendants ran to announce the arrival of another ambassador, named Avenant, from the king, her neighbour.
The princess bid her women fetch the blue brocaded satin gown, and dress her hair with fresh wreaths of flowers; and, when her toilet was completed, she entered her audience chamber, where Avenant was waiting for her. Though dazzled at the sight of her rare beauty, he nevertheless delivered an eloquent harangue, which he wound up by entreating the princess not to give him the pain of returning without her. “Gentle Avenant,” replied she, “your speech is fair; but you must know, that, a month ago I let fall into the river a ring that I value above my kingdom, and I made a vow at the time, that I would never listen to a marriage proposal from anybody, unless his ambassador recovered my lost treasure. So you see, were you to talk till doomsday, you could not shake my determination.”
Avenant, though surprised and vexed at such an answer, made a low bow, and requested the princess's acceptance of the dog, the basket, and the scarf he wore; but she refused his proffered gifts, and bid him consider of what she had said.
Avenant went to bed supperless that night; nor could he close his eyes for a long while, but kept lamenting that the princess required impossible things to put him off the suit he had undertaken. But his little dog Cabriole bid him be of good cheer, as fortune would no doubt favour him; and though Avenant did not much rely on his good luck, he at length fell asleep from sheer exhaustion.
The next morning Cabriole woke up his master who dressed himself and went to take a walk. His feet insensibly carried him to the river side, when he heard a voice calling out: “Avenant! Avenant!” He looked about him, but seeing no one, was proceeding on his way, when Cabriole, who was looking at the water, cried: “Why, master, as I'm alive, it is a golden carp that is hailing you.” Upon which the carp approached, saying: “You saved my life in the meadow, and I promised to be grateful. So here is the ring you are seeking for, gentle Avenant.”
He then hastened to the palace, and, requesting an audience of the princess, he presented her the ring, and asked whether she had any objection now to marry his master? On seeing her ring she was greatly amazed; but, being intent on putting him off once more, she replied: “Since you are so ready to fulfil my behests, most gracious Avenant, I pray you do me another service, without which I cannot marry. There lives not far from hence a giant named Galifron, who has threatened to ravage my kingdom unless I granted him my hand. But I could not resolve to marry a monster who is as tall as a tower, who carries cannons in his pocket to serve for pistols, and whose voice is so loud that people grow deaf if they approach too near him. He is daily killing and eating my subjects, and if you want to win my good graces on your master's behalf, you must bring me the giant's head.”
Avenant was taken somewhat aback at this proposal; yet, after a few moments reflection, he said, “Well, madam, I am ready to fight Galifron; and, though I may not conquer, I can, at least, die the death of a hero.” The princess, who had never expected Avenant would consent, now sought to dissuade him from so rash an attempt; but all she could say proved vain; and, having equipped himself for the fight, he mounted his horse and departed.
As he approached Galifron's castle, he found the road strewed with the bones and carcases of those whom he had devoured or torn to pieces; and presently the giant emerged from a wood, when, seeing Avenant with his sword drawn, he ran at him with his iron club, and would have killed him on the spot, had not a crow come and pecked at his eyes, and made the blood stream down his face; so that, while he aimed his blows at random, Avenant plunged his sword up to the hilt into his heart. Avenant then cut off his head, and the crow perched on a tree, saying: “I have not forgotten how you saved my life by killing the eagle. I promised to do you a good turn, and I have kept my word.” “In truth I am greatly beholden to you, master crow,” quoth Avenant, as he mounted his horse, and rode off with Galifron's head.
When he reached the city, the inhabitants gathered round him, and accompanied him with loud cheers to the palace. The princess, who had trembled for his safety, was delighted to see him return. “Now madam,” said Avenant, “I think you have no excuse left for not marrying my liege lord.” “Yes, indeed I have,” answered she; “and I shall still refuse him unless you procure me some water from the fountain of beauty. This water lies in a grotto, guarded by two dragons. Inside the grotto is a large hole full of toads and serpents, by which you descend to a small cellar containing the spring. Whoever washes her face with this water retains her beauty, if already beautiful, or becomes beautiful, though ever so ugly. It makes the young remain young, and the old become young again. So you see, Avenant, I cannot leave my kingdom without carrying some of this water away with me.” “Methinks, madam,” observed Avenant, “you are far too beautiful to need any such water; but, as you seek the death of your humble servant, I must go and die.”
Accordingly, Avenant set out with his faithful little dog, and at last reached a high mountain, from the top of which he perceived a rock as black as ink, whence issued clouds of smoke. Presently out came a green and yellow dragon, whose eyes and nostrils were pouring forth fire, and whose tail had at least a hundred coils. Avenant drew his sword, and taking out a phial given him by the Fair One with Golden Locks, said to Cabriole, “I shall never be able to reach the water; so, when I am killed, fill this phial with my blood, and take it to the princess, that she may see what she has cost me, and then go and inform the king, my master, of the fate that has befallen me.” While he was speaking, a voice called out: “Avenant! Avenant!” and he perceived an owl in the hollow of a tree, who said: “You freed me from the bird-catcher's net, and I promised to do you a good turn. So give me your phial, and I will go and fetch the water of beauty.” And away flew the owl, who, knowing all the turnings and windings of the grotto, soon returned bearing back his prize. After thanking the owl most heartily, Avenant lost no time in going back to the palace, where he presented the bottle to the princess, who now agreed to set out with him for his master's kingdom.
On reaching the capital, the king came forth to meet the Fair One with Golden Locks, and made her the most sumptuous presents. They were then married, amid great festivities and rejoicings; but the queen, who loved Avenant in her heart, could not forbear incessantly reminding the king, that had it not been for Avenant she would never have come, and that it was he alone who had procured her the water of beauty that was to preserve her ever youthful and beautiful. So it happened that some meddling bodies went and told the king that she preferred Avenant to himself, when he became so jealous that he ordered his faithful subject to be thrown into prison, and fed upon nothing but bread and water. When the Fair One with Golden Locks heard of his disgrace, she implored the king to release him, but the more she entreated, the more obstinately his majesty refused. The king now imagined that his wife perhaps did not think him handsome enough, so he had a mind to try the effects of washing his face with the water of beauty. Accordingly, one night he took the phial from off the mantel-piece in the queen's bed-chamber, and rubbed his face well before he went to bed. But, unfortunately, a short time previous the phial had been broken by one of the maids, as she was dusting, and, to avoid a scolding, she had replaced it by a phial which she found in the king's cabinet, containing a wash similar in appearance, but deadly in its effects. The king went to sleep, and died. Cabriole ran to his master to tell him the news, when Avenant bid him go and remind the queen of the poor prisoner. So Cabriole slipped in amongst the crowd of courtiers who had assembled on the king's death, and whispered to her majesty: “Do not forget poor Avenant.” The queen then called to mind all he had suffered on her account, and hastening to the tower, she took off his chains with her own white hands, and throwing the royal mantle over his shoulders, and placing a gold crown on his head, she said: “I choose you for my husband, Avenant, and you shall be king.” Everybody was delighted at her choice, the wedding was the grandest ever seen, and the Fair One with Golden Locks, and her faithful Avenant, lived happily to a good old age.
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Edited by Madame de Chatelain.
Story DNA
Moral
Kindness and loyalty are eventually rewarded, while jealousy and ingratitude lead to ruin.
Plot Summary
Avenant, a loyal courtier, is sent to win the hand of the beautiful Princess with Golden Locks for his king. To prove his worth, Avenant must complete three impossible tasks set by the princess: retrieving a lost ring, defeating a fearsome giant, and fetching water from the Fountain of Beauty. He succeeds each time with the help of animals he previously saved. The princess marries the king, but her constant praise of Avenant's deeds fuels the king's jealousy, leading him to imprison Avenant. The king then accidentally poisons himself while trying to use the 'water of beauty,' and the queen, remembering Avenant's loyalty, frees him and makes him her new husband and king.
Themes
Emotional Arc
suffering to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This story is often attributed to Madame d'Aulnoy, a prominent French fairy tale writer of the late 17th century, known for her literary fairy tales that often featured elaborate plots and moral lessons.
Plot Beats (15)
- A king sends an ambassador to propose to the Fair One with Golden Locks, but she refuses.
- Avenant, a courtier, suggests he could have succeeded, leading to his imprisonment due to jealous courtiers misrepresenting his words.
- The king, softened by Avenant's lament, releases him, and Avenant explains his confidence, leading the king to send him as a new ambassador.
- On his journey, Avenant saves a golden carp, a crow, and an owl, each promising future help.
- Avenant arrives at the princess's palace and proposes on behalf of his king, but she sets an impossible task: retrieving her lost ring from the river.
- The golden carp, remembering Avenant's kindness, retrieves the ring for him.
- The princess, surprised but still unwilling, sets a second impossible task: defeating the giant Galifron.
- The crow, remembering Avenant's kindness, helps him defeat Galifron, and Avenant brings the giant's head to the princess.
- The princess, still reluctant, sets a third impossible task: fetching water from the Fountain of Beauty, guarded by dragons.
- The owl, remembering Avenant's kindness, retrieves the water for him.
- The princess finally agrees to marry the king and travels with Avenant to his kingdom.
- The king and princess marry, but the queen's constant praise of Avenant's deeds makes the king jealous, and he imprisons Avenant.
- The queen tries to persuade the king to release Avenant, but he refuses, growing more suspicious.
- The king attempts to use the 'water of beauty' but mistakenly uses a deadly poison, leading to his death.
- The queen, reminded by Cabriole, frees Avenant from prison and marries him, making him king.
Characters
The Fair One With Golden Locks
Of regal height and slender build, with an ethereal beauty that captivates all who see her. Her skin is fair, with a delicate, rosy complexion.
Attire: She favors luxurious gowns made of brocaded satin, specifically a blue brocaded satin gown for formal occasions. Her hair is often adorned with fresh wreaths of flowers, suggesting a preference for natural elegance over heavy jewels.
Wants: To maintain her beauty and independence, and eventually to find a worthy partner.
Flaw: Her vanity regarding her beauty, which leads her to demand the Water of Beauty, and her initial haughtiness.
She transforms from a somewhat aloof and demanding princess into a loving and just queen, recognizing true loyalty and choosing Avenant as her husband and king.
Initially proud and somewhat capricious, she is also intelligent and capable of deep affection and gratitude. She tests Avenant but ultimately recognizes his worth.
Avenant
A very handsome young man of noble bearing and athletic build, capable of enduring hardship and combat. His skin is fair, indicative of his European origin.
Attire: Initially wears courtly attire, but for his journey, he dons a practical yet elegant brocaded dress with a richly-embroidered scarf. He is also equipped for combat with a sword and armor when facing Galifron.
Wants: To serve his king, prove his loyalty, and ultimately win the love of the Fair One with Golden Locks.
Flaw: His initial boastfulness and perhaps a slight overconfidence in his abilities, which leads to his imprisonment.
He begins as a favored courtier who is unjustly imprisoned. Through his trials, he proves his loyalty, courage, and kindness, ultimately winning the princess's heart and becoming king.
Brave, loyal, resourceful, kind-hearted, and eloquent. He is also somewhat naive in his initial boast, but learns humility.
The King
A monarch of a neighboring kingdom, likely of a robust build befitting a king, though his appearance is not detailed beyond his royal status. His skin is fair.
Attire: Wears splendid royal attire, likely heavy robes of velvet or brocade, adorned with jewels and a crown, befitting a powerful monarch.
Wants: To marry the Fair One with Golden Locks and secure her beauty for himself.
Flaw: His intense jealousy, quick temper, and susceptibility to malicious gossip, which lead to unjust actions and ultimately his demise.
He remains largely unchanged in his character flaws, ultimately dying due to his jealousy and a mistaken attempt to enhance his own beauty.
Impetuous, easily swayed by jealousy and flattery, but also capable of mercy and recognizing innocence. He is deeply in love with the Fair One with Golden Locks.
Cabriole
A beautiful little dog, small in stature, with a white coat. He is agile and loyal.
Attire: None, but he is carried in a small basket by Avenant.
Wants: To serve and protect Avenant.
Flaw: His small size makes him vulnerable in direct confrontation.
Remains a steadfast and loyal companion, instrumental in Avenant's final release and rise to power.
Loyal, intelligent, and resourceful. He is devoted to Avenant and acts as his messenger.
Golden Carp
A large golden carp, with shimmering scales. Its body is robust and capable of powerful jumps.
Attire: None.
Wants: To repay Avenant for saving its life.
Flaw: Vulnerable when out of water.
Appears once to offer aid and fulfills its promise when Avenant needs the ring.
Grateful and civil, true to its word.
Crow
A common crow, with glossy black feathers and a keen eye. It is agile in flight.
Attire: None.
Wants: To repay Avenant for saving its life.
Flaw: Vulnerable to larger predators like eagles.
Appears once to offer aid and fulfills its promise by attacking Galifron.
Grateful and loyal, true to its word.
Owl
A common owl, with soft, mottled brown and grey feathers, large eyes, and sharp talons. It is nocturnal.
Attire: None.
Wants: To repay Avenant for saving its life.
Flaw: Vulnerable when entangled in nets.
Appears once to offer aid and fulfills its promise by retrieving the Water of Beauty.
Grateful and resourceful, true to its word.
Galifron
A monstrous giant of immense size and strength. His body is likely rugged and scarred from battles, with a fearsome presence. The road to his castle is strewn with bones, suggesting a brutal nature.
Attire: Likely wears crude, practical garments befitting a giant, perhaps made of animal hides or rough cloth, or minimal clothing given his monstrous nature.
Wants: To terrorize and devour those who approach his castle.
Flaw: His eyes are vulnerable to attack, and his rage can make his blows wild and unfocused.
He is introduced as a major obstacle and is ultimately slain by Avenant.
Brutal, cannibalistic, and destructive. He is a formidable and cruel foe.
Locations
King's Palace Dungeon
A dark, confined space at the foot of a tower, with only straw for a bed. A small spring wells forth from the ground.
Mood: Desolate, despairing, oppressive
Avenant is imprisoned here, nearly dying of exhaustion before being released by the king.
Meadow by a Rivulet
A lovely, open meadow beside a small stream, where Avenant pauses on his journey.
Mood: Peaceful, natural, serendipitous
Avenant saves the golden carp here, earning its gratitude.
Galifron's Castle Approach
A grim, foreboding road leading to Galifron's castle, strewn with bones and carcasses. A dense wood borders the path.
Mood: Perilous, macabre, desolate
Avenant confronts and defeats the giant Galifron here with the crow's help.
Grotto of the Fountain of Beauty
A grotto guarded by two dragons, containing a large hole full of toads and serpents, leading down to a small cellar with the spring of beauty.
Mood: Dangerous, magical, mysterious
Avenant, with the owl's help, retrieves the Water of Beauty from this perilous location.