DIAMONDS and TOADS

by Unknown · from Fairy Tales, Volume 1 (of 2)

fairy tale moral tale moralistic Ages 5-10 908 words 4 min read
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Once, a mother had two daughters. Lily was one daughter. She was kind. Greta was the other. She was not kind. Greta was like her mother. The Mother loved Greta more.

Lily did all the work. She cooked and she cleaned. She went to the fountain. The fountain was far. She carried water home.

One day, Lily went to the fountain. A poor woman came. The woman asked for water. "Yes, I will help you," Lily said. Lily gave water to her. The woman was a Fairy.

The Fairy smiled. "You are good," she said. "Speak. Flowers and jewels will fall."

Lily went home. The Mother saw her. Lily spoke. Flowers and jewels fell out. The Mother was surprised. The Mother wanted the jewels.

The Mother called Greta. "Go to the fountain," she said. Mother sent Greta for gift. Greta did not want to.

Greta went to the fountain. A fine lady came. The lady was the Fairy. She asked Greta for water. Greta was rude. Greta said, "No! Get your own water!" Greta did not help.

The Fairy was not happy. "You are not kind," she said. "Speak. Toads and snakes will fall."

Greta went home. The Mother saw her. Greta spoke. Toads and snakes fell out. The Mother was scared. The Mother was angry.

The Mother shouted at Lily. Lily was scared. Lily ran away. She ran into the forest.

A Prince was in the forest. He was hunting. He saw Lily. Lily was crying. Lily spoke. Flowers and jewels fell. The Prince liked Lily.

The Prince loved Lily. He asked Lily to marry him. Lily said yes. They got married. Lily was a Princess.

No one liked Greta. Greta was always rude. The Mother did not want Greta. The Mother sent Greta away.

Greta was alone. Greta was sad. She had no home. She was never happy again.

Original Story 908 words · 4 min read

DIAMONDS AND TOADS

Once upon a time there was a widow who had two daughters. The elder was so much like her, both in looks and in character, that whoever saw the daughter saw the mother. They were both so disagreeable and so proud that there was no living with them. The younger, who was the image of her father in courtesy and sweetness of temper, was one of the most beautiful girls ever seen. As people naturally love those who are like them, this mother doted upon her elder daughter, and at the same time conceived a great aversion to the younger. She made her eat in the kitchen and work continually.

Among other things, the poor child had to go twice a day to draw water more than a mile and a half from the house, and bring home a large pitcherful of it. One day when she was at the fountain a poor woman came to her and asked her to let her drink.

“Oh, yes! with all my heart, Goody,” said the pretty little girl. Rinsing the pitcher at once, she filled it at the clearest part of the fountain and gave it to her, holding up the pitcher all the while, that she might drink the more easily.

Then the good woman said to her, “You are so pretty, so good, and so courteous, that I cannot help giving you a gift.”

For this was a fairy, who had taken the form of a poor countrywoman to see how far the civility and good manners of this young girl would go.

“I will give you for a gift,” continued the fairy, “that at every word you speak there shall come out of your mouth either a flower or a jewel.”

When this pretty girl got home, her mother scolded her for staying so long at the fountain.

“I ask your pardon, mamma,” said the poor girl, “for not making more haste”; and as she spoke these words there fell from her lips three roses, three pearls, and four diamonds.

“What do I see here?” said the mother, quite astonished. “I think I see pearls and diamonds come out of the girl’s mouth. How happens this, my child?”

This was the first time she had ever called her “my child.”

The girl told her frankly all that had happened to her, dropping from her mouth great numbers of diamonds as she spoke.

“Really,” cried the mother, “I must send my own dear daughter thither. Fanny! Fanny! look! see what comes out of your sister’s mouth when she speaks! Would you not like, my dear, to have the same gift? You have only to go and draw water at the fountain, and when a poor woman asks you to let her drink, to give it to her very civilly.”

“I should like to see myself going to the fountain to draw water,” said this ill-bred minx.

“I insist that you go,” said the mother, “and that at once.”

So away she went, taking with her the best silver tankard in the house, but grumbling all the way.

She no sooner reached the fountain than she saw coming out of the wood a lady, magnificently dressed, who came up to her and asked for a drink.

This was the same fairy who had appeared to her sister, but she had now taken the air and the dress of a princess, to see how far this girl’s rudeness would go.

“Am I come here,” said the ill-bred, saucy girl, “to serve you with water, pray? I suppose this silver tankard was brought wholly on purpose for your ladyship, was it? I should think so! You must drink out of the fountain, if you want any.”

“You are hardly polite,” answered the fairy, without putting herself in a passion. “Well, then, since you are so disobliging, I give you for a gift, that at every word you speak there shall come out of your mouth a snake or a toad.”

As soon as her mother saw her coming, she cried out, “Well, daughter?”

“Well, mother,” answered the rude girl, throwing out of her mouth a viper and a toad.

“Oh, mercy!” cried the mother, “what is this I see? It is her sister who is the cause of all this, but she shall pay for it”; and immediately she ran to beat her.

The poor child fled away from her and went to hide herself in the forest near by. The King’s son, as he was returning from hunting, met her, and seeing how beautiful she was, asked her what she was doing there all alone, and why she was crying.

“Alas, sir, my mother has turned me out of doors!”

The King’s son, seeing five or six pearls and as many diamonds fall from her mouth, desired her to tell him how that happened. Then she told him the whole story.

The King’s son fell in love with her, and, considering that such a gift was worth more than any marriage portion any one else could bring, conducted her to the palace of the King, his father, and there married her.

As for her sister, she made herself so much hated that her own mother turned her out of doors. The miserable girl, after wandering about without finding any one who would take her in, went away to a corner of the wood and there died.


Story DNA

Moral

Kindness and good manners are rewarded, while rudeness and ill-temper lead to misfortune.

Plot Summary

A kind and beautiful younger daughter, mistreated by her mother and elder sister, encounters a fairy at a fountain and is rewarded with jewels and flowers falling from her mouth when she speaks. Her greedy mother then sends the rude elder daughter to the fountain, who insults the fairy and is cursed to have snakes and toads fall from her mouth. Enraged, the mother tries to harm the younger daughter, who flees and is found by a prince, eventually marrying him. The elder daughter, hated for her foul gift, is cast out by her mother and dies alone.

Themes

kindness and crueltyreward and punishmentinner beauty vs. outer beautyconsequences of actions

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: sparse
Techniques: direct contrast between characters, rule of two (two daughters, two encounters)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: fairy in disguise, magical gifts (jewels/flowers from mouth, snakes/toads from mouth)
the fountain (place of judgment and transformation)jewels/flowers (reward for virtue)snakes/toads (punishment for vice)

Cultural Context

Origin: French
Era: timeless fairy tale

This tale, often attributed to Charles Perrault, reflects 17th-century European societal values where politeness and obedience were highly prized, especially for women.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. A widow has two daughters: one kind and beautiful (younger), the other rude and proud (elder), mirroring the mother.
  2. The younger daughter is forced to do all the chores, including fetching water from a distant fountain.
  3. At the fountain, the younger daughter encounters a disguised fairy (as a poor woman) and kindly offers her water.
  4. The fairy rewards the younger daughter with the gift that flowers and jewels will fall from her mouth whenever she speaks.
  5. The younger daughter returns home, and her mother is astonished and delighted by the jewels and flowers she produces.
  6. Driven by greed, the mother forces the elder daughter to go to the fountain with a silver tankard.
  7. The elder daughter encounters the same fairy, now disguised as a princess, and treats her with extreme rudeness and disdain.
  8. The fairy curses the elder daughter with the gift that snakes and toads will fall from her mouth whenever she speaks.
  9. The elder daughter returns home, and her mother is horrified by the creatures coming from her mouth.
  10. The mother blames the younger daughter and attempts to beat her, causing the younger daughter to flee into the forest.
  11. A King's son, returning from hunting, finds the beautiful younger daughter crying in the forest and is captivated by her and her magical gift.
  12. The King's son falls in love with the younger daughter and marries her.
  13. The elder daughter's rudeness makes her so hated that her own mother eventually turns her out.
  14. The elder daughter wanders alone and miserable in the woods until she dies.

Characters

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The Younger Daughter

human young adult female

Slender and graceful, of average height for a young woman, with a delicate build. Her movements are gentle and unhurried.

Attire: Simple, well-worn peasant clothing, likely a plain linen or homespun cotton dress in muted colors (e.g., cream, light blue, or grey), possibly with a simple apron. Her clothes, though humble, are clean and mended.

Wants: To fulfill her duties, maintain peace, and survive her mother's cruelty. Later, to find safety and happiness.

Flaw: Her passive nature and inability to stand up to her mother's abuse initially. Her kindness can be exploited.

Starts as an abused and downtrodden girl, but through her inherent goodness and a magical gift, she finds love, marries a prince, and achieves a happy life, escaping her cruel family.

Pearls and diamonds falling from her lips as she speaks.

Courteous, sweet-tempered, kind, diligent, humble, and forgiving.

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The Elder Daughter (Fanny)

human young adult female

Similar in looks to her mother, likely of average height and build, but her disagreeable nature would make her appear less appealing. Her movements are probably abrupt and ungracious.

Attire: Though living in the same household, her mother dotes on her, so she would wear slightly better, though still provincial, clothing than her sister. Perhaps a dress of slightly finer fabric or a more fashionable cut, but still within the peasant context, possibly in bolder, less muted colors. Her clothes might be less clean due to her slovenly nature.

Wants: To maintain her favored status, avoid work, and gain riches without effort.

Flaw: Her extreme rudeness, pride, and laziness, which lead to her downfall.

Starts as a favored but unpleasant daughter, attempts to replicate her sister's good fortune through ill means, receives a curse, and is ultimately cast out by her own mother, dying alone and miserable.

Snakes and toads falling from her lips as she speaks.

Disagreeable, proud, ill-bred, saucy, rude, lazy, and envious.

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The Widow (The Mother)

human adult female

Similar in looks to her elder daughter, suggesting a woman of average height and build, but her disagreeable character would likely be etched onto her features. Her movements would be sharp and impatient.

Attire: Modest but respectable widow's attire for a provincial setting, perhaps a dark, sturdy dress made of wool or linen, possibly with a simple cap or head covering. Her clothes would reflect her status as a householder, but her character would make them seem less inviting.

Wants: To indulge her favored daughter, maintain her own pride, and avoid anything that challenges her preferences.

Flaw: Her extreme favoritism, pride, and cruelty, which ultimately lead to her own misery and the loss of both daughters.

Starts as the cruel matriarch of the household, her favoritism and cruelty are exposed and punished when her elder daughter is cursed. She attempts to blame and punish the younger daughter, but ultimately loses both children, ending up alone and miserable.

A stern, scolding expression, often directed at her younger daughter.

Disagreeable, proud, doting (on elder daughter), cruel (to younger daughter), envious, and short-tempered.

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The Fairy

magical creature ageless female

Appears first as a 'poor countrywoman' – likely humble, perhaps slightly stooped, with simple, worn clothes. Later, she appears as a 'lady, magnificently dressed,' taking on the air and dress of a princess – tall, regal, and elegant, with flowing, rich garments.

Attire: First: simple, patched peasant clothes in muted earth tones, a plain headscarf. Second: a magnificent gown of rich fabric like silk or velvet, possibly in deep jewel tones (e.g., sapphire blue, emerald green), adorned with subtle embroidery or jewels, a regal cloak, and possibly a small crown or tiara.

Wants: To test human character and dispense justice based on civility and kindness.

Flaw: None apparent; she is a powerful magical being.

Remains consistent in her role as a dispenser of justice, revealing the true character of the sisters and setting the plot in motion.

Her transformation from a humble countrywoman to a magnificent princess.

Wise, just, observant, powerful, and discerning. She rewards good and punishes evil.

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The King's Son

human young adult male

A young man of noble bearing, likely tall and well-built, as he is returning from hunting. His appearance would be handsome and princely.

Attire: Princely hunting attire: fine quality tunic and breeches, possibly in rich greens or browns, made of wool or velvet, with leather boots and a cloak. He might wear a simple, practical belt with a hunting knife or pouch.

Wants: To find a suitable wife, and is particularly moved by genuine goodness and unique qualities.

Flaw: None explicitly shown; he acts as a benevolent force.

Acts as the rescuer and rewarder of the Younger Daughter, providing her with a happy ending.

His princely hunting attire, meeting the crying girl in the forest.

Kind, observant, discerning, and decisive. He is drawn to beauty and virtue.

Locations

Widow's Cottage Kitchen

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A humble, likely rustic kitchen within a modest French-style cottage, where the younger daughter is forced to eat and work. The space would be functional, with a hearth for cooking and simple wooden furniture, contrasting with the more comfortable living areas of the house.

Mood: Oppressive, melancholic, industrious for the younger daughter; comfortable and favored for the elder.

The younger daughter is relegated to this space, highlighting her mother's cruelty. Later, the mother witnesses pearls and diamonds falling from the younger daughter's mouth here.

Stone hearth Simple wooden table and stools Cooking utensils Earthenware pots Small, perhaps grimy window

Forest Fountain

outdoor morning | afternoon Mild, pleasant weather, likely spring or summer, as flowers are mentioned.

A natural spring or stone-built fountain located more than a mile and a half from the cottage, likely nestled within or at the edge of a wood. The water is clear and fresh, a vital source for the village. It's a secluded spot where magic can manifest.

Mood: Serene, natural, later magical and transformative.

The younger daughter encounters the fairy here and receives her gift. The elder daughter later encounters the fairy here and receives her curse.

Clear spring water Moss-covered stones Wildflowers (roses implied) Overhanging tree branches Earthenware pitcher Silver tankard

King's Palace

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A magnificent French royal palace, grand and opulent, befitting a king's residence. It would feature elegant salons, polished floors, and rich tapestries, reflecting the wealth and power of the monarchy.

Mood: Regal, opulent, safe, and welcoming for the younger daughter.

The King's son brings the younger daughter here, and they are married, signifying her happy ending.

Polished marble floors Ornate gilded furniture Velvet drapes Large windows overlooking gardens Tapestries depicting hunting scenes or historical events Chandeliers