[THE GOOSE GIRL](#contents)

by Unknown · from Favorite Fairy Tales

fairy tale transformation solemn Ages 8-14 1658 words 8 min read
Cover: [THE GOOSE GIRL](#contents)

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 443 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once, a sweet princess lived. Her name was Lily. She went to a new land. She would marry a prince there. Her mother gave her a special ribbon. 'This ribbon makes you brave,' she said.

Princess Lily rode her horse. She became very thirsty. Her servant was with her. 'Get me water,' Lily asked. The Nasty Servant said, 'No.' Lily drank from a stream.

The special ribbon fell into the water. Princess Lily did not see it. The Nasty Servant saw the ribbon. She got a bad idea. She told Princess Lily what to do.

The Nasty Servant insisted. 'Swap clothes with me!' she said. 'Swap horses too!' Princess Lily had to obey. The servant made Lily promise. 'Do not tell anyone,' she said. 'Bad things happen if you tell.'

They came to the palace. The Nasty Servant was welcomed. All thought she was the princess. The Kind King saw Princess Lily. He said, 'You can look after the geese.'

The Nasty Servant did not like the horse. The horse was Princess Lily's special horse. The servant sent the horse far away. Princess Lily missed her horse very much.

Princess Lily found a special smooth stone. She pretended it was her horse. She kept it a secret. She talked to her stone each day. It made her feel better.

Each morning, Lily talked to her stone. It made her feel better. She combed her pretty golden hair. Her hair shone very brightly. Little Conrad saw her. He watched her hair shine.

Little Conrad wondered. He saw Princess Lily each day. He went to the Kind King. He told the King about Lily. He told about her shining hair.

The Kind King watched Princess Lily. He saw her talking to her special stone. He saw her pretty shining hair. He saw her comb it. The King wondered about this.

The Kind King asked Princess Lily. 'What is your secret?' he said. She could not tell him. She made a promise. 'Tell the fire,' the King said. He listened still. Lily told her story.

The Kind King told all the truth. He showed them Princess Lily. She was the real princess. The Nasty Servant was found out. She was not the princess.

At a big dinner, the Kind King asked. 'What happens to unkind liars?' he said. The Nasty Servant said, 'Clean pots and pans. They must clean them always!'

The Kind King said, 'That is your task!' The Nasty Servant had to clean. She cleaned pots and pans. She cleaned them each day.

Princess Lily married the kind prince. They were very happy. They lived happily ever after. They were always kind and true.

Original Story 1658 words · 8 min read

THE GOOSE GIRL

ONCE upon a time there lived an old Queen, whose husband had been dead some years, and left her with one child, a beautiful daughter. When this daughter grew up she was to be married to a King's son, who lived far away.

Now when the time came for her to leave, the mother gave her daughter a lock of hair, saying, "Dear child, preserve this well, and it will help you out of trouble."

Afterwards the mother and daughter took a sorrowful leave of each other, and the princess placed the lock of hair in her bosom, mounted her horse Falada, and rode away to her intended bridegroom. Now this horse could speak. After she had ridden for about an hour she became very thirsty, and said to her servant, "Dismount, and bring me some water from yonder stream in the cup which you carry with you, for I am very thirsty."

"If you are thirsty," replied the servant, "dismount yourself, and stoop down to drink the water, for I will not be your maid!"

The Princess, on account of her great thirst, did as she was bid, and bending over the brook she drank of its water without daring to use her golden cup. While she did so the lock of hair said, "Ah! if thy mother knew this, her heart would break."

As she leaned over the water, the lock of hair fell out of her bosom and floated down the stream without her noticing it, because of her great anguish. But her servant had seen what happened, and she was glad, for now she had power over her mistress, because with the loss of the lock of hair, she became weak and helpless. When, then, the Princess was going to mount her horse again, the maid said, "No, Falada belongs to me; you must get upon this horse:" and she was forced to yield. Then the servant bade her take off her royal clothes, and put on her common ones instead; and, lastly, she made the Princess promise and swear by the open sky that she would say nought of what had passed at the King's palace; for if she had not sworn she would have been murdered. But Falada, the horse, observed all that passed with great attention.

Then the servant mounted upon Falada, and the rightful Princess upon a sorry hack; and in that way they traveled on till they came to the King's palace. On their arrival there were great rejoicings, and the young Prince, running towards them, lifted the servant off her horse, supposing that she was the true bride; and she was led up the steps in state, while the real Princess had to stop below. Just then the old King chanced to look out of his window and saw her standing in the court, and he remarked how delicate and beautiful she was; and, going to the royal apartments, he inquired there of the bride who it was she had brought with her and left below in the courtyard.

"Only a girl whom I brought with me for company," said the bride. "Give the wench some work to do, that she may not grow idle."

The old King, however, had no work for her, and knew of nothing; until at last he said, "Ah! there is a boy who keeps the geese: she can help him." This youth was called Conrad, and the true bride was set to keep geese with him.

Soon after this, the false bride said to her betrothed, "Dearest, will you grant me a favor?"

"Yes," said he; "with the greatest pleasure."

"Then let the butcher be summoned, that he may cut off the head of the horse on which I rode hither, for it has angered me on the way." In reality she feared lest the horse might tell how she had used the rightful Princess, and she was glad when it was decided that Falada should die.

This came to the ears of the Princess, and she promised secretly to the butcher to give him a piece of gold if he would show her a kindness, which was, that he would nail the head of Falada over a certain large and gloomy arch, through which she had to pass daily with the geese, so that then she might still see her old steed as she had been accustomed. The butcher promised, and, after killing the horse, nailed the head in the place which the Princess pointed out, over the door of the arch.

Early in the morning, when she and Conrad drove the geese through the arch, she said in passing:

"Ah, Falada, that you hang so high!"

and the head replied:

"Ah Princess, that you go humbly by!

Thy mother's heart would surely break

Were she to know of your heart-ache!"

Then she drove on through the town to a field. When they arrived in the meadow, she sat down and unloosened her hair, which was of pure gold. Its shining appearance so charmed Conrad that he tried to pull out a couple of locks. So she sang:

Blow, blow, thou wind,

Blow Conrad's hat away."

Immediately there came a strong wind, which snatched Conrad's hat off his head, and led him a rare chase; and when he returned what with combing and curling, the Princess had rearranged her hair, so that he could not catch a loose lock. This made Conrad very angry, and he would not speak to her; so all day long they tended their geese in silence.

After they returned home Conrad went to the old King and declared he would no longer keep geese with the servant.

"Why not?" asked the old King.

"Oh! she vexes me the whole day long," said Conrad; and then the King bade him tell all that had happened. So Conrad did, and told how, in the morning, when they passed through a certain archway, she spoke to a horse's head, which was nailed up over the door, and said:

"Ah, Falada, that you hang so high!"

and it replied:

"Ah, Princess, that you go humbly by!

Thy mother's heart would surely break

Were she to know of your heart-ache!"

And, further, he told how when they arrived in the meadow, she caused the wind to blow his hat off, so that he had to run after it ever so far. When he had finished his tale, the old King ordered him to drive the geese out again the next morning; and he himself, when morning came, stationed himself behind the gloomy archway, and heard the servant talk to the head of Falada. Then he followed them also into the fields. There he saw with his own eyes the Goose Girl and boy drive in the geese; and after a while she sat down and, unloosening her hair, which shone like gold, began to sing the old rhyme:

"Blow, blow, thou wind,

Blow Conrad's hat away."

Then the King felt a breeze come, which took off Conrad's hat, so that he had to run a long way after it; while the Goose Girl combed out her hair and put it back in proper trim before his return. All this the King observed, and then went home unnoticed; and when the Goose Girl returned at evening, he called her aside, and asked her what it all meant.

"That I dare not tell you, nor any other man," replied she; "for I have sworn by the free sky not to speak of my griefs, else lose my life."

The King pressed her to say what it was, and left her no peace about it; but still she refused. So at last he said, "If you will not tell me, tell your griefs to this fireplace;" and he went away.

Then she crept into the fireplace and began to weep and groan; and soon she relieved her heart by telling her tale. "Here sit I," she said "forsaken by all the world, and yet I am a King's daughter; and a false servant has exercised some charm over me, whereby I was compelled to lay aside my royal clothes; and she has also taken my place at the bridegroom's side, and I am forced to perform the common duties of a Goose Girl. Oh, if my mother knew this, her heart would break with grief!"

The old King, meanwhile, stood outside by the chimney and listened to what she said; and when she had finished he came in, and called her away from the fireplace. Then her royal clothes were put on, and the old King, calling his son, showed him that he had taken a false bride, who was only a servant-girl, and that the true bride stood there as a Goose Girl.

The prince was glad indeed at heart when he saw her beauty and virtue. Then there was a great feast, at which the bridegroom sat, with the Princess on one side and the servant-girl on the other. But the latter was dazzled, and recognized her mistress no longer in her shining dress.

When they had finished their feasting, and were beginning to be gay, the old King set a riddle to the real servant-girl: What such an one were worthy of who had, in such and such a manner, deceived her masters; and he related all that had happened to the true bride. The servant-girl replied, "Such an one deserves nothing better than to be put into a cask, lined with sharp nails, and then to be dragged by two horses through the streets till the wretch be killed."

"You are the woman then!" exclaimed the King; "You have proclaimed your own punishment, and it shall be strictly fulfilled."

The sentence was at once carried out, and afterwards the Prince married his rightful bride, and they lived long in peace and happiness.

Back to contents



Story DNA

Moral

Truth and virtue will ultimately prevail over deceit and wickedness, and those who commit evil will face just retribution.

Plot Summary

A princess, on her way to marry a prince, is stripped of her identity and royal status by her wicked servant, who takes her place. Relegated to a goose girl, the true princess finds solace in speaking to the severed head of her loyal horse, Falada, and uses magic to comb her golden hair. The King, alerted by the goose-boy, secretly observes her strange behavior and tricks her into confessing the entire deception. The King then exposes the false bride, who unwittingly condemns herself to a gruesome punishment, allowing the true princess to marry the prince and live happily ever after.

Themes

justiceidentitydeceptionperseverance

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: repetition, magical realism

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking horse (Falada), magical lock of hair, wind controlled by song
Falada's head (symbol of truth and lost status)golden hair (symbol of royal identity and beauty)the oath of silence (symbol of powerlessness)

Cultural Context

Origin: German
Era: timeless fairy tale

Grimm's Fairy Tales often reflect medieval European social structures, moral codes, and beliefs in magic, with a focus on justice and consequences.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A princess is sent to marry a prince in a distant land, receiving a magical lock of hair from her mother for protection.
  2. During the journey, the princess becomes thirsty, and her servant refuses to fetch water, forcing the princess to drink from a stream.
  3. The magical lock of hair falls out and floats away, observed by the servant, who then gains power over the now-helpless princess.
  4. The servant forces the princess to exchange clothes and horses, and swear an oath of silence, threatening her life.
  5. Upon arrival, the servant is welcomed as the bride, while the true princess is relegated to a goose girl by the King.
  6. The false bride, fearing the talking horse Falada, orders its execution.
  7. The princess secretly arranges for Falada's head to be nailed above an archway she passes daily, allowing her to speak to it.
  8. Each morning, the princess speaks to Falada's head, which replies, and later in the fields, she combs her golden hair, using a magical wind to distract the goose-boy, Conrad.
  9. Conrad, annoyed and suspicious, reports the princess's strange behavior and the talking horse's head to the King.
  10. The King secretly observes the princess speaking to Falada's head and magically controlling the wind to comb her hair.
  11. The King confronts the princess, who, bound by her oath, refuses to speak, but he tricks her into confessing her story to a fireplace while he listens from the chimney.
  12. The King reveals the deception to his son, presenting the true princess and exposing the false bride.
  13. At the wedding feast, the King asks the false bride what punishment someone who deceived their master deserves, and she describes a gruesome death.
  14. The King declares the false bride has pronounced her own sentence, and she is executed as she described.
  15. The true princess marries the prince and they live happily ever after.

Characters

👤

The Princess

human young adult female

Delicate and beautiful, with a graceful bearing even when in distress. Her build is slender and refined, indicative of a royal upbringing.

Attire: Initially wears 'royal clothes' of an unspecified European medieval style, likely made of fine fabrics like silk or brocade, possibly in rich colors, befitting a princess. Later forced into 'common ones', which would be simple, coarse linen or wool garments typical of a peasant or servant girl, likely in muted earth tones. At the end, she is restored to her 'royal clothes', which are described as 'shining dress'.

Wants: To fulfill her duty as a bride, to survive the ordeal, and to eventually reclaim her rightful place and honor.

Flaw: Her obedience and adherence to an oath, even when it causes her great suffering, and an initial naivety that allows her servant to usurp her.

Transforms from a sheltered princess to a humbled goose girl, enduring great suffering and loss, before being revealed and restored to her rightful place, gaining wisdom and strength through her trials.

Her long, flowing hair of pure gold.

Obedient, gentle, virtuous, resilient, and deeply sorrowful. She endures great hardship without complaint due to her oath, showing immense inner strength.

👤

The False Bride

human young adult female

Likely of similar build and height to the Princess, allowing her to impersonate her effectively. Her features are probably unremarkable compared to the Princess's striking beauty, but she is able to pass as a noblewoman through deception.

Attire: Initially wears 'common ones' as a servant. Upon usurping the Princess, she dons the 'royal clothes' of the Princess, which would be fine, richly colored fabrics. She is later seen in a 'shining dress' at the feast, which is likely the Princess's royal attire.

Wants: To usurp the Princess's position, marry the Prince, and gain wealth and status.

Flaw: Her overconfidence, her cruelty, and her inability to truly embody the virtue of a princess, which ultimately leads to her downfall.

Rises from a servant to a false princess through deception and cruelty, only to be exposed and suffer a gruesome, self-proclaimed punishment.

Her haughty, triumphant expression while wearing the Princess's royal clothes.

Cruel, cunning, ambitious, deceitful, and arrogant. She is ruthless in her pursuit of power and shows no remorse for her actions.

✦

Falada

horse adult non-human

A magnificent, noble horse, implied to be of fine breeding, suitable for a princess. Its head, when severed, is still recognizable and retains its ability to speak.

Attire: Wears a bridle and saddle appropriate for a royal steed, likely with some decorative elements.

Wants: To protect the Princess and bear witness to the injustice done to her.

Flaw: Being a horse, it is vulnerable to human cruelty and cannot physically defend itself or the Princess.

Serves as the Princess's loyal companion, is cruelly murdered by the False Bride, but continues to offer comfort and bear witness as a magical, speaking head, contributing to the revelation of the truth.

Its severed head, hanging over an archway, speaking.

Loyal, wise, and protective of the Princess. It observes everything and speaks only to comfort or reveal truth.

👤

The Old King

human elderly male

An elderly man, likely with a distinguished but perhaps slightly frail appearance befitting his age. He is observant and wise.

Attire: Royal attire of a medieval European king, likely rich robes of velvet or brocade, possibly with fur trim, and a crown or circlet. Colors would be deep and regal.

Wants: To ensure justice is served, to find the truth, and to secure a proper bride for his son.

Flaw: Initially susceptible to deception due to the False Bride's cunning.

Begins as a deceived ruler, becomes an investigator, and ultimately acts as the dispenser of justice, restoring order and truth.

His wise, discerning gaze as he observes the Goose Girl from a hidden vantage point.

Observant, wise, just, and persistent. He is initially deceived but seeks the truth when his suspicions are aroused.

👤

Conrad

human child male

A young boy, likely small and agile, necessary for chasing his hat in the wind. His appearance is that of a common peasant boy.

Attire: Simple, practical peasant clothing, such as a tunic and breeches made of coarse linen or wool, in muted colors, and a hat.

Wants: To perform his duties, to understand the strange occurrences around the Goose Girl, and to report his grievances.

Flaw: His childish curiosity and susceptibility to being easily annoyed or tricked by the Goose Girl's magic.

Begins as a simple goose boy, becomes an unwitting witness to magic and injustice, and plays a crucial role in revealing the truth to the King.

Chasing his hat as it's blown away by the wind.

Curious, easily vexed, observant, and honest. He is initially annoyed by the Goose Girl but his observations lead to the truth.

Locations

The Stream in the Woods

outdoor morning mild, pleasant weather, possibly late spring or early summer

A clear, flowing brook winding through a dense, possibly Germanic, forest. The water is cool and inviting, reflecting the surrounding trees and sky. The ground near the stream is likely soft earth or moss.

Mood: initially refreshing, then quickly becomes tense and foreboding due to the servant's betrayal

The Princess is forced to drink from the stream like an animal, her magical lock of hair falls out, and the servant seizes control, forcing the Princess to switch clothes and horses.

clear brook dense forest exposed tree roots or smooth stones in the water golden cup Princess's horse, Falada servant's horse

The King's Palace Courtyard and Archway

transitional morning and evening varies, but generally clear

A bustling courtyard of a medieval German king's palace, likely paved with cobblestones, surrounded by half-timbered buildings with steep, gabled roofs. A large, gloomy archway, possibly made of rough-hewn stone or dark timber, serves as a main entrance or passage within the palace grounds. The archway is tall enough for horses and carts to pass through.

Mood: initially grand and celebratory, later becomes somber and melancholic for the Princess, then eerie due to Falada's head

The false bride arrives in state, the Princess is relegated to the courtyard, and later, Falada's head is nailed above the archway, allowing the Princess to speak to her loyal steed daily.

cobblestone courtyard half-timbered palace buildings large, gloomy archway Falada's severed head nailed above the archway geese

The Goose Meadow

outdoor daytime, likely morning or afternoon clear, breezy, sunny

An open, expansive meadow located outside the palace town, likely bordered by distant trees or gentle hills. The grass is lush and green, suitable for grazing geese. There's enough open space for the wind to blow freely.

Mood: peaceful and natural, but also a place of subtle magic and the Princess's quiet defiance

The Princess tends geese, unbraids her golden hair, and uses a magical rhyme to summon the wind to blow Conrad's hat away, preventing him from stealing a lock of her hair.

lush green grass flock of geese distant trees or hills open sky Conrad's hat

The Palace Fireplace

indoor evening cool evening indoors

A large, traditional hearth within a chamber of the German palace, likely made of rough-hewn stone or brick, with a wide opening. The interior of the fireplace is dark and sooty, providing a secluded, private space for confession. The room itself would be furnished in a simple, sturdy medieval German style.

Mood: confidential, intimate, a place of sorrowful confession and eventual revelation

The King tricks the Princess into confessing her true identity and her ordeal to the fireplace, while he secretly listens from outside the chimney.

large stone or brick fireplace dark, sooty interior chimney (implied, for the King to listen) warm glow of embers (optional, for mood)