[THE STORY of CINDERELLA](#contents)
by Unknown · from Favorite Fairy Tales
Adapted Version
Once there was a kind girl. Her name was Cindy. Her mother died. Her father wed again. The new wife was not kind. Her two big sisters were not kind. Cindy did all the hard work. She cleaned the house. She made the food. They called her Cindy.
The King had a son. He was the Prince. The King made a big party. The Prince would pick a wife. The two sisters got party cards. They were very happy. They got new dresses. They got new shoes.
The mean wife and sisters went. Cindy stayed home. She was very sad. She cried by the fire. She wanted to go too.
A kind Fairy came to help. She used magic. A big fruit became a coach. Mice became horses. Cindy's old dress changed. It was a pretty gown. She had glass shoes. The Fairy said, "Go to the party." She said, "Come home by midnight."
Cindy went to the party. The Prince saw her. He liked her very much. They danced and danced. She was so happy. Cindy left before midnight. Her pretty dress changed back. Her coach became a fruit again.
The next night, she went again. The Prince liked her. They danced all night. She left before midnight. Her magic went away. Her dress changed back.
On the third night, she went. She danced with the Prince. She forgot the time. The clock rang twelve times. She ran very fast. One glass shoe fell off. She left the big hall. Her pretty dress changed back. She had her old dress again.
The Prince found the glass shoe. He said, "I will wed this girl." He said, "The shoe must fit her."
Men went to all the houses. They took the glass shoe. Many girls tried it on. The shoe did not fit them.
The men came to her house. The big sister tried the shoe. It was too small for her. The young sister tried it too. Her foot was too big. The shoe did not fit.
Cindy came from a door. She said, "Can I try it?" The mean wife said, "No!"
The man said, "All girls must try." Cindy sat down. He put the shoe on her foot. It fit! Cindy took out the other shoe.
Her old dress changed again. It was a pretty gown. She was the girl from the party! All the people could see it.
The Prince was very happy. He wed Cindy. They had a big party. They lived happy ever after.
The two sisters were not happy. They stayed mean.
Cindy was kind. She was happy. Being kind is good.
Original Story
THE STORY OF CINDERELLA
THERE was once a rich man, whose wife died, leaving him with one little girl. After some years, hoping to give his child a mother's love and care, he married again, this time a widow, with two grown-up daughters. But his second wife was haughty and proud, and her two daughters were even worse than their mother; and the poor little girl had a very unhappy time with her new relations. Her stepsisters were jealous of her, for she was very beautiful, and they themselves were plain and ugly. They did all they could to make her miserable; and, at length, through their wicked spite and envy, her life became a burden to her. The poor child was sent to live in the kitchen, where she had to do all the rough and dirty work; and because she was always dressed in rags, and sat beside the cinders in the grate, they called her Cinderella.
It happened that the King of the country had an only son. He was very anxious that the Prince should be married; so he gave a great ball, and invited all the grand ladies in the country to come to it. It was to be a very splendid affair, lasting for three nights, and people were very eager to be invited to it, for it was known that the Prince would choose his bride from among the ladies present.
Cinderella's sisters received invitations; and from the day they arrived they talked of nothing but of what they should wear, for each of them secretly hoped that she would be chosen as the Prince's bride.
When the great day came at last, they began to dress for the ball directly after breakfast. Cinderella had to help them; and they kept her busy all day doing their hair, and running messages, and helping them to lace up their fine dresses.
When Cinderella saw their beautiful clothes she wished that she could go to the ball as well; but when she timidly asked if she might, they laughed in mocking scorn.
"You go to the ball!" they cried. "What would you do at the ball, with your rags and tatters and your dirty face? No, no, Cinderella, go back to your seat amongst the ashes—that is the place for a little kitchen girl like you!"
So the two sisters and their mother drove away in a carriage and pair to the King's palace, and Cinderella was left behind. She sat down on the hearth before the kitchen fire and began to cry softly to herself, because she felt so very lonely and miserable.
As she sat there in the dusk, with the firelight dancing over her, and her face buried in her hands, she heard a voice calling:
"Cinderella, Cinderella!" and with a start she looked up to see who it could be.
There on the hearth in front of her stood an old woman, leaning upon a stick. She was dressed in a long red cloak, and she wore high-heeled shoes and a tall black hat.
Where she had come from Cinderella could not imagine. She certainly had not come in through the door, nor yet through the window for both were shut.
Cinderella was so surprised to see her that she stopped crying, and stared at her in astonishment.
"What are you crying for?" asked the old woman.
"Because my mother and sisters have gone to the ball, and I am left here all alone," said Cinderella.
"Do you want to go to the ball, too!" said the old lady.
"Yes, but it is no good; I have nothing but rags to wear," sobbed poor Cinderella.
"Well, well, be a good child and don't cry any more," said the old woman, briskly. "I am your Fairy Godmother, and if you do what I tell you, perhaps you shall go after all. Run out into the garden and bring me in a pumpkin!"
Cinderella ran out into the garden and brought in the biggest pumpkin that she could find.
"Now go and fetch the mouse-trap out of the cellar," said her Godmother, and Cinderella hurried to get it. There were six mice in the trap, and the old woman harnessed them to the pumpkin, put a rat on the top to drive them, and two lizards behind, and then waved her wand over them. Immediately the pumpkin turned into a gorgeous coach, the mice into six beautiful horses, the rat into a stately coachman, and the lizards into tall footmen, with powdered hair and silk stockings. "There," said the old woman; "there's a carriage to take you to the ball."
"Alas," said Cinderella, "how can I go to the ball? I have nothing to wear but this!" and she touched her ragged frock.
"Is that all?" said the Fairy Godmother. Once more she waved her wand, and Cinderella's rags turned into the most beautiful dress in the world, all shining with gold and silver threads and covered with costly gems. In her hair was a circlet of pearls, and her feet were shod with the prettiest and daintiest pair of glass slippers that ever were seen.
"Now," said the Fairy Godmother, "now you can go to the ball. But mind you come away before the clock strikes twelve, for should you linger beyond that hour, all your splendor will vanish, and your dress will turn into rags again."
Cinderella promised to obey her Godmother's instructions. Then she got into the beautiful coach. The footman shut the door, the coachman whipped up the horses, and away she went to the ball.
When she arrived there was a great stir in the Palace. So lovely a face and so costly and rich a dress had never before been seen, and everybody thought it must be some great Princess arrived from foreign lands.
All the courtiers and other guests stood back to let her pass, and when the Prince caught sight of her he fell in love with her on the spot. He danced with her the whole of the evening, and people thought there was no doubt as to whom he would choose for his bride.
At a quarter to twelve, Cinderella, remembering her Godmother's instructions, said good-bye to the Prince and came away.
She arrived home just as the clock struck twelve. At once the coachman and footmen turned back into rats and mice, and the coach into a pumpkin; and when the sisters came home a little later, there was Cinderella, dressed in her old shabby frock, sitting in her usual place amongst the cinders.
The two ugly sisters were full of the strange Princess who had come to the ball. They talked about her all the next day, little dreaming that all the while the beautiful lady was their despised sister Cinderella.
In the evening after they had gone again to the ball, the Fairy Godmother made her appearance. Once more Cinderella drove to the Palace in her coach and six; this time arrayed in a still more gorgeous and beautiful dress; and once more the Prince danced with her all the evening.
But when the third night came Cinderella was enjoying herself so much that she quite forgot what her Fairy Godmother had said, until suddenly she heard the clock begin to strike twelve. She remembered that as soon as it finished striking, all her fine clothes would turn to rags again; and, jumping up in alarm, she ran out of the room. The Prince ran after her, trying to overtake her; and Cinderella in her fright ran so fast that she left one of her little glass slippers on the floor behind her.
The Prince stopped to pick it up, and this gave Cinderella time to escape; but she was only just in time. Just as she was crossing the Palace yard, the clock finished striking, and immediately all her finery vanished; and there she was, dressed in her old ragged frock again.
When the Prince came out upon the Palace steps, he could see no sign of the lovely Princess. The guards at the gate told him that nobody at all had passed that way, except a little ragged kitchenmaid; and the Prince had to go back to the ball with only a little glass slipper to remind him of the beautiful lady with whom he was so desperately in love.
The next day the King sent out all his heralds and trumpeters with a Proclamation, saying that the Prince would marry the lady whose foot the slipper fitted. But though all the ladies in the land tried on the slipper it would fit none of them—their feet were all too big!
At last the heralds came to the house where Cinderella lived. The eldest stepsister tried the slipper on first, but it was quite impossible for her to get her foot into it, for her great toe was too big. Then her mother, who was watching eagerly, fetched a carving-knife.
"Be quick, cut the toe off," she said; "what does it matter if you are lame—if you are the Prince's bride you will always ride in a carriage!"
So the eldest sister cut off her big toe, but it was no use, the slipper would not fit, and at last she was obliged to hand it to her sister.
But the other sister had no better luck. She did, indeed, get her toes inside, but her foot was much too long, and her heel stuck out behind. The mother urged her to cut it off.
"What does it matter?" she said. "If you are the Prince's bride you will never need to walk any more."
But although she cut her heel off, the slipper was still too small; and at length she, too, had to give up the attempt to force her foot into it.
Then Cinderella came shyly out from behind the door where she had been standing out of sight, and asked if she might try on the slipper. Her stepmother and sisters were very angry, and were about to drive her away with blows, but the herald stopped them.
"The Prince wishes every woman in the land to try on this slipper," he said; and asking Cinderella to sit on a chair, he knelt down and tried the slipper on her foot.
And it fitted her exactly!
While everyone stood and stared in astonishment, Cinderella drew from her pocket the other slipper and put it on. No sooner had she done so than her ragged frock changed into the beautiful ball dress again, and she stood up before them all—the beautiful lady with whom the Prince had fallen in love at the ball.
The Prince was overjoyed to find her again; and they were married at once with much pomp amid great rejoicings.
As for the wicked sisters they were so jealous that they both turned green with envy. They grew uglier and uglier every day, until at last they grew so dreadfully ugly that nobody could bear to look at them any longer. But Cinderella became more and more beautiful, and lived happily with the Prince for ever afterwards.
Story DNA
Moral
Goodness and virtue will eventually be rewarded, while wickedness and cruelty lead to their own downfall.
Plot Summary
Cinderella, a kind and beautiful girl, is cruelly mistreated by her stepmother and stepsisters after her father's death. When the Prince hosts a grand ball, Cinderella is forbidden to attend, but her Fairy Godmother magically transforms her into a beautiful lady, allowing her to go with a strict midnight curfew. She captivates the Prince for three nights, but on the last night, she flees in haste, leaving behind a single glass slipper. The Prince searches the kingdom for the slipper's owner, and it ultimately fits only Cinderella, revealing her true identity. She marries the Prince and lives happily ever after, while her wicked stepfamily faces their own miserable fate.
Themes
Emotional Arc
suffering to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story has many variants across cultures, but the version with the fairy godmother, pumpkin, and glass slipper is most famously associated with Charles Perrault's 1697 French rendition.
Plot Beats (15)
- A kind girl is left with a cruel stepmother and two stepsisters after her father remarries, and is forced into servitude, earning the name Cinderella.
- The King announces a grand ball for the Prince to choose a bride, and Cinderella's stepsisters are invited.
- Cinderella is left behind, weeping, when her family goes to the ball.
- A Fairy Godmother appears and transforms common objects into a magical carriage and attire for Cinderella, warning her to return before midnight.
- Cinderella attends the ball, enchanting the Prince, but flees just before midnight, her magic vanishing upon her return home.
- This sequence repeats for a second night, with Cinderella again fleeing before midnight.
- On the third night, Cinderella loses track of time, and as she flees the palace at the stroke of midnight, she leaves behind one glass slipper.
- The Prince, smitten, declares he will marry the woman whose foot fits the slipper.
- Heralds travel the kingdom, having all eligible women try on the slipper, but none can fit it.
- The heralds arrive at Cinderella's house, where her stepsisters attempt to force their feet into the slipper, even cutting off parts of their feet at their mother's urging, but fail.
- Cinderella, emerging from hiding, requests to try on the slipper, much to her stepfamily's scorn.
- The slipper fits Cinderella perfectly, and she produces the matching slipper, confirming her identity.
- Cinderella's rags transform into her beautiful gown, revealing her as the Princess from the ball.
- The Prince is overjoyed, and Cinderella marries him, living happily ever after.
- The wicked stepsisters are consumed by envy, becoming uglier and uglier.
Characters
Cinderella
Slender and graceful, of average height for a young woman. Her movements are often timid and reserved due to her upbringing, but she possesses an inherent elegance. Despite her ragged clothes, her natural beauty shines through.
Attire: Initially, she wears a perpetually dirty, patched, and ragged frock made of coarse, undyed fabric, suitable for kitchen work. When transformed by her Fairy Godmother, she wears a magnificent ball gown shimmering with gold and silver threads, adorned with costly gems, and a circlet of pearls in her hair. Her feet are shod in delicate glass slippers.
Wants: To escape her miserable existence, find happiness, and experience love and acceptance.
Flaw: Her timidity and obedience to her stepfamily, and her occasional forgetfulness (as seen with the midnight deadline).
Transforms from an oppressed, ragged kitchen maid into a beloved princess, finding happiness and justice. She learns to embrace her true worth and overcome adversity.
Kind, patient, resilient, humble, and initially timid. She endures hardship without complaint but secretly yearns for a better life. She is also forgetful when enjoying herself.
Fairy Godmother
An old woman, possibly small and slightly hunched, but with an air of brisk energy and powerful magic. She leans on a stick, suggesting age, but her movements are quick and purposeful.
Attire: A long, flowing red cloak, high-heeled shoes, and a tall black hat. Her attire suggests a traditional European folk witch or wise woman, but with a benevolent twist.
Wants: To help Cinderella achieve her dreams and find happiness, acting as a guardian or mentor.
Flaw: Her magic has limitations, specifically the midnight deadline, which she cannot override.
Acts as a catalyst for Cinderella's transformation, providing the means for her to attend the ball and meet the Prince. Her role is primarily to empower Cinderella.
Kind, practical, powerful, no-nonsense, and a little stern when giving instructions. She is a benevolent magical helper.
Prince
A handsome young man, likely tall and well-built, befitting a royal figure. He possesses a regal bearing and an air of romantic determination.
Attire: Splendid, formal court attire suitable for a royal ball, likely consisting of a richly embroidered doublet and breeches, possibly with a cape or sash, in luxurious fabrics like velvet or silk, adorned with jewels or gold trim. Colors would be rich, such as deep blue, crimson, or gold.
Wants: To find a bride he truly loves, rather than one chosen for political reasons, and to reunite with the mysterious princess who captured his heart.
Flaw: His immediate infatuation makes him somewhat naive to the true identity of Cinderella initially, and he is easily thwarted by her sudden disappearances.
From a prince seeking a bride to a man deeply in love, determined to find his beloved. He learns the importance of looking beyond appearances.
Romantic, determined, charming, and persistent. He falls deeply in love quickly and is unwavering in his quest to find the lady of his dreams.
Stepmother
Likely a woman of imposing presence, perhaps tall and gaunt, or stout and severe. Her appearance, though perhaps once considered 'grand,' is now overshadowed by her haughty and cruel nature.
Attire: Expensive but perhaps overly ornate or ill-fitting dresses, made of rich fabrics like brocade or heavy silk, in dark or severe colors. Her clothing aims to project wealth and status but lacks true elegance, reflecting her inner ugliness.
Wants: To elevate her own daughters' status by marrying one to the Prince, and to maintain her social standing and control over her household, particularly Cinderella.
Flaw: Her overwhelming pride, envy, and cruelty, which ultimately lead to her daughters' downfall and her own humiliation.
Remains consistently cruel and unyielding, ultimately facing humiliation and the failure of her ambitions.
Haughty, proud, cruel, envious, and manipulative. She delights in Cinderella's misery and is fiercely ambitious for her own daughters.
Eldest Stepsister
Described as 'plain and ugly,' likely with a coarse or ungainly build. Her attempts at elegance are undermined by her natural unattractiveness and cruel demeanor. Her foot is notably large.
Attire: Overly elaborate ball gowns made of expensive fabrics, but chosen without taste, possibly in clashing colors or with too much ornamentation. Her everyday clothes would be less grand but still better than Cinderella's rags.
Wants: To marry the Prince and gain wealth and status, driven by envy of Cinderella and a desire for social climbing.
Flaw: Her vanity, cruelty, and lack of self-awareness. Her physical unattractiveness and large foot are also literal weaknesses in her pursuit of the Prince.
Remains consistently ugly in character and appearance, ultimately failing in her ambition and becoming even uglier due to envy.
Jealous, spiteful, vain, and cruel. She is ambitious and willing to go to extreme lengths (like self-mutilation) to achieve her desires.
Younger Stepsister
Also described as 'plain and ugly,' similar to her sister, but perhaps with a slightly different physical flaw, such as an overly long foot. Her attempts at elegance are equally unsuccessful.
Attire: Expensive, ill-chosen ball gowns, perhaps in a contrasting but equally garish color to her sister's, made of rich fabrics but lacking grace or taste.
Wants: To marry the Prince and gain wealth and status, driven by envy and a desire for social climbing, competing with her sister.
Flaw: Her vanity, cruelty, and lack of self-awareness. Her physical unattractiveness and overly long foot are literal weaknesses.
Remains consistently ugly in character and appearance, ultimately failing in her ambition and becoming even uglier due to envy.
Jealous, spiteful, vain, and cruel, mirroring her sister and mother. She is equally ambitious and willing to mutilate herself for status.
Locations
Cinderella's Kitchen
A humble, working kitchen with a large hearth and a grate filled with cinders, where Cinderella often sits. It is likely a simple, rustic space with basic furnishings.
Mood: Lonely, miserable, then suddenly magical and hopeful
Cinderella is left behind from the ball, cries, and then meets her Fairy Godmother who transforms her rags and a pumpkin into a ball gown and coach.
The Palace Ballroom
A grand and splendid ballroom within a royal palace, filled with courtiers and guests, likely adorned with rich fabrics, chandeliers, and polished floors for dancing.
Mood: Luxurious, festive, romantic, bustling, then urgent and frantic
Cinderella dances with the Prince, falls in love, and flees as the clock strikes midnight, leaving behind a glass slipper.
Palace Courtyard/Steps
The outdoor area immediately surrounding the palace, including the steps leading up to the entrance and the courtyard where carriages arrive and depart.
Mood: Urgent, magical, transformative, then desolate
Cinderella flees the ball, her finery transforms back into rags as the clock strikes twelve, just as she crosses the courtyard.
Cinderella's Drawing Room/Parlor
A more formal room in Cinderella's house, where the stepsisters try on the slipper. It would be furnished to reflect the family's wealth, albeit perhaps a bit gaudy or cluttered.
Mood: Tense, desperate, then triumphant
The heralds bring the glass slipper to Cinderella's house; her stepsisters fail to fit it, and Cinderella successfully tries it on, revealing her true identity.