FABLE XCV

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fable cautionary tale solemn Ages 8-14 251 words 2 min read
Cover: FABLE XCV

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 257 words 2 min Canon 95/100

A big Lion lived in a big forest. He was the king of the animals.

Big Lion lived in a big cave. He said he was sick and wanted visitors. He wanted them in his cave. But he was not truly sick. He wanted many visitors inside. He waited for them.

Many animals heard Big Lion. They felt sad for him. They wanted to help Big Lion. So, they went to his cave. They visited Big Lion inside. They walked into the cave. They were kind friends.

Clever Fox lived nearby too. He heard about Big Lion. But Clever Fox did not go. He did not visit Big Lion. He stayed outside the cave. Clever Fox was very smart. He thought about things first.

Big Lion wondered about Clever Fox. "Where is Clever Fox?" he asked. Big Lion sent Jackal to him. Jackal went to Clever Fox. "Big Lion is sick," Jackal said. "Why do you not visit Big Lion?"

Clever Fox was very polite. "Please tell Big Lion I care," he said. "I want to visit him." "But I worry about his cave." "I stand at the cave door." "I look at the ground." "I see many footprints." "They all go inside." "No footprints come out." "This makes me wonder." "Is Big Lion truly sick?" "I must be careful."

Big Lion was not sick. He wanted animals inside. He wanted to keep them. Clever Fox was very smart. He looked carefully first. He thought wisely too. Clever Fox stayed safe. It is good to be smart.

Original Story 251 words · 2 min read

FABLE XCV.

THE FOX AND THE SICK LION.

It was reported that the Lion was sick, and the beasts were made to believe that they could not make their court better than by going to visit him. Upon this, they generally went, but it was particularly remarked that the Fox was not one of the number. The Lion, therefore, dispatched one of his Jackals to sound him about it, and to ask him why he had so little charity and respect as never to come near him at a time when he lay so dangerously ill, and everybody else had been to see him. "Why," replied the Fox, "pray present my duty to his majesty, and tell him that I have the same respect for him as ever, and have been coming several times to kiss his royal paw, but I am so terribly frightened at the mouth of his cave, to see the print of my fellow-subjects' feet all pointing forwards, and none backwards, that I had not resolution enough to venture in."

Now, the truth of the matter was, that the sickness of the Lion was only a sham to draw the beasts into his den, the more easily to devour them.

MORAL.

It is well to weigh and consider the nature of any proposal thoroughly before we accede to it; but, certainly, if we have reason, from the injury done to others, to suspect that we may suffer harm, it is decidedly better to decline.



Story DNA

Moral

It is wise to thoroughly consider any proposal and to decline if there is reason to suspect harm based on the injury done to others.

Plot Summary

The Lion pretends to be gravely ill, luring other animals to his den under the guise of a visit. Noticing the Fox's absence, the Lion sends a messenger to inquire why he hasn't shown respect. The Fox replies that while he wishes to pay his respects, he is deterred by the sight of footprints all leading into the cave, but none coming out. The story concludes by revealing the Lion's sickness was a trick to devour the unsuspecting beasts, validating the Fox's shrewd observation and caution.

Themes

prudencesuspiciondeceptionsurvival

Emotional Arc

suspicion to confirmation

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: sparse

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking animals
the footprints

Cultural Context

Origin: Unknown (likely European fable tradition)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Fables often reflect social hierarchies and power dynamics, using animals to satirize human behavior.

Plot Beats (7)

  1. The Lion feigns sickness to trick other animals into visiting his den.
  2. Other beasts generally go to visit the 'sick' Lion.
  3. The Fox is notably absent from the visitors.
  4. The Lion dispatches a Jackal to question the Fox about his lack of respect and charity.
  5. The Fox politely sends his regards to the Lion but explains his fear of the cave's entrance.
  6. The Fox points out that all the footprints leading into the cave point forwards, with none pointing backwards.
  7. The narrator confirms that the Lion's sickness was a ruse to easily devour the beasts.

Characters

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The Fox

animal adult male

A lean, agile fox of medium size, with a lithe build and keen senses. His movements are quick and deliberate, indicative of his cunning nature.

Attire: None, as he is an animal. His fur is his natural covering.

Wants: To survive and avoid harm, particularly from predators like the Lion.

Flaw: His inherent caution can make him seem aloof or disrespectful to others.

Does not undergo a significant arc within this short fable, but his actions demonstrate his established wisdom and caution.

His bushy, reddish-orange tail with a white tip, often held low and sweeping.

Cunning, observant, skeptical, self-preserving, intelligent.

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The Lion

animal adult male

A large, powerful lion with a muscular build, indicative of his predatory nature. His paws are massive, and his claws are formidable.

Attire: None, as he is an animal. His fur and mane are his natural covering.

Wants: To easily capture and devour other animals for sustenance, asserting his dominance.

Flaw: His overconfidence in his deception, believing others will be easily fooled.

Does not change, remaining a cunning predator whose deception is ultimately exposed by the Fox's wisdom.

His massive, shaggy golden-brown mane that frames his powerful face.

Deceptive, predatory, cruel, manipulative, arrogant.

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The Jackal

animal adult male

A lean, wiry jackal, smaller than the Lion but still a capable scavenger. His fur is sandy-brown, blending with dry environments.

Attire: None, as he is an animal. His fur is his natural covering.

Wants: To serve the Lion and avoid his wrath, likely hoping for scraps or protection.

Flaw: Lack of independent thought; easily manipulated by the Lion.

No arc; serves as a messenger.

His large, erect ears and sandy-brown fur.

Obedient, subservient, loyal (to the Lion), unquestioning.

Locations

The Lion's Den Entrance

transitional Dry season, warm and dusty

The dark, foreboding mouth of a cave, likely carved into a rocky outcrop in a savanna or arid landscape. The ground immediately outside is dusty, showing numerous tracks.

Mood: Eerie, dangerous, suspicious, foreboding

The Fox observes the tracks and deduces the Lion's deception, refusing to enter.

Dark cave mouth Rocky outcrop Dusty ground Numerous animal paw prints pointing inwards No paw prints pointing outwards

The Lion's Den Interior

indoor Dry season, cool and damp inside

A dark, cavernous space within the rocky den, likely dimly lit by the entrance. It would be a place of ambush and consumption, with a predatory atmosphere.

Mood: Dangerous, predatory, claustrophobic, grim

The Lion waits here, feigning sickness to lure and devour unsuspecting animals.

Dark cave interior Rough rock walls Shadows Implied remains or signs of previous victims