FABLE XX

by Unknown · from Favourite Fables in Prose and Verse

fable cautionary tale solemn Ages 8-14 152 words 1 min read
Cover: FABLE XX

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 369 words 2 min Canon 100/100

A hunter came to the big forest. He had a bow and many arrows. He looked for animals to hunt. The animals saw the hunter. They were very scared. They ran away fast. They ran to their homes. Many animals hid in the trees. They hid in bushes too. They did not want to be seen.

But The Lion did not run away. He was big and strong. His mane was thick. He was the king of the forest. The Lion stood very still. He looked at the hunter. He wanted to fight the hunter. He thought he was very brave. He was not scared.

The Hunter saw The Lion standing there. The Hunter smiled. "Stop," said The Hunter. "Wait for my thing." "My thing will come to you." The Hunter spoke in a clear voice. He held his strong bow. He pulled the string back. He was ready.

The Hunter shot an arrow from his bow. The arrow flew very fast. It whistled in the air. It hit The Lion's side. The Lion felt a sharp, bad pain. He cried out loud. He was hurt very much. The arrow made him feel weak. It was not a small hurt at all.

The Lion cried out in pain. He turned around quickly. He ran deep into the forest. He ran very, very fast. He ran past trees. He ran past bushes. The pain was bad in his side. He just wanted to hide now. He wanted to be safe.

A Fox saw The Lion running away. The Fox was surprised. "Why do you run, Lion?" asked The Fox. "You are very brave." "You are the strongest animal." "Go back and fight the hunter." The Fox spoke to The Lion. He did not understand. He thought Lion was fearless.

"No," said The Lion. "I will not go back. The arrow hurt me very much. It was very sharp and fast. It came from far away. The man sent the arrow to me. He must be much stronger than me. He is too powerful to fight. I cannot win. I must be smart."

The Lion was smart. He knew to be safe. Someone was too strong. He learned a big lesson.

Original Story 152 words · 1 min read

FABLE XX.

THE LION WOUNDED.

A Man, who was very skilful with his bow, went up into the forest to hunt. At his approach, there was a great consternation and rout among the wild beasts, the Lion alone showing any determination to fight. "Stop," said the Archer to him, "and await my messenger, who has somewhat to say to you." With that, he sent an arrow after the Lion, and wounded him in the side. The Lion, smarting with anguish, fled into the depths of the forest; but a Fox, seeing him run, bade him take courage, and face his enemy. "No," said the Lion, "you will not persuade me to that; for if the messenger he sends is so sharp, what must be the power of him who sends it?"

MORAL.

It is better to yield to a superior force than foolishly brave its power.

THE LION WOUNDED.



Story DNA

Moral

It is better to yield to a superior force than foolishly brave its power.

Plot Summary

A skilled archer enters the forest, causing all animals to flee except for a proud Lion who decides to fight. The archer sends an arrow, wounding the Lion, who then flees in pain. A Fox encourages the Lion to return and fight, but the Lion, having experienced the 'messenger's' power, wisely concludes that the sender must be even more formidable, choosing self-preservation over foolish bravery.

Themes

prudencewisdomself-preservation

Emotional Arc

pride to humility

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: sparse

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs nature
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking animals
the arrow (as a messenger of power)the Lion (as a symbol of pride/strength)

Cultural Context

Origin: Unknown (likely Greco-Roman or European tradition of fables)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Fables often served as moral instruction, popular across many ancient cultures.

Plot Beats (7)

  1. A skilled archer enters the forest to hunt, causing panic among the wild animals.
  2. Only the Lion stands firm, determined to fight the archer.
  3. The archer tells the Lion to wait for his 'messenger'.
  4. The archer shoots an arrow, wounding the Lion in the side.
  5. The Lion, in pain, flees deep into the forest.
  6. A Fox sees the Lion running and encourages him to be brave and face his enemy.
  7. The Lion refuses, stating that if the messenger (arrow) was so sharp, the sender (archer) must be even more formidable.

Characters

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The Archer

human adult male

A man of average height with a lean, muscular build, indicative of someone who spends much time outdoors and is skilled in hunting. His movements are precise and confident.

Attire: Practical hunting attire, likely made of sturdy, muted-colored linen or wool to blend into the forest. Perhaps a simple tunic, trousers, and leather boots, with a quiver slung over his shoulder.

Wants: To hunt and demonstrate his skill, to assert dominance over the wild.

Flaw: Overconfidence in his abilities, potentially underestimating the resilience of his prey.

Remains unchanged, successfully asserting his dominance.

His bow drawn taut, an arrow nocked and ready.

Skilful, confident, strategic, somewhat arrogant in his power.

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The Lion

animal adult male

A large, powerful adult lion, with a muscular build and a majestic presence. His coat is a rich golden-brown, and he moves with a natural grace and strength.

Attire: None, as he is an animal.

Wants: To defend himself and his territory, to survive.

Flaw: Vulnerability to a superior, unseen force; pride that leads him to confront a dangerous foe.

Starts as defiant and brave, but learns humility and fear in the face of a superior, unseen power.

His majestic, dark mane and the arrow protruding from his side.

Brave, determined, proud, but ultimately pragmatic and fearful of superior force.

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The Fox

animal adult male

A sleek, agile fox with a slender build and a bushy tail. His movements are quick and cunning.

Attire: None, as he is an animal.

Wants: To offer advice, perhaps to gain favor or simply out of curiosity.

Flaw: Underestimates the power of the Archer initially.

Learns from the Lion's experience about the nature of superior force.

His bushy reddish-orange tail with a white tip.

Observant, opportunistic, perhaps a bit naive in his initial advice, but quick to understand the Lion's reasoning.

Locations

Forest Edge

transitional morning mild, clear day

The initial approach of the hunter, where the forest meets a more open area, causing immediate alarm among the animals.

Mood: tense, sudden alarm

The hunter first enters, causing panic among the beasts and the Lion's initial stand.

dense tree line undergrowth open ground sunlight filtering through leaves

Depths of the Forest

outdoor morning mild, shaded

A secluded, dense part of the forest where the wounded Lion seeks refuge, characterized by thick foliage and a sense of concealment.

Mood: painful, secluded, reflective

The Lion flees here after being wounded, and the Fox attempts to persuade him to return.

thick undergrowth dense tree canopy shadows mossy ground gnarled tree trunks