FERGUS O'MARA and the AIR-DEMONS

by Unknown · from Irish Fairy Tales

folk tale cautionary tale solemn Ages 8-14 1687 words 8 min read
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Fergus was a good man. He was a kind man. He worked very hard. He loved his family. But bad shadows watched him. He lived near a big rock. Bad shadows lived there too. A wise old man warned Fergus. He warned: "Bad shadows wait for mistakes." Fergus was careful.

Fergus had a little girl. Her name was Lily. Lily had bright eyes. She loved her father. He loved her very much. Lily got sick and died. She was very sweet. Lily wanted a special candle. Her candle was small. It smelled like flowers. She held it in her hand. Then she went to sleep. She was not scared at all.

One Sunday, Fergus went to church. It was morning. The sun was bright. Birds sang in the trees. He walked alone. He felt peaceful. The church was far away. He walked a long way.

Fergus walked by the big rock. He saw a deer. The deer was fast. It had big antlers. Dogs ran after it. The dogs barked loudly. Fergus liked to hunt. Fergus felt excited. He loved the chase. He forgot church. He forgot his duty. He ran after the deer. This was a mistake.

The deer ran very fast. Fergus ran too. His legs grew tired. His breath came hard. The hunt was very long. He did not stop. He went far away. He forgot about church. He forgot his way home. He was lost now.

The deer and dogs were gone. The forest was dark. The air grew cold. Fergus heard scary, loud noises. The noises grew louder. They sounded evil. They came from the big rock. He knew it was bad shadows. Fergus felt very sad. He felt scared too.

Night came. The sky turned black. A big storm started. Thunder boomed loudly. The wind blew hard. Lightning flashed bright. Rain fell down. Near the big rock, bad shadows came. They were dark shapes. The shadows moved fast. They came closer to Fergus. They wanted Fergus. Then a bright light came. It was Lily. She held her special candle. Lily's light was strong. Lily stood between Fergus and the shadows. The shadows did not like Lily's light. It pushed them back. They flew around Fergus. They made a fast wind. Lily floated there. Her candle light shone. It protected Fergus. Fergus ran to his house. Fergus ran very fast. He was very tired. He fell inside. The door closed fast. It locked itself all alone. The scary noises stopped. The storm went away. Fergus woke up. The sun came. He told his family his story. His family was safe. He felt great relief. He learned a lesson. Outside was messy. The bad shadows were gone. They never came back. Fergus was safe. Love helped him.

Original Story 1687 words · 8 min read

FERGUS O'MARA AND THE AIR-DEMONS

By Dr. P. W. Joyce

f all the different kinds of goblins that haunted the lonely places of Ireland in days of old, air-demons were most dreaded by the people. They lived among clouds, and mists, and rocks, and they hated the human race with the utmost malignity. In those times lived in the north of Desmond (the present county of Cork) a man man named Fergus O'Mara. His farm lay on the southern slope of the Ballyhoura Mountains, along which ran the open road that led to his house. This road was not shut in by walls or fences; but on both sides there were scattered trees and bushes that sheltered it in winter, and made it dark and gloomy when you approached the house at night. Beside the road, a little way off from the house, there was a spot that had an evil name all over the country, a little hill covered closely with copsewood, with a great craggy rock on top, from which, on stormy nights, strange and fearful sounds had often been heard—shrill voices, and screams, mingled with loud fiendish laughter; and the people believed that it was the haunt of air-demons. In some way it had become known that these demons had an eye on Fergus, and watched for every opportunity to get him into their power. He had himself been warned of this many years before, by an old monk from the neighbouring monastery of Buttevant, who told him, moreover, that so long as he led a blameless, upright life, he need have no fear of the demons; but that if ever he yielded to temptation or fell into any great sin, then would come the opportunity for which they were watching day and night. He never forgot this warning, and he was very careful to keep himself straight, both because he was naturally a good man, and for fear of the air-demons.

Some time before the occurrence about to be related, one of Fergus's children, a sweet little girl about seven years of age, fell ill and died. The little thing gradually wasted away, but suffered no pain; and as she grew weaker she became more loving and gentle than ever, and talked in a wonderful way, quite beyond her years, of the bright land she was going to. One thing she was particularly anxious about, that when she was dying they should let her hold a blessed candle in her hand. They thought it very strange that she should be so continually thinking and talking of this; and over and over again she made her father and mother promise that it should be done. And with the blessed candle in her hand she died so calmly and sweetly that those round her bed could not tell the exact moment.

About a year after this, on a bright Sunday morning in October, Fergus set out for Mass. The place was about three miles away, and it was not a chapel,[6] but a lonely old fort, called to this day Lissanaffrin, the fort of the Mass. A rude stone altar stood at one side near the mound of the fort, under a little shed that sheltered the priest also; and the congregation worshipped in the open air on the green plot in the centre. For in those days there were many places that had no chapels; and the people flocked to these open-air Masses as faithfully as we do now to our stately comfortable chapels. The family had gone on before, the men walking and the women and children riding; and Fergus set out to walk alone.

Just as he approached the Demons' Rock he was greatly surprised to hear the eager yelping of dogs, and in a moment a great deer bounded from the covert beside the rock, with three hounds after her in full chase. No man in the whole country round loved a good chase better than Fergus, or had a swifter foot to follow, and without a moment's hesitation he started in pursuit. But in a few minutes he stopped up short; for he bethought him of the Mass, and he knew there was little time for delay. While he stood wavering, the deer seemed to slacken her pace, and the hounds gained on her, and in a moment Fergus dashed off at full speed, forgetting Mass and everything else in his eagerness for the sport. But it turned out a long and weary chase. Sometimes they slackened, and he was almost at the hounds' tails, but the next moment both deer and hounds started forward and left him far behind. Sometimes they were in full view, and again they were out of sight in thickets and deep glens, so that he could guide himself only by the cry of the hounds. In this way he was decoyed across hills and glens, but instead of gaining ground he found himself rather falling behind.

Mass was all over and the people dispersed to their homes, and all wondered that they did not see Fergus; for no one could remember that he was ever absent before. His wife returned, expecting to find him at home; but when she arrived there was trouble in her heart, for there were no tidings of him, and no one had seen him since he had set out for Mass in the morning.

Meantime Fergus followed up the chase till he was wearied out; and at last, just on the edge of a wild moor, both deer and hounds disappeared behind a shoulder of rock, and he lost them altogether. At the same moment the cry of the hounds became changed to frightful shrieks and laughter, such as he had heard more than once from the Demons' Rock. And now, sitting down on a bank to rest, he had full time to reflect on what he had done, and he was overwhelmed with remorse and shame. Moreover, his heart sank within him, thinking of the last sounds he had heard; for he believed that he had been allured from Mass by the cunning wiles of the demons, and he feared that the dangerous time had come foretold by the monk. He started up and set out for his home, hoping to reach it before night. But before he had got half-way night fell and a storm came on, great wind and rain and bursts of thunder and lightning. Fergus was strong and active, however, and knew every turn of the mountain, and he made his way through the storm till he approached the Demons' Rock.

Suddenly there burst on his ears the very same sounds that he had heard on losing sight of the chase—shouts and shrieks and laughter. A great black ragged cloud, whirling round and round with furious gusts of wind, burst from the rock and came sweeping and tearing towards him. Crossing himself in terror and uttering a short prayer, he rushed for home. But the whirlwind swept nearer, till at last, in a sort of dim, shadowy light, he saw the black cloud full of frightful faces, all glaring straight at him and coming closer and closer. At this moment a bright light dropped down from the sky and rested in front of the cloud; and when he looked up, he saw his little child floating in the air between him and the demons, holding a lighted candle in her hand. And although the storm was raging and roaring all round, she was quite calm—not a breath of air stirred her long yellow hair—and the candle burned quietly. Even in the midst of all his terror he could observe her pale gentle face and blue eyes just as when she was alive, not showing traces of sickness or sadness now, but lighted up with joy. The demons seemed to start back from the light, and with great uproar rushed round to the other side of Fergus, the black cloud still moving with them and wrapping them up in its ragged folds; but the little angel floated softly round, still keeping between them and her father. Fergus ran on for home, and the cloud of demons still kept furiously whirling round and round him, bringing with them a whirlwind that roared among the trees and bushes and tore them from the roots; but still the child, always holding the candle towards them, kept floating calmly round and shielded him.

At length he arrived at his house; the door lay half-open, for the family were inside expecting him home, listening with wonder and affright to the approaching noises; and he bounded in through the doorway and fell flat on his face. That instant the door—though no one was near—was shut violently, and the bolts were shot home. They hurried anxiously round him to lift him up, but found him in a death-like swoon. Meantime the uproar outside became greater than ever; round and round the house it tore, a roaring whirlwind with shouts and yells of rage, and great trampling, as if there was a whole company of horsemen. At length, however, the noises seemed to move away farther and farther off from the house, and gradually died away in the distance. At the same time the storm ceased, and the night became calm and beautiful.

The daylight was shining in through the windows when Fergus recovered from his swoon, and then he told his fearful story; but many days passed over before he had quite recovered from the horrors of that night. When the family came forth in the morning there was fearful waste all round and near the house, trees and bushes torn from the roots, and the ground all trampled and torn up. After this the revelry of the demons was never again heard from the rock; and it was believed that they had left it and betaken themselves to some other haunt.

FOOTNOTES.

[6] A fort is the same as a rath (see p. 70); a few are fenced in with unmortared stone walls instead of clay ditches.



Story DNA

Moral

Even when one succumbs to temptation, divine grace and the innocence of loved ones can offer protection and a path to redemption.

Plot Summary

Fergus O'Mara, a good man, lives under the threat of air-demons who await his first great sin, a warning reinforced by a monk. After his young daughter dies, insisting on holding a blessed candle, Fergus is later lured away from Mass by a deer chase, succumbing to temptation. As he returns home, a violent storm erupts, and he is attacked by the air-demons, but his deceased daughter's spirit appears, holding her blessed candle, shielding him from their fury. He makes it home, where the door mysteriously bolts shut, protecting him, and the demons eventually retreat, never to be heard from the rock again.

Themes

temptationredemptiondivine protectionfaith

Emotional Arc

peace to temptation to terror to relief

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: moral justice
Magic: air-demons, spirit of deceased child, blessed candle with protective power, supernatural door closure/bolting
the blessed candleDemons' Rockthe deer (as a lure)

Cultural Context

Origin: Irish
Era: pre-industrial

Reflects a period in Ireland where Catholic worship was sometimes clandestine or in makeshift locations due to historical suppression, and strong folk beliefs in supernatural entities coexisted with Christian faith.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. Fergus O'Mara is introduced as a good man living near the dreaded Demons' Rock, warned by a monk that air-demons await his sin.
  2. Fergus's young daughter dies peacefully, having insisted on holding a blessed candle.
  3. On a Sunday morning, Fergus sets out for an open-air Mass.
  4. Near the Demons' Rock, Fergus is tempted by a deer hunt and, despite initial hesitation, abandons his journey to Mass to join the chase.
  5. The chase is long and arduous, leading Fergus far astray and making him forget his purpose.
  6. The deer and hounds vanish, and their cries transform into the terrifying shrieks and laughter of air-demons, filling Fergus with deep remorse.
  7. As Fergus attempts to return home, night falls and a violent storm begins.
  8. Near the Demons' Rock, a black, swirling cloud of frightful faces, the air-demons, emerges and sweeps towards him.
  9. His deceased daughter appears as a luminous spirit, holding her blessed candle, positioning herself between Fergus and the demons.
  10. The demons recoil from the light but continue to pursue Fergus, circling him in a whirlwind.
  11. The daughter's spirit calmly floats, always keeping the light of her candle directed at the demons, shielding her father.
  12. Fergus reaches his house and collapses inside as the door violently shuts and bolts itself, protecting him.
  13. The demonic uproar outside eventually subsides, and the storm ceases.
  14. Fergus awakens at daylight, recounts his ordeal, and the family finds the area around the house devastated.
  15. The air-demons are never heard from the rock again, believed to have departed.

Characters

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Fergus O'Mara

human adult male

A strong and active man, likely of sturdy build from a life of farming in the Irish countryside. His features would be weathered from outdoor work.

Attire: Practical, durable clothing suitable for an Irish farmer in the 19th century. This would include homespun wool trousers, a linen shirt, a waistcoat, and sturdy leather boots. Colors would be earthy and muted, like browns, greys, and undyed linen.

Wants: Initially driven by a love for the chase and sport, then by a desperate desire to return home and escape the air-demons, and ultimately by a need for redemption and safety for his family.

Flaw: Susceptible to temptation and easily distracted from his duties by his passions, leading him into danger.

Starts as a good man who falls to temptation, experiences profound fear and remorse, and is ultimately saved by divine intervention (through his deceased daughter), leading to a deeper understanding of faith and the consequences of sin. He recovers from the horror and the demons leave his land.

A strong Irish farmer, running through a storm, with a look of terror and remorse on his face.

Naturally good-hearted, easily tempted by sport, remorseful, courageous in the face of terror (eventually), and deeply religious.

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The Little Daughter

human (spirit/angel) child female

A sweet, pale, and gentle little girl, about seven years of age. She appears ethereal and untouched by sickness in her spiritual form.

Attire: Not explicitly described, but as a spirit, she would likely appear in a simple, pure white or light-colored garment, perhaps a child's nightgown or a simple dress, suggesting innocence and purity.

Wants: To protect her father from the air-demons, fulfilling her earlier desire to hold a blessed candle.

Flaw: None apparent in her spiritual form; her earthly weakness was her illness leading to death.

Dies before the story's main events, but returns as a protective spirit to save her father, demonstrating the power of innocence and faith.

A serene little girl with long yellow hair, floating calmly, holding a single lighted candle.

Loving, gentle, wise beyond her years (in life), calm, protective, and joyful (in death).

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Air-Demons

magical creature ageless non-human

Manifest as a great black ragged cloud, whirling with furious gusts of wind. Within the cloud, frightful faces are seen, glaring straight at their victim.

Attire: Their 'clothing' is the black, ragged, swirling cloud itself, which wraps them in its folds.

Wants: To get Fergus O'Mara into their power, watching for any opportunity when he yields to temptation or falls into sin.

Flaw: Repelled by purity, innocence, and blessed objects, specifically the light of the blessed candle held by the little girl's spirit.

They successfully tempt Fergus into sin, pursue him relentlessly, but are ultimately thwarted and driven away from their haunt by the protective spirit of his daughter.

A swirling, ragged black cloud filled with indistinct, glaring, frightful faces.

Malignant, hateful, cunning, persistent, enraged, destructive.

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The Old Monk

human elderly male

An old man, likely thin and stooped from years of monastic life. His features would be kind but serious.

Attire: A simple, coarse wool habit, likely in a dark, undyed color such as grey or brown, with a rope cincture around the waist. He would wear simple leather sandals or shoes.

Wants: To warn Fergus O'Mara of spiritual dangers and guide him towards a blameless life.

Flaw: None explicitly stated, but as a human, subject to the limitations of age.

A static character who provides crucial exposition and a moral framework for Fergus's actions.

An elderly Irish monk in a simple habit, with a wise, serious expression.

Wise, observant, spiritual, cautious, and protective (in his warning).

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Fergus's Wife

human adult female

Not explicitly described, but would be a woman of the Irish countryside, likely with a practical build from farm life.

Attire: Practical, modest clothing typical of an Irish farmer's wife in the 19th century. This would include a long, dark wool skirt, a linen blouse, a wool shawl, and a simple apron. Colors would be muted and earthy.

Wants: To ensure the safety and well-being of her husband and family.

Flaw: Her vulnerability to worry and fear for her loved ones.

A static character who represents the family's concern and the domestic sphere Fergus returns to.

An Irish farmer's wife, her face etched with worry, listening intently.

Worried, anxious, caring, and observant (listening to the noises outside).

Locations

Fergus O'Mara's Farm

outdoor Winter (sheltered), October (bright Sunday morning), stormy nights, calm and beautiful night after a storm.

Located on the southern slope of the Ballyhoura Mountains in Desmond (County Cork), featuring an open road leading to the house, scattered trees and bushes providing shelter, and a nearby ominous hill.

Mood: Initially mundane and familiar, becoming dark and gloomy at night, later devastated by a whirlwind.

Fergus lives here; his child dies here; he returns here after the chase and is protected from the demons.

Open road without fences Scattered trees and bushes Southern slope of Ballyhoura Mountains Trampled and torn-up ground Uprooted trees and bushes

Demons' Rock (Copsewood Hill)

outdoor stormy nights | morning | night Stormy nights, clear morning, stormy night with wind and rain.

A small hill covered closely with copsewood, topped by a great craggy rock, known as a haunt of air-demons. It's located a little way off the road near Fergus's house.

Mood: Eerie, fearful, ominous, later becoming a focal point of terror and supernatural activity.

The source of fearful sounds; Fergus is lured away from Mass near here; he encounters the air-demons here during a storm.

Small hill Dense copsewood (dense thicket of small trees/shrubs) Great craggy rock Whirling black ragged cloud Frightful faces within the cloud

Lissanaffrin (Fort of the Mass)

outdoor morning Bright Sunday morning in October.

A lonely old fort, also known as a rath, about three miles from Fergus's farm. It features a rude stone altar under a small shed, with the congregation worshipping in the open air on a green plot.

Mood: Simple, devout, communal, peaceful.

The destination for Mass that Fergus fails to reach.

Lonely old fort (rath) Rude stone altar Small shed (sheltering priest) Open-air green plot Mound of the fort