The Old Witch

by Unknown · from More English Fairy Tales

fairy tale moral tale hopeful Ages 8-14 1198 words 6 min read

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 439 words 2 min Canon 95/100

Once upon a time, two sisters lived in a small house. Their names were Lily and Daisy. Their family was poor. Lily wanted work. She left.

Lily saw an Oven. It said, "Take out bread!" She saw a Cow. It said, "Milk me!" She saw an Apple Tree. It said, "Shake my fruit!"

Lily was kind. She helped the Oven. She took out all the bread. She milked the Cow. She shook the Apple Tree. All the fruit fell down. Lily helped them all.

Lily found a house. The Witch lived there. The Witch said, "You can work here. But do not look up the chimney. Never look up there!" Lily said, "Okay."

One day, the Witch was out. Lily looked up the chimney. Bags of money fell down! Lily was surprised. She took the money. She ran away fast. She went to go home.

The Witch ran after Lily. Lily ran. The Apple Tree hid her. The Witch asked, "Girl?" The Apple Tree said, "No!" Lily ran. The Cow hid her. The Witch asked, "Girl?" The Cow said, "No!" Lily ran. The Oven hid her. The Witch asked, "Girl?" The Oven said, "No!"

The Oven said, "Come inside, Witch. She is not here." The Witch went inside her house. The Oven closed the house door. The Witch was trapped inside.

Lily ran home. She had much money. She was very happy.

Daisy saw Lily. Daisy wanted money. Daisy left home.

Daisy saw an Oven. It said, "Take out bread!" Daisy said, "No!" She walked on. Daisy saw a Cow. It said, "Milk me!" Daisy said, "No!" She walked on. Daisy saw an Apple Tree. It said, "Shake my fruit!" Daisy said, "No!" She walked on.

Daisy found the Witch's house. The Witch said, "You can work here. Do not look up the chimney." Daisy said, "Okay." One day, the Witch was out. Daisy looked up the chimney. Bags of money fell down! Daisy took the money. She ran away fast.

The Witch ran after Daisy. Daisy ran. The Apple Tree stood there. The Witch asked, "Girl?" The Apple Tree said, "Yes! She ran this way!" Daisy ran. The Cow stood there. The Witch asked, "Girl?" The Cow said, "Yes! She ran this way!" Daisy ran. The Oven stood there. The Witch asked, "Girl?" The Oven said, "Yes! She ran this way!"

The Witch caught Daisy. The Witch took her money. The Witch scolds her. "You are a bad girl!" The Witch sent her away.

Daisy went home. She had no money. She was very sad.

Lily was kind. She was happy. Daisy was not kind. She was sad.

Original Story 1198 words · 6 min read

The Old Witch

Once upon a time there were two girls who lived with their mother and father. Their father had no work, and the girls wanted to go away and seek their fortunes. Now one girl wanted to go to service, and her mother said she might if she could find a place. So she started for the town. Well, she went all about the town, but no one wanted a girl like her. So she went on farther into the country, and she came to the place where there was an oven where there was lots of bread baking. And the bread said, "Little girl, little girl, take us out, take us out. We have been baking seven years, and no one has come to take us out." So the girl took out the bread, laid it on the ground, and went on her way. Then she met a cow, and the cow said, "Little girl, little girl, milk me, milk me! Seven years have I been waiting, and no one has come to milk me." The girl milked the cow into the pails that stood by. As she was thirsty she drank some, and left the rest in the pails by the cow. Then she went on a little bit farther, and came to an apple tree, so loaded with fruit that its branches were breaking down, and the tree said, "Little girl, little girl, help me shake my fruit. My branches are breaking, it is so heavy." And the girl said, "Of course I will, you poor tree." So she shook the fruit all off, propped up the branches, and left the fruit on the ground under the tree. Then she went on again till she came to a house. Now in this house there lived a witch, and this witch took girls into her house as servants. And when she heard that this girl had left her home to seek service, she said that she would try her, and give her good wages. The witch told the girl what work she was to do. "You must keep the house clean and tidy, sweep the floor and the fireplace; but there is one thing you must never do. You must never look up the chimney, or something bad will befall you."

So the girl promised to do as she was told, but one morning as she was cleaning, and the witch was out, she forgot what the witch said, and looked up the chimney. When she did this a great bag of money fell down in her lap. This happened again and again. So the girl started to go off home.

When she had gone some way she heard the witch coming after her. So she ran to the apple tree and cried:

"Apple-tree, apple-tree hide me,

So the old witch can't find me;

If she does she'll pick my bones,

And bury me under the marble stones."

So the apple-tree hid her. When the witch came up she said:

**"Tree of mine, tree of mine,

Have you seen a girl

With a willy-willy wag, and a long-tailed bag,

Who stole my money, all I had?"**

"Tree of mine, tree of mine,

Have you seen a girl

With a willy-willy wag, and a long-tailed bag,

Who's stole my money, all I had?"

And the apple-tree said, "No, mother; not for seven year."

When the witch had gone down another way, the girl went on again, and just as she got to the cow heard the witch coming after her again, so she ran to the cow and cried:

"Cow, cow, hide me,

So the old witch can't find me;

If she does she'll pick my bones,

And bury me under the marble stones."

So the cow hid her.

When the old witch came up, she looked about and said to the cow:

"Cow of mine, cow of mine,

Have you seen a girl

With a willy-willy wag, and a long-tailed bag,

Who's stole my money, all I had?"

And the cow said, "No, mother, not for seven year."

When the witch had gone off another way, the little girl went on again, and when she was near the oven she heard the witch coming after her again, so she ran to the oven and cried:

"Oven, oven, hide me,

So the old witch can't find me;

If she does she'll break my bones,

And bury me under the marble stones."

And the oven said, "I've no room, ask the baker," and the baker hid her behind the oven.

When the witch came up she looked here and there and everywhere, and then said to the baker:

"Man of mine, man of mine,

Have you seen a girl,

With a willy-willy wag, and a long-tailed bag,

Who's stole my money, all I had?"

So the baker said, "Look in the oven." The old witch went to look, and the oven said, "Get in and look in the furthest corner." The witch did so, and when she was inside the oven shut her door, and the witch was kept there for a very long time.

The girl then went off again, and reached her home with her money bags, married a rich man, and lived happy ever afterwards.

The other sister then thought she would go and do the same. And she went the same way. But when she reached the oven, and the bread said, "Little girl, little girl, take us out. Seven years have we been baking, and no one has come to take us out," the girl said, "No, I don't want to burn my fingers." So she went on till she met the cow, and the cow said, "Little girl, little girl, milk me, milk me, do. Seven years have I been waiting, and no one has come to milk me." But the girl said, "No, I can't milk you, I'm in a hurry," and went on faster. Then she came to the apple-tree, and the apple-tree asked her to help shake the fruit. "No, I can't; another day p'raps I may," and went on till she came to the witch's house. Well, it happened to her just the same as to the other girl—she forgot what she was told, and one day when the witch was out, looked up the chimney, and down fell a bag of money. Well, she thought she would be off at once. When she reached the apple-tree, she heard the witch coming after her, and she cried:

"Apple-tree, apple-tree, hide me,

So the old witch can't find me;

If she does she'll break my bones,

And bury me under the marble stones."

But the tree didn't answer, and she ran on further. Presently the witch came up and said:

"Tree of mine, tree of mine,

Have you seen a girl,

With a willy-willy wag, and a long-tailed bag,

Who's stole my money, all I had?"

The tree said, "Yes, mother; she's gone down that way."

So the old witch went after her and caught her, she took all the money away from her, beat her, and sent her off home just as she was.



Story DNA

Moral

Kindness and helpfulness are rewarded, while selfishness and idleness lead to misfortune.

Plot Summary

Two impoverished sisters seek their fortunes. The first sister, through her kindness, helps a talking oven, cow, and apple tree. She then works for a witch, disobeys a rule, finds money, and escapes with the help of the grateful objects, who trap the pursuing witch. She returns home wealthy and marries. The second sister, attempting to replicate her sister's success, refuses to help the same magical objects. When she tries to escape the witch with stolen money, the unhelped objects betray her, leading to her capture, beating, and return home with nothing.

Themes

kindness and rewarddisobedience and consequencediligence vs. lazinessjustice

Emotional Arc

struggle to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: sparse
Techniques: repetition, rule of three, direct address from objects

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking animals, talking inanimate objects (oven, apple tree), witchcraft, money falling from a chimney
the chimney (source of forbidden knowledge/wealth)the talking objects (represent nature/kindness)

Cultural Context

Origin: English
Era: timeless fairy tale

Reflects a time when poverty was widespread and young people, especially girls, would leave home to find work, often as domestic servants.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. Two sisters live with their unemployed parents; the first sister decides to seek her fortune.
  2. The first sister encounters an oven with baking bread, a cow, and an apple tree, all of whom ask for help.
  3. The first sister kindly helps the oven, milks the cow, and shakes the apple tree's fruit.
  4. She finds work with a witch who forbids her from looking up the chimney.
  5. The girl disobeys the witch, finds bags of money falling from the chimney, and decides to flee with her earnings.
  6. The witch pursues the girl, but the apple tree, cow, and oven (with the baker's help) hide her in turn, denying her presence to the witch.
  7. The oven tricks the witch into entering it, then traps her inside.
  8. The first girl returns home wealthy, marries, and lives happily ever after.
  9. The second sister decides to follow her sister's path to fortune.
  10. The second sister encounters the oven, cow, and apple tree, but refuses to help any of them.
  11. She finds work with the witch, disobeys the rule, and finds money, then attempts to flee.
  12. The witch pursues the second sister, but the apple tree, cow, and oven (and baker) betray her, revealing her location.
  13. The witch catches the second sister, takes her money, beats her, and sends her home.
  14. The second sister returns home with nothing.

Characters

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First Girl

human young adult female

Of average height and slender build, with a healthy, active appearance from her willingness to work. Her movements are nimble and efficient.

Attire: Simple, practical peasant attire typical of 19th-century Northern Europe: a long-sleeved, high-necked linen blouse, a sturdy wool skirt in a muted color like forest green or deep blue, a plain apron, and comfortable, worn leather shoes or wooden clogs. Her clothes are clean but show signs of honest wear.

Wants: To find work and seek her fortune to help her family, and later, to escape the witch and keep her newfound wealth.

Flaw: Curiosity, which leads her to look up the chimney despite the warning.

Starts as a hopeful but naive girl, learns the value of kindness through her interactions, gains wealth through a moment of disobedience, and ultimately escapes danger through the help of those she aided. She marries well and lives happily.

Her simple, practical dress, perhaps with a small, worn satchel, and an expression of earnest kindness.

Kind, diligent, compassionate, obedient (initially), resourceful, and grateful.

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The Old Witch

human (with magical abilities) elderly female

Tall and gaunt, with a stooped posture that belies a surprising agility when pursuing. Her hands are bony and gnarled, and her movements are often abrupt and unsettling.

Attire: Dark, drab, and practical clothing, likely a long, shapeless gown of coarse, dark wool or homespun fabric, perhaps in shades of deep grey, brown, or black. It would be worn and patched, but functional. She might wear a simple, dark headscarf or shawl.

Wants: To guard her hidden wealth and punish anyone who attempts to take it or disobeys her.

Flaw: Her overconfidence and reliance on her magical ability to track, which is ultimately outsmarted by the girl's kindness.

Remains largely unchanged in her malevolence, but is ultimately defeated and trapped by the very elements she believed she controlled.

Her long, stringy grey hair, hooked nose, and dark, shapeless, worn dress.

Cunning, possessive, vengeful, deceptive, and observant.

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Second Girl

human young adult female

Similar in build to her sister, but perhaps with a slightly more pampered or less active appearance, reflecting her selfish nature. Her movements might be more hesitant or impatient.

Attire: Similar peasant attire to her sister, but perhaps slightly newer or less worn, yet still practical. The colors might be a bit brighter or less muted, reflecting a desire for more. She might wear a slightly cleaner apron, but her overall appearance lacks the genuine care of her sister.

Wants: To gain wealth quickly and easily, mimicking her sister's success without putting in the effort or kindness.

Flaw: Her selfishness and lack of compassion, which alienates potential allies and leads to her downfall.

Starts as a hopeful but selfish girl, makes all the wrong choices by refusing to help others, gains money through disobedience, but is ultimately caught, beaten, and sent home empty-handed, learning a harsh lesson about her behavior.

Her slightly impatient expression and the way she dismisses the pleas for help.

Selfish, lazy, impatient, disobedient, and greedy.

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The Oven

object (magical) ageless non-human

A large, traditional brick or stone oven, typical of a rural bakery, with a wide, arched opening. Its surface is warm and slightly sooty from constant use, showing signs of age but well-maintained. It has a sturdy wooden door.

Wants: To be relieved of its burden (baking bread) and to help those who show kindness.

Flaw: Immobility.

Is relieved of its burden by the First Girl, then acts as a protector and ultimately traps the witch, fulfilling its role in justice.

Its wide, arched opening, with a warm glow from within, and a sturdy wooden door.

Patient (having waited seven years), grateful, helpful to those who help it, and cunning when dealing with the witch.

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The Cow

animal (magical) adult female

A large, placid dairy cow, perhaps a breed common in Northern Europe like a Friesian or Jersey, with a healthy, well-fed appearance despite waiting seven years. Her coat is clean, and her udders are full.

Wants: To be milked and relieved of her discomfort, and to help those who show her kindness.

Flaw: Her inability to move quickly or defend herself physically.

Is relieved of her discomfort by the First Girl, then acts as a protector against the witch.

Her full udders and large, gentle eyes, standing patiently in a field.

Patient, gentle, grateful, and protective.

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The Apple Tree

plant (magical) ageless non-human

A mature apple tree, heavily laden with ripe, red apples, so much so that its branches are bowed down and appear strained. Its bark is gnarled and ancient, but its leaves are vibrant green.

Wants: To be relieved of its heavy fruit and to help those who show it kindness.

Flaw: Its immobility and vulnerability to being cut down.

Is relieved of its burden by the First Girl, then acts as a protector against the witch.

Its branches heavily bowed down, almost touching the ground, under the weight of countless ripe red apples.

Overburdened, grateful, and protective.

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The Baker

human adult male

A sturdy, broad-shouldered man with flour-dusted clothes, indicating his profession. His hands are strong and calloused from kneading dough.

Attire: A simple, flour-dusted white linen shirt, a sturdy brown leather apron, and practical trousers. His clothes are clean but show the marks of his trade.

Wants: To help the girl and outsmart the witch.

Flaw: N/A (too minor to show a weakness)

Plays a pivotal role in trapping the witch, demonstrating his cleverness.

His flour-dusted clothes and sturdy leather apron.

Helpful, observant, and quick-witted.

Locations

The Witch's House

indoor Implied temperate climate, no specific season mentioned.

A house in the country, likely a simple, rustic dwelling, with a prominent fireplace and chimney. It serves as the witch's residence and where the girls are employed as servants.

Mood: Initially appears ordinary, but holds a sinister, magical secret related to the chimney and the witch's power.

Both girls work here, discover the money in the chimney, and attempt to escape from the witch.

fireplace chimney swept floor simple furniture

The Enchanted Apple Tree

outdoor day Autumn, implied by the heavy fruit load. Sunny or mild weather.

An apple tree so heavily laden with fruit that its branches are breaking. It is sentient and can speak, offering aid or betrayal based on past kindness.

Mood: Initially benevolent and in need of help, later becomes a place of refuge or exposure.

The first girl helps the tree and is later hidden by it; the second girl refuses to help and is betrayed by it.

apple tree heavy branches ripe red apples fallen fruit on the ground

The Talking Cow's Pasture

outdoor day Implied temperate climate, green pasture suggests spring or summer.

A pasture where a cow has been waiting seven years to be milked. Pails are standing nearby, suggesting it's a familiar spot for milking.

Mood: Peaceful and pastoral, but with an underlying sense of long-suffering and a capacity for loyalty.

The first girl milks the cow and is later hidden by it; the second girl refuses to help and is not hidden.

dairy cow milking pails green grass open field

The Talking Oven's Location

outdoor | transitional day Implied temperate climate, no specific season mentioned.

An outdoor oven, likely a large, traditional bread oven, where bread has been baking for seven years. A baker is associated with it.

Mood: Warm and inviting due to the baking bread, but also a place of desperate waiting and eventual entrapment.

The first girl takes out the bread and is later hidden by the baker near the oven; the second girl refuses to help and is not hidden, leading to the witch's capture.

large brick oven baking bread baker ground nearby for cooling bread