The Twins with the Golden Star

by Unknown · from Roumanian Fairy Tales

fairy tale transformation hopeful Ages 8-14 2959 words 13 min read

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CEFR A1 Age 5 182 words 1 min Canon 35/100

Once upon a time, Lily lived. She was a kind sheep girl. She lived far away. She had a good heart. She loved her simple life.

One day, Lily picked red berries. The berries were bright red. The King's son rode his horse. He rode a big, strong horse. He saw Lily. He thought she was pretty. Her smile was kind. He liked her gentle face.

Lily spoke to the King's son. "I will give you two boys," she said. "They will have golden hair. A golden star will be on them. This was her promise." She spoke with a clear voice. He listened closely.

The King's son chose Lily. He loved her very much. They had a big wedding. Many people came. All were happy. Lily became Queen. She was a good Queen. She ruled with a kind heart.

The King had a Mean Queen. She was not Lily's mother. The Mean Queen did not like Lily. She felt much anger. She wanted her daughter to be Queen. She wanted Lily to go away. She made bad plans. She was very

Original Story 2959 words · 13 min read

The Twins With the Golden Star.

nce upon a time something happened. If it hadn't happened, it wouldn't be told.

There was an emperor, who ruled over a whole world, and in this world lived an old shepherd and shepherdess, who had three daughters, Anna, Stana, and Laptitza.[1]

[1] Little Milk-white, from "Lapte"—milk.

Anna, the oldest sister, was so beautiful that the sheep stopped feeding when she went among them; Stana, the second, was so lovely that the wolves watched the herd when she was the shepherdess, but Laptitza, the youngest, who had a skin as white as the foam of milk, and hair as soft as the wool of the lambkins, was as beautiful as both of her sisters put together, beautiful as only she herself could be.

One summer day, when the sunbeams were growing less scorching, the three sisters went to the edge of the forest to pick strawberries. While searching for them, they heard the tramp of horses' hoofs, as if a whole troop of cavalry were dashing up. It was the emperor's son, hunting with his friends and courtiers, all handsome, stately youths, sitting their horses as if they were a part of their steeds, but the handsomest and proudest of all rode the most fiery charger, and was the emperor's son himself.

When they saw the sisters, they curbed their horses and rode more slowly.

"Listen to me, sisters," said Anna; "if one of those youths should choose me for his wife, I'd knead a loaf of bread which, when he had eaten it, would make him always feel young and brave."

"And I," said Stana, "would weave my husband a shirt, in which he could fight against dragons, go through water without being wet, or fire without being burned."

"But I," said Laptitza, the youngest sister, "would give my husband two beautiful sons, twin boys with golden hair, and on their foreheads a golden star, a star as bright as Lucifer."

The youths heard these words, and turning their horses dashed toward the maidens.

"Sacred be thy promise, thou shalt be mine, fairest empress," cried the emperor's son, lifting Laptitza with her berries upon his horse.

"And thou shalt be mine!" "And thou shalt be mine!" said a second and third youth; so bearing their lovely burdens on their steeds, all dashed back to the imperial court.

The three weddings were celebrated the very next day, and for three days and nights the festival was held throughout the empire with great pomp and splendor. After three days and nights the news went through the whole country that Anna had gathered grain, ground, boiled, and kneaded it, and made a loaf of bread, as she had promised while picking strawberries. Then, after three more days and nights, tidings went through the land that Stana had collected flax, dried, and hackled it, spun it into linen, wove the cloth, and made her husband a shirt as she had promised while seeking for her strawberries. Laptitza alone had not yet kept her word, but great things require time.

When seven weeks had passed, counting from the wedding day, the emperor's son, now emperor, appeared before his brave companions and the other courtiers with a very joyous face, and in a much softer voice than ever before informed them that henceforth he should not leave the court for a long time, his heart moved him to stay with his wife night and day.

So the world, the country, and the whole empire rejoiced in the expectation of seeing something never beheld before.

But many things happen in this world, among them much that is good and much that is evil.

The emperor had a step-mother, who had brought with her to the palace a daughter of her first husband, a girl with beautiful hair. But woe betide those who have such relationships.

The step-mother had intended that her daughter should become the emperor's wife and empress of the whole country, instead of little Milk-white, the shepherd's daughter. Therefore she determined that if things fell out as Laptitza had promised, the emperor and the world should believe they did not happen according to the prediction.

But the step-mother could not carry out her plan, because the emperor remained with his wife day and night. Yet she thought that gradually, by coaxing and cunning, she might get rid of him, and then Laptitza would be left in her care and she would provide for every thing.

But she could not get rid of the emperor by means of a few coaxing words. The wind blew them away, and all her craft was useless. Time passed, the day for the fulfillment of Laptitza's promise was drawing near, and still the emperor never left his wife.

When the step-mother saw that no plot succeeded, she felt as if a stone were lying heavy on her heart, and sent a message to her brother, whose kingdom was very near, to ask him to come with his soldiers and summon the emperor to a war.

This was a clever plan and, as will be seen, not an unsuccessful one. The emperor fairly leaped into the air in his rage, when he heard that hostile soldiers were on the march to attack his country, and that something would occur which had not happened for a long time—a battle, a terrible battle, a battle between two emperors. The young husband saw that there was no help for it, he must do what needed to be done.

That is the way with emperors. No matter how much they wish to guard their wives—if they hear of war, their hearts fairly leap in their bodies, their brains swell almost to bursting, their eyes grow dim, and leaving wife and children in God's care, they dash like the wind to battle.

The emperor departed at the first sign of peril, moved as swiftly as one of God's judgments, fought as only he could fight, and at dawn on the morning of the third day was back again at the imperial court, his heart soothed by the battle, but full of unsatisfied longing to know what had happened during his absence.

And—this had happened. Just at dawn on the morning of the third day, when the stars were paling in the sky, and the emperor was only three steps from the palace-gate, the Lord's gift came down to the earth, and Laptitza's promise was fulfilled—two beautiful twin princes, exactly alike, each with golden hair and a golden star on his forehead.

But the world was not to see them!

The step-mother, as wicked as her thoughts, hastily put two puppies in the place of the beautiful twins, and buried the golden-haired children at the corner of the palace, just under the emperor's windows.

When the monarch entered the palace he saw and heard nothing except the two puppies the step-mother had put in the twins' place. No words were wasted. The emperor saw with his own eyes, and that was enough. Laptitza had not kept her promise, and there was nothing to be done except mete out her punishment.

He could not help it, and though his own heart was torn, commanded that the empress should be buried to her breast in the earth and so remain before the eyes of the world, in token of what befell those who tried to deceive an emperor.

The next day the step-mother's wish was fulfilled. The emperor married a second time, and again the wedding festivities lasted three days and three nights.

But God's blessing does not rest upon unjust deeds.

The two princes found no rest in the earth. Two beautiful aspens sprang up where they were buried, but when the step-mother saw them she ordered them to be pulled up by the roots. The emperor, however, said: "Let them grow, I like to see them before the window. I never beheld such aspens before."

So the trees grew, grew as no other aspens ever had grown, every day a year's growth, every night another year's growth, but in the dawn of morning, when the stars were paling in the sky, three years' growth in a single moment. When three days and three nights had passed, the two aspens were lofty trees, lifting their boughs to the emperor's window, and when the wind stirred the branches, he listened to their rustling all day long.

The step-mother suspected what they were, and pondered all day trying to find some way to get rid of the trees at any cost. It was a difficult task, but a woman's will can squeeze milk from a stone, a woman's cunning conquers heroes—what force can not accomplish, fair words win, and when these fail, hypocritical tears succeed.

One morning the empress sat down on the side of her husband's bed and began to overwhelm him with loving words and tender caresses. It was a long time before the thread broke, but at last—even emperors are mortal!

"Very well," he said, reluctantly, "have your own way; order the aspens to be cut down, but one must be made into a bedstead for me, the other for you."

This satisfied the empress. The aspens were cut down, and before night the beds were standing in the emperor's room.

When he lay down, he felt as if he had become a hundred times heavier, yet he had never rested so well; but it seemed to the empress as if she were lying on thorns and nettles, so that she could not sleep all night long.

When the emperor had fallen asleep, the beds began to creak, and amid this creaking the empress fancied she heard words that no one else understood.

"Is it hard for you, brother?" asked one of the beds.

"No, it isn't hard for me," replied the bed in which the emperor was sleeping, "I am happy, for my beloved father rests upon me."

"It's hard for me," replied the other, "for on me lies a wicked soul."

So the beds talked on in the empress's ears until the dawn of morning.

When daylight came, the empress planned how she could destroy the beds. At last she ordered two bedsteads exactly like them, and when the emperor went hunting, placed them in his room without his knowledge; but the aspen beds, down to the very smallest splinter, she threw into the fire.

When they were burned so entirely that not even a bit of charcoal remained, the empress collected the ashes and scattered them to the winds, that they might be strewn over nine countries and seas, and not an atom find another atom through all eternity.

But she had not noticed that just when the fire was burning brightest two sparks rose, and soaring upward, fell again into the midst of the deep river that flowed through the empire, where they were changed into two little fishes with golden scales, so exactly alike that nobody could help knowing they were twin brothers.

One day the imperial fishermen went out early in the morning, and threw their nets into the water. Just at the moment the last stars were fading, one of the men drew up his net and beheld what he had never seen before: two tiny fishes with golden scales.

The other fishermen assembled to see the miracle, but when they had beheld and admired it, determined to carry the fish alive to the emperor for a gift.

"Don't take us there, we've just come from there, and it will be our destruction," said one of the fishes.

"But what shall I do with you?" asked the fisherman.

"Go and gather the dew from the leaves, let us swim in it, put us in the sun, and don't come back again till the sunbeams have dried the dew," said the second little fish.

The fisherman did as he was told, gathered the dew from the leaves, put the little fish into it, placed them in the sun, and did not come back till the dew was all dried up.

But what had happened! What did he see?

Two boys, handsome princes with golden hair and a golden star on their foreheads, so exactly alike that no one who saw them could help knowing that they were twin brothers.

The children grew very rapidly. Every day enough for a year, and every night enough for another year, but in the dawn of morning when the stars paled in the sky, enough for three years in a single moment. Besides, they grew as no other children ever had grown, three times as fast in age, strength, and wisdom. When three days and nights had passed, they were twelve years in age, twenty-four in strength, and thirty-six in wisdom.

"Now let us go to our father," said one of the princes to the fisherman.

The fisherman dressed the lads in beautiful clothing, and made each a lambskin cap, which the boys drew low over their faces, that no one might see their golden hair and the golden star on their foreheads, and then took the princes to the imperial palace.

It was broad daylight when they arrived.

"We want to speak to the emperor," said one of the princes to the guard, who stood armed at the door of the palace.

"That can't be done, he's at table," replied the soldier.

"Just because he is at table," said the second prince, passing through the door.

The guards ran up and tried to drive the boys out of the court-yard, but the boys slipped through their fingers like quicksilver. Three paces forward, three up, and they were standing before the great hall, where the emperor was dining with all his court.

"We want to come in," said one of the princes sharply, to the servants who stood at the door.

"That can't be done," one of the lackeys answered.

"Indeed! We'll see whether it can be done or not," cried the other prince, pushing the men aside right and left.

But there were a great many lackeys, and only two princes. A tumult and uproar arose outside, that resounded through the palace.

"What is going on out there?" asked the emperor angrily.

The princes stopped when they heard their father's voice.

"Two boys are trying to enter by force," said an attendant, approaching the emperor.

"By force? Who seeks to enter my palace by force? Who are these boys?" cried the emperor in the same breath.

"We know not, your majesty," replied the lackey, "but there must be something uncommon about them, for the lads are as strong as young lions, they overpowered the guard at the gate, and have given us plenty to do. Besides, they are proud, they don't lift their caps from their heads."

The emperor flushed scarlet with rage.

"Throw them out!" he cried. "Set the dogs on them."

"Never mind, we will go," said the princes, weeping at the harsh words, as they went down the steps again.

As they reached the gate, they were stopped by a servant, who was out of breath from running to overtake them.

"The emperor has commanded you to come back, the empress wants to see you."

The princes hesitated, then turned, climbed the stairs, and still with their caps on their heads appeared before the emperor.

There stood a long, wide table, at which sat all the imperial guests; at the head was the emperor, and beside him the empress, reclining on twelve silk cushions.

As the princes entered, one of these twelve cushions fell to the floor, only eleven remaining under the royal lady.

"Take off your caps!" cried a courtier.

"To wear the head covered is a token of rank among men. We wish to be what we are."

"Why, yes!" exclaimed the emperor, softened by the musical words that fell from the boys' lips. "Remain what you are, but who are you? Whence do you come, and what do you want?"

"We are twin brothers, members of a family that is broken in twain, half in the earth, half at the head of the table; we come from whence we went, and have reached the place whence we came; we have had a long journey, have spoken in the sighing of the wind, given a voice to wood, sang in the ripples of the water, but now we wish to chant in human language a song you know without knowing it."

A second cushion fell from under the empress.

"Let them go home with their nonsense!" she said to her husband.

"Oh! no, let them sing," replied the emperor. "You only wanted to see them, but I wish to hear them. Sing, boys!"

The empress was silent, and the princes began to sing the story of their lives.

"There was once an emperor," they began, and a third cushion fell from under the empress.

When they described the emperor's departure to the war, three cushions fell at once, and when the princes had finished their song not a single one remained. But when they took off their caps and showed their golden hair and the golden star on their foreheads, guests, courtiers and emperor closed their eyes, that they might not be dazzled by so much radiance.


Afterward, what ought to have been from the beginning, happened.

Laptitza sat at the head of the table beside her husband, but the step-mother's daughter served as the humblest maid in the palace, and the wicked step-mother was fastened to the tail of a wild mare and dragged around the earth seven times, that the whole world might know and never forget, that whoever plans evil comes to a bad end.



Story DNA

Moral

Whoever plans evil comes to a bad end, and truth will always be revealed.

Plot Summary

Laptitza, a shepherdess, marries an emperor's son after promising him twin sons with golden hair and a golden star. The emperor's wicked stepmother, desiring her own daughter on the throne, replaces the newborn twins with puppies and has Laptitza unjustly punished. The twins, however, miraculously survive through a series of transformations—from buried babies to aspens, then to talking beds, then to golden-scaled fish, and finally back into rapidly growing boys. As young men, they return to the palace, and through a powerful song, reveal their true identities and the stepmother's treachery to the emperor and the entire court. Justice is served as Laptitza is restored, and the wicked stepmother receives a grim punishment.

Themes

justiceperseverancedeceptiontruth

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: repetition, rule of three, hyperbolic growth

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: golden hair and golden star on forehead, prophetic promises, rapid growth (children, trees), transformation (babies to trees, trees to beds, beds to sparks, sparks to fish, fish to boys), talking animals (fish), talking objects (beds)
the golden starthe aspensthe golden-scaled fish

Cultural Context

Origin: Romanian
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story reflects common European fairy tale motifs of royal deception, a wicked stepmother, and the eventual triumph of truth and justice. The specific names and the 'Little Milk-white' footnote suggest a Romanian origin.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. Three shepherdess sisters, Anna, Stana, and Laptitza, encounter the emperor's son and his retinue while picking strawberries.
  2. Each sister makes a promise about what she would provide her husband; Laptitza promises twin sons with golden hair and a golden star.
  3. The emperor's son chooses Laptitza, and his companions choose her sisters; all three weddings are celebrated.
  4. Anna and Stana fulfill their promises quickly, but Laptitza's promise requires time.
  5. The emperor's wicked stepmother, who wanted her own daughter to marry the emperor, plots against Laptitza.
  6. The stepmother orchestrates a war to send the emperor away, and while he is gone, Laptitza gives birth to the golden-starred twins.
  7. The stepmother replaces the twins with puppies, buries the real babies, and Laptitza is unjustly condemned and buried to her breast in the earth.
  8. The buried twins transform into two aspens, which the stepmother tries to have cut down, but the emperor saves them.
  9. The aspens are eventually cut down and made into beds; the emperor sleeps well, but the stepmother is tormented by the beds' creaking and talking.
  10. The stepmother burns the beds, but two sparks escape into a river, transforming into two golden-scaled fish.
  11. Fishermen catch the fish, who ask to be placed in dew and sun, transforming them back into rapidly growing boys.
  12. The boys, now grown, go to the palace, demand to see the emperor, and cause a scene, refusing to remove their caps.
  13. The emperor allows them to sing, and they recount their life story, revealing the stepmother's crimes and their true identities.
  14. The princes remove their caps, dazzling everyone with their golden hair and stars, confirming their story.
  15. Laptitza is restored, the stepmother's daughter is demoted, and the wicked stepmother is executed for her treachery.

Characters

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Laptitza

human young adult female

Of average height and slender build, with skin as white as the foam of milk, suggesting a very fair complexion. Her overall appearance is exceptionally beautiful, surpassing even her sisters.

Attire: Initially, she wears simple, practical clothing suitable for a shepherdess picking strawberries, likely a linen or wool tunic and skirt in muted, natural colors, perhaps with a simple head covering. After marrying the emperor, she would wear exquisite imperial robes made of fine silks and brocades, possibly in light, elegant colors, adorned with subtle embroidery and minimal, tasteful jewelry befitting a young empress.

Wants: To fulfill her promise of bearing beautiful sons and to live a happy life with her husband.

Flaw: Her innocence and trusting nature make her vulnerable to the machinations of the wicked step-mother.

Starts as a humble shepherdess, becomes an empress, suffers a period of unjust imprisonment and separation from her children due to her step-mother's malice, but is ultimately vindicated and restored to her rightful place.

Her skin as white as milk foam and hair as soft as lamb's wool.

Innocent, pure-hearted, truthful, loving, patient.

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The Emperor (Laptitza's Husband)

human young adult male

A handsome and stately youth, with a commanding presence. He is strong and capable, befitting a ruler and a warrior.

Attire: Initially, he wears rich hunting attire, perhaps a tunic of fine wool or leather, embroidered, with sturdy breeches and tall boots. As emperor, he wears opulent court robes made of deep-colored silks (e.g., crimson, royal blue) with gold embroidery, possibly a jeweled belt, and a crown or circlet. His battle attire would be armor, possibly gilded, over a padded tunic.

Wants: To rule his empire, to protect his country, and to be with his beloved wife. Later, to understand the mystery of the boys and seek justice.

Flaw: Susceptible to deception and manipulation by his step-mother, and prone to quick, unthinking anger.

Starts as a proud prince, becomes a loving husband and emperor, is tricked into believing his wife bore monstrous children, but eventually discovers the truth and restores his family, learning to be more discerning.

His proud, commanding presence on a fiery charger.

Proud, brave, loving (towards Laptitza), quick to anger (when provoked), just (eventually).

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The Wicked Step-Mother

human adult | elderly female

Likely gaunt or sharp-featured, conveying her malicious nature. Her appearance might be severe or outwardly regal, masking her inner wickedness.

Attire: Elegant but severe court dresses, perhaps in dark or rich, imposing colors like deep purple or black, made of heavy fabrics like velvet or brocade, with minimal but expensive jewelry that emphasizes her status rather than beauty.

Wants: To see her own daughter become empress and to secure power and influence for herself.

Flaw: Her overwhelming envy and wickedness ultimately lead to her downfall.

Introduced as a manipulative schemer, she successfully orchestrates Laptitza's downfall and the abduction of the twins, but her wickedness is eventually exposed, leading to a brutal punishment.

A severe, calculating expression that betrays her inner malice.

Malicious, cunning, envious, ruthless, power-hungry.

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The Step-Mother's Daughter

human young adult female

Described as having beautiful hair, but her overall beauty is not compared to Laptitza's. She is likely of average build and height.

Attire: Initially, she would wear fine court dresses, perhaps in fashionable but less opulent styles than an empress, reflecting her status as a noblewoman. After Laptitza's supposed downfall, she would wear more elaborate gowns, trying to emulate an empress. In the end, she is reduced to the humblest maid's attire, likely a coarse linen smock and apron.

Wants: To become empress and enjoy the associated power and luxury.

Flaw: Her vanity and reliance on her mother's schemes, lacking any true merit of her own.

Rises to a position of false prominence due to her mother's machinations, but ultimately falls from grace and is reduced to a servant when the truth is revealed.

Her beautiful, flowing hair.

Envious, vain, complicit (by association with her mother's schemes), lacking independent will.

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The Twin Princes with Golden Stars

human child (rapidly aging to young adult) male

Identical twin boys, exceptionally handsome and strong. They grow at an accelerated rate, appearing twelve years old in age, twenty-four in strength, and thirty-six in wisdom after just three days and nights.

Attire: Initially, they are 'tiny fishes with golden scales'. After their transformation, the fisherman dresses them in 'beautiful clothing', and they wear lambskin caps to conceal their golden hair and stars. When they confront the emperor, they wear these caps. Later, they would wear princely attire, likely rich tunics and trousers, befitting their royal status.

Wants: To find their father, reveal the truth of their birth, and restore their mother to her rightful place.

Flaw: Their youth makes them vulnerable to initial dismissal, and they are sensitive to unkindness.

Born under duress, survive an attempt on their lives, grow miraculously, and return to the imperial court to reveal the truth of their birth and their mother's innocence, leading to her restoration and the punishment of the wicked.

Their golden hair and the golden star shining brightly on their foreheads.

Brave, wise beyond their years, determined, truthful, sensitive (they weep at harsh words), persistent.

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The Fisherman

human adult male

A sturdy, weathered man, accustomed to hard work by the sea. His hands would be calloused, and his face tanned.

Attire: Simple, practical clothing suitable for a fisherman: a coarse linen or wool tunic, sturdy trousers, and possibly a wide-brimmed hat to protect from the sun. His clothes would be worn but clean.

Wants: To make a living, to understand the miraculous fish, and later, to help the boys.

Flaw: None explicitly shown, he acts as a benevolent helper.

Starts as an ordinary fisherman, becomes an unwitting participant in a miracle, and then a caretaker and guide for the young princes, playing a crucial role in their return to the palace.

His fishing net, holding the miraculous golden-scaled fish.

Honest, observant, kind, obedient (to the fish's instructions), humble.

Locations

Forest Edge

outdoor afternoon Summer day, less scorching sunbeams

The boundary of a forest, likely a clearing or path, where the sunbeams are less scorching. Wild strawberries grow here.

Mood: Serene, natural, fateful

The three sisters are picking strawberries and encounter the emperor's son and his retinue, leading to Laptitza's promise and betrothal.

Wild strawberry patches Forest trees Dirt path/clearing Sunbeams

Imperial Palace

indoor Implied pleasant indoor conditions

A grand and opulent palace, likely of a style befitting an emperor ruling 'a whole world'. It features a great hall for dining, guarded entrances, and likely rich furnishings.

Mood: Grand, formal, initially tense, ultimately triumphant

The weddings are celebrated here. Later, the twin princes arrive, confront the guards and servants, and eventually sing their story to the emperor and court, revealing their true identity and Laptitza's innocence. The step-mother's treachery is exposed.

Guarded palace gates Courtyard Great dining hall Long, wide dining table Silk cushions for the empress Servants and courtiers

Riverbank / Fisherman's Spot

outdoor dawn to morning Implied mild weather, with morning dew

A specific spot by a river where fishermen cast their nets. It has dew-covered leaves and is exposed to the sun.

Mood: Mysterious, miraculous, humble

The fisherman discovers the two golden-scaled fish, who transform into the twin princes after being placed in dew and sunlight.

River Fishing nets Dew-covered leaves Sunlight