SATAN’S JUGGLINGS and GOD’S MIGHT

by Unknown · from Serbian Fairy Tales

fairy tale adventure hopeful Ages 8-14 1063 words 5 min read
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Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 314 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once, a kind Prince lived. He saw white snow. He saw a red rose. Prince Leo wished for a special girl. She was white like snow. She had rosy cheeks.

Prince Leo met a Wise Old Woman. She knew a girl. The girl lived on a mountain. Her house had no door. The Woman said, "Be careful. A Bad Witch lives there. She is mean." She gave Prince Leo bread, nut, walnut. These gifts help.

Prince Leo came to the house. Big, growling animals were there. They looked very scary. Prince Leo threw the bread. The animals ate the bread. They became quiet. They lay down. They were not scary now.

A girl was in the window. She had long, golden hair. Prince Leo climbed up her hair. He went inside the house. The girl was Lily. Lily said, "My mother is a Bad Witch. She turns people into animals. She uses bad magic."

Prince Leo and Lily ran away. They ran fast. The Bad Witch saw them. She ran after them. She was angry.

The Bad Witch came close. Prince Leo threw the nut. A big river appeared. The river was wide. The Bad Witch came to the river. She used her staff. The water went away. Prince Leo threw the walnut. A big fire started. The fire was very hot. Flames rose high. The Bad Witch came to the fire. She used her magic. She made the fire go out. Prince Leo saw this. The witch's magic was very bad. He felt scared. He closed his eyes. He prayed to God. Prince Leo asked God for help. God heard Prince Leo. God helped them. The Bad Witch disappeared. She was gone forever. She could not hurt them anymore. Prince Leo and Lily went home. They were safe. Lily learned about God's love. Prince Leo and Lily got married. They were very happy.

Original Story 1063 words · 5 min read

SATAN’S JUGGLINGS AND GOD’S MIGHT

One morning the son of the king went out to hunt. Whilst walking through the snow he cut himself a little, and the drops of blood fell on the snow. When he saw how pretty the red blood looked on the white snow he thought, “Oh, if I could only marry a girl as white as snow and as rosy red as this blood!” Whilst he was thus thinking he met an old woman, and asked her if there were such maidens anywhere to be found. The old woman told him that on the mountain he saw before him he would find a house without doors, and the only entrance and outlet of this house was a single window. And, she added, “In that house, my son, there is living a girl such as you desire; but of the young men who have gone to ask her to be their wife none have returned.”

“That may all be as you say,” answered the prince, “I will go, nevertheless! Only tell me the way that I must take to get to the house.” When the old woman heard this resolve she was sorry for the young man, and, taking a piece of bread from her pouch, she gave it to him, saying, “Take this bread and keep it safe as the apple of your eye.” The prince took the bread, and continued his journey. Very soon afterwards he met another old woman, and she asked him where he was going. He told her he was going to demand the girl who lived in the doorless house on the mountain. Then the old woman tried to dissuade him, telling him just the same things as the former one had done. He said, however, “That may be quite true, nevertheless I will go, even if I never return.” Then the old woman gave to the prince a little nut, saying, “Keep this nut always by you; it may help you some time or other.”

The prince took the nut and went on his way till he came to where an old woman was sitting by the roadside. She asked him, “Where are you going?” Then he told her he was going to demand the girl who lived in the house on the mountain before him. Upon this the old woman wept, and prayed him to give up all thoughts of the girl, and she gave him the very same warnings as the other old women had done. All this, however, was of no use, the prince was resolved to go on, so the old woman gave him a walnut, saying, “Take this walnut, and keep it carefully until you want it.”

He wondered at these presents, and asked her to tell him why the first old woman had given him a piece of bread, the second a nut, and she herself now a walnut. The old woman answered, “The bread is to throw to the beasts before the house, that they may not eat you; and, when you find yourself in the greatest danger, ask counsel, first from the nut, and then from the walnut.”

Then the king’s son continued his wandering, till he came at last to a thick forest, in the midst of which he saw a house with only a single window. When he came near it he was attacked by a multitude of beasts of all kinds, and, following the advice of the old woman, he threw the bit of bread towards them. Then the beasts came and smelt at the bread one after the other, and, upon doing so, each drew his tail between his legs and lay down quietly.

“The old witch spat on the fire”

The house had no door, and but one window, which was very high above the ground, so high that do what he could he was not able to reach it. Suddenly he saw a woman letting down her golden hair, so he rushed and caught hold of it, and she drew him up thereby into the house. Then he saw that the woman was she for whose sake he had come to this place. The prince and the girl were equally pleased to see each other, and she said, “Thank God that my mother happened to be from home. She is gone into the forest to gather the plants by the aid of which she transforms into beasts all the young men who venture here to ask me to be their wife. Those are the beasts who would have killed you, if God had not helped you. But let us fly away from this place.” So they fled away through the forest as quickly as they could. As they happened to look back, however, they saw that the girl’s mother was pursuing them, and they became frightened. The old woman was already very near them before the prince remembered his nut. He took it out quickly and asked, “For God’s sake! tell me what we must do now!” The nut replied, “Open me.” The prince opened it, and from the little nut flowed out a large river, which stopped the way, so that for a time the girl’s mother could not pass. However, she touched the waters with her staff, and they immediately divided and left her a dry path, so that she could run on quickly after the prince and the girl.

When the prince saw she would soon come up with them he took out the walnut and asked, “Tell me, what must we do now?” And the walnut replied, “Break me.” The king’s son broke the walnut, and a great fire flamed out from it—so great a fire that the whole forest barely escaped being consumed by it. But the girl’s mother spat on the fire, and it extinguished itself in a moment. Then the king’s son saw that these were nothing but the jugglings of the devil, so he turned eastward, made the sign of the cross, and called on the mighty God to help him. Then it suddenly thundered and lightened, and from heaven flashed a thunderbolt which struck the mother of the girl, and she fell dead upon the ground.

Thus at length the king’s son arrived safely at home, and when the girl had been made a Christian, he married her.


Story DNA

Moral

With faith in God, even the most formidable evil can be overcome.

Plot Summary

A prince, seeking a maiden as beautiful as snow and blood, is warned about a girl living in a dangerous, doorless house. Despite warnings, he embarks on the quest, receiving three magical gifts from old women. He uses enchanted bread to pacify the witch's transformed suitors, enters the house, and flees with the maiden, who reveals her mother is a powerful witch. The witch relentlessly pursues them, overcoming the prince's magical defenses from the nut and walnut. Realizing the witch's power is devilish, the prince calls upon God, who strikes the witch dead with a thunderbolt, allowing the prince and maiden to return home and marry.

Themes

perseverancefaithlovegood vs evil

Emotional Arc

desire to peril to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: sparse
Techniques: rule of three

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking animals (transformed suitors), enchanted bread, magical nut and walnut creating a river and fire, witchcraft and transformation, divine intervention (thunderbolt)
blood on snow (ideal beauty)the doorless house (imprisonment, danger)the bread, nut, and walnut (divine aid/wisdom)the sign of the cross (faith, protection)

Cultural Context

Origin: Unknown (likely European folk tale)
Era: timeless fairy tale

This story reflects a common theme in European folklore where Christian faith is presented as the ultimate power against pagan or demonic magic.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. A prince, seeing blood on snow, wishes for a bride as white as snow and red as blood.
  2. He meets an old woman who tells him of such a girl in a doorless house on a mountain, warning him of danger.
  3. Despite warnings, the prince resolves to go and receives a piece of bread from the first old woman.
  4. He meets a second old woman, who also warns him and gives him a nut.
  5. He meets a third old woman, who warns him and gives him a walnut, explaining the purpose of each gift.
  6. The prince reaches the house and throws the bread to the attacking beasts, pacifying them.
  7. He is drawn into the house by the girl's golden hair and learns her mother is a witch who turns suitors into beasts.
  8. The prince and the girl flee, but the witch mother pursues them.
  9. The prince uses the nut to create a river, temporarily stopping the witch, but she parts the waters with her staff.
  10. The prince uses the walnut to create a great fire, but the witch extinguishes it with her spit.
  11. Realizing the witch's power is devilish, the prince makes the sign of the cross and calls on God.
  12. God sends a thunderbolt, striking the witch dead.
  13. The prince and the girl return home, she becomes a Christian, and they marry.

Characters

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The Prince

human young adult male

A young man of royal lineage, likely of average height and build, capable of hunting and enduring a journey through snow and forest. His physical appearance is not explicitly detailed beyond his youth and status.

Attire: Practical hunting attire suitable for snowy conditions, likely made of wool or sturdy linen, possibly with fur trim for warmth, and sturdy boots. His clothing would be of good quality, reflecting his royal status, but not overly ornate for a hunt.

Wants: To marry a maiden as 'white as snow and as rosy red as blood', driven by a romantic ideal.

Flaw: Naivety and overconfidence in the face of supernatural danger; he initially relies on his own will before seeking divine help.

Transforms from a somewhat naive and self-reliant young man into one who recognizes the limits of human power and embraces divine intervention to overcome evil.

A young man in practical hunting clothes, holding a small nut and walnut, looking determined.

Determined, courageous, romantic, somewhat naive (initially), resourceful (when guided), devout (at the climax).

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The Maiden

human young adult female

As 'white as snow and as rosy red as blood', implying very fair skin with a healthy blush. She is described as having long golden hair.

Attire: Given her isolated existence and the witch's nature, her clothing might be simple but well-kept, perhaps a plain, light-colored gown made of linen or cotton, possibly with some subtle embroidery, reflecting a hidden beauty rather than overt finery.

Wants: To escape her evil mother and live a free life, presumably with the prince.

Flaw: Powerless against her mother's magic without external help; reliant on others for rescue.

Changes from a captive, passive figure to an active participant in her own escape, eventually becoming a Christian and marrying the prince.

A young woman with incredibly long, flowing golden hair, fair skin, and rosy cheeks.

Beautiful, trapped, grateful, fearful, compliant (in following the prince).

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The Maiden's Mother

magical creature elderly female

An old woman, implied to be a witch, with a formidable and menacing presence. Her physical description is not detailed, but her actions suggest a powerful and sinister figure.

Attire: Dark, simple, and practical clothing, perhaps a coarse wool cloak or a dark, shapeless dress, suitable for forest dwelling and plant gathering, but also hinting at her malevolent nature. No finery.

Wants: To trap and transform young men into beasts, possibly for power or malice, using her daughter as bait.

Flaw: Vulnerable to divine power; her magic is ultimately inferior to God's might.

Remains evil and relentless until her sudden destruction by divine intervention.

An old woman with a staff, pursuing the fleeing protagonists, her face contorted in anger.

Evil, cunning, powerful, relentless, vengeful, cruel.

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First Old Woman

human elderly female

An old woman, likely frail but with a wise demeanor. Her appearance is not detailed, but she is a benevolent figure.

Attire: Simple, practical peasant clothing, perhaps a dark wool skirt, a linen blouse, and a shawl, reflecting her humble status and the cold environment.

Wants: To warn the prince of danger and provide him with a means of protection.

Flaw: Her warnings are initially dismissed by the prince.

A static character, serving as a guide and provider of aid.

An old woman with a kind but worried expression, holding out a piece of bread.

Wise, compassionate, cautious, helpful.

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Second Old Woman

human elderly female

Similar to the first old woman, likely frail but with a sense of hidden knowledge. Her appearance is not detailed.

Attire: Simple, practical peasant clothing, perhaps a dark wool skirt, a linen blouse, and a shawl, reflecting her humble status and the cold environment.

Wants: To warn the prince of danger and provide him with a means of protection.

Flaw: Her warnings are initially dismissed by the prince.

A static character, serving as a guide and provider of aid.

An old woman with a kind but worried expression, holding out a small nut.

Wise, compassionate, cautious, helpful.

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Third Old Woman

human elderly female

Similar to the other old women, likely frail but with a sense of hidden knowledge. Her appearance is not detailed.

Attire: Simple, practical peasant clothing, perhaps a dark wool skirt, a linen blouse, and a shawl, reflecting her humble status and the cold environment.

Wants: To warn the prince of danger and provide him with a means of protection.

Flaw: Her warnings are initially dismissed by the prince.

A static character, serving as a guide and provider of aid.

An old woman with a tearful but determined expression, holding out a walnut.

Wise, compassionate, cautious, helpful, emotional (weeps).

Locations

Snowy Hunting Ground

outdoor morning winter, snowy, cold

A pristine, snow-covered landscape, likely a forest edge or open field, where the prince is hunting. The snow is deep and white, providing a stark contrast to the red drops of blood.

Mood: crisp, serene, reflective, with a hint of romantic longing

The prince cuts himself, sees his blood on the snow, and conceives his desire for a bride 'as white as snow and as rosy red as blood'. He then meets the first old woman who directs him to the doorless house.

deep white snow prince's hunting attire drops of red blood on snow old woman encountered

The Doorless House on the Mountain

indoor day varies, but the journey implies a cold climate

A mysterious, isolated house situated on a mountain, characterized by having no doors and only a single, very high window. It is surrounded by a thick forest and guarded by a multitude of transformed beasts.

Mood: eerie, dangerous, isolated, magical, yet holding a promise of beauty

The prince arrives, uses the bread to pacify the beasts, and is drawn up into the house by the maiden's golden hair. He meets the maiden and learns about her mother's dark magic.

house with no doors single, high window thick forest surrounding the house multitude of beasts (transformed young men) golden hair descending from the window

The Enchanted Forest Escape Route

transitional day varies, initially cold, then dramatically altered by magic

A dense, dark forest through which the prince and the maiden flee. This forest becomes the site of magical interventions and a dramatic chase, transforming with a sudden river and then a great fire.

Mood: tense, desperate, magical, perilous, ultimately divine

The prince and maiden escape, are pursued by the witch, and use the magical nut and walnut to create obstacles. Ultimately, God intervenes with a thunderbolt, killing the witch.

dense forest trees pursuing old witch (maiden's mother) sudden, wide river appearing from a nut great fire erupting from a walnut thunder and lightning from the sky