THE DREAM of THE KING’S SON

by Unknown · from Serbian Fairy Tales

fairy tale transformation hopeful Ages 8-14 2007 words 9 min read
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Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 482 words 3 min Canon 100/100

A King had three sons. One night, the King spoke to them. "Tell me your dreams," he said. The sons went to sleep. Next morning, they came to their father. The King asked them about their dreams.

The first son spoke. "I dream to be King." The second son said. "I dream to help you." The King heard them. He smiled at them.

Then The Golden Prince spoke. "I dream to wash my hands. My brothers hold the bowl. My mother holds a towel. You pour water for me. This dream."

The King heard this dream. He was very unhappy. "Go away now," the King said. "Leave my home for a while. You are not my son." The Golden Prince felt sad.

The Golden Prince walked far away. He walked for many days. He found a cave. Inside, he saw corn cooking. He was hungry. An Old Man lived there. The Old Man let him stay.

One day, The Old Man spoke. "You can take my goats out. Go to eight mountains. But do not go to the ninth mountain. Fairies live there. They will hurt your eyes."

The Golden Prince went to the ninth mountain. Fairies came to him. He was very clever. He made a deal with them. The fairies gave him a magic herb. This herb would help The Old Man see.

The Golden Prince gave the herb. The Old Man could see again. He was very happy. Next day, The Old Man gave keys. "Do not open the ninth door," he said.

The Golden Prince opened the ninth door. He saw a Golden Horse. A golden dog was there too. A golden hen had chicks. They were all golden. The Prince took them. He rode away fast.

The Old Man followed them. The Golden Horse told Prince to throw things. He threw a stone. A mountain grew. He threw water. A river grew. The Old Man stopped. He said to hide the golden animals.

The Golden Prince hid his golden horse. He covered it with donkey skin. He went to his father's land. The King had a big ditch. A man must jump it. The Golden Prince jumped it.

The King was upset. A poor man jumped the ditch. The King did not like this. He put Prince in a dark room. The donkey and dog went too.

Next morning, servants looked in the room. They saw The Golden Prince. He wore fine clothes. His horse was golden. His dog was golden. The hen and chicks were golden too.

The King knew this was a great prince. He felt sorry. He asked his family to help. The King poured water. The brothers held the bowl. The Queen held a towel.

The Golden Prince said, "My dream is true now!" Everyone knew him. They were very happy. The King was happy too. The Golden Prince lived happily ever after.

Original Story 2007 words · 9 min read

THE DREAM OF THE KING’S SON

There was once a king who had three sons. One evening, when the young princes were going to sleep, the king ordered them to take good note of their dreams and come and tell them to him next morning.

So the next day the princes went to their father as soon as they awoke, and the moment the king saw them he asked of the eldest, “Well, what have you dreamt?”

The prince answered, “I dreamt that I should be the heir to your throne.”

And the second said, “And I dreamt that I should be the first subject in the kingdom.”

Then the youngest said, “I dreamt that I was going to wash my hands, and that the princes, my brothers, held the basin, whilst the queen, my mother, held fine towels for me to dry my hands with, and your majesty’s self poured water over them from a golden ewer.”

The king, hearing this last dream, became very angry, and exclaimed, “What! I—the king—pour water over the hands of my own son! Go away this instant out of my palace, and out of my kingdom! You are no longer my son.”

The poor young prince tried hard to make his peace with his father, saying that he was really not to be blamed for what he had only dreamed; but the king grew more and more furious, and at last actually thrust the prince out of the palace.

So the young prince was obliged to wander up and down in different countries, until one day, being in a large forest, he saw a cave, and entered it to rest. There, to his great surprise and joy, he found a large kettle full of Indian corn boiling over a fire and, being exceedingly hungry, began to help himself to the corn. In this way he went on until he was shocked to see he had eaten up nearly all the maize, and then, being afraid some mischief would come of it, he looked about for a place in which to hide himself. At this moment, however, a great noise was heard at the cave-mouth, and he had only time to hide himself in a dark corner before a blind old man entered, riding on a great goat and driving a number of goats before him.

The old man rode straight up to the kettle, but as soon as he found that the corn was nearly all gone, he began to suspect someone was there, and groped about the cave until he caught hold of the prince.

“Who are you?” asked he sharply; and the prince answered, “I am a poor, homeless wanderer about the world, and have come now to beg you to be good enough to receive me.”

“Well,” said the old man, “why not? I shall at least have someone to mind my corn whilst I am out with my goats in the forest.”

So they lived together for some time; the prince remaining in the cave to boil the maize, whilst the old man drove out his goats every morning into the forest.

One day, however, the old man said to the prince, “I think you shall take out the goats to-day, and I will stay at home to mind the corn.”

This the prince consented to very gladly, as he was tired of living so long quietly in the cave. But the old man added, “Mind only one thing! There are nine different mountains, and you can let the goats go freely over eight of them, but you must on no account go on the ninth. The Vilas (fairies) live there, and they will certainly put out your eyes as they have put out mine, if you venture on their mountain.”

The prince thanked the old man for his warning, and then, mounting the great goat, drove the rest of the goats before him out of the cave.

Following the goats, he had passed over all the mountains to the eighth, and from this he could see the ninth mountain, and could not resist the temptation he felt to go upon it. So he said to himself, “I will venture up, whatever happens!”

Hardly had he stepped on the ninth mountain before the fairies surrounded him, and prepared to put out his eyes. But happily a thought came into his head, and he exclaimed, quickly, “Dear Vilas, why take this sin on your heads? Better let us make a bargain, that if you spring over a tree that I will place ready to jump over, you shall put out my eyes, and I will not blame you!”

So the Vilas consented to this, and the prince went and brought a large tree, which he cleft down the middle almost to the root; this done, he placed a wedge to keep the two halves of the trunk open a little.

When it was fixed upright, he himself first jumped over it, and then he said to the Vilas, “Now it is your turn. Let us see if you can spring over the tree!”

One Vila attempted to spring over, but the same moment the prince knocked the wedge out, and the trunk closing, at once held the Vila fast. Then all the other fairies were alarmed, and begged him to open the trunk and let their sister free, promising, in return, to give him anything he might ask. The prince said, “I want nothing except to keep my own eyes, and to restore eyesight to that poor old man.” So the fairies gave him a certain herb, and told him to lay it over the old man’s eyes, and then he would recover his sight. The prince took the herb, opened the tree a little so as to let the fairy free, and then rode back on the goat to the cave, driving the other goats before him. When he arrived there he placed at once the herb on the old man’s eyes, and in a moment his eyesight came back, to his exceeding surprise and joy.

Next morning the old man, before he drove out his goats, gave the prince the keys of eight closets in the cave, but warned him on no account to open the ninth closet, although the key hung directly over the door. Then he went out, telling the prince to take good care that the corn was ready for their suppers.

Left alone in the cave, the young man began to wonder what might be in the ninth closet, and at last he could not resist the temptation to take down the key and open the door to look in.

What was his surprise to see there a golden horse, with a golden greyhound beside him, and near them a golden hen and golden chickens were busy picking up golden millet-seeds.

The young prince gazed at them for some time, admiring their beauty, and then he spoke to the golden horse, “Friend, I think we had better leave this place before the old man comes back again.”

“Very well,” answered the golden horse, “I am quite willing to go away, only you must take heed to what I am going to tell. Go and find linen cloth enough to spread over the stones at the mouth of the cave, for if the old man hears the ring of my hoofs he will be certain to kill you. Then you must take with you a little stone, a drop of water, and a pair of scissors, and the moment I tell you to throw them down you must obey me quickly, or you are lost.”

“The old man on his great goat.”

The prince did everything that the golden horse had ordered him, and then, taking up the golden hen with her chickens in a bag, he placed it under his arm, and mounted the horse and rode quickly out of the cave, leading with him, in a leash, the golden greyhound. But the moment they were in the open air the old man, although he was very far off, tending his goats on a distant mountain, heard the clang of the golden hoofs, and cried to his great goat, “They have run away. Let us follow them at once.”

In a wonderfully short time the old man on his great goat came so near the prince on his golden horse, that the latter shouted, “Throw now the little stone!”

The moment the prince had thrown it down, a high rocky mountain rose up between him and the old man, and before the goat had climbed over it the golden horse had gained much ground. Very soon, however, the old man was so nearly catching them that the horse shouted, “Throw, now, the drop of water!” The prince obeyed instantly, and immediately saw a broad river flowing between him and his pursuer.

It took the old man on his goat so long to cross the river that the prince on his golden horse was far away before them; but for all that it was not very long before the horse heard the goat so near behind him that he shouted, “Throw the scissors.” The prince threw them, and the goat, running over them, injured one of his forelegs very badly. When the old man saw this, he exclaimed, “Now I see I cannot catch you, so you may keep what you have taken. But you will do wisely to listen to my counsel. People will be sure to kill you for the sake of your golden horse, so you had better buy at once a donkey, and take the hide to cover your horse. And do the same with your golden greyhound.”

Having said this, the old man turned and rode back to his cave; and the prince lost no time in attending to his advice, and covered with donkey-hide his golden horse and his golden hound.

After travelling a long time the prince came unawares to the kingdom of his father. There he heard that the king had had a ditch—three hundred yards wide and four hundred yards deep—dug, and had proclaimed that whosoever should leap his horse over it, should have the princess, his daughter, for wife.

Almost a whole year had elapsed since the proclamation was issued, but as yet no one had dared to risk the leap. When the prince heard this, he said, “I will leap over it with my donkey and my dog!” and he leapt over it.

But the king was very angry when he heard that a poorly dressed man, on a donkey, had dared to leap over the great ditch which had frightened back his bravest knights; so he had the disguised prince thrown into one of his deepest dungeons, together with his donkey and his dog.

Next morning the king sent some of his servants to see if the man was still living, and these soon ran back to him, full of wonder, and told him that they had found in the dungeon, instead of a poor man and his donkey, a young man, beautifully dressed, a golden horse, a golden greyhound, and a golden hen, surrounded by golden chickens, which were picking up golden millet-seeds from the ground.

Then the king said, “That must be some powerful prince.” So he ordered the queen, and the princes, his sons, to prepare all things for the stranger to wash his hands. Then he went down himself into the dungeon, and led the prince up with much courtesy, desiring thus to make amends for the past ill-treatment.

The king himself took a golden ewer full of water, and poured some over the prince’s hands, whilst the two princes held the basin under them, and the queen held out fine towels to dry them on.

This done, the young prince exclaimed, “Now, my dream is fulfilled”; and they all at once recognised him, and were very glad to see him once again amongst them.


Story DNA

Moral

Even when faced with injustice and hardship, one's true destiny will eventually be revealed and fulfilled.

Plot Summary

A king banishes his youngest son for a dream predicting his family would serve him. The prince wanders, finding refuge with a blind old man, whom he helps regain sight by outsmarting fairies. He then discovers and escapes with magical golden animals from the old man's forbidden closet, using enchanted items to evade pursuit. Returning to his father's kingdom in disguise, he leaps an impossible ditch, but is imprisoned. His true identity and magnificent golden possessions are revealed in the dungeon, leading the king to realize his mistake. The king, queen, and brothers then perform the hand-washing ritual from the prince's original dream, fulfilling his destiny and welcoming him back.

Themes

destiny vs. free willperseverancehumilityjustice

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: happy
Magic: prophetic dreams, fairies (Vilas), magical herb for restoring sight, golden horse, greyhound, hen, and chickens, magical items (stone, water, scissors) that create obstacles
the dream of hand-washingthe golden horsethe ninth mountain/closet

Cultural Context

Origin: Unknown (likely European folk tale tradition)
Era: timeless fairy tale

The concept of dreams as omens or prophecies was common in many ancient and pre-modern cultures. The king's extreme reaction to the dream reflects a belief in the power of prophecy and a fear of being usurped or disrespected, even by destiny.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. The king asks his three sons to share their dreams.
  2. The eldest and second sons dream of inheriting the throne and being the first subject, respectively.
  3. The youngest son dreams of his family serving him during a hand-washing ritual.
  4. Enraged by the youngest son's dream, the king banishes him from the kingdom.
  5. The prince wanders until he finds a cave and shares corn with a blind old man, who then takes him in.
  6. The old man warns the prince not to go to the ninth mountain, where fairies will blind him.
  7. The prince disobeys, goes to the ninth mountain, and tricks the fairies into restoring the old man's sight.
  8. The old man warns the prince not to open the ninth closet in the cave.
  9. The prince disobeys again, finds a golden horse, greyhound, hen, and chickens, and escapes with them.
  10. The prince uses magical items (stone, water, scissors) to evade the pursuing old man, who then gives him advice to disguise his golden animals.
  11. The prince, disguised, returns to his father's kingdom and leaps a massive ditch, winning the princess's hand.
  12. The king, angry at the poor man's success, throws the prince, his 'donkey', and 'dog' into a dungeon.
  13. The next morning, servants discover the prince's true, magnificent form and his golden animals in the dungeon.
  14. The king, realizing the prince's importance, orders a hand-washing ritual, with himself and his family serving the prince.
  15. The prince reveals his identity, declaring his dream fulfilled, and is joyfully welcomed back into the family.

Characters

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The Youngest Prince

human young adult male

A slender and agile young man, of average height for his age, with a graceful build that suggests both resilience and a gentle nature. His movements are quick and decisive when needed, but also capable of quiet patience.

Attire: Initially, fine silk tunics and trousers befitting a prince, in rich jewel tones. During his exile, simple, sturdy linen or wool peasant clothes in muted earth tones, likely worn and patched. Later, disguised under a donkey hide, but beneath it, resplendent in finely embroidered silk robes, perhaps in deep blues or greens, with subtle gold threadwork, indicative of his royal status.

Wants: To survive his exile, to prove his worth, and ultimately, to fulfill his prophetic dream and reclaim his rightful place.

Flaw: His initial naivety and perhaps a slight overconfidence in his dream's interpretation, which leads to his exile. He is also susceptible to temptation, as seen with the ninth mountain and the ninth closet.

He transforms from a pampered prince into a self-reliant, wise, and courageous young man who has earned his place through hardship and ingenuity, ultimately fulfilling his destiny and proving his father wrong.

His humble donkey-hide disguise, which conceals his true, magnificent golden horse and golden greyhound.

Resourceful, patient, observant, humble (initially), and courageous. He adapts quickly to new situations and shows remarkable ingenuity in overcoming obstacles.

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The King

human elderly male

A man of imposing stature, though perhaps slightly stooped with age. He carries himself with the weight of authority. His hands might be gnarled from years of ruling, but still strong.

Attire: Rich, heavy robes of deep crimson or royal blue velvet, embroidered with gold thread and the royal crest. A golden crown, perhaps set with large rubies or sapphires, would adorn his head. Fine leather boots and a heavy gold chain around his neck.

Wants: To maintain his authority and the dignity of his royal position. Later, to find a worthy successor for his daughter and to make amends for his past harshness.

Flaw: His excessive pride and inability to see beyond his own immediate interpretation of events, leading to rash decisions and injustice.

He begins as an arrogant and unjust ruler who banishes his son. Through the fulfillment of the dream, he learns humility and justice, recognizing his error and welcoming his son back with honor.

His long, flowing white beard and his heavy, jewel-encrusted golden crown.

Authoritarian, proud, quick to anger, but ultimately capable of remorse and seeking reconciliation. He values his royal dignity above all else.

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The Blind Old Man

human elderly male

A gaunt and wiry old man, with a weathered face deeply etched by time and hardship. His movements are cautious and guided by touch and sound due to his blindness. He is often seen riding a large goat.

Attire: Simple, rough-spun garments made of coarse wool or animal hides, in earthy, muted tones like brown or grey. He might wear a simple leather vest and trousers, practical for a goat herder. His clothes would be worn and patched.

Wants: To survive and protect his livelihood (his goats and corn). Later, to regain his eyesight.

Flaw: His blindness makes him vulnerable and suspicious of strangers. His past experience with the Vilas makes him overly cautious.

He begins as a suspicious, blind hermit. Through the prince's compassion, he regains his sight, leading to a moment of joy and a renewed sense of trust, though he remains cautious.

His blind, clouded eyes and his constant companion, the great goat he rides.

Suspicious, practical, cautious, and initially somewhat gruff. He is also capable of gratitude and generosity once his trust is earned.

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The Golden Horse

magical creature ageless non-human

A magnificent, powerful horse, perfectly proportioned and radiating an ethereal glow. Its coat is entirely made of shimmering gold, smooth and polished like metal, yet appearing to move with the flexibility of living muscle. Its mane and tail are long, flowing strands of spun gold.

Attire: None, as its body is its adornment. However, it is temporarily covered by a rough donkey hide.

Wants: To escape its confinement and to aid the prince in his journey, recognizing his worth.

Flaw: Its golden hooves make a distinctive sound that can alert pursuers, necessitating a disguise.

It serves as a magical helper, guiding the prince to safety and ultimately to his destiny, remaining a steadfast companion.

Its entire body is made of shimmering gold, with a flowing golden mane and tail.

Loyal, wise, protective, and strategic. It possesses foresight and offers crucial advice to the prince.

Locations

King's Palace - Royal Chambers

indoor morning

The private sleeping quarters or audience chamber within a grand palace, likely adorned with rich fabrics and royal insignia, where the king and his sons would gather.

Mood: formal, tense, regal

The three princes recount their dreams to the king, leading to the youngest prince's banishment.

royal throne rich tapestries ornate furniture golden ewer washing basin fine towels

Forest Cave

indoor cool, damp, sheltered

A natural rock cave, large enough to house a blind old man, his goats, and a boiling kettle. It contains nine closets, one of which hides magical golden animals.

Mood: rustic, mysterious, humble, later magical

The prince finds refuge, lives with the old man, discovers the magical animals, and ultimately escapes.

rock walls fire pit large kettle Indian corn goats nine wooden closets golden horse golden greyhound golden hen and chickens

The Ninth Mountain (Fairies' Domain)

outdoor day varies, possibly enchanted

A forbidden mountain, distinct from the surrounding eight, where the Vilas (fairies) reside. It is likely wild and untouched, perhaps with ancient trees.

Mood: enchanting, dangerous, magical

The prince encounters the fairies, outwits them, and gains the herb to restore the old man's sight.

mountain peak dense forest large tree (cleft) fairies (Vilas)

King's Palace - Dungeon

indoor night | morning cold, damp

A deep, dark dungeon beneath the king's palace, where the disguised prince is imprisoned with his animals.

Mood: grim, oppressive, later surprising

The prince is unjustly imprisoned, but his true identity and magical possessions are revealed to the king's servants.

stone walls iron bars straw bedding golden horse (disguised) golden greyhound (disguised) golden hen and chickens