THE GOLDEN APPLE-TREE and THE NINE PEAHENS

by Unknown · from Serbian Fairy Tales

fairy tale quest hopeful Ages 8-14 4431 words 20 min read
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CEFR A1 Age 5 1088 words 5 min Canon 100/100

Once upon a time, there was a King. He had a special tree. The King loved his tree. It grew golden apples! But each night, the apples went away. No one knew who took them. The King's two older sons tried to watch. They wanted to help. But they fell asleep. The apples were gone.

The King's youngest son was Prince Leo. He was kind and brave. He sat by the tree. He did not sleep. Nine pretty peahens flew down! Eight sat in the tree. One peahen landed near him. She turned into a nice girl! Her name was Princess Lily. She smiled at Prince Leo. "Thank you for watching," she said. She gave him two golden apples. One was for him. One was for the King. Then she flew away.

Prince Leo watched many nights. He was very good. He always got two apples. His older brothers were not happy. They were very jealous. They found a mean old woman. "Help us," they said. The old woman hid under the tree. She waited. She cut a golden curl. Princess Lily felt very sad. Her heart hurt. She turned into a peahen. She flew away, far, far away. All the peahens flew away too. They were sad too.

Prince Leo was very, very sad. He missed Princess Lily. He wanted her back. "I will find her!" he said. He was brave. He left his home. He went to look for her. He walked a long way.

Prince Leo came to a big lake. The lake was wide. A mean old woman lived there. She was not kind. She had a daughter. "Stay here," the old woman said. But Prince Leo said no. He wanted to find Lily. He learned peahens come each day. They came to the lake.

The mean old woman was tricky. She was very sly. She talked to Prince Leo's silly servant. She gave him magic bellows. "Blow this behind Prince Leo," she said. The silly servant did it. Prince Leo fell asleep! He slept soundly. Princess Lily came to the lake. She saw him. She tried to wake him. "Wake up!" she said. But he slept. She was very sad. Her heart was heavy. This happened two days. Two long days.

Princess Lily left a message. It was a clear message. "Find me in the dragon's land," it said. Prince Leo woke up. He saw the message. He read the words. He was very angry at the silly servant. "Go away!" Prince Leo said. "You do not work for me. Go now." He left. He left alone.

Prince Leo traveled alone. He walked and walked. He walked for many days. He found a fish in trouble. The fish was stuck. "I will help you," he said. He helped the fish. The fish was happy. The fish gave him a shiny scale. It was a magic scale. "Use this," the fish said. Then he found a fox. The fox was stuck. It cried for help. He helped the fox. The fox was thankful. The fox gave him a hair. It was a magic hair. "Use this," the fox said. Then he found a wolf. The wolf was caught. He helped the wolf too. The wolf was grateful. The wolf gave him a hair. It was a magic hair. "Use this," the wolf said. "I will help."

Prince Leo found a new land. It was far away. He saw a big castle. The castle was dark. Princess Lily was there! She was inside. But a big, scary dragon kept her inside. He was mean. "She is mine!" the big dragon said. He was very loud.

Princess Lily saw Prince Leo. She was so happy! She smiled. "You must help me," she said softly. She told him what to do. She whispered. "Find the old woman in the hills. She has a special horse. It is magic. Work for her. Be smart."

Prince Leo found the old woman. She was old. "I will work for you," he said. "Watch my horse for three nights," she said. "Pick a horse," she said. He watched it. He stayed awake. But he fell asleep. He was so tired. The horse ran away! It ran fast. It jumped into the lake. It turned into a fish! A shiny fish. Prince Leo rubbed the fish scale. The fish came. "Your horse is here!" the fish said. Prince Leo used a magic bridle. The horse came back! It was safe. The second night, the horse ran away again. It ran far. It turned into a fox! A clever fox. Prince Leo rubbed the fox hair. The fox came. "Your horse is here!" the fox said. The horse came back! It was safe again. The third night, it became a wolf! A strong wolf. Prince Leo rubbed the wolf hair. The wolf came. "Your horse is here!" the wolf said. The horse came back again! It was safe once more.

The old woman was cross. She was angry. "Pick a horse," she said. She showed him twelve horses. Many horses. Eleven were big and strong. They looked good. One looked sick and not pretty. It looked weak. "I want that one," Prince Leo said. He was wise. The old woman laughed. She thought he was silly. But Prince Leo took the sick horse. He brushed it. He brushed it well. Magic happened! The horse turned into a pretty golden horse! It was strong and fast. It was beautiful.

Prince Leo rode his golden horse. The horse was swift. He flew to the big castle. He flew quickly. "Get ready!" he told Princess Lily. She climbed on the horse. She was happy. They rode away fast! They were free.

The big dragon saw them go. He was very angry. "I will catch you!" he roared. He jumped on his horse. He chased them! He chased them fast. But the golden horse was not scared. It was brave. "Do not be afraid," the golden horse said. The dragon's horse was tired. It was very tired. "Wait, brother!" the dragon's horse said. The golden horse called back. "Throw him off! Come with me!" The dragon's horse kicked hard. It kicked with all its might. The big dragon fell off! He fell down. He could not follow them. He was gone for good! He was gone forever.

Prince Leo and Princess Lily rode home. They were very, very happy. They smiled. They lived with joy ever after. Be kind. Never give up. Find joy! This is true.

Original Story 4431 words · 20 min read

THE GOLDEN APPLE-TREE AND THE NINE PEAHENS

Once upon a time there lived a king who had three sons. Now, before the king’s palace grew a golden apple-tree, which in one and the same night blossomed, bore fruit, and lost all its fruit, though no one could tell who took the apples. One day the king, speaking to his eldest son, said, “I should like to know who takes the fruit from our apple-tree.” And the son said, “I will keep guard to-night, and will see who gathers the apples.” So when the evening came he went and laid himself down under the apple-tree upon the ground to watch. Just as the apples ripened, however, he fell asleep, and when he awoke in the morning there was not a single one left on the tree. Whereupon he went and told his father what had happened. Then the second son offered to keep watch by the tree, but he had no better success than his eldest brother.

So the turn came to the king’s youngest son to keep guard. He made his preparations, brought his bed under the tree, and immediately went to sleep. Before midnight he awoke and looked up at the tree, and saw how the apples ripened, and how the whole palace was lit up by their shining. At that minute nine peahens flew towards the tree, and eight of them settled on its branches, but the ninth alighted near him and turned instantly into a beautiful girl—so beautiful, indeed, that the whole kingdom could not produce one who could in any way compare with her. She stayed, conversing kindly with him, till after midnight, then, thanking him for the golden apples, she prepared to depart; but, as he begged she would leave him one, she gave him two, one for himself and one for the king, his father. Then the girl turned again into a peahen, and flew away with the other eight. Next morning, the king’s son took the two apples to his father, and the king was much pleased, and praised his son. When the evening came, the king’s youngest son took his place again under the apple-tree to keep guard over it. He again conversed as he had done the night before with the beautiful girl, and brought to his father, the next morning, two apples as before. But, after he had succeeded so well several nights, his two elder brothers grew envious because he had been able to do what they could not. At length they found an old woman, who promised to discover how the youngest brother had succeeded in saving the two apples. So, as the evening came, the old woman stole softly under the bed which stood under the apple-tree and hid herself. And after a while came also the king’s son, and laid himself down as usual to sleep. When it was near midnight the nine peahens flew up as before, and eight of them settled on the branches and the ninth stood by his bed, and turned into a most beautiful girl.

Then the old woman slowly took hold of one of the girl’s curls and cut it off, and the girl immediately rose up, changed again into a peahen and flew away, and the other peahens followed her, and so they all disappeared. Then the king’s son jumped up, and cried out, “What is that?” and, looking under the bed, he saw the old woman, and drew her out. Next morning he ordered her to be tied to a horse’s tail, and so torn to pieces. But the peahens never came back, so the king’s son was very sad for a long time, and wept at his loss. At length he resolved to go and look after his peahen, and never to come back again unless he should find her. When he told the king, his father, of his intention, the king begged him not to go away, and said that he would find him another beautiful girl, and that he might choose out of the whole kingdom.

But all the king’s persuasions were useless. His son went into the world to search everywhere for his peahen, taking only one servant to serve him. After many travels he came one day to a lake. Now by the lake stood a large and beautiful palace. In the palace lived an old woman as queen, and with the queen lived a girl, her daughter. He said to the old woman, “For heaven’s sake, grandmother, do you know anything about nine golden peahens?” and the old woman answered, “Oh, my son, I know all about them; they come every mid-day to bathe in the lake. But what do you want with them? Let them be, think nothing about them. Here is my daughter. Such a beautiful girl! and such an heiress! All my wealth will remain to you if you marry her.” But he, burning with desire to see the peahens, would not listen to what the old woman spoke about her daughter.

Next morning, when day dawned, the prince prepared to go down to the lake to wait for the peahens. Then the old queen bribed the servant and gave him a little pair of bellows, and said, “Do you see these bellows? When you come to the lake you must blow secretly with them behind his neck, and then he will fall asleep, and not be able to speak to the peahens.” The mischievous servant did as the old woman told him; when he went with his master down to the lake, he took occasion to blow with the bellows behind his neck, and the poor prince fell asleep just as though he were dead. Shortly after the nine peahens came flying, and eight of them alighted by the lake, but the ninth flew towards him, as he sat on horseback, and caressed him, and tried to awaken him. “Awake, my darling! Awake, my heart! Awake, my soul!” But for all that he knew nothing, just as if he were dead. After they had bathed, all the peahens flew away together, and after they were gone the prince woke up and said to his servant, “What has happened? Did they not come?” The servant told him they had been there, and that eight of them had bathed, but the ninth had sat by him on his horse, and caressed and tried to awaken him. Then the king’s son was so angry that he almost killed himself in his rage. Next morning he went down again to the shore to wait for the peahens, and rode about a long time till the servant again found an opportunity of blowing with the bellows behind his neck, so that he again fell asleep as though dead. Hardly had he fallen asleep when the nine peahens came flying, and eight of them alighted by the water, but the ninth settled down by the side of his horse and caressed him, and cried out to awaken him, “Arise, my darling! Arise, my heart! Arise, my soul.”

But it was of no use; the prince slept on as if he were dead. Then she said to the servant, “Tell your master to-morrow he can see us here again, but never more.” With these words the peahens flew away. Immediately after the king’s son woke up, and asked his servant, “Have they not been here?” And the man answered, “Yes, they have been, and say that you can see them again to-morrow, at this place, but after that they will not return again.” When the unhappy prince heard that he knew not what to do with himself, and in his great trouble and misery tore the hair from his head.

The third day he went down again to the shore, but, fearing to fall asleep, instead of riding slowly, galloped along the shore. His servant, however, found an opportunity of blowing with the bellows behind his neck, and again the prince fell asleep. A moment after came the nine peahens, and the eight alighted on the lake and the ninth by him, on his horse, and sought to awaken him, caressing him. “Arise, my darling! Arise, my heart! Arise, my soul!” But it was of no use, he slept on as if dead. Then the peahen said to the servant, “When your master awakens, tell him he ought to strike off the head of the nail from the lower part, and then he will find me.” Thereupon all the peahens fled away. Immediately the king’s son awoke, and said to his servant, “Have they been here?” And the servant answered, “They have been, and the one which alighted on your horse ordered me to tell you to strike off the head of the nail from the lower part, and then you will find her.” When the prince heard that he drew his sword and cut off his servant’s head.

After that he travelled alone about the world, and, after long travelling, came to a mountain and remained all night there with a hermit, whom he asked if he knew anything about nine golden peahens. The hermit said, “Eh, my son, you are lucky; God has led you in the right path. From this place it is only half a day’s walk. But you must go straight on, then you will come to a large gate, which you must pass through; and, after that, you must keep always to the right hand, and so you will come to the peahens’ city, and there find their palace.” So next morning the king’s son arose, and prepared to go. He thanked the hermit, and went as he had told him. After a while he came to the great gate, and, having passed it, turned to the right, so that at mid-day he saw the city, and beholding how white it shone, rejoiced very much. When he came into the city he found the palace where lived the nine golden peahens. But at the gate he was stopped by the guard, who demanded who he was, and whence he came. After he had answered these questions, the guards went to announce him to the queen. When the queen heard who he was, she came running out to the gate and took him by the hand to lead him into the palace. She was a young and beautiful maiden, and so there was a great rejoicing when, after a few days, he married her and remained there with her.

One day, some time after their marriage, the queen went out to walk, and the king’s son remained in the palace. Before going out, however, the queen gave him the keys of twelve cellars, telling him, “You may go down into all the cellars except the twelfth—that you must on no account open, or it will cost you your head.” She then went away. The king’s son, whilst remaining in the palace, began to wonder what there could be in the twelfth cellar, and soon commenced opening one cellar after the other. When he came to the twelfth he would not at first open it, but again began to wonder very much why he was forbidden to go into it. “What can be in this cellar?” he exclaimed to himself. At last he opened it. In the middle of the cellar lay a big barrel with an open bunghole, but bound fast round with three iron hoops. Out of the barrel came a voice, saying, “For God’s sake, my brother—I am dying with thirst—please give me a cup of water.” Then the king’s son took a cup and filled it with water, and emptied it into the barrel. Immediately he had done so one of the hoops burst asunder. Again came the voice from the barrel, “For God’s sake, my brother—I am dying of thirst—please give me a cup of water.” The king’s son again took the cup and filled it, and poured the water into the barrel, and the third hoop burst. Then the barrel fell to pieces, and a dragon flew out of the cellar, and caught the queen on the road and carried her away.

Then the servant, who went out with the queen, came back quickly, and told the king’s son what had happened, and the poor prince knew not what to do with himself, so desperate was he, and full of self-reproaches. At length, however, he resolved to set out and travel through the world in search of her. After long journeying, one day he came to a lake, and near it, in a little hole, he saw a little fish jumping about. When the fish saw the king’s son, she began to beg pitifully, “For God’s sake be my brother, and throw me into the water. Some day I may be of use to you, so take now a little scale from me, and when you need me, rub it gently.” Then the king’s son lifted the little fish from the hole and threw her into the water, after he had taken one small scale, which he wrapped up carefully in a handkerchief. Some time afterwards, as he travelled about the world, he came upon a fox caught in an iron trap. When the fox saw the prince he spoke: “In God’s name be a brother to me and help me to get out of this trap. One day you will need me, so take just one hair from my tail, and when you want me, rub it gently.” Then the king’s son took a hair from the tail of the fox and set him free.

Again, as he crossed a mountain, he found a wolf fast in a trap; and when the wolf saw him it spoke: “Be a brother to me; in God’s name set me free, and one day I will help you. Only take a hair from me, and when you need me, rub it gently.” So he took a hair and set the wolf free. After that the king’s son travelled about a very long time, till one day he met a man, to whom he said, “For God’s sake, brother, have you ever heard anyone say where is the palace of the dragon king?” The man gave him very particular directions which way to take, and in what length of time he could get there. Then the king’s son thanked him and continued his journey until he came to the city where the dragon lived. When there, he went into the palace and found therein his wife, and both of them were exceedingly pleased to meet each other, and began to take counsel how they could escape. They resolved to run away, and prepared hastily for the journey. When all was ready they mounted on horseback and galloped away. As soon as they were gone the dragon came home, also on horseback, and, entering his palace, found that the queen had gone away. Then he said to his horse, “What shall we do now? Shall we eat and drink, or go at once after them?” The horse answered, “Let us eat and drink first, we shall anyway catch them; do not be anxious.”

After the dragon had dined he mounted his horse, and in a few moments came up with the runaways. Then he took the queen from the king’s son and said to him, “Go now, in God’s name! This time I forgive you, because you gave me water in the cellar; but if your life is dear to you do not come back here any more.” The unhappy young prince went on his way a little, but could not long resist, so he came back next day to the dragon’s palace and found the queen sitting alone and weeping. Then they began again to consult how they could get away. And the prince said, “When the dragon comes, ask him where he got that horse, and then you will tell me so that I can look for such another one; perhaps in this way we can escape.” He then went away, lest the dragon should come and find him with the queen.

By-and-by the dragon came home, and the queen began to pet him, and speak lovingly to him about many things, till at last she said, “Ah, what a fine horse you have! where did you get such a splendid horse?” And he answered, “Eh, where I got it everyone cannot get one! In such and such a mountain lives an old woman who has twelve horses in her stable, and no one can say which is the finest, they are all so beautiful. But in one corner of the stable stands a horse which looks as if he were leprous, but, in truth, he is the very best horse in the whole world. He is the brother of my horse, and whoever gets him may ride to the sky. But whoever wishes to get a horse from that old woman must serve her three days and three nights. She has a mare with a foal, and whoever during three nights guards and keeps for her this mare and this foal, has a right to claim the best horse from the old woman’s stable. But whoever engages to keep watch over the mare and does not, must lose his head.”

Next day, when the dragon went out, the king’s son came, and the queen told him all she had learned from the dragon. Then the king’s son went away to the mountain and found the old woman, and entered her house greeting: “God help you, grandmother!” And she answered, “God help you, too, my son! what do you wish?” “I should like to serve you,” said the king’s son. Then the old woman said, “Well, my son, if you keep my mare safe for three days and three nights I will give you the best horse, and you can choose him yourself; but if you do not keep the mare safe you shall lose your head.”

Then she led him into the courtyard, where all around stakes were ranged. Each of them had on it a man’s head, except one stake, which had no head on it, and shouted incessantly, “Oh, grandmother, give me a head.” The old woman showed all this to the prince, and said, “Look here, all these were heads of those who tried to keep my mare, and they have lost their heads for their pains.”

But the prince was not a bit afraid, so he stayed to serve the old woman. When the evening came he mounted the mare and rode her into the field, and the foal followed. He sat still on her back, having made up his mind not to dismount, that he might be sure of her. But before midnight he slumbered a little, and when he awoke he found himself sitting on a rail and holding the bridle in his hand. Then he was greatly alarmed, and went instantly to look about to find the mare, and whilst looking for her he came to a piece of water. When he saw the water he remembered the little fish, and took the scale from the handkerchief and rubbed it a little. Then immediately the little fish appeared and said, “What is the matter, my half-brother?” And he replied, “The mare of the old woman ran away whilst under my charge, and now I do not know where she is.” And the fish answered, “Here she is, turned to a fish, and the foal to a smaller one. But strike once upon the water with the bridle and cry out ‘Heigh! mare of the old woman!’ ” The prince did as he was told, and immediately the mare came, with the foal, out of the water to the shore. Then he put on her the bridle and mounted and rode away to the old woman’s house and the foal followed. When he got there the old woman gave him his breakfast; she, however, took the mare into the stable and beat her with a poker, saying, “Why did you not go down among the fishes, you cursed mare?” And the mare answered, “I have been down to the fishes, but the fish are his friends, and they told him about me.” Then the old woman said, “Then go among the foxes.”

When evening came the king’s son mounted the mare and rode to the field, and the foal followed the mare. Again he sat on the mare’s back until near midnight, when he fell asleep as before. When he awoke, he found himself riding on the rail and holding the bridle in his hand. So he was much frightened, and went to look after the mare. As he went he remembered the words the old woman had said to the mare, and he took from the handkerchief the fox’s hair and rubbed it a little between his fingers. All at once the fox stood before him and asked, “What is the matter, half-brother?” And he said, “The old woman’s mare has run away, and I do not know where she can be.” Then the fox answered, “Here she is with us; she has turned into a fox, and the foal into a cub; but strike once with the bridle on the earth and cry out, ‘Heigh! you old woman’s mare!’ ” So the king’s son struck with the bridle on the earth and cried “Heigh! you old woman’s mare!” and the mare came and stood, with her foal, near him. He put on the bridle, and mounted and rode off home, and the foal followed the mare. When he arrived the old woman gave him his breakfast, but took the mare into the stable and beat her with the poker, crying, “To the foxes, cursed one! to the foxes!” And the mare answered, “I have been with the foxes, but they are his friends, and told him I was there!” Then the old woman cried, “If that is so, you must go among the wolves.”

When it grew dark again the king’s son mounted the mare and rode out to the field, and the foal galloped by the side of the mare. Again he sat still on the mare’s back till about midnight, when he grew very sleepy and fell into a slumber, as on the former evenings, and when he awoke he found himself riding on the rail, holding the bridle in his hand, just as before. Then, as before, he went in a hurry to look after the mare. As he went he remembered the words the old woman had said to the mare, and took the wolf’s hair from the handkerchief and rubbed it a little. Then the wolf came up to him and asked, “What is the matter, half-brother?” And he answered, “The old woman’s mare has run away, and I cannot tell where she is.” The wolf said, “Here she is with us; she has turned herself into a wolf, and the foal into a wolf’s cub. Strike once with the bridle on the earth and cry out, ‘Heigh! old woman’s mare!’ ” And the king’s son did so, and instantly the mare came again and stood with the foal beside him. So he bridled her, and galloped home, and the foal followed. When he arrived the old woman gave him his breakfast, but she led the mare into the stable and beat her with the poker, crying, “To the wolves, I said, miserable one.” Then the mare answered, “I have been to the wolves; but they are his friends, and told him all about me.” Then the old woman came out of the stable, and the king’s son said to her, “Eh, grandmother, I have served you honestly; now give me what you promised me.” And the old woman answered, “My son, what is promised must be fulfilled. So look here: here are the twelve horses; choose which you like.” And the prince said, “Why should I be too particular? Give me only that leprous horse in the corner; fine horses are not fitting for me.” But the old woman tried to persuade him to choose another horse, saying, “How can you be so foolish as to choose that leprous thing whilst there are such very fine horses here?” But he remained firm by his first choice, and said to the old woman, “You ought to give me which I choose, for so you promised.” So, when the old woman found she could not make him change his mind, she gave him the scabby horse, and he took leave of her, and went away, leading the horse by the halter.

When he came to a forest he curried and rubbed down the horse, when it shone as bright as gold. He then mounted, and the horse flew as quickly as a bird, and in a few seconds brought him to the dragon’s palace. The king’s son went in and said to the queen, “Get ready as soon as possible.” She was soon ready, when they both mounted the horse, and began their journey home. Soon after the dragon came home, and when he saw the queen had disappeared, said to his horse, “What shall we do? Shall we eat and drink first, or shall we pursue them at once?” The horse answered, “Whether we eat and drink or not it is all one, we shall never reach them.”

When the dragon heard that he got quickly on his horse and galloped after them. When they saw the dragon following them they pushed on quicker, but their horse said, “Do not be afraid; there is no need to run away.” In a very few moments the dragon came very near to them, and his horse said to their horse, “For God’s sake, my brother, wait a moment! I shall kill myself running after you.” Their horse answered, “Why are you so stupid as to carry that monster. Fling your heels up and throw him off, and come along with me.” When the dragon’s horse heard that he shook his head angrily and flung his feet high in the air, so that the dragon fell off and brake in pieces and his horse came up to them. Then the queen mounted him and returned with the king’s son happily to her kingdom, where they reigned together in great prosperity until the day of their death.


Story DNA

Moral

Perseverance and loyalty to one's true desires will ultimately lead to success and happiness.

Plot Summary

A king's youngest son discovers that nine peahens, one of whom is a beautiful girl, steal golden apples. His jealous brothers arrange for an old woman to cut a curl from the peahen-girl, causing her to flee. The prince embarks on a quest, facing betrayal from his servant and an old queen, but gains magical animal helpers. He then serves an old woman, successfully guarding her transforming mare for three nights to earn a powerful horse. Finally, he uses the horse to rescue his beloved, now a queen held captive by a dragon, and they return to her kingdom to rule happily.

Themes

perseveranceloyaltyenvytransformation

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: repetition, rule of three

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: happy
Magic: golden apple-tree that blossoms and fruits overnight, peahens that transform into beautiful girls, magical bellows that induce sleep, animal helpers (fish, fox, wolf) with magical abilities, mare that transforms into different animals, magical horse that can fly and speak
the golden apple-tree (symbol of desire/beauty)the peahens (symbol of the beloved, transformation)the 'leprous' horse (symbol of hidden power/true worth)

Cultural Context

Origin: Unknown (likely Eastern European/Slavic, given common motifs)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Reflects common European folk tale structures and motifs, often involving royal families, magical creatures, and moral tests.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. The king's golden apple-tree is plundered nightly; the two elder sons fail to guard it.
  2. The youngest son guards the tree, discovers nine peahens, and converses with the ninth, who is a beautiful girl, receiving two apples.
  3. The elder brothers, envious, bribe an old woman who cuts a curl from the peahen-girl, causing her to flee permanently.
  4. The prince, heartbroken, leaves his kingdom to search for the peahen-girl.
  5. He arrives at a lake where an old queen lives with her daughter and learns the peahens bathe there daily.
  6. The old queen bribes the prince's servant to use bellows to make the prince fall asleep, preventing him from speaking to the peahen-girl for two days.
  7. On the third day, the peahen-girl gives the servant a clue for the prince to find her, and the prince, upon waking, beheads his treacherous servant.
  8. The prince travels alone, helping a fish, a fox, and a wolf, who each give him a magical scale/hair.
  9. He arrives at a kingdom where a queen is held captive by a dragon, who is the peahen-girl he seeks.
  10. The queen, recognizing him, advises him to serve an old woman who keeps a magical mare, as a way to gain a powerful horse.
  11. The prince serves the old woman, successfully guarding her mare for three nights by using the magical aids from the fish, fox, and wolf to retrieve the mare when it transforms and escapes.
  12. He chooses the seemingly 'leprous' horse, which transforms into a magnificent golden horse.
  13. The prince rescues the queen (his peahen-girl) from the dragon's palace.
  14. The dragon pursues them, but the prince's horse convinces the dragon's horse to throw the dragon off, killing him.
  15. The prince and the queen return to her kingdom and rule happily ever after.

Characters

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King's Youngest Son

human young adult male

Lean and agile build, of average height for a young man from a European kingdom. His features are likely refined, reflecting his royal lineage, though he possesses a certain ruggedness from his later travels.

Attire: Initially, he wears the fine, tailored tunics and breeches of a prince, perhaps in rich wools or silks, with simple leather boots. During his travels, his attire would become more practical: sturdy linen shirts, leather jerkins, and durable trousers, possibly with a cloak for protection against the elements.

Wants: To find and reunite with the beautiful peahen girl he fell in love with, and to understand the mystery of the golden apple tree.

Flaw: His initial naivety and susceptibility to trickery (falling asleep due to the bellows). His deep emotional attachment can make him vulnerable.

Transforms from a somewhat sheltered prince into a determined, resourceful hero who overcomes obstacles and outwits adversaries to achieve his goal. He learns to trust his instincts and to be wary of deception.

His determined, unwavering gaze, often accompanied by a slight, hopeful smile.

Determined, persistent, loyal, observant, and somewhat naive at first. He is deeply devoted to the peahen girl.

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Peahen Girl / Queen

magical creature (peahen) / human young adult female

Exquisitely beautiful, with a graceful and slender figure. Her presence is described as illuminating the entire palace, suggesting an ethereal glow.

Attire: As a human, she likely wears flowing, elegant gowns of fine silk or brocade, perhaps in shades of gold, cream, or peacock blue, reflecting her peahen form. These would be styled in a manner befitting royalty of a fantastical European setting, with delicate embroidery or subtle embellishments. As a peahen, she is described as a 'golden peahen', implying shimmering, metallic-gold feathers.

Wants: To visit the golden apple tree and eventually to be reunited with the King's Youngest Son.

Flaw: Vulnerable to magical interference, as shown when her curl is cut, breaking her connection to the prince.

Initially a mysterious, magical visitor, she becomes a captive queen who is eventually rescued and reunited with her love, becoming a reigning queen herself.

Her long, lustrous golden hair, especially the single curl that is cut.

Kind, gentle, appreciative, and loving. She is also resilient and resourceful, able to transform and evade her captors.

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Old Woman (Queen of the Lake)

human (implied witch or sorceress) elderly female

A wizened old woman, likely with a stooped posture and gin-like hands. Her features would be sharp and perhaps unpleasant, reflecting her malicious nature.

Attire: Simple, dark, and practical peasant-like clothing, perhaps a coarse wool dress and a dark headscarf, but with an underlying sense of power. Not overtly regal despite being called 'queen' of the lake, suggesting a more rustic, witch-like authority.

Wants: To prevent the King's Youngest Son from finding the peahens and to secure him as a husband for her daughter, thereby gaining his wealth.

Flaw: Her overconfidence and underestimation of the prince's persistence and the loyalty of the magical creatures.

Remains consistently antagonistic, her schemes failing one by one until she is outwitted by the prince.

Her sharp, cunning eyes peering from beneath a dark headscarf.

Cunning, malicious, envious, possessive, and cruel. She is determined to keep the prince from the peahens and to marry him to her daughter.

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The Mare (Magical Horse)

magical horse adult female

Initially appears as a 'leprous horse' – scabby, sickly, and neglected. After being curried, she transforms into a magnificent, golden-shining horse, swift and powerful.

Attire: None, but her appearance changes dramatically.

Wants: To escape the Old Woman's cruelty and help the King's Youngest Son.

Flaw: Vulnerable to the Old Woman's magic and physical abuse, requiring the prince's intervention.

Transforms from an abused, sickly creature into a powerful, golden, loyal companion, finally finding freedom and purpose.

Her shimmering, golden coat, especially after her transformation.

Loyal, intelligent, powerful, and a friend to the prince. She is also resentful of her cruel mistress.

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The Dragon

dragon ageless male

A formidable and powerful creature, likely large and imposing, with scales and wings. His presence inspires fear.

Attire: None, but his scales might be described as armor-like.

Wants: To keep the Peahen Girl as his queen and to retrieve her when she escapes.

Flaw: His reliance on his horse and his inability to outwit the prince's magical horse.

Remains a static antagonist, ultimately defeated by the combined efforts of the prince and the magical horses.

His powerful, scaly form, perhaps with large, leathery wings.

Possessive, vengeful, and somewhat impatient. He is driven by a desire to reclaim what he considers his.

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The Dragon's Horse

magical horse adult male

A powerful and swift horse, capable of carrying a dragon. Implied to be strong and fast.

Attire: None.

Wants: To escape its servitude to the Dragon and join its magical kin.

Flaw: Bound to the Dragon until persuaded otherwise.

Initially a tool of the antagonist, it rebels and joins the protagonist's side, finding freedom.

Its powerful, dark form, with a hint of weariness in its eyes.

Intelligent, weary of its master, and ultimately sympathetic to its magical 'brother' (the prince's horse).

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The Servant

human adult male

Likely of average build and height, unremarkable in appearance, allowing him to blend into the background.

Attire: Simple, practical livery or common clothes, such as a coarse tunic and trousers, in muted colors like grey or brown.

Wants: To gain personal profit by betraying his master.

Flaw: His greed and lack of loyalty make him easily manipulated.

Remains a static character, acting as a tool for the antagonist, and is eventually dismissed or punished (implied by the prince's anger).

His shifty eyes and the small bellows he carries.

Mischievous, greedy, and easily bribed. Lacks loyalty.

Locations

King's Palace Garden with Golden Apple-Tree

outdoor night Implied temperate climate, clear nights for watching stars and moonlight.

A royal garden situated directly in front of the king's palace. The central feature is a golden apple-tree that blossoms, bears fruit, and loses it all in a single night. The tree's shining apples illuminate the entire palace at midnight. The ground beneath is suitable for lying down to watch.

Mood: Mysterious, watchful, later romantic and then tense.

The youngest prince successfully guards the tree, meets the peahen princess, and later the old woman's betrayal occurs here.

golden apple-tree palace facade (implied) ground beneath the tree bed/sleeping mat nine peahens (transforming into a beautiful girl)

Old Queen's Palace by the Lake

indoor Implied temperate climate, possibly warm given the bathing activity.

A large and beautiful palace situated right by a lake. It is the residence of an old queen and her daughter. The interior likely contains living quarters, and the exterior provides access to the lake shore.

Mood: Deceptive, alluring, with an underlying sense of danger.

The prince seeks information about the peahens here, is tempted by the queen's daughter, and is repeatedly tricked into falling asleep by the lake.

large palace (unspecified architectural style, but could be Eastern European/Balkan influenced) lake old queen queen's daughter

Lake Shore

outdoor midday Sunny, clear weather suitable for bathing.

The edge of a large lake, where the nine peahens come every midday to bathe. The prince waits here, often on horseback, and is repeatedly put to sleep.

Mood: Frustrating, magical, serene but with hidden treachery.

The prince attempts to meet the peahen princess but is repeatedly thwarted by his servant's betrayal.

lake water shoreline prince on horseback nine peahens (bathing)

Dragon's Palace

indoor day Unspecified, but likely a dramatic, imposing setting.

A palace, implied to be grand and formidable, where the queen (the peahen princess) is held captive by the dragon. It is the final destination of the prince's quest before their escape.

Mood: Imposing, dangerous, but ultimately a place of rescue.

The prince arrives, rescues the queen, and they begin their escape.

dragon's palace architecture queen (peahen princess) dragon