The Enchanted Waterfall
by Unknown · from Tales of Wonder Every Child Should Know
Adapted Version
Once there was a boy named Kito. He cut wood every day. He helped his family. He loved his Mama and Papa very much. Papa was often thirsty. Papa wanted something sweet. He was a little grumpy. Mama was always happy. Kito worked very hard. He loved his family.
One day Kito cut wood. He worked in the forest. He heard splashing water. The water splashed loudly. He walked and walked. The sound got louder. He found a big waterfall. The waterfall was tall. It was very pretty. The water sparkled brightly.
Kito drank the water. He used his hand. The water was cool. It was sweet juice! It tasted like honey. It was the best juice. He loved the juice. He felt very happy.
Kito filled his cup. He filled the cup full. He ran home fast. He gave juice to Papa. Papa drank the juice. Papa drank it all. Papa loved the juice. Papa smiled a big smile. Papa was happy now.
A neighbor came to visit. He saw the sweet juice. The neighbor was surprised. Kito told him the story. The neighbor told other people. Everyone heard the news. News went to the village.
Next day Kito went back. He walked to the waterfall. Many people were there. They all wanted juice. They had big cups. They had big jars. They stood in a line.
The people drank the water. They drank it from their cups. It was not sweet juice. It was just cold water. It tasted plain. They were very sad. They felt confused. They did not like it. They dropped their cups.
People asked, "Where is juice?" They looked around. Kito hid. He hid behind a big rock. Kito stayed very still. The people did not understand. They were very confused. They went home then. They left the waterfall.
The people went home. Kito came out now. He walked to the waterfall. He drank the water. It was sweet juice again! It tasted so good. Kito loved the juice. Kito smiled a big smile.
The King heard about Kito. He heard the good story. A messenger told him. The King heard about the juice. He heard about the kind boy.
The King said Kito was kind. He was kind to his Papa. The King gave Kito a big gift. It was a golden box. Kito and family were happy. Kito smiled. His Papa smiled. His Mama smiled. They were all happy. They lived a good life.
Original Story
The Enchanted Waterfall
nce upon a time, there lived alone with his father and mother a simple young wood-cutter. He worked all day on the lonely hillside, or among the shady trees of the forest. But, work as hard as he might, he was still very poor, and could bring home but little money to his old father and mother. This grieved him very much, for he was an affectionate and dutiful son.
For himself he had but few wants and was easily pleased. His mother, too, was always cheerful and contented. The old father, however, was of a selfish disposition, and often grumbled at the poor supper of rice, washed down with weak tea, or, if times were very bad, with a cup of hot water.
"If we had but a little saké, now," he would say, "it would warm one up, and do one's heart good." And then he would reproach the simple young fellow, vowing that in his young days he had always been able to afford a cup of saké for himself and his friends.
Grieved at heart, the young man would work harder than ever and think to himself: "How shall I earn some more money? How shall I get a little saké for my poor father, who really needs it in his weakness and old age?"
He was thinking in this way to himself one day as he was at work on the wooded hills, when the sound of rushing water caught his ear. He had often worked in the same spot before, and could not remember that there was any torrent or waterfall near. So, feeling rather surprised, he followed the sound, which got louder and louder until at last he came upon a beautiful little cascade.
The water looked so clear and cool that he stooped down where it was flowing away in a quiet stream, and, using his hand as a cup, drank a little of it. What was his amazement to find that instead of water it was the most excellent saké!
Overjoyed at this discovery, he quickly filled the gourd which was hanging at his girdle, and made the best of his way home, rejoicing that now at last he had something good to bring back to his poor old father. The old man was so delighted with the saké that he drank cup after cup. A neighbour happened to drop in, the story was told to him, and a cup of saké offered and drunk with many words of astonishment and gratitude.
Soon the news spread through the village, and before night there was hardly a man in the place who had not paid his visit of curiosity, been told the tale of the magic fountain, and smelt the gourd, which, alas! was now empty.
Next morning the young wood-cutter set off to work earlier even than usual, not forgetting to carry with him a large gourd, for of course the enchanted waterfall was to be visited again.
What was the surprise of the young man when he came to the spot, to find several of his neighbours already there, and all armed with buckets, jars, pitchers, anything that would carry a good supply of the coveted saké. Each man had come secretly, believing that he alone had found his way to the magic waterfall.
The young wood-cutter was amused to see the looks of disappointment and anger upon the faces of those who already stood near the water, as they saw fresh arrivals every moment. Each one looked abashed and uncomfortable in the presence of his neighbours; but, at last, one bolder than the others broke the grim silence with a laugh, which soon the others were fain to join in.
"Here we are," said he, "all bent on the same errand. Let us fill our jars and gourds and go home. But first—just one taste of the magic saké." He stooped down and, filling his gourd, put it to his lips. Once and yet again did he drink, with a face of astonishment which soon gave place to anger.
"Water!" he shouted in a rage; "nothing but cold water! We have been tricked and deceived by a parcel of made-up stories—where is that young fellow? Let us duck him in his fine waterfall!"
But the young man had been wise enough to slip behind a big rock when he saw the turn things were taking, and was nowhere to be found.
First one and then another tasted of the stream. It was but too true; no saké, but clear, cold water was there. Crestfallen and out of temper, the covetous band returned to their homes.
When they were fairly gone the good young wood-cutter crept from his hiding-place. "Could this be true," he thought, "or was it all a dream? At any rate," said he, "I must taste once more for myself." He filled the gourd and drank. Sure enough, there was the same fine-flavoured saké he had tasted yesterday. And so it remained. To the good, dutiful son the cascade flowed with the finest saké, while to all others it yielded only cold water.
The emperor, hearing this wonderful story, sent for the good young wood-cutter, rewarded him for his kindness to his father, and even changed the name of the year in his honour as an encouragement to children in all future time to honour and obey their parents.
Story DNA
Moral
True kindness and filial devotion are rewarded, while greed and selfishness are met with disappointment.
Plot Summary
A poor but dutiful young wood-cutter struggles to provide for his demanding father. One day, he discovers a magical waterfall that flows with saké, which he brings home to his delighted father. News of the magic spreads, and greedy villagers rush to the waterfall, only to find it yields only cold water for them. Enraged, they seek to harm the wood-cutter, who hides. After they leave, the waterfall again flows with saké for the virtuous son. The Emperor, hearing of his filial piety, rewards him and renames the year in his honor.
Themes
Emotional Arc
struggle to contentment to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This story reflects traditional Japanese values emphasizing respect for elders and the idea that good deeds are divinely or magically rewarded.
Plot Beats (12)
- A poor but dutiful young wood-cutter works hard to support his parents, especially his grumbling, selfish father.
- One day, while working, he hears rushing water and discovers a beautiful cascade he's never seen before.
- He drinks from the waterfall and is astonished to find it is delicious saké, not water.
- He fills his gourd and rushes home, presenting the saké to his delighted father.
- A neighbor visits, hears the story, tastes the saké, and the news of the magic waterfall spreads quickly through the village.
- The next morning, the wood-cutter returns to the waterfall, only to find many greedy neighbors already there with containers.
- The villagers, each believing they alone would find the magic, are abashed but decide to taste the saké.
- To their anger and disappointment, the waterfall yields only cold water for them.
- Enraged, the villagers accuse the wood-cutter of deceit and threaten him, but he wisely hides behind a rock.
- After the crestfallen villagers leave, the wood-cutter emerges and tastes the water, finding it is still saké for him.
- The story of the enchanted waterfall and the wood-cutter's virtue reaches the Emperor.
- The Emperor rewards the wood-cutter for his kindness and devotion to his father, even renaming the year in his honor to encourage filial piety.
Characters
The Young Wood-Cutter
Of average height and lean build, accustomed to physical labor from his daily work. His hands are likely calloused from handling an axe and wood. His skin is probably tanned from working outdoors on the hillsides.
Attire: Simple, practical working clothes typical of a Japanese wood-cutter of the era: a dark indigo or brown cotton kimono, possibly patched, tied with a simple obi sash. He would wear straw sandals (zori) or geta (wooden clogs) and a straw hat (kasa) for sun protection. He carries a small, natural gourd hanging from his girdle.
Wants: To provide for and honor his elderly parents, especially to alleviate his father's grumbling and bring him comfort.
Flaw: His simplicity and desire to please his father initially make him vulnerable to his father's complaints, driving him to overwork.
Begins as a struggling, dutiful son burdened by poverty and his father's complaints. Discovers the magical waterfall, which validates his kindness and provides for his family. Ends up honored by the Emperor, becoming a symbol of filial piety.
Affectionate, dutiful, hardworking, simple, kind, observant, wise.
The Old Father
Frail and aged, likely with a slight stoop from age. His body would show the signs of a lifetime of hard work, now weakened.
Attire: Simple, worn cotton kimono, likely in muted tones of grey or brown, possibly patched. He would wear a padded jacket (tanzen) for warmth indoors and simple indoor sandals (uwabaki) or go barefoot.
Wants: To alleviate his discomforts and enjoy small luxuries like saké, believing he deserves them in his old age.
Flaw: His selfishness and tendency to complain, which burdens his son.
Begins as a grumbling, selfish old man. Becomes delighted and contented by the saké from the enchanted waterfall, his complaints ceasing. He does not undergo a significant internal change, but his circumstances improve.
Selfish, grumbling, discontented, demanding, easily pleased when his desires are met.
The Mother
An elderly woman, likely thin but resilient, showing the signs of a life of hard work and frugality.
Attire: Simple, clean, and mended cotton kimono, likely in muted colors like faded blue or brown. She would wear a practical apron over it for household chores.
Wants: To maintain peace and contentment within her small family, supporting her son.
Flaw: None explicitly stated, she seems to be a source of quiet strength.
Remains a constant, cheerful presence. Her contentment highlights the contrast with her husband's grumbling.
Cheerful, contented, supportive, undemanding.
The Emperor
A figure of authority and dignity, likely of a refined build. His appearance would command respect.
Attire: Elaborate silk court robes (sokutai or similar formal attire) in rich colors like deep purple, gold, or crimson, possibly embroidered with imperial symbols like dragons or chrysanthemums. He would wear a formal headwear (kanmuri) and possibly hold a ceremonial scepter or fan.
Wants: To uphold moral values, reward good deeds, and encourage filial piety among his subjects.
Flaw: None shown, he represents ultimate authority and wisdom.
Appears at the end to provide a just resolution and moral lesson, reinforcing the story's theme.
Wise, just, benevolent, appreciative of virtue.
The Covetous Neighbors
A group of various adult men from the village, likely of average build, some perhaps stockier from farm work. Their appearance would be common and unrefined.
Attire: Simple, practical working clothes similar to the wood-cutter, but perhaps less clean or more varied. Cotton kimonos in muted colors, possibly with patched areas, tied with simple obi sashes. They would wear straw sandals or geta.
Wants: To gain personal wealth and pleasure (saké) without effort, driven by envy and greed.
Flaw: Their greed and lack of a pure heart, which prevents them from accessing the magic of the waterfall.
Begin as curious and greedy, hoping to exploit the magic waterfall. They are thwarted by their own impure intentions, learning nothing and returning home crestfallen and angry.
Covetous, greedy, suspicious, easily angered, quick to blame, lacking in filial piety.
Locations
Wooded Hillside
A lonely, sloped terrain covered with dense Japanese forest trees, likely maples, pines, and bamboo, where the wood-cutter performs his daily labor. The ground is uneven, covered with fallen leaves and branches.
Mood: Initially solitary and arduous, later becomes a place of discovery and wonder.
The wood-cutter works here daily and first hears the sound of the enchanted waterfall.
Enchanted Waterfall
A beautiful, small cascade of water flowing down moss-covered rocks into a quiet stream. The water is exceptionally clear and cool, appearing like regular water but tasting like fine saké to the virtuous. Surrounded by lush Japanese foliage.
Mood: Magical, surprising, initially joyful, then tense and eventually serene for the protagonist.
The wood-cutter discovers the saké waterfall, and later, the villagers attempt to claim it, only to find it yields only water to them.
Wood-cutter's Humble Home
A simple, traditional Japanese minka-style house, likely with a thatched roof and sliding shoji screens. The interior is sparse, with tatami mats on the floor and a small, low table for meals. A warm, but modest, hearth provides heat.
Mood: Initially poor and somewhat discontented due to the father's grumbling, but becomes joyful and celebratory with the arrival of the saké.
The wood-cutter brings the first gourd of saké home, delighting his father and spreading the news to a neighbor.