The Hermit
by Unknown · from Tales of Wonder Every Child Should Know
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Zadig was a young man. He lived in a big city. Zadig was often sad. He saw many bad things happen. He did not know why. He thought about why bad things happen. He felt confused and a little angry.
One day, Zadig met an old man. The old man was a hermit. He had a long white beard. He read a big, special book. Zadig asked him about the book. The Hermit was kind. Zadig liked the Hermit. He promised to stay with him. He promised to be patient.
They went to a big house. A Rich Man lived there. He had many shiny things. He was not very kind. He did not look at them. They ate good food. They washed their hands. A golden bowl was there. The Hermit took the golden bowl. Zadig saw him.
Next, they went to a small house. A Grumpy Man lived there. He was not nice. He gave them old food. The Hermit ate it all. He gave the Grumpy Man the golden bowl. He gave him two gold coins too.
Zadig was very confused. Zadig asked, "Why did you do that?" The Hermit smiled. He said, "Rich Man will learn." He will learn to share. He said, "Grumpy Man will learn kindness."
They went to a new house. A Wise Man lived there. He was very kind. He gave them good beds. He gave them good food. In the morning, the Hermit did something strange. He made the Wise Man's house go away!
Zadig was very surprised. He was also scared. He did not know this. The Hermit held his arm. The Hermit was calm. He said, "Wait and see." He said, "Do not worry." Zadig was still confused.
They walked to a new place. A Kind Woman lived there. She had a Young Boy. The boy was her only joy. She was good to them. The next day, the boy helped them. He showed them a big bridge.
On the bridge, the Hermit stopped the boy. He showed Zadig a picture. Zadig saw the boy in the future. The boy was very mean in the picture. He would do bad things. The Hermit sent the boy away. He sent him to a special place. The boy would learn to be good there.
Zadig was very, very angry. His face was red. He yelled at the Hermit. He said, "Why did you do that?" He said, "This is not right!" He did not know.
Then, the Hermit changed. His beard was gone. His face was young. He had big white wings. He was an angel! His name was Angel Jezrael. The Angel Jezrael spoke. He said, "I help you see."
Angel Jezrael explained things. He said, "The house hid gold." He said, "Now he will find it." He said, "Boy would do bad things." Now he will learn to be good. He will be happy.
Angel Jezrael told Zadig, "You cannot always see the big plan. People do not know all things. At times things look bad. But they are part of a bigger, good plan. You must trust the big plan. You must not be sad."
The Angel Jezrael flew up. He went to the sky. Zadig watched him go. Zadig felt calm. He felt happy. He knew now. He knew the big plan was good. He trusted it.
Zadig learned a big lesson. He knew that a secret, good plan was always working. He felt happy and calm. He trusted the big plan.
Original Story
The Hermit
n the reign of King Moabdar there lived at Babylon a young man named Zadig. He was handsome, rich, and naturally good-hearted; and at the moment when this story opens, he was travelling on foot to see the world, and to learn philosophy and wisdom. But, hitherto, he had encountered so much misery, and endured so many terrible disasters, that he had become tempted to rebel against the will of Heaven, and to believe that the Providence which rules the world neglects the good and lets the evil prosper. In this unhappy spirit he was one day walking on the banks of the Euphrates, when he chanced to meet a venerable hermit, whose snowy beard descended to his girdle, and who carried in his hand a scroll which he was reading with attention. Zadig stopped, and made him a low bow. The hermit returned the salutation with an air so kindly, and so noble, that Zadig felt a curiosity to speak to him. He inquired what scroll was that which he was reading.
"It is the Book of Destiny," replied the hermit; "would you like to read it?"
He handed it to Zadig; but the latter, though he knew a dozen languages, could not understand a word of it. His curiosity increased.
"You appear to be in trouble," said the kindly hermit.
"Alas!" said Zadig, "I have cause to be so."
"If you will allow me," said the hermit, "I will accompany you. Perhaps I may be useful to you. I am sometimes able to console the sorrowful."
Zadig felt a deep respect for the appearance, the white beard, and the mysterious scroll of the old hermit, and perceived that his conversation was that of a superior mind. The old man spoke of destiny, of justice, of morality, of the chief good of life, of human frailty, of virtue, and of vice, with so much power and eloquence, that Zadig felt himself attracted by a kind of charm, and besought the hermit not to leave him until they should return to Babylon.
"I ask you the same favour," said the hermit. "Promise me that, whatever I may do, you will keep me company for several days."
Zadig gave the promise; and they set forth together.
That night the travellers arrived at a grand mansion. The hermit begged for food and lodging for himself and his companion. The porter, who might have been mistaken for a prince, ushered them in with a contemptuous air of welcome. The chief servant showed them the magnificent apartments; and they were then admitted to the bottom of the table, where the master of the mansion did not condescend to cast a glance at them. They were, however, served with delicacies in profusion, and, after dinner, washed their hands in a golden basin set with emeralds and rubies. They were then conducted for the night into a beautiful apartment; and the next morning, before they left the castle, a servant brought them each a piece of gold.
"The master of the house," said Zadig, as they went their way, "appears to be a generous man, although a trifle haughty. He practises a noble hospitality." As he spoke he perceived that a kind of large pouch which the hermit carried appeared singularly distended; within it was the golden basin, set with precious stones, which the old man had purloined. Zadig was amazed; but he said nothing.
At noon the hermit stopped before a little house, in which lived a wealthy miser, and once more asked for hospitality. An old valet in a shabby coat received them very rudely, showed them into the stable, and set before them a few rotten olives, some moldy bread, and beer which had turned sour. The hermit ate and drank with as much content as he had shown the night before; then, addressing the old valet, who had kept his eye upon them to make sure that they stole nothing, he gave him the two gold pieces which they had received that morning, and thanked him for his kind attention. "Be so good," he added, "as to let me see your master."
The astonished valet showed them in.
"Most mighty signor," said the hermit, "I can only render you my humble thanks for the noble manner in which you have received us. I beseech you to accept this golden basin as a token of my gratitude."
The miser almost fell backwards with amazement. The hermit, without waiting for him to recover, set off with speed with his companion.
"Holy Father," said Zadig, "what does all this mean? You seem to me to resemble other men in nothing. You steal a golden basin set with jewels from a signor who receives you with magnificence, and you give it to a curmudgeon who treats you with indignity."
"My son," replied the hermit, "this mighty lord, who only welcomes travellers through vanity, and to display his riches, will henceforth grow wiser, while the miser will be taught to practise hospitality. Be amazed at nothing, and follow me."
Zadig knew not whether he was dealing with the most foolish or the wisest of all men. But the hermit spoke with such ascendancy that Zadig, who, besides, was fettered by his promise, had no choice except to follow him.
That night they came to an agreeable house, of simple aspect, and showing signs neither of prodigality nor avarice. The owner was a philosopher, who had left the world, and who studied peacefully the rules of virtue and of wisdom, and who yet was happy and contented. He had built this calm retreat to please himself, and he received the strangers in it with a frankness which displayed no sign of ostentation. He conducted them himself to a comfortable chamber, where he made them rest awhile; then he returned to lead them to a dainty little supper. During their conversation they agreed that the affairs of this world are not always regulated by the opinions of the wisest men, but the hermit still maintained that the ways of Providence are wrapped in mystery, and that men do wrong to pass judgment on a universe of which they only see the smallest part. Zadig wondered how a person who committed such mad acts could reason so correctly.
At length, after a conversation as agreeable as instructive, the host conducted the two travellers to their apartment, and thanked Heaven for sending him two visitors so wise and virtuous. He offered them some money, but so frankly that they could not feel offended. The old man declined, and desired to say farewell, as he intended to depart for Babylon at break of day. They therefore parted on the warmest terms, and Zadig, above all, was filled with kindly feelings toward so amiable a man.
When the hermit and himself were in their chamber, they spent some time in praises of their host. At break of day the old man woke his comrade.
"We must be going," he remarked. "But while every one is still asleep, I wish to leave this worthy man a pledge of my esteem." With these words he took a torch and set the house on fire.
Zadig burst forth into cries of horror, and would have stopped the frightful act. But the hermit, by superior strength, drew him away. The house was in a blaze; and the old man, who was now a good way off with his companion, looked back calmly at the burning pile.
"Heaven be praised!" he cried, "our kind host's house is destroyed from top to bottom."
At these words Zadig knew not whether he should burst out laughing, call the reverend father an old rascal, knock him down, or run away. But he did neither. Still subdued by the superior manner of the hermit, he followed him against his will to their next lodging.
This was the dwelling of a good and charitable widow, who had a nephew of fourteen, her only hope and joy. She did her best to use the travellers well; and the next morning she bade her nephew guide them safely past a certain bridge, which, having recently been broken, had become dangerous to cross over. The youth, eager to oblige them, led the way.
"Come," said the hermit, when they were half across the bridge, "I must show my gratitude toward your aunt;" and as he spoke he seized the young man by the hair and threw him into the river. The youth fell, reappeared for an instant on the surface, and then was swallowed by the torrent.
"Oh, monster!" exclaimed Zadig, "ah, most detestable of men—"
"You promised me more patience," interrupted the old man. "Listen! Beneath the ruins of that house which Providence saw fit to set on fire, the owner will discover an enormous treasure; while this young man, whose existence Providence cut short, would have killed his aunt within a year, and you yourself in two."
"Who told you so, barbarian?" cried Zadig; "and even if you read the issue in your Book of Destiny, who gave you power to drown a youth who never injured you?"
While he spoke, he saw that the old man had a beard no longer, and that his face had become fair and young; his hermit's frock had disappeared; four white wings covered his majestic form, and shone with dazzling lustre.
"Angel of heaven," cried Zadig, "you are then descended from the skies to teach an erring mortal to submit to the eternal laws."
"Men," replied the angel Jezrael, "judge all things without knowledge; and you, of all men, most deserved to be enlightened. The world imagines that the youth who has just perished fell by chance into the water, and that by a like chance the rich man's house was set on fire. But there is no such thing as chance; all is trial, or punishment, or foresight. Feeble mortal, cease to argue and rebel against what you ought to adore!"
As he spoke these words the angel took his flight to heaven, and Zadig fell upon his knees.
Story DNA
Moral
Human beings, with their limited understanding, should not question or judge the mysterious ways of divine Providence, as all events serve a greater, often unseen, purpose.
Plot Summary
Disillusioned by life's misfortunes, Zadig questions divine justice. He encounters a mysterious hermit who performs a series of seemingly cruel and illogical acts: stealing from a generous lord to give to a miser, burning down a kind philosopher's house, and drowning a charitable widow's nephew. Zadig's horror and outrage grow with each incident. Finally, the hermit reveals himself as the angel Jezrael, explaining that his actions were divinely ordained to bring about greater good—the lord's humility, the miser's hospitality, the philosopher's treasure, and the prevention of future crimes. Zadig, humbled and enlightened, learns to trust in the inscrutable ways of Providence.
Themes
Emotional Arc
doubt to enlightenment
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This story is a philosophical tale by Voltaire, part of his larger work 'Zadig or The Book of Fate,' reflecting Enlightenment-era debates on free will, determinism, and the problem of evil. It's a critique of Leibniz's optimism.
Plot Beats (14)
- Zadig, a young man in Babylon, is disillusioned by suffering and questions divine justice.
- He meets a venerable hermit reading the 'Book of Destiny' and agrees to travel with him, promising patience.
- They are lavishly hosted by a haughty lord; the hermit steals a golden basin from him.
- They are rudely treated by a miser; the hermit gives him the stolen golden basin and two gold pieces.
- Zadig is confused by the hermit's contradictory actions, but the hermit explains that the lord will learn humility and the miser hospitality.
- They are kindly hosted by a wise philosopher; the hermit, in the morning, sets the philosopher's house on fire.
- Zadig is horrified but is restrained by the hermit, who calmly watches the house burn.
- They are hosted by a charitable widow and her beloved nephew, who guides them across a dangerous bridge.
- Mid-bridge, the hermit throws the nephew into the river, drowning him.
- Zadig explodes in outrage, calling the hermit a monster.
- The hermit transforms into the angel Jezrael, revealing his true identity and purpose.
- Jezrael explains that the burning house contained a hidden treasure for the philosopher, and the drowned nephew would have become a murderer.
- Jezrael teaches Zadig that human judgment is limited and all events, though seemingly random or cruel, are part of a divine plan.
- The angel ascends to heaven, leaving Zadig humbled and enlightened.
Characters
Zadig
Handsome and well-built, as befits a young man of means and a traveler. His features are likely consistent with a person from ancient Babylon, suggesting a warm, olive skin tone.
Attire: Practical but well-made traveling clothes suitable for walking long distances, yet reflecting his wealth. Perhaps a tunic of fine linen or wool, possibly with subtle embroidery, worn over trousers, and sturdy leather sandals. He would carry a simple cloak for warmth and protection.
Wants: To understand the world, find wisdom, and reconcile his perception of injustice with the idea of divine Providence. He seeks meaning and peace of mind.
Flaw: His inability to comprehend divine justice, leading him to judge events based on human perception and rebel against what he sees as unfairness.
Transforms from a man rebellious against fate and despairing of the world's injustices to one who humbly submits to the mysterious ways of Providence and understands that all events serve a higher purpose.
Good-hearted, curious, philosophical, initially rebellious against fate, easily astonished, respectful, and ultimately submissive to divine will.
The Hermit / Angel Jezrael
As the hermit: A venerable old man, tall and slender, with a commanding presence. As the angel: Majestic and radiant, with a youthful, fair appearance.
Attire: As the hermit: A simple, coarse hermit's frock, likely made of rough wool or linen in a muted, earthy color, suggesting asceticism. As the angel: Four large, white, luminous wings covering his majestic form, shining with dazzling luster, replacing the frock.
Wants: To enlighten Zadig and teach him to submit to the eternal laws of Providence, demonstrating that human judgment is limited and often flawed.
Flaw: None, as an angel, he represents divine perfection and purpose.
Reveals his true angelic form and purpose, fulfilling his mission to teach Zadig.
Wise, mysterious, authoritative, benevolent (despite seemingly cruel actions), patient, eloquent, and deeply understanding of divine will.
The Haughty Lord
A man of significant wealth, likely well-fed and accustomed to luxury. His build might be robust, reflecting a life of ease.
Attire: Magnificent and opulent attire, likely flowing robes of fine silk or brocade in rich colors, possibly adorned with gold embroidery or jewels, indicative of his vanity and desire to display wealth. A jeweled turban might complete his look.
Wants: To display his riches and vanity through superficial hospitality.
Flaw: His excessive pride and vanity, which the hermit exploits to teach him a lesson.
Implied to become wiser after the theft of his golden basin, learning that true hospitality is not about display.
Haughty, vain, ostentatious, and generous only for show.
The Miser
Likely thin and gaunt from his miserly habits, with an unkempt appearance. His features might be sharp or pinched.
Attire: Shabby and worn clothes, despite his wealth, reflecting his unwillingness to spend. Perhaps a faded, patched tunic and simple, worn sandals.
Wants: To hoard his wealth and avoid spending, even on basic hospitality.
Flaw: His extreme avarice, which prevents him from practicing any form of generosity or kindness.
Implied to be taught to practice hospitality after receiving the valuable golden basin, potentially changing his ways.
Miserly, unwelcoming, suspicious, and astonished by unexpected generosity.
The Philosopher Host
A man of simple aspect, neither extravagant nor impoverished. Likely a calm and thoughtful demeanor.
Attire: Simple, comfortable, and well-maintained clothes, perhaps a plain linen tunic and trousers, in earthy or muted tones, reflecting his detachment from worldly ostentation.
Wants: To live a life of virtue and wisdom, detached from worldly concerns, and to offer genuine, unpretentious hospitality.
Flaw: His house is destroyed by the angel, which, from a human perspective, is a great loss, though it leads to a greater discovery.
His house is destroyed, leading him to discover a hidden treasure, which serves a higher purpose in the divine plan.
Wise, virtuous, contented, frank, hospitable without ostentation, and peaceful.
The Charitable Widow
A kind and caring woman, likely with a gentle demeanor. Her appearance would reflect her charitable nature, perhaps a modest but neat presentation.
Attire: Modest but clean and well-kept clothing, perhaps a simple dress or tunic in muted colors, reflecting her charitable but not wealthy status.
Wants: To care for her nephew and offer hospitality to travelers.
Flaw: Her love for her nephew, who is unknowingly destined to harm her.
Unknowingly saved from her nephew's future harm by the angel's intervention.
Good, charitable, kind, and loving towards her nephew.
The Widow's Nephew
A youth of fourteen, likely slender and active. His appearance would be typical of a young boy from the region, perhaps with an olive complexion.
Attire: Simple, practical clothes suitable for a young boy, perhaps a tunic and trousers in plain fabric, and sturdy sandals.
Wants: To assist his aunt and guide the travelers safely.
Flaw: His innocence and trust, which lead him to his untimely death.
Drowned by the angel to prevent him from committing future crimes, a tragic but divinely ordained end.
Eager to oblige, helpful, and innocent.
Locations
Banks of the Euphrates River
A natural setting along the wide, historic Euphrates River, likely with some vegetation along its banks. The air is open and the light is natural, reflecting Zadig's solitary journey.
Mood: Contemplative, initially melancholic for Zadig, then mysterious with the hermit's appearance.
Zadig, in despair, meets the mysterious hermit and begins his journey of enlightenment.
Magnificent Babylonian Mansion
A grand, opulent mansion reflecting Abbasid-era Babylonian wealth, with magnificent apartments, possibly featuring muqarnas vaults, intricate geometric tile mosaics, and rich textiles. Golden basins set with emeralds and rubies are used for washing hands, indicating extreme luxury.
Mood: Ostentatious, haughty, yet superficially generous.
The hermit steals a golden basin from the vain, wealthy host.
Miser's Small, Shabby House
A small, unkempt house belonging to a wealthy miser. The interior is likely sparse and neglected, with a stable for lodging and a rude, suspicious valet. The overall impression is one of stinginess and discomfort.
Mood: Unwelcoming, stingy, uncomfortable.
The hermit gives the stolen golden basin to the miser, teaching him a lesson in hospitality.
Philosopher's Calm Retreat
An agreeable house of simple aspect, showing neither prodigality nor avarice. It's a calm retreat built for study and virtue, likely with clean, functional spaces, comfortable chambers, and a dainty supper area. The architecture would be modest but well-maintained, perhaps with a small, enclosed garden.
Mood: Peaceful, virtuous, intellectual, then dramatically destructive.
The hermit sets fire to the philosopher's house, revealing a hidden treasure beneath its ruins.
Broken Bridge over a River
A dangerous, recently broken bridge spanning a river, likely made of wood or stone, with gaps or unstable sections. The river below is a torrent, indicating strong currents. The surrounding area is natural, possibly with riverine vegetation.
Mood: Perilous, tragic, then revealing divine intervention.
The hermit throws the nephew into the river, revealing his true identity as the angel Jezrael and explaining the divine purpose behind his actions.