The Many-Furred Creature

by Unknown · from The Fairy Ring

fairy tale transformation hopeful Ages 8-14 2169 words 10 min read
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Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 559 words 3 min Canon 100/100

Once, a queen had golden hair. She was pretty. She became sick. She told the King, 'Promise me. Marry a queen like me. She must have golden hair.' The King promised. She died.

Years passed. The Old King had a daughter. Her name was Princess Lily. She had golden hair. She was pretty. The Old King wanted her to marry. He chose a mean king. Princess Lily did not like him.

Princess Lily was very sad. She thought of a plan. 'I need three dresses,' she said. 'One like the sun. One like the moon. One like the stars.' She asked for a cloak. 'It must have many furs,' she said. She thought this was hard.

The Old King got all the things. Princess Lily was scared. She took a gold ring. She took a gold spinning wheel. She took a gold reel. She put the dresses in a nut. She put on the furry cloak. She made her face dirty with soot. She ran away.

Princess Lily walked all night. She came to a big forest. She found a hollow tree. She hid inside it. She fell asleep. Prince Leo hunted in this forest. His dogs found the tree. They barked loudly.

Hunters looked inside the tree. They saw the furry cloak. 'What is this thing?' they asked. They took her to the castle. She looked very dirty. They called her Furry Maid. She worked in the kitchen. She cleaned and cooked.

One night, a big party happened. Furry Maid went to her room. She washed off the soot. She put on the sun dress. It shone like gold. She went to the party. Prince Leo danced with her. She put a small stone in his soup. Then she ran away.

Prince Leo ate the soup. He found the small stone. He called the Cook. 'Who made this soup?' he asked. The Cook said, 'Furry Maid made it.' Leo asked her. 'I know nothing,' she said.

A new party happened. Furry Maid went to her room. She washed off the soot. She put on the moon dress. It shone like silver. She went to the party. Prince Leo danced with her. She put one more small stone in his soup. Then she ran away.

Prince Leo found the stone. He asked Furry Maid. 'I know nothing,' she said again.

A third party happened. Furry Maid went to her room. She washed off the soot. She put on the star dress. It shone like stars. She went to the party. Prince Leo danced with her. He put a gold ring on her finger. She did not see it.

She ran away fast. She had no time. She put on her furry cloak. She did not clean her finger. The gold ring was there. Her finger was white. She put a third stone in the soup.

Prince Leo found the last stone. He called Furry Maid. He saw her white finger. He saw the gold ring. He gently took off her furry cloak. Her golden hair was there. She was very pretty.

Princess Lily stood there. Prince Leo knew her now. 'You are Princess Lily!' he said. 'You will be my queen.' He was happy. She was happy too.

They had a big wedding. Prince Leo and Princess Lily married. They lived happy ever after. Princess Lily was very happy.

Original Story 2169 words · 10 min read

The Many-Furred Creature

THERE was once upon a time a king who had a wife with golden hair, and she was so beautiful that you couldn't find anyone like her in the world. It happened that she fell ill, and when she felt that she must soon die she sent for the King and said: "If you want to marry after my death, make no one queen unless she is just as beautiful as I am and has just such golden hair as I have. Promise me this." After the King had promised her this she closed her eyes and died.

For a long time the King was not to be comforted, and he did not even think of taking a second wife. At last his councilors said: "The King must marry again, so that we may have a Queen." So messengers were sent far and wide to seek for a bride equal to the late Queen in beauty. But there was no one in the wide world, and if there had been she could not have had such golden hair. Then the messengers came home again, not having been able to find a queen.

Now, the King had a daughter who was just as beautiful as her dead mother and had just such golden hair. One day, when she had grown up, her father looked at her and saw that she was exactly like her mother, so he said to his councilors: "I will marry my daughter to one of you and she shall be Queen, for she is exactly like her dead mother, and when I die her husband shall be King." But when the Princess heard of her father's decision she was not at all pleased and said to him: "Before I do your bidding I must have three dresses; one as golden as the sun, one as silver as the moon, and one as shining as the stars. Besides these, I want a cloak made of a thousand different kinds of skin. Every animal in your kingdom must give a bit of his skin to it." But she thought to herself: "This will be quite impossible, and I shall not have to marry some one I do not care for."

The King, however, was not to be turned from his purpose, and he commanded the most skilled maidens in his kingdom to weave the three dresses, one as golden as the sun, and one as silver as the moon, and one as shining as the stars; and he gave orders to all his huntsmen to catch one of every kind of beast in the kingdom and to get a bit of its skin to make the cloak of a thousand pieces of fur. At last, when all was ready, the King commanded the cloak to be brought to him, and he spread it out before the Princess and said: "To-morrow shall be your wedding day." When the Princess saw that there was no more hope of changing her father's resolution, she determined to flee away.

In the night, when everyone else was sleeping, she got up and took three things from her treasures, a gold ring, a little gold spinning wheel, and a gold reel. She put the sun, moon, and star dresses in a nut shell, drew on the cloak of many skins, and made her face and hands black with soot. Then she commended herself to God and went out and traveled the whole night till she came to a large forest. And as she was very much tired she sat down inside a hollow tree and fell asleep.

The sun rose and she still slept on and on, although it was nearly noon. Now, it happened that the King to whom this wood belonged was hunting in it. When his dogs came to the tree they sniffed and ran round and round it, barking. The King said to the huntsmen: "See what sort of a wild beast is in there." The huntsmen went in and then came back and said: "In the hollow tree there lies a wonderful animal that we don't know, and we have never seen one like it. Its skin is made of a thousand pieces of fur; but it is lying down asleep." The King said: "See if you can catch it alive, and then fasten it to the cart and we will take it with us."

When the huntsmen seized the maiden, she awoke and was frightened and cried out to them: "I am a poor child, forsaken by father and mother. Take pity on me and let me go with you." Then they said to her: "Many-furred Creature, you can work in the kitchen. Come with us and sweep the ashes together." So they put her in the cart and went back to the palace. There they showed her a tiny room under the stairs, where no daylight came, and said to her: "Many-furred Creature, you can live and sleep here." Then she was sent into the kitchen, where she carried wood and water, poked the fire, washed vegetables, plucked fowls, swept up the ashes, and did all the dirty work.

So the Many-furred Creature lived for a long time in great poverty. Ah, beautiful king's daughter, what is going to befall you now?

It happened once when a great feast was being held in the palace that she said to the cook: "Can I go upstairs for a little bit and look on? I will stand outside the doors." The cook replied: "Yes, you can go up, but in half an hour you must be back here to sweep up the ashes." Then she took her little oil lamp and went into her little room, drew off her fur cloak, and washed off the soot from her face and hands, so that her beauty shone forth, and it was as if one sunbeam after another were coming out of a black cloud. Then she opened the nut and took out the dress as golden as the sun. And when she had done this she went up to the feast, and everyone stepped out of her way, for nobody knew her, and they thought she must be a king's daughter. But the King came toward her and gave her his hand, and danced with her, thinking to himself, "My eyes have never beheld anyone so fair!" When the dance was ended she courtesied to him, and when the King looked around she had disappeared, no one knew whither. The guards who were standing before the palace were called and questioned, but no one had seen her.

She had run to her little room and had quickly taken off her dress, made her face and hands black, put on the fur cloak, and was once more the Many-furred Creature. When she came into the kitchen and was setting about her work of sweeping the ashes together the cook said to her: "Let that wait till to-morrow, and just cook the King's soup for me. I want to have a little peep at the company upstairs. But be sure that you do not let a hair fall into it, otherwise you will get nothing to eat in future!" So the cook went away, and the Many-furred Creature cooked the soup for the King. She made a bread soup as well as she possibly could, and when it was done she fetched her gold ring from her little room and laid it in the tureen in which the soup was to be served up.

When the dance was ended the King had his soup brought to him and ate it, and it was so good that he thought he had never tasted such soup in his life. But when he came to the bottom of the dish he saw a gold ring lying there, and he could not imagine how it got in. Then he commanded the cook to be brought before him. The cook was terrified when he heard the command and said to the Many-furred Creature: "You must have let a hair fall into the soup, and if you have you deserve a good beating!"

When he came before the King, the King asked who had cooked the soup. The cook answered: "I cooked it." But the King said: "That's not true, for it was quite different and much better soup than you have ever cooked." Then the cook said: "I must confess. I did not cook the soup; the Many-furred Creature did." "Let her be brought before me," said the King.

When the Many-furred Creature came the King asked her who she was. "I am a poor child without father or mother." Then he asked her: "What do you do in my palace?" "I am of no use except to have boots thrown at my head." "How did you get the ring which was in the soup?" he asked. "I know nothing at all about the ring," she answered. So the King could find out nothing and was obliged to send her away.

After a time there was another feast, and the Many-furred Creature begged the cook again to let her go and look on. He answered: "Yes, but come back again in half an hour and cook the King the bread soup that he likes so much." So she ran away to her little room, washed herself quickly, took out of the nut the dress as silver as the moon and put it on. Then she went upstairs looking just like a king's daughter, and the King came toward her, delighted to see her again, and as the dance had just begun, they danced together. But when the dance was ended she disappeared again so quickly that the King could not see which way she went.

She ran to her little room and changed herself once more into the Many-furred Creature, and went into the kitchen to cook the bread soup. When the cook was upstairs she fetched the golden spinning wheel and put it in the dish, so that the soup was poured over it. It was brought to the King, who ate it and liked it as much as the last time. He had the cook sent to him, and again he had to confess that the Many-furred Creature had cooked the soup. Then the Many-furred Creature came before the King, but she said again that she was of no use except to have boots thrown at her head, and that she knew nothing at all of the golden spinning wheel.

When the King had a feast for the third time things did not turn out quite the same as they had before. The cook said: "You must be a witch, Many-furred Creature, for you always put something in the soup, so that it is much better and tastes nicer to the King than any that I cook." But because she begged hard he let her go up for the third time. Now she put on the dress as shining as the stars and stepped into the hall in it.

The King danced again with the beautiful maiden, and thought she had never looked so beautiful. And while he was dancing he put a gold ring on her finger without her seeing it, and he commanded that the dance should last longer than usual. When it was finished he wanted to keep her hands in his, but she broke from him and sprang so quickly away among the people that she vanished from his sight. She ran as fast as she could to her little room under the stairs, but because she had stayed too long beyond the half hour she could not stop to take off the beautiful dress, but only threw the fur cloak over it, and in her haste did not make herself quite black with the soot, one finger remaining white.

The Many-furred Creature now ran into the kitchen, cooked the King's bread soup, and when the cook had gone she laid the golden reel in the dish. When the King found the reel at the bottom, he had the Many-furred Creature brought to him, and then he saw the white finger and the ring which he had put on her hand in the dance. Then he took her hand and held her tightly, and as she was trying to get away she undid the fur cloak a little bit and the star dress shone out. The King seized the cloak and tore it off her. Her golden hair came down, and she stood there in her full splendor and could not hide herself away any more. And when the soot and ashes had been washed from her face she looked more beautiful than anyone in the world. But the King said: "You are my dear bride and we will never be separated from each other." So the wedding was celebrated and they lived happily ever after.



Story DNA

Moral

True beauty and worth cannot be hidden forever, and goodness will eventually be recognized and rewarded.

Plot Summary

A beautiful princess, whose golden hair matches her deceased mother's, is horrified when her father decides to marry her to fulfill a promise made to his dying wife. To escape, she demands three impossible dresses and a cloak of a thousand furs, which her father surprisingly provides. She flees, disguised as the 'Many-furred Creature' and covered in soot, finding work as a scullery maid in another kingdom. Secretly, she attends three royal feasts, each time wearing a magnificent dress and dancing with the young king, leaving behind a golden clue in his soup. During her third appearance, the king places a ring on her finger, and when she flees, he follows, tearing off her disguise to reveal her true beauty and identity, leading to their marriage and a happy ending.

Themes

identityperseveranceescape from oppressiontrue love

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: repetition (of the dresses, the feasts, the soup)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person (princess vs father, princess vs cook initially), person vs society (princess vs societal expectations)
Ending: happy
Magic: dresses made of sun, moon, and stars, cloak of a thousand furs, dresses fitting into a nutshell
the fur cloak (disguise, humility, suffering)the golden hair (beauty, identity, royal lineage)the three dresses (transformation, hidden splendor)the ring, spinning wheel, reel (clues, identity markers)

Cultural Context

Origin: German
Era: timeless fairy tale

This tale (also known as Allerleirauh or Donkeyskin) often deals with the taboo theme of incest, a recurring motif in some older folk tales, which is resolved by the princess's escape and transformation.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A dying queen makes her king promise to only remarry a woman as beautiful and golden-haired as herself.
  2. Years later, the king's daughter grows up to be identical to her mother, and the king decides to marry her.
  3. The princess, appalled, demands three impossible dresses (sun, moon, stars) and a cloak of a thousand furs, hoping to deter him.
  4. The king fulfills her demands, so the princess gathers her treasures (ring, spinning wheel, reel), hides the dresses in a nutshell, dons the fur cloak, blacks her face, and flees.
  5. She hides in a hollow tree in a forest belonging to another king, where she is discovered by his hunting party.
  6. Mistaking her for a strange animal, the huntsmen capture her and bring her to the castle, where she is given the name 'Many-furred Creature' and assigned to the scullery.
  7. During a royal feast, she secretly washes, puts on the sun dress, attends the ball, dances with the young king, and then vanishes, leaving a gold ring in his soup.
  8. The king questions the cook, who reveals the Many-furred Creature made the soup, but she denies knowing about the ring.
  9. At a second feast, she repeats the process, wearing the moon dress, dancing with the king, and leaving a golden spinning wheel in his soup.
  10. Again, she denies knowledge when questioned by the king.
  11. At a third feast, she wears the star dress, dances with the king, who secretly places a ring on her finger and prolongs the dance.
  12. She flees in haste, unable to fully remove her star dress or completely blacken her finger, and places a golden reel in the king's soup.
  13. The king finds the reel, summons her, notices her white finger and the ring, and tears off her fur cloak, revealing her true beauty and golden hair.
  14. The princess's identity is revealed, and the king declares her his bride.
  15. They marry and live happily ever after.

Characters

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The Princess (Many-furred Creature)

human young adult female

Slender and graceful, with an ethereal beauty. Her true appearance is radiant, almost glowing, but she disguises herself with soot and a rough fur cloak, making her appear small, dirty, and unremarkable.

Attire: Initially, she demands three magical dresses: one 'as golden as the sun' (likely shimmering gold fabric, possibly silk or fine brocade), one 'as silver as the moon' (shimmering silver fabric), and one 'as shining as the stars' (dark fabric, possibly velvet, embroidered with countless sparkling gems or silver threads). Over these, she wears a 'cloak made of a thousand different kinds of skin,' a patchwork of various animal furs, making her appear like a wild, shaggy creature. When disguised as a kitchen maid, she likely wears simple, coarse, and ash-stained garments beneath the cloak.

Wants: To escape an incestuous marriage to her father and to find safety and autonomy. Later, she seeks to maintain her disguise while secretly experiencing moments of freedom and joy.

Flaw: Her fear of her father's decree and her initial helplessness in her disguised state. She is also vulnerable to discovery due to her inherent beauty and the magical items she carries.

She transforms from a frightened princess fleeing an unwanted marriage into a resilient, self-reliant woman who endures hardship and ultimately finds true love and a rightful place as queen.

The shaggy, multi-furred cloak that completely obscures her radiant beauty, making her appear as a wild, unknown creature.

Resourceful, determined, clever, resilient, and initially fearful. She devises a seemingly impossible plan to escape an unwanted marriage and endures hardship with quiet strength.

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The King (Princess's Father)

human adult male

Likely a robust and imposing figure, befitting a king. No specific details are given, but he would carry himself with authority.

Attire: Royal attire, likely rich fabrics like velvet or brocade, possibly with ermine trim or gold embroidery, befitting a powerful monarch.

Wants: To fulfill his promise to his dying wife to only marry someone as beautiful and golden-haired as she was, which leads him to a disturbing decision regarding his daughter.

Flaw: His rigid adherence to a promise, even when it leads to morally reprehensible actions, and his inability to see his daughter as an individual rather than a replacement for his wife.

He remains static, never realizing the harm he caused or changing his perspective. His actions drive the plot but he does not undergo personal transformation.

A stern, unyielding expression as he makes his decree.

Grief-stricken, stubborn, possessive, and ultimately tyrannical in his decision-making. He prioritizes his promise to his dead wife over his daughter's well-being.

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The Late Queen

human adult female

Exceedingly beautiful, described as having no equal in the world.

Attire: Likely royal and elegant, befitting a queen of unparalleled beauty. No specific details are given.

Wants: To ensure her husband's happiness and perhaps to be remembered, though her method creates unforeseen consequences.

Flaw: Her dying wish, which inadvertently causes distress for her daughter.

She dies at the beginning of the story, her influence primarily through her dying wish.

Her long, radiant golden hair.

Loving towards her husband, but her dying wish, though perhaps well-intentioned to ensure her memory, sets a problematic condition for her husband's future.

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The King (Prince)

human young adult male

Likely handsome and regal, as he is a king and a suitable match for the princess. No specific details are given.

Attire: Royal hunting attire when first encountered, then formal court attire for feasts, likely rich fabrics and fine tailoring.

Wants: To find the beautiful maiden who captivated him at the feasts and to marry her.

Flaw: Initially, his inability to identify the mysterious dancer, allowing her to escape multiple times.

He starts as a king seeking a wife and ends up marrying the woman he fell in love with, overcoming the mystery of her disguise.

His hand, holding the Princess's hand, revealing the gold ring he placed on her finger.

Curious, observant, persistent, and kind. He is intrigued by the mysterious maiden and determined to uncover her identity.

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The Cook

human adult male

Likely stout or robust, typical of a cook, with hands accustomed to kitchen work. No specific details are given.

Attire: Simple, practical kitchen attire, likely a linen apron over a tunic, possibly stained with food.

Wants: To maintain his position and avoid the King's displeasure. He is also driven by curiosity about the feasts.

Flaw: His fear of the King and his inability to cook soup as well as the Many-furred Creature, leading him to lie.

He remains static, serving as a foil and a means for the Princess to interact with the King's world.

His large, flour-dusted hands, holding a ladle.

Initially gruff and dismissive towards the Many-furred Creature, but also somewhat lenient (allowing her to go upstairs). He is easily intimidated by the King and concerned about his own reputation.

Locations

Hollow Tree in the Forest

outdoor morning Implied temperate climate, sunny morning after a night of travel.

A large, ancient tree with a hollow interior, providing shelter. The surrounding area is a dense forest, implying thick undergrowth and tall trees.

Mood: Secluded, temporary refuge, initially peaceful then disturbed.

The Princess, disguised as the Many-furred Creature, finds temporary shelter and is discovered by the King's hunting party.

large hollow tree dense forest forest floor with leaves/dirt sunlight filtering through canopy

Palace Kitchen

indoor Indoor environment, unaffected by external weather.

A bustling, grimy kitchen within a European-style palace, likely medieval or early modern. It's a place of hard work, filled with cooking implements, a large hearth, and the smell of food and soot.

Mood: Gritty, laborious, humble, a place of hidden identity and secret preparations.

The Princess, disguised as the Many-furred Creature, performs menial tasks and secretly prepares the King's soup, embedding her treasures.

large stone hearth with fire iron cooking pots and utensils wooden work tables baskets of vegetables swept ashes on the floor soot-stained walls

Princess's Tiny Room Under the Stairs

indoor night Indoor, unaffected by external weather.

A cramped, dark, and secluded space beneath a grand staircase in the palace. It's described as receiving no daylight, suggesting a hidden, almost secret chamber.

Mood: Secretive, transformative, a private sanctuary for the Princess's true identity.

This is where the Princess transforms from the Many-furred Creature into the beautiful maiden for the feasts, and back again.

small, dark room located under a staircase no windows/daylight oil lamp nut shell containing dresses fur cloak

Palace Ballroom/Feast Hall

indoor night Indoor, festive atmosphere.

A grand and opulent hall within a European palace, designed for feasts and dancing. It would feature high ceilings, decorative elements, and be brightly lit for celebrations.

Mood: Elegant, celebratory, magical, a place of revelation and enchantment.

The Princess, in her splendid dresses, dances with the King, captivating him and setting the stage for her eventual discovery.

high ceilings chandeliers or candelabras polished stone or wooden floor for dancing decorated walls (tapestries, paintings) tables laden with food and drink musicians' gallery