The Old Griffin
by Unknown · from The Fairy Ring
Adapted Version
A King had a daughter. She was very sick. No doctor could help her. A wise man said: "Apples will cure her." The King told all. "Bring me those apples. You can marry my daughter."
A peasant had three sons. The oldest was Helmut. He picked apples from the garden. He walked to the castle. A Small Iron Man stopped him. "What is in your basket?" Helmut lied. "Only old leaves," he said. Small Iron Man said: "Old leaves." At the castle, Helmut opened his basket. Inside was only rotten fruit! The King was angry. He sent Helmut away.
Then Sven, the second son, went. The Small Iron Man asked him too. "What is in your basket?" Sven lied. "Only dry grass," he said. Small Iron Man said: "Dry grass." At the castle, Sven opened his basket. Inside were only prickly weeds! The King sent him away. He gave a warning.
Then the youngest son went. Kin called him "Stupid Jack." Jack was kind, smart. The Small Iron Man asked him. "What is in your basket?" Jack smiled. "Apples," he said. Small Iron Man said: "Then apples." At the castle, Jack opened his basket. Shiny golden apples fell out! The Princess ate the apples. She jumped out of bed, well and strong!
But the King did not keep his promise. "First, build me a special boat," he said. "It must go on land, not water." Jack went to the forest. The Small Iron Man came. Jack told him the truth. The Small Iron Man helped him. Jack built a good boat. It sailed fast on the land!
But the King wanted more. "Now watch one hundred rabbits," he said. "Do not lose even one." The Small Iron Man gave Jack a magic whistle. Jack blew it. All the rabbits came back. He did not lose one. The King was surprised.
But the King was still not happy. "One last thing," he said. "Bring me a feather from the Old Griffin's tail." The Old Griffin was scary. He lived far away. But Jack was brave. He said yes.
Jack walked for many days. He stayed at a castle. The people said, "We lost a key. Can you ask the Griffin?" Jack said, "Yes, I will help." He stayed at a next castle. A girl there was very sick. "Can you ask the Griffin?" they said. Jack said yes. Then he met the boatman at a big lake. "I must always row my boat," said the tired man. "Can you ask why?" Jack said, "Yes."
Jack came to the Griffin's house. Only the Griffin's Wife was home. "The Old Griffin is very grumpy," she said. "He does not like strangers. Hide under the bed. I will ask him your questions." Jack hid under the big bed.
At night, the Old Griffin came home. He fell asleep. He snored very loud. Jack reached up. He pulled a feather from the Griffin's tail! The Griffin woke up. "What was that?" he said. His wife was clever. She asked him the questions. The Griffin knew all. He told her all the answers.
Jack left early the next morning. He went to the boatman first. "Tell the next person to take the oar," Jack said. "Then you will be free." The boatman was so happy! Then Jack helped the sick girl. He found a special herb for her. She got well! Then Jack found the lost key. It was behind a door.
The people Jack helped gave him gifts. They gave him gold and silver. They gave him cows and sheep. Jack was rich now. But he was still kind.
Jack went back to the King. He had the Griffin's feather. He had gold and silver too. He had cows and sheep. "The Griffin gives good gifts," Jack said.
The King was greedy. He wanted gifts too. He went to find the Old Griffin. He came to the lake. The boatman was there. But the boatman was clever now. He put the King on a small island. Then the boatman walked away. The King was all alone. He could not get back. He lost his castle. He lost all his power and riches. That is what greed does.
Jack married the Princess. He became the new King. He was a good and kind King. All loved him. And so we learn: kindness and truth are always rewarded.
Original Story
The Old Griffin
THERE was once a king, but where he reigned and how he was called I know nothing about. He had no son, only a daughter, who was always ill, and no doctor could cure her; but it was prophesied to the King that his daughter would eat herself well with an apple. So he made it known all over the kingdom that whoever brought his daughter some apples with which she could eat herself well should marry her and be King. Now a peasant who had three sons heard of it; and he said to the eldest: "Go to the garden, take a basketful of those beautiful apples with the red cheeks, and carry them to the court. Perhaps the King's daughter will be able to eat herself well with them, and then you can marry her and be King." The chap did as he was bid and took to the road. When he had walked a little while he met quite a little iron man, who asked him what he had in his basket. So Hele, for that was his name, said, "Frogs' legs!" The Little Man then said, "Well, so it shall be and remain"; and then went on. At last Hele came to the castle, and had it announced that he had some apples which would cure the Princess if she ate them. At that the King was mightily pleased, and received Hele in court. Oh, dear! when he opened it, instead of apples he had frogs' legs in the basket, and they were kicking about still. The King flew into a great rage, and had him kicked out of the castle. When he got home he told his father how he had fared. Then the father sent his next son, whose name was Saeme, but it went just the same with him as with Hele. The little Iron Man met him very soon, and asked him what he had in the basket, and Saeme said, "Sow-thistles"; and the Little Man said, "Well, so it shall be and remain." When he arrived at the King's castle, and said he had apples with which the King's daughter could eat herself well, they would not let him in, and told him there had already been one who had made fools of them. But Saeme insisted he had really such apples; they should only let him in. At last they believed him and took him before the King; but when he opened the basket he had nothing but sow-thistles. That annoyed the King most dreadfully, so that he had Saeme whipped out of the castle. When he got home he told them what had happened to him, and then came the youngest boy, whom they had always called Stupid Jack, and asked the father whether he, too, might go with apples. "Yes," said the father, "you are just the right sort of fellow; if the clever ones can't succeed, what will you be able to do?" The boy did not believe it. "Well, father, I will go too." "Get away, you stupid chap!" said the father; "you must wait till you grow wiser"; and then he turned his back upon him; but the boy tugged at his smock frock behind and said, "Now, father, I will go too." "Well, just as you like; go—you will be sure to come back," he answered in a spiteful way. The boy was beyond measure delighted, and jumped for joy. "Aye, there! act like a fool! You get stupider from one day to the next," said the father. That did not affect Jack a bit, who would not be disturbed in his joy. As night soon came on, he thought he would wait till the next morning; anyhow, he would not be able to get to court that day. He could not sleep that night in bed, and when he only slumbered a little he dreamed of beautiful maidens, of castles, gold, silver, and all that sort of thing. Early next morning he went his way, and soon the Little Man in his iron dress met him and asked him what he had in the basket. "Apples," he answered, "with which the King's daughter can eat herself well." "Well," said the Little Man, "such it shall be and remain." But at court they would not let Jack in at all; for that there had been two who had said they brought apples, and one had frogs' legs and the other sow-thistles. But Jack insisted tremendously he had no frogs' legs, but the most beautiful apples that grew in the kingdom. As he spoke so nicely the doorkeeper thought he could not be telling a lie, and let him in; and they did quite right, too, for when Jack uncovered the basket before the King, apples as yellow as gold came tumbling out. The King was delighted, and had some of them taken to his daughter at once, and waited in anxious expectation until they should bring him word what effect they had. Not long after news was brought him; but what think you it was? It was the daughter herself! As soon as she had eaten of those apples she had jumped out of bed quite well. What the King's delight was cannot be described.
But now the King would not give Jack his daughter to marry, and said that he must first make him a boat that would swim better on land than in the water. Jack agreed to the condition and went home and told his adventures. So the father sent Hele into the wood to make such a boat; he worked away diligently, and whistled the while. At midday, when the sun was at the highest, came the little Iron Man and asked what he was making. "Wooden bowls," answered he. The Little Man answered, "Well, so it shall be and remain." In the evening Hele thought he had made the boat, but when he was going to get into it, it turned to wooden bowls. The next day Saeme went into the wood, but he met with exactly the same fate as his brother. On the third day Stupid Jack went. He worked very hard, so that the wood resounded all through with his heavy blows, and he sang and whistled besides right merrily. The Little Man came to him at midday when it was very warm, and asked him what he was making. "A boat that will swim better on dry land than in the water," he answered, "and that when he had done it he should marry the King's daughter." "Well," said the Little Man, "such an one it shall be and remain." In the evening when the sun was setting like a ball of gold, Jack made ready his boat and all things belonging to it, and rowed toward the castle; but the boat went as fast as the wind. The King saw it a long way off, but would not give Jack his daughter yet, and said he must first take a hundred hares out grazing from early morning to late in the evening, and if one were missing he should not have his daughter. Jack was quite contented, and the next day went out with his herd to the meadow, and kept a sharp lookout that none should stray away. Not many hours had passed when a maid came from the castle, and said Jack was to give her a hare directly, as some visitors had arrived. But Jack saw through that well enough, and said he would not give her one; the King might treat his visitors to hare pepper. But the maid would not heed him, and at last set to scolding. So Jack said that if the King's daughter came herself he would give her a hare. The maid told them in the castle, and the King's daughter did go herself. But in the meantime the Little Man had come again to Jack and asked him what he was doing there. Oh, he had to watch a hundred hares so that none ran away, and then he might marry the King's daughter and be King. "Good!" said the Little Man, "there's a whistle for you, and when one runs away, only just whistle and he will come back again." When the King's daughter came, Jack put a hare into her apron, but when she had gone about a hundred steps off, Jack whistled, and the hare jumped out of the cloth, and jump, jump! was back to the herd directly. In the evening the hareherd whistled again, and looked to see they were all right, and drove them to the castle. The King wondered how Jack had been able to take care of a hundred hares, so that none should run off, but he would not yet give him his daughter so easily, but said he must first get him a feather from the Old Griffin's tail.
"IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT, WHEN GRIFFIN WAS SNORING AWAY LUSTILY, JACK REACHED UP AND PULLED A FEATHER OUT OF HIS TAIL"
Jack started at once, and marched right briskly on. In the evening he arrived at a castle, where he asked for a night's lodging, for at that time there were no such things as hotels; and the master of the castle greeted him very civilly, and asked him where he was going to. Jack answered, "To the Old Griffin." "Oh, indeed! to the Old Griffin; they say he knows everything, and I have lost the key to an iron money chest; perhaps you would be good enough to ask him where it is!" "Certainly," said Jack, "that I will." Early the next morning he started off again on his road, and arrived at another castle, where he again passed the night. When the people learned that he was going to the Old Griffin, they said a daughter was ill in the house; they had already tried every possible remedy, but without effect; would he be kind enough to ask Old Griffin what would cure her? Jack said he would do it with pleasure, and went on again. He arrived at a lake, and instead of a ferryboat there was a big man who had to carry everybody over. The man asked him where he was bound for? "To the Old Griffin," said Jack. "When you get to him," said the man, "just ask him why I am obliged to carry everybody over the water." "Yes, to be sure," said Jack; "goodness gracious! yes, willingly!" The man then took him up on his shoulder and carried him over. At last Jack arrived at the Old Griffin's house, and only found the wife at home, not Old Griffin. The woman asked him what he wanted, so he told her he must have a feather from Old Griffin's tail; and that in a castle they had lost the key to the money chest, and he was to ask the Griffin where it was; and then, in another castle, the daughter was ill, and he was to know what would make her well again; then not far from there were the water and the man who was obliged to carry everybody over, and he should very much like to know why the man was obliged to carry everybody over. "But," said the woman, "look you, my good friend, no Christian can speak with a Griffin; he eats them all up; but, if you like, you can lie there under his bed, and at night when he is fast asleep you can reach up and pull a feather out of his tail; and as to those things that you want to know, I will ask him myself." Jack was quite satisfied with the arrangement, and got under the bed. In the evening Old Griffin came home, and when he stepped into the room he said, "Wife, I smell a Christian!" "Yes," said the wife, "there has been one here to-day, but he went away again." So Old Griffin said no more. In the middle of the night, when Griffin was snoring away lustily, Jack reached up and pulled a feather out of his tail. The Griffin jumped up suddenly and cried: "Wife, I smell a Christian! and it was just as if some one had been plucking at my tail." The wife said: "You have no doubt been dreaming. I have told you already that one has been here to-day, but that he went away again. He told me all sorts of things; that in one castle they had lost the key of the money chest and could not find it." "Oh, the fools!" exclaimed the Griffin; "the key lies in the wood-shed, behind the door, under a log of wood." "And further, he said that in another castle the daughter was ill, and they knew no means to cure her." "Oh, the fools!" said the Griffin, "under the cellar stairs a toad has made its nest of her hair, and if she got the hair back again she would be well." "And then, again, he said at a certain place there was a lake, and a man who was obliged to carry everybody over." "Oh, the fool!" said the Old Griffin, "if he were only to put somebody into the middle he need not carry any more over."
Early next morning the Old Griffin got up and went out, and Jack crept from under the bed with a beautiful feather, having heard what the Griffin had said about the key, the daughter, and the man. The wife repeated it all to him so that he should not forget, and then he started off toward home. He came to the man at the water first, and he asked him directly what the Griffin had said; but Jack said he must carry him over first, and then he would tell him. So he carried him over, and when they got there Jack told him he had only to put somebody into the middle and then he need carry no more. The man was delighted beyond measure, and told Jack that out of gratitude he should like to carry him over and back once more. But Jack said nay, he would save him the trouble; he was quite contented with him already, and then went on. Next he arrived at the castle where the daughter was ill; he took her on his shoulder, for she was not able to walk, and carried her down the cellar stairs, and then took the toad's nest from under the bottom step and put it into the daughter's hand, and all at once she jumped off his shoulder, up the stairs before him, strong and well. Now the father and mother were delighted indeed, and made Jack presents of gold and silver, and whatever he wanted they gave him.
When Jack arrived at the other castle he went straight to the wood-shed, and found the key right behind the door under the log of wood, and took it to the master. He was not a little pleased, and gave Jack in return a great deal of gold that was in the box and all sorts of things besides, such as cows and sheep and goats.
When Jack returned to the King with all these things, with the money and gold and silver, and the cows, sheep, and goats, the King asked him how he had come by it all. So Jack said the Old Griffin would give one as much as one liked. The King thought he could find a use for that kind of gifts himself, and so started off to the Griffin; but when he got to the water he happened to be the first who had crossed over since Jack, and the man put him in the middle of the stream and walked off, and the King was drowned.
So Jack married the King's daughter and became King.
Story DNA
Moral
True wisdom and kindness are often found in unexpected places, and those who are humble and persistent will ultimately be rewarded.
Plot Summary
A king's daughter is ill, and only special apples can cure her. A peasant's two older, arrogant sons fail to bring the apples due to their deceit, but the youngest, 'Stupid Jack,' succeeds through honesty. The King, unwilling to marry his daughter to a peasant, sets two more impossible tasks: building a magical boat and herding 100 hares, which Jack accomplishes with the help of a magical Little Iron Man. For the final task, Jack must retrieve a feather from the Old Griffin's tail. On his journey, he promises to ask the Griffin for solutions to others' problems. Jack hides under the Griffin's bed, gets the feather, and overhears the solutions. He returns, solves everyone's problems, and is richly rewarded. The greedy King attempts to visit the Griffin himself but is drowned by the ferryman, leaving Jack to marry the princess and become king.
Themes
Emotional Arc
disregard to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This story shares common motifs with other European fairy tales, particularly those collected by the Brothers Grimm, such as the 'foolish' youngest son succeeding where his cleverer brothers fail, and a series of impossible tasks leading to marriage and kingship.
Plot Beats (15)
- A king's daughter is ill, and a prophecy states she will be cured by apples; the king offers her hand and the throne as a reward.
- A peasant sends his eldest son, Hele, with apples; he lies to a Little Iron Man, and his apples turn to frogs' legs, leading to his expulsion from the castle.
- The second son, Saeme, also lies to the Little Iron Man, and his apples turn to sow-thistles, resulting in him being whipped out of the castle.
- The youngest son, 'Stupid Jack,' despite his father's scorn, honestly tells the Little Iron Man he has apples, and they remain apples, curing the princess.
- The King, unwilling to give Jack his daughter, demands he build a boat that swims better on land than water; Jack, with the Little Iron Man's help, succeeds.
- The King then demands Jack herd 100 hares without losing any; Jack, again aided by the Little Iron Man's magical whistle, succeeds, even retrieving a hare given to the princess.
- The King's final, impossible task is for Jack to retrieve a feather from the Old Griffin's tail.
- On his journey, Jack stays at two castles and meets a ferryman, promising to ask the Griffin about their respective problems (lost key, sick daughter, constant ferrying).
- Jack arrives at the Griffin's house, where the Griffin's wife advises him to hide under the bed to avoid being eaten and offers to ask the Griffin the questions.
- Jack hides, pulls a feather from the snoring Griffin's tail, and overhears the Griffin revealing the solutions to all the problems.
- Jack returns, first telling the ferryman the solution (put someone in the middle of the water to be free), then curing the sick daughter by removing a toad's nest from her hair, and finally finding the lost key in the wood-shed.
- Jack receives rich rewards of gold, silver, and livestock from the grateful people he helped.
- Jack returns to the King with his feather and riches, explaining the Griffin's generosity.
- The greedy King, wanting riches for himself, goes to the Griffin, but the ferryman, now free, puts the King in the middle of the lake, drowning him.
- Jack marries the princess and becomes King.
Characters
The King
A man of regal bearing, likely of average height and build, though his specific features are not detailed. His appearance would reflect the European monarchy of the tale's origin, perhaps with a slightly worried or stern expression due to his daughter's illness and the challenges he sets.
Attire: Rich, formal European court attire. Perhaps a velvet doublet or tunic in deep jewel tones like crimson or royal blue, embroidered with gold thread, worn over fine linen shirts. Trousers or breeches, and soft leather shoes. A heavy gold chain or medallion might adorn his neck.
Wants: To cure his daughter, to maintain his royal authority, to acquire wealth.
Flaw: Greed and a lack of wisdom. He is easily swayed by the promise of riches and makes poor decisions.
He remains largely unchanged in his negative traits, ultimately leading to his demise due to his greed.
Desperate, demanding, short-tempered, greedy, ungrateful, foolish.
The Princess
Initially described as ill, suggesting a pale complexion and delicate build. After eating the apples, she becomes vibrant and healthy, implying a return to a natural youthful glow and strength. Her specific features are not detailed, but she would embody the beauty expected of a fairy tale princess.
Attire: Initially, fine but simple nightclothes or a delicate, flowing gown suitable for an invalid. After her recovery, she would wear a beautiful, perhaps light-colored, gown of silk or brocade, adorned with subtle embroidery, reflecting her royal status and renewed health.
Wants: To recover from her illness.
Flaw: Her initial severe illness renders her helpless.
She transforms from a sickly, bedridden invalid to a healthy, vibrant young woman, becoming the future Queen.
Passive (due to illness), but capable of sudden vigor and health.
Hele
A peasant's son, likely of sturdy build from manual labor. His appearance is not detailed, but he would be unremarkable, perhaps with a slightly arrogant or overconfident demeanor.
Attire: Simple, practical peasant clothing. A coarse linen tunic or smock in muted earth tones, rough wool trousers, and sturdy leather boots. Perhaps a simple leather belt.
Wants: To marry the Princess and become King, driven by ambition and greed.
Flaw: Dishonesty and a lack of genuine effort. He tries to deceive the Little Iron Man and is not truly dedicated to his tasks.
He fails both challenges and learns nothing, returning home in disgrace.
Overconfident, dishonest, easily tricked, lazy (whistling while working).
Saeme
Another peasant's son, similar to Hele in his unremarkable appearance and sturdy build. He might appear slightly less confident than Hele, perhaps more sullen after his brother's failure.
Attire: Similar simple peasant clothing to Hele: a coarse linen smock, rough trousers, and sturdy boots, perhaps in slightly different earth tones.
Wants: To marry the Princess and become King, driven by ambition.
Flaw: Dishonesty and a lack of genuine effort, similar to his brother. He also tries to deceive the Little Iron Man.
He fails both challenges and returns home whipped and disgraced.
Dishonest, persistent (in trying to get into the castle), easily tricked, sullen.
Stupid Jack
A young peasant man, likely of average height and sturdy build from farm work. He is initially underestimated and called 'Stupid Jack,' suggesting a simple, perhaps slightly naive, but ultimately kind and honest demeanor. His appearance would be wholesome and unassuming.
Attire: Simple, practical peasant clothing. A coarse linen smock or tunic in a light, natural color like cream or pale blue, sturdy dark trousers, and worn but functional leather boots. A simple rope or leather belt.
Wants: To marry the King's daughter and become King, driven by a desire to prove himself and succeed where his brothers failed.
Flaw: Initially underestimated and called 'Stupid Jack,' which could be a psychological weakness, though he overcomes it.
Transforms from an underestimated 'stupid' boy into a wise, brave, and successful king, proving his true worth.
Honest, persistent, kind, hardworking, joyful, clever (despite his nickname), brave.
The Little Iron Man
A small, compact figure entirely encased in iron. His exact height is 'quite little,' suggesting he is shorter than a human. His form would be rigid and metallic, with no visible skin or hair.
Attire: An 'iron dress' – this implies a complete suit of armor or a metallic shell that covers his entire body, rather than fabric clothing. It would be dark, perhaps rusted or burnished iron, giving him a formidable appearance despite his size.
Wants: To enforce the spoken word, acting as a magical arbiter of truth and consequence.
Flaw: None apparent; he seems to be a force of nature or magic.
He remains unchanged, serving his function as a magical enforcer of spoken truths.
Mysterious, powerful, impartial, literal-minded. He grants wishes based on the spoken word.
The Old Griffin
A large, ancient griffin, a mythical creature with the body of a lion and the head and wings of an eagle. Its size is implied to be immense, capable of loud snoring. Its feathers would be majestic, perhaps golden or brown, and its lion's body powerful.
Attire: None, as it is an animal.
Wants: To live undisturbed, to eat Christians (though he doesn't in the story), to sleep soundly.
Flaw: His deep sleep and his trust in his wife, which allows Jack to extract information.
He remains unchanged, serving as a source of information for the protagonist.
Grumpy, easily angered, perceptive (smells Christians), knowledgeable (knows all secrets), somewhat gullible (believes his wife's explanations).
The Griffin's Wife
The story does not specify her species, but as the Griffin's wife, she is likely also a magical creature, perhaps a griffin herself or a related magical being. She is capable of human-like conversation and hospitality. Her appearance would be formidable yet capable of a degree of kindness.
Attire: Not specified, but if she is a griffin, she would have no clothing. If humanoid, perhaps simple, sturdy garments suitable for living in a remote, magical dwelling.
Wants: To protect Jack from her husband, to help him gain the information he needs.
Flaw: Her husband's temper and suspicion.
She remains unchanged, serving as a crucial helper for Jack.
Helpful, cunning, protective (of Jack, by hiding him), resourceful, intelligent.
The Man at the Water
A 'big man,' implying a strong, muscular build, suitable for carrying people across a lake. His appearance would be rugged and weary from his endless task.
Attire: Simple, durable clothing suitable for manual labor and being constantly near water. Perhaps a coarse linen tunic, trousers rolled up or made of waterproof material, and bare feet or simple sandals.
Wants: To be freed from his curse of carrying everyone across the water.
Flaw: Bound by a magical curse.
He is freed from his curse by Jack's advice, transforming from a burdened figure to a grateful one.
Weary, desperate for release, grateful.
Locations
King's Castle
A royal residence, likely a medieval European castle, with a court for receiving visitors and a private chamber for the ill princess. It has a doorkeeper's post and a cellar with stairs.
Mood: Initially hopeful, then frustrated and angry, finally delighted and celebratory.
The sons attempt to bring apples to the princess; Jack successfully cures the princess; Jack returns with treasures and ultimately marries the princess.
Peasant's Home and Garden
A simple, humble dwelling of a peasant family, likely a small cottage, with an adjacent garden where 'beautiful apples with red cheeks' grow.
Mood: Initially hopeful, then disappointed and scornful, finally surprised and proud.
The father instructs his sons to take apples to the King; the sons return with their failures; Jack prepares for his journey.
The Wood
A dense forest where the sons go to build the boat. It is warm at midday, and the sounds of chopping wood echo through it.
Mood: Mysterious and transformative, with a sense of industry and magic.
The sons attempt to build a boat, encountering the Little Iron Man; Jack successfully builds the magical boat.
Old Griffin's House
The dwelling of the Old Griffin, a creature's lair. It has a bed where the Griffin sleeps and a space underneath for hiding.
Mood: Eerie, dangerous, but ultimately revealing and magical.
Jack hides under the bed to learn the Griffin's secrets and pluck a feather from its tail.
The Lake with the Ferryman
A body of water, a lake, where a large man acts as a ferryman, carrying people across on his shoulder.
Mood: Tiring and burdensome for the ferryman, but a place of passage and revelation for Jack.
Jack crosses the lake and learns the ferryman's curse from the Griffin, then frees him.