The Troll's Hammer
by Unknown · from The Fairy Ring
Adapted Version
Niels lives with his family. There is little food. Niels must leave home. He will find work.
Niels walks in a forest. He sees a little man. A big, wild animal chases the man. Niels helps the man. The animal runs away.
The little man is The Troll. He gives Niels a hammer. "This hammer is special. Make amazing things." The Troll goes away.
Niels goes to a town. He works for The Master Smith. The Master Smith lives near The King's house.
The King needs a strong lock. He asks smiths to make one. The best lock wins. The winner gets a prize.
The Master Smith takes it. He tells King, "I made it!" King gives prize.
The Other King comes. He says his smith is best. The King and The Other King bet. Each smith must make a knife.
Niels makes a strong knife. It looks simple. The Other King's smith makes a pretty knife. Niels's knife breaks the other knife. The Master Smith takes credit again.
Niels wants money. His father is not well. Niels wants to help his father. Master Smith says, "No money!" He is mean.
Niels tells The King the truth. Master Smith says, "It is a lie!" King sad. He makes a new test. Each smith must make a sword. The loser must leave this land.
Niels leaves the bad Master Smith. He finds a new smith. Niels makes a sword. It can roll up small. It is like a toy.
The Master Smith shows his sword. It is big and shiny. Niels takes his sword from his pocket. It is small and rolled up.
Niels's sword opens up. It is a long, strong sword. Niels puts a handle on it. It is the best sword. Niels is a true smith.
The King says Niels wins. Master Smith says, "Niels is best." King wants him out. Niels says, "Do not send him away forever."
The King gives Niels a big prize. Niels is the King's smith. He brings his father to live. They live a happy life.
It is good to be kind and honest. It is not good to lie. Niels and his father live happily. Niels is a very good smith. He is always kind and honest.
Original Story
The Troll's Hammer
WHEN a great famine prevails in a country even the rich suffer. Hard, indeed, must the lot of the poor peasant be at such a time.
During a famine a poor peasant, unable to support all his family, told his eldest son, Niels, that he would have to go out in the world and provide for himself.
Niels left home and went out to seek his fortune. As the evening of the first day drew on, he found himself in a dense forest, and fearing lest the wild beasts might do him harm during the night, he climbed into a tree. Hardly had he reached his perch, when he saw a little man running toward the tree. He was hunchbacked, and had crooked legs, a long beard, and wore on his head a red cap. He was pursued by a wolf, which attacked him just under the tree in which Niels was sitting. The little man began to scream; he bit and scratched, and defended himself as well as he could. But the wolf was the stronger, and would have torn the little fellow to pieces if Niels had not sprung down from the tree. As soon as the wolf saw that he had two to contend with, he fled back into the forest.
The troll then said to Niels:
"Thou hast preserved my life and done me a good service; in return I will also give thee something that will be of use. See! here is a hammer with which thou shalt be able to do smith's work that no one shall be able to equal." When the troll had spoken these words, he sank into the ground and disappeared.
The next day the boy wandered on until he came to the neighborhood of the royal palace, and here he engaged himself to a smith.
Now it just happened that a few days before a thief had broken into the King's treasury and stolen a large bag of money. All the smiths in the city were therefore sent for to the palace, and the King promised that he who could make the best lock should be appointed court locksmith, and have a handsome reward into the bargain. The lock had to be finished in eight days, and so constructed that it could not be picked by anyone.
When the smith, with whom Niels lived, returned home and related this, the boy thought he should like to try whether his hammer really possessed those qualities which the troll had said. He therefore begged his master to allow him to make a lock, and promised that it should be finished by the appointed time. Although the smith had no great opinion of the boy's abilities, he permitted the trial.
Niels then requested a separate workshop, locked himself in, and began hammering the iron. One day went, and then another, and the master began to be curious; but Niels let no one come into his shop, and the smith was obliged to remain outside, and peep through the keyhole. The work, however, succeeded far better than the boy himself had expected; and, without his really knowing how it came to pass, the lock was finished on the evening of the third day.
The following morning he went down to his master and asked for some money. "Yesterday I worked hard," said Niels, "and to-day I will enjoy myself."
He went out of the city, and did not return to the workshop till late in the evening. The next day and the next he did the same, and so through the rest of the week.
His master was very angry at this, and threatened to turn him away unless he finished his work at the appointed time. But Niels told him to rest easy, and engaged that his lock should be the best.
When the day arrived, Niels brought his work forth, and carried it up to the palace. His lock was so ingenious and so delicately made, that it far excelled all the others. Niels's master was acknowledged as the most skillful, and he received the promised office and reward.
The smith was delighted, but he took good care not to confess to anyone who it was that had made the curious lock. He received one job after another from the King, and let Niels do them all.
In the meantime the report spread from place to place of the wonderful lock the King had got for his treasury. Travelers came from a distance to see it, and a foreign King came among them. When he had examined the work a long time he said that the man who had made such a lock deserved to be honored and respected.
"But however good a smith he may be," added the foreign King, "I have his master at home."
He continued boasting in this manner, till at length the two kings made a wager as to which smith could execute the most skillful piece of workmanship. The smiths were sent for, and the two kings determined that each smith should make a knife.
The smith related to Niels what had passed, and desired him to try whether he could make as good a knife as the lock he had made. Niels promised to do so, although his last work had not brought him much. The smith was in truth a mean man, and treated Niels so niggardly that sometimes he had not enough to eat and drink.
One day, as he was out buying steel to make the knife, he met a man from his own village, and, in the course of conversation, Niels learned that his father was in great want and misery. Then he asked his master for some money, but this was the answer: "You shall not have a shilling until you have made the knife."
Thereupon Niels shut himself up in the workshop for a whole day, and, as on the former occasion, the knife was made without his knowing how it had happened.
When the day arrived on which the work was to be exhibited, Niels dressed himself in his best clothes, and went with his master up to the palace where the two kings were expecting them.
The strange smith first showed his knife. It was so beautiful, and so curiously wrought, that it was a pleasure to look at; it was, moreover, so sharp and well-tempered that it would cut through a millstone as easily as through a cheese. Niels's knife, on the contrary, looked very poor and common.
The King already began to think he had lost his wager, and spoke harshly to the master-smith, when his boy begged leave to examine the stranger's knife a little more closely.
After having looked at it for some time, he said: "This is a beautiful piece of workmanship which you have made, and shame on those who would say otherwise; but my master is, nevertheless, your superior, as you shall soon experience."
Saying this, he took the stranger's knife and split it lengthwise from point to handle with his own knife as easily as one splits a twig of willow. The kings could scarcely believe their eyes, and the consequence was that Niels's master was declared the victor.
When Niels asked for payment, the master refused to give him anything, although knowing full well that the poor boy only wanted the money to help his father. Upon this Niels grew angry, went to the King, and told who it was that had made both the lock and the knife. The master was then called, but he denied everything, and accused Niels of being an idle boy, whom he had taken into service out of charity and compassion.
"We shall soon find out the truth of this story," said the King, who sided with the master. "Since thou sayest it is thou who hast made this wonderful knife, and thy master says it is he who has done it, I will adjudge each of you to make a sword for me within eight days. He who can make the most perfect one shall be my master-smith; but he who loses shall forfeit his life."
Niels was well satisfied with this agreement. He went home, packed up all his things, and bade his master farewell. The smith would gladly have made all good again, but Neils appeared not to understand him, and went his way. He engaged with another master, and began cheerfully to work on the sword.
When the appointed day arrived, both Niels and his former master met at the palace, and the master produced a sword of the most beautiful workmanship that anyone could wish to see. It was inlaid with gold and set with precious stones. The King was greatly delighted with it.
"Now, little Niels," said he, "what dost thou say to this sword?"
"It is not so badly made as one might expect from such a bungler," said the boy.
"Canst thou show anything like it?" asked the King.
"I believe I can," answered Niels.
"Well, where is thy sword?" said the King.
"In my waistcoat pocket," replied Niels.
Hereupon there was a general laugh which was increased when they saw the boy take a little packet out of his waistcoat pocket. Niels opened the paper in which the blade was rolled up like a watch-spring. "Here is my work," said he. "Will you just cut the thread, master?"
The smith did it willingly, and in a moment the blade straightened out and struck him in the face.
Niels took out of his other pocket a hilt of gold and screwed it fast to the blade; then he presented the sword to the King; and all present were obliged to confess that they never before had seen such matchless workmanship.
Niels was declared the victor, and the master was obliged to acknowledge that the boy had made both the lock and the knife.
The King in his indignation would have had the master put to death if the boy had not begged for mercy on the culprit.
Niels received a handsome reward from the King, and from that day all the work from the palace was intrusted to him. He took his old father to reside with him, and lived in comfort and happiness till his death.
Story DNA
Moral
Honesty and true skill will eventually be rewarded, while deceit and exploitation lead to downfall.
Plot Summary
During a famine, young Niels leaves home and saves a troll, who gifts him a magical hammer. Niels becomes an apprentice smith and uses the hammer to create incredible works, like an unbeatable lock and an extraordinary knife, but his greedy master repeatedly takes all the credit and rewards. When the master refuses to pay Niels to help his struggling father, Niels reveals the truth to the King, leading to a final, deadly smithing challenge. Niels creates a miraculous, compact sword, proving his unparalleled skill and exposing his master's deceit. Niels is declared the true master-smith, forgives his master, and lives happily with his father.
Themes
Emotional Arc
suffering to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Reflects common themes of social mobility, the value of skill, and the struggle against injustice prevalent in pre-industrial societies.
Plot Beats (15)
- Due to famine, Niels, a poor peasant boy, is sent from home to find his fortune.
- Niels saves a hunchbacked troll from a wolf in the forest.
- The troll gifts Niels a magical hammer that allows him to create unmatched smith's work.
- Niels becomes an apprentice to a smith near the royal palace.
- The King announces a competition for the best lock to secure his treasury.
- Niels uses his hammer to create an ingenious lock, but his master takes all the credit and the reward.
- A foreign King challenges the local King to a smithing contest, requiring each smith to make a knife.
- Niels creates a seemingly common but incredibly sharp and strong knife, which he uses to split the foreign smith's beautiful knife, again winning the wager for his master.
- Niels's master refuses to pay him, even when Niels wants to help his struggling father.
- Niels reveals the truth to the King, but his master denies it, leading to a final challenge: each must make a sword, with the loser forfeiting his life.
- Niels leaves his deceitful master and works for another, creating a sword that can coil up like a watch-spring.
- At the competition, the former master presents a beautiful, ornate sword, while Niels produces his coiled blade from his pocket.
- Niels's sword unfurls with incredible force and is then assembled into a perfect weapon, proving his unparalleled skill.
- Niels is declared the victor, his master confesses, and Niels begs the King for mercy on his master's life.
- Niels receives a handsome reward, becomes the royal smith, and lives happily with his father.
Characters
Niels
Lean and agile, with the sturdy build of a peasant boy accustomed to hard work, but not overly muscular. He is of average height for a young man from a Northern European peasant background.
Attire: Initially, simple, worn peasant clothes: a coarse linen tunic, wool breeches, and sturdy leather boots. Later, when presenting the knife, he wears his 'best clothes,' which would still be practical, clean, and well-maintained peasant attire, perhaps a slightly finer linen shirt and a wool waistcoat, but not luxurious.
Wants: To provide for himself and later, to help his impoverished father. He also seeks recognition for his true skill and justice against his deceitful master.
Flaw: His initial naivety and trust in his master, which leads to him being exploited. He is also somewhat humble, not immediately asserting his claims.
Transforms from a naive, exploited peasant boy into a respected and affluent master-smith, recognized by the King. He learns to stand up for himself and use his unique talents for his own and his family's benefit, while retaining his compassion.
Ingenious, resourceful, determined, compassionate, and initially naive. He is quick to learn and adapt, but also possesses a strong sense of justice and loyalty.
The Troll
Short and stout, with a pronounced hunchback and crooked legs. His skin is likely rough and earthy, perhaps a greenish or grayish tone, suggesting a connection to the forest and ground.
Attire: A single, prominent red cap, likely made of felt or rough wool. Beyond that, his clothing is not explicitly described but would be simple, rustic, and blend with his forest dwelling, perhaps a rough tunic or cloak of earthy tones.
Wants: To survive the wolf attack and to repay Niels for saving his life.
Flaw: Vulnerable to physical attack from wild animals, despite his magical nature.
Appears briefly to bestow a gift and then disappears, serving as a catalyst for Niels's journey.
Grateful, powerful, mysterious, and somewhat abrupt. He repays good deeds with potent magical gifts but does not linger.
The Master Smith
Likely a burly man, as is common for smiths, with strong arms from years of hammering. Perhaps a bit overweight from his success, but still physically imposing. Of average height for a Northern European man.
Attire: Practical, heavy-duty smith's attire: a thick leather apron over a sturdy linen shirt and wool trousers, often stained with soot and grime. He might wear a leather cap or have his hair tied back.
Wants: To gain wealth, prestige, and royal favor without doing the actual work, by exploiting Niels's talent.
Flaw: His overwhelming greed and dishonesty, which lead to his downfall. He lacks true skill and integrity.
Starts as a respected master, becomes a deceitful exploiter, and is ultimately exposed and disgraced, narrowly escaping death due to Niels's mercy.
Greedy, deceitful, envious, proud, and ultimately cowardly. He is quick to take credit for others' work and exploit those beneath him.
The King
A man of regal bearing, likely well-fed and of a commanding presence. His height and build would be average for a Northern European monarch, perhaps slightly imposing.
Attire: Rich, but practical, royal attire for a Northern European monarch of the period. This would include a tunic of fine wool or velvet, possibly embroidered, over linen undergarments, with a cloak of similar material. Colors would be deep reds, blues, or greens, possibly trimmed with fur. He would wear a simple gold circlet or crown for formal occasions, but not constantly.
Wants: To secure his treasury, uphold the honor of his kingdom, and find the most skilled artisans for his court.
Flaw: Initially prone to judging by appearances and trusting established figures over unknown talents.
Learns to look beyond appearances and recognize true talent and integrity, ultimately becoming a fair and wise patron to Niels.
Just, discerning (eventually), proud, and initially somewhat easily swayed by appearances. He values skill and honesty, but needs proof.
The Foreign King
A man of similar regal stature to the King, perhaps slightly more flamboyant in his presentation, reflecting a different kingdom's style. He would be of average height and build.
Attire: Rich and possibly more ostentatious royal attire than the local King, perhaps with more elaborate embroidery, jewels, or exotic fabrics, indicative of a different culture or greater wealth. Colors might be bolder.
Wants: To prove the superiority of his kingdom's smith and to win the wager.
Flaw: His excessive pride and overconfidence, which lead him to underestimate others.
Serves as a catalyst for the knife-making challenge, and is ultimately humbled by Niels's superior skill.
Boastful, competitive, and proud. He is quick to challenge and assert the superiority of his own kingdom's artisans.
Locations
Dense Forest
A thick, dark forest with tall, ancient trees, their branches intertwining overhead, creating a dim, shadowed understory. The ground is likely covered with fallen leaves and tangled roots. The air is cool and still, with the scent of damp earth and pine.
Mood: Eerie, dangerous, mysterious, but also a place of unexpected encounter and magic.
Niels encounters the troll and saves his life, receiving the magical hammer.
Royal Palace of the King
A grand, imposing royal palace, likely built of stone or brick, with large halls, reception rooms, and a treasury. The interior would feature high ceilings, possibly tapestries, and ornate decorations befitting a monarch. The atmosphere is one of power, authority, and formal ceremony.
Mood: Formal, authoritative, grand, a place of judgment and reward.
All major competitions (lock, knife, sword) and judgments take place here, leading to Niels's recognition and eventual appointment.
Smith's Workshop
A bustling, grimy smithy, filled with the clang of hammers, the roar of the forge, and the smell of hot metal and coal smoke. It has a separate, smaller room or partitioned area where Niels works in secret. The main area is likely cluttered with tools, unfinished metalwork, and raw materials.
Mood: Gritty, industrious, secretive (for Niels's private space), later tense due to the master's anger.
Niels creates the magical lock, knife, and sword in secret, demonstrating the power of the troll's hammer.