THE SUNCHILD

by Unknown · from The Grey Fairy Book

fairy tale transformation tender Ages 5-10 1154 words 6 min read
Cover: THE SUNCHILD

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 366 words 2 min Canon 95/100

A woman wanted a child. She asked the Sun for help. "Give me a girl," she said. "I will give her back at twelve." The Sun heard her.

Soon, a baby girl came. Letiko's Mother was very happy. She loved Letiko much. Letiko grew up. She was a good child.

Letiko turned twelve. The Sun came to her. "Tell your mother," the Sun said. "Mind her promise to me." Letiko felt afraid.

Letiko's Mother was scared. She closed doors. She closed windows. But the Sun found Letiko. The Sun took Letiko away.

Letiko was with the Sun. She missed her mother. She did many tasks. She fetched straw. "My heart sighs for Mama," she said. She fetched water. "My heart flows for Mama," she said.

The Sun saw Letiko was sad. He wanted her to go home. He called two foxes. "Take Letiko home?" he asked. The foxes were not good. The Sun sent them away.

The Sun called two hares. "Take Letiko home?" he asked. "Yes," the hares said. "We eat grass. We drink water." The Sun said, "Go now."

The hares walked with Letiko. They got hungry. "Climb this tree," they said. "We will eat grass now." Letiko climbed the tree.

A Big Monster came. "Come down, Letiko," it said. "See my shoes!" Letiko did not come down. "Come down for my apron!" it said. Letiko did not come down. The Big Monster wanted her.

Letiko called, "Hares! Hares!" The hares heard her. They ran fast. Letiko came down. They walked on their way.

The Big Monster ran after them. It saw some people. "Did you see them?" it asked. The people did not help. The monster was angry.

Letiko was near home. The pets saw her. "Bow wow!" said the dog. "Meow!" said the cat. "Crow!" said the cock. Letiko's Mother did not know.

They ran to the door. The Big Monster was close. It tried to catch a hare. It nipped the hare's tail. The hare ran inside fast. They were safe.

Letiko hugged her mother. Her mother was very happy. "Thank you, little hare," she said. She made the hare's tail silver. Letiko and her mother lived well. Love is strong.

Original Story 1154 words · 6 min read

THE SUNCHILD

Once there was a woman who had no children, and this made her very unhappy. So she spoke one day to the Sunball, saying: 'Dear Sunball, send me only a little girl now, and when she is twelve years old you may take her back again.'

So soon after this the Sunball sent her a little girl, whom the woman called Letiko, and watched over with great care till she was twelve years old. Soon after that, while Letiko was away one day gathering herbs, the Sunball came to her, and said: 'Letiko, when you go home, tell your mother that she must bethink herself of what she promised me.'

Then Letiko went straight home, and said to her mother: 'While I was gathering herbs a fine tall gentleman came to me and charged me to tell you that you should remember what you promised him.'

When the woman heard that she was sore afraid, and immediately shut all the doors and windows of the house, stopped up all the chinks and holes, and kept Letiko hidden away, that the Sunball should not come and take her away. But she forgot to close up the keyhole, and through it the Sunball sent a ray into the house, which took hold of the little girl and carried her away to him.

One day, the Sunball having sent her to the straw shed to fetch straw, the girl sat down on the piles of straw and bemoaned herself, saving: 'As sighs this straw under my feet so sighs my heart after my mother.'

And this caused her to be so long away that the Sunball asked her, when she came back: 'Eh, Letiko, where have you been so long?'

She answered: 'My slippers are too big, and I could not go faster.'

Then the Sunball made the slippers shorter.

Another time he sent her to fetch water, and when she came to the spring, she sat down and lamented, saying: 'As flows the water even so flows my heart with longing for my mother.'

Thus she again remained so long away that the Sunball asked her: 'Eh, Letiko, why have you remained so long away?'

And she answered: 'My petticoat is too long and hinders me in walking.'

Then the Sunball cut her petticoat to make it shorter.

Another time the Sunball sent her to bring him a pair of sandals, and as the girl carried these in her hand she began to lament, saying: 'As creaks the leather so creaks my heart after my little mother.'

When she came home the Sunball asked her again: 'Eh, Letiko, why do you come home so late?'

'My red hood is too wide, and falls over my eyes, therefore I could not go fast.'

Then he made the hood narrower.

At last, however, the Sunball became aware how sad Letiko was. He sent her a second time to bring straw, and, slipping in after her, he heard how she lamented for her mother. Then he went home, called two foxes to him, and said: 'Will you take Letiko home?'

'Yes, why not?'

'But what will you eat and drink if you should become hungry and thirsty by the way?'

'We will eat her flesh and drink her blood.'

When the Sunball heard that, he said: 'You are not suited for this affair.'

Then he sent them away, and called two hares to him, and said: 'Will you take Letiko home to her mother?'

'Yes, why not?'

'What will you eat and drink if you should become hungry and thirsty by the way?'

'We will eat grass and drink from streamlets.'

'Then take her, and bring her home.'

Then the hares set out, taking Letiko with them, and because it was a long way to her home they became hungry by the way. Then they said to the little girl: 'Climb this tree, dear Letiko, and remain there till we have finished eating.'

So Letiko climbed the tree, and the hares went grazing.

It was not very long, however, before a lamia came under the tree and called out: 'Letiko, Letiko, come down and see what beautiful shoes I have on.'

'Oh! my shoes are much finer than yours.'

'Come down. I am in a hurry, for my house is not yet swept.'

'Go home and sweep it then, and come back when you are ready.'

Then the lamia went away and swept her house, and when she was ready she came back and called out: 'Letiko, Letiko, come down and see what a beautiful apron I have.'

'Oh! my apron is much finer than yours.'

'If you will not come down I will cut down the tree and eat you.'

'Do so, and then eat me.'

Then the lamia hewed with all her strength at the tree, but could not cut it down. And when she saw that, she called out: 'Letiko, Letiko, come down, for I must feed my children.'

'Go home then and feed them, and come back when you are ready.'

When the lamia was gone away, Letiko called out: 'Little hares! little hares!'

Then said one hare to the other: 'Listen, Letiko is calling;' and they both ran back to her as fast as they could go. Then Letiko came down from the tree, and they went on their way.

The lamia ran as fast as she could after them, to catch them up, and when she came to a field where people were working she asked them: 'Have you seen any one pass this way?'

They answered: 'We are planting beans.'

'Oh! I did not ask about that; but if any one had passed this way.'

But the people only answered the louder: 'Are you deaf? It is beans, beans, beans we are planting.'

When Letiko had nearly reached her home the dog knew her, and called out, 'Bow wow! see here comes Letiko!'

And the mother said, 'Hush! thou beast of ill-omen! wilt thou make me burst with misery?'

Next the cat on the roof saw her, and called out 'Miaouw! miaouw! see here comes Letiko!'

And the mother said, 'Keep silence! thou beast of ill-omen! wilt thou make me burst with misery?'

Then the cock spied, and called out: 'Cock-a-doodle-do! see here comes Letiko!'

And the mother said again: 'Be quiet! thou bird of ill-omen! wilt thou make me burst with misery?'

The nearer Letiko and the two hares came to the house the nearer also came the lamia, and when the hare was about to slip in by the house door she caught it by its little tail and tore it out.

When the hare came in the mother stood up and said to it: 'Welcome, dear little hare; because you have brought me back Letiko I will silver your little tail.'

And she did so; and lived ever after with her daughter in happiness and content.


Story DNA

Moral

A mother's love and a child's longing for home can overcome even the most powerful forces.

Plot Summary

A childless woman promises her daughter, Letiko, to the Sunball in exchange for a child, but when the Sunball comes to claim her at age twelve, the mother tries to hide her. The Sunball abducts Letiko, who then deeply misses her mother and expresses her sorrow through laments. Realizing her unhappiness, the Sunball sends Letiko home with two hares. On their journey, they evade a persistent lamia and race towards Letiko's home, where she is finally reunited with her mother, who rewards the loyal hares.

Themes

motherly lovelonging for homethe power of promisesperseverance

Emotional Arc

sorrow to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: sparse
Techniques: repetition, rule of three

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: happy
Magic: Sunball as a sentient being who can grant wishes and abduct children, talking animals (foxes, hares, dog, cat, cock), lamia (a mythical creature, often a child-eating monster), the Sunball's ray taking Letiko
the keyhole (representing a small, overlooked vulnerability)Letiko's laments (symbolizing her deep sorrow and longing)the silvered tail (a mark of gratitude and sacrifice)

Cultural Context

Origin: Unknown (likely European folk tale tradition)
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story reflects common folk tale motifs of bargains with supernatural entities, magical abduction, and the journey home, often featuring animal companions and encounters with malevolent creatures.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. A childless woman asks the Sunball for a daughter, promising to return her at age twelve.
  2. The Sunball grants her a daughter, Letiko, and the woman raises her carefully.
  3. On Letiko's twelfth birthday, the Sunball reminds the mother of her promise.
  4. The mother tries to hide Letiko, but the Sunball takes her through a keyhole.
  5. Letiko, now with the Sunball, repeatedly expresses her longing for her mother through laments while performing tasks.
  6. The Sunball notices Letiko's sadness and decides to send her home, first testing two foxes who prove unsuitable.
  7. The Sunball sends Letiko home with two hares who promise to eat grass and drink water on the journey.
  8. The hares become hungry and ask Letiko to climb a tree while they graze.
  9. A lamia appears and tries to lure Letiko down from the tree, first with trickery, then with threats, but Letiko resists.
  10. Letiko calls the hares back, and they continue their journey.
  11. The lamia pursues them, asking field workers for directions, but they give unhelpful, repetitive answers.
  12. As they near home, the family dog, cat, and cock recognize Letiko and announce her arrival, but the mother dismisses them as ill omens.
  13. The lamia nearly catches them at the door, tearing off one hare's tail.
  14. Letiko is reunited with her mother, who rewards the injured hare by silvering its tail, and they live happily ever after.

Characters

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Letiko

human child female

A small, delicate girl, likely of average height and slender build for her age. Her features are not explicitly described, but she is young and innocent, suggesting soft, youthful contours. Given the story's origin, she would likely have a fair complexion.

Attire: Initially, she wears simple, practical clothing suitable for gathering herbs. Later, she is described with a 'petticoat' and a 'red hood'. These would be made of common fabrics like linen or wool. The petticoat would be a basic undergarment or a simple skirt, and the hood a practical head covering for a child, made of red wool or similar fabric.

Wants: To return to her mother and escape the Sunball's custody.

Flaw: Her deep sadness and longing for her mother make her vulnerable and slow her down.

She begins as a child taken from her home, filled with sorrow. Through her journey, she demonstrates resilience and eventually returns to her mother, finding happiness.

Her red hood, which she complains is too wide.

Obedient, sorrowful, longing, resourceful (in her laments), resilient (against the lamia).

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The Woman

human adult female

An adult woman, likely of average build. Her features are not detailed, but her actions suggest a maternal figure. Given the story's origin, she would likely have a European appearance.

Attire: Simple, practical clothing of a peasant woman from a European setting, likely made of linen or wool in muted colors, suitable for daily life.

Wants: To have a child, then to protect her child from being taken away, and finally to be reunited with her daughter.

Flaw: Her initial desperation leads her to make a dangerous promise. Her fear makes her try to defy the Sunball, but she is ultimately powerless.

She begins in sorrow over childlessness, experiences joy with Letiko, then deep fear and misery when Letiko is taken. Her arc concludes with renewed happiness upon Letiko's return.

Her expression of profound misery and relief upon Letiko's return.

Desperate (for a child), fearful, protective, loving, remorseful.

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The Sunball

celestial being ageless non-human

Manifests as a 'fine tall gentleman' when speaking to Letiko, suggesting a commanding and imposing human form. As the Sunball itself, it is a celestial body, radiating light and warmth. When it takes Letiko, it is described as a 'ray' of light.

Attire: As a 'fine tall gentleman', he would wear clothing that signifies power and importance, perhaps flowing robes of golden or bright fabric, but not explicitly described. As a celestial being, he would be pure light.

Wants: To fulfill the promise made by the Woman, to claim what is due to him. Later, to understand Letiko's sadness and facilitate her return.

Flaw: Perhaps a lack of understanding of human emotion, or a desire for fairness/justice that leads him to release Letiko.

Begins as an enforcer of a pact, taking Letiko. Observes her sadness and, after testing potential escorts, ultimately allows her to return home, showing a degree of compassion or understanding.

A towering figure radiating golden light, or a powerful, stern gentleman with an aura of warmth.

Contractual, powerful, patient, observant, ultimately merciful (or perhaps pragmatic).

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The Lamia

magical creature adult female

A monstrous, predatory female creature. While not explicitly described, lamias in folklore are often depicted as having serpentine lower bodies and human upper bodies, or as beautiful women who are child-eating monsters. Given her desire to eat Letiko and her children, a more monstrous or witch-like appearance is implied. She would be strong enough to try and cut down a tree.

Attire: Undescribed, but likely simple and functional, or perhaps tattered, reflecting her wild nature and the need to sweep her house. Not elegant, but practical for a creature of the wild.

Wants: To eat Letiko, either for herself or to feed her children.

Flaw: Her inability to cut down the tree, and her susceptibility to Letiko's taunts.

Introduced as a threat to Letiko, she relentlessly pursues her but is ultimately thwarted.

Her attempt to cut down the tree with furious, desperate blows.

Predatory, persistent, cunning (trying to lure Letiko down), easily frustrated, maternal (in her own monstrous way).

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The Hares

animal adult non-human

Two small, agile hares, with typical brown fur, long ears, and powerful hind legs. One of them later has a silver tail.

Attire: None, as they are animals.

Wants: To help the Sunball by taking Letiko home, and to find food and water along the way.

Flaw: Their hunger, which causes them to leave Letiko alone temporarily.

They are chosen for their suitable diet, successfully transport Letiko, and one receives a silver tail as a reward.

One hare with a distinctive silver tail.

Helpful, honest (about their diet), cautious (telling Letiko to climb the tree), loyal (returning when called).

Locations

Letiko's Mother's House

indoor Implied temperate climate, no specific season mentioned.

A humble dwelling, likely a traditional European cottage, with multiple doors and windows, chinks, holes, and a keyhole. It is a place of refuge and later, reunion.

Mood: Initially fearful and protective, later joyful and content.

Letiko is hidden here from the Sunball, then taken away. Later, she is reunited with her mother here, and the hare's tail is silvered.

wooden doors windows chinks and holes (stopped up) keyhole (unstopped) roof (where the cat sits)

The Sunball's Dwelling

indoor Implied constant warmth and light, as it is the Sunball's home.

An unseen, but implied, dwelling of the Sunball, from which Letiko is sent on errands. It contains a straw shed.

Mood: Initially controlling and somewhat stern, later understanding.

Letiko lives here after being taken by the Sunball. She laments her mother while fetching straw, water, and sandals.

straw shed piles of straw

Forest Path and Lamia's Tree

outdoor day Implied temperate, possibly late spring or summer, with lush foliage.

A long, winding path through a forest, where Letiko and the hares travel. It includes a specific tree that Letiko climbs to escape the lamia.

Mood: Initially hopeful, then tense and dangerous, finally relieved.

Letiko is taken home by the hares. She climbs a tree to escape the lamia, who tries to cut it down.

tall tree (climbed by Letiko) forest undergrowth streamlets (for hares to drink)

Bean Field

outdoor day Implied spring or early summer, suitable for planting beans.

An agricultural field where people are working, planting beans. It is a brief stop on Letiko's journey home.

Mood: Busy and somewhat unhelpful, a moment of frustration for the lamia.

The lamia asks the field workers about Letiko, but they only respond about their bean planting.

rows of bean plants (or freshly planted soil) people working in the field