THE SEVEN BROTHERS SIMEON

by Unknown · from The Russian Garland, Being Russian Folk Tales

fairy tale adventure hopeful Ages 8-14 2195 words 10 min read

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 482 words 3 min Canon 95/100

Once upon a time, there were seven brothers. All of them were named Simeon! Their parents were old. They had no other children. The parents died when the boys were ten. The brothers worked on their farm. They worked very hard.

One day Tsar Ador rode by. He saw the boys working. They worked hard in their field. Tsar Ador wanted to help them. He asked about them.

Tsar Ador asked each brother. Each one had a special skill. Simeon the Builder could make a tall tower. It would reach the sky. Simeon the Far-Seer could see far. He could see the whole world. Simeon the Ship man could build a ship fast. Simeon the Hider could hide a ship. Simeon the Shooter could shoot far away. Simeon the Catcher could catch things. Simeon the Clever One could find hidden things.

Tsar Ador heard Simeon the Clever One. He was surprised by this skill. Tsar Ador's helpers spoke. They said this skill was good. It could help Tsar Ador. He wanted to marry Queen Lena. Simeon could help him meet her.

Tsar Ador asked the brothers to help him. He wanted to meet Queen Lena. He wanted to marry her. The brothers said yes. They would work as one.

Simeon the Builder worked. He built a tall, tall tower. It reached the sky. Simeon the Far-Seer climbed the tower. He looked far away. He saw Queen Lena's land.

Simeon the Ship man worked fast. He built a big ship. Simeon the Clever One took his special cat.

The brothers sailed the ship. They came to Queen Lena's land. Simeon the Clever One showed his cat. He showed it to Queen Lena. He wanted to meet her.

Simeon gave the cat to her. It was a gift. Queen Lena liked the cat. She trusted Simeon.

Simeon asked Queen Lena. "Come see my special ship!" he said. She wondered. She went alone to the ship.

Queen Lena was happy on the ship. Simeon told his brothers. "Sail to Tsar Ador's land!" he said. She would meet Tsar Ador. They would marry.

Queen Lena had magic. She turned into a pretty swan. Simeon the Shooter shot an arrow. It was a magic arrow. It flew near her. Simeon the Catcher caught her gently. She turned back into a person.

Other ships came. They tried to follow. Simeon the Hider used his skill. He made their ship go under the water. It was hidden.

The other ships could not find them. They went back home.

The brothers came back. They brought Queen Lena. She met Tsar Ador. They were very happy! Tsar Ador gave the brothers many gifts.

Tsar Ador and Queen Lena married. They lived well. The brothers were happy too. The brothers used their special skills. They helped Tsar Ador. It is good to use your special skills. It is good to help others!

Original Story 2195 words · 10 min read

THE SEVEN BROTHERS SIMEON

THERE were once upon a time two old serfs, who lived together for many years without children; and in their old age they prayed for a child to keep them from want when they were no longer able to labour. After seven years the good woman gave birth to seven sons, who were all named Simeon; but when these boys were in their tenth year, the old folk died, and the sons tilled the ground which their father left them.

It chanced one day that the Tsar Ador drove past, and wondered sore to see such little fellows all busy at work in their field. So he sent his oldest boyar to ask them whose children they were, and why they were working so hard, and the eldest Simeon answered, that they were orphans, and had no one to work for them, and that they were all called Simeon. When the boyar told this to Tsar Ador, he ordered the boys to be brought along with him.

On returning to the palace, the Tsar called together all his boyars, and asked their advice, saying: “My boyars, you see here seven poor orphans, who have no kinsfolk; I am resolved to make such men of them that they shall hereafter have cause to thank me; and therefore I ask your advice—what handicraft or art shall I have them taught?” Then the boyars replied: “Your Majesty, seeing that they are old enough to have understanding, it would be well to ask each brother separately what craft he wishes to learn.”

This answer pleased the Tsar, and he said to the eldest Simeon: “Tell me, friend, what art or trade would you like to learn? I will apprentice you to it.” But Simeon answered: “Please your Majesty, I wish to learn no art; but if you will command a smithy to be put up in the middle of your court, I will raise a column which shall reach to the sky.” By this time the Tsar at once saw that the first Simeon wanted indeed no teaching if he was so good a smith as to do such work; but he did not believe that he could make so tall a pillar; so he ordered a smithy to be built in his courtyard, and the eldest Simeon straightway set to work.

Then the Tsar asked the second Simeon: “What craft or art would you learn, my friend?” and the lad replied: “Your Majesty, I will learn neither craft nor art; but when my eldest brother has smithied the iron column, I will mount to the top of it, look around over the whole world, and tell you what is passing in every kingdom.” So the Tsar saw there was clearly no need to teach this brother, as he was clever enough already.

Thereupon he questioned the third Simeon: “What craft or what art will you learn?” He replied: “Your Majesty, I want to learn neither craft nor art; but if my eldest brother will make me an axe I will build a ship in the twinkling of an eye.” When the Tsar heard this he exclaimed: “Such master workers are just the men I want! Thou also hast nothing to learn.”

Then he asked the fourth Simeon: “Thou Simeon, what craft or what art will thou learn?” and he answered: “Your Majesty, I need to learn nothing; but when my third brother has built a ship, and the ship is attacked by enemies, I will seize it by the prow, and draw it into the kingdom under the earth; and when the foe has departed, I will bring it back again upon the sea.” The Tsar was astonished at such marvels, and replied: “In truth you have nothing to learn.”

Then he asked the fifth Simeon: “What trade or what art would you learn, Simeon?” And he replied: “I need none, your Majesty; but when my eldest brother has made me a gun, I will shoot with it every bird that flies, however distant, if I can see it.” And the Tsar said: “You’ll be a famous hunter truly!”

The Tsar now asked the sixth Simeon: “What art will you learn?” and he replied in like manner: “Sire, I will follow no art, but when my fifth brother has shot a bird in the air I will catch it before it falls to the ground, and bring it to your Majesty.” “Bravo!” said the Tsar; “you will serve in the field as well as a retriever.”

Thereupon the Tsar enquired of the last Simeon what craft or art he would learn. “Your Majesty,” he replied, “I will learn neither craft nor trade, for I am already skilled in a precious art.” “What kind of art do you understand then?” said the Tsar. “I understand how to steal better than any man alive.” When the Tsar heard of such a wicked art, he grew angry, and said to his boyars: “My Lords, how do you advise me to punish this thief Simeon? What death shall he die?” But they all replied: “Wherefore, O Tsar, should he die? Who knows but that he may be a clever thief, and prove useful in case of need?” “How so?” said the Tsar. “Your Majesty,” replied the boyars, “has for ten long years sued for the hand of the beautiful Tsarina Helena in vain, and has already lost many armies and great store of money. Who knows but that this thief Simeon may in some way steal the fair Tsarina for your Majesty.”

“Well spoken, my friends,” replied the Tsar; and, turning to the thief Simeon, he said: “Hark you, friend, can you pass through thrice nine lands into the thirtieth kingdom and steal for me the fair Queen Helena? I am in love with her, and if you can bring her to me I will reward you richly.”

“Leave it to us,” answered Simeon; “your Majesty has only to command.”

“I do not order you, I entreat you then,” said the Tsar, “not to tarry longer at my Court, but take with you all the armies and treasure you require.” “I want not your armies nor your treasure,” said Simeon; “only send us brothers forth together; without the rest I can do nothing.” The Tsar was unwilling to let them all go; nevertheless he was obliged to consent.

Meanwhile the eldest Simeon had finished the iron column in the smithy of the palace-yard. Then the second Simeon climbed up it, and looked around on all sides, to see whereabouts the kingdom of fair Helena’s father lay; and presently he called out to the Tsar Ador: “Please, your Majesty, beyond thrice nine lands, in the thirtieth kingdom, sits the fair Tsarina at her window. How beautiful she is! One can see the very marrow of her bones, her skin is so clear.” On hearing this the Tsar was more in love than ever, and cried aloud to the Simeons: “My friends, set out instantly on your journey, and come back as soon as possible; I can no longer live without the fair Tsarina.”

So the eldest Simeon made for the third brother a gun, and took bread for their travels; and the thief Simeon took a cat with him, and so they set out. Now thief Simeon had so accustomed this cat to him, that she ran after him everywhere like a dog; and whenever he stopped, she sat up on her hind legs, rubbed her coat against him and purred. So they all went their way, until they came to the shore of the sea over which they must sail. For a long time they wandered about, seeking wood, to build a ship with. At last they found a huge oak. Then the third Simeon took his axe and laid it at the root of the tree, and in the twinkling of an eye the oak was felled, and a ship built from it, fully rigged, and in the ship there were all kinds of costly wares.

After some months’ voyage they arrived safely at the place to which they were bound, and cast anchor. The next day Simeon the thief took his cat and went into the city; and walking straight up to the Tsar’s palace, he stood under the window of Queen Helena. Immediately his cat sat up on her hind legs, and fell to rubbing him and purring. But you must know that no cat had ever been seen or heard of in this country, nor was anything known of such an animal.

The fair Tsarina Helena was sitting at her window, and observing the cat, she sent her attendants to inquire of Simeon what kind of animal it was, and whether he would sell it, and for how much. And when the servants asked him, Simeon replied: “Tell her Majesty that this creature is called a cat, but I cannot consent to sell her; if, however, her Majesty pleases, I shall have the honour of presenting the cat to her.”

So the attendants ran back and told what they had heard from Simeon; and when the Tsarina Helena knew it, she was overjoyed, and went herself to him, and asked why he would not sell it, but would only give it to her. Then she took the cat in her arms, went into her room, and invited Simeon to accompany her; and, going to her father, the Tsar Sarg, the Tsarina showed him the cat, and told him that a stranger had presented it to her. The Tsar gazed at the wonderful animal with delight, and commanded the thief Simeon to be summoned; and when he came, the Tsar wanted to reward him richly for the cat. But Simeon would not take anything; and the Tsar said: “Stay here in my palace for a time, and meanwhile the cat will become better used to my daughter in your presence.”

Simeon, however, had no desire to remain, and answered: “Your Majesty, I would stay in your palace with pleasure had I not a ship, in which I came to your kingdom, and which I cannot entrust to anyone; but if your Majesty pleases, I will come every day to the palace and accustom the cat to your fair daughter.”

This offer pleased the Tsar: so every day Simeon went to the fair Queen; and once he said to her: “Gracious Lady, Your Majesty, often as I have come to visit you, I have not observed that you ever go out to take a walk. If you will come once on board my ship, I will show you a quantity of fine wares, diamonds and gold brocades, more beautiful than you have ever seen before.” Thereupon the Tsarina went to her father and asked his permission to take a walk upon the quay. The Tsar consented, bidding her take her attendants and lady’s-maids with her.

When they came to the quay, Simeon invited the Tsarina on board his ship, where he and his brothers displayed to her all kinds of wares. Then said Simeon the thief to the fair Helena: “You must order your attendants to leave the ship, and I will show you some more costly wares which they must not see.” So the Tsarina ordered them to return to shore; and Simeon the thief instantly desired his brothers to cut the cable, set all the sails, and put out to sea.

Meantime he amused the Tsarina by unpacking the wares and making her various presents. In this manner hours passed by; and at last she told him it was time for her to return home, as her father would be expecting her back. So saying, she went up from the cabin and perceived that the ship was already far out at sea, and almost out of sight of land. Thereat she beat her breast, changed herself into a swan, and flew away. But in an instant the fifth Simeon seizing his gun, fired at her; and the sixth brother caught her before she fell into the water, and placed her on the deck, when the Tsarina changed back into a woman.

Meanwhile the attendants and lady’s-maids, who were standing on the shore, and had seen the ship sail away with the Tsarina, went and told the Tsar of Simeon’s treachery. Then the Tsar instantly commanded his whole fleet to go in pursuit; and it had already got very near to the Simeons’ ship when the fourth brother seized the vessel by the prow and drew it into the subterranean region. When the ship disappeared, all the sailors in the fleet thought it had sunk, together with the beautiful Tsarina Helena, and went back to the Tsar Sarg and told him the sad tidings. But the seven brothers Simeon returned safely to their own country, and conducted the Tsarina Helena to Tsar Ador, who gave the Simeons their freedom as a reward for the services they had rendered, together with much gold and silver and precious stones. And the Tsar lived with the beautiful Queen Helena for many years in peace and happiness.



Story DNA

Moral

Even seemingly unconventional or 'wicked' skills can be valuable when used for a greater purpose.

Plot Summary

Seven orphaned brothers, all named Simeon, are discovered by Tsar Ador, who intends to teach them trades. Instead, each brother reveals a fantastical, unique skill, from smithing a sky-high column to stealing. The Tsar, initially angered by the seventh brother's thieving skill, is convinced by his boyars to use the brothers to acquire Tsarina Helena, whom he has long desired. The brothers embark on a quest, using their combined abilities to build a ship, infiltrate Helena's kingdom with a unique cat, abduct her, and evade a pursuing fleet by hiding their ship underground. They successfully deliver Tsarina Helena to Tsar Ador, earning their freedom and riches.

Themes

resourcefulnessloyaltyingenuitythe power of unique skills

Emotional Arc

struggle to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of seven

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: happy
Magic: superhuman skills (smithing a sky-high column, seeing the world, instant ship building, pulling ships into the earth, impossibly accurate shooting, catching falling objects), animal transformation (Tsarina Helena into a swan)
the iron column (symbol of ambition and connection to the world)the cat (symbol of infiltration and unique appeal)

Cultural Context

Origin: Russian
Era: timeless fairy tale

Reflects a feudal society with a powerful monarch and a class system, where extraordinary skills could elevate one's status.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. Two old serfs have seven sons, all named Simeon, in their old age; the parents die when the boys are ten, leaving them to till the land.
  2. Tsar Ador sees the industrious young orphans and brings them to his court, seeking advice on what trades to teach them.
  3. Each of the seven brothers reveals a unique, fantastical skill instead of wanting to learn a trade: smithing a sky-high column, seeing the world from its top, instantly building a ship, pulling a ship into the earth, shooting distant birds, catching falling birds, and stealing.
  4. The Tsar is initially angry at the seventh Simeon's 'wicked' skill of stealing, but his boyars suggest it could be useful for acquiring Tsarina Helena, whom the Tsar has long sought.
  5. The Tsar tasks the brothers with stealing Tsarina Helena, and they agree, insisting they must work together.
  6. The eldest Simeon finishes the iron column, and the second Simeon climbs it to locate Tsarina Helena's kingdom.
  7. The brothers build a ship with the third Simeon's skill, and Simeon the thief takes a trained cat with them.
  8. They arrive at Tsarina Helena's kingdom, and Simeon the thief uses his unique cat (unknown in that land) to gain an audience with the Tsarina.
  9. Simeon refuses to sell the cat but offers it as a gift, gaining entry to the palace and the Tsarina's trust.
  10. Simeon invites Tsarina Helena onto his ship to see rare wares, convincing her to send her attendants ashore.
  11. Once Tsarina Helena is alone on board, Simeon orders his brothers to set sail, abducting her.
  12. Tsarina Helena transforms into a swan to escape, but the fifth Simeon shoots her, and the sixth Simeon catches her before she falls, returning her to human form.
  13. Tsar Sarg's fleet pursues them, but the fourth Simeon pulls their ship into the subterranean region, making it disappear from sight.
  14. The pursuing fleet returns, believing the ship and Tsarina Helena are lost.
  15. The seven brothers Simeon return to their own country, deliver Tsarina Helena to Tsar Ador, and are rewarded with freedom and riches.

Characters

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Tsar Ador

human adult male

A man of regal bearing, likely of average height and a sturdy build, reflecting his position of power. His features would be strong and commanding, perhaps with a well-maintained beard, common for Russian tsars of the period.

Attire: Richly embroidered kaftan or caftan made of heavy silk or velvet, possibly in deep reds or blues, adorned with gold thread and precious stones. He would wear a tall, fur-trimmed cap (shapka) or a jeweled crown, and soft leather boots.

Wants: To find a suitable wife (Tsarina Helena) and to govern his kingdom well, including providing for orphans.

Flaw: His initial underestimation of the Simeons' unique talents; his deep infatuation with Tsarina Helena makes him vulnerable to manipulation.

He learns to trust in unconventional methods and individuals, ultimately achieving his desire for a wife and rewarding those who helped him.

His elaborate, jewel-encrusted royal kaftan and a look of hopeful anticipation.

Benevolent, decisive, somewhat naive (initially believing the Simeons need teaching), persistent (in his pursuit of Helena), and grateful.

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Simeon the Eldest (The Smith)

human young adult male

A sturdy, muscular young man, slightly taller and broader than his brothers, with hands calloused from years of smithing. His build suggests strength and endurance.

Attire: Simple, durable linen tunic and trousers, likely dark or earth-toned, possibly with a leather apron over his tunic, stained with grime from his craft. Sturdy leather boots.

Wants: To utilize his unique skill to help his brothers and fulfill the Tsar's request.

Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but perhaps his focus on his craft makes him less adaptable in social situations.

He demonstrates his extraordinary skill, proving his worth to the Tsar and contributing to the success of the mission.

His powerful, soot-stained hands and the towering iron column he creates.

Dedicated, skilled, practical, focused, and responsible (as the eldest).

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Simeon the Second (The Far-Seer)

human young adult male

Lean and agile, with a slight build that suggests nimbleness and a lack of physical bulk, ideal for climbing and observation. His eyes would be his most prominent feature.

Attire: Simple, light-colored linen tunic and trousers, allowing for ease of movement. Soft leather shoes or bare feet for climbing.

Wants: To use his unique vision to guide his brothers and fulfill the Tsar's quest.

Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but his reliance on vision might make him vulnerable if his sight were impaired.

He provides critical intelligence for the mission, demonstrating the practical application of his unique skill.

His intensely focused, far-seeing eyes as he scans the horizon from a great height.

Perceptive, observant, intelligent, and crucial for reconnaissance.

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Simeon the Third (The Shipwright)

human young adult male

A strong, practical build, with broad shoulders and capable hands, indicative of someone who works with wood and heavy tools. Not as bulky as the smith, but equally robust.

Attire: A sturdy, coarse linen shirt and breeches, possibly with a leather vest for protection. Practical, well-worn leather boots.

Wants: To use his shipbuilding talent to facilitate the journey and achieve the mission.

Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but perhaps his focus on creation makes him less adept at other tasks.

He constructs the essential vessel for the journey, proving his invaluable skill.

His axe, which instantly fells trees and builds ships, and the ship itself.

Resourceful, efficient, skilled, and decisive.

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Simeon the Fourth (The Ship-Puller)

human young adult male

Possessing an almost supernatural strength, his build would be powerfully muscular, perhaps even disproportionately so, suggesting immense physical capability. He might appear stocky or exceptionally robust.

Attire: Simple, durable, and unrestrictive clothing, such as a thick linen tunic and trousers, allowing for full range of motion. Sturdy, heavy boots.

Wants: To protect his brothers and their mission by using his unique power to hide the ship.

Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but his power is reactive, only used when the ship is attacked.

He saves the mission from the pursuing fleet, demonstrating his critical defensive role.

His immense, powerful hands, capable of moving an entire ship.

Strong, protective, resolute, and unwavering.

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Simeon the Fifth (The Marksman)

human young adult male

Lean and steady, with a keen eye and steady hands. His build would be agile, not necessarily muscular, but precise.

Attire: Practical, dark-colored clothing, such as a fitted linen tunic and trousers, allowing for stealth and ease of movement. Soft leather boots.

Wants: To use his unmatched shooting skill to secure the Tsarina.

Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but his skill relies on visual contact with the target.

He successfully shoots the transformed Tsarina, enabling her capture and return to human form.

His long, custom-made gun and his incredibly keen, focused eyes.

Precise, patient, observant, and deadly accurate.

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Simeon the Sixth (The Retriever)

human young adult male

Agile and quick, with a lithe build that suggests speed and dexterity. He would be light on his feet.

Attire: Light, flexible clothing, such as a loose linen tunic and trousers, allowing for rapid movement. Soft, flexible leather shoes.

Wants: To use his speed and agility to retrieve what his brother shoots, ensuring the success of the mission.

Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but his skill is reactive, dependent on the marksman's shot.

He successfully catches the transformed Tsarina, completing the capture and ensuring her return to human form.

His outstretched hands, always ready to catch, and his swift, blurring movement.

Quick, agile, reliable, and efficient.

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Simeon the Seventh (The Thief)

human young adult male

Slight and nimble, with a deceptive appearance that belies his cunning. He would be of average height, but with a lean, quick build. His hands would be slender and dexterous.

Attire: Well-made but unassuming clothing, perhaps a dark green or brown linen tunic and trousers, allowing him to blend in. Soft, quiet leather shoes. He might have hidden pockets or pouches.

Wants: To use his unique skill to 'steal' Tsarina Helena for Tsar Ador, thereby gaining freedom and reward for himself and his brothers.

Flaw: His reliance on trickery and manipulation, which could be exposed.

He masterminds the entire plan to abduct Tsarina Helena, proving his worth and leading his brothers to freedom and riches, thus redeeming his 'wicked art'.

His disarming, charming smile and the small, unusual cat he carries.

Cunning, charming, resourceful, audacious, and highly intelligent.

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Tsarina Helena

human | magical creature (swan) young adult female

Exquisitely beautiful, described as having skin so clear 'one can see the very marrow of her bones,' implying a delicate, ethereal beauty. She would be slender and graceful.

Attire: Luxurious court attire, possibly a flowing silk gown (sarafan or similar Russian court dress) in soft, rich colors like pale blue or silver, adorned with delicate embroidery and perhaps pearls. A kokoshnik or other elaborate headpiece might be worn for formal occasions, or simply a veil.

Wants: To live peacefully in her father's kingdom, to satisfy her curiosity, and to escape capture.

Flaw: Her curiosity makes her vulnerable to Simeon's trickery; her magical transformation is not foolproof against the Simeons' combined skills.

She is tricked and abducted, transformed and captured, ultimately becoming the wife of Tsar Ador, suggesting a forced change in her life circumstances.

Her ethereal beauty and the moment of her transformation into a white swan.

Curious (about the cat), trusting (initially), somewhat naive, and possesses a magical ability to transform.

Locations

Serfs' Field

outdoor morning Implied pleasant weather for fieldwork

A tilled agricultural field, likely small and humble, where the seven young Simeon brothers are diligently working.

Mood: Humble, industrious, rural

Tsar Ador discovers the seven Simeon brothers working in their field.

tilled earth young boys working simple farming tools open sky

Tsar Ador's Palace Courtyard

transitional Varies, likely temperate

A large, open courtyard within Tsar Ador's palace complex, where a smithy is constructed for the eldest Simeon to build his sky-reaching column.

Mood: Royal, industrious, expectant

The Simeon brothers demonstrate their unique skills, and the eldest Simeon constructs the iron column.

palace walls (Russian/Byzantine style) smithy structure iron column under construction cobblestone or packed earth ground

Tsarina Helena's Palace (Thirtieth Kingdom)

indoor day Implied warm, pleasant climate

The opulent palace of Tsarina Helena's father, located in a distant, exotic kingdom. Specifically, Helena's private room with a window overlooking the city, and the Tsar's audience chamber.

Mood: Exotic, luxurious, secluded

Simeon the thief introduces the cat to Tsarina Helena, gaining entry and trust within the palace.

ornate window rich tapestries or wall hangings fine furniture Tsarina Helena Tsar Sarg cat

The Quay and Simeon's Ship

transitional day Sunny, calm sea

A bustling waterfront quay in Tsarina Helena's kingdom, where Simeon's ship is docked. The ship itself is a large, fully rigged vessel made from a single oak tree, filled with costly wares.

Mood: Busy, deceptive, adventurous

Simeon lures Tsarina Helena onto his ship and abducts her, setting sail for Tsar Ador's kingdom.

wooden quay moored ship (oak construction) sails ship's deck ocean distant city skyline