THE CROW [\[13\]](#Footnote1313)
by Unknown · from The Yellow Fairy Book
Adapted Version
Once upon a time, there was a kind princess named Lily. She loved to walk in a pretty garden. Princess Lily was very kind. She liked a garden. It was a pretty garden. The garden was near an old castle. Lily walked there often.
One day, Lily walked in the garden. She saw a black crow. The crow was sad. It talked to Lily. "I am Prince Leo," it said. "I am under a magic spell."
Prince Leo asked Lily for help. "Live in this castle," he said. "Stay in a golden bed. Be brave and quiet at night. Do not make a sound. If you cry, the magic spell gets stronger."
Princess Lily was very brave. She said yes. She left her home. Lily moved to the old castle.
Night came. Lily was in the golden bed. Dark shadows moved. Loud noises happened. Lily felt scared. But she was quiet. She did not make a sound. Lily was very brave.
The sun came up. The dark shadows went away. The crow came into the room. He thanked Princess Lily. "The magic spell is weaker now," he said. Lily felt happy.
Lily stayed in the castle. It was a long, long time. Every night, she was brave. She was quiet. Every morning, the crow thanked her. The magic spell got weaker. It got weaker and weaker.
One day, the crow talked to Lily. "One more year!" he said. "The magic spell will end. But you must work hard. You must work for a little while."
Princess Lily agreed. She worked hard for one year. She cleaned things. She helped people. Lily was always kind. She was very good.
One evening, Lily was working. Suddenly, the crow changed! He was not a crow. He was a handsome prince. Prince Leo smiled at Lily. He thanked her. "You made me free!" he said. Lily was very happy.
Prince Leo took Lily to his castle. It was a big castle. It was very beautiful. The castle was new. It was bright and happy.
Princess Lily and Prince Leo lived there. They lived happily ever after. They were always kind. They were always brave. Kindness helps others.
Original Story
THE CROW [13]
Once upon a time there were three Princesses who were all three young and beautiful; but the youngest, although she was not fairer than the other two, was the most loveable of them all.
About half a mile from the palace in which they lived there stood a castle, which was uninhabited and almost a ruin, but the garden which surrounded it was a mass of blooming flowers, and in this garden the youngest Princess used often to walk.
One day when she was pacing to and fro under the lime trees, a black crow hopped out of a rose-bush in front of her. The poor beast was all torn and bleeding, and the kind little Princess was quite unhappy about it. When the crow saw this it turned to her and said:
‘I am not really a black crow, but an enchanted Prince, who has been doomed to spend his youth in misery. If you only liked, Princess, you could save me. But you would have to say good-bye to all your own people, and come and be my constant companion in this ruined castle. There is one habitable room in it, in which there is a golden bed; there you will have to live all by yourself, and don’t forget that whatever you may see or hear in the night you must not scream out, for if you give as much as a single cry my sufferings will be doubled.’
The good-natured Princess at once left her home and her family and hurried to the ruined castle, and took possession of the room with the golden bed.
When night approached she lay down, but though she shut her eyes tight sleep would not come. At midnight she heard to her great horror some one coming along the passage, and in a minute her door was flung wide open and a troop of strange beings entered the room. They at once proceeded to light a fire in the huge fire-place; then they placed a great cauldron of boiling water on it. When they had done this, they approached the bed on which the trembling girl lay, and, screaming and yelling all the time, they dragged her towards the cauldron. She nearly died with fright, but she never uttered a sound. Then of a sudden the cock crew, and all the evil spirits vanished.
At the same moment the crow appeared and hopped all round the room with joy. It thanked the Princess most heartily for her goodness, and said that its sufferings had already been greatly lessened.
The evil spirits drag the girl to the cauldron
Now one of the Princess’s elder sisters, who was very inquisitive, had found out about everything, and went to pay her youngest sister a visit in the ruined castle. She implored her so urgently to let her spend the night with her in the golden bed, that at last the good-natured little Princess consented. But at midnight, when the odd folk appeared, the elder sister screamed with terror, and from this time on the youngest Princess insisted always on keeping watch alone.
So she lived in solitude all the day-time, and at night she would have been frightened, had she not been so brave; but every day the crow came and thanked her for her endurance, and assured her that his sufferings were far less than they had been.
And so two years passed away, when one day the crow came to the Princess and said: ‘In another year I shall be freed from the spell I am under at present, because then the seven years will be over. But before I can resume my natural form, and take possession of the belongings of my forefathers, you must go out into the world and take service as a maidservant.’
The young Princess consented at once, and for a whole year she served as a maid; but in spite of her youth and beauty she was very badly treated, and suffered many things. One evening, when she was spinning flax, and had worked her little white hands weary, she heard a rustling beside her and a cry of joy. Then she saw a handsome youth standing beside her; who knelt down at her feet and kissed the little weary white hands.
‘I am the Prince,’ he said, ‘who you in your goodness, when I was wandering about in the shape of a black crow, freed from the most awful torments. Come now to my castle with me, and let us live there happily together.’
So they went to the castle where they had both endured so much. But when they reached it, it was difficult to believe that it was the same, for it had all been rebuilt and done up again. And there they lived for a hundred years, a hundred years of joy and happiness.
Story DNA
Moral
True love and unwavering kindness can break the most powerful curses and lead to lasting happiness.
Plot Summary
A kind young princess encounters a wounded crow who reveals he is an enchanted prince, cursed to misery, and asks her to live in a ruined castle, enduring nightly horrors without screaming to break his spell. She bravely agrees, enduring terrifying nights and a year of servitude as a maid. After her unwavering perseverance, the crow transforms back into a handsome prince, and they live happily ever after in his restored castle.
Themes
Emotional Arc
suffering to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Reflects common fairy tale tropes of sacrifice, perseverance, and the breaking of curses through virtue.
Plot Beats (13)
- The youngest Princess, the most loveable, enjoys walking in the garden of a nearby ruined castle.
- She finds a wounded black crow, who reveals he is an enchanted Prince cursed to misery.
- The Prince asks her to live in the ruined castle's golden bed, endure nightly horrors, and never scream, or his suffering will double.
- The Princess agrees, leaves her home, and moves into the ruined castle.
- On the first night, terrifying beings enter, light a fire, place a cauldron, and drag the trembling Princess towards it, but she does not scream.
- At cockcrow, the spirits vanish, and the crow appears, thanking her and stating his suffering is greatly lessened.
- An elder sister visits, insists on staying the night, and screams when the spirits appear, forcing the youngest Princess to continue alone.
- For two years, the Princess lives in solitude, enduring the nightly terrors silently, and the crow thanks her daily for lessening his pain.
- The crow informs her that in another year, the seven-year spell will end, but she must first serve as a maidservant.
- The Princess consents and endures a year of harsh treatment as a maid.
- One evening, while spinning, the crow transforms into a handsome Prince, kneels before her, and thanks her for freeing him.
- The Prince takes her to his castle, which is now rebuilt and beautiful.
- They live happily together in the restored castle for a hundred years.
Characters
The Youngest Princess
Of average height and slender build, she is described as beautiful, though not necessarily fairer than her sisters, implying a gentle and appealing countenance. Her hands are noted as 'little white hands' which become weary from work, suggesting delicate features.
Attire: Initially, she would wear the fine, flowing gowns typical of a princess in a European fairy tale, likely made of silk or velvet in soft colors. When she goes into service as a maidservant, her attire would shift to simple, durable linen or wool dresses, perhaps in muted tones of brown, grey, or undyed fabric, with a plain apron and sturdy shoes, appropriate for a working girl in a medieval European setting.
Wants: To alleviate the suffering of the enchanted Prince and ultimately to find happiness and freedom from her trials.
Flaw: Her extreme selflessness and willingness to endure hardship for others could be seen as a vulnerability, as it leads her into dangerous situations.
Transforms from a sheltered princess to a resilient and brave woman who endures immense fear and hardship, ultimately freeing the Prince and finding lasting happiness and love.
Kind, good-natured, brave, selfless, enduring, compassionate. She consistently prioritizes the well-being of others, even at great personal cost and fear.
The Enchanted Prince / The Crow
As a crow, he is described as a 'black crow,' 'all torn and bleeding,' indicating a distressed and injured state. As a prince, he is a 'handsome youth,' implying a strong, appealing physique, likely tall and well-built.
Attire: As a crow, he has no wardrobe. As a prince, upon his transformation, he would likely appear in noble attire, perhaps a tunic and breeches of fine fabric like velvet or brocade, in rich colors, with a cloak, reflecting his royal status and the period.
Wants: To be freed from the curse and reclaim his true form and inheritance.
Flaw: His enchantment makes him vulnerable and dependent on the Princess for his salvation.
Starts as a tormented, injured crow, gradually finds relief through the Princess's actions, and is ultimately freed to become a handsome prince, reclaiming his castle and living happily.
Suffering, grateful, hopeful, patient, noble. He endures a long enchantment with the hope of freedom.
The Elder Sister (Inquisitive)
Described as beautiful, like her sisters. Her physical appearance is otherwise not detailed, but she would share the general characteristics of a princess.
Attire: Fine gowns of silk or velvet, in rich colors, indicative of her royal status in a European court.
Wants: Curiosity about her youngest sister's mysterious life in the ruined castle.
Flaw: Her overwhelming fear, which causes her to scream and double the Prince's suffering.
Briefly enters the narrative, experiences the horror of the castle, and fails the test of silence, highlighting the youngest Princess's unique bravery by contrast.
Inquisitive, fearful, lacking endurance. Her curiosity leads her to experience the terror the youngest sister faces, but she cannot withstand it.
Evil Spirits / Strange Beings / Odd Folk
A 'troop of strange beings,' 'screaming and yelling,' implying grotesque or frightening forms. They are strong enough to drag the Princess. Their appearance is left vague to maximize terror.
Attire: No specific wardrobe, as they are supernatural beings, perhaps shadowy or indistinct forms.
Wants: To torment the enchanted Prince and anyone who tries to help him, maintaining the curse.
Flaw: They vanish at the sound of a cock crowing, indicating a vulnerability to the dawn or a specific magical counter-spell.
They remain constant in their tormenting role until the curse is broken.
Cruel, tormenting, malevolent, terrifying. Their sole purpose is to inflict suffering.
Locations
Palace Garden
A blooming garden surrounding a ruined castle, featuring lime trees and rose-bushes. The garden is well-maintained despite the castle's dilapidated state.
Mood: Peaceful, serene, slightly melancholic due to the ruined castle nearby, but with a hint of magic.
The youngest Princess encounters the enchanted crow for the first time and learns of his plight.
Ruined Castle - Golden Bed Room
The only habitable room within a largely ruined castle. It contains a huge fireplace and a golden bed. The room is initially stark and becomes a place of nightly terror.
Mood: Eerie, terrifying, isolated, suspenseful, but also a place of quiet bravery and endurance.
The Princess endures nightly torments from evil spirits to break the Prince's curse, demonstrating her courage.
Rebuilt Castle
The same castle, but completely rebuilt and restored to its former glory, now vibrant and beautiful.
Mood: Joyful, magnificent, triumphant, a symbol of happiness and a new beginning.
The Prince and Princess return to live happily ever after, signifying the successful breaking of the curse and their reward.