THE SEVEN-HEADED SERPENT [\[9\]](#Footnote99)

by Unknown · from The Yellow Fairy Book

fairy tale overcoming the monster solemn Ages 8-14 1584 words 7 min read

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 432 words 2 min Canon 98/100

A brave King sailed to a new island. It was a nice place. A scary secret lived there. The King landed. His men found a pretty garden. Springs flowed with silver, gold, and pearls. A big lake spoke.

The Lake said, "A big monster lives here. It has seven heads. He will wake soon. Spread your clothes on his path. He will be happy then. He will not hurt you."

The earth shook. The big monster came. It was huge! It saw the soft clothes. The monster was pleased. But it made a bad rule. The people must give a gift. They must give it each year. This made all people sad.

The King and his men went home. They told their sad story. Each year, they gave a gift. The people lost their joy. Many years passed. The land was full of sorrow.

The Queen was old. She had no child. She felt very sad. A Wise Old Woman came. She gave the Queen an apple. The Queen ate the apple. She had a baby boy. A horse ate the apple peel. It had a baby horse.

The baby boy grew. He was The Prince. The baby horse grew. It was The Special Horse. They grew up as friends. They were best friends.

The King and Queen grew old. They went to sleep always. The Prince was sad. The Special Horse spoke to him. "You must save our land," it said. "Defeat the big monster. Make our people happy again."

The Special Horse took The Prince. They went to a secret cave. An old woman was there. She was The Wise Abbess. She sat and spun thread. She was very wise.

The Abbess said, "I helped you be born. You must defeat the monster. Load your horse with soft cotton. Go through a secret way. The monster sleeps. It has bells on its bed. Put cotton on all bells. Take the special sword. Make its seven heads vanish. Then the monster will be powerless."

The Prince rode his horse. He followed the Wise Abbess's words. He went to the monster's home. He put cotton on the bells. He took the special sword. He was very brave. He made all seven heads disappear. The big monster vanished.

The monster was defeated. Its wild beasts were angry. They chased The Prince. But The Special Horse was fast. The Prince rode far away. He came home safe. His country was free.

The Prince saved his country! All were happy and safe. The Prince and his special horse lived happily. Their land was free always.

Original Story 1584 words · 7 min read

THE SEVEN-HEADED SERPENT [9]

Once upon a time there was a king who determined to take a long voyage. He assembled his fleet and all the seamen, and set out. They went straight on night and day, until they came to an island which was covered with large trees, and under every tree lay a lion. As soon as the King had landed his men, the lions all rose up together and tried to devour them. After a long battle they managed to overcome the wild beasts, but the greater number of the men were killed. Those who remained alive now went on through the forest and found on the other side of it a beautiful garden, in which all the plants of the world flourished together. There were also in the garden three springs: the first flowed with silver, the second with gold, and the third with pearls. The men unbuckled their knapsacks and filled them with those precious things. In the middle of the garden they found a large lake, and when they reached the edge of it the Lake began to speak, and said to them, ‘What men are you, and what brings you here? Are you come to visit our king?’ But they were too much frightened to answer.

Then the Lake said, ‘You do well to be afraid, for it is at your peril that you are come hither. Our king, who has seven heads, is now asleep, but in a few minutes he will wake up and come to me to take his bath! Woe to anyone who meets him in the garden, for it is impossible to escape from him. This is what you must do if you wish to save your lives. Take off your clothes and spread them on the path which leads from here to the castle. The King will then glide over something soft, which he likes very much, and he will be so pleased with that that he will not devour you. He will give you some punishment, but then he will let you go.’

The men did as the Lake advised them, and waited for a time. At noon the earth began to quake, and opened in many places, and out of the openings appeared lions, tigers, and other wild beasts, which surrounded the castle, and thousands and thousands of beasts came out of the castle following their king, the Seven-headed Serpent. The Serpent glided over the clothes which were spread for him, came to the Lake, and asked it who had strewed those soft things on the path? The Lake answered that it had been done by people who had come to do him homage. The King commanded that the men should be brought before him. They came humbly on their knees, and in a few words told him their story. Then he spoke to them with a mighty and terrible voice, and said, ‘Because you have dared to come here, I lay upon you the punishment. Every year you must bring me from among your people twelve youths and twelve maidens, that I may devour them. If you do not do this, I will destroy your whole nation.’

Then he desired one of his beasts to show the men the way out of the garden, and dismissed them. They then left the island and went back to their own country, where they related what had happened to them. Soon the time came round when the king of the beasts would expect the youths and maidens to be brought to him. The King therefore issued a proclamation inviting twelve youths and twelve maidens to offer themselves up to save their country; and immediately many young people, far more than enough, hastened to do so. A new ship was built, and set with black sails, and in it the youths and maidens who were appointed for the king of the beasts embarked and set out for his country. When they arrived there they went at once to the Lake, and this time the lions did not stir, nor did the springs flow, and neither did the Lake speak. So they waited then, and it was not long before the earth quaked even more terribly than the first time. The Seven-headed Serpent came without his train of beasts, saw his prey waiting for him, and devoured it at one mouthful. Then the ship’s crew returned home, and the same thing happened yearly until many years had passed.

Now the King of this unhappy country was growing old, and so was the Queen, and they had no children. One day the Queen was sitting at the window weeping bitterly because she was childless, and knew that the crown would therefore pass to strangers after the King’s death. Suddenly a little old woman appeared before her, holding an apple in her hand, and said, ‘Why do you weep, my Queen, and what makes you so unhappy?’

‘Alas, good mother,’ answered the Queen, ‘I am unhappy because I have no children.’

‘Is that what vexes you?’ said the old woman. ‘Listen to me. I am a nun from the Spinning Convent [10] and my mother when she died left me this apple. Whoever eats this apple shall have a child.’

The Queen gave money to the old woman, and bought the apple from her. Then she peeled it, ate it, and threw the rind out of the window, and it so happened that a mare that was running loose in the court below ate up the rind. After a time the Queen had a little boy, and the mare also had a male foal. The boy and the foal grew up together and loved each other like brothers. In course of time the King died, and so did the Queen, and their son, who was now nineteen years old, was left alone. One day, when he and his horse were talking together, the Horse said to him, ‘Listen to me, for I love you and wish for your good and that of the country. If you go on every year sending twelve youths and twelve maidens to the King of the Beasts, your country will very soon be ruined. Mount upon my back: I will take you to a woman who can direct you how to kill the Seven-headed Serpent.’

Then the youth mounted his horse, who carried him far away to a mountain which was hollow, for in its side was a great underground cavern. In the cavern sat an old woman spinning. This was the cloister of the nuns, and the old woman was the Abbess. They all spent their time in spinning, and that is why the convent has this name. All round the walls of the cavern there were beds cut out of the solid rock, upon which the nuns slept, and in the middle a light was burning. It was the duty of the nuns to watch the light in turns, that it might never go out, and if anyone of them let it go out the others put her to death.

As soon as the King’s son saw the old Abbess spinning he threw himself at her feet and entreated her to tell him how he could kill the Seven-headed Serpent.

She made the youth rise, embraced him, and said, ‘Know, my son, that it is I who sent the nun to your mother and caused you to be born, and with you the horse, with whose help you will be able to free the world from the monster. I will tell you what you have to do. Load your horse with cotton, and go by a secret passage which I will show you, which is hidden from the wild beasts, to the Serpent’s palace. You will find the King asleep upon his bed, which is all hung round with bells, and over his bed you will see a sword hanging. With this sword only it is possible to kill the Serpent, because even if its blade breaks a new one will grow again for every head the monster has. Thus you will be able to cut off all his seven heads. And this you must also do in order to deceive the King: you must slip into his bed-chamber very softly, and stop up all the bells which are round his bed with cotton. Then take down the sword gently, and quickly give the monster a blow on his tail with it. This will make him waken up, and if he catches sight of you he will seize you. But you must quickly cut off his first head, and then wait till the next one comes up. Then strike it off also, and so go on till you have cut off all his seven heads.’

The old Abbess then gave the Prince her blessing, and he set out upon his enterprise, arrived at the Serpent’s castle by following the secret passage which she had shown him, and by carefully attending to all her directions he happily succeeded in killing the monster. As soon as the wild beasts heard of their king’s death, they all hastened to the castle, but the youth had long since mounted his horse and was already far out of their reach. They pursued him as fast as they could, but they found it impossible to overtake him, and he reached home in safety. Thus he freed his country from this terrible oppression.



Story DNA

Moral

Sometimes, extraordinary measures and destined heroes are required to overcome overwhelming evil and oppression.

Plot Summary

A king's voyage leads to an island where a Seven-headed Serpent demands an annual tribute of youths and maidens from his country. For years, the nation suffers under this tyranny until a childless Queen miraculously conceives a son, destined to be a hero, after eating a magical apple. Guided by his talking horse, the Prince seeks out a wise Abbess who reveals his destiny and provides the exact method to defeat the monster. Following her instructions, the Prince infiltrates the Serpent's lair, uses a magical sword to cut off all seven of its heads, and escapes, freeing his country from its terrible oppression.

Themes

sacrificecouragedestinytyranny vs. liberation

Emotional Arc

despair to hope to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: happy
Magic: Talking lake, Seven-headed serpent, Magical springs (silver, gold, pearls), Magical apple for fertility, Talking horse, Prophetic Abbess, Magical sword that regenerates blades, Secret passages
The Seven-headed Serpent (tyranny, evil)The magical apple (destiny, miraculous birth)The sword (the only means to defeat evil)The spinning convent (ancient wisdom, fate)

Cultural Context

Origin: Unknown (likely European folk tale tradition)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Reflects ancient fears of monstrous threats and the need for heroic figures to overcome them, common in many pre-industrial societies.

Plot Beats (11)

  1. A king and his fleet land on a mysterious island, battle lions, and discover a magical garden with precious springs and a talking lake.
  2. The Lake warns them of the Seven-headed Serpent king and advises them to spread their clothes on his path to appease him.
  3. The Serpent appears, accepts their homage, but imposes a yearly tribute of twelve youths and twelve maidens.
  4. The king and his people return home and begin the annual sacrifice, which continues for many years, bringing despair to the nation.
  5. The aging, childless Queen receives a magical apple from an old nun, eats it, and gives birth to a son; a mare eats the peel and has a foal.
  6. The Prince and his horse grow up together, becoming close companions.
  7. After the King and Queen die, the Horse reveals to the Prince that he must defeat the Serpent to save their country.
  8. The Horse takes the Prince to a hidden cavern where an Abbess and her nuns spin, guarding an eternal flame.
  9. The Abbess reveals she orchestrated the Prince's birth and instructs him on how to kill the Serpent: load the horse with cotton, use a secret passage, silence the bells around the Serpent's bed, take a specific sword, and cut off each of its seven heads sequentially.
  10. The Prince follows the Abbess's instructions, infiltrates the Serpent's castle, silences the bells, and uses the magical sword to cut off all seven of the Serpent's heads.
  11. Upon the Serpent's death, its wild beast followers pursue the Prince, but he escapes on his horse and returns home safely, liberating his country.

Characters

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The King (First King)

human adult male

A man of regal bearing, likely of average height and build, accustomed to command. His features would show the strain of leadership and the fear of the Seven-headed Serpent's demands.

Attire: Rich, but practical, seafaring attire for his voyage, perhaps a tunic of dark wool or linen, with a heavy cloak for warmth, and sturdy leather boots. Upon his return, more formal court attire, possibly a long tunic and trousers, with a simple crown or circlet.

Wants: To explore, to protect his people from the Serpent's wrath, to ensure the survival of his kingdom.

Flaw: Fear of the Seven-headed Serpent, leading him to sacrifice his people.

Starts as an adventurous king, but becomes a fearful ruler forced to make terrible sacrifices, eventually dying without solving the problem.

His initial determined expression before the voyage, contrasting with his later burdened look.

Determined, fearful, responsible, pragmatic.

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The Lake

magical entity (sentient body of water) ageless unknown

A large, still body of water, reflecting the surrounding beautiful garden. Its surface is calm until it speaks, perhaps rippling slightly with its words.

Wants: To protect its king, the Seven-headed Serpent, and to advise visitors on how to survive their encounter.

Flaw: Bound by its loyalty to the Serpent, unable to directly defy it.

Remains consistent, serving its role as a warning and guide.

Its calm surface, which ripples subtly when it speaks, reflecting the lush garden.

Mysterious, wise, cautious, pragmatic, protective (of its king).

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The Seven-headed Serpent

magical creature (serpent/dragon) ageless non-human

A colossal serpent with seven distinct heads, each capable of independent movement. Its scales are likely dark and iridescent, shimmering with a menacing sheen. Its body is immense, capable of devouring multiple humans in one gulp. It moves with a powerful, gliding motion.

Attire: N/A (natural scales)

Wants: To assert its dominance, to feed, to maintain its power over the human kingdom.

Flaw: Its reliance on sleep, its vulnerability to the specific sword, its tail being a weak point for awakening.

Remains a static force of evil until its death.

Its seven menacing heads, each with glowing eyes, rising from its colossal, scaled body.

Terrifying, powerful, demanding, cruel, easily pleased by comfort, arrogant.

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The Queen

human elderly female

An elderly woman, likely frail from age and sorrow, with a gentle demeanor. Her features would show the lines of worry and sadness from being childless and her kingdom's plight.

Attire: Elegant but subdued court attire, perhaps a long, flowing gown of deep blue or purple silk, with minimal embroidery, reflecting her sorrow rather than ostentation.

Wants: To have a child and secure the succession of the kingdom.

Flaw: Her deep sorrow and desperation for a child.

Starts in despair, finds hope, and successfully bears a child, fulfilling her deepest wish before her death.

Her tear-streaked face, looking out a window, clutching a magical apple.

Sorrowful, desperate, hopeful, kind.

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The Old Woman (Nun from Spinning Convent)

human elderly female

A small, ancient woman, perhaps slightly stooped, with a gentle but knowing demeanor. Her hands would show the signs of a lifetime of spinning.

Attire: Simple, modest nun's habit, likely made of coarse, undyed wool or linen, with a rope belt. The colors would be muted, reflecting her monastic life.

Wants: To guide the Queen and later the Prince, fulfilling a long-term plan to defeat the Serpent.

Flaw: N/A (appears to be a powerful, almost omniscient figure)

Remains a consistent, guiding force, orchestrating events from behind the scenes.

Her ancient, kind face framed by a simple nun's coif, holding a single, vibrant red apple.

Mysterious, wise, benevolent, prophetic, nurturing.

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The Prince

human young adult male

A young man of nineteen, likely strong and agile from growing up with his horse. His build would be lean and capable, suitable for a hero.

Attire: Practical, sturdy clothing suitable for riding and adventure, such as a tunic of durable linen or leather, simple trousers, and strong leather boots. Not overly ornate, but well-made.

Wants: To free his country from the Seven-headed Serpent's tyranny.

Flaw: Youthful inexperience, though guided by others.

Transforms from an innocent youth into a heroic liberator of his people, fulfilling his destiny.

Riding his magical horse, with a look of fierce determination.

Brave, determined, compassionate (for his people), resourceful, obedient (to the Abbess's instructions).

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The Horse

magical animal (foal/horse) adult (horse years) male

A magnificent male horse, strong and swift, with a glossy coat (perhaps a rich bay or black) and intelligent, knowing eyes. Its build is powerful, capable of carrying its rider great distances and escaping danger.

Attire: N/A (natural coat)

Wants: To protect the Prince and help him free the country from the Serpent's tyranny.

Flaw: N/A (appears to be a perfect companion)

Remains a consistent, loyal, and wise companion throughout the Prince's quest.

Its intelligent eyes, conveying deep understanding, as it speaks to the Prince.

Loyal, wise, protective, intelligent, prophetic.

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The Abbess

human elderly female

An ancient woman, the head of the Spinning Convent, likely frail but with an aura of immense wisdom and spiritual power. Her hands would be gnarled from a lifetime of spinning.

Attire: A simple, coarse, undyed wool nun's habit, perhaps with a slightly more ornate coif or veil to denote her position as Abbess. Practical and austere.

Wants: To ensure the prophecy of the Serpent's defeat is fulfilled, having orchestrated the Prince's birth.

Flaw: N/A (appears to be a powerful, almost omniscient figure)

Remains a consistent, guiding force, revealing her long-term plan and providing the final instructions for the hero.

Her ancient, serene face, framed by her nun's coif, as she spins at a wooden wheel in a cavern.

Wise, powerful, benevolent, prophetic, guiding, serene.

Locations

Island Garden of the Seven-Headed Serpent

outdoor noon | varies Implied warm, tropical climate given the lush vegetation and wild beasts.

A beautiful, lush garden on an island, beyond a forest of large trees where lions roam. It contains all the plants of the world flourishing together. Three springs flow within it: one with silver, one with gold, and one with pearls. In the middle, there is a large lake that can speak. A path leads from the lake to a nearby castle.

Mood: Initially beautiful and wondrous, quickly turning eerie and terrifying due to the speaking lake and the impending arrival of the Serpent King.

The King's men discover the magical springs, encounter the speaking lake, and are given instructions to appease the Seven-Headed Serpent. Later, the annual sacrifice of youths and maidens takes place here.

large trees lions diverse flourishing plants silver spring gold spring pearl spring large speaking lake path to castle

Underground Spinning Convent

indoor varies (perpetual artificial light) Cool, dry, subterranean environment, unaffected by external weather.

A great, hollow underground cavern within a mountain. The walls are carved out of solid rock, with beds cut directly into them where nuns sleep. In the middle of the cavern, a single light burns continuously, watched by the nuns who spend their time spinning.

Mood: Mysterious, ancient, and sacred, with a sense of quiet industry and hidden power. A place of wisdom and guidance.

The Prince seeks out the Abbess here, who reveals his destiny and provides the crucial instructions and secret passage to defeat the Seven-Headed Serpent.

hollow mountain cavern solid rock walls beds cut from rock spinning nuns perpetual burning light

Seven-Headed Serpent's Bed-chamber

indoor night (when the Serpent is asleep) Controlled indoor environment, likely humid and warm given the Serpent's nature, but no specific weather mentioned.

The private chamber of the Seven-Headed Serpent King within his castle. It contains his bed, which is hung all around with bells. Above the bed, a unique sword hangs, the only weapon capable of killing the monster.

Mood: Tense, dangerous, and silent, as the Prince must move stealthily to avoid waking the monstrous king. A place of ultimate confrontation.

The Prince infiltrates this chamber, silences the bells, retrieves the sword, and ultimately slays the Seven-Headed Serpent.

Serpent's bed bells around the bed hanging sword secret passage entrance