THE THREE BROTHERS [\[17\]](#Footnote1717)
by Unknown · from The Yellow Fairy Book
Adapted Version
Once upon a time, in a small village, there lived three brothers. Every night, a big, dark hawk came to their church. It made loud noises and scared everyone!
The big hawk made loud noises. It scared people. Leo's brothers tried to stop it. They waited in the church. They had guns. But they fell asleep. The hawk still made noise. It broke windows.
Leo wanted to stop the hawk. He put sharp things under his chin. He would not sleep. The hawk came. Leo stayed awake. He scared the hawk away. The hawk fell down. It fell into a deep, dark hole. Leo looked inside.
Leo went down into the hole. It was a new place. He found a shiny castle. A girl was there. Her name was Lily. She had golden hair. Leo liked her very much.
Lily told Leo about her mother. Her mother was the Mean Witch. The witch was not kind. A big, heavy sword could stop her. It would make her go away forever.
Leo found the big sword. It was in a shiny room. The sword was very heavy. He could not lift it. Lily's sister gave him a drink. It was a magic drink. Leo drank it. Now he was strong. He could lift the sword.
The Mean Witch came back. She came to the castle. Leo waited for her. He used the big sword. He made the witch disappear forever.
Leo sent shiny things up. He sent Lily too. Her sisters went up. They used a long rope. Leo's brothers pulled them up.
Leo wanted to know. Were his brothers kind? He tied a big stone to the rope. His brothers pulled. Then they cut the rope. The stone fell down. They were not kind to him.
Leo was stuck there. It was a deep, dark place. He met a Kind Magician. The Magician was sad. A Big Serpent wanted his children. He asked Leo for help.
Leo hid in a tree. It had golden apples. The Big Serpent came. It tried to hurt the children. Leo waited. He used his big sword. He made the serpent go away.
The Kind Magician was happy. Leo helped him. The Magician helped Leo. He carried Leo up. Leo went back to his home.
Leo came home. He saw his brothers. Lily was there. She was cooking. Lily saw Leo. She knew him. His brothers were scared.
Leo was kind to his brothers. He shared his shiny things. He built a big castle. It had golden windows. Leo lived there. He lived happily with Lily. Being brave and kind makes good things happen.
Original Story
THE THREE BROTHERS [17]
There was once upon a time a witch, who in the shape of a hawk used every night to break the windows of a certain village church. In the same village there lived three brothers, who were all determined to kill the mischievous hawk. But in vain did the two eldest mount guard in the church with their guns; as soon as the bird appeared high above their heads, sleep overpowered them, and they only awoke to hear the windows crashing in.
Then the youngest brother took his turn of guarding the windows, and to prevent his being overcome by sleep he placed a lot of thorns under his chin, so that if he felt drowsy and nodded his head, they would prick him and keep him awake.
The moon was already risen, and it was as light as day, when suddenly he heard a fearful noise, and at the same time a terrible desire to sleep overpowered him.
His eyelids closed, and his head sank on his shoulders, but the thorns ran into him and were so painful that he awoke at once. He saw the hawk swooping down upon the church, and in a moment he had seized his gun and shot at the bird. The hawk fell heavily under a big stone, severely wounded in its right wing. The youth ran to look at it, and saw that a huge abyss had opened below the stone. He went at once to fetch his brothers, and with their help dragged a lot of pine-wood and ropes to the spot. They fastened some of the burning pine-wood to the end of the rope, and let it slowly down to the bottom of the abyss. At first it was quite dark, and the flaming torch only lit up dirty grey stone walls. But the youngest brother determined to explore the abyss, and letting himself down by the rope he soon reached the bottom. Here he found a lovely meadow full of green trees and exquisite flowers.
In the middle of the meadow stood a huge stone castle, with an iron gate leading to it, which was wide open. Everything in the castle seemed to be made of copper, and the only inhabitant he could discover was a lovely girl, who was combing her golden hair; and he noticed that whenever one of her hairs fell on the ground it rang out like pure metal. The youth looked at her more closely, and saw that her skin was smooth and fair, her blue eyes bright and sparkling, and her hair as golden as the sun. He fell in love with her on the spot, and kneeling at her feet, he implored her to become his wife.
The lovely girl accepted his proposal gladly; but at the same time she warned him that she could never come up to the world above till her mother, the old witch, was dead. And she went on to tell him that the only way in which the old creature could be killed was with the sword that hung up in the castle; but the sword was so heavy that no one could lift it.
Then the youth went into a room in the castle where everything was made of silver, and here he found another beautiful girl, the sister of his bride. She was combing her silver hair, and every hair that fell on the ground rang out like pure metal. The second girl handed him the sword, but though he tried with all his strength he could not lift it. At last a third sister came to him and gave him a drop of something to drink, which she said would give him the needful strength. He drank one drop, but still he could not lift the sword; then he drank a second, and the sword began to move; but only after he had drunk a third drop was he able to swing the sword over his head.
Then he hid himself in the castle and awaited the old witch’s arrival. At last as it was beginning to grow dark she appeared. She swooped down upon a big apple-tree, and after shaking some golden apples from it, she pounced down upon the earth. As soon as her feet touched the ground she became transformed from a hawk into a woman. This was the moment the youth was waiting for, and he swung his mighty sword in the air with all his strength and the witch’s head fell off, and her blood spurted up on the walls.
Without fear of any further danger, he packed up all the treasures of the castle into great chests, and gave his brothers a signal to pull them up out of the abyss. First the treasures were attached to the rope and then the three lovely girls. And now everything was up above and only he himself remained below. But as he was a little suspicious of his brothers, he fastened a heavy stone on to the rope and let them pull it up. At first they heaved with a will, but when the stone was half way up they let it drop suddenly, and it fell to the bottom broken into a hundred pieces.
‘So that’s what would have happened to my bones had I trusted myself to them,’ said the youth sadly; and he began to cry bitterly, not because of the treasures, but because of the lovely girl with her swan-like neck and golden hair.
‘Then the youth swung his mighty sword in the air, and with one blow cut off the serpent’s head’
For a long time he wandered sadly all through the beautiful underworld, and one day he met a magician who asked him the cause of his tears. The youth told him all that had befallen him, and the magician said:
‘Do not grieve, young man! If you will guard the children who are hidden in the golden apple-tree, I will bring you at once up to the earth. Another magician who lives in this land always eats my children up. It is in vain that I have hidden them under the earth and locked them into the castle. Now I have hidden them in the apple-tree; hide yourself there too, and at midnight you will see my enemy.’
The youth climbed up the tree, and picked some of the beautiful golden apples, which he ate for his supper.
At midnight the wind began to rise, and a rustling sound was heard at the foot of the tree. The youth looked down and beheld a long thick serpent beginning to crawl up the tree. It wound itself round the stem and gradually got higher and higher. It stretched its huge head, in which the eyes glittered fiercely, among the branches, searching for the nest in which the little children lay. They trembled with terror when they saw the hideous creature, and hid themselves beneath the leaves.
Then the youth swung his mighty sword in the air, and with one blow cut off the serpent’s head. He cut up the rest of the body into little bits and strewed them to the four winds.
The father of the rescued children was so delighted over the death of his enemy that he told the youth to get on his back, and in this way he carried him up to the world above.
With what joy did he hurry now to his brothers’ house! He burst into a room where they were all assembled, but no one knew who he was. Only his bride, who was serving as cook to her sisters, recognised her lover at once.
His brothers, who had quite believed he was dead, yielded him up his treasures at once, and flew into the woods in terror. But the good youth forgave them all they had done, and divided his treasures with them. Then he built himself a big castle with golden windows, and there he lived happily with his golden-haired wife till the end of their lives.
Story DNA
Moral
Even when faced with betrayal, courage and kindness can lead to a happy and prosperous life.
Plot Summary
The youngest of three brothers successfully wounds a hawk terrorizing their village, leading him to a magical underworld. There, he falls in love with a maiden and slays her witch mother using a powerful sword. After sending treasures and the maidens to the surface, his brothers betray him by cutting the rope, leaving him stranded. He then helps a good magician by killing a monstrous serpent, earning his return to the surface. He forgives his brothers, marries his beloved, and lives prosperously.
Themes
Emotional Arc
danger to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This tale shares common motifs with many European folk tales, such as the 'rule of three' brothers, magical transformations, and tests of loyalty.
Plot Beats (13)
- A witch in hawk form breaks church windows nightly; the two elder brothers fail to stop her.
- The youngest brother uses thorns to stay awake, shoots the hawk, and discovers an abyss beneath where it fell.
- He descends into the abyss, finds a copper castle, and falls in love with a golden-haired maiden.
- The maiden reveals her mother is the witch and can only be killed by a heavy sword.
- He finds the sword in a silver room, and with the help of a third sister's potion, gains the strength to wield it.
- He ambushes and kills the witch when she transforms from hawk to woman.
- He sends the castle's treasures and the three maidens up the rope to his brothers.
- Suspicious, he tests his brothers by attaching a stone to the rope; they cut it, confirming their betrayal.
- Trapped, he wanders the underworld and meets a good magician who asks him to protect his children from an evil serpent.
- He hides in a golden apple tree and slays the serpent when it attempts to eat the children.
- The grateful magician carries him back to the surface world.
- He returns home, is recognized by his bride (now a cook), and confronts his terrified brothers.
- He forgives his brothers, shares his treasures, builds a castle, and lives happily with his wife.
Characters
The Youngest Brother
Lean and agile build, of average height for a young man, with a determined and watchful demeanor. His movements are quick and decisive when action is required.
Attire: Simple, practical peasant clothing suitable for guarding at night, likely a coarse linen tunic, sturdy breeches, and leather boots. Perhaps a rough wool cloak for warmth.
Wants: To protect his village from the hawk, to explore the unknown, to rescue the maiden he loves, and ultimately, to live happily with her.
Flaw: Initially susceptible to sleep, and later, a trusting nature that almost leads to his demise by his brothers.
Transforms from a vigilant guard to a heroic adventurer, overcoming betrayal and proving his worth, ultimately finding love and forgiveness.
Resourceful, brave, persistent, suspicious (of his brothers), loving, forgiving.
The Witch
In human form, she is a gaunt, perhaps hunched, elderly woman with a menacing presence. As a hawk, she is large and powerful, with dark, predatory feathers.
Attire: In human form, dark, tattered robes, possibly made of rough wool or linen, suggesting a life of isolation and malevolence. No specific cultural attire is mentioned, so a generic witch's garb is implied.
Wants: To cause chaos and destruction (breaking church windows), to protect her hidden realm and her daughters.
Flaw: Her physical form is vulnerable to the mighty sword, and her reliance on the sword's weight to prevent others from using it.
Remains evil until her death, which frees her daughters and her hidden realm.
Mischievous, destructive, powerful, cruel, possessive (of her daughters).
The Golden-haired Girl
Lovely and fair, with smooth, pale skin and a graceful, swan-like neck. Her overall appearance is delicate and ethereal.
Attire: A beautiful, flowing gown made of copper-colored fabric, perhaps silk or fine linen, reflecting the copper castle she inhabits. The style would be elegant and timeless, possibly with simple, delicate embroidery.
Wants: To be free from her mother's influence and to marry the man she loves.
Flaw: Her inability to leave the underworld until her mother is dead.
Remains constant in her love and becomes the wife of the youngest brother, living happily ever after.
Loving, accepting, cautious (warning about her mother), patient, loyal.
The Magician
A powerful figure, perhaps with an imposing but benevolent presence. His form is not explicitly described, but his ability to carry the youth suggests a strong, possibly non-human, build.
Attire: Flowing, perhaps star-dusted robes, appropriate for a powerful magician in an underworld setting. Likely dark or deep blue, with mystical symbols.
Wants: To protect his children from the serpent-magician, and to repay the youth for his help.
Flaw: His children are vulnerable to the other magician, requiring external help for protection.
Acts as a mentor and rescuer for the youngest brother, fulfilling his promise.
Wise, benevolent, grateful, powerful.
The Serpent
A long, thick serpent, huge in size, with a head large enough to search among tree branches. Its eyes glitter fiercely.
Attire: Its scales would be its 'wardrobe', perhaps dark green or brown, blending with the tree, but with an ominous sheen.
Wants: To devour the children of the other magician.
Flaw: Vulnerable to the mighty sword.
Is defeated and killed by the youngest brother, ending its reign of terror.
Predatory, relentless, evil.
Locations
Village Church
A village church with windows that are repeatedly broken by a hawk. The interior is dark at night, illuminated only by moonlight filtering in, and later by the light of a burning pine-wood torch.
Mood: Eerie, tense, watchful, later mysterious
The youngest brother successfully guards the church, shoots the hawk, and discovers the abyss.
Abyss Entrance
A huge abyss that opens up beneath a large stone, revealed after the hawk is shot. Its walls are described as dirty grey stone, initially dark, then lit by a flaming torch.
Mood: Mysterious, dangerous, foreboding
The entrance to the underworld is discovered, and the youngest brother descends into it.
Underworld Meadow and Copper Castle
A lovely meadow at the bottom of the abyss, full of green trees and exquisite flowers. In the middle stands a huge stone castle with an iron gate, where everything inside is made of copper. Later, rooms made of silver are also found.
Mood: Magical, enchanting, opulent, later tense
The youngest brother finds the enchanted princesses, falls in love, and kills the witch.
Magician's Golden Apple-Tree
A large apple-tree bearing beautiful golden apples, where a magician's children are hidden. The youth hides within its branches.
Mood: Tense, suspenseful, protective
The youth guards the magician's children and slays the serpent.