FOURTEENTH GOBLIN

by Unknown · from Twenty-Two Goblins

folk tale moral tale solemn Ages all ages 1829 words 8 min read

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 384 words 2 min Canon 95/100

The King walked. He carried The Goblin. The Goblin was on his shoulder. The Goblin told a story. It was about The King of the Story. He had a wife. They had Princess Moonlight.

Princess Moonlight went to a big party. She saw Master-mind there. A big elephant came. Master-mind helped Princess Moonlight. They became special friends.

Master-mind wanted to see her. He asked Root (Master-mind's Teacher). Root was a clever teacher. Root gave him a charm. He could pretend to be a girl.

Root put on a disguise. He looked like an old man. He brought Master-mind. Master-mind was a girl. Root asked The King of the Story for her. The King said yes.

Master-mind lived with Princess Moonlight. He learned she liked him. He told her his secret. They made a secret promise. They would be special friends always.

Master-mind pretended to be a girl by day. He was himself at night. He kept his secret promise. Princess Moonlight was happy with him.

Princess Moonlight went to a big party. Master-mind went as a girl. The counsellor's son was there. He saw Master-mind. Master-mind was a girl. The counsellor's son liked her very much. He wanted to be her friend.

The King of the Story made a promise. He would give the girl to the son.

Master-mind, still a girl, said yes. But she had a plan. The son must go on a long trip. For six months.

Master-mind ran away before the son came back.

Root came back. His friend Moon was with him. Root asked The King of the Story, "Where is the girl?" The King of the Story could not find her. So, The King of the Story made a public promise. Princess Moonlight would be Moon's special friend.

Princess Moonlight and Moon had a public promise to be special friends. Root went away with them.

Then Master-mind came back. He saw Princess Moonlight. He said, "She is my special friend!" Moon said, "No, she is my special friend!"

The Goblin asked The King, "Whose special friend is Princess Moonlight?"

The King said, "Moonlight is Moon's special friend. Their promise was public and clear. Master-mind's promise was a secret. Public promises are better than secret ones."

The Goblin was happy. He went home. The King went on his journey.

Original Story 1829 words · 8 min read

FOURTEENTH GOBLIN

The Man who changed into a Woman at Will. Was his wife his or the other man's?

So the king went back as before under the sissoo tree, put the goblin on his shoulder, and started toward the monk. And as he walked along, the goblin told the king a story.

There was a city called Shivapur in Nepal. Long ago a king named Glory-banner lived there, and he deserved the name. He laid the burden of government on his counsellor named Ocean-of-Wisdom, and devoted himself to a life of pleasure with his wife Moonbright.

In course of time a daughter named Moonlight was born to them, pleasing as the moonlight to the eyes of men. When she grew up, she went one day in spring with her servants to a festival in the garden.

There she was seen by a Brahman youth named Master-mind, the son of Rich, who had come there to the festival. When he saw her plucking flowers with one arm uplifted, he went mad with love. His heart was taken captive by the gay maiden, and he was no longer master of his mind.

He thought: "Is she the goddess of love, plucking the spring flowers in person? Or is she a forest goddess, come here to worship the spring-time?"

Then the princess saw him, like a new god of love incarnate. The moment her eyes fell on him, she fell in love, forgetting her flowers and even her own limbs. While they looked at each other, lost in love like people in a picture, a great wail of anguish arose. They lifted their heads to learn what the matter was, and just then an elephant that had broken his chain, maddened by the scent of another mad elephant, came by, crushing the people in his path. He had thrown off his driver and the ankus hung from him as he ran. And everyone fled in terror.

But the youth Master-mind ran up in a hurry and took the princess in his arms. And with a mixture of fear and love and modesty she half embraced him as he carried her far out of the elephant's path. Then her people gradually gathered, and she went to the palace, looking at the youth, and burning over the flame of love.

And the youth went home from the garden, and thought: "I cannot live, I cannot exist a moment without her. I must seek help from my teacher Root, who is a thorough rogue." And so the day slowly passed.

The next morning he went to his teacher Root, and found him with his constant friend Moon. He drew near, bowed, and told his desire. And the teacher laughed and promised to help him.

So that wonderful rogue put a magic pill in his mouth, and thus changed himself into an old Brahman. He put a second pill into Master-mind's mouth, which changed him into a lovely girl. Then that prince of rogues took him to the king and said: "O King, this maiden has come a long distance to marry my only son. But my son has gone away, and I am going to look for him. Please keep the girl. For you are a protector to be trusted while I am looking for my son."

The king was afraid of a curse, so he promised to do it. And summoning his daughter, he said: "Daughter, keep this maiden in your chamber, and let her live with you." So the girl took the Brahman youth Master-mind in his girl form to her own apartments.

When Root had gone away, Master-mind in his girl form lived with his beloved, and in a few days came to know her in an intimate and loving way, as girl friends do. Then when he saw that she was pining away and tossing on her couch, he asked the princess one evening: "My dear girl, why do you grow pale and thin day by day, grieving as if separated from your love? Tell me. Why not trust a loving, innocent girl like me? If you will not tell me, I shall starve myself."

And the princess trusted him and said after a little hesitation: "My dear girl, why should I not trust you? Listen. I will tell you. One day I went to the spring festival in the garden. There I saw a handsome Brahman youth, fair as the moon but not so cold, the sight of whom kindled my love. For he adorned the garden as the spring-time does. While my eager eyes were feasting on his face, a great mad elephant that had broken his chain came charging and thundering past like a black cloud in the dry season. My servants scattered in terror, and I was helpless. But the Brahman youth took me in his arms and carried me far away. I seemed to be in a sandal bath, in a stream of nectar. I cannot tell how I felt as I touched him. Presently my servants gathered around, and I was brought here helpless. I felt as if I had fallen from heaven to earth. From that day I see in my thoughts my dear preserver beside me. I embrace him in my dreams. What need of more words? I wear away the time, thinking constantly of him and only him. The fire of separation from the lord of my life devours me day and night."

When Master-mind heard these welcome words, he rejoiced and counted himself happy. And thinking the time to reveal himself had come, he took the pill from his mouth, and disclosed his natural form. And he said: "Beautiful maiden, I am he whom you bought and enslaved with a kindly glance in the garden. I was sick at the separation from you; so I took the form of a girl, and came here. So now bring heaven in a loving glance to my love-tortured heart."

When the princess saw that the lord of her life was beside her, she was torn between love and wonder and modesty, and did not know what she ought to do. So they were secretly married and lived there in supreme happiness. Master-mind lived in a double form. By day he was a girl with the pill in his mouth, by night a man without the pill.

After a time the brother-in-law of King Glory-banner gave his daughter with great pomp to a Brahman, the son of the counsellor Ocean-of-Wisdom. And the princess Moonlight was invited to her cousin's wedding and went to her uncle's house. And Master-mind went with her in his girl form.

When the counsellor's son saw Master-mind in his lovely girl form, he was terribly smitten with the arrows of love. His heart was stolen by the sham girl, and he went home feeling lonely even with his wife. It made him crazy to think of that lovely face. When his father tried to soothe him, he woke from his madness and stammered out his insane desire. And his father was terribly distressed, knowing that all this depended on another.

Then the king learned the story and came there. When the king saw his condition and perceived that he was seven parts gone in love, he said: "How can I give him the girl who was intrusted to me by the Brahman? Yet without her he will be ten parts gone in love, and will die. And if he dies, then his father, the counsellor, will die too. And if the counsellor perishes, my kingdom will perish. What shall I do?"

He consulted his counsellors, and they said: "Your Majesty, the first duty of a king is the preservation of the virtue of his people. This is the fundamental principle, and is established as such among counsellors. If the counsellor is lost, the fundamental principle is lost; how then can virtue be preserved? So in this case it would be sinful to destroy the counsellor through his son. You must by all means avoid the loss of virtue which would ensue. Give the Brahman's girl to the counsellor's son. And when the Brahman returns, further measures will suggest themselves."

To this the king agreed, and promised to give the sham girl to the counsellor's son. So Master-mind in his girl form was brought from the chamber of the princess, and he said to the king: "Your Majesty, I was brought here by somebody for a given purpose. If you give me to somebody else, well and good. You are the king. Right and wrong depend on you. I will marry him to-day, but only on one condition. My husband shall go away immediately after the marriage and not return until he has been on a pilgrimage for six months. Otherwise I shall bite out my tongue."

So the counsellor's son was summoned, and he joyfully assented. He made the man his wife at once, put the sham wife in a guarded room and started on a pilgrimage. So Master-mind lived there in his woman form.

When he realized that the counsellor's son would soon return, Master-mind fled by night. And Root heard the story, and again assumed the form of an old Brahman. He took his friend Moon, went to Glory-banner, and said respectfully: "Your Majesty, I have brought my son. Pray give me my daughter-in-law."

The king was afraid of a curse, so he said: "Brahman, I do not know where your daughter-in-law has gone. Be merciful. To atone for my carelessness, I will give your son my own daughter."

The prince of rogues in the form of an old Brahman angrily refused. But the king finally persuaded him, and with all due form married his daughter Moonlight to Moon, who pretended to be the old Brahman's son. Then Root went home with the bride and bridegroom.

But then Master-mind came, and in the presence of Root, a great dispute arose between him and Moon.

Master-mind said: "Moonlight should be given to me. I married the girl first with my teacher's permission."

Moon said: "Fool! What rights have you in my wife? Her father gave her to me in regular marriage."

So they disputed about the princess whom one had won by fraud and the other by force. But they could reach no decision.

O King, tell me. Whose wife is she? Resolve my doubts, and remember the agreement about your head.

Then the king said: "I think she is the rightful wife of Moon. For she was married to him in the regular way by her father in the presence of her relatives. Master-mind married her secretly, like a thief. And when a thief takes things from other people, it is never right."

When the goblin heard this, he went back home as before. And the king stuck to his purpose. He went back again, put the goblin on his shoulder, and started from the sissoo tree.


Story DNA

Moral

True ownership and legitimacy are established through proper, public channels, not through deceit or secret arrangements.

Plot Summary

A king carrying a goblin is told a story about Master-mind, a Brahman youth who falls in love with Princess Moonlight. With the help of his rogue teacher, Master-mind uses a magic pill to transform into a girl, infiltrates the palace, and secretly marries Moonlight. Later, the king's counsellor's son falls in love with Master-mind in his girl form, forcing the king to promise her to him. Master-mind flees, and his teacher returns with a friend, Moon, who then formally marries Moonlight. When Master-mind reappears, a dispute arises over Moonlight's true husband. The king, in the frame story, rules that Moonlight rightfully belongs to Moon, as their marriage was public and legitimate, unlike Master-mind's secret union.

Themes

justicedeceptionlove and desireduty vs. personal gain

Emotional Arc

confusion to clarity

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: frame story, riddle format

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: magic pills for gender transformation, talking goblin
the magic pillthe sissoo tree

Cultural Context

Origin: Indian (likely from the Vetala Panchavimshati or 'Twenty-five Tales of the Vetala')
Era: timeless fairy tale

This story is part of a larger collection of frame stories, where a king is challenged to answer riddles by a Vetala (goblin) he is carrying. The king's ability to answer correctly prevents the Vetala from returning to its tree.

Plot Beats (17)

  1. The king carries a goblin, who begins a story about King Glory-banner, his wife Moonbright, and their daughter Moonlight.
  2. Princess Moonlight and Brahman youth Master-mind fall in love at a festival after an elephant scare brings them together.
  3. Master-mind seeks help from his rogue teacher Root, who gives him a magic pill to transform into a girl.
  4. Root, disguised as an old Brahman, entrusts Master-mind (as a girl) to King Glory-banner for safekeeping.
  5. Master-mind, living with Moonlight, learns of her love for him and reveals his true identity, leading to their secret marriage.
  6. Master-mind lives a double life, a girl by day and a man by night, secretly married to Moonlight.
  7. Moonlight's cousin marries the counsellor's son, and Master-mind (as a girl) attends the wedding with Moonlight.
  8. The counsellor's son falls deeply in love with Master-mind in his girl form, threatening his life and the kingdom.
  9. The king, advised by his counsellors, agrees to give the 'girl' to the counsellor's son to save the kingdom.
  10. Master-mind (as a girl) agrees to marry the counsellor's son on condition that he leaves for a six-month pilgrimage immediately after.
  11. Master-mind flees before the counsellor's son returns.
  12. Root, with his friend Moon, returns to the king, demanding his 'daughter-in-law'. The king, unable to produce her, offers his daughter Moonlight to Moon as atonement.
  13. Moonlight is formally married to Moon, and Root leaves with the couple.
  14. Master-mind reappears, leading to a dispute between him and Moon over who is Moonlight's rightful husband.
  15. The goblin asks the king to judge whose wife Moonlight is.
  16. The king declares Moonlight is Moon's rightful wife due to the public and legitimate nature of their marriage.
  17. The goblin, satisfied, returns home, and the king continues his journey.

Characters

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King Glory-banner

human adult male

A man of regal bearing, likely of average height and build, with features consistent with a Nepalese king of ancient times. His appearance would suggest a life of comfort and pleasure, rather than hardship.

Attire: Richly embroidered silk dhoti and angarkha (a type of tunic), possibly in deep reds, golds, or blues, with intricate patterns. He would wear a jeweled turban or crown, and heavy gold necklaces and armlets, indicative of his royal status.

Wants: To maintain his kingdom's stability and his own comfortable life, avoiding divine curses.

Flaw: Fear of curses, which makes him susceptible to manipulation; his detachment from direct governance.

He is initially detached but becomes more actively involved in resolving the complex marital disputes, demonstrating a shift towards more direct leadership when faced with a crisis.

His jeweled turban and rich, flowing silk robes.

Pleasure-seeking, somewhat detached from governance, easily swayed by fear of curses, ultimately pragmatic in his decisions for the kingdom's stability.

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Moonlight

human young adult female

A beautiful young woman, pleasing to the eyes, with a delicate build and graceful movements. Her features would be soft and refined, typical of royalty.

Attire: A flowing, light-colored silk sari or lehenga in soft pastels like cream, sky blue, or pale pink, possibly with delicate silver or gold embroidery. She would wear subtle jewelry, such as thin bangles and a small nose ring, appropriate for a princess.

Wants: To be with her beloved Master-mind.

Flaw: Her intense love makes her vulnerable and easily manipulated; her innocence makes her trusting.

She falls deeply in love, experiences a secret marriage, and becomes an unwitting pawn in a complex scheme, ultimately having her fate decided by others.

Her long, dark, flowing hair adorned with fresh flowers.

Romantic, innocent, deeply in love, somewhat naive, trusting.

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Master-mind

human young adult male

A handsome Brahman youth, fair-skinned and well-proportioned, with an appealing physique. When in his girl form, he is described as a 'lovely girl,' suggesting delicate features and a graceful figure.

Attire: In his male form, a simple but clean white cotton dhoti and kurta, befitting a Brahman youth. In his girl form, a modest but lovely sari or lehenga, likely in soft colors, to blend in as a maiden.

Wants: To marry and be with Princess Moonlight, using any means necessary.

Flaw: His intense love makes him take risky and deceptive actions; his reliance on trickery.

He transforms from a lovestruck youth into a cunning schemer, using magic to achieve his desires, but ultimately finds his claim to his beloved disputed due to his deceptive methods.

The magic pill he uses to change his form, and the contrast between his male and female appearances.

Passionate, resourceful, cunning, deeply in love, somewhat reckless.

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Root

human elderly male

When in his natural form, he is likely an older man, perhaps with a shrewd look. In his disguised form, he appears as an 'old Brahman,' suggesting a lean build, wrinkled skin, and a wise but perhaps mischievous demeanor.

Attire: In his old Brahman disguise, a simple, unbleached cotton dhoti and an upper cloth (uttariya) draped over his shoulders, perhaps with a sacred thread (yajnopavita) visible. His clothes would be clean but unadorned, suggesting austerity.

Wants: To help his student Master-mind achieve his desires, and perhaps for the sheer enjoyment of orchestrating complex deceptions.

Flaw: His reliance on trickery and disregard for conventional morality leads to complications.

He remains consistent in his role as a magical facilitator and manipulator, orchestrating events from behind the scenes.

His transformation into an old Brahman and the magic pills he uses.

Cunning, mischievous, resourceful, loyal to his student, amoral in his methods.

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Ocean-of-Wisdom

human adult male

A man of mature age, with a dignified and scholarly appearance, reflecting his role as a wise counsellor. Likely of average height and build, with a calm demeanor.

Attire: Formal court attire, such as a finely woven cotton or silk dhoti and a long, tailored angarkha, possibly in a deep, respectable color like indigo or maroon, with subtle embroidery. He would wear a simple, elegant turban without excessive jewels, signifying wisdom over ostentation.

Wants: To advise the king wisely, maintain the kingdom's stability, and ensure his son's well-being.

Flaw: His deep love for his son makes him vulnerable to emotional distress and influences his counsel.

He is initially a background figure, but his personal distress over his son's infatuation forces him into a more active role, influencing the king's decision-making.

His dignified turban and thoughtful expression.

Wise, loyal, pragmatic, concerned with the welfare of the kingdom and his son.

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Moon

human young adult male

A young Brahman, likely handsome and well-groomed, befitting the son of a chief counsellor. He would have a pleasant, perhaps somewhat earnest, appearance.

Attire: Finely woven cotton dhoti and kurta, perhaps in a light color, indicative of his status as a Brahman and son of a high-ranking official. He might wear a simple, thin gold chain.

Wants: To marry the 'lovely girl' (Master-mind in disguise) he has fallen in love with, and later to claim Moonlight as his rightful wife.

Flaw: His intense infatuation makes him irrational and causes distress to his father and the king.

He falls deeply in love with a disguised Master-mind, leading to a crisis, and later becomes the formal husband of Moonlight, making him a central figure in the final dispute.

His initial madness of love for the 'sham girl' and his later formal marriage to Moonlight.

Lovestruck, determined, somewhat entitled, assertive in his claims.

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The Goblin

magical creature ageless non-human

A small, possibly grotesque or mischievous-looking creature, light enough for a man to carry on his shoulder. Its features would be distinctively non-human, perhaps with pointed ears or unusual skin texture.

Attire: Minimal, perhaps a simple loincloth or nothing at all, emphasizing its non-human nature. Could be adorned with natural elements like leaves or bones.

Wants: To test the king's wisdom and fulfill the terms of their agreement.

Flaw: Bound by the rules of the riddle-telling and the agreement.

Remains consistent as the storyteller and riddle-poser, serving as a narrative device.

Its small, unusual form perched on the king's shoulder.

Clever, enigmatic, a storyteller, bound by a magical agreement.

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The King (narrative frame)

human adult male

A determined and resolute man, likely of a strong build, capable of carrying the goblin for long distances. His features would show signs of weariness from his task but also unwavering resolve.

Attire: Practical, sturdy clothing suitable for travel, perhaps a simple tunic and trousers in muted colors, rather than royal finery, as he is on a quest.

Wants: To fulfill his agreement with the goblin and reach the monk, demonstrating his wisdom.

Flaw: Bound by the goblin's riddles and the threat to his head.

He consistently demonstrates his wisdom and resolve throughout the goblin's stories.

Carrying the goblin on his shoulder.

Determined, resolute, thoughtful, bound by his word, wise in judgment.

Locations

Sissoo Tree

outdoor Implied pleasant weather, suitable for travel and storytelling.

A prominent sissoo tree, likely large and ancient, serving as a recurring landmark where the king interacts with the goblin.

Mood: Mysterious, pivotal, a place of transition and narrative exchange.

The starting and returning point for the king's journey with the goblin, where the stories are told.

Large sissoo tree King Goblin on shoulder

Royal Garden in Shivapur

outdoor afternoon Springtime, pleasant and sunny, ideal for a festival.

A lush, vibrant garden in the city of Shivapur, Nepal, filled with spring flowers. It's a public space for festivals, suggesting well-maintained paths and diverse flora.

Mood: Romantic, lively, then suddenly chaotic and terrifying.

Princess Moonlight and Master-mind first meet and fall in love amidst a spring festival, followed by a dramatic elephant rampage.

Spring flowers (being plucked) Servants Brahman youth (Master-mind) Princess Moonlight Mad elephant Ankus (elephant goad)

Princess Moonlight's Royal Chambers

indoor varies (day and night) Consistent indoor climate.

The private apartments of Princess Moonlight within the royal palace of Shivapur, Nepal. It is a place of intimacy and secrecy, where Master-mind lives in disguise.

Mood: Intimate, secretive, romantic, filled with longing and eventual happiness.

Master-mind, disguised as a girl, lives with Princess Moonlight, learns of her love, reveals his true form, and they secretly marry.

Couch/bed Pillows Princess Moonlight Master-mind (in girl and male forms) Pill (magic)

Uncle's House / Counsellor's Son's Home

indoor daytime Implied pleasant weather for a wedding.

The house of King Glory-banner's brother-in-law, where a wedding takes place. It's a grand residence, likely reflecting the status of the counsellor's son.

Mood: Festive, then tense and desperate due to the counsellor's son's infatuation.

Master-mind (as a girl) is seen by the counsellor's son, who falls in love. Master-mind is then forced into a marriage but escapes.

Wedding ceremony Counsellor's son Master-mind (in girl form) King Glory-banner Guarded room