SEVENTH GOBLIN

by Unknown · from Twenty-Two Goblins

fairy tale moral tale solemn Ages 8-14 2310 words 11 min read

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 534 words 3 min Canon 100/100

King Leo lived in a distant land. He had a little friend, a story friend. The story friend sat on King Leo's shoulder. "I will tell you a story," he said. It was about King Leo and Prince Kind.

Prince Kind was a good helper. He came to King Leo's city. Prince Kind did not have much money. He was not famous. But he worked hard for King Leo. He wanted to help the King.

One day, King Leo went hunting. He got lost in the forest. The King felt very tired. Prince Kind was tired and hungry. But Prince Kind helped the King. He found a river for King Leo. He found yummy mangoes.

King Leo was very happy. He thanked Prince Kind. King Leo gave Prince Kind a nice gift. King Leo still felt he owed Prince Kind. He wanted to do more good things. He wanted to help his kind friend.

One day, King Leo had a plan. He asked Prince Kind for help. King Leo said, "Please take a trip." "Go across the big sea. Prince Kind sailed to a new land.

The ship sailed on the sea. A magic golden pole came up! It came from the deep water. The ship stopped working. Prince Kind was very brave. He jumped into the water. He wanted to see the pole.

Prince Kind went under the water. He saw a pretty city. It was shiny and bright. He saw a nice princess. Her name was Princess Lily. Prince Kind liked Princess Lily very much. He felt happy.

Then, some magic happened. Prince Kind went into a pool. He came back to King Leo's garden. He was no longer in the city. Prince Kind felt very sad. He missed Princess Lily so much. He wanted to see her again.

King Leo saw Prince Kind. He saw Prince Kind was sad. King Leo knew Prince Kind helped him. "I will help you," King Leo said. "We will find Princess Lily again!"

So, King Leo and Prince Kind went. They went to the magic golden pole. They went into the water. They found Princess Lily's pretty city again!

Princess Lily saw King Leo. She thought King Leo was very grand. But King Leo smiled. He pointed to Prince Kind.

Princess Lily looked at King Leo. She asked, "Would you like to stay? Be my king in this magic city?"

King Leo smiled. He said, "No, thank you!" He knew Princess Lily and Prince Kind liked each other very much. King Leo helped them. Prince Kind and Princess Lily got married! Prince Kind became the king of the magic city.

King Leo received a special magic sword. He also got a fruit that kept him healthy and happy. King Leo went back to his own kingdom. He felt very good about helping his friend.

The little story friend asked King Leo, "Who was the kindest helper? Prince Kind, who went into the water first? Or you, King Leo, who helped him find his princess?"

King Leo smiled. He said, "Prince Kind was the kindest. He helped me first. He did not know what would happen!" The little story friend smiled. It went on its way.

Original Story 2310 words · 11 min read

SEVENTH GOBLIN

The Mutual Services of King Fierce-lion and Prince Good. Which is the more deserving?

Then the king went back to the sissoo tree, put the goblin on his shoulder as before, and started. And as he walked along, the goblin said: "O King, I will tell you a story to amuse your weariness. Listen."

On the shore of the Eastern Ocean is Copper City. There a king named Fierce-lion lived. He turned his back to other men's wives, but not to fighting men. He destroyed his enemies, but not other men's wealth.

One day a popular prince named Good came from the south to the king's gate. He introduced himself, but did not get what he wanted from the king. And he thought: "If I am born a prince, why am I so poor? And if I am to be poor, why did God give me so many desires? For this king pays no attention to me, though I wait upon him and grow weary and faint with hunger."

While he was thinking, the king went hunting. He went with many horsemen and footmen, and the prince ran along in the dress of a pilgrim with a club in his hand. And during the hunt the king chased a great boar a long distance, and so came into another forest. There he lost sight of the boar, for the trail was covered with leaves and grass. And the king was tired and lost his way in the forest. Only the pilgrim-prince thought nothing of his life, and hungry and thirsty as he was, he followed on foot the king who rode a swift horse.

And when the king saw him following, he spoke lovingly: "My good man, do you perhaps know the way we came?"

And the pilgrim bowed low and said: "I know, your Majesty. But first rest yourself a moment. The blazing sun, the middle jewel in the girdle of heaven's bride, is terribly hot." Then the king said eagerly: "See if there is water anywhere."

And the pilgrim agreed and climbed a high tree and looked around. And he saw a river and climbed down and took the king to it. He unsaddled the horse, gave him water and grass, and let him rest. And when the king had bathed, the pilgrim took two fine mangoes from his skirt, washed them and gave them to the king.

"Where did you get these?" asked the king, and the pilgrim bowed and said: "Your Majesty, I have lived on such food for ten years. While I was serving your Majesty, I had to live like a monk." And the king said: "What can I say? You deserve your name of Good." And he was filled with pity and shame, and thought: "A curse on kings, who do not know whether their servants are happy or not! And a curse of their attendants, who do not tell them this and that!" And when the pilgrim insisted, the king was prevailed on to take the two mangoes. He rested there with the pilgrim and ate the mangoes and drank water with the pilgrim, who was accustomed to eat mangoes and drink water.

Then the pilgrim saddled the horse and went ahead to show the way, and at last, at the king's command, mounted behind on the horse; so the king found his soldiers and went safely home. And when he got there, he proclaimed the devotion of the pilgrim, and made him a rich man, but could not feel that he had paid his debt. So Good stayed there happily with King Fierce-lion and stopped living as a pilgrim.

One day the king sent Good to Ceylon to ask for the hand of the daughter of the King of Ceylon. So he set out after sacrificing to the proper god, and entered a ship with some Brahmans chosen by the king. And when the ship had safely reached the middle of the ocean, there suddenly arose from the waves a very large flag-pole made of gold, with a top that touched the sky. It was adorned with waving banners of various colours and was quite astonishing.

At the same moment the clouds gathered, it began to rain violently, and a mighty wind blew. And the ship was driven by the storm winds and caught on the flag-pole. Then the pole began to sink, dragging the ship with it into the raging waves. And the Brahmans who were there were overcome with fear and cursed the name of their king Fierce-lion.

But Good could not endure that because of his devotion to his king. He took his sword in his hand, girt up his garment, and threw himself after the flag-pole into the sea. He had no fear of the pole which seemed a refuge from the ocean. Then as he sank, the ship was battered by the winds and waves and broke up. And all in it fell into the mouths of sharks.

But Good sank into the ocean, and when he looked about he saw a wonderful city. There he entered a shrine to Gauri, tall as the heavenly mountain, with great gem-sprinkled banners on walls made of different kinds of jewels, in a golden temple blazing with jewelled pillars, with a garden that had a pool, the stairs to which were made of splendid gems. After he had bowed low and praised and worshipped the goddess there, he sat down before her in amazement, wondering if it was all a conjuror's trick.

Just then the door was suddenly opened by a heavenly maiden. Her eyes were like lotuses, her face like the moon. She had a smile like a flower and a body soft as lotus-stems. And a thousand women waited upon her. She entered the shrine of the goddess and the heart of Good at the same moment. And when she had worshipped the goddess there, she went out from the shrine, but not from the heart of Good.

She entered a circle of light, and Good followed her. And he saw another splendid house, that seemed like a place of meeting for all riches and all enjoyments. And he saw the girl sitting on a jewelled couch, and he approached and sat beside her. He was like a man painted in a picture, for his eyes were fastened on her face.

Now a servant of the maiden saw that his body was thrilled, that he was intent upon the maiden, that he was in love. She understood his feelings and said to him: "Sir, you are our guest. Enjoy the hospitality of my mistress. Arise. Bathe. Eat." And he felt a little hope at her words and went to a pool in the garden which she showed him.

He plunged into the pool, and when he rose to the surface, he found himself in the pool of King Fierce-lion in Copper City. And when he saw that he had come there so suddenly, he thought: "Oh, what does it mean? Where is that heavenly garden? What a difference between the sight of that girl which was like nectar to me, and this immediate separation from her which is like terrible poison! It was no dream. I was awake when the serving-maid deceived me and made a fool of me."

He was like a madman without the girl. He wandered in the garden and mourned in a lovelorn way. He was surrounded by wind-blown flower-pollen which seemed to him the yellow flames of separation. And when the gardener saw him in this state, he went and told the king.

And the king was troubled. He went himself to see Good, and asked him soothingly: "What does this mean? Tell me, my friend. Where did you go? And where did you come? And where did you stay? And what did you fall into?"

Then Good told him the whole adventure. And the king thought: "Ah, it is fortunate for me that this brave man is lovelorn. For now I have a chance to pay my debt to him." So the king said to him: "My friend, give over this vain grief. I will go with you by the same road, and bring you to the heavenly maiden." So he comforted Good, and made him take a bath.

The next day he transferred his royal duties to his counsellors and entered a ship with Good. Good showed the way through the sea and they saw the flag-pole with its banners rising as before in the middle of the ocean. Then Good said to the king: "Your Majesty, here is the magic flag-pole standing up. When I sink down there, you must sink too along the flag-pole." So when they came near the sinking pole, Good jumped first, and the king followed him.

They sank down and came to the heavenly city. And the king was astonished, and after he had worshipped the goddess, he sat down with Good. Then the girl, like Beauty personified, came out of the circle of light with her friends. "There she is, the lovely creature," said Good, and the king thought: "He is quite right to love her." But when she saw the king looking like a god, she wondered who the strange and wonderful man might be, and entered the shrine to worship the goddess.

But the king took Good and went into the garden to show how little he cared about her. A moment later the girl came from the shrine; she had been praying for a good husband. And she said to a girl friend: "My friend, I wonder where I could see the man who was here. Where is the great man? You girls must hunt for him and ask him to be good enough to come and accept our hospitality. For he is a wonderful man, and we must be polite to him."

So the girl found him in the garden and gave him her mistress' message very respectfully. But the brave king spoke loftily to her: "Your words are hospitality enough. Nothing else is necessary."

Now when her mistress had heard what he said, she thought he was a noble character, better than anybody else. She was attracted by the courage of the king in refusing a sort of hospitality which was almost too much to offer a mere man, and thought about the fulfilment of her prayer for a husband. So she went into the garden herself. She drew near to the king and lovingly begged him to accept her hospitality.

But the king pointed to Good and said: "My dear girl, he told me of the goddess here, and I came to see her. And by following the flag-pole I saw the goddess and her very marvellous temple. It was only afterwards that I happened to see you."

Then the girl said: "O King, you may be interested in seeing a city which is the wonder of the three worlds." And the king laughed and said: "He told me about that, too. I believe there is a pool for bathing there." And the girl said: "O King, do not say that. I am not a deceitful girl. Why should I deceive an honourable man, especially as your noble character has made me feel like a servant? Pray do not refuse me."

So the king agreed and went with Good and the girl to the edge of the circle of light. There a door opened and he entered and saw another heavenly city like a second hill of heaven; for it was built of gems and gold, and the flowers and fruits of every season grew there at the same time.

And the princess seated the king on a splendid throne and brought him gifts and said: "Your Majesty, I am the daughter of the great god Black-wheel. But Vishnu sent my father to heaven. And I inherited these two magic cities where one has everything he wants. There is no old age or death to trouble us here. And now you are in the place of my father to rule over the cities and over me." So she offered him herself and all she had. But the king said: "In that case you are my daughter and I give you in marriage to my brave friend good."

In the king's words she saw the fulfilment of her prayer, and being sensible and modest, she agreed. So the king married them and gave all the magic wealth to happy Good, and said: "My friend, I have paid you now for one of the two mangoes which I ate. But I remain in your debt for the second."

Then he asked the princess how he could get back to his city. And she gave the king a sword called Invincible, and the magic fruit which wards off birth, old age, and death. And the king took the sword and the fruit, plunged into the pool which she showed him, and came up in his own country, feeling completely successful. But Good ruled happily over the kingdom of the princess.

When the goblin had told this story, he asked the king: "O King, which of these two deserves more credit for plunging into the sea?"

And the king was afraid of the curse, so he gave a true answer: "Good seems to me the more deserving, for he did not know the truth beforehand, but plunged without hope into the sea, while the king knew the truth when he jumped."

And as soon as the king broke silence, the goblin slipped from his shoulder as before without being seen and went to the sissoo tree. And the king tried as before to catch him. Brave men do not waver until they have finished what they have begun.


Story DNA

Moral

True selflessness and loyalty, even when unaware of the full outcome, are more commendable than actions taken with foreknowledge of reward.

Plot Summary

A goblin tells King Fierce-lion the story of Prince Good, a loyal but poor man who saves the king's life. The king feels indebted and later sends Good on a mission, where he discovers a magical underwater city and falls in love with a princess. After being magically returned home, heartbroken, King Fierce-lion helps Good return to the princess. Despite the princess offering herself and her kingdom to the king, he selflessly gives her and the kingdom to Good, fulfilling his debt for one of the two mangoes Good once gave him. The goblin then asks the king which character is more deserving of credit for their actions, and the king's truthful answer allows the goblin to escape.

Themes

loyaltyselflessnessgratitudeduty

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: frame story, rhetorical questions

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking goblin, magical flagpole that sinks ships, underwater city, magical pool for teleportation, heavenly maidens/princesses, magic cities with eternal youth, magic sword, magic fruit that wards off birth, old age, and death
the two mangoes (symbolizing King Fierce-lion's debt)the magic flagpole (threshold to the supernatural realm)

Cultural Context

Origin: Indian
Era: timeless fairy tale

This story is part of the Vetala Panchavimshati (Twenty-five Tales of the Vetala), a collection of ancient Indian tales within the larger Kathasaritsagara (Ocean of the Streams of Stories). The frame story involves a king carrying a Vetala (a vampire-like goblin) who tells a story and poses a riddle, with the king's correct answer allowing the Vetala to escape.

Plot Beats (16)

  1. The goblin, carried by the king, begins a story about King Fierce-lion and Prince Good.
  2. Prince Good, a poor but devoted prince, serves King Fierce-lion without recognition.
  3. During a hunt, King Fierce-lion gets lost and exhausted; Good, despite his own hunger, tirelessly follows and guides him to water and food.
  4. The king is touched by Good's selfless service and rewards him, but feels an unresolved debt.
  5. King Fierce-lion sends Good on a diplomatic mission to Ceylon by ship.
  6. A magical golden flagpole rises from the ocean, sinking the ship; Good bravely dives into the sea to confront it.
  7. Good discovers a magnificent underwater city and a beautiful princess, with whom he falls in love.
  8. A serving maid tricks Good into a magical pool, returning him to King Fierce-lion's garden, heartbroken.
  9. King Fierce-lion, seeing Good's distress, offers to help him return to the princess as a way to repay his debt.
  10. The king and Good journey back to the magical flagpole and dive into the sea, arriving at the princess's city.
  11. The princess is captivated by King Fierce-lion, but the king, focused on Good's happiness, feigns disinterest.
  12. The princess offers King Fierce-lion her hand in marriage and her magical kingdom.
  13. King Fierce-lion, demonstrating ultimate selflessness, declines the princess's offer and instead marries her to Good, giving him the magical kingdom.
  14. King Fierce-lion receives a magic sword and fruit, returns to his kingdom, still feeling indebted for a second mango.
  15. The goblin asks the king which of the two, King Fierce-lion or Good, is more deserving of credit for diving into the sea.
  16. The king answers that Good is more deserving because he acted without foreknowledge of the outcome, and the goblin escapes.

Characters

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King Fierce-lion

human adult male

A robust and commanding man, likely of average height with a strong build, reflecting his prowess in hunting and battle. His features would suggest a regal bearing, possibly with a stern or determined expression when focused, but capable of warmth and pity.

Attire: Initially, when hunting, he would wear practical, durable garments suitable for riding and traversing forests, perhaps a sturdy tunic and trousers in natural earth tones, possibly with leather accents. In his city, he would wear rich, flowing silk dhotis and angavastrams in deep jewel tones like ruby or emerald, possibly with gold embroidery, and minimal but significant gold jewelry.

Wants: To rule justly, protect his kingdom, and maintain his honor. He is driven by a strong sense of duty and a desire to repay those who serve him well.

Flaw: Initially, a certain detachment from the daily struggles of his subjects and attendants, leading him to be unaware of their hardships. He also struggles with accepting help or gifts without feeling indebted.

He learns to be more observant and empathetic towards his subjects' needs, particularly through his interaction with Prince Good. He transforms from a king who is unaware of his servants' suffering to one who actively seeks to understand and alleviate it, ultimately prioritizing his friend's happiness over his own desires.

His regal posture combined with the determined expression of a seasoned hunter and warrior.

Just, brave, compassionate, honorable, resolute, and somewhat proud. He values loyalty and seeks to repay debts, but can be slow to recognize the suffering of those around him.

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Prince Good

human young adult male

A lean and resilient young man, hardened by poverty and his pilgrim's life. He would have a modest height and a build that suggests endurance rather than brute strength. His features would convey earnestness and a quiet dignity.

Attire: Initially, he wears the simple, unadorned saffron or cream-colored robes of a pilgrim, made of coarse cotton or linen, with a simple cloth tied around his waist. Later, after becoming wealthy, he would wear fine silk dhotis and kurtas in rich but tasteful colors, possibly with minimal gold accents, but still retaining an air of humility.

Wants: Initially, to escape poverty and gain recognition for his princely birth. Later, his primary motivation becomes his deep love for the heavenly maiden and his loyalty to King Fierce-lion.

Flaw: His intense lovelorn state makes him almost mad with grief, temporarily incapacitating him. He is also somewhat naive about magical deceptions.

He transforms from a poor, unrecognized prince to a wealthy and happily married ruler of a magical kingdom, all while maintaining his core virtues of loyalty and devotion. He finds true fulfillment through his selfless actions and the king's generosity.

His simple pilgrim's attire contrasting with his noble bearing, often seen with a club in hand.

Devoted, loyal, brave, humble, enduring, and deeply in love. He is selfless in his service and unwavering in his affections.

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The Goblin

magical creature ageless non-human

A small, elusive, and somewhat mischievous creature. Its form is not explicitly described, but it is light enough to be carried on a man's shoulder and capable of slipping away unseen. It likely has a slightly grotesque or unusual appearance, typical of goblins in folklore, perhaps with pointed ears or glowing eyes.

Attire: No specific wardrobe mentioned, implying it might be unclothed or wear very simple, natural coverings that blend with its environment.

Wants: To engage the king in philosophical debate and test his wisdom, possibly as part of a larger magical challenge or game.

Flaw: Bound by certain rules, such as slipping away when the king breaks silence with a true answer.

Remains largely unchanged, serving its role as a catalyst for the king's journey and moral reflection.

Its small, elusive form perched on the king's shoulder, often disappearing silently.

Cunning, observant, philosophical, and a storyteller. It enjoys posing moral dilemmas and testing human character.

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Heavenly Maiden (Daughter of Black-wheel)

magical creature young adult female

Exquisitely beautiful, with a graceful and delicate physique. Her body is described as soft as lotus-stems, implying a slender and ethereal form. She possesses an otherworldly charm.

Attire: She wears garments of celestial beauty, likely flowing silks in soft, shimmering colors like pearl white, sky blue, or pale pink, possibly adorned with delicate embroidery or jewels. Her attire would be elegant and ethereal, befitting a divine being.

Wants: To find a worthy husband and rule over her magical cities. She is also driven by a desire to offer hospitality and respect to noble guests.

Flaw: Initially, a tendency to use magical deception (the pool) on visitors, though she later expresses regret and denies being deceitful.

She initially attempts to test or deceive Prince Good, but through her interactions with King Fierce-lion, she learns to appreciate true nobility and courage, leading her to accept Prince Good as her husband, fulfilling her prayer.

Her lotus-like eyes and moon-like face, framed by long, dark hair, and her ethereal, flowing garments.

Beautiful, initially somewhat deceptive (through her servant), but ultimately sensible, modest, and capable of recognizing true nobility and courage. She is devout, praying for a good husband.

Locations

Copper City

outdoor Implied warm, coastal climate

A city located on the shore of the Eastern Ocean, home to King Fierce-lion.

Mood: Royal, bustling, center of power

Prince Good arrives seeking patronage; King Fierce-lion rules here.

Eastern Ocean shore King's gate

Dense Forest (Hunting Ground)

outdoor afternoon Warm, sunny, possibly dry season given the leaves and grass covering trails

A thick forest where the king hunts, with trails covered by leaves and grass, leading to him getting lost.

Mood: Wild, disorienting, natural

King Fierce-lion gets lost while hunting; Prince Good finds him water and food.

Thick tree canopy Leaf-covered ground Hidden trails High tree for lookout River with clear water Mango trees

Underwater Heavenly City (Gauri's Shrine)

indoor varies (internal light source) Perpetual, serene, underwater environment

A wondrous city beneath the ocean, featuring a shrine to Gauri, tall as a heavenly mountain, with gem-sprinkled banners, walls of various jewels, and a golden temple with jewelled pillars. It includes a garden with a pool whose stairs are made of splendid gems.

Mood: Magical, divine, opulent, serene

Prince Good discovers this city after plunging into the ocean; he meets the heavenly maiden here.

Gauri shrine (temple) Gem-sprinkled banners Walls of various jewels Golden temple Jewelled pillars Garden with a pool Gem-studded stairs to the pool Lotus-eyed maiden

Second Heavenly City (Black-wheel's Daughter's Kingdom)

indoor varies (internal light source) Perpetual spring/summer, ideal conditions

Another heavenly city, like a second hill of heaven, built of gems and gold, where flowers and fruits of every season grow simultaneously. It contains a splendid throne.

Mood: Utopian, abundant, eternal, magical

The princess reveals her true identity and offers her kingdom to King Fierce-lion, who then gives it to Good.

Buildings of gems and gold Flowers and fruits of all seasons Splendid throne Magic pool for travel