SIXTEENTH GOBLIN
by Unknown · from Twenty-Two Goblins
Adapted Version
A king walked. He had a goblin. The goblin was on his shoulder. The goblin liked stories. It told a story.
There was a city. Its name was Golden City. A good king lived there. His name was King Glorious. He was a very good king.
A rich man lived there. He had a daughter. Her name was Princess Lily. She was very pretty. The man wanted her to marry the king.
Some people spoke to the king. They said Princess Lily was not good. They told him wrong things. They did not want him to marry her.
So King Glorious did not marry Princess Lily. He told her to marry General Strong. General Strong was a good soldier. Princess Lily married him.
One day, King Glorious saw Princess Lily. She stood by a window. She was very pretty. The king felt very happy. He loved her looks.
He knew it was Princess Lily. He was very sad. He did not marry her before. He sent away the people. They told him wrong things. He missed her very much.
King Glorious was very sad. He wanted Princess Lily. He did not take her. He knew it was wrong. He became very weak.
General Strong saw the king. He saw the king was sad. He said, "King, marry Princess Lily."
King Glorious said, "No. I cannot do this. It is not right. I will not do a bad thing. I will not take her."
King Glorious was very, very sad. His heart was too sad. He closed his eyes. He never woke up. He was a good king. He did the right thing.
The goblin asked the king. "Who was better?" it said. "King Glorious or General Strong?"
The King said, "King Glorious was better. He was sad. But he did not do a bad thing. He was a good king. He chose to be good."
The goblin flew away. The King walked on. He was still a good king. He always did the right thing.
Original Story
SIXTEENTH GOBLIN
The King who died for Love of his General's Wife; the General follows him in Death. Which is the more worthy?
Then the king went back under the sissoo tree, put the goblin on his shoulder as before, and started. And the goblin said to him: "O King, I will tell you another little story to relieve your weariness. Listen."
Long ago there was a city named Golden City on the bank of the Ganges, where a quarter of the old perfect virtue still lingers in these evil days. There was a king named Glorious, and he deserved the name. His bravery kept the world from being overflowed, like the shore of the sea.
In this king's city lived a great merchant, who had a daughter named Passion. Everyone who saw her fell in love and went mad with passion.
When she grew to be a young woman, the virtuous merchant went to King Glorious and said: "Your Majesty, I have a daughter, the gem of the three worlds, and she is old enough to marry. I could not give her to anyone without consulting your Majesty. For you are the master of all gems in the world. Pray marry her and thus lay me under obligations."
So the king sent his own Brahmans to examine her qualities. But when the Brahmans saw her supreme loveliness, they were troubled and thought: "If the king should marry her, his kingdom would be ruined. He would think only of her, and would doubtless neglect his kingdom. Therefore we must not report her good qualities to the king."
So they returned to the king and said: "Your Majesty, she has bad qualities." So the king did not marry the merchant's daughter. But he bade the merchant give his daughter to a general named Force. And she lived happily with her husband in his house.
After a time the lion of spring came dancing through the forest and slew the elephant of winter. And King Glorious went forth on the back of an elephant to see the spring festival. And the drum was beaten to warn virtuous women to stay within doors. Otherwise they would have fallen in love with his beauty, and love-sickness might be expected.
But when Passion heard the drum, she did not like to be left alone. She went out on the balcony, that the king might see her. She seemed like the flame of love which the spring-time was fanning with southern breezes. And the king saw her, and his whole being was shaken. He felt her beauty sinking deep in his heart like a victorious arrow of Love, and he fainted.
His servants brought him back to consciousness, and he returned to the city. There he made inquiries and learned that this was Passion whom he had rejected before. So he banished from the country the Brahmans who had said that she had bad qualities, and he thought longingly of her every day.
And as he thought of her, he burned over the flame of love, and wasted away day and night. And though from shame he tried to conceal it, he finally told the reason of his anguish to responsible people who asked him.
They said: "Do not suffer. Why do you not seize her?" But the virtuous king would not do it.
Then General Force heard the story. He came and bowed at the feet of the king and said: "Your Majesty, she is the wife of your slave, therefore she is your slave. I give her to you of my own accord. Pray take my wife. Or better yet, I will leave her here in the palace. Then you cannot be blamed if you marry her." And the general begged and insisted.
But the king became angry and said: "I am a king. How can I do such a wicked thing? If I should transgress, who would be virtuous? You are devoted to me. Why do you urge me to a sin which is pleasant for the moment, but causes great sorrow in the next world? If you abandon your wedded wife, I shall not pardon you. How could a man in my position overlook such a transgression? It is better to die." Thus the king argued against it. For the truly great throw away life rather than virtue. And when all the citizens came together and urged him, he was steadfast and refused.
So he slowly shrivelled away over the fever-flame of love and died. There was nothing left of King Glorious except his glory. And the general could not endure the death of his king. He burned himself alive. The actions of devoted men are blameless.
When the goblin on the king's shoulder had told this story, he asked the king: "O King, which of these two, the king and the general, was the more deserving? Remember the curse before you answer."
The king said: "I think the king was the more deserving."
And the goblin said reproachfully: "O King, why was not the general better? He offered the king a wife like that, whose charms he knew from a long married life. And when his king died, he burned himself like a faithful man. But the king gave her up without really knowing her attractions."
Then the king laughed and said: "True enough, but not surprising. The general was a gentleman born, and acted as he did from devotion to his superior. For servants must protect their masters even at the cost of their own lives. But kings are like mad elephants who cannot be goaded into obedience, who break the binding-chain of virtue. They are insolent, and their judgment trickles from them with the holy water of consecration. Their eyes are blinded by the hurricane of power, and they do not see the road. From the most ancient times, even the kings who conquered the world have been maddened by love and have fallen into misfortune. But this king, though he ruled the whole world, though he was maddened by the girl Passion, preferred to die rather than set his foot on the path of iniquity. He was a hero. He was the better of the two."
Then the goblin escaped by magic from the king's shoulder and went back. And the king pursued him, undiscouraged. No great man stops in the middle of the hardest undertaking.
Story DNA
Moral
True greatness lies in upholding virtue and duty, even when faced with overwhelming desire or personal sacrifice.
Plot Summary
In a framing story, a king carrying a goblin is told a tale about King Glorious. King Glorious, a virtuous ruler, falls deeply in love with Passion, a merchant's daughter he previously rejected due to false advice. Despite his intense suffering and the offer from General Force (Passion's husband) to give her to him, King Glorious refuses to violate his moral code and dies of unrequited love. General Force then immolates himself out of devotion. The goblin asks the framing king who was more deserving, and the king explains that King Glorious was the greater hero for choosing death over abandoning virtue, even as a powerful ruler. The goblin then escapes, and the king continues his quest.
Themes
Emotional Arc
desire to tragic sacrifice to moral triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story reflects ancient Indian ethical dilemmas and the high expectations placed on rulers regarding their personal conduct and adherence to dharma (righteousness). The frame story of the king carrying a goblin is characteristic of the Vetala Panchavimshati.
Plot Beats (15)
- The framing story's king carries a goblin, who begins a new tale.
- The goblin tells of King Glorious of Golden City, a virtuous ruler.
- A merchant offers his beautiful daughter, Passion, to King Glorious for marriage.
- The king's Brahmans, fearing Passion's beauty would distract the king, falsely report her as having bad qualities.
- King Glorious rejects Passion and arranges her marriage to his General, Force.
- During a spring festival, King Glorious sees Passion and is instantly smitten, fainting from her beauty.
- Upon recovering, the king learns it is Passion, banishes the deceitful Brahmans, and pines for her.
- The king wastes away from love-sickness, refusing to take Passion by force despite being advised to.
- General Force, learning of the king's suffering, offers his wife, Passion, to the king.
- King Glorious vehemently refuses, stating he would rather die than commit such an unvirtuous act, even when urged by his citizens.
- King Glorious dies from his unfulfilled love, upholding his virtue.
- General Force, out of devotion, burns himself alive following the king's death.
- The goblin asks the framing story's king who was more deserving, the king or the general.
- The king argues that King Glorious was more deserving because he chose death over abandoning virtue, despite his power and desire.
- The goblin escapes, and the king continues his pursuit, undeterred.
Characters
The King (Vikram)
A strong, regal man, likely of a sturdy build, capable of carrying a goblin on his shoulder for long journeys. His appearance suggests a ruler accustomed to physical and mental challenges.
Attire: Simple but durable traveling attire suitable for long journeys through forests, perhaps a practical dhoti and angarkha made of sturdy cotton or linen, without excessive ornamentation, reflecting his focus on his quest rather than display.
Wants: To fulfill his quest, which involves carrying the goblin and answering its riddles, demonstrating his wisdom and resolve.
Flaw: His unwavering adherence to his quest, which can be seen as a relentless pursuit that ignores personal comfort or rest.
He remains steadfast and wise throughout his journey, consistently demonstrating his virtue and resolve.
Determined, wise, persistent, undiscouraged, steadfast.
The Goblin
A small, grotesque, and possibly green-skinned creature, light enough to be carried on a human's shoulder but with a distinct, unsettling presence.
Attire: No specific clothing is mentioned, implying it might be unclothed or wear very simple, tattered garments that blend with its grotesque nature.
Wants: To challenge the king's wisdom and virtue through storytelling and riddles, and to escape if the king answers correctly.
Flaw: Its inability to truly defeat the king's wisdom, leading to its repeated escapes and recaptures.
It repeatedly tests the king but is consistently outwitted, leading to its magical escape and the king's continued pursuit.
Cunning, critical, philosophical, persistent, mischievous.
King Glorious
A king of great bravery and virtue, implying a strong and noble bearing. His beauty is such that women might fall in love with him.
Attire: Regal Indian attire, such as a richly embroidered silk angarkha in deep jewel tones (e.g., sapphire blue or emerald green), a matching dhoti, and possibly a jeweled turban. When going to the festival, he would be adorned in his finest, perhaps with gold armlets and necklaces.
Wants: To rule justly and maintain his virtue, even at the cost of his own life. He desires Passion but refuses to act dishonorably to obtain her.
Flaw: His intense susceptibility to love and beauty, which ultimately leads to his death.
He falls deeply in love with Passion, suffers greatly, and ultimately chooses death over dishonor, solidifying his reputation as a truly virtuous king.
Virtuous, brave, honorable, steadfast, deeply principled, but susceptible to love.
Passion
A woman of supreme loveliness, described as 'the gem of the three worlds,' whose beauty drives men mad with passion. She is captivating and alluring.
Attire: Exquisite, flowing Indian garments, such as a vibrant silk saree or lehenga-choli, possibly in shades of red or gold, with intricate embroidery and fine jewelry. When on the balcony, her attire would be designed to enhance her allure.
Wants: To live happily with her husband, and perhaps to be admired for her beauty.
Flaw: Her overwhelming beauty, which causes distress and suffering to others, including the king.
She remains largely unchanged, serving as the catalyst for the king's suffering and noble sacrifice.
Alluring, captivating, perhaps a little vain (as she goes out to be seen by the king), but otherwise virtuous as a wife.
General Force
A strong and loyal general, implying a robust and military build. He is a 'gentleman born' and devoted to his king.
Attire: Military attire of the era, possibly a sturdy cotton or silk angarkha in a practical color like deep red or brown, with minimal ornamentation, perhaps a simple turban or head covering. He would carry himself with the bearing of a soldier.
Wants: To serve and protect his king, even to the point of sacrificing his own wife and ultimately his life.
Flaw: His extreme devotion to the king, which leads him to make drastic sacrifices.
He demonstrates extreme loyalty by offering his wife to the king and then by committing self-immolation upon the king's death, solidifying his image as a blameless and devoted servant.
Loyal, devoted, honorable, self-sacrificing, virtuous.
Locations
Golden City on the Ganges
A bustling ancient city located directly on the banks of the sacred Ganges River, known for its enduring virtue. The city would feature traditional North Indian architecture, possibly with sandstone or brick buildings, and vibrant street life.
Mood: Vibrant, virtuous, but also a place where human passions play out.
The primary setting for the entire narrative, where King Glorious rules and the events unfold.
General Force's House
The residence of General Force and his wife Passion, likely a well-appointed home befitting a high-ranking general in an ancient Indian city. It would feature a balcony overlooking the streets.
Mood: Initially domestic and peaceful, later becoming a place of fateful encounter and longing.
Passion lives here with her husband; she appears on the balcony during the spring festival, catching the King's eye.
King Glorious's Palace
The royal residence of King Glorious, a grand palace reflecting the wealth and power of an ancient Indian monarch. It would feature large halls, private chambers, and likely courtyards.
Mood: Majestic, formal, but also a place of internal struggle and eventual demise for the king.
The King returns here after seeing Passion, banishes the Brahmans, and ultimately wastes away and dies within its walls.