TWENTY-SECOND GOBLIN

by Unknown · from Twenty-Two Goblins

folk tale moral tale solemn Ages all ages 1499 words 7 min read

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 437 words 2 min Canon 100/100

There was a brave king. He had a very hard job to do. The Brave King walked in the dark forest. He carried a heavy body on his shoulder. It was a quiet place. A man asked him for help.

The Tricky Goblin was on the body. He was tired. He talked to The Brave King. "I am tired," he said. "I will tell you a story. It is a big puzzle. Listen now."

Long ago, there was a good king. He had a queen. He had a princess, his daughter. Bad people came. They made trouble. King, queen, princess ran away. They left their home.

They walked in the forest. More bad people came. They fought the good king. The good king went away. The queen and the princess were scared. They hid in the thick trees. They were very sad.

A hunter came to the forest. His son was with him. They looked for food. They saw small footprints. "Look!" said the hunter. "These are women's feet. Let us follow them."

They found the queen and princess. The hunter wanted to help them. His son wanted to help too. They would make them family. The son liked the lady with small feet. The hunter liked the lady with bigger feet.

So the families came together. It was a very strange way. The son made the queen his family. The hunter made the princess his family. It was a big puzzle. Who was who now? It was very mixed up.

Time went by. New babies came. The son and queen had babies. The hunter and princess had babies. Many new children were there.

The Tricky Goblin finished his story. He asked The Brave King. "Now, tell me," he said. "Who are these children? How are they family? It is a big puzzle. Tell me the answer."

The Brave King thought and thought. The puzzle was too hard. He did not speak. He stayed quiet. He walked on in silence.

The Tricky Goblin was happy. "You are smart!" he said. "You are brave! The man who sent you is not good. He wants to trick you. He wants to hurt you. He has a bad plan for you."

The Tricky Goblin told a clever plan. "Make the bad man bow down," he said. "Tell him to show you how. When he bows, make him go away. Then you get magic power for yourself!"

The Tricky Goblin flew away. The Brave King was happy. He was brave. He knew what to do. He went to find the Tricky Monk. The Brave King was brave and smart. He won!

Original Story 1499 words · 7 min read

TWENTY-SECOND GOBLIN

The Father and Son who married Daughter and Mother. What relation were their children?

The king paid no attention to the terrible witch of night, clad in black darkness, with the funeral piles as flaming eyes. He bravely went through the dreadful cemetery to the sissoo tree, put the goblin on his shoulder, and started as before. And as he walked along, the goblin said to him: "O King, I am very tired with these comings and goings, but you do not seem to be. So I will tell you my Great Puzzle. Listen."

Long ago there was a king named Virtue in the southern country. He was the best of righteous men, and was born in a great family. His wife came from the Malwa country, and her name was Moonlight. And they had one daughter, whom they named Beauty.

When this daughter was grown up, the relatives conspired to wreck the kingdom and drive King Virtue out. But he escaped by night, took a great many jewels, and fled from his kingdom with his beautiful wife and his daughter. He started for his father-in-law's house in Malwa, and came with his wife and daughter to the Vindhya forest. There they spent a weary night.

In the morning the blessed sun arose in the east, stretching out his rays like hands to warn the king not to go into the forest where robbers lived. The king went on foot with his trembling daughter and his wife, and their feet were wounded by the thorny grass. So they came to a fortified village. It was like the city of Death; for there were no righteous people there, and it was filled with robber-men who killed and robbed other people.

As the king drew near with his fine garments and his gems, many robbers saw him from a distance, and ran out armed to rob him. When the king saw them coming, he said to his wife and daughter: "These are wild men. They must not touch you. Go into the thick woods." So the queen with her daughter Beauty fled in fear into the middle of the forest.

But the brave king took his sword and shield and killed many of the wild men as they charged down, raining arrows on him. Then their leader gave an order, and all the robbers fell on the king at once, wounded every limb in his body, and killed him; for he was all alone. So the robbers took the jewels and went away.

Now the queen had hidden in a thicket, and had seen her husband killed. Then she fled a long distance in fear and came with her daughter into another thick wood. The rays of the midday sun were so fierce that travellers had to sit in the shade. So Queen Moonlight and Princess Beauty sat down under an ashoka tree near a lotus-pond in terrible weariness and fear and grief.

Now a gentleman named Fierce-lion who lived near came on horseback with his son into that wood to hunt. The son's name was Strong-lion. And the father saw the footprints of the queen and the princess, and he said to his son: "My son, these footprints are clean-cut and ladylike. Let us follow them. And if we find two women, you shall marry one of them, whichever you choose."

And the son Strong-lion said: "Father, the one who has the little feet in this line of footprints, seems to be the wife for me. The one with the bigger feet must be older. She is the wife for you."

But Fierce-lion said: "My son, what do you mean? Your mother went to heaven before your eyes. When so good a wife is gone, how could I think of another?"

But his son said: "Not so, Father. A householder's house is an empty place without a wife. Besides, you have surely heard what the poet says:

What fool would go into a house?

     Tis a prisoner's abode,

Unless a buxom wife is there,

     Looking down the road.'

So, Father, I beg you on my life to marry the second one, whom I have chosen for you."

Then Fierce-lion said "Very well," and went on slowly with his son, following the footprints. And when he came to the pond, he saw Queen Moonlight, radiant with beauty and charm. And with his son he eagerly approached her. But when she saw him, she rose in terror, fearing that he was a robber.

But her sensible daughter said: "There is no reason to fear. These two men are not robbers. They are two well-dressed gentlemen, who probably came here to hunt." Still the queen swung in doubt.

Then Fierce-lion dismounted and stood before her. And he said: "Beautiful lady, do not be frightened. We came here to hunt. Pluck up heart and tell me without fear who you are. Why have you come into this lonely wood? For your appearance is that of ladies who wear gems and sit on pleasant balconies. And why should feet fit to saunter in a court, press this thorny ground? It is a strange sight. For the wind-blown dust settles on your faces and robs them of beauty. It hurts us to see the fierce rays of the sun fall upon such figures. Tell us your story. For our hearts are sadly grieved to see you in such a plight. And we cannot see how you could live in a forest filled with wild beasts."

Then the queen sighed, and between shame and grief she stammered out her story. And Fierce-lion saw that she had no husband to care for her. So he comforted her and soothed her with tender words, and took care of her and her daughter. His son helped the two ladies on horseback and led them to his own city, rich as the city of the god of wealth. And the queen seemed to be in another life. She was helpless and widowed and miserable. So she consented. What could she do, poor woman?

Then, because the queen had smaller feet, the son Strong-lion married Queen Moonlight. And Fierce-lion, the father, married her daughter, the princess Beauty, because of the bigness of her feet. Who would break a promise that had been made solemnly?

Thus, because of their inconsistent feet, the daughter became the wife of the father and the mother-in-law of her own mother. And the mother became the wife of the son and the daughter-in-law of her own daughter. And as time passed, sons and daughters were born to each pair.

When the goblin had told this story, he asked the king: "O King, when children were born to the father and daughter, and other children to the son and mother, what relation were those children to one another? If you know and do not tell, then remember the curse I spoke of before?"

When the king heard the goblin's question, he turned the thing this way and that, but could not say a word. So he went on in silence. And when the goblin saw that he could not answer the question, he laughed in his heart and thought: "This king cannot give an answer to my Great Puzzle. So he just walks on in silence. And he cannot deceive me because of the power of the curse. Well, I am pleased with his wonderful character. So I will cheat that rogue of a monk, and give the magic power he is striving after to this king."

So the goblin said aloud: "O King, you are weary with your comings and goings in this dreadful cemetery in the black night, yet you seem happy, and never hesitate at all. I am astonished and pleased at your perseverance. So now you may take the dead body and go ahead. I will leave the body. And I will tell you something that will do you good, and you must do it. The monk for whom you are carrying this body, is a rogue. He will call upon me and worship me, and he will try to kill you as a sacrifice. He will say: Lie flat on the ground in an attitude of reverence.' O King, you must say to that rascal: I do not know this attitude of reverence. Show me first, and then I will do likewise.' Then when he lies on the ground to show you the attitude of reverence, cut off his head with your sword. Then you will get the kingship over the fairies which he is trying to get. Otherwise, the monk will kill you and get the magic power. That is why I have delayed you so long. Now go ahead, and win magic power."

So the goblin left the body on the king's shoulder and went away. And the king reflected how the monk Patience was planning to hurt him. He took the body and joyfully went to the fig-tree.


Story DNA

Moral

Perseverance and quick thinking can overcome dangerous deceptions, and true wisdom lies in recognizing and outsmarting evil.

Plot Summary

A king, tasked by a treacherous monk to retrieve a corpse, carries it through a cemetery. The corpse, animated by a goblin, tells a complex story as a riddle: a king, queen, and princess flee their kingdom; the king is killed. The queen and princess are found by a father and son, who marry them based on their footprints, resulting in the son marrying the mother and the father marrying the daughter. Children are born to both pairs, and the goblin asks the king to define their relation. The king remains silent, and the impressed goblin reveals the monk's plan to sacrifice the king, instructing him on how to defeat the monk and gain magic power.

Themes

perseverancewisdomjusticedeception

Emotional Arc

peril to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: frame story, riddle/puzzle, direct address to king

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking goblin (vetala), curses, magic power (siddhis), supernatural beings
the sissoo tree (place of the goblin)the corpse (vehicle for the goblin's tales)footprints (determinant of marriage)

Cultural Context

Origin: Indian
Era: timeless fairy tale

This story is part of the 'Vetala Panchavimshati' or 'Twenty-Five Tales of the Vetala', a collection of Indian frame stories where a king must answer riddles posed by a goblin (vetala) inhabiting a corpse. The king's silence is crucial to prevent the goblin from escaping.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. The king carries a goblin-possessed corpse through a cemetery for a monk.
  2. The goblin, tired, tells the king a story as a 'Great Puzzle'.
  3. King Virtue, his wife Moonlight, and daughter Beauty flee their kingdom after a conspiracy.
  4. They are attacked by robbers; King Virtue is killed, and the women hide.
  5. Fierce-lion and his son Strong-lion find the women's footprints while hunting.
  6. They agree to marry the women, with Strong-lion choosing the woman with smaller feet (Moonlight) and Fierce-lion choosing the woman with larger feet (Beauty).
  7. The marriages occur: son marries mother, father marries daughter.
  8. Children are born to both couples.
  9. The goblin asks the king to solve the puzzle: what is the relation of these children?
  10. The king remains silent, unable to answer the complex riddle.
  11. The goblin, pleased by the king's perseverance and silence, reveals the monk's evil plan to sacrifice the king.
  12. The goblin instructs the king to trick the monk into demonstrating a reverence pose, then behead him to gain magic power.
  13. The goblin leaves the corpse, and the king joyfully proceeds to confront the monk.

Characters

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The King (Narrative Frame)

human adult male

Strong and resilient build, capable of carrying a heavy burden over long distances. His face shows determination and perhaps a hint of weariness from his task, but never hesitation.

Attire: Simple, practical garments suitable for travel and physical exertion, likely made of sturdy cotton or linen in muted colors, perhaps a dhoti and an angarkha (a type of tunic).

Wants: To fulfill his promise to the monk and obtain magic power, or perhaps to simply complete the task he has undertaken.

Flaw: His initial silence and adherence to the task, which could have led to his demise if not for the goblin's intervention.

He starts as a silent, obedient servant to the monk's request, but through the goblin's guidance, he learns of the monk's treachery and is empowered to claim magic for himself, becoming a more assertive and powerful figure.

Carrying a corpse on his shoulder through a dark cemetery, his face resolute.

Brave, persevering, determined, silent, observant, honorable.

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The Goblin

magical creature ageless non-human

A small, mischievous, and possibly grotesque creature. It is described as being on the King's shoulder, implying a size that can be carried.

Attire: No specific clothing mentioned, but as a creature of the night and a puzzle-teller, it might have a simple, earthy, or even slightly tattered appearance, perhaps with some natural adornments like leaves or bones.

Wants: To tell puzzles, to test the King's intellect and character, and ultimately to thwart the rogue monk and bestow magic power upon a worthy individual (the King).

Flaw: Bound by certain rules or curses, such as the one preventing the King from deceiving it by remaining silent.

Starts as a burden and a test for the King, but transforms into a guide and benefactor, revealing the monk's treachery and empowering the King.

A small, grinning, grotesque creature perched on a human's shoulder.

Mischievous, intelligent, talkative, puzzle-loving, observant, surprisingly benevolent (towards the King), cunning.

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King Virtue

human adult male

A king of a southern country, implying a regal but perhaps not overly robust build. He is described as 'the best of righteous men,' suggesting a noble bearing.

Attire: Initially 'fine garments' and 'gems' befitting a king, likely silk or fine cotton dhoti and angarkha, possibly with a turban and gold jewelry, but these are lost to robbers.

Wants: To protect his family and escape the conspiracy against his kingdom, seeking refuge with his father-in-law.

Flaw: Overwhelmed by superior numbers of robbers, leading to his death.

Starts as a powerful king, becomes a refugee, and ultimately dies defending his family.

A king fighting bravely with sword and shield against a horde of robbers.

Righteous, brave, protective, responsible, unfortunate.

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Queen Moonlight

human adult female

Radiant with beauty and charm, even in distress. Her feet are described as 'smaller' than her daughter's.

Attire: Initially 'fine garments' and 'gems' befitting a queen, likely a silk sari or lehenga-choli, but these would be soiled and torn from her flight. Later, she would be dressed in the style of Fierce-lion's city.

Wants: To survive and protect her daughter after her husband's death, to find security and solace.

Flaw: Her helplessness and vulnerability after becoming a widow, leading her to accept a marriage she might not have otherwise chosen.

Starts as a queen, becomes a refugee, a widow, and then, due to a strange turn of events, marries her daughter's husband's son, becoming a daughter-in-law to her own daughter.

A beautiful queen, weary and grief-stricken, sitting under an ashoka tree by a lotus pond.

Beautiful, charming, fearful, grieving, helpless, submissive (due to circumstances).

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Princess Beauty

human young adult female

Beautiful, with 'bigger feet' compared to her mother's, indicating she is likely taller or has larger feet for her age/build.

Attire: Initially 'fine garments' and 'gems' befitting a princess, likely a silk lehenga-choli or sari, but these would be soiled and torn from her flight. Later, she would be dressed in the style of Fierce-lion's city.

Wants: To survive with her mother after her father's death, to find security.

Flaw: Her vulnerability as a young woman without male protection in a dangerous world.

Starts as a princess, becomes a refugee, then marries Fierce-lion, becoming her own mother's mother-in-law.

A sensible young princess, with slightly larger feet than her mother, observing two approaching gentlemen.

Sensible, observant, beautiful, fearful, resilient.

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Fierce-lion

human adult male

A gentleman who hunts on horseback, suggesting a robust and active build. He is the father of Strong-lion.

Attire: Well-dressed, indicating wealth and status, likely a fine angarkha and dhoti made of silk or fine cotton, possibly with a turban and some jewelry, suitable for hunting.

Wants: To hunt, to find suitable wives for himself and his son, to offer comfort and aid to distressed ladies, and to uphold a promise.

Flaw: Easily persuaded by his son's arguments regarding marriage, leading to the unusual family arrangement.

Starts as a hunter, becomes a rescuer, and then, due to a strange promise, marries Princess Beauty, becoming his own son's son-in-law.

A well-dressed gentleman on horseback, dismounting to speak to distressed ladies.

Observant, compassionate, honorable (keeps his promise), somewhat traditional (initially reluctant to remarry), persuasive.

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Strong-lion

human young adult male

A young man, son of Fierce-lion, suggesting a strong and active build suitable for hunting.

Attire: Well-dressed, indicating wealth and status, likely a fine angarkha and dhoti made of silk or fine cotton, possibly with a turban, suitable for hunting.

Wants: To find a wife, to persuade his father to remarry, to follow the footprints and find the women.

Flaw: His eagerness to marry and persuade his father leads to the highly unusual family arrangement.

Starts as a young hunter seeking a wife, and then, due to a strange promise, marries Queen Moonlight, becoming his own daughter's husband's son.

A young man eagerly pointing at footprints, persuading his father.

Eager, observant, persuasive, practical, somewhat unconventional (in his marriage proposal).

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The Monk Patience

human adult male

Not explicitly described, but as a monk, he would likely have a lean build from ascetic practices. His true nature is rogue, suggesting a deceptive appearance.

Attire: Saffron or ochre robes, typical of a Hindu monk, appearing humble and devout.

Wants: To gain magic power and kingship over the fairies, even at the cost of sacrificing the King.

Flaw: His overconfidence in his plan and underestimation of the goblin's intervention.

His treacherous plan is revealed and thwarted by the goblin, leading to his likely demise.

A seemingly pious monk in saffron robes, with a hidden, malevolent intent.

Rogue, treacherous, power-hungry, deceptive, manipulative.

Locations

Dreadful Cemetery

outdoor night unspecified, but 'black darkness' implies a clear, moonless night

A dark and eerie burial ground, implied to be active with funeral piles as flaming eyes, under a black night sky. The sissoo tree is a prominent feature.

Mood: eerie, dreadful, mysterious, foreboding

The king carries the goblin through this cemetery, where the goblin tells his 'Great Puzzle'.

funeral piles with flaming eyes sissoo tree dark ground black night sky

Vindhya Forest

outdoor morning unspecified, but 'blessed sun arose' implies a clear day

A dense, wild forest in the Vindhya mountain range, characterized by thorny grass and inhabited by robbers. It is a place of danger and hardship.

Mood: dangerous, weary, fearful, wild

King Virtue, Queen Moonlight, and Princess Beauty flee through this forest, encountering robbers and the king's demise.

thick woods thorny grass dense trees sunlight filtering through canopy

Ashoka Tree by a Lotus-Pond

outdoor midday hot, fierce midday sun

A tranquil spot within a thick wood, featuring a prominent ashoka tree providing shade, beside a pond filled with lotus flowers. The midday sun is fierce.

Mood: weary, grief-stricken, initially peaceful but soon disturbed

Queen Moonlight and Princess Beauty rest here after the king's death, and are discovered by Fierce-lion and Strong-lion.

ashoka tree (Saraca asoca) lotus-pond with lotus flowers thick wood surrounding fierce midday sun