CONCLUSION

by Unknown · from Twenty-Two Goblins. Translated from the Sanskrit

folk tale moral tale solemn Ages all ages 926 words 5 min read

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 297 words 2 min Canon 98/100

King Vikram was a very good king. He always kept his promises. He was fair to all. He helped his people.

King Vikram carried a heavy, special package. The package was big. He walked to a big tree. The tree was old. He saw a tricky man there. The man looked sly. The man did a strange magic ceremony. He moved his hands.

The tricky man smiled. His smile was not real. "You are strong, King Vikram!" he said. He took the package. He held the package close. He wanted to call a magic spirit. He spoke odd words. He used his strange magic.

The tricky man finished his magic. The air felt strange. He spoke to King Vikram. "Bow down to the magic spirit!" he said. The spirit was powerful. "You will get what you want." He wanted King Vikram to obey.

King Vikram remembered a wise voice. The wise voice helped him. He thought very fast. He thought: This man is tricky. He asked: How do I bow? Please show me, tricky man.

The tricky man bowed down low. He bent his head low. He showed King Vikram. Poof! A bright light shone. The magic spirit appeared! It saw the tricky man's bad heart.

The magic spirit spoke. "This man wanted power. He wanted it badly." It said, "You were wise, King Vikram! You will be a great leader."

King Vikram spoke. "Please tell my stories. Tell them everywhere!"

The magic spirit smiled. "Yes!" it said. "Your stories help people. They make them good and safe."

The magic spirit went away. A great, kind god appeared. "You did well, King Vikram," said the god. "You are very wise. You will get a magic sword. You will be a great, kind king. You will rule forever."

Original Story 926 words · 5 min read

CONCLUSION

So King Triple-victory came to the monk Patience with the body on his shoulder. And he saw the monk alone in the dark night, sitting under the cemetery tree and looking down the road. He had made a magic circle with yellow powdered bones in a spot smeared with blood. In it he had put a jug filled with blood and lamps with magic oil. He had kindled a fire and brought together the things he needed for worship.

The monk rose to greet the king who came carrying the body, and he said: "O King, you have done me a great favour, and a hard one. This is a strange business and a strange time and place for such as you. They say truly that you are the best of kings, for you serve others without thinking of yourself. This is the very thing that makes the greatness of a great man, when he does not give a thing up, though it costs his very life."

So the monk felt sure that he was quite successful, and he took the body from the king's shoulder. He bathed it and put garlands on it, and set it in the middle of the circle. Then he smeared his own body with ashes, put on a cord made of human hair, wrapped himself in dead men's clothes, and stood a moment, deep in thought. And the goblin was attracted by his thought into the body, and the monk worshipped him.

First he offered liquor in a skull, then he gave him human teeth carefully cleaned, and human eyes and flesh. So he completed his worship, then he said to the king: "O King, fall flat on the ground before this master magician in an attitude of reverence, so that he may give you what you want."

And the king remembered the words of the goblin. He said to the monk: "Holy sir, I do not know that attitude of reverence. Do you show me first, and afterwards I will do it in the same way."

And when the monk fell on the ground to show the attitude of reverence, the king cut off his head with a sword, and cut out his heart and split it open. And he gave the head and the heart to the goblin.

Then all the little gods were delighted and cried: "Well done!" And the goblin was pleased and spoke to the king from the body he was living in: "O King, this monk was trying to become king of the fairies. But you shall be that when you have been king of the whole world."

And the king answered the goblin: "O magic creature, if you are pleased with me, I have nothing more to wish for. Yet I ask you to make me one promise, that these twenty-two different, charming puzzle-stories shall be known all over the world and be received with honour."

And the goblin answered: "O King, so be it. And I will tell you something more. Listen. When anyone tells or hears with proper respect even a part of these puzzle-stories, he shall be immediately free from sin. And wherever these stories are told, elves and giants and witches and goblins and imps shall have no power."

Then the goblin left the dead body by magic, and went where he wanted to. Then Shiva appeared there with all the little gods, and he was well pleased. When the king bowed before him, he said: "My son, you did well to kill this sham monk who tried by force to become king of the fairies. Therefore you shall establish the whole earth, and then become king of the fairies yourself. And when you have long enjoyed the delights of heaven and at last give them up of your own accord, then you shall be united with me. So receive from me this sword called Invincible. While you have it, everything you say will come true."

So Shiva gave him the magic sword, received his flowery words of worship, and vanished with the gods.

Transcriber's Notes:

Minor punctuation and printer errors repaired.

Every effort has been made to replicate this text as faithfully as possible, including obsolete and variant spellings and other inconsistencies.

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Story DNA

Moral

True wisdom and adherence to one's word can overcome evil and lead to ultimate reward.

Plot Summary

King Triple-victory delivers a body to the monk Patience, who is performing a dark ritual to become king of the fairies. The monk, having attracted a goblin into the body, instructs the king to bow in a specific way. Remembering the goblin's previous warnings, the king asks the monk to demonstrate, then swiftly beheads him and offers his head and heart to the goblin. Pleased, the goblin and the god Shiva reward the king with promises of world dominion, kingship of fairies, union with Shiva, a magic sword, and the worldwide fame of the puzzle-stories.

Themes

wisdomdeceptiondivine justiceperseverance

Emotional Arc

tension to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: magic circle, magic oil, goblin possessing a dead body, divine appearances (Shiva), magic sword (Invincible), promises with magical effects (freedom from sin, protection from evil creatures)
the body (as a vessel for the goblin)the magic sword (Invincible)the ritual circle (for dark magic)

Cultural Context

Origin: Indian (Sanskrit)
Era: timeless fairy tale

This is the conclusion to a larger cycle of stories, likely the 'Vetala Panchavimshati' or 'Twenty-Two Goblins,' where a king is repeatedly challenged by a goblin to solve riddles while carrying a corpse. The king's final act here is the culmination of his wisdom and adherence to the goblin's previous instructions.

Plot Beats (9)

  1. King Triple-victory arrives at the cemetery tree with the body, finding the monk Patience performing a dark ritual.
  2. The monk praises the king's perseverance and takes the body, completing his ritual to attract the goblin into it.
  3. The monk, having worshipped the goblin, instructs the king to prostrate himself before the 'master magician' (the goblin) to receive his desires.
  4. The king, recalling the goblin's earlier warning, claims ignorance of the specific 'attitude of reverence' and asks the monk to demonstrate it.
  5. As the monk prostrates himself to demonstrate, the king swiftly beheads him and offers his head and heart to the goblin.
  6. The gods rejoice, and the goblin reveals the monk's true intention to become king of the fairies, promising the king that he will achieve this after ruling the world.
  7. The king asks the goblin to ensure the twenty-two puzzle-stories become famous and honored worldwide.
  8. The goblin grants the wish, adding that hearing or telling these stories will free one from sin and protect against evil creatures.
  9. The goblin leaves the body, and Shiva appears, commending the king for killing the 'sham monk' and bestowing upon him the sword Invincible, promising him world dominion, kingship of fairies, and eventual union with Shiva.

Characters

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King Triple-victory

human adult male

A man of regal bearing, likely of strong build from his ability to carry a body for an extended period. His features would be consistent with an Indian king, perhaps with a noble nose and defined jawline, reflecting his steadfast nature.

Attire: Royal attire befitting an ancient Indian king, perhaps a dhoti or a long tunic (angarkha) made of fine silk or cotton, possibly embroidered with gold thread. He would likely wear a jeweled turban or a simple crown, and minimal but significant gold jewelry such as armlets or a necklace.

Wants: To fulfill his promise to the monk, to gain knowledge, and ultimately to secure his kingdom and well-being, which evolves into a desire for the puzzle-stories to be known.

Flaw: His initial trust in the monk's intentions, though he quickly overcomes it with his intelligence.

He begins as a dutiful king fulfilling a difficult task, but through his encounter with the goblin and the monk, he demonstrates his wisdom and cunning, ultimately achieving a higher spiritual and temporal status, becoming king of the fairies and eventually uniting with Shiva.

His regal bearing combined with the burden of a dead body on his shoulder, symbolizing his selfless service and determination.

Steadfast, intelligent, cunning, selfless, determined.

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Monk Patience

human adult male

A gaunt and ascetic figure, likely thin from his practices. His body would be smeared with ashes, indicating his dark magical rituals. His features would be sharp and intense, reflecting his ambition.

Attire: Minimal and ritualistic clothing: a cord made of human hair, and wrapped in dead men's clothes (shroud-like, tattered fabric). His body would be smeared with yellow powdered bones and ashes.

Wants: To become the king of the fairies through dark magic and sacrifice.

Flaw: His overconfidence and underestimation of King Triple-victory's intelligence, leading him to reveal his ritual.

He is introduced as a powerful, seemingly benevolent monk, but his true, sinister intentions are revealed, leading to his swift downfall and death at the hands of the king.

His body smeared with ashes and wearing a cord of human hair, performing a dark ritual under a cemetery tree.

Ambitious, cunning, deceptive, ruthless, power-hungry.

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The Goblin

magical creature ageless non-human

Invisible until possessing the dead body. When speaking from the body, it would animate the corpse, giving it an eerie, unnatural quality. Its true form is not described, but it is a powerful magical entity.

Attire: No specific wardrobe for its true form. When possessing the body, it would be in the garlands and ritualistic adornments placed by the monk.

Wants: To be worshipped and to witness the outcome of the monk's ritual, and to reward true merit.

Flaw: None explicitly stated, but it is bound by certain magical rules and can be pleased or displeased.

It is summoned by the monk, becomes a witness to the king's cunning, and ultimately rewards the king for his actions, granting his wishes and revealing prophecies.

The animated dead body, adorned with garlands, from which an otherworldly voice emanates.

Powerful, ancient, wise, appreciative of cunning, capable of granting boons.

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Shiva

deity ageless male

A powerful Hindu deity, traditionally depicted with blue skin, a third eye on his forehead, and a crescent moon in his matted hair. He would have a strong, divine physique.

Attire: Minimal, often depicted wearing a tiger skin or deerskin around his waist, with snakes as ornaments. He might have a garland of skulls or rudraksha beads. His body would be smeared with sacred ash (bhasma).

Wants: To maintain cosmic order, punish those who misuse power, and reward the righteous.

Flaw: None, as a supreme deity.

Appears at the climax to validate the king's actions, bestow ultimate blessings, and reveal his divine destiny.

Blue-skinned deity with a third eye, matted hair, and a crescent moon, appearing with other gods.

Just, benevolent, powerful, wise, destroyer of evil, bestower of blessings.

Locations

Cemetery Tree

outdoor dark night Implied temperate climate, clear night for celestial observation/magic

A solitary tree in a cemetery, under which the monk Patience sits. The ground beneath it is smeared with blood, and a magic circle is drawn with yellow powdered bones. Within the circle are a jug filled with blood and lamps with magic oil, and a kindled fire.

Mood: Eerie, mystical, ritualistic, foreboding

The monk performs his dark ritual to summon the goblin and gain power, and King Triple-victory confronts him.

solitary cemetery tree magic circle of yellow powdered bones blood-smeared ground jug of blood lamps with magic oil kindled fire monk Patience