FOURTEENTH GOBLIN
by Unknown · from Twenty-Two Goblins. Translated from the Sanskrit
Adapted Version
A little goblin sits in a big tree. He has a story for you! Do you want to hear it? It is about a kind king. And his dear daughter. Her name is Princess Moonlight.
Princess Moonlight went to a party. Many people were there. A big elephant ran fast. It ran too close. A kind boy helped her. He took her hand. They became good friends. The boy liked Princess Moonlight. She liked the boy too.
The boy wanted to play more. He wanted to see the princess. He went to his teacher. The clever old teacher had a plan. He gave the boy magic candy. The candy made him look different.
The teacher took the boy to the king. "Please let him stay here," he said. The Kind King said, "Yes." He can play here. Boy stayed at palace. He played with Moonlight.
The boy played with Moonlight. They played every day. But the boy had a secret. He wore a disguise. He did not tell Moonlight.
They went to a big party. Another boy saw the disguised boy. He wanted to play with him. This made a big problem.
The Kind King said, "Go play." Play with him. Boy felt sad. He did not want to go. His secret made things hard.
The boy with the secret ran away. He left the palace at night. His big secret made him scared.
The clever old teacher came back. He asked, "Where is my friend?" The King could not find him. The boy with the secret was gone. The king found a new boy. His name was Moon. Moon was kind and honest.
Princess Moonlight met Moon. They became good friends. Everyone was very happy. The king had a big party.
The first boy said, "I am her friend!" Moon said, "I am her friend!" Who was her true friend?
The little goblin asked us. "What do you think?" he said. "Who is Moonlight's true friend?"
The Kind King thought and thought. He said, "Moon is true." He was honest. He wore no disguise. Good friends tell truth. The little goblin smiled. He went to sleep in his tree. And the little goblin closed his eyes. Good night, little goblin. Good night.
Original Story
FOURTEENTH GOBLIN
The Man who changed into a Woman at Will. Was his wife his or the other man's?
So the king went back as before under the sissoo tree, put the goblin on his shoulder, and started toward the monk. And as he walked along, the goblin told the king a story.
There was a city called Shivapur in Nepal. Long ago a king named Glory-banner lived there, and he deserved the name. He laid the burden of government on his counsellor named Ocean-of-Wisdom, and devoted himself to a life of pleasure with his wife Moonbright.
In course of time a daughter named Moonlight was born to them, pleasing as the moonlight to the eyes of men. When she grew up, she went one day in spring with her servants to a festival in the garden.
There she was seen by a Brahman youth named Master-mind, the son of Rich, who had come there to the festival. When he saw her plucking flowers with one arm uplifted, he went mad with love. His heart was taken captive by the gay maiden, and he was no longer master of his mind.
He thought: "Is she the goddess of love, plucking the spring flowers in person? Or is she a forest goddess, come here to worship the spring-time?"
Then the princess saw him, like a new god of love incarnate. The moment her eyes fell on him, she fell in love, forgetting her flowers and even her own limbs. While they looked at each other, lost in love like people in a picture, a great wail of anguish arose. They lifted their heads to learn what the matter was, and just then an elephant that had broken his chain, maddened by the scent of another mad elephant, came by, crushing the people in his path. He had thrown off his driver and the ankus hung from him as he ran. And everyone fled in terror.
But the youth Master-mind ran up in a hurry and took the princess in his arms. And with a mixture of fear and love and modesty she half embraced him as he carried her far out of the elephant's path. Then her people gradually gathered, and she went to the palace, looking at the youth, and burning over the flame of love.
An elephant came by, crushing the people in his path.
And the youth went home from the garden, and thought: "I cannot live, I cannot exist a moment without her. I must seek help from my teacher Root, who is a thorough rogue." And so the day slowly passed.
The next morning he went to his teacher Root, and found him with his constant friend Moon. He drew near, bowed, and told his desire. And the teacher laughed and promised to help him.
So that wonderful rogue put a magic pill in his mouth, and thus changed himself into an old Brahman. He put a second pill into Master-mind's mouth, which changed him into a lovely girl. Then that prince of rogues took him to the king and said: "O King, this maiden has come a long distance to marry my only son. But my son has gone away, and I am going to look for him. Please keep the girl. For you are a protector to be trusted while I am looking for my son."
The king was afraid of a curse, so he promised to do it. And summoning his daughter, he said: "Daughter, keep this maiden in your chamber, and let her live with you." So the girl took the Brahman youth Master-mind in his girl form to her own apartments.
When Root had gone away, Master-mind in his girl form lived with his belovèd, and in a few days came to know her in an intimate and loving way, as girl friends do. Then when he saw that she was pining away and tossing on her couch, he asked the princess one evening: "My dear girl, why do you grow pale and thin day by day, grieving as if separated from your love? Tell me. Why not trust a loving, innocent girl like me? If you will not tell me, I shall starve myself."
And the princess trusted him and said after a little hesitation: "My dear girl, why should I not trust you? Listen. I will tell you. One day I went to the spring festival in the garden. There I saw a handsome Brahman youth, fair as the moon but not so cold, the sight of whom kindled my love. For he adorned the garden as the spring-time does. While my eager eyes were feasting on his face, a great mad elephant that had broken his chain came charging and thundering past like a black cloud in the dry season. My servants scattered in terror, and I was helpless. But the Brahman youth took me in his arms and carried me far away. I seemed to be in a sandal bath, in a stream of nectar. I cannot tell how I felt as I touched him. Presently my servants gathered around, and I was brought here helpless. I felt as if I had fallen from heaven to earth. From that day I see in my thoughts my dear preserver beside me. I embrace him in my dreams. What need of more words? I wear away the time, thinking constantly of him and only him. The fire of separation from the lord of my life devours me day and night."
When Master-mind heard these welcome words, he rejoiced and counted himself happy. And thinking the time to reveal himself had come, he took the pill from his mouth, and disclosed his natural form. And he said: "Beautiful maiden, I am he whom you bought and enslaved with a kindly glance in the garden. I was sick at the separation from you; so I took the form of a girl, and came here. So now bring heaven in a loving glance to my love-tortured heart."
When the princess saw that the lord of her life was beside her, she was torn between love and wonder and modesty, and did not know what she ought to do. So they were secretly married and lived there in supreme happiness. Master-mind lived in a double form. By day he was a girl with the pill in his mouth, by night a man without the pill.
After a time the brother-in-law of King Glory-banner gave his daughter with great pomp to a Brahman, the son of the counsellor Ocean-of-Wisdom. And the princess Moonlight was invited to her cousin's wedding and went to her uncle's house. And Master-mind went with her in his girl form.
When the counsellor's son saw Master-mind in his lovely girl form, he was terribly smitten with the arrows of love. His heart was stolen by the sham girl, and he went home feeling lonely even with his wife. It made him crazy to think of that lovely face. When his father tried to soothe him, he woke from his madness and stammered out his insane desire. And his father was terribly distressed, knowing that all this depended on another.
Then the king learned the story and came there. When the king saw his condition and perceived that he was seven parts gone in love, he said: "How can I give him the girl who was intrusted to me by the Brahman? Yet without her he will be ten parts gone in love, and will die. And if he dies, then his father, the counsellor, will die too. And if the counsellor perishes, my kingdom will perish. What shall I do?"
He consulted his counsellors, and they said: "Your Majesty, the first duty of a king is the preservation of the virtue of his people. This is the fundamental principle, and is established as such among counsellors. If the counsellor is lost, the fundamental principle is lost; how then can virtue be preserved? So in this case it would be sinful to destroy the counsellor through his son. You must by all means avoid the loss of virtue which would ensue. Give the Brahman's girl to the counsellor's son. And when the Brahman returns, further measures will suggest themselves."
To this the king agreed, and promised to give the sham girl to the counsellor's son. So Master-mind in his girl form was brought from the chamber of the princess, and he said to the king: "Your Majesty, I was brought here by somebody for a given purpose. If you give me to somebody else, well and good. You are the king. Right and wrong depend on you. I will marry him to-day, but only on one condition. My husband shall go away immediately after the marriage and not return until he has been on a pilgrimage for six months. Otherwise I shall bite out my tongue."
So the counsellor's son was summoned, and he joyfully assented. He made the man his wife at once, put the sham wife in a guarded room and started on a pilgrimage. So Master-mind lived there in his woman form.
When he realized that the counsellor's son would soon return, Master-mind fled by night. And Root heard the story, and again assumed the form of an old Brahman. He took his friend Moon, went to Glory-banner, and said respectfully: "Your Majesty, I have brought my son. Pray give me my daughter-in-law."
The king was afraid of a curse, so he said: "Brahman, I do not know where your daughter-in-law has gone. Be merciful. To atone for my carelessness, I will give your son my own daughter."
The prince of rogues in the form of an old Brahman angrily refused. But the king finally persuaded him, and with all due form married his daughter Moonlight to Moon, who pretended to be the old Brahman's son. Then Root went home with the bride and bridegroom.
But then Master-mind came, and in the presence of Root a great dispute arose between him and Moon.
Master-mind said: "Moonlight should be given to me. I married the girl first with my teacher's permission."
Moon said: "Fool! What rights have you in my wife? Her father gave her to me in regular marriage."
So they disputed about the princess whom one had won by fraud and the other by force. But they could reach no decision.
O King, tell me. Whose wife is she? Resolve my doubts, and remember the agreement about your head.
Then the king said: "I think she is the rightful wife of Moon. For she was married to him in the regular way by her father in the presence of her relatives. Master-mind married her secretly, like a thief. And when a thief takes things from other people, it is never right."
When the goblin heard this, he went back home as before. And the king stuck to his purpose. He went back again, put the goblin on his shoulder, and started from the sissoo tree.
Story DNA
Moral
A marriage performed with proper ceremony and parental consent is more legitimate than a secret union, even if the latter was based on true love.
Plot Summary
King Glory-banner's daughter, Moonlight, falls in love with Brahman Master-mind. With the help of his rogue teacher Root, Master-mind transforms into a girl and lives with Moonlight, eventually revealing his true form and secretly marrying her. Later, in his girl form, Master-mind is given in marriage to the king's counsellor's son to save the kingdom, but flees after the wedding. Root then returns, and the king, unable to produce the 'girl', offers Moonlight to Root's 'son', Moon, in a formal marriage. When Master-mind reappears, a dispute arises over Moonlight's true husband, which the frame-story king must resolve, declaring the formally married Moon as the rightful husband.
Themes
Emotional Arc
desire to confusion to resolution
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The frame story of a king carrying a goblin (Vetala) and being told stories with moral dilemmas is characteristic of ancient Indian narrative traditions like the Vetala Panchavimshati (Twenty-five Tales of the Vetala).
Plot Beats (15)
- The king, carrying a goblin, is told a story about King Glory-banner of Shivapur and his daughter, Moonlight.
- Princess Moonlight and Brahman youth Master-mind fall in love at a festival after Master-mind saves her from a mad elephant.
- Master-mind seeks help from his teacher, Root, who transforms him into a girl using a magic pill.
- Root presents Master-mind (as a girl) to King Glory-banner, asking him to keep 'her' safe while he searches for his son, and the king entrusts 'her' to Princess Moonlight.
- Master-mind, living with Moonlight, discovers her love for him and reveals his true identity, leading to their secret marriage.
- Master-mind lives a double life, a girl by day and a man by night, with Moonlight.
- Master-mind, in girl form, attends a wedding with Moonlight, where the king's counsellor's son falls deeply in love with 'her'.
- The king, to save his counsellor and kingdom, agrees to give the 'girl' to the counsellor's son, who accepts 'her' condition of a six-month pilgrimage after marriage.
- Master-mind (as a woman) marries the counsellor's son, who then departs on his pilgrimage.
- Master-mind flees before the counsellor's son returns.
- Root returns to the king, demanding his 'daughter-in-law'. The king, unable to produce 'her', offers his own daughter, Moonlight, to Root's 'son' (Moon).
- Moonlight formally marries Moon.
- Master-mind returns, leading to a dispute between him and Moon over who is Moonlight's rightful husband.
- The goblin asks the king to resolve the dispute.
- The king declares Moonlight the rightful wife of Moon due to the formal nature of their marriage, and the goblin returns home.
Characters
King Glory-banner
A man of regal bearing, likely of average height and a sturdy build, reflecting a life of comfort and authority. His skin tone would be consistent with someone from Nepal, possibly a warm olive or light brown complexion.
Attire: Rich, flowing robes made of silk or fine cotton, likely in deep jewel tones like crimson, sapphire, or emerald, possibly embroidered with gold thread. He would wear a jeweled turban or a crown, and perhaps a heavy gold necklace or armbands, indicative of his royal status in Shivapur, Nepal.
Wants: To maintain peace and order in his kingdom, protect his family, and avoid divine retribution.
Flaw: His fear of curses and his indecisiveness when faced with difficult moral dilemmas, leading him to rely heavily on his counselors.
He is forced to confront difficult moral and legal dilemmas, moving from a life of pure pleasure to one of active governance and decision-making, ultimately making a judgment that resolves a complex marital dispute.
Pleasure-loving, trusting (initially), responsible (when pressed), somewhat indecisive, and fearful of curses.
Moonlight
A beautiful young woman, graceful and slender, with a complexion as pleasing as moonlight, suggesting fair skin. Her height would be average for a young woman of her background.
Attire: Elegant and colorful traditional Nepalese attire, such as a lehenga choli or a sari made of fine silk or brocade, in soft, pleasing colors like ivory, pale blue, or rose, possibly with intricate embroidery or mirror work. She would wear delicate gold jewelry.
Wants: To find and be with the man she loves, Master-mind.
Flaw: Her intense emotional vulnerability and susceptibility to love, which makes her easily manipulated by others' schemes.
She falls deeply in love, navigates a complex secret marriage, and becomes the subject of a legal dispute, ultimately having her marital status decided by her father.
Romantic, innocent, modest, deeply emotional, and loyal in love.
Master-mind
A handsome young man, fair-skinned and well-built, with an appealing physique that captivates Princess Moonlight. His height would be average or slightly above average.
Attire: As a Brahman youth, he would typically wear simple, clean, and elegant traditional Indian attire such as a white or cream dhoti and a matching kurta, possibly with a light shawl. When disguised as a girl, he would wear feminine garments appropriate for a princess's companion.
Wants: To win the love of Princess Moonlight and be with her.
Flaw: His reliance on deception and magic to achieve his goals, which ultimately complicates his situation and leads to a dispute.
He transforms himself into a girl to be close to his beloved, secretly marries her, and then becomes embroiled in a complex legal dispute over her rightful husband, ultimately losing her in the eyes of the law.
Resourceful, cunning, deeply romantic, determined, and somewhat manipulative.
Root
An old Brahman, likely thin and somewhat stooped with age, but with a sharp, intelligent glint in his eyes. His skin would be wrinkled and weathered.
Attire: Simple, traditional Brahman attire: a white dhoti and an upper cloth (angavastram), possibly a light shawl, made of plain cotton. When disguised as an old Brahman, he would maintain this appearance, perhaps with slightly more worn clothing.
Wants: To help his student, Master-mind, achieve his desires, and to demonstrate his own cleverness.
Flaw: His love for trickery and manipulation, which can lead to unforeseen complications.
He initiates the deception that allows Master-mind to be with Moonlight, and later attempts to resolve the resulting complications through further trickery, ultimately participating in the legal dispute.
Cunning, resourceful, mischievous, loyal to his student, and a master of deception.
Moon
A young man, likely of average build and height, with a pleasant appearance. His features would be consistent with someone from Nepal.
Attire: As a Brahman's son, he would wear traditional Nepalese attire such as a dhoti and kurta, likely in light, respectable colors. When marrying the princess, he would wear more formal, celebratory garments.
Wants: Initially, to assist Root. Later, to claim his rightful wife, Moonlight, after she is formally given to him.
Flaw: His passive role in Root's schemes, making him a pawn rather than an initiator.
He is used by Root to marry Princess Moonlight through legitimate means, becoming the legal husband and entering into a dispute with Master-mind.
Loyal (to Root), earnest, somewhat naive, and ultimately assertive in claiming his rights.
Ocean-of-Wisdom
A man of mature age, likely with a dignified and scholarly appearance. His build would be average, reflecting a life of intellectual pursuits rather than physical labor. His skin tone would be consistent with someone from Nepal.
Attire: Formal and respectable traditional Nepalese attire, such as a long, tailored kurta-pajama set or a dhoti with a fine angavastram, made of quality cotton or silk in subdued, dignified colors like cream, grey, or deep blue. He might wear a simple, elegant turban.
Wants: To serve the king faithfully and ensure the welfare of his family, especially his son.
Flaw: His deep love for his son, which makes him vulnerable to emotional distress and willing to compromise principles for his son's survival.
He is initially a background figure, but becomes central when his son falls ill with love, forcing him to advise the king on a difficult moral dilemma.
Wise, responsible, loyal to the king, and deeply concerned for his son's well-being.
Counsellor's Son
A young man of noble birth, likely well-groomed and of average build. His appearance would be attractive enough to be married to a princess's cousin.
Attire: Fine traditional Nepalese attire, such as a tailored kurta-pajama set or a sherwani, made of quality silk or brocade, in rich colors suitable for a wedding. He would wear some gold jewelry.
Wants: To possess the beautiful 'girl' (Master-mind in disguise) he falls in love with.
Flaw: His overwhelming infatuation and emotional instability, which makes him susceptible to illness and manipulation.
He falls desperately in love with Master-mind in his girl form, leading to a crisis that forces the king to make a difficult decision, and ultimately marries the disguised Master-mind.
Impulsive, easily smitten by beauty, emotionally fragile when denied, and somewhat self-absorbed.
The Goblin
A small, grotesque, and possibly mischievous creature, with features that are unsettling but not overtly terrifying. Its skin might be greenish or greyish, with sharp, angular limbs. It would be light enough for a man to carry on his shoulder.
Attire: Minimal, perhaps just a tattered loincloth or simple, dark rags, or nothing at all, emphasizing its wild nature.
Wants: To test the king's wisdom and to fulfill its part of the agreement, which involves telling stories and posing riddles.
Flaw: Bound by the rules of its own riddles and agreements, it cannot directly harm the king as long as the king answers correctly.
It serves as a narrative device, telling a story to the king and posing a moral question, then returning to its place when the king answers correctly.
Cunning, manipulative, philosophical (in its storytelling), and bound by agreements.
Locations
City of Shivapur
A bustling city in Nepal, home to King Glory-banner's palace and the setting for many events.
Mood: Royal, lively, central to the kingdom's affairs.
The primary setting for the entire narrative, where King Glory-banner rules and the main characters live.
Royal Garden
A beautiful garden where Princess Moonlight attends a spring festival, filled with flowers and providing a romantic backdrop for her first meeting with Master-mind.
Mood: Romantic, vibrant, initially joyful, then chaotic.
Princess Moonlight and Master-mind meet for the first time, falling in love amidst a spring festival, which is then disrupted by a mad elephant.
Princess Moonlight's Royal Chambers
The private apartments of Princess Moonlight within the palace, where Master-mind (in girl form) lives with her and where their secret marriage takes place.
Mood: Intimate, secretive, romantic, secure.
Master-mind reveals his true form to Princess Moonlight, and they secretly marry and live together in happiness.
Sissoo Tree
A specific sissoo tree where the king repeatedly places and retrieves the goblin, marking the beginning and end of each story segment.
Mood: Mysterious, solitary, a point of transition.
The framing device of the story, where the king interacts with the goblin, initiating and concluding the embedded tales.