CXX NUIT

by Unknown · from Les mille et une nuits - Tome premier

fairy tale romance hopeful Ages all ages 761 words 4 min read
Cover: CXX NUIT

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 329 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once upon a time, there was a merchant. He sold beautiful fabrics. But he needed money. The Merchant was worried. A kind Lady bought fabrics. She did not pay for them. He hoped she would come.

One day, the Lady came back. She had her Helper with her. She paid the Merchant. She gave him gold coins. They talked for a while. They talked nicely and smiled.

The Lady bought more fabrics. They were very beautiful. She said she would pay later. The Merchant felt worried again. He needed the money for his shop. He thought, "Will she pay me?"

He thought, "Will she pay?" He knew her not. He felt a little scared. He gave her many fabrics. He had no money yet.

Many days passed. One month passed. The Lady did not come. The Merchant waited and waited. He was very, very sad. He was very worried too. He needed the money.

He thought, "Sell my things." He needed money. But then, the Lady came back! He was very surprised. He was very happy too.

The Lady asked the Merchant. "Are you married?" she asked him. He said, "No, not married." He had none. He was alone.

The Merchant weighed the gold. The Lady's Helper came close. He whispered to the Merchant. "Lady likes you. She wants to marry you."

The Merchant whispered back. "'I like her too!' He loved her."

The Helper looked at the Lady. He said, "He is very happy." This was their secret sign. The Lady understood him. The Lady smiled.

The Lady smiled at him. She stood up and left. She said, "My Helper will come back soon." "He will tell you more things." The Merchant was excited.

The Merchant paid all his money. He paid for the fabrics. He was very happy now. He waited for the Helper to come. He waited for many days. He knew good things would happen. He would marry the kind Lady. They would be happy.

Original Story 761 words · 4 min read

CXX NUIT.

«J'avais prié mes créanciers, poursuivit le marchand, de vouloir bien attendre huit jours pour recevoir leur paiement. La huitaine échue, ils ne manquèrent pas de me presser de les satisfaire. Je les suppliai de m'accorder le même délai. Ils y consentirent; mais dès le lendemain je vis arriver la dame montée sur sa mule avec la même suite et à la même heure que la première fois.

«Elle vint droit à ma boutique: «Je vous ai fait un peu attendre, me dit-elle, mais enfin je vous apporte l'argent des étoffes que je pris l'autre jour: portez-le chez un changeur, qu'il voie s'il est de bon aloi et si le compte y est.» L'eunuque qui avait l'argent vint avec moi chez le changeur, et la somme se trouva juste et toute de bon argent. Je revins et j'eus encore le bonheur d'entretenir la dame, jusqu'à ce que toutes les boutiques du bezestan furent ouvertes. Quoique nous ne parlassions que de choses très-communes, elle leur donnait néanmoins un tour qui les faisait paraître nouvelles, et qui me fit voir que je ne m'étais pas trompé, quand, dès la première conversation, j'avais jugé qu'elle avait beaucoup d esprit.

«Lorsque les marchands furent arrivés, et qu'ils eurent ouvert leurs boutiques, je portai ce que je devais à ceux chez qui j'avais pris des étoffes à crédit, et je n'eus pas de peine à obtenir d'eux qu'ils m'en confiassent d'autres que la dame m'avait demandées. J'en levai pour mille pièces d'or, et la dame emporta encore la marchandise sans la payer, sans me rien dire ni sans se faire connaître. Ce qui m'étonnait, c'est qu'elle ne hasardait rien, et que je demeurais sans caution et sans certitude d'être dédommagé en cas que je ne la revisse plus. «Elle me paie une somme assez considérable, disais-je en moi-même, mais elle me laisse redevable d'une autre qui l'est encore davantage. Serait-ce une trompeuse, et serait-il possible qu'elle m'eût leurré d'abord pour me mieux ruiner? Les marchands ne la connaissent pas et c'est à moi qu'ils s'adresseront.» Mon amour ne fut pas assez puissant pour m'empêcher de faire là-dessus des réflexions chagrinantes. Mes alarmes augmentèrent même de jour en jour pendant un mois entier qui s'écoula, sans que je reçusse aucune nouvelle de la dame. Enfin les marchands s'impatientaient, et, pour les satisfaire j'étais prêt à vendre tout ce que j'avais, lorsque je la vis revenir un matin dans le même équipage que les autres fois.

«Prenez votre trébuchet, me dit-elle, pour peser l'or que je vous apporte.» Ces paroles achevèrent de dissiper ma frayeur et redoublèrent mon amour. Avant que de compter les pièces d'or, elle me fit plusieurs questions: entre autres, elle me demanda si j'étais marié. Je lui répondis que non et que je ne l'avais jamais été. Alors, en donnant l'or à l'eunuque, elle lui dit: «Prêtez- nous votre entremise pour terminer notre affaire.» L'eunuque se mit à rire, et m'ayant tiré à l'écart me fit peser l'or. Pendant que je le pesais, l'eunuque me dit à l'oreille: «À vous voir, je connais parfaitement que vous aimez ma maîtresse, et je suis surpris que vous n'ayez pas la hardiesse de lui découvrir votre amour: elle vous aime encore plus que vous ne l'aimez. Ne croyez pas qu'elle ait besoin de vos étoffes, elle ne vient ici uniquement que parce que vous lui avez inspiré une passion violente. C'est à cause de cela qu'elle vous a demandé si vous étiez marié. Vous n'avez qu'à parler, il ne tiendra qu'à vous de l'épouser, si vous voulez. - Il est vrai, lui répondis-je, que j'ai senti naître de l'amour pour elle dès le premier moment que je l'ai vue, mais je n'osais aspirer au bonheur de lui plaire. Je suis tout à elle et je ne manquerai pas de reconnaître le bon office que vous me rendez.»

«Enfin j'achevai de peser les pièces d'or, et pendant que je les remettais dans le sac, l'eunuque se tourna du côté de la dame et lui dit que j'étais très-content. C'était le mot dont ils étaient convenus entre eux. Aussitôt la dame, qui était assise, se leva, et partit en me disant qu'elle m'enverrait l'eunuque, et que je n'aurais qu'à faire ce qu'il me dirait de sa part.

«Je portai à chaque marchand l'argent qui lui était dû, et j'attendis impatiemment l'eunuque durant quelques jours. Il arriva enfin.» Mais, sire, dit Scheherazade au sultan des Indes, voilà le jour qui paraît. À ces mots, elle garda le silence; le lendemain elle reprit ainsi la suite de son discours:


Story DNA

Plot Summary

A merchant, deep in debt, sells expensive fabrics on credit to a mysterious, wealthy lady. She returns to pay her first debt but immediately takes more goods, leaving him in greater financial peril and agonizing doubt for a month. When she finally reappears, her eunuque reveals that she is deeply in love with the merchant and has been testing him, not needing his goods but seeking a husband. The merchant, who also loves her, accepts her unspoken proposal, pays his creditors, and eagerly awaits the eunuque's return to formalize their union.

Themes

trustloverisk and rewardsocial status

Emotional Arc

anxiety to joy

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: nested stories

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs self
Ending: hopeful
the gold (representing both debt and reward)the fabrics (a pretext for interaction)

Cultural Context

Origin: Arabian
Era: timeless fairy tale

This story is part of 'The Arabian Nights' (One Thousand and One Nights), a collection of Middle Eastern folk tales compiled during the Islamic Golden Age. The framing device of Scheherazade telling stories to the Sultan is characteristic.

Plot Beats (12)

  1. The merchant, in debt, awaits payment from a lady who previously bought fabrics on credit.
  2. The lady returns with her retinue, pays her initial debt, and engages the merchant in witty conversation.
  3. She immediately orders more expensive fabrics (worth a thousand gold pieces) on credit, leaving the merchant in a more precarious financial situation.
  4. The merchant worries about her trustworthiness and the risk he has taken, as she is unknown to his creditors.
  5. A month passes without any news from the lady, increasing the merchant's anxiety and the impatience of his creditors.
  6. Just as the merchant is about to sell his possessions to cover his debts, the lady returns.
  7. She asks the merchant if he is married; he replies he is not.
  8. While the merchant weighs the gold for the new payment, the eunuque secretly tells him that the lady loves him and wishes to marry him, not needing his fabrics but drawn by passion.
  9. The merchant confesses his own love for the lady to the eunuque.
  10. The eunuque signals to the lady that the merchant is 'very content' (their pre-arranged code for acceptance).
  11. The lady departs, promising to send the eunuque back with further instructions.
  12. The merchant pays his creditors and impatiently awaits the eunuque's return.

Characters

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The Merchant

human adult male

Of average height and build, likely with a slightly worn appearance from the anxieties of his trade. His hands might show the calluses of handling fabrics and coins. His complexion would be typical of a merchant in a bustling Middle Eastern market.

Attire: Wears practical, well-maintained but not overly luxurious clothing suitable for a merchant in a Middle Eastern bezestan (market). This would include a simple tunic (qamis) over trousers (sirwal), possibly a vest (sadriya), and a modest turban or skullcap (taqiyah). Fabrics would be cotton or linen, in muted, earthy tones.

Wants: Initially driven by the need to pay his debts and maintain his business. Later, his primary motivation becomes winning the affection of the mysterious lady.

Flaw: His timidity in expressing his love and his initial anxieties about financial ruin make him hesitant and fearful.

Transforms from a debt-ridden, anxious merchant to a hopeful lover, his fears dispelled by the lady's affection and the eunuque's encouragement.

His slightly worried expression, contrasted with the hopeful glint in his eyes when the lady appears.

Anxious, diligent, observant, infatuated, somewhat timid in expressing his feelings, but ultimately hopeful.

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The Lady

human young adult female

Graceful and elegant, with a refined bearing. Her height is probably average, and her build slender, as suggested by her effortless movement and the impression she makes.

Attire: Wears luxurious, flowing garments indicative of wealth and high status in a Middle Eastern setting. This would include a finely embroidered silk abaya or caftan, possibly in rich jewel tones like sapphire or emerald, with intricate gold threadwork. Her head might be covered by a delicate silk veil (hijab) or a more elaborate headpiece, and she would wear fine leather slippers. Her attire is always impeccable and striking.

Wants: To test the merchant's character and honesty, and to subtly pursue a romantic relationship with him, having been smitten from their first meeting.

Flaw: Her initial mysteriousness, while alluring, causes the merchant significant anxiety and doubt.

Remains largely consistent in her character, but her intentions become clearer, moving from mysterious benefactor to open suitor.

Her elegant, flowing, richly colored and embroidered caftan, and the intelligent, slightly mischievous glint in her eyes.

Intelligent, witty, mysterious, playful, confident, and deeply affectionate (though initially hidden).

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The Eunuque

human adult male

Likely of a sturdy but not overly masculine build, as is typical for eunuchs in service. His height would be average, and his movements efficient and practiced from years of service.

Attire: Wears practical but respectable attire befitting a trusted servant of a wealthy lady. This would include a simple, dark-colored tunic (qamis) and trousers (sirwal), perhaps a plain vest (sadriya). The fabric would be good quality cotton or linen, without ostentatious decoration, but well-maintained.

Wants: To serve his mistress faithfully and facilitate her desires, particularly her romantic pursuit of the merchant.

Flaw: None explicitly shown, as he is a highly competent and loyal servant.

Remains consistent as a loyal and effective servant, instrumental in bringing the two lovers together.

His discreet, knowing smile and the way he carries the Lady's money pouch.

Loyal, discreet, observant, witty, and a skilled intermediary.

Locations

Merchant's Boutique

indoor morning Varies, generally fair for market activity

A bustling shop within a larger market, filled with various fabrics and goods. It is a place of commerce and initial, discreet encounters.

Mood: Initially anxious and uncertain for the merchant, later hopeful and romantic.

The merchant conducts business with the mysterious lady, receives payments, and has private conversations that lead to a romantic proposal.

rolls of fabric scales (trébuchet) for weighing gold display shelves counter entrance to the bezestan

The Bezestan (Covered Market)

transitional morning Varies, generally sheltered from direct weather

A large, covered market area where many shops are located, bustling with merchants and customers. It is a public space but allows for private interactions within individual boutiques.

Mood: Lively, commercial, public yet with pockets of privacy.

The lady waits for all the shops to open before departing, indicating a public setting for her visits.

rows of open shops arched walkways merchants calling out crowds of people goods on display