CXXI NUIT

by Unknown · from Les mille et une nuits - Tome premier

fairy tale romance hopeful Ages all ages 747 words 4 min read
Cover: CXXI NUIT

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 393 words 2 min Canon 99/100

Ahmed, a kind merchant, lived far away. He sold goods, but had a secret wish.

Ahmed the Merchant met a kind helper. The helper came from the palace. He told Ahmed good news. Princess Layla likes Ahmed very much. She wants to marry him soon. Ahmed felt very happy. He smiled a big smile. He liked Princess Layla too. This was a wonderful secret.

The helper spoke more. Queen Zobeide is very kind. She is Princess Layla's good friend. Queen Zobeide said yes to their wedding. But she wants to meet Ahmed first. This is a special surprise. It is for the Queen. Ahmed must be very brave. He must be very good.

The helper told Ahmed a secret plan. Ahmed must go to the palace. He must go in a secret way. He cannot walk in the front door. Ahmed must go to a quiet place. It is by the big river. He must go when the sun goes down. It is a special adventure.

Ahmed said yes. He would do it. He felt very excited. He waited for the sun. The sun went down. The day moved very slowly. Ahmed went to the quiet place. He waited all alone there.

Soon, a boat came to the river bank. It was a big boat. Big boxes were on the boat. Some helpers got off. They carried the big boxes. They brought them into the quiet place.

Then, Princess Layla came in! Ahmed saw her. Her special helper was with her. They looked at Ahmed.

Princess Layla spoke to Ahmed. "Hide in this big box!" she said. Ahmed was brave for their fun plan. He climbed inside the box. It was dark inside.

Princess Layla closed the box. She locked it with a little click. Ahmed was safe inside. He could not see out.

The helpers put the big boxes back. They put them on the boat. The boat started to move. It went on the big river. It went to Queen Zobeide's palace.

Inside the dark box, Ahmed felt wobbly. He felt scared, wondering if it was good. But he was brave for Princess Layla. He wanted to see her.

The boat stopped. The boxes were carried into the palace. A palace guard will check them. He checks all the boxes. Then they go to the princess's rooms. What will happen next?

Original Story 747 words · 4 min read

CXXI NUIT.

«Je fis bien des amitiés à l'eunuque, dit le marchand de Bagdad, et je lui demandai des nouvelles de la santé de sa maîtresse. «Vous êtes, me répondit-il, l'amant du monde le plus heureux; elle est malade d'amour; on ne peut avoir plus d'envie de vous voir qu'elle en a, et si elle disposait de ses actions elle viendrait vous chercher, et passerait volontiers avec vous tous les moments de sa vie. - À son air noble et à ses manières honnêtes, lui dis- je, j'ai jugé que c'était quelque dame de considération. - Vous ne vous êtes pas trompé dans ce jugement, répliqua l'eunuque: elle est favorite de Zobéide, épouse du calife, laquelle l'aime d'autant plus chèrement qu'elle l'a élevée dès son enfance, et qu'elle se repose sur elle des emplettes qu'elle a à faire. Dans le dessein qu'elle a de se marier, elle a déclaré à l'épouse du commandeur des croyants, qu'elle avait jeté les yeux sur vous, et lui a demandé son consentement. Zobéide lui a dit qu'elle y consentait, mais qu'elle voulait vous voir auparavant, afin de juger si elle avait fait un bon choix, et qu'en ce cas-là elle ferait les frais des noces. C'est pourquoi vous voyez que votre bonheur est certain. Si vous avez plu à la favorite, vous ne plairez pas moins à la maîtresse, qui ne cherche qu'à lui faire plaisir et qui ne voudrait pas contraindre son inclination. Il ne s'agit donc plus que de venir au palais, et c'est pour cela que vous me voyez ici: c'est à vous de prendre votre résolution. - Elle est toute prise, repartis-je, et je suis prêt à vous suivre partout où vous voudrez me conduire. - Voilà qui est bien, reprit l'eunuque; mais vous savez que les hommes n'entrent pas dans les appartements des dames du palais, et qu'on ne peut vous y introduire qu'en prenant des mesures qui demandent un grand secret. La favorite en a pris de justes: de votre côté, faites tout ce qui dépendra de vous; mais surtout soyez discret, car il y va de votre vie.»

«Je l'assurai que je ferais exactement tout ce qui me serait ordonné. «Il faut donc, me dit-il, que ce soir, à l'entrée de la nuit, vous vous rendiez à la mosquée que Zobéide, épouse du calife, a fait bâtir sur le bord du Tigre, et que là vous attendiez qu'on vous vienne chercher.» Je consentis à tout ce qu'il voulut; j'attendis la fin du jour avec impatience, et quand elle fut venue, je partis. J'assistai à la prière d'une heure et demie, après le soleil couché, dans la mosquée, où je demeurai le dernier.

«Je vis bientôt aborder un bateau dont tous les rameurs étaient eunuques. Ils débarquèrent et apportèrent dans la mosquée plusieurs grands coffres, après quoi ils se retirèrent. Il n'en resta qu'un seul, que je reconnus pour celui qui avait toujours accompagné la dame, et qui m'avait parlé le matin. Je vis entrer aussi la dame; j'allai au-devant d'elle, en lui témoignant que j'étais prêt à exécuter ses ordres. «Nous n'avons pas de temps à perdre, me dit-elle.» En disant cela, elle ouvrit un des coffres et m'ordonna de me mettre dedans. «C'est une chose, ajouta-t-elle, nécessaire pour votre sûreté et pour la mienne. Ne craignez rien, et laissez-moi disposer du reste.» J'en avais trop fait pour reculer, je fis ce qu'elle désirait, et aussitôt elle referma le coffre à la clef. Ensuite, l'eunuque qui était dans sa confidence appela les autres eunuques qui avaient apporté les coffres, et les leur fit tous reporter dans le bateau; puis, la dame et son eunuque s'étant rembarqués, on commença de ramer pour me mener à l'appartement de Zobéide.

«Pendant ce temps-là, je faisais de sérieuses réflexions, et considérant le danger où j'étais, je me repentis de m'y être exposé; je fis des voeux et des prières qui n'étaient guère de saison.

«Le bateau aborda devant la porte du palais du calife, on déchargea les coffres, qui furent portés à l'appartement de l'officier des eunuques qui garde la clef de celui des dames, et n'y laisse rien entrer sans l'avoir bien visité auparavant. Cet officier était couché, il fallut l'éveiller et le faire lever…» Mais, sire, dit Scheherazade en cet endroit, je vois le jour qui commence à paraître. Schahriar se leva pour aller tenir son conseil, et dans la résolution d'entendre, le lendemain, la suite d'une histoire qu'il avait écoutée jusque là avec plaisir.


Story DNA

Plot Summary

A Baghdad merchant is secretly courted by a high-ranking lady from the Caliph's palace, a favorite of Zobeide, the Caliph's wife. Zobeide has consented to their marriage but wishes to approve the merchant first. To enter the palace undetected, the merchant is instructed by the lady's eunuch to meet at a mosque, where he is then ordered by the lady to hide inside a chest. Locked within, he is transported by boat to the palace, facing an imminent inspection by the chief eunuch, leaving his fate uncertain.

Themes

loveriskdiscretiondesire

Emotional Arc

anticipation to anxiety

Writing Style

Voice: first person
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: nested stories

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs society
Ending: cliffhanger
the chest (symbol of secrecy, confinement, and risk)

Cultural Context

Origin: Arabian
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story is set in the context of the Abbasid Caliphate, specifically referencing Zobeide, wife of Harun al-Rashid, a period often associated with the 'One Thousand and One Nights' tales. The social structure and roles of eunuchs are historically accurate for the era.

Plot Beats (11)

  1. The merchant is approached by a eunuch who confirms the lady's love and desire to marry him.
  2. The eunuch reveals the lady is a favorite of Zobeide, the Caliph's wife, who has approved the marriage but wishes to meet the merchant first.
  3. The eunuch explains that the merchant must enter the palace secretly and instructs him to go to a mosque by the Tigris after sunset.
  4. The merchant agrees, waits impatiently, and attends prayer at the mosque, remaining alone afterward.
  5. A boat of eunuchs arrives, bringing large chests into the mosque.
  6. The lady and her trusted eunuch enter the mosque.
  7. The lady instructs the merchant to hide inside one of the chests for their safety, which he does.
  8. The lady locks the merchant inside the chest.
  9. The chests are loaded back onto the boat, and they set off for Zobeide's apartment.
  10. During the journey, the merchant reflects on his dangerous situation and regrets his actions.
  11. The boat arrives at the palace, and the chests are taken to the apartment of the chief eunuch, who must inspect them before they can enter the ladies' quarters.

Characters

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The Merchant of Baghdad

human adult male

Of average height and build, with a demeanor suggesting a life of trade and travel. His features are likely sun-kissed from his journeys, with a practical and observant gaze.

Attire: Practical but respectable merchant's attire, likely a simple, well-made qamis or thobe of linen or cotton, perhaps with a striped aba over it for travel, and soft leather babouches. Colors would be muted, earth tones, reflecting his profession.

Wants: To pursue the romantic interest of the favorite lady and secure a prosperous future, driven by curiosity and attraction.

Flaw: Overly trusting and easily swayed by the promise of love and status, leading him into dangerous situations without fully considering the risks.

Begins as an eager suitor, quickly finds himself in a perilous situation, and experiences regret and fear, suggesting a shift from romantic idealism to a more cautious understanding of his predicament.

His slightly anxious expression while hidden inside a large wooden chest.

Adventurous, trusting (perhaps to a fault), somewhat naive, observant, and eager for romance.

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The Favorite Lady

human young adult female

Described as having a noble air and honest manners, suggesting grace and refinement. She is likely slender and elegant, with features considered beautiful in her culture.

Attire: Elegant and modest attire befitting a favorite of Zobeide. This would include a flowing, richly colored silk caftan or abaya, possibly embroidered with gold thread, worn over a simpler dress. Her head would be covered with a delicate silk khimar or shayla, perhaps adorned with a small jewel.

Wants: To be with the Merchant of Baghdad, even if it means defying palace conventions and risking her position.

Flaw: Her intense love for the merchant makes her take extreme risks, potentially endangering herself and others.

Remains consistent in her determination to unite with the merchant, acting as the primary driver of the clandestine plan.

Her elegant, veiled figure standing beside a large, ornate wooden chest.

Determined, resourceful, secretive, bold, and deeply in love.

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The Eunuch

human adult male

Likely of a sturdy build, as he is capable of carrying heavy chests. His features would be serious and discreet, reflecting his role as a trusted servant in a palace.

Attire: Simple but well-maintained palace servant's attire, likely a plain, dark-colored cotton or wool thobe, possibly with a wide sash at the waist, and practical leather sandals. His clothing would allow for ease of movement.

Wants: To faithfully serve his mistress, the Favorite Lady, and ensure the success of her secret plans.

Flaw: His unwavering loyalty to the Favorite Lady makes him complicit in a dangerous scheme, potentially putting him at risk.

Remains a steadfast and unchanging figure, dedicated to his duties throughout the narrative.

His serious, watchful expression as he supervises the movement of large chests.

Loyal, discreet, efficient, and serious.

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Zobeide

human adult female

As the wife of the Caliph, she would possess a regal bearing and likely be adorned with fine jewelry. Her physical presence would command respect and authority.

Attire: Luxurious court robes, such as a richly embroidered silk kaftan in vibrant colors, possibly adorned with gold and precious stones. Her attire would signify her immense wealth and status as the Caliph's wife.

Wants: To ensure the happiness of her favorite lady, whom she raised, and to approve of her choice of husband.

Flaw: Her desire to please her favorite might lead her to overlook potential risks or impropriety.

Does not appear directly but her influence is central to the plot; she remains a powerful and benevolent figure.

Her unseen but powerful presence, symbolized by the lavish palace and the promise of a royal wedding.

Benevolent, influential, discerning, and supportive of her favorite's happiness.

Locations

Mosque on the Tigris

indoor dusk | night Implied warm, clear evening typical of Baghdad

A mosque built by Zobéide, wife of the Caliph, situated directly on the bank of the Tigris River. It is a place of prayer, quiet and empty after the evening prayers, with space for large chests to be brought in.

Mood: Solemn, expectant, slightly mysterious as the plan unfolds

The merchant waits here, attends evening prayer, and is then hidden inside a chest by the lady and her eunuch to be transported to the palace.

Tigris River Mosque architecture (Abbasid style, possibly with a minaret) Prayer hall Large wooden chests Rowboat with eunuch rowers

Caliph's Palace Gate (River Entrance)

transitional night Implied warm, clear night

The river-facing entrance to the Caliph's palace, where boats can dock and goods are unloaded. It is a secure, guarded entry point.

Mood: Tense, secretive, imposing due to the palace's authority

The boat carrying the merchant (hidden in a chest) arrives at the palace, and the chests are unloaded to be taken inside.

Palace walls (sandstone or brick, possibly with defensive features) Dock or landing area on the Tigris Large, ornate palace gate Eunuch guards Rowboat Chests

Apartment of the Chief Eunuch

indoor late night Implied warm, still night

An apartment within the Caliph's palace, belonging to the officer of the eunuchs who holds the keys to the ladies' quarters and inspects all entries. It is a private space, but also a point of security.

Mood: Anxious, secretive, a moment of potential discovery

The chests, including the one with the merchant, are brought here for inspection by the chief eunuch before being allowed into the ladies' apartments.

Palace interior architecture (Abbasid style, possibly with geometric tilework) Sleeping quarters Chests Chief Eunuch Lady's eunuch