II NUIT

by Unknown · from Les mille et une nuits - Tome premier

fairy tale moral tale solemn Ages 8-14 966 words 5 min read
Cover: II NUIT

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 309 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once upon a time, there was a merchant. He made a big mistake. He hurt The Genie's son. The Genie was very angry. He wanted to punish The Merchant.

The Merchant asked for time. He said, 'Wait one year.' He wanted to say goodbye. He wanted to say goodbye to his children. He promised to come back. He would keep his word.

The Genie said, 'Okay, one year.' 'Come back.' He left. He was gone. The Genie disappeared.

The Merchant rode home. He was happy to be free. But he was also very sad. He knew he must go back later. He felt much sorrow.

His Wife and children met him. They were very happy. But The Merchant cried. He told them his sad story. He told them his big promise.

His Wife cried a lot. His children cried too. They were all very, very sad. They did not want him to go. They begged him to stay.

The Merchant worked for one year. He made sure his family would be okay. He gave things away to help others.

The year ended. It was time to go. His family said, 'Please do not go!' The Merchant said, 'Be brave.' He said, 'I must go.' He left home.

He walked to the fountain. He sat down. He waited for the Genie.

An Old Man came. He had a Small Deer. The Old Man asked, 'Why are you here?' This place was lonely.

The Merchant told his sad story. He told about the Genie. He told about his promise. He must keep his word.

The Old Man listened carefully. He understood the promise. 'You are very brave!' he said. He sat down with him.

It is good to keep promises. Keep promises even when hard. The story stops here. What happens next? The merchant was very brave. He kept his promise.

Original Story 966 words · 5 min read

II NUIT.

Sire, quand le marchand vit que le génie lui allait trancher la tête, il fit un grand cri, et lui dit: «Arrêtez; encore un mot, de grâce; ayez la bonté de m'accorder un délai: donnez-moi le temps d'aller dire adieu à ma femme et à mes enfants, et de leur partager mes biens par un testament que je n'ai pas encore fait, afin qu'ils n'aient point de procès après ma mort; cela étant fini, je reviendrai aussitôt dans ce même lieu me soumettre à tout ce qu'il vous plaira d'ordonner de moi. - Mais, dit le génie, si je t'accorde le délai que tu demandes, j'ai peur que tu ne reviennes pas. - Si vous voulez croire à mon serment, répondit le marchand, je jure par le Dieu du ciel et de la terre que je viendrai vous retrouver ici sans y manquer. - De combien de temps souhaites-tu que soit ce délai? répliqua le génie. - Je vous demande une année, repartit le marchand: il ne me faut pas moins de temps pour donner ordre à mes affaires, et pour me disposer à renoncer sans regret au plaisir qu'il y a de vivre. Ainsi je vous promets que de demain en un an, sans faute, je me rendrai sous ces arbres, pour me remettre entre vos mains. - Prends-tu Dieu à témoin de la promesse que tu me fais? reprit le génie. - Oui, répondit le marchand, je le prends encore une fois à témoin, et vous pouvez vous reposer sur mon serment.» À ces paroles, le génie le laissa près de la fontaine et disparut.

Le marchand, s'étant remis de sa frayeur, remonta à cheval et reprit son chemin. Mais si d'un côté il avait de la joie de s'être tiré d'un si grand péril, de l'autre il était dans une tristesse mortelle, lorsqu'il songeait au serment fatal qu'il avait fait. Quand il arriva chez lui, sa femme et ses enfants le reçurent avec toutes les démonstrations d'une joie parfaite; mais au lieu de les embrasser de la même manière, il se mit à pleurer si amèrement, qu'ils jugèrent bien qu'il lui était arrivé quelque chose d'extraordinaire. Sa femme lui demanda la cause de ses larmes et de la vive douleur qu'il faisait éclater: «Nous nous réjouissons, disait-elle, de votre retour, et cependant vous nous alarmez tous par l'état où nous vous voyons. Expliquez-nous, je vous prie, le sujet de votre tristesse. - Hélas! répondit le mari, le moyen que je sois dans une autre situation? je n'ai plus qu'un an à vivre.» Alors il leur raconta ce qui s'était passé entre lui et le génie, et leur apprit qu'il lui avait donné parole de retourner au bout de l'année recevoir la mort de sa main.

Lorsqu'ils entendirent cette triste nouvelle, ils commencèrent tous à se désoler. La femme poussait des cris pitoyables en se frappant le visage et en s'arrachant les cheveux; les enfants, fondant en pleurs, faisaient retentir la maison de leurs gémissements; et le père, cédant à la force du sang, mêlait ses larmes à leurs plaintes. En un mot, c'était le spectacle du monde le plus touchant.

Dès le lendemain, le marchand songea à mettre ordre à ses affaires, et s'appliqua sur toutes choses à payer ses dettes. Il fit des présents à ses amis et de grandes aumônes aux pauvres, donna la liberté à ses esclaves de l'un et de l'autre sexe, partagea ses biens entre ses enfants, nomma des tuteurs pour ceux qui n'étaient pas encore en âge; et en rendant à sa femme tout ce qui lui appartenait, selon son contrat de mariage, il l'avantagea de tout ce qu'il put lui donner suivant les lois.

Enfin l'année s'écoula, et il fallut partir. Il fit sa valise, où il mit le drap dans lequel il devait être enseveli; mais lorsqu'il voulut dire adieu à sa femme et à ses enfants, on n'a jamais vu une douleur plus vive. Ils ne pouvaient se résoudre à le perdre; ils voulaient tous l'accompagner et aller mourir avec lui. Néanmoins, comme il fallait se faire violence, et quitter des objets si chers:

«Mes enfants, leur dit-il, j'obéis à l'ordre de Dieu en me séparant de vous. Imitez-moi: soumettez-vous courageusement à cette nécessité, et songez que la destinée de l'homme est de mourir.» Après avoir dit ces paroles, il s'arracha aux cris et aux regrets de sa famille, il partit et arriva au même endroit où il avait vu le génie, le propre jour qu'il avait promis de s'y rendre. Il mit aussitôt pied à terre, et s'assit au bord de la fontaine, où il attendit le génie avec toute la tristesse qu'on peut s'imaginer.

Pendant qu'il languissait dans une si cruelle attente, un bon vieillard qui menait une biche à l'attache parut et s'approcha de lui. Ils se saluèrent l'un l'autre; après quoi le vieillard lui dit: «Mon frère, peut-on savoir de vous pourquoi vous êtes venu dans ce lieu désert, où il n'y a que des esprits malins, et où l'on n'est pas en sûreté? À voir ces beaux arbres, on le croirait habité; mais c'est une véritable solitude, où il est dangereux de s'arrêter trop longtemps.»

Le marchand satisfit la curiosité du vieillard, et lui conta l'aventure qui l'obligeait à se trouver là. Le vieillard l'écouta avec étonnement; et prenant la parole: «Voilà, s'écria-t-il, la chose du monde la plus surprenante; et vous êtes lié par le serment le plus inviolable. Je veux, ajouta-t-il, être témoin de votre entrevue avec le génie.» En disant cela, il s'assit près du marchand, et tandis qu'ils s'entretenaient tous deux………

«Mais voici le jour, dit Scheherazade en se reprenant; ce qui reste est le plus beau du conte.» Le sultan, résolu d'en entendre la fin, laissa vivre encore ce jour-là Scheherazade.


Story DNA

Moral

Keeping one's word, even in the face of death, is a testament to true honor and integrity.

Plot Summary

A merchant accidentally kills the son of a genie and is condemned to death. He pleads for a year's delay to settle his affairs and say goodbye to his family, swearing an unbreakable oath to return. After a year of preparing for his demise and a heartbreaking farewell to his family, the merchant honorably returns to the designated spot. While awaiting the genie, he encounters an old man to whom he recounts his tale, and the old man, impressed by his integrity, decides to wait with him, just as Scheherazade interrupts the story.

Themes

honorfate vs. free willmortalitysacrifice

Emotional Arc

fear to despair to resolute acceptance

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: direct address to reader (via Scheherazade's framing device)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: cliffhanger (within the frame story)
Magic: genie
the fountain (place of judgment and destiny)the burial shroud (acceptance of fate)

Cultural Context

Origin: Arabian
Era: timeless fairy tale

Part of 'One Thousand and One Nights', a collection of Middle Eastern folk tales compiled during the Islamic Golden Age. The frame story of Scheherazade is integral.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. A merchant, having accidentally killed a genie's son, is confronted by the genie who intends to kill him.
  2. The merchant begs for a year's delay to put his affairs in order and say goodbye to his family, swearing an oath to return.
  3. The genie grants the delay, warning the merchant not to fail his oath, and then disappears.
  4. The merchant returns home, filled with joy at his escape but also mortal sadness over his impending death.
  5. His family greets him joyfully, but his tears reveal his distress, and he recounts his fatal promise to them.
  6. His wife and children are overcome with grief, weeping and lamenting his fate.
  7. Over the next year, the merchant meticulously settles his debts, gives to charity, frees his slaves, and divides his property.
  8. As the year ends, he prepares his burial shroud and endures a heart-wrenching farewell with his family, who beg to accompany him.
  9. He consoles his family, reminding them of God's will and the inevitability of death, then departs.
  10. The merchant arrives at the designated spot by the fountain on the promised day, filled with sorrowful anticipation.
  11. While waiting, an old man leading a gazelle approaches him and asks why he is in such a desolate and dangerous place.
  12. The merchant explains his predicament and his unbreakable oath to the old man.
  13. The old man, astonished by the merchant's honor, decides to sit with him and witness his meeting with the genie.
  14. Scheherazade interrupts the story, promising the most beautiful part is yet to come, and the Sultan spares her life to hear the end.

Characters

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The Merchant

human adult male

A man of average height and build, likely with features common to a merchant from the Middle East during the medieval period. His face is etched with worry and sorrow throughout the story, suggesting a worn appearance despite his wealth.

Attire: Rich, but practical, clothing befitting a successful merchant. Perhaps a flowing tunic (qamis) made of fine linen or silk, possibly in deep blues or greens, worn over loose trousers (sirwal). A wide sash (hizam) would cinch his waist, and he might wear a simple, unadorned turban (imama) or a skullcap (taqiyah) under a more elaborate head covering when traveling. His clothes would show signs of travel, but be well-maintained.

Wants: To fulfill his oath to the Genie, ensure his family's financial security and well-being after his death, and live his remaining year without regret.

Flaw: His fatal flaw is his initial carelessness in discarding the date pits, leading to his predicament. His deep love for his family also makes his impending death agonizing.

Transforms from a fearful man begging for his life into a resigned, yet honorable and courageous individual who meticulously prepares for his death and faces it with dignity, fulfilling his oath.

His face, deeply etched with sorrow and resignation, as he sits by the fountain, awaiting his fate.

Honest, responsible, deeply loving towards his family, and honorable to a fault. He is also fearful, but ultimately courageous in facing his fate.

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The Genie

magical creature (Jinn) ageless non-human

A colossal, imposing figure, likely composed of smoke or fire, with a terrifying and powerful presence. His form would be indistinct yet clearly humanoid, radiating immense power and a fearsome aura. He is described as having a sword, implying a physical manifestation capable of wielding it.

Attire: No specific clothing, as his form is supernatural. He might appear wreathed in smoke or fire, or in a shimmering, ethereal form that suggests immense power rather than fabric.

Wants: To exact retribution for the death of his son, which he attributes to the Merchant's carelessness. He is driven by grief and a desire for justice.

Flaw: His rigid adherence to the oath, which forces him to wait for the Merchant's return, and potentially his susceptibility to human oaths sworn by God.

Remains largely unchanged within this segment, acting as the unyielding force of fate. His character is set as the arbiter of the Merchant's destiny.

His colossal, smoke-like form, wielding a shimmering, spectral sword.

Strict, vengeful, unyielding, and bound by a rigid sense of justice (or perceived justice). He is also capable of granting a reprieve, indicating a degree of adherence to oaths and perhaps a test of character.

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The Merchant's Wife

human adult female

A woman of the Middle East, likely with a gentle build, whose features are now marred by profound grief. Her face would show the strain of worry and despair.

Attire: Modest but well-made traditional attire, such as a long, flowing dress (thobe) made of fine cotton or silk, perhaps in muted colors like cream, soft blue, or green. She would wear a head covering (hijab or khimar) that is now disheveled from her distress. Her clothing would reflect her status as the wife of a prosperous merchant.

Wants: To keep her family together and prevent her husband's death. Her primary motivation is love and preservation of her family unit.

Flaw: Her overwhelming emotional response to tragedy, which renders her helpless in the face of her husband's fate.

She begins joyful at her husband's return, but quickly descends into profound grief and despair upon learning of his fate. She remains a figure of sorrow, unable to change the outcome.

Her face contorted in a wail of grief, tearing at her hair.

Loving, devoted, expressive in her grief, and deeply attached to her husband and children. She is overwhelmed by sorrow but shows loyalty.

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The Old Man with the Doe

human elderly male

A venerable old man, likely thin and stooped with age, but with a kind and wise demeanor. His face would be lined with wrinkles, indicative of a long life lived in the desert or rural areas.

Attire: Simple, practical clothing suitable for a traveler or shepherd in the desert, such as a coarse wool or linen thobe in earthy tones (brown, grey, off-white). He might wear a simple headscarf (keffiyeh) to protect from the sun, secured with an agal. His clothes would be worn but clean, reflecting a humble existence.

Wants: To understand the Merchant's predicament and offer support or witness his fate. He seems driven by a sense of human connection and perhaps a desire to help.

Flaw: None apparent in this segment; he acts as a benevolent observer.

Introduced as a compassionate stranger, he becomes a witness to the Merchant's ordeal, offering comfort through his presence.

His long white beard and the doe he leads on a leash.

Kind, curious, compassionate, and wise. He shows concern for the Merchant's well-being and offers companionship.

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The Doe

animal adult female

A graceful, slender female deer, with soft brown fur and large, gentle eyes. She is led on a leash, suggesting a tamed or companion animal.

Attire: None, as she is an animal.

Wants: To accompany her master, the Old Man.

Flaw: Her vulnerability as an animal, dependent on her master.

Remains a constant, gentle presence beside the Old Man.

Her large, gentle eyes and the leash connecting her to the Old Man.

Gentle, calm, and loyal to the Old Man.

Locations

Desert Oasis with Date Palms

outdoor Warm, dry desert climate; clear skies implied.

A secluded, verdant spot in the desert, shaded by ancient date palms. A clear spring or fountain provides water, creating a stark contrast with the surrounding arid landscape. The ground is likely sandy or rocky, with sparse desert vegetation beyond the immediate oasis.

Mood: Initially terrifying and foreboding due to the genie's presence, later becomes a place of solemn waiting and dread, yet also a potential site of salvation.

The merchant first encounters the genie and makes his fateful oath. One year later, he returns to fulfill his promise, awaiting his death.

Ancient date palms Spring or fountain Sandy/rocky ground Sparse desert vegetation Shadows cast by trees

Merchant's Arabian Home

indoor Warm, dry climate implied by the architecture.

A traditional Arabian house, likely built of sun-dried mud brick or stone, with thick walls to keep out the heat. It would feature a central courtyard (riad) with possibly a small fountain or garden, and rooms opening onto it. Interior spaces would be adorned with geometric tile mosaics, carved wooden screens (mashrabiya), and rich textiles. The atmosphere is initially joyous upon the merchant's return, then filled with profound grief and lamentation.

Mood: Overwhelmed with sorrow, despair, and the sounds of lamentation, contrasting with initial joy.

The merchant returns home and reveals his grim fate to his family, leading to a scene of intense mourning and preparation for his death.

Central courtyard (riad) Geometric tile mosaics Carved wooden screens (mashrabiya) Thick mud-brick/stone walls Rich textiles and cushions Fountain in courtyard (optional)