LXXXIX NUIT

by Unknown · from Les mille et une nuits - Tome premier

fairy tale transformation tender Ages all ages 656 words 3 min read
Cover: LXXXIX NUIT

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 380 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Bedreddin, a kind baker, lived in town. His shop smelled sweet. He baked every day. He made the best yummy tarts! Bedreddin worked in his shop. He saw a boy walk by. The boy's name was Agib. A big Guard was with Agib. Agib looked very nice.

Bedreddin felt a special feeling. It was in his heart. He did not know why. He felt like Agib was family. It was a strong, good feeling. It was a warm, new feeling.

Bedreddin smiled at Agib. His smile was kind. "Little lord," he said. "Come into my shop. Eat some yummy tarts. I want to see you." He spoke lovingly.

Agib liked Bedreddin. He wanted to go inside. Agib felt sad. But the Guard said no. "You are an important boy," he said. "Do not go into this shop."

Bedreddin spoke to the Guard. Bedreddin's voice was soft. "Do not be so hard," he said. "Let the boy come in. You come too, my friend. You are good inside." The Guard smiled.

The Guard agreed then. He stopped saying no. Agib went into the shop. The Guard went in too. Bedreddin was very happy. He felt joy.

Bedreddin gave them a tart. It was a cream tart. It looked very yummy. The tart was warm. Agib took a big bite. "My mother taught me," he said. "She made the best tarts." Agib ate it. It was delicious.

Bedreddin watched Agib eat. He looked at Agib's face. Agib looked like his own son. His son was not with him. He missed his son every day. Bedreddin missed his little boy very much. He felt a strong love. Agib's eyes were bright.

Tears came to Bedreddin's eyes. They were happy tears. He felt so much love. His heart was full. He wanted to know more. He wanted to ask Agib. "Where do you come from?" he thought.

But the Guard stood up. He took Agib's hand. "We must go now," he said. They left the shop very fast. Bedreddin felt sad again. He watched them leave. Bedreddin could not ask his questions.

Bedreddin felt he must follow them. He closed his shop very fast. He ran after them. He had to know. His heart pulled him. Where would they go? What would happen next?

Original Story 656 words · 3 min read

LXXXIX NUIT.

«Bedreddin Hassan, poursuivit le vizir Giafar, ayant jeté les yeux particulièrement sur Agib, se sentit aussitôt tout ému sans savoir pourquoi. Il n'était pas frappé, comme le peuple, de l'éclatante beauté de ce jeune garçon: son trouble et son émotion avaient une autre cause qui lui était inconnue: c'était la force du sang qui agissait dans ce tendre père, lequel, interrompant ses occupations, s'approcha d'Agib et lui dit d'un air engageant: «Mon petit seigneur, qui m'avez gagné l'âme, faites-moi la grâce d'entrer dans ma boutique et de manger quelque chose de ma façon, afin que pendant ce temps-là j'aie le plaisir de vous admirer à mon aise.» Il prononça ces paroles avec tant de tendresse que les larmes lui en vinrent aux yeux. Le petit Agib en fut touché, et se tournant vers l'eunuque: «Ce bon homme, lui dit-il, a une physionomie qui me plaît, et il me parle d'une manière si affectueuse que je ne puis me défendre de faire ce qu'il souhaite. Entrons, chez lui et mangeons de sa pâtisserie. - Ah! vraiment, lui dit l'esclave, il ferait beau voir qu'un fils de vizir comme vous entrât dans la boutique d'un pâtissier pour y manger. Ne croyez pas que je le souffre. - Hélas! mon petit seigneur, s'écria alors Bedreddin Hassan, on est bien cruel de confier votre conduite à un homme qui vous traite avec tant de dureté.» Puis, s'adressant à l'eunuque: «Mon bon ami, ajouta-t-il, n'empêchez pas ce jeune seigneur de m'accorder la grâce que je lui demande. Ne me donnez pas cette mortification. Faites-moi plutôt l'honneur d'entrer avec lui chez moi, et par là vous ferez connaître si vous êtes brun au-dehors comme la châtaigne, vous êtes blanc aussi au- dedans comme elle. Savez-vous bien, poursuivit-il, que je sais le secret de vous rendre blanc, de noir que vous êtes?» L'eunuque se mit à rire à ce discours, et demanda à Bedreddin ce que c'était que ce secret. «Je vais vous l'apprendre,» répondit-il. Aussitôt il lui récita des vers à la louange des eunuques noirs, disant que c'était par leur ministère que l'honneur des sultans, des princes et de tous les grands, était en sûreté. L'eunuque fut charmé de ces vers, et cessant de résister aux prières de Bedreddin, laissa entrer Agib en sa boutique et y entra aussi lui-même.

«Bedreddin Hassan sentit une extrême joie d'avoir obtenu ce qu'il avait désiré avec tant d'ardeur, et se remettant au travail qu'il avait interrompu: «Je faisais, dit-il, des tartes à la crème; il faut, s'il vous plaît, que vous en mangiez; je suis persuadé que vous les trouverez excellentes, car ma mère, qui les fait admirablement bien, m'a appris à les faire, et l'on vient en prendre chez moi de tous les endroits de cette ville.» En achevant ces mots, il tira du four une tarte à la crème, et après avoir mis dessus des grains de grenade et du sucre, il la servit devant Agib, qui la trouva délicieuse. L'eunuque, à qui Bedreddin en présenta, en porta le même jugement.

«Pendant qu'ils mangeaient tous deux, Bedreddin Hassan examinait Agib avec une grande attention, et se représentant, en le regardant, qu'il avait peut-être un semblable fils de la charmante épouse dont il avait été si tôt et si cruellement séparé, cette pensée fit couler de ses yeux quelques larmes. Il se préparait à taire des questions au petit Agib sur le sujet de son voyage à Damas, mais cet enfant n'eut pas le temps de satisfaire sa curiosité, parce que l'eunuque, qui le pressait de s'en retourner sous les tentes de son aïeul, l'emmena dès qu'il eut mangé. Bedreddin Hassan ne se contenta pas de les suivre de l'oeil; il ferma sa boutique promptement et marcha sur leurs pas.»

Scheherazade, en cet endroit, remarquant qu'il était jour, cessa de poursuivre cette histoire. Schahriar se leva résolu de l'entendre tout entière, et de laisser vivre la sultane jusqu'à ce temps-là.


Story DNA

Plot Summary

Bedreddin Hassan, a pastry chef, experiences an overwhelming, inexplicable emotional connection upon seeing a young boy, Agib, and his eunuch. Despite the eunuch's initial resistance due to Agib's high status, Bedreddin's tender words and clever flattery persuade them to enter his shop for a cream tart. While Agib eats, Bedreddin observes him closely, realizing the boy's striking resemblance to the son he had with his long-lost wife, bringing tears to his eyes. Before he can question Agib, the eunuch rushes the boy away, but Bedreddin, driven by his powerful intuition, quickly closes his shop and follows them.

Themes

paternal lovefatereunionintuition

Emotional Arc

longing to hopeful anticipation

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: direct address to reader (implied by Scheherazade's narration), internal monologue

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person (briefly, Bedreddin vs. eunuch) | person vs self (Bedreddin's internal struggle with his feelings)
Ending: cliffhanger
Magic: the 'force of blood' acting as an inexplicable, powerful intuition
the cream tart (symbol of hospitality and Bedreddin's craft)tears (symbol of deep emotion and recognition)

Cultural Context

Origin: Arabian
Era: timeless fairy tale

This story is part of 'One Thousand and One Nights' (Arabian Nights), a collection of Middle Eastern folk tales compiled during the Islamic Golden Age. The framing device of Scheherazade narrating to King Shahriar is integral to its original presentation.

Plot Beats (11)

  1. Bedreddin Hassan, a pastry chef, sees a young boy named Agib and his eunuch passing by.
  2. Bedreddin feels an immediate, strong, and inexplicable emotional connection to Agib, which he attributes to the 'force of blood'.
  3. He tenderly invites Agib into his shop to eat some of his pastries and allow Bedreddin to admire him.
  4. Agib is touched by Bedreddin's sincerity and wishes to accept, but the eunuch objects, deeming it beneath a vizier's son.
  5. Bedreddin criticizes the eunuch's harshness and then flatters him with a poem praising black eunuchs, which charms the eunuch.
  6. The eunuch relents, and both Agib and the eunuch enter Bedreddin's shop.
  7. Bedreddin serves them a delicious cream tart, explaining his mother taught him to make them.
  8. While they eat, Bedreddin intently observes Agib, realizing the boy's resemblance to the son he had with his long-lost wife.
  9. This realization brings tears to Bedreddin's eyes, and he prepares to ask Agib about his journey to Damascus.
  10. The eunuch, however, hurries Agib away before Bedreddin can ask his questions.
  11. Bedreddin, unable to let them go, quickly closes his shop and follows them.

Characters

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Bedreddin Hassan

human adult male

A man of average height and build, likely with features common to the Middle East, given the story's origin. His hands might show signs of his trade, perhaps dusted with flour or bearing slight calluses from baking. His overall appearance is one of a hardworking, kind individual.

Attire: Simple, practical clothing suitable for a baker in a bustling city like Damascus. This would likely include a loose-fitting tunic (qamis) made of linen or cotton, possibly in a light color to reflect heat, and wide trousers (sirwal). He might wear a simple head covering like a turban or a skullcap to keep hair out of his baked goods. His clothes would be clean but might bear faint traces of flour.

Wants: Initially, an inexplicable emotional pull towards Agib, driven by paternal instinct. He desires to connect with Agib and later to understand his origins, hoping to find a lost son.

Flaw: His strong emotional nature and sentimentality can make him vulnerable, as seen by his tears and immediate attachment to Agib.

In this excerpt, he moves from a state of routine work to one of profound emotional stirring and active pursuit of a potential family connection. He begins to hope for the return of his lost son.

His kind, tear-filled eyes as he looks at Agib, or his hands, skilled in baking, offering a cream tart.

Tender, affectionate, perceptive (sensing a connection to Agib), persuasive, and deeply emotional. He is also diligent in his work.

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Agib

human child male

A young boy of striking beauty, as noted by the common people. His features would be refined and delicate, reflecting his noble lineage. He is small and youthful.

Attire: Fine, rich clothing befitting the son of a vizier. This would likely include a small, embroidered tunic (qamis) made of silk or fine cotton, possibly with gold or silver thread, and matching trousers (sirwal). He might wear soft leather slippers and a small, ornate cap or turban. The colors would be vibrant and indicative of wealth.

Wants: To explore and enjoy simple pleasures, like a delicious pastry, and to follow his instincts about people he likes.

Flaw: His youth and dependence on his guardian mean he has little agency and must follow the eunuque's commands.

In this excerpt, he is a passive recipient of Bedreddin's affection and the eunuque's guidance. He experiences a moment of simple joy and connection.

His radiant, youthful beauty, perhaps with a slight smile as he enjoys the cream tart.

Perceptive (noticing Bedreddin's pleasing demeanor), open-hearted (touched by Bedreddin's tenderness), and somewhat obedient to his guardian, though he expresses his own desires.

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The Eunuque

human adult male

A man of dark complexion, described as "brun au-dehors comme la châtaigne." His build would likely be sturdy, reflecting his role as a guardian and protector. His features would be strong and perhaps initially stern.

Attire: Practical but respectable clothing suitable for a guardian of a noble child. This would include a sturdy, dark-colored tunic (qamis) and trousers (sirwal), possibly with a belt. He might wear a simple turban or head covering. His attire would convey authority and readiness for travel.

Wants: To protect Agib and ensure his safe and proper conduct, adhering to the standards of his noble family.

Flaw: His pride and susceptibility to flattery, which Bedreddin exploits.

He begins as an obstacle to Bedreddin's desires, but through Bedreddin's charm and flattery, he is persuaded to allow Agib into the shop, showing a slight softening of his rigid demeanor.

His dark complexion and stern, watchful expression, softened by a rare smile when flattered.

Strict, protective, initially dismissive of commoners, but susceptible to flattery and capable of being charmed. He is dutiful to his charge.

Locations

The Streets of Damascus

outdoor morning Warm, sunny, typical of a Middle Eastern city.

Busy, sunlit streets of Damascus, likely bustling with merchants and passersby, where Agib and the eunuch are walking.

Mood: Lively, public, with a sense of everyday activity.

Bedreddin Hassan first spots Agib and feels an inexplicable connection, leading him to invite Agib into his shop.

Cobblestone paths Market stalls (implied) Sunlight Crowds of people

Bedreddin Hassan's Pastry Shop

indoor morning Warm and pleasant indoors, reflecting the morning outside.

A warm, inviting pastry shop in Damascus, filled with the aroma of freshly baked goods. It features a traditional oven and a counter where pastries are served.

Mood: Warm, welcoming, domestic, with a hint of melancholy for Bedreddin.

Agib and the eunuch eat Bedreddin's cream tarts. Bedreddin observes Agib closely, feeling a paternal connection and shedding tears, before Agib is taken away.

Clay oven (tabun or similar) Wooden counter Display of pastries Serving dishes Pomegranate seeds Sugar Cream tarts