DE LOKSREIS FEN ’E ELFKES

by Simke Kloosterman · from Twiljocht-teltsjes : $b Maerkes

fairy tale moral tale melancholic Ages 8-14 3368 words 15 min read
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CEFR A1 Age 5 478 words 3 min Canon 100/100

Once, three little elves lived in a silver house under a lake. They were happy. They danced and sang each day. But one day, they felt bored. They did not want to spin or dance. Fissy Fossy Fo was the oldest. She had an idea. "Let's see the big world," she said. "We can look for joy." "Yes!" said Moeleintsje. "I want to hear people!" "I want to see the sun," said Tynke. They made new clothes from apple flowers. Fissy made a little coach from a red nut. Three bugs with wings came to pull it. A long bird showed them the way. They flew up to the world above the water. The sun was very bright. It hurt their eyes. They hid under a big flower. Fissy found a wise woman. The wise woman gave them special cream for their eyes. They felt better. They saw children playing on a hill. The children laughed and sang. Tynke Tanke caught a happy laugh in her green box. It became a shiny ball. Then the boys saw the bugs with wings. They scared them away. The bugs with wings flew off. The elves had no coach now. They walked and lost their shoes. They met a kind man, a poet. He helped them cross a river. He gave them a place to rest. But then the poet became mean. He shouted at them. "Go away!" he said. The elves ran away. They found the wise woman again. She gave them new shoes and a silver coach. They traveled on. Their new coach fell into a river. A big bird saved them. It carried them to a forest. In the forest, they saw a man and a woman. They held hands and smiled. They looked very happy. Tynke Tanke held her green box. It opened with a soft light. A perfect ball of joy was inside. Fissy Fossy Fo blew her flute for the last time. Three long bugs with wings came. They carried the elves back to their silver house. On a special night, they went to see their king. They rode in a coach pulled by night birds. They showed the king their green box. But the balls were gone. Only three big tears were inside. "What is this?" asked the king. The elves told him their story. The king listened. "True joy is being happy with what you have," he said. "You passed a poor man's house. He was happy with his simple life. That is the real ball." The elves cried softly. The poet played his music box and sang a gentle song. The king touched their eyes. He took away their sad thoughts. The elves never went to the big world by day again. They lived with joy in their silver house. They loved the poet's songs. They were happy with what they had.

Original Story 3368 words · 15 min read

DE LOKSREIS FEN ’E ELFKES.

Sjogge jimm’ jouns wol ris, ho moai de mar glinsterje kin, krekt eft er fen sulver is? Nou, det is altyd alweroan de wjerskyn fen it sulveren hûs, der sont âlde tiden al de trije elfkes yn wenje. It stiet op ’e boom fen ’e mar, hiel, hiel djip ûnder wetter en alle swânneblommen, dy-t der op omdriûwe, binn’ neat oars as loftgatsjes for hjar hûs. Det is net greater as jimm’ foarhús, mar o! sa moai, min scoe der fen bisouwe! Der binn’ keamers yn fen spegelglês en flieren fen parlemoer en moaije marblommen driûwe de glêzen foarby en tikje oan de ruten en wytfiskjes en ielen sile om ’t hûs. Sims forsjit der ek in âlde grouwe snoek en den dinderje de mûrren. Nou, der dânsje de elfkes mei hjar trijen yn om en libje der plezierich en wol en ite en drinke fen ’t bêste.

Mar op in goede dei, do forfeelden se hjar. Spinne woene se net mear en dânsje likemin, hja skopten de sidene skoentsjes út en de lipkes hingen wol in tûmbré op ’t kin. Och, och, hwet wie ’t in tiid!

Op ’t lêst sei Fissy Fossy Fo, det de âldste wie en dy-t it bigrutte om hjar sisterkes, dy-t al sa meager waerden as swevelstokjes: „Scill’ wy ris op reis? Trijersum by dei nei de greate ierde ta? Tynke Tanke hat der noch noait west en dû Moeleintsje ek net. Den kinn’ wy ek ris om ’t lok siikje en oare moaije dingen.”

„Hea ja,” sei Tynke Tanke, „ik woe de sinne ek wol ris opgean sjen.” En de oare sei: „En ik ris minskelaeitsjen hearre. Scil ’t net wêze as ’t wynmesyk yn ’e reiden?”

„En de wrâld ris om middei sjen.” Det wie lytse Moeleintsje en hja skodde hjar sidene rokjes út, det de goudene stjerkes stouden der ôf, sa ’n sin hie se der oan om foart en den op ljochtskyndei! Oars reizgen en bisiten hja altyd by nacht en den dânsen hja yn ljochtmoanne waer op ’e greiden.

Nou, den moast it mar wêze. Fissy Fossy Fo makke in weintsje fen in gledde roazereade núnder en bilei dy fenbinnen alhielendal mei boomwolle, dy-t sa lekker roek as de finjelieren út Beppe tún.

„To,” sei se tsjin lytse Moeleintsje, „en meitsje dû nou ris hânsum nije kleedtsjes for ús tsjin de kjeld. ’t Sil wol wer kâld wêze op dy ierde, lyk as nachts.”

En lytse Moeleintsje krige in skjirke en ’t gouden fluitsje en gyng de lange gong troch nei de poarte ta, der de minskewrâld as in hege berch efter stiet. Der fluite se de poartwachter, in greate ielreager en dy fleach de wrâld yn en kaem werom mei appelblossomside for jurkjes en fine kant for mûtskes en hiele lytse goudlearene skoentsjes en in linebeamsblêd for elkmis as parresoltsje. En de hiele gânske dei siet hja to naeijen en de joune let diene hja de jurkjes oan en ’e skoentsjes en setten de nije mûtskes op en sieten foar ’t greate finster nei ’t Easten út to sjen, as it gouden sinneskip der ek hast oansilen kaem op ’e wolkeweagen. En do-t einliks de dage oer de loft gyng, loeken Fissy Fossy Fo en Tynke Tanke en lytse Moeleintsje it weintsje nei de útdoar ta, dy-t sa biskûle is yn de reiden, det nin minskeëagen kinn’ him fine. Allinne de ielreager wit derfen en de oare elfkes. En Fissy Fossy Fo fluite op ’t fluitsje en der kamen ynienen trije flinters oanfleanen, twa gielen en ien reabûnten, in skoenmakkerke. Det waerden hjar hynsderkes en dy fleagen sa froalik mei ’t roazereade weintsje en de trije elfkes troch de loft oer ’e lânnen en huzen, oer beammen en sleatten, sa fluch en sa sêft, det min scoe sizze, der kaem in wynpûstje oan.

Och, hja wierne sa lyts, dy trije elfkes en yn ’e wrâld om hjar hinne wie alles sa great! En do-t yn it Easten dy hearlike goudene sinne al greater en greater waerde, gyngen hja hiel stil yn ’t skaed fen in greate bûterblom sitten, der de flinters hjar hinnesweefd hiene en seagen al mar oan nei det goudene ljocht, wylt hjar hertke trille fen blydskip. Mar hjar eachjes koene op den duer det goudene ljocht net feneare en it dûrre al net sa bare lang, do joech de âldste hjar op in paed en socht krûden for de beide oaren, dy-t alhielendal weikroepen yn ’t skaed fen ’e reiden, hwent o dy sinne wie to fel for hjar en to moai en to great! Dy wie net makke for lytse elfke-eachjes!

Einliks kaem de âldste by in wiis wyfke tolânne en dy joech hjar salve, der de dauwe oer gien wie en in fleskefol sniewetter fen Maertesnie en det hat se wer aerdich op ’e kluten holpen, mar it spande oars danich. En do joegen se hjar wer op in paed, it lytse weintsje mei de trije elfkes en de trije flinterkes.

„Hark!” sei lytse Moeleintsje, „sjonge hja der net? Der wol ’k ris hinne,” en hja loek oan in siden triedtsje en de flinterkes fleagen stadichwei nei de groun.

Der stiene trije boikes yn ’e smoute fen in dyk en fluiten op fluitsjes fen koetsehout. Trije famkes stiene derby to koarkjebreidzjen en songen allerhânne aerdige wyskes fen ’e skoalle en den boarten hja wer en wierne oan ’t pypforsydzjen om ’e dyksbeammen en hja laken sa ljeaf en gol, det Fissy Fossy Fo sei: „Hjir scill’ wy mar hwet rêste. Licht meije wy strak ansens wol meiboartsje.” En hja spanden de flinterkes út en gyngen yn ’t gêrs sitten en seagen om hjar hinne nei al ’t nijs fen ’e greate wrâld, de moaije blommen dy-t wiid-iepen stiene to bloeijen, it heldere blau fen ’e loft, der it steatlike gouden sinneskip troch sylde nei it Westen ta en tichteby hjar in kampke koalsied, det al bleekgiel skimere fen tinende blomknopkes.

Fissy Fossy Fo en lytse Moeleintsje praetten as alken, mar Tynke Tanke die ’t swijen derta. Dy seach mar... o dy hearlike ierde! Hwet wierne de minsken lokkich, dy-t dit alles alle dagen sjen mochten, en de wiksel fen ’e jiergetiden, dy-t der oanrôljen kamen en fordwounen as de weagen om hjar marre-hûs! En hiel tomûk fielde se, ef se hjar loksdoazke noch wol hie, en helle it do hiel stil efkes út de bûse. It wie hwet wûnderliks, det loksdoazke, ien greate griene smaragdstien wie it en der kralen allegear lytse daudripkes op. Der hearde it lok yn en alle elfkes krigen him mar ienkear mei yn ’t libben en moasten him yn ’e nacht fen Sinte Jan wer ynleverje by de elfekening. Dy-t den it lok deryn hie, mocht in minske wirde en syn hiele libben lang op ierde forkeare, op dy moaije ierde! Ef dy elfkes ek sochten!

En do-t dy bern sa ljeaf boarten, tocht Tynke Tanke mimerjende wei: „scoe hjir it lok ek wêze kinne? Licht is ’t de bernelaeits,” en sûnder det immen der hwet fen bispeurde, biflapte se ynienen it heldere lûd fen in laeits twisken hjar lytse hantsjes en sjoch! it waerde in peareltsje en det skittere yn al de sêfte kleuren fen ’e reinbôge. Do gyng it smaragden doazke fensels op, hwent it lok ken gjin slotfêsten en tichte doarren. O! hwet wierne se bliid! Lytse Moeleintsje fleach oerein en dânse yn ’t gêrs om, det it in lust wie. Mar der ynienen! der krige ien fen ’e jonges hjar yn ’t fesier en hja hellen in great moardenersnet en fongen de hynsderkes fen ’e elfkes. Dy gûlden al en rôpen, mar do kamen de jonges hjar efter en de flinterkes stoaren ûnder hânnen. En sa hird as se rinne koene, roanen de elfkes foart.

It weintsje rekke stikken yn in fûrge en de skoentsjes út en lytse Moeleintsje hjar mûtske bleau hingjen yn in hagebeambosk. En do roanen se op bleate foetsjes de hiele gare moarn.

En do kamen hja by in great wetter. Der stie in man foar to digerjen nei de oare ich.

„Dy ken ik wol,” sei Fissy Fossy Fo. „Dy jimmet yt wol ris by ús kening. Det is in dichter.”

„Kinne jy ús ek helpe?” frege se de greate man. „Us hynsderkes binn’ stoarn en wy moatte perfoarst fierder to loksiikjen,” en alle trije kroepen se him tige ticht oan, hwent der gyng skutte út fen dy man for alles, hwet tear en lyts wie.

„Jawol,” sei ’r, „gean mar mei jimm’ trijen op myn hân sitten.” Tige binaud for det wide wetter kroepen se inoar noch tichter oan, wylt hy hjar op in sitselbankje yn in great boat sette en mei in pear riemmen as beammen yn ’t wetter omsloech, det lilk op him waerde en raer bearde. „Sjesa, jongfolk, hjir binn’ wy der al,” sei ’r einliks en lei syn hân hiel foarsichtich yn ’t gêrs, det se der mar net ôffalle scoene en in gongelpaedtsje hiene om yn ’t gêrs to kommen.

„Tankje wol,” sei Fissy Fossy Fo. „Hjir is de fracht,” en hja lei twa stjerkes fen hjar kleedtsje yn in knokkeldobbe fen syn hân en ynienen foroaren hja yn stikken goud sa great as bakkerts. Do wie dy dichter bliid, hwent hy wie earm.

Der stiene se wer mei hjar trijen. Foar hjar út roan de wei op en op ’e hichte blonk in moai wyt minskehûs. „Der koe ’t lok wol ris wenje,” tochte Tynke Tanke en sette swijchsum de stap derûnder derhinne. Fissy Fossy Fo wie drok dwaende om hjar gouden fluitsje wer foar inoar to krijen, det nys ansens mei dy smoarge jonges stikken rekke wie en pandere hjar efternei en lytse Moeleintsje kaem mei ’t linebeams blêdden parresoltsje efteroan.

op ’e hichte blonk in moai wyt minskehûs

Do-t se boppe wierne, seagen se hjar de eagen hast út ’e holle. In hiele wrâld fen blommen wie ’t der en greate pauwen stapten der om en yn hege fonteinen brûze en spuite it marswetter mei tûzen drippen fen kristal, noch folle moaijer as de hûndert dauwelampen, dy-t jouns by hjar oan ’e souder hingen. De hiele middei strúnden se yn ’t tún om en ieten blomhunich en dronken applekoazesop, det se mei lytse sûchreidtsjes ôftapen, en tsjin ’e joun makken se lytse bedtsjes fen roazebledden en der foelen se op yn ’e sliep. Mar yn ’e foarnacht, do spoarde de man fen ’t hûs noch yn ’t tún om en dy seach hjar lizzen en ear ’t hja hjar forwarre koene, kniep er syn brune fûst ticht en der sieten se.

Hy naem hjar mei yn ’e hûs en do moasten se him fen alles fortelle. Hwer se wei kamen en ho-t se hieten en hwet se scoene en Fissy Fossy Fo moast him to reden stean. En do se seine, det se op reis wierne to loksiikjen, do lake hy smeulsk en sei: „Ho komst’ der by, pjut? Binn’ jimm’ ek al net wizer as de minsken? Det rint op smartlapen út, dy-t in libben lang net wer hjilje. Sels ha ’k ek al ien,” en hy lei syn hân op ’t boarst, „dy hâld ik yn lust mei jildgeniet en eare en mei myn spot. En de oerginst fen in oar, det ’s nou myn earm bytsje lok.”

Dy lêste wirden heinde Tynke Tanke op en lei se wer yn hjar smaragden doazke by de bernelaeits. Min koe ’t net witte, ho ’n nuver plak it lok sims sochte.

Op ’t lêst hie dy man syn nocht fen ’e elfkes hjar swietlûdich praet, do moasten se for him dânsje en do-t hja net fluggernôch woene, ûnderhelle hy in swypke en sloech hjar nei de holtsjes, hwent djip ynwindich hage hjar bywêzen syn kâld herte net mear.

„Wacht!” sei ’r optlêst, „ik scil jimm’ wol better helpe, jimm’ skabanten,” en hy helle trije fingerhoedden en dy die hy fol wetter. Do barnde it al hwet op de neil, lytse Moeleintsje hie ’r al by de earm, mar dy skoerde hjar wer los en slûpte by de franje fen ’t tafelkleed del en do ta ’t iepen finster út. Fissy Fossy Fo kuijere him twisken de bienige fingers troch, der ynienen gjin klam mear yn siet en Tynke Tanke struide earnstich en stil de piper Forjit op syn keamerdrompel, det er noait wer ’t paed fine scoe nei ’t lân fen forbylding. En do earst wie dy rike man yn ’t greate hûs wirklik wier earm.

En der sieten nou de elfkes yn in frjemd tsjuster tún en gûlden alle trije.

Mar Fissy Fossy Fo hjar fluitsje wie wer hiel en hja fluite en do kamen der hiel stadich seis glimwjirmkes oankrûpen, twa by twa mei in spoennen karke efter hjar oan. Der gyngen de elfkes do bidrukt yn sitten en hja loeken hjar nei de stamme fen in âld wylgenmoes ta, der alles ljocht en wille wie en in great feest fierd waerde. Der dânsen wol tûzen nachtflinters yn lange rigen en de imerkes sieten yn ’t gêrs en makken mesyk mei fluit en fioele en in greate swarte holder, dy sloech de tromme. En de elfkes kamen wer hwet op ’t forhael en lytse Moeleintsje praette as in alk mei in âlde nachtflinter, sa swart as in roek en sa âld as in minske. Tynke Tanke allinne, dy siet der stil by mei de hantsjes om ’t smaragden doazke, der de twa peareltsjes lok yn leine.

„Jimm’ moatte jimm’ for de minsken wachtsje,” sei de flinter wiis. „Hja binne wreed en ûndogens. Hja knipe it moaije dea...”

„Ja,” sei lytse Moeleintsje, „der ha ’k ûnderfining fen,” en hja wiisde him de smartlape fen in swypslach yn ’t skimerige ljocht fen it glimhout.

„Kom mar mei,” sei er, „der is ried for,” en hja gyngen mei inoar, al de nachtflinterkes en al de imerkes en al de elfkes nei in lyts húske ta yn ’t lân. Der wenne in fromminsk sa wiis, as der nimmen wer west hat en hja wosk lytse Moeleintsje mei hjilwetter en hja joech de elfkes nije skoentsjes om oan to tsjen en in nij sulveren weintsje om yn to riden en hja koe hjar dy nachts ek wol bêdzje, sei hja en hja sliepten op bedtsjes fen miedepûske-plom en krigen tekkentsjes oer fen fjûrreade side.

En it waerde wer dei en hja krigen nije moed.

En Fissy Fossy Fo rôp trije greate dragers en dy moasten it weintsje do lûke, mar dy wierne net sa sterk en dy waerden warrich, do-t hja oer in great wetter scoene. En de jageline briek en it nije weintsje mei de trije elfkes kaem op de brûzjende weagen tolânne. Hja dûkelen ûnder en rekken wer boppe en hja scoene hast dea-gien wêze, mar do seach Fissy Fossy Fo in reid en dy hinge moi leech en der kroepen hja do alle trije by op. En sa klûmmeren hja der de hiele moarn om en do kaem der in earrebarre oanfleanen en dy seach hjar, wylst er om kikkerts sochte en naem hjar op syn rêch mei nei de groun ta. En do roanen se as ljipkes, om wer waerm to wirden.

En do-t se hiel fier roan hiene, kamen se by in great bosk en der stiene beammen yn fen hûnderten jierren âld en dy diene neat oars as skodholjen tsjin ’e wyn dy-t derten út it Suden kaem. En dwers troch dy bosk roan in leane, der wenne de skimerjoun, dy-t nea de dei kend hat en der stringelen de beamtokken om inoar hinne as tûzen innige frjeonskippen. Der gyngen de lytse elfkes sitten to neipraten oer hjar ûnderfinings ûnder in hiele greate poddestoel, dy stie wiid-waech oer hjar út as in fjûrread sinneskerm.

En do-t hja der sa sieten, tynden der yn ’e fierte út ’e skaden fen ’e leane twa stippen, dy-t yn it ljocht oproanen op hjar ta. It wierne minsken en de elfkes fielden it, hja hearden by de simmer fen ’e bosk as de sinne by de dei. Hja waerden al greater en greater der twisken dy âlde beammen... de skimerjoun liet hjar los en de ljochte dei streake mei syn glâns oer syn brunens en hjar blondens.

En ûnder in hiele âlde linebeam, der bleauwne hja stean, in hiel set... Hy seach hjar oan en hja him... ien amerij wierne se yn it lân fen lok....

Tynke Tanke hie it smaragden doazke op ’e palm fen hjar hân en ynienen sprang det fensels op mei in sulveren lûd en foel it wûndere ljacht fen dy loaitsen yn ’t grien fen ’e smaragd. En sjoch! it waerde in pearel, syn gelikens as de elfkes noch noait sjoen hiene!

Do fluite Fissy Fossy Fo for ’t lêst en bigroef do hjar fluitsje yn ’t struwellehout. Der foun it gealtsje it en dy fluitet der nou op. Do-t hja fluite, gounzen der trije wartebiters mei greate gazen wjukken troch de loft en seine noartsk: „Jimm’ ha ús roppen. Hwet woll’ jimm’?”

„Wy wolle ride en wy ha gjin wein, hwer binne hynsderkes op fjouweren wol bislein?” sei Fissy Fossy Fo.

„Hjir,” gounzen de wartebiters en elkmis naem in elfke op syn rêch en droech hjar nei de doar fen hjar sulveren hûs ta. Do krige Fissy Fossy Fo hwet twisken tûmme en finger en striek der mei oer ’e lyfkes fen ’e wartebiters. Der skitterje hja nou altyd noch sa moai fen as de sinne der op skynt.

En de oare nachts, it wie Sinte Jan, joegen de elfkes hjar op in paed nei de kening ta. Hja sieten nou prinshearlik yn in forgulden draechkoetske en fjouwer jonge ûlen droegen det en twa foarfleaners fleagen foarút mei liende Sint Elmusfjûrfonkjes yn lantearntsjes mei kleurde ruten.

Do-t se by de kening kamen, siet de dichter der al wer to jimmetiten en de kening spande krekt mei eigen hân in nije gouden snaer op syn âlde harpe. En dy joech letter lûd, det, do de dichter al lang wei wie, mienden de minsken, hy song noch altyd troch. Mar it wie syn siel, do song noch nei yn syn sang. Sá keninklik bileane de kening him.

De foarfleaners kamen del en de ûlen en de elfkes wipten ta ’t koetske út.

„Wy ha ús ierdereis dien,” sei Fissy Fossy Fo en bûgde it kopke as in roazeblêd foar de machtige kening.

„En hiel hwet sjoen,” sei lytse Moeleintsje en die forslach. ’t Mûltsje gyng as in rattelblom.

„En habbe jimme it lok foun?” frege de kening einliks en to ’n lêsten.

„Ja wy!” rôpen se alle trije tagelyk en Tynke Tanke hâldde him it smaragden doazke foar.

Hy die ’t op. Der leine neat oars yn as trije greate triennen en dy waerden al lytser en lytser en do wie ’t doazke leech.

„Hwet ’s det?” sei de kening stoef. „Hwa hat jimm’ eagen sa bigûchele der op dy ûndogense ierde?”

Noait scil in elfke ien ljeagen oer ’e lippen komme en gûlende-wei fortelden se de kening it finen fen hjar pearels en ho bliid se der ta west hiene. „Sjoch,” sei hy, „jimm’ binne by it echte lok lâns gien yn in lyts húske by de rike man syn wente. Dy earme man hat krekt genôch... gjin bigearte groeit yn syn hert. Alle dagen wardearret hy syn lok troch flitigens en in goed sin. En syn hert set er op gjin ding. Sa scil er ek gjin smert ha, as er skiede moat. Det wie de pearel, dy-t jimm’ ha moasten.”

Do gûlden de elfkes en de dichter gûlde mei, hwent hy fielde, hwet der yn hjar hertkes omgyng. En hy stimde syn nije gouden snaer en hy song de birêsting yn hjar earme lytse herten en do striek de kening mei syn wize hân hjar oer ’e eagen en it wrede oantinken oan hjar ierdereis foel fen hjar ôf as ’t stof fen minskeklean.

Noait ha se wer nei de ierde taeld by dei en as hja hjar wer forfele, den komt de dichter en sjongt nije sangen op syn âlde harpe.

En de wyn en ’e weagen harkje mei en it sulveren elfkehûs leit yn ljochtmoannewaer to blinken, djip op ’e boom fen ’e mar...


Story DNA

Moral

True happiness is found not in grand experiences or material wealth, but in contentment with what one has, a good disposition, and a heart free from desire.

Plot Summary

Three bored elf sisters leave their idyllic underwater home to seek happiness in the human world during the day. They face the harshness of the sun, the cruelty of children who kill their butterfly steeds, and the fickle nature of a poet who first helps then harms them. Despite moments of perceived happiness, like capturing a child's laugh, their journey is fraught with hardship and disillusionment. Upon returning to their king, their collected 'happiness' turns to tears. The king reveals that true happiness lies in contentment and freedom from desire, not in the fleeting experiences of the human world. Their painful memories are erased, and they find peace in their own realm, never again venturing to the human world by day.

Themes

the nature of happinessthe allure of the unknownthe dangers of the human worlddisillusionment

Emotional Arc

innocence to disillusionment to peace

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: lush
Techniques: personification, rich imagery, symbolism

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs society
Ending: bittersweet
Magic: talking animals (eel-heron, butterflies, dragonflies, owls, glow-worms, stork), elves, silver house under a lake, emerald box that collects happiness, healing salve from dew and snow water, magical flute, transformation of happiness into tears, king's ability to erase memories
the emerald boxthe pearls of happiness (and later tears)the silver housethe sunthe poet's harp

Cultural Context

Origin: Frisian
Era: timeless fairy tale

Simke Kloosterman was a prominent Frisian writer, and her works often drew from Frisian folklore and nature, reflecting a strong regional identity and a sense of connection to the natural world.

Plot Beats (16)

  1. Three elf sisters, Fissy Fossy Fo, Tynke Tanke, and Moeleintsje, live a joyful but secluded life in a silver house at the bottom of a lake.
  2. Boredom sets in, and Fissy Fossy Fo proposes a journey to the human world during the day to seek happiness and new sights.
  3. They prepare for the trip, making new clothes and a rose-red carriage pulled by three butterflies, guided by an eel-heron.
  4. Upon reaching the surface, the sun's intensity is too much for their eyes, forcing them to hide and seek healing salve from a wise woman.
  5. They observe human children playing; Tynke Tanke captures a child's laugh as a pearl of happiness, but the boys cruelly kill their butterfly steeds.
  6. The elfkes flee, losing their carriage and shoes, and encounter a poet who ferries them across a river and offers them a place to rest.
  7. The poet, initially kind, becomes cruel, forcing them to dance and eventually striking them, causing them to flee his house.
  8. They find temporary refuge and healing with a wise woman, who provides new shoes and a silver carriage.
  9. Their new carriage is lost in a river, and they are rescued by a stork, who carries them to a forest.
  10. In the forest, they witness a loving human couple, and Tynke Tanke's emerald box opens, revealing a perfect pearl of happiness.
  11. Fissy Fossy Fo buries her flute, and three dragonflies carry them back to their silver house in the lake.
  12. On Saint John's night, they travel in a gilded coach pulled by owls to meet their king.
  13. They present their emerald box to the king, but the 'pearls of happiness' have transformed into tears.
  14. The king explains that true happiness was in the humble, contented man they passed by the rich man's house, not in the grand experiences or the poet's 'happiness'.
  15. The elfkes cry, the poet sings a comforting song, and the king erases their painful memories of the human world.
  16. The elfkes never return to the human world by day, finding renewed joy in their home and the poet's songs.

Characters

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Fissy Fossy Fo

elf young adult female

Slender and delicate, like a typical elf, but slightly more robust than her sisters. Her movements are purposeful and she carries herself with a natural authority.

Attire: Initially wears silken slippers and a dress, but for the journey, she dons a new dress made of apple blossom silk, fine lace cap, and tiny gold-leather shoes. The dress would be light and flowing, suitable for flight, in soft, natural colors.

Wants: To alleviate her sisters' boredom, seek 'luck' and new experiences on the great earth, and ensure their well-being.

Flaw: Can be overly protective, sometimes shielding her sisters from experiences that might ultimately lead to growth, and she is also susceptible to the harshness of the human world.

She learns that true 'luck' is not found in material possessions or grand experiences, but in contentment and a lack of desire, and that the human world can be both beautiful and cruel.

Her calm, leading demeanor and the small, golden flute she uses to summon aid.

Wise, responsible, caring, resourceful, and a natural leader. She initiates the journey and takes charge of her younger sisters.

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Tynke Tanke

elf young adult female

Delicate and ethereal, slightly more withdrawn than her sisters. Her movements are quiet and observant.

Attire: Initially wears silken slippers and a dress. For the journey, she wears a new dress made of apple blossom silk, a fine lace cap, and tiny gold-leather shoes. Her attire would be light and shimmering, reflecting her quiet nature.

Wants: To see the sunrise and experience the beauty of the human world, and to find her 'luck' box.

Flaw: Overly sensitive to the harshness and intensity of the human world, particularly the sun's brightness. Her quiet nature can make her seem passive.

She experiences the beauty and harshness of the human world, culminating in the transformation of her 'luck' box. She learns that true luck is not a tangible item but an internal state.

Her hands clasped around her glowing emerald 'luck' box.

Quiet, observant, contemplative, sensitive, and deeply appreciative of beauty. She is the most affected by the sights of the human world.

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Moeleintsje

elf child female

The smallest and most energetic of the elves, with a lively and curious demeanor. Her movements are quick and playful.

Attire: Initially wears silken slippers and a dress adorned with golden stars. For the journey, she wears a new dress made of apple blossom silk, a fine lace cap, and tiny gold-leather shoes. Her clothing would be light and practical for her active nature.

Wants: To hear human voices, see the world by day, and experience new things.

Flaw: Impulsive and easily distracted, which can lead her into trouble or discomfort, as seen with the whip-lash mark.

She experiences both the wonder and the pain of the human world, learning that not all new experiences are pleasant. She is healed and comforted, ultimately returning with a new understanding.

Her tiny, star-dusted silken skirts and her eager, wide-eyed expression.

Curious, lively, talkative, easily excited, and a bit impetuous. She is eager for new experiences and sounds.

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The Elf King

elf ageless male

A powerful and majestic figure, likely with a regal bearing. His presence commands respect, and he appears ancient yet vibrant.

Attire: Regal attire befitting a king, likely made of rich, shimmering fabrics like silk or velvet, adorned with precious gems and intricate embroidery. He is described stringing a new golden string on his old harp.

Wants: To guide his elves towards true understanding and to maintain the balance and wisdom of the elf realm.

Flaw: None explicitly stated, but perhaps a slight detachment from the immediate emotional experiences of his subjects due to his ancient wisdom.

He serves as the ultimate arbiter of truth and wisdom, revealing the true meaning of 'luck' to the elves.

His majestic presence as he strings a golden harp, surrounded by a soft, ethereal glow.

Wise, just, discerning, and somewhat stern but ultimately benevolent. He understands the deeper truths of happiness and sorrow.

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The Poet

human adult male

A sensitive and empathetic individual, likely with a somewhat melancholic or thoughtful appearance. His build might be slender, reflecting his artistic nature.

Attire: Simple but well-made clothing, perhaps a tunic and trousers of natural linen or wool, in muted tones, suggesting a life of thought rather than extravagance. He is present at the Elf King's court.

Wants: To create beauty through song and to provide solace and understanding through his art.

Flaw: Highly sensitive to others' pain, which can cause him personal sorrow.

He provides emotional support and artistic expression for the elves' experiences, his songs embodying the lessons learned.

His thoughtful expression as he listens, ready to compose a song of solace.

Empathetic, sensitive, artistic, and deeply understanding of emotions. He feels the elves' sorrow keenly.

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The Gatekeeper Eel-Heron

animal (eel-heron) adult non-human

A large, imposing eel-heron. Its feathers would be a mix of grey, white, and black, with long, slender legs and a sharp beak. Its eyes are keen and watchful.

Attire: Natural feathers, no clothing.

Wants: To serve the elves and guard the passage between their world and the human world.

Flaw: None explicitly stated.

Serves its function without significant change.

Its tall, watchful stance at the hidden entrance, with its long beak and legs.

Loyal, dutiful, and helpful to the elves. It acts as a guardian and messenger.

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The Wise Woman

human elderly female

An old woman, described as very wise. Her face would be lined with age and experience, but her eyes would be clear and kind. She might have a slightly stooped posture from years of work and wisdom.

Attire: Simple, practical peasant clothing, perhaps a dark wool skirt, a linen blouse, and a plain apron, reflecting her humble but wise nature. Her clothes would be clean and well-maintained.

Wants: To help those in need with her wisdom and remedies.

Flaw: None explicitly stated.

She provides aid and comfort to the elves, helping them recover from their harsh experiences.

Her kind, knowing eyes and the healing remedies she offers.

Kind, compassionate, and possessing deep knowledge of healing and comfort. She is generous with her aid.

Locations

The Silver Elf House

indoor Underwater, serene, moonlit reflections on the surface

A house made of silver, located deep at the bottom of a lake, beneath the water. It's not larger than a human's front room but exquisitely beautiful, with rooms of mirror glass and floors of mother-of-pearl. Water lilies float by the windows, tapping against the panes, and whitefish and eels swim around it. Sometimes, an old, fat pike shoots past, making the walls thunder. Air holes for the house are disguised as water lilies on the surface.

Mood: Magical, secluded, cozy, initially joyful but later bored, then peaceful again

The elves' home where they live, dance, and initially feel bored, prompting their journey to the human world. It's also their final destination after their adventures.

silver house mirror glass rooms mother-of-pearl floors water lilies (as air holes) eels and whitefish pike (causing thunder) silk slippers golden stars (from skirts)

The Great Earth (Meadow by a Dike)

outdoor afternoon Sunny, clear blue sky, pleasant, likely late spring/early summer

A vast, open meadow on the 'Great Earth' where everything appears enormous to the tiny elves. Specifically, a sheltered spot by a dike where three boys play flutes made of elder wood and three girls knit cork and sing school songs. Nearby is a patch of cabbage seed shimmering pale yellow with budding flowerets. The sky is bright blue with a stately golden sun-ship sailing towards the West.

Mood: Vast, overwhelming, joyful, curious, initially bright but too intense for elf eyes

The elves' first prolonged stop on Earth, where they observe human children, rest, and Tynke Tanke feels the first stirrings of 'luck' and the beauty of the changing seasons.

large buttercup (for shade) reeds (for shade) dike elder wood flutes cork knitting cabbage seed patch blue sky golden sun-ship

Ancient Forest Lane

outdoor twilight evening (perpetual) Windy from the South, perpetual twilight, cool, ancient

A deep, ancient forest with trees hundreds of years old, their branches intertwining like a thousand intimate friendships. A lane runs through it, perpetually in a 'twilight evening' that has never known day. The trees shake their heads against the wind from the South. Under a very large, fire-red toadstool, the elves sit and discuss their experiences.

Mood: Mysterious, ancient, contemplative, magical, romantic

The elves reflect on their journey and encounter a human couple under an old lime tree, where Tynke Tanke's emerald box reveals a pearl, signifying true love and happiness.

hundreds-year-old trees intertwining branches lane (perpetual twilight) very large, fire-red toadstool old lime tree

King's Court (Elf Kingdom)

indoor night (St. John's Night) Cool, magical, festive (St. John's Night)

The court of the Elf King, where the poet is always present, playing his harp. The king himself is seen stringing a new golden string on his old harp. The elves arrive in a gilded carriage pulled by four young owls, with two fore-flyers carrying lanterns with borrowed St. Elmo's fire sparks and colored windows.

Mood: Regal, wise, comforting, magical, solemn

The elves return to report their journey and present their 'luck' to the King, who reveals the true meaning of happiness and comforts them, erasing their painful memories of the human world.

Elf King poet old harp with golden string gilded carriage young owls (pulling carriage) fore-flyers with lanterns St. Elmo's fire sparks colored window panes