THE SWAN
by Aesop · from Aesop's Fables; a new translation
Adapted Version
There was a special bird. It was a white swan. This swan had a special song. It sang only one time. It sang when it was very, very old. The song was very beautiful. People talked about this special song.
The Man heard about the special swan. He wanted to hear the song. He went to the market. He saw a white swan there. The Man bought the swan. He paid money for it. He wanted to hear its song.
The Man took The Swan home. He put it in his house. He waited for the song. He wanted to hear it now. The Man waited many days.
One day, friends came to visit. They came for dinner. The Man brought out The Swan. He told The Swan to sing. "Sing your special song now!" he said. He wanted to show his friends.
The Swan did not sing. It was very quiet. It made no sound. The Man felt sad. His friends felt sad too. They did not hear the song.
Many days passed. Many weeks passed. Many years passed by. The Swan grew very old. Its feathers were still white. It was a very old bird.
One day, The Swan felt it was time. It knew its life was ending. It opened its beak. It sang a beautiful song. The song was very sweet. It was a little bit sad. The sound filled the air.
The Man heard the beautiful song. He knew it was The Swan's song. This was the special song. He understood everything now. The Swan sang only when old. He could not make it sing.
The Man felt very silly. He felt a little bit sad. He knew he made a big mistake. He wanted the special song. He wanted it right away. He tried to make The Swan sing. But The Swan did not sing then. It sang only when it was old. He could not force The Swan. He should have been patient. He should have waited for its time. He should have let The Swan be happy. He learned a lesson that day. It is not good to force things. Special things happen in their own time.
Original Story
THE SWAN
The Swan is said to sing but once in its life—when it knows that it is about to die. A certain man, who had heard of the song of the Swan, one day saw one of these birds for sale in the market, and bought it and took it home with him. A few days later he had some friends to dinner, and produced the Swan, and bade it sing for their entertainment: but the Swan remained silent. In course of time, when it was growing old, it became aware of its approaching end and broke into a sweet, sad song. When its owner heard it, he said angrily, "If the creature only sings when it is about to die, what a fool I was that day I wanted to hear its song! I ought to have wrung its neck instead of merely inviting it to sing."
Story DNA
Moral
Do not be greedy or impatient, for you may destroy the very thing you desire by forcing it.
Plot Summary
A man buys a Swan, known for singing only before its death, hoping to hear its legendary song. He tries to make it sing for his friends, but the Swan remains silent. Years later, as the Swan senses its impending death, it sings a beautiful, sad song. The man, hearing it, becomes angry at his past foolishness, realizing he should have killed the Swan for food instead of waiting for a song he couldn't command.
Themes
Emotional Arc
anticipation to disappointment to anger
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Aesop's Fables are ancient Greek stories, often featuring animals with human characteristics to convey moral lessons.
Plot Beats (9)
- The story introduces the legend of the Swan, which sings only before death.
- A man, aware of this legend, buys a Swan from the market.
- The man brings the Swan home, intending to hear its song.
- He hosts friends for dinner and commands the Swan to sing for their entertainment.
- The Swan remains silent, disappointing the man and his guests.
- Years pass, and the Swan grows old.
- The Swan senses its impending death and begins to sing a sweet, sad song.
- The owner hears the song and understands its significance.
- He becomes angry, realizing his past mistake in trying to force the song, and wishes he had killed the Swan for food instead.
Characters
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The Swan
A large, graceful aquatic bird with a long, elegant S-curved neck and a robust body. Its plumage is entirely pure, pristine white, appearing almost luminous against water or land. It has webbed feet for swimming and a powerful wingspan.
Attire: None, as it is a bird. Its natural plumage serves as its 'clothing'.
Wants: To live out its natural life cycle, fulfilling its destiny to sing only at the moment of its death.
Flaw: Its inherent nature dictates its song, making it unable to perform on demand.
Remains consistent in its nature throughout the story, fulfilling its destiny without deviation, despite external pressure.
Patient, stoic, melancholic, true to its nature, reserved.
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A certain man
A man of average height and build, likely with a practical, somewhat stern demeanor. His features are unremarkable, suggesting a focus on utility over aesthetics. He might have calloused hands from work or a slightly robust build from a comfortable life.
Attire: Simple, functional clothing appropriate for a common man in an ancient or classical setting, such as a tunic made of coarse linen or wool, possibly cinched at the waist with a rope or leather belt. Colors would be muted, like earthy browns, greys, or undyed off-white. He might wear simple leather sandals.
Wants: To gain entertainment or profit from the swan, driven by curiosity and a desire to impress his friends.
Flaw: His inability to appreciate intrinsic value, his focus on immediate gratification, and his lack of empathy.
Remains unchanged in his selfish nature, demonstrating a lack of remorse or understanding even after the swan's song.
Selfish, impatient, materialistic, short-sighted, cruel, utilitarian.
Locations
The Market
A bustling ancient Greek marketplace, likely open-air, with various goods for sale and people milling about. The air would be filled with the sounds of vendors and shoppers.
Mood: lively, transactional, bustling
The man purchases the Swan, hoping to hear its legendary song.
The Man's Home (Dining Area)
The interior of a wealthy ancient Greek home, likely a dining room (andron) with a central table and kline (couches) for reclining guests. The architecture would feature plastered walls, perhaps simple frescoes, and a tiled or mosaic floor.
Mood: social, expectant, later frustrated
The man attempts to make the Swan sing for his dinner guests, but it remains silent.
The Man's Home (Later Years)
The same home, but now with the Swan having aged. Perhaps a more private, quieter part of the house where the Swan might have been kept, or simply the general atmosphere of the home as time passes.
Mood: somber, reflective, ultimately dramatic
The old Swan sings its beautiful, mournful song just before its death, revealing its true nature to the owner.