Golden Treasure

by Hans Christian Andersen · from Collected Fairy Tales

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A mother had a baby boy. His hair was bright red, like gold. The mother loved Peter very much. His hair shone like the sun. She called him "Golden Treasure."

But some people said unkind words. They called his hair 'red'. The drum sounded. It said, "Dr-rum-a-lum! Red hair!" They did not understand.

Peter liked music very much. He learned to play the violin. He played well. But Peter also wanted to be a soldier.

Then there was a war. Peter became a drummer boy. He was very brave. He played his drum for the soldiers.

One day, Peter played his drum. He played "Go forward!" The soldiers heard him. They went forward. The soldiers won the fight.

Mother was very worried about Peter. But Peter came home safe. His mother and father were very happy.

Peter played the violin very well. He taught Lotte. Lotte was the mayor's daughter. Peter liked Lotte very much.

Lotte married another man. Peter was very sad. He left his home. He played violin in other places.

Peter became a famous musician. He played for kings. Everyone loved his music. He was a great artist.

Peter sent letters and money. He sent them to his mother. She was very proud of her son.

One day, Peter came home. He was a famous artist now. His mother was so happy. She hugged her son.

Peter saw the old drum. He played it very strong. The drum skin broke! "Dr-rum-a-lum!" it said. The drum knew Peter was Golden Treasure.

Peter was very happy. His music was his true golden treasure. Everyone knew it now. Peter showed talent and kindness are treasures.

Original Story 2806 words · 13 min read

Golden treasure

A fairy tale by Hans Christian Andersen

The drummer's wife went to church and saw the new altar with painted pictures and carved angels. The angels were very beautiful, both those painted on cloth, in all their colors and glory, and those carved in wood, painted and gilded. Their hair shone like gold and sunshine and was beautiful to look at. But God's sunshine was still more beautiful; it glowed bright and red between the dark trees as the sun was setting. And as the woman gazed on the descending sun, her innermost thoughts were about the little child the stork was bringing her. She was radiantly happy as she gazed, and she wished most fervently that her child might be as bright as a sunbeam, or at least look like one of the shining angels on the altarpiece.

And when she actually lifted up her child in her arms to show her husband, it seemed to her that the infant really did resemble one of the angels in the church; at least it had golden hair, hair that had caught the reflection of that setting sun.

"My Golden Treasure, my wealth, my sunshine!" said the mother as she kissed the bright locks; and this sounded like music and song in the drummer's home; there was joy, and lots of life, and celebrating. The drummer beat a whirlwind on his drum, a whirlwind of happiness; the drum, the fire drum shouted, "Red hair! The young one has red hair! Listen, believe the drum and not the mother! Dr-rum-a-lum! Dr-rum-a-lum!"

And all the town agreed with what the fire drum said.

The boy was taken to church and was christened. There was nothing unusual about the name given him; he was called Peter. Everybody in town called him "Peter, the drummer's red-haired boy," but his mother kissed that red hair and called him "Golden Treasure."

In the clayey embankment along the hollow road, many people had scratched their names to be remembered. "Fame," said the drummer. "That's always important." So he, too, scratched his name there and that of his little son. And in the spring the swallows came; in their long travels they had seen many characters cut into rock cliffs, and on the temple walls of India, telling of the great deeds of mighty kings, immortal names so old that no one could even read them now. Name value! Fame! The swallows built their nests in the hollow road, in holes in the embankment. Rain crumbled it and washed away all the names, the drummer's and his little son's with them. "However, Peter's name stayed there for a year and a half," said the father.

"Fool!" thought the fire drum, but it only said, "Dr-rum, dr-rum, dr-rum! Dr-rum-a-lum!"

"The drummer's son with the red hair" was a lively and high-spirited boy. He had a lovely voice; he could sing, and sing he did, as does the bird in the forest: all melody and no tune. He ought to be a choirboy," said his mother, "and sing in the church, standing under the pretty gilded angels whom he looks like."

"Fire cat!" said the town wits. The drum heard it from the neighbors.

"Don't go home, Peter," cried the street boys. "If they make you sleep in the attic your hair will set the thatch on fire, and that will start the fire drum."

"Look out for the drumsticks!" retorted Peter; although he was only a little fellow, he was courageous, and threw his fist right into the stomach of the boy nearest him, knocking his legs from under him; and the others took to their legs - their own legs!

The state musician was proud and haughty; he was the son of a royal servant. He liked Peter and took him home with him for hours at a time, gave him a violin and taught him to play; it seemed to show in the boy's fingers that he would become more than a drummer, that he would become a state musician.

"I want to be a soldier," said Peter, for he was still a very small fellow and thought it would be the finest thing in the world to shoulder a gun and to march - "One, two! One, two!" - and to wear a uniform and carry a saber.

"You'll learn to obey the drum! Dr-rum-a-lum! Come, come!" said the drum.

"Yes, you may march ahead to become a general," said the father, "but only if there is a war."

"God save us from that!" said the mother.

"We have nothing to lose!" said the drummer.

"Yes, we have my boy!" said she.

"But when he could come home a general!" said the father.

"Without any arms or legs!" said the mother. "No, thank you, I'd rather keep my Golden Treasure whole!"

"Dr-rum! Dr-rum! Dr-rum!" beat the fire drum, and all the drums joined in. War really did come; the soldiers marched out, and the drummer's boy marched with them. "Red-top!" - "Golden Treasure!" The mother wept; the father imagined him coming home famous; the state musician thought he would have been better off staying home and studying music.

"Red-top!" the soldiers said, and Peter laughed, but when some of them called him "Foxy" his mouth tightened and he looked straight ahead, as if that name did not concern him. The boy was smart, carefree, and good-humored, and that made him a favorite with his older comrades. Many nights he had to sleep under the open sky, in rain and mist, wet to the skin; but his good humor never failed. His drumsticks beat, "Dr-rum-a-lum! Everybody up!" Yes, he was certainly a born drummer boy.

It was a day of battle; the sun was not yet up, but it was morning; the air was cold and the fight was hot; the morning was foggy, but there was a still heavier fog from gunpowder. Bullets and grenades flew overhead and into heads, bodies, and limbs; still the command was "Forward!" One after another sank to his knees with bleeding temple and pale white face. The little drummer boy's color was still healthy; he wasn't hurt at all. With flashing eyes he watched the regimental dog running before him, and the animal was really happy, as if the whole thing were in fun and they were firing the bullets only to play with him.

"March! Forward, march!" was the command given the drummers; but sometimes orders have to be changed, with good reason, and now the word was, "Retreat!" But the little drummer boy still sounded, "March forward!" not understanding that the orders had been changed. The soldiers obeyed the drum, and it was lucky they did, for the mistake resulted in victory.

Lives and limbs were lost in the battle. The grenade tears away the flesh in bleeding fragments; the grenade sets fire to the straw heap where the poor wounded has dragged himself, to lie forsaken for many hours, forsaken perhaps until dead. It doesn't help to think about it, and yet people do think about it even far away in the peaceful town at home. There the drummer and his wife thought of it, for, of course, Peter was in the war.

It was the day of battle; the sun was not yet up, but it was morning. After a sleepless night spent in talking about their boy, the drummer and his wife had finally fallen asleep, for they knew that wherever he was God's hand was protecting him. And the father dreamed that the war was over, that the soldiers came home, and Peter was wearing a silver cross on his breast; but the mother dreamed that she walked into the church and looked at the painted pictures and the carved angels with the gilded hair and that her own dear boy, her heart's Golden Treasure, stood among the angels clad in white, and sang as sweetly as surely only the angels can sing, and was carried up into the sunshine with them, nodding tenderly to his mother.

"My Golden Treasure!" she cried, and awoke in the same instant. "Now I know that our Lord has taken him!" Then she folded her hands, leaned her head against the cotton bed curtain, and wept. "Where has he found rest? In the wide common grave they dig for so many of the brave dead, or in the deep waters of the marsh? No one will know his grave! No holy words will be read over it!" Silently the Lord's Prayer passed over her lips; her head drooped in fatigue, and she fell asleep.

Days pass by, in wakeful hours and in dreams.

It was toward evening, and a rainbow arched over the battlefield; it touched the edge of the wood and the deep marsh. There is an old saying that where the rainbow touches the earth a treasure lies buried, a golden treasure. And here was one. No one thought about the little drummer except his mother, and that's why she had dreamed of him. Not a hair of his head had been injured, not a single golden hair. "Dr-rum-a-lum, dr-rum-a-lum! There he is, there he is!" would the drum have said, and his mother would have sung, had she seen or dreamed this.

With song and hurrah, and wearing the green leaves of victory, the regiment marched home, when the war was over and peace had come. The regimental dog jumped and ran in wide circles, as though trying to make the journey three times longer.

Days passed and weeks passed, and at last Peter entered his parents' room; he was as brown as a hermit, his eyes bright, and his face as radiant as the sunshine. His mother held him in her arms and kissed his lips, his eyes, his red hair. She had her boy home again; he had no silver decoration on his breast, as his father had dreamed, but then he was unharmed, which his mother had not dreamed. And there was great joy; they laughed and they wept. And Peter embraced the old fire drum. "The old thing is still standing here!" he said. And his father beat a tattoo on it. "There's as much fuss as though there were a big fire in town!" said the drum to itself. "Fire in the roof, fire in the hearts! Golden Treasure! Dr-rum, dr-rum, dr-rum!"

And then? Yes, what then? Just ask the state musician. "Peter has outgrown the drum," he said. "He'll be a bigger man than I." And remember he was the son of a royal servant! But what had taken him a lifetime to learn, Peter had learned in half a year. There was something cheerful about him; his eyes sparkled, and his hair shone - that cannot be denied.

"He ought to dye his hair," said their next-door neighbor. "The policeman's daughter did, and look what it did for her; she was engaged at once!"

"Yes, but a little later her hair turned as green as duckweed, and she has to dye it again and again!"

"Well, she can afford to," said the neighbor woman, "and so can Peter. Doesn't he go into the best houses, even the mayor's, to teach Miss Lotte the harpsichord?"

Yes, play he could, play right out of his heart, the most charming pieces that had never been written down in notes. He played on moonlit nights and stormy ones as well. It was difficult to put up with, said the neighbors and the fire drum. He played until his thoughts soared strongly upward, and great plans for the future took shape before him. Fame!

The mayor's daughter, Lotte, sat at the harpsichord, and as her delicate fingers danced over the chords they vibrated in Peter's heart, until it seemed as if it were growing too big for his body. This happened not once, but many times, until one day he seized her delicate hand, kissed it, and gazed into her large brown eyes. Our Lord knows what he said; we others may guess it. Lotte blushed crimson, face and neck, and answered not a word, and just then they were interrupted by strangers, among them the councilor's son, with his high, smooth forehead. But Peter did not go, and Lotte's kindest glances were for him. At home that evening he talked of going abroad and of the golden treasure that his violin would bring him. Fame! "Dr-rum-a-lum! Dr-rum-a-lum! Dr-rum-a-lum!" said the fire drum. "Now something is surely wrong with Peter; I think the house must be on fire!"

The mother went to market the next day. "Have you heard the news, Peter?" she said, when she returned. "Such wonderful news! The mayor's daughter, Lotte, was betrothed to the councilor's son; it happened last evening!"

"No!" said Peter, and sprang up from his chair. But his mother said yes; she had learned it from the barber's wife, and the barber had it from the lips of the mayor himself. And Peter grew as pale as death and sat down again.

"Lord God! How do you feel?" said his mother.

"Fine, fine. Just let me alone!" he said, but the tears were rolling down his cheeks.

"My sweet child! My Golden Treasure!" said the mother, and cried. But the fire drum grumbled to itself, "Lotte is dead! Lotte is dead! Yes, that song is over now!"

The song was not over; it still had many unsung verses, long verses, the most beautiful, about a life's golden treasure. "What a fuss she makes!" said the next-door neighbor. The whole world has to read the letters she gets from her Golden Treasure, and hear what the newspapers say about him and his violin playing. He sends her money, too, for she needs that, now that she's a widow!"

"He plays before kings and emperors," said the state musician. "That was never my good luck, but at least he was my pupil, and he hasn't forgotten his old master."

"My husband dreamed," said his mother, "that Peter came home from the war with a silver cross on his chest. Well, he does wear a cross now, but it's not a decoration earned in the war; it's an order of knighthood. If his father had only lived to see it!"

"Famous!" said the fire drum, and everybody in his home town said the same. Peter, the red-haired boy of the drummer - Peter, whom they had seen wearing wooden shoes as a youngster, and seen as a drummer boy playing at dances - was now famous.

"He played to us before he played before the kings," said the mayor's wife. "Once upon a time he was crazy about our Lotte; he always aimed high! How my husband laughed when he learned that nonsense! Now Lotte is a councilor's wife."

Yes, there was a golden treasure hidden in the heart and soul of the poor child who as a little drummer boy had beaten "Forward!" to troops supposed to retreat; in his breast was a golden treasure indeed, the gift of music. It resounded from his violin as if an organ were inside, as if all the elves of Midsummer Eve danced along its strings, and one could hear the song of the throstle and the human voice together; his playing enraptured people's hearts, and carried his name throughout all lands, like a great fire, a fire of inspiration. "And he's so handsome, too!" said the young ladies and the old ones as well. Yes, the oldest lady bought herself an album for the locks of celebrities, just so she could beg for a tress from the young violinist's abundant and beautiful hair - a treasure, a golden treasure.

And the son returned to the drummer's humble dwelling, as handsome as a prince, happier than a king, his eyes bright, his face like sunshine. He held his mother in his arms, and she kissed his warm mouth and wept as happily as one can weep with joy. He greeted every old piece of furniture in the room, the chest of drawers with the teacups and flower vases on it and the little cot where he had slept as a child. But he dragged the old fire drum into the middle of the room and said, both to his mother and to the drum, "Father would have beaten a welcome on you today; now I must do it instead!"

So he thundered a regular tempest on the drum, and the old drum felt itself so honored that the skin of the drumhead burst.

"He certainly has a fine fist!" said the drum. "Now I'll always have a souvenir of him. I expect that his mother, too, will burst from joy over her Golden Treasure!"

That's the story of Golden Treasure.

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Story DNA

Moral

True worth and talent, though sometimes unrecognized or misunderstood, will ultimately shine through and bring lasting fulfillment and fame.

Plot Summary

A drummer's wife names her red-haired son 'Golden Treasure,' a name mocked by the town. Despite early musical talent, Peter initially seeks a military career, accidentally leading his regiment to victory as a drummer boy. He returns home safely, then dedicates himself to music, falling in love with the mayor's daughter, Lotte. Heartbroken when Lotte marries another, Peter leaves to pursue his violin career, achieving international fame and knighthood. He eventually returns home a celebrated artist, reuniting with his proud mother and symbolically breaking the old drum, which finally acknowledges his true 'golden treasure'.

Themes

perseverancetrue value vs. superficialityartistic talentmother's love

Emotional Arc

misunderstanding to recognition, struggle to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: lush
Techniques: personification (the drum), repetition of key phrases (Golden Treasure, Dr-rum-a-lum), juxtaposition of perspectives

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs society
Ending: happy
Magic: personification of the fire drum (speaking, having thoughts and opinions)
Peter's golden-red hair (symbol of his unique value, initially mocked, later celebrated)The fire drum (represents public opinion, gossip, and eventually, recognition)The violin (Peter's true talent and path to fame)The rainbow (traditional symbol of treasure, here representing Peter's return and success)

Cultural Context

Origin: Danish
Era: 19th century

Reflects societal values and opportunities in 19th-century Denmark, where military service and artistic achievement could lead to social mobility, and public opinion (like the 'fire drum') held sway.

Plot Beats (12)

  1. A drummer's wife, inspired by church angels and the setting sun, wishes her newborn son, Peter, to be bright and calls him 'Golden Treasure' due to his golden-red hair.
  2. The town and the personified 'fire drum' mock Peter's red hair, calling him 'Red-top' or 'Fire cat'.
  3. Peter shows early musical talent, learning violin from the state musician, but initially dreams of being a soldier.
  4. War breaks out, and Peter joins as a drummer boy, displaying courage and good humor despite hardships.
  5. During a battle, Peter mistakenly beats 'forward' instead of 'retreat', leading his regiment to an unexpected victory.
  6. Peter's mother dreams of his death, but he returns home from the war unharmed, bringing immense relief and joy to his parents.
  7. Peter's musical talent flourishes, surpassing his mentor; he teaches the mayor's daughter, Lotte, and falls in love with her.
  8. Peter is heartbroken when Lotte is betrothed to the councilor's son, prompting him to leave home to pursue his musical career abroad.
  9. Peter achieves great fame as a violinist, playing for kings and emperors, and earns an order of knighthood.
  10. Peter's mother proudly shares news of his success, receiving money and newspaper clippings from him.
  11. Peter returns to his humble home, a celebrated and handsome artist, reuniting joyfully with his mother.
  12. He embraces the old fire drum, playing it so forcefully that its skin bursts, symbolizing his triumph and the drum's ultimate recognition of his 'golden treasure'.

Characters

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Peter

human child male

Red hair, initially called 'golden' by his mother

Attire: Simple clothes as a child, drummer boy uniform, later fine clothes befitting a famous musician

Fiery red hair

Lively, high-spirited, courageous, good-humored, talented

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Drummer's Wife

human adult female

No specific details given

Attire: Typical Danish peasant dress

Kissing her son's red hair

Loving, devoted, proud, sentimental

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The Drummer

human adult male

No specific details given

Attire: Drummer's uniform

Beating his drum enthusiastically

Proud, somewhat boastful, supportive

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The Fire Drum

object ageless non-human

Old, worn drum

Cracked drumhead

Cynical, skeptical, gossipy

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Lotte

human young adult female

Delicate hands

Attire: Fine dresses befitting the mayor's daughter

Blushing crimson

Kind, gentle, demure

Locations

Church interior

indoor

New altar with painted pictures and carved angels, painted and gilded. Angels with hair shining like gold and sunshine.

Mood: reverent, inspiring

The drummer's wife sees the angels and wishes her child to be like them.

altar painted pictures carved angels gold sunshine

Drummer's Home

indoor

A humble dwelling with a chest of drawers, teacups, flower vases, and a little cot.

Mood: joyful, celebratory, later nostalgic

Peter is born and celebrated; Peter returns home as a famous musician.

fire drum chest of drawers teacups flower vases cot

Clayey Embankment along the Hollow Road

outdoor spring

A road with a clay embankment where people scratch their names.

Mood: fleeting, impermanent

The drummer scratches his and his son's name, highlighting the theme of fame.

clay embankment road names scratched in clay swallows' nests

Battlefield

outdoor morning cold, foggy

Foggy morning with heavy fog from gunpowder. Bullets and grenades flying overhead.

Mood: chaotic, dangerous

Peter experiences war as a drummer boy.

fog gunpowder bullets grenades regimental dog