The Races

by Hans Christian Andersen · from Collected Fairy Tales

fairy tale satirical satirical Ages 8-14 1219 words 6 min read
Cover: The Races

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 260 words 2 min Canon 100/100

The prizes for being fast were given out today. There was a big prize. There was a small prize too.

"I got the first prize," said Hare. "That is fair. But Snail got the second prize. This makes me feel bad. I am very fast. Snail is very slow. How can Snail win a prize?"

"No," said the Fence-rail. "Snail worked hard. He went slow. But he kept going. He walked with his house. This was good. So he got a prize. He tried his very best."

"I should have the first prize," said Snail. "Not the second. I worked very hard. I ran with all my might. I got hurt doing it. Hare just ran fast. He did not try like me. I deserve the first prize."

"I am a judge," said the Boundary Post. "I give prizes. I use the alphabet. H is for Hare. Hare got the first prize. S is for Snail. Snail got the second prize. I count letters. It is my rule."

"I am a judge too," said the Mule. "I would vote for me. But I voted for Hare. I like Hare's long ears. They are very nice. The prize is good for Hare. It helps him a lot. I think about that."

"The first prize is special," said the Mule. "It is free entry to a cabbage garden. Hare loves cabbage. I chose this prize for him. It helps him very much. Snail is now a judge too. He will help with prizes. We make good plans. We do a good job."

Original Story 1219 words · 6 min read

The races

A fairy tale by Hans Christian Andersen

A prize, or rather two prizes, a great one and a small one, had been awarded for the greatest swiftness in running,– not in a single race, but for the whole year.

"I obtained the first prize," said the hare. "Justice must still be carried out, even when one has relations and good friends among the prize committee; but that the snail should have received the second prize, I consider almost an insult to myself"

"No," said the fence-rail, who had been a witness at the distribution of prizes; "there should be some consideration for industry and perseverance. I have heard many respectable people say so, and I can quite understand it. The snail certainly took half a year to get over the threshold of the door; but he injured himself, and broke his collar-bone by the haste he made. He gave himself up entirely to the race, and ran with his house on his back, which was all, of course, very praiseworthy; and therefore he obtained the second prize."

"I think I ought to have had some consideration too," said the swallow. "I should imagine no one can be swifter in soaring and flight than I am; and how far I have been! far, far away."

"Yes, that is your misfortune," said the fence-rail; "you are so fickle, so unsettled; you must always be travelling about into foreign lands when the cold commences here. You have no love of fatherland in you. There can be no consideration for you."

"But now, if I have been lying the whole winter in the moor," said the swallow, "and suppose I slept the whole time, would that be taken into account?"

"Bring a certificate from the old moor-hen," said he, "that you have slept away half your time in fatherland; then you will be treated with some consideration."

"I deserved the first prize, and not the second," said the snail. "I know so much, at least, that the hare only ran from cowardice, and because he thought there was danger in delay. I, on the other hand, made running the business of my life, and have become a cripple in the service. If any one had a first prize, it ought to have been myself. But I do not understand chattering and boasting; on the contrary, I despise it." And the snail spat at them with contempt.

"I am able to affirm with word of oath, that each prize– at least, those for which I voted– was given with just and proper consideration," said the old boundary post in the wood, who was a member of the committee of judges. "I always act with due order, consideration, and calculation. Seven times have I already had the honor to be present at the distribution of the prizes, and to vote; but to-day is the first time I have been able to carry out my will. I always reckon the first prize by going through the alphabet from the beginning, and the second by going through from the end. Be so kind as to give me your attention, and I will explain to you how I reckon from the beginning. The eighth letter from A is H, and there we have H for hare; therefore I awarded to the hare the first prize. The eighth letter from the end of the alphabet is S, and therefore the snail received the second prize. Next year, the letter I will have its turn for the first prize, and the letter R for the second."

"I should really have voted for myself," said the mule, "if I had not been one of the judges on the committee. Not only the rapidity with which advance is made, but every other quality should have due consideration; as, for instance, how much weight a candidate is able to draw; but I have not brought this quality forward now, nor the sagacity of the hare in his flight, nor the cunning with which he suddenly springs aside and doubles, to lead people on a false track, thinking he has concealed himself. No; there is something else on which more stress should be laid, and which ought not be left unnoticed. I mean that which mankind call the beautiful. It is on the beautiful that I particularly fix my eyes. I observed the well-grown ears of the hare; it is a pleasure to me to observe how long they are. It seemed as if I saw myself again in the days of my childhood; and so I voted for the hare."

"Buz," said the fly; "there, I'm not going to make a long speech; but I wish to say something about hares. I have really overtaken more than one hare, when I have been seated on the engine in front of a railway train. I often do so. One can then so easily judge of one's own swiftness. Not long ago, I crushed the hind legs of a young hare. He had been running a long time before the engine; he had no idea that I was travelling there. At last he had to stop in his career, and the engine ran over his hind legs, and crushed them; for I set upon it. I left him lying there, and rode on farther. I call that conquering him; but I do not want the prize."

"It really seems to me," thought the wild rose, though she did not express her opinion aloud– it is not in her nature to do so,– though it would have been quite as well if she had; "it certainly seems to me that the sunbeam ought to have had the honor of receiving the first prize. The sunbeam flies in a few minutes along the immeasurable path from the sun to us. It arrives in such strength, that all nature awakes to loveliness and beauty; we roses blush and exhale fragrance in its presence. Our worshipful judges don't appear to have noticed this at all. Were I the sunbeam, I would give each one of them a sun stroke; but that would only make them mad, and they are mad enough already. I only hope," continued the rose, "that peace may reign in the wood. It is glorious to bloom, to be fragrant, and to live; to live in story and in song. The sunbeam will outlive us all."

"What is the first prize?" asked the earthworm, who had overslept the time, and only now came up.

"It contains a free admission to a cabbage-garden," replied the mule. "I proposed that as one of the prizes. The hare most decidedly must have it; and I, as an active and thoughtful member of the committee, took especial care that the prize should be one of advantage to him; so now he is provided for. The snail can now sit on the fence, and lick up moss and sunshine. He has also been appointed one of the first judges of swiftness in racing. It is worth much to know that one of the numbers is a man of talent in the thing men call a 'committee.' I must say I expect much in the future; we have already made such a good beginning."

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Story DNA

Moral

Those in power often make arbitrary or self-serving decisions, and true merit may go unrecognized.

Plot Summary

After prizes for swiftness are awarded, the Hare complains about the Snail's second prize. Various animals and objects, including judges, offer their subjective and often absurd justifications for the awards, revealing arbitrary criteria like alphabetical order, superficial aesthetics, or self-serving utility. The Wild Rose silently observes that the Sunbeam, the truly swiftest, is overlooked. The story concludes with the Mule proudly detailing the practical, self-benefiting nature of the prizes and the Snail's new, equally arbitrary, role as a judge, highlighting the pervasive corruption of the system.

Themes

injusticesubjectivity of judgmentself-importancebureaucracy

Emotional Arc

frustration to resignation

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: personification, irony, dialogue-driven exposition

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs society
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking animals, talking inanimate objects (fence-rail, boundary post, wild rose)
the prizes (symbolizing recognition and reward)the committee (symbolizing authority and judgment)the various animals/objects (representing different societal perspectives or types)

Cultural Context

Origin: Danish
Era: 19th century

Andersen often used animal fables to satirize human society and institutions, reflecting common societal critiques of his time regarding bureaucracy, self-importance, and superficial judgment.

Plot Beats (11)

  1. Prizes for swiftness (first and second) have been awarded for the year.
  2. The Hare complains about the Snail receiving the second prize, feeling insulted.
  3. The Fence-rail defends the Snail's prize, citing perseverance despite slow progress, and dismisses the Swallow's claim due to its lack of 'fatherland' loyalty.
  4. The Swallow questions if sleeping through winter in its homeland would count as loyalty.
  5. The Snail asserts he deserved the first prize for his dedicated effort, contrasting it with the Hare's 'cowardice'.
  6. The Boundary Post, a judge, explains his arbitrary method of awarding prizes based on the alphabetical position of the animal's name.
  7. The Mule, another judge, admits he would have voted for himself and explains his vote for the Hare was based on superficial aesthetics (ears) and the practical benefit of the prize.
  8. The Fly boasts about 'overtaking' and 'conquering' a hare by being on a train that ran it over, questioning the definition of swiftness.
  9. The Wild Rose silently muses that the Sunbeam truly deserved the first prize for its speed and life-giving power, criticizing the judges' blindness.
  10. The Earthworm, having overslept, asks what the first prize is.
  11. The Mule explains the first prize is free admission to a cabbage-garden, specifically chosen to benefit the Hare, and the Snail has been made a judge, highlighting the self-serving nature of the committee.

Characters

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Hare

animal adult male

Well-grown ears, swift

Long, prominent ears

Proud, fast, cowardly

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Snail

animal adult unknown

Carries his house on his back, injured collar-bone

Attire: Shell house

House on its back

Industrious, persevering, contemptuous

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Fence-rail

object ageless unknown

Wooden rail

Weathered wooden texture

Judgmental, opinionated, traditional

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Swallow

animal adult unknown

Swift in soaring and flight

Forked tail

Fickle, unsettled, loves travel

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Boundary Post

object elderly unknown

Old, in the wood

Weathered wood with carved markings

Orderly, calculating, self-important

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Mule

animal adult male

Able to draw much weight

Large, expressive eyes

Judgmental, verbose, values beauty

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Fly

animal adult unknown

Small, fast

Large compound eyes

Boastful, cruel, insignificant

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Wild Rose

plant adult female

Blooms, fragrant

Attire: Petals

Delicate pink petals

Observant, thoughtful, peaceful

Locations

Fence-rail

outdoor

A weathered wooden fence-rail standing as a witness to the prize distribution.

Mood: Neutral, observant

Serves as a commentator on the fairness and rationale behind the prize distribution.

wooden rail splintered wood moss fence posts

Moor

outdoor Cold, possibly snowy or icy during winter

A boggy, open area where the swallow claims to have spent the winter sleeping.

Mood: Desolate, quiet

The swallow tries to use this location as proof of his dedication to the fatherland.

peat heather standing water moor-hen

Wood

outdoor

A forest setting where the boundary post resides and the prize committee convenes.

Mood: Peaceful, bureaucratic

The location of the prize distribution and the boundary post's explanation of his voting method.

trees undergrowth boundary post sunbeams

Cabbage-garden

outdoor

A garden filled with cabbages, awarded as the first prize.

Mood: Fertile, rewarding

The ultimate reward for the hare's swiftness.

cabbages garden soil vegetable patch fence