GOLDY
by Anthony R. Montalba · from Fairy Tales From All Nations
Adapted Version
Goldy lived in a big, green forest. He had hair like sunshine!
Goldy lived in a big forest. He lived with his father and mother. He had five brothers. Goldy was the youngest. He was strong and tall.
Goldy walked first in the forest. His brothers walked behind him. He held a stick. Goldy made them feel safe. They liked to follow Goldy.
One night, Goldy played with his brothers. A sparkling lady came. She shone like the moon. She sang a special song. It said: "White bird, gold rose, king's crown."
It got dark fast. Goldy felt a little scared. He did not see his brothers. Goldy got lost in the big forest. He was all alone now.
Goldy walked for a long time. He ate berries from bushes. He drank water from drops. He looked for his home. One day, he saw a green meadow.
A Bird Man saw Goldy. He threw a net. It caught Goldy. The Bird Man laughed. "Stay with me," he said. "Learn to catch birds."
Goldy caught a white bird. The Bird Man saw it. He got very angry. "You are bad!" he shouted. He pushed Goldy away. Goldy left the meadow.
Goldy went back to the forest. He walked for a long time. He saw a pretty garden. Many bright flowers grew there.
A Garden Man saw Goldy. He liked Goldy's hair. "Come work for me," he said. "Get a wild rose stem." Goldy went.
Goldy came back with a rose bush. It had gold roses. The Garden Man got very angry. "You are bad!" he shouted. He pushed Goldy away. Goldy left the garden.
Goldy went back to the forest. He walked for a long time. He was not sad. He walked to the big sea.
Fishermen were on the shore. They saw Goldy. "Come with us," they said. Goldy got into their boat. They went out to sea.
The Wise Fisherman gave Goldy a net. Goldy put it in the water. He pulled it up. A gold crown was in it! It shone bright.
The Wise Fisherman knew the crown. "It is a king's crown!" he said. "An old story said this." Goldy was king.
Everyone heard about King Goldy. He stood on the boat. The gold crown was on his head. He looked at the sunset. Goldy was happy. He was a special king.
Original Story
GOLDY.
[From Justinus Kerner.]
any a long year ago there lived in a great forest a poor herdsman, who had built himself a log cabin in the midst of it, where he dwelt with his wife and his six children, all of whom were boys. There was a draw-well by the house, and a little garden, and when their father was looking after the cattle the children carried out to him a cool draught from the well, or a dish of vegetables from the garden.
The youngest of the boys was called by his parents Goldy, for his locks were like gold, and although the youngest he was stronger and taller than all his brothers. When the children went out into the fields, Goldy always went first with a branch of a tree in his hand, and no otherwise would the other children go, for each feared lest some adventure should befall him; but when Goldy led them they followed cheerfully, one behind the other, through even the darkest thicket, although the moon might have already risen over the mountains.
One evening, on their return from their father, the children had amused themselves by playing in the wood, and Goldy especially had so heated himself in their games, that he was as rosy as the sky at sun-set.
"Let us return," said the eldest, "it seems growing dark."
"See," said the second, "there is the moon!"
At that moment a light appeared through the dark fir-trees, and a female form, shining like the moon, seated herself on the mossy stone, and span, with a crystal distaff, a fine thread, nodding her head towards Goldy, singing:—
"The snow-white finch, the gold rose, for thee;
The king's crown lies in the lap of the sea!"
She was about to continue her song when the thread broke, and she was instantly extinguished like the flame of a candle. It being now quite dark, terror seized the children, and they ran about crying piteously, one here, and another there, over rock and pit, till they lost each other.
Many a day and night did Goldy wander in the thick forest, but could find neither his brothers nor his father's hut, nor yet the trace of a human foot, for the forest had become more dense; one hill seemed to rise above another, and pit after pit intercepted his path.
The blackberries, that grew in profusion, satisfied his hunger and slaked his thirst, otherwise he must have perished miserably. At last, on the third day—some say it was not until the sixth or seventh—the forest became less and less dense, and at last he got out of it, and found himself in a lovely green meadow.
Then his heart grew light, and he inhaled the pure fresh air.
Nets were spread over the meadow, for a bird-catcher lived there, who caught the birds which flew out of the wood, and carried them into the city for sale.
"That is just such a boy as I want," thought the bird-catcher, when he saw Goldy, who stood in the meadow close to the net, gazing with longing eyes into the blue sky; and then in jest he drew his net, and imprisoned within it the astonished boy, who could not comprehend what had befallen him. "That's the way we catch the birds that come out of the wood," said the bird-catcher, laughing heartily. "Your red feathers please me right well. So I have caught you, have I, my little fox? You had better stay with me, and I will teach you how to catch birds!"
Goldy was well content; he thought he should lead a merry life amongst the birds, especially as he abandoned all hope of again finding his father's hut.
"Let us see how much you have learnt," said the bird-catcher to him, some days after. Goldy drew the net, and caught a snow-white chaffinch.
"Confound you and this white chaffinch!" screamed the bird-catcher; "you are in league with the evil one!" and he drove him roughly from the meadow, at the same time treading under his feet, the white chaffinch which Goldy had handed over to him.
Goldy could not conceive what the bird-catcher meant; he returned sadly, but yet not despairingly, to the forest, with the intention of renewing his endeavours to find his father's hut. Day and night he wandered about, climbing over fragments of rock and old fallen trees, and often stumbled and fell over the old black roots which protruded in all directions from out of the ground.
On the third day, however, the forest once more became somewhat clearer, and he issued from it into a beautiful bright garden, full of the most delightful flowers, and as he had never before seen such he stood gazing full of admiration. The gardener no sooner perceived him—for Goldy stood beneath the sunflowers, and his locks glistened in the sunshine just like one of them—than he exclaimed: "Ha! he is just such a boy as I want!" and the garden-gate closed directly. Goldy was very well satisfied, for he thought he should lead a gay life amongst the flowers, and he had again lost the hope of getting back to his father's cottage.
"Off with you to the forest!" said the gardener to him one morning, "and fetch me the stem of a wild rose, that I may engraft cultivated roses on it."
Goldy went and returned with a rose-bush bearing the most beautiful golden-coloured roses imaginable, which looked exactly as if they were the work of the most skilful of goldsmiths, and prepared to adorn a monarch's table.
"Confound you, with these golden roses!" screamed the gardener; "you are in league with the evil one!" and he drove Goldy roughly out of the garden, as with plenty of abuse he trampled the golden roses on the ground.
Goldy knew not what the gardener could mean; but he went calmly back into the forest, and again set himself to seek after his father's cabin.
He walked on day and night, from tree to tree, from rock to rock. On the third day, the forest again became clearer and clearer, and he came to the shore of the blue sea. It lay before him without a boundary; the sun mirrored itself in the crystal surface, which glistened like liquid gold, and gay vessels with far-floating streamers floated on the waves. Some fishermen sat in a pretty bark on the shore, into which Goldy entered, and gazed with wonder out into the bright distance.
"We stand in need of just such a boy," said the fisherman, and off they pushed into the sea. Goldy was well pleased to go with them, for he thought it must be a golden life there amongst the bright waves, and he had quite lost all hope of again finding his father's hut.
The fishermen cast their nets, but took nothing.
"Let us see if you will have better luck," said an old fisherman with silver hair, addressing Goldy. With unskilful hands he let down the net into the deep, drew it up, and lo! he brought up in it—a crown of pure gold.
"Triumph!" cried the ancient fisherman, at the same time throwing himself at Goldy's feet. "I hail thee as our king! A hundred years ago, the last of our kings, having no heir, when he was about to die, cast his crown into the sea, and until the fortunate being destined by fate, should again draw up the crown from the deep, the throne, without an occupant, was to remain wrapt in gloom."
"Hail to our king!" cried all the fishermen, and they placed the crown on the boy's head. The tidings of Goldy and of the regained crown, resounded from vessel to vessel, and across the sea far into the land. The golden surface was soon crowded with gay barks and ships, adorned with festoons of flowers and branches; they all saluted with loud acclamations of joy the vessel in which was the Boy-king. He stood with the bright crown upon his head, at the prow of the vessel, and gazed calmly on the sun as it sank into the sea, whilst his golden locks waved in the refreshing evening breeze.
Story DNA
Plot Summary
Goldy, a strong boy with golden hair, lives with his family in a forest. One evening, a mysterious figure sings a prophecy to him before vanishing, causing Goldy to get lost. He is successively taken in by a bird-catcher and a gardener, but each time, his innocent actions (catching a snow-white finch, finding golden roses) are misinterpreted as evil, leading to his expulsion. Finally, Goldy reaches the sea and joins some fishermen. When he casts a net, he retrieves a golden crown, fulfilling an ancient prophecy and revealing him as the destined king, bringing joy and celebration.
Themes
Emotional Arc
fear to wonder to acceptance to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Justinus Kerner was a German poet and physician, known for his interest in mysticism and the supernatural, which might influence the story's tone and elements.
Plot Beats (15)
- A poor herdsman lives in a forest cabin with his wife and six sons, the youngest and strongest being Goldy.
- Goldy always leads his brothers through the forest, making them feel safe.
- One evening, after playing, the children see a shining female figure who sings a prophecy to Goldy about a snow-white finch, a gold rose, and a king's crown in the sea, before vanishing.
- Terrified by the sudden darkness and the figure's disappearance, the children scatter and get lost.
- Goldy wanders alone in the dense forest for days, surviving on berries, until he finds a meadow.
- A bird-catcher sees Goldy, 'catches' him with a net, and invites him to stay and learn his trade.
- Goldy catches a snow-white chaffinch, which infuriates the bird-catcher, who accuses Goldy of evil and drives him away.
- Goldy returns to the forest, wanders for days, and emerges into a beautiful garden.
- A gardener sees Goldy, takes him in, and asks him to fetch a wild rose stem from the forest.
- Goldy returns with a bush bearing magnificent golden roses, which enrages the gardener, who also accuses him of evil and drives him away.
- Goldy calmly returns to the forest, wanders for days, and eventually reaches the seashore.
- Fishermen see Goldy, take him into their boat, and invite him to join them.
- Goldy casts a net into the sea and pulls up a pure golden crown.
- An old fisherman recognizes the crown as that of a long-lost king and hails Goldy as the new monarch, fulfilling a prophecy.
- News of the Boy-king spreads, and Goldy stands crowned at the prow of the vessel, gazing at the sunset, his destiny revealed.
Characters
Goldy ★ protagonist
Taller and stronger than his older brothers, with a healthy, rosy complexion, especially after playing, like the sky at sunset. He is sturdy and resilient, able to wander the forest for days.
Attire: Simple, practical clothing suitable for a poor herdsman's son in a forest, likely made of rough linen or wool in muted, natural tones. Perhaps a tunic and trousers, well-worn.
Wants: Initially, to find his way back to his father's hut and family. Later, to find a place where he belongs and can be useful.
Flaw: Naivety and a lack of understanding of his own unique nature and the 'evil' others perceive in his magical touch. He easily gives up hope of returning home when presented with new opportunities.
Transforms from a lost child seeking his way home into a fated king, accepting his destiny on the sea. He learns that his unique qualities, initially rejected by others, are ultimately his greatest assets.
Brave, resilient, calm, observant, and somewhat naive. He faces adversity without despair and adapts to new situations readily, though he doesn't fully grasp the implications of his unique abilities.
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A young boy, around 8-10 years old, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a sturdy build, fair skin with rosy cheeks, and a round, innocent face. His hair is long, wavy, and the color of pure gold, reaching his shoulders. He wears a simple, well-worn tunic of natural undyed linen and practical brown trousers. His expression is calm and observant, with a hint of wonder. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Herdsman ○ minor
A man accustomed to outdoor life, likely with a weathered face and strong build from working with cattle in the forest.
Attire: Practical, durable clothing made of coarse fabrics like wool or linen, suitable for a poor herdsman. Earth tones, perhaps a simple tunic and trousers.
Wants: To care for his family and livestock.
Flaw: Unspecified.
Static character; his role is to establish Goldy's origin.
Hardworking, providing for his large family.
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An adult man, around 40-50 years old, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a sturdy, muscular build, with a weathered, kind face and short, practical brown hair. He wears a simple, rough-spun brown tunic, dark trousers, and sturdy leather boots. He holds a wooden staff in his right hand. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Forest Spirit / Moon-like Woman ◆ supporting
A luminous, ethereal female form, shining like the moon. Her presence is fleeting and magical.
Attire: Flowing, luminous garments that seem to be made of light, shining like the moon itself. No specific fabric, but an ethereal, glowing quality.
Wants: To deliver a prophecy or warning to Goldy.
Flaw: Her thread breaking causes her to vanish, indicating a fragile connection to the physical world or her magic.
Static character; she appears once to set events in motion.
Mysterious, prophetic, and ephemeral. She appears to deliver a cryptic message and then vanishes.
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An ethereal female figure, appearing ageless, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She glows with a soft, silvery luminescence, like moonlight. Her form is graceful and flowing, with long, shimmering white hair that seems to be made of light. Her eyes are bright and serene. She wears a flowing gown of translucent, moon-white fabric that seems to ripple like water. She holds a delicate, clear crystal distaff in her hands. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Bird-catcher ⚔ antagonist
A man who works outdoors, likely lean and agile from setting nets and pursuing birds. His face might be cunning or jovial, but quickly turns to anger.
Attire: Practical, simple clothing suitable for a bird-catcher, likely made of coarse, earth-toned fabrics to blend into the environment. Perhaps a tunic and trousers, with a satchel for birds.
Wants: To catch birds for sale and find a useful assistant.
Flaw: Superstition and a quick temper, which cause him to reject Goldy's unique abilities.
Static character; serves as an obstacle for Goldy.
Cunning, opportunistic, superstitious, and quick to anger. He is initially amused by Goldy but becomes violently superstitious when Goldy's magic manifests.
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An adult man, around 30-40 years old, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a lean, wiry build, with a cunning expression and sharp, dark eyes. His face is weathered, and he has short, dark, messy hair. He wears a practical, patched tunic of drab green linen, dark brown trousers, and worn leather boots. He holds a rolled-up bird-catching net in one hand. His expression is a mix of amusement and suspicion. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Gardener ⚔ antagonist
A man who works with plants, likely with strong hands and a sun-kissed complexion. His demeanor is initially welcoming but quickly turns to rage.
Attire: Practical, sturdy clothing suitable for a gardener, likely made of linen or canvas, possibly with an apron. Earthy or green tones.
Wants: To cultivate beautiful flowers and find a useful assistant.
Flaw: Superstition and a quick temper, leading him to destroy valuable items and reject Goldy.
Static character; serves as an obstacle for Goldy.
Observant, opportunistic, superstitious, and prone to violent outbursts. Like the bird-catcher, he is initially pleased with Goldy but rejects him out of fear and superstition.
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An adult man, around 40-50 years old, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a sturdy build, with a sun-kissed, kind face that is currently contorted in anger. His hands are strong and calloused. He has short, practical brown hair. He wears a simple, practical linen tunic in a muted green color, sturdy brown trousers, and a canvas apron tied at his waist. He holds a small gardening trowel in one hand. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Old Fisherman ◆ supporting
An old man with silver hair, likely weathered from a life at sea. His movements are unskilful with the net, but his reaction to the crown is one of profound reverence.
Attire: Practical, sturdy clothing typical of a fisherman, likely made of rough wool or canvas, perhaps a knitted cap. Dark, functional colors.
Wants: To catch fish and, implicitly, to witness the fulfillment of the ancient prophecy.
Flaw: Unskilful hands with the net, indicating his age.
Static character; serves to reveal Goldy's true destiny.
Wise (implied by his knowledge of the prophecy), respectful, and quick to recognize destiny. He is the one who gives Goldy the chance to cast the net.
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An elderly man, around 60-70 years old, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a lean, weathered build, with a kind, wrinkled face and a long, flowing silver beard. His hair is also silver and slightly disheveled. He wears a thick, dark blue wool fisherman's sweater, sturdy canvas trousers, and a knitted dark blue cap. He holds a fishing net loosely in his hands. His expression is one of awe and reverence. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Herdsman's Log Cabin in the Forest
A simple log cabin built in the midst of a great, dense forest. It has a draw-well nearby and a small garden. The forest around it is dark and thick, with fir-trees and mossy stones.
Mood: Initially safe and familiar, later becomes eerie and terrifying due to the apparition.
Goldy and his brothers return from their father, encounter a shining female form who sings a prophecy, and then disappear, leading to the children getting lost.
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A rustic, weathered log cabin nestled deep within a dense, ancient fir forest. A simple wooden draw-well stands to one side, and a small, unkempt garden patch is visible. The forest floor is covered in thick, dark green moss and fallen fir needles. Moonlight filters through the heavy canopy, casting long, deep shadows. A large, moss-covered stone sits near the edge of the clearing. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Bird-catcher's Meadow
A lovely, open green meadow at the edge of the forest. Nets are spread across the grass for catching birds. The sky above is blue and clear.
Mood: Initially hopeful and light-hearted for Goldy, then quickly turns harsh and rejecting.
Goldy emerges from the forest, is 'caught' by the bird-catcher, and later catches a snow-white chaffinch, leading to his expulsion.
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A wide, sun-drenched green meadow stretching towards the edge of a dark, imposing forest. Fine, almost invisible bird-catching nets are subtly strung across the tall, vibrant green grass. The sky above is a brilliant, cloudless blue, suggesting a fresh, clear day. Wildflowers dot the meadow in scattered patches. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Gardener's Beautiful Garden
A beautiful, bright garden full of the most delightful flowers, unlike any Goldy has seen before. Sunflowers are prominent, and there is a garden-gate.
Mood: Initially enchanting and promising, then becomes hostile and rejecting.
Goldy finds this garden, is taken in by the gardener, and later brings back golden-colored roses, leading to his second expulsion.
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A vibrant, meticulously cultivated garden bursting with an array of colorful, delightful flowers under a bright morning sun. Towering sunflowers with large, golden heads dominate one section. The garden is enclosed by a sturdy, ornate garden-gate, possibly wrought iron or carved wood, partially obscured by climbing roses. The air feels fresh and fragrant. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Shore of the Blue Sea
The boundless shore of a vast, blue sea. The sun mirrors itself in the crystal surface, which glistens like liquid gold. Gay vessels with far-floating streamers float on the waves. Fishermen sit in a pretty bark on the shore.
Mood: Majestic, awe-inspiring, and ultimately triumphant.
Goldy arrives at the sea, joins the fishermen, and pulls up the lost golden crown, becoming king.
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A wide, serene shore of a vast, deep blue sea under a setting sun. The water's surface is like polished crystal, reflecting the golden light of the sun, making it glisten like liquid gold. Several traditional fishing barks with colorful, far-floating streamers are either pulled up on the sandy shore or gently bobbing on the calm waves. The horizon stretches endlessly, meeting a sky painted in hues of orange and purple. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.