GUMTREE HOLLOW

by Atha Westbury · from Australian fairy tales

fairy tale moral tale hopeful Ages 8-14 1513 words 7 min read
Cover: GUMTREE HOLLOW

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 360 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once, Charlie was a kind boy. His family was very sad. They had no money. Life was hard for them. They had to leave their home. Their dad was gone.

Mom decided. They would go to a small house. It was far away. The house was old. It was Gumtree Hollow.

Charlie was a kind boy. He drove their cart. The cart had their things. He felt sad. He wanted to help his mom. He wished for a way to help.

Charlie got to Gumtree Hollow. He saw a tiny green man. The man was very small. The man sat on a big tree branch.

The little man said, "Hello, Charlie! I am McKombo. I know you are sad. I want to help you." Charlie listened closely.

McKombo told Charlie, "Dig inside this big tree. Dig, dig, dig!" Charlie looked at the tree. He started to dig.

Charlie dug and dug. His hands worked hard. Soon, he found a heavy metal box. It felt very old.

Charlie opened the box. It was full of shiny gold coins. The coins gleamed brightly. It had paper money. So much money was inside! He was very happy. Charlie's heart felt light.

McKombo said, "Bad people hid this money. Long ago. They never came back for it." McKombo spoke softly.

McKombo said, "Take money to Mom!" Poof! He vanished. Charlie blinked his eyes. McKombo was truly gone.

Charlie told his mom everything. She was very surprised. Mom's eyes grew wide. She saw all the money. She could not believe it.

Mom knew the money was not theirs. She was an honest mom. She wrote a letter to the bank.

A man from the bank came. The man was very kind. He said, "This money was lost. Long ago." He took it back. He thanked Mom for her honesty.

The bank was happy. Mom was honest. They gave her some money. The family could keep their home. They had enough to live. Their worries were gone. Mom smiled brightly. They were happy!

And so, Charlie and Mom were happy. They learned: Honesty brings good surprises. Good deeds bring good things. It was a happy lesson.

Original Story 1513 words · 7 min read

GUMTREE HOLLOW.

Like “Ben Bolt’s” mill, Allan’s farm, situated by the River Torrens, had gone to decay and ruin. It was a flourishing place before the death of Peter Allan, but the farmer had been taken away, and his widow and her three children had to fight out the battle of life unaided. The property had been heavily mortgaged three years previously, and, what with unfavourable seasons and other misfortunes, the widow Allan had not been able to repay principal or interest of the money borrowed, and the creditors therefore gave the farmer’s wife notice to quit.

Fortunately, Mrs. Allan had a brother who had gone to some diggings in New South Wales, and had left in charge of his sister an old hut and a patch of land known as Gumtree Hollow. In the emergency the widow determined to occupy the place until she could find a more suitable home. The Hollow consisted of about two acres of crags and stones, without sufficient soil to grow a potato in, and was distant from the farm about five miles.

On a warm afternoon, three days after the widow had received notice to leave the homestead, little Charlie Allan, the eldest boy, aged twelve, started to the hut at Gumtree Hollow with his mother’s goods and chattels in the spring-cart. It had been arranged that after delivering his load the lad should return for his parent and his brother and sister. Charlie was intelligent and very kind-hearted. He had noticed his mother crying bitterly, and he had followed her into a back room where his father had died, and there putting his little arms about her neck he had tried to soothe her with many assurances that when he became a man he would work for her and buy the place back again.

Old Bob, the pony, didn’t like the road to the hut, but repeatedly turned to retrace his steps every half-mile or so of the journey. Nevertheless, Charlie managed to get him there at last.

In a ravine between a natural cutting of jagged crags stood the old building, overshadowed by a gigantic tree whose wide-open trunk, hollow as a bell, had often afforded shelter to straggling picnic parties. It was a grand, old, hoary gum, knobbed and gnarled with age, and whose spreading branches formed a canopy over the dilapidated hut. One long, fork-like branch projected farther over than the rest, on the extreme end of which something perched, swaying the bough to and fro with an easy motion. Charlie, thinking it was a parrot, took up a stone for a shot; but he dropped the stone again instantly, as a voice from the tree uttered a shrill peal of laughter.

The poor lad’s first thought was to take to his heels and run for it; but the voice called out in a kindly tone, “Hallo! Charlie ’avic, how are ye, Charlie Allan?”

The boy gazed upward in amazement, and beheld a wee, teeny, queer fellow, hardly six inches high, sitting astride the branch, and gazing down with a knowing look at him. The creature’s dress was green; from his shapely shoes to his brimless hat, swallow-tailed coat, breeches, stockings, all were the verdant green colour.

“Who are you?” questioned Charlie, recovering from his surprise.

“Shure I’m an Irishman,” cried the little fellow, at the same time springing to the ground. “A rale paddy, an’ I may tell you that there isn’t a fay or a gnome in South Australia that I can’t leap or swim wid; do’s thee hear that, ’avic?”

He was such a dwarfed miniature of a man, and appeared such an impudent swaggerer—with his chimney-pot hat on one side of his head, and his saucy turned-up nose—that Charlie felt inclined to pick him up and cuff him soundly.

“What is your name?” asked the boy, making a sudden dive at the creature.

“McKombo,” answered the sprite, dodging under Charlie’s legs. “My name is McKombo; but be aisy wid ye now, an’ don’t be after trying to take a mane advantage of me.”

“I’d scorn to do it,” said Charlie, unconsciously clenching his fists. “Who are you; what are you; and what do you want?”

“Be aisy, Charlie. Arrah’, don’t be botherin’ me wid too many questions,” said McKombo. “I’ve tould ye I’m an Irishman. Captain Brophy imported me to the colony in a hat-box twenty years ago.”

“Why, you’re a fairy,” suggested the lad, eyeing his strange companion askance.

“Of course I am,” replied McKombo, “and I may tell you I’ve been waiting all this blessed day to see you.”

“To see me?”

“Thrue for ye, Charlie. I am very well acquainted wid all the bother an’ trouble that’s going on at the farm, an’ I mane to help your mother clane out of it.”

Poor Charlie felt as if he could have hugged McKombo, but the sprite kept his distance and said quietly, “You haven’t such a thing as a spade and a pick among the things in the cart?”

“ ‘HURRAH!’ HE CRIED, TOSSING UP HIS HAT.”

Charlie had, though. Both the pick and the spade he had used many a time at the farm, and he produced them at once; but he looked doubtfully at McKombo as to what he was to do with them or how they could be the means of assisting his mother in her difficulties. It seemed very business-like, however, the way the sprite led Charlie to the hollow trunk of the great gum-tree, and commanded him to dig within a certain circle he at once marked out. The goblin’s promises of certain and speedy benefit gave the boy faith and energy to dig and delve away with might and main until there gaped a large hole within the trunk, which revealed some of the thick roots beneath, also the top of a square tin box, such as lawyers keep their deeds in. The moment McKombo caught sight of the box he began to caper about the sward in antic glee.

“Hurrah!” he cried, tossing up his hat. “There it is, me boy, safe an’ sound, as on the night I saw them murthering scoundrels place it there twenty years ago.”

Poor Charlie stared at the fairy, and wiped the perspiration from his heated face, but he could not comprehend what his companion meant. Acting under McKombo’s directions, young Allan made a lever and got the box out of its bed. It did not appear large, but it was very heavy—so heavy that the boy could hardly lift it; the thick coating of paint on it had preserved it from rusting and decay, and it was fastened with an iron padlock. With one blow of his spade Charlie broke open the lid, when—lo! he saw a heap of dark yellow sovereigns and several parcels of bank-notes within. The sight made him faint and giddy with surprise and delight, so that he could not utter a word.

“Look there, now. See that,” ejaculated the sprite, pointing to the treasure. “One evening, twenty years ago, three men brought that box here and hid it beneath the trunk of this old gum-tree; they went away, but never returned for it. In time a poor woodcutter built his hut beneath the great tree, and I watched him come and go to his daily toil, until he could toil no more and they carried him forth and buried him on the river-bank. Then came your Uncle George, my boy, who purchased the place for ten pounds; but had he known of the riches under his very nose, I’ll go bail he wouldn’t have gone away to dig for gold.”

“Why didn’t you tell Uncle George about this money?” asked Charlie.

“Bekase he would have spent it recklessly, honey, that’s why. Money ill-spent or misapplied is a great evil. Put the box on the cart wid the things, and return to your mother. Off wid ye, boy, at onst.”

“Won’t you come with me?” pleaded Charlie.

“I can’t, ’avic, I’m going to a christening at McFadden’s in the Glen. Away ye go. Good-bye.” Saying which, McKombo vanished from his sight.

Widow Allan was very much astonished when Charlie returned and told his story, but her surprise was still greater when she saw the box of hard cash. She counted the money, which amounted to over three thousand pounds sterling; after which she fastened the box again, and wrote a letter to the manager of a certain bank in Sydney, and to which most of the notes belonged.

In due course the bank sent a representative to Allan’s farm, who informed the widow that the bank had been robbed of over three thousand pounds one night in June twenty years ago, and which had never been recovered. The bank agent departed with the money, but he left the poor but honest widow a cheque for £500—a sum which not only paid off the liability upon her farm, but enabled her to put something by for a rainy day and for Charlie when he came of age.


Story DNA fairy tale · hopeful

Moral

Honesty and hard work, even in the face of adversity, can lead to unexpected rewards and a better future.

Plot Summary

After the death of her husband, Widow Allan and her three children face eviction from their mortgaged farm. They plan to move to a desolate hut at Gumtree Hollow, owned by her absent brother. The eldest son, Charlie, drives the family's belongings to the hut and encounters a small, green-clad Irish fairy named McKombo. McKombo, aware of the family's plight, instructs Charlie to dig in the hollow trunk of a large gum tree, where they uncover a heavy box filled with gold and bank notes. McKombo reveals the treasure was hidden by robbers twenty years ago and then vanishes. Mrs. Allan, upon learning the money was stolen, honestly returns it to the bank, which rewards her with £500, saving her farm and securing her family's future.

Themes

perseverancehonestyunexpected fortunekindness

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: direct address to reader (implied through moralizing tone), colloquialisms for fairy character

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs society (economic hardship)
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking fairy (McKombo), fairy's ability to know human troubles and vanish
the gum tree (shelter, hiding place for fortune)the tin box (hidden opportunity, past crime)

Cultural Context

Origin: Australian (colonial)
Era: pre-industrial | 19th century

Reflects the economic hardships and opportunities (like gold rushes) in colonial Australia, as well as the presence of diverse immigrant populations.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. The Allan family is in ruin after the father's death, facing eviction from their heavily mortgaged farm.
  2. Mrs. Allan decides to move her family to a desolate, rocky hut at Gumtree Hollow, owned by her brother.
  3. Twelve-year-old Charlie, the eldest son, drives the family's belongings to the hut in a spring-cart, promising his mother he will work for her.
  4. Upon arriving at Gumtree Hollow, Charlie sees a small, green-clad figure perched on a gum tree branch.
  5. The figure, a fairy named McKombo, introduces himself and reveals he knows of Charlie's family troubles and intends to help.
  6. McKombo instructs Charlie to dig inside the hollow trunk of the large gum tree.
  7. Charlie digs diligently and uncovers a heavy, square tin box.
  8. Charlie breaks open the box to find it filled with gold sovereigns and bank notes.
  9. McKombo explains that the treasure was hidden by robbers twenty years ago and was never retrieved.
  10. McKombo tells Charlie to take the money to his mother and then vanishes.
  11. Mrs. Allan is astonished by Charlie's story and the discovery of the money, which amounts to over three thousand pounds.
  12. Mrs. Allan writes to the bank whose notes were in the box, informing them of the discovery.
  13. A bank representative confirms the money was stolen twenty years prior and takes it back.
  14. The bank rewards the honest widow Allan with £500, which pays off her farm's mortgage and provides savings for her family's future.

Characters 4 characters

Charlie Allan ★ protagonist

human child male

A slender boy of twelve, with a youthful build, likely tanned from outdoor farm work. He is of average height for his age.

Attire: Simple, practical clothing suitable for a farm boy in late 19th century Australia. Likely a worn linen or cotton shirt, possibly a waistcoat, sturdy trousers, and scuffed leather boots. Colors would be muted earth tones.

Wants: To help his mother overcome their financial difficulties and restore their family's prosperity.

Flaw: His youth and inexperience, leading to initial doubt and bewilderment when faced with the supernatural or complex adult problems.

He transforms from a worried child trying to comfort his mother into an active agent of change, discovering a hidden treasure and ultimately securing his family's future. He learns that help can come from unexpected places.

A young boy, wiping sweat from his brow, holding a pick or spade, looking up in amazement at a tiny figure.

Intelligent, kind-hearted, empathetic, dutiful, and courageous. He is deeply concerned for his mother's well-being.

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A twelve-year-old Australian boy, slender build, average height, with fair skin and a light tan. He has short, sandy-brown hair, round blue eyes, and an earnest expression. He wears a faded cream linen shirt, dark brown canvas trousers, and scuffed leather boots. He holds a wooden-handled spade in his right hand, looking slightly upward with a surprised but hopeful expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

McKombo ◆ supporting

fairy/goblin ageless male

A wee, teeny, queer fellow, hardly six inches high, with a dwarfed miniature man's build. He is spry and agile.

Attire: Entirely verdant green clothing: shapely shoes, swallow-tailed coat, breeches, stockings, and a brimless hat (though later described as a 'chimney-pot hat'). The fabric appears finely tailored despite his size.

Wants: To help the deserving and correct past wrongs, specifically by ensuring the treasure goes to someone who will use it wisely.

Flaw: His small size, though he uses it to his advantage. He seems bound by certain rules or preferences (e.g., not telling Uncle George).

He acts as a catalyst for Charlie's discovery, revealing the treasure and guiding the boy to its recovery. His arc is more about his function as a helper than personal change.

A tiny, six-inch-tall figure in entirely green, swallow-tailed clothing, with a saucy turned-up nose and a chimney-pot hat tilted on his head.

Impudent, saucy, knowing, kind-hearted, mischievous, and loyal (to those he chooses to help). He enjoys a bit of playful teasing.

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A six-inch-tall miniature man, with a spry, agile build. He has a mischievous, knowing face with a saucy, turned-up nose and bright, observant eyes. He wears a complete outfit of verdant green: a swallow-tailed coat, breeches, stockings, and shapely shoes. A tiny green chimney-pot hat is tilted jauntily on his head. He stands with an impudent, swaggering posture, one hand on his hip. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Widow Allan ◆ supporting

human adult female

A woman worn by grief and hardship, likely slender from stress and labor. Her features would show the strain of her circumstances.

Attire: Simple, somber, and worn clothing typical of a struggling widow in late 19th century rural Australia. Likely a dark, plain dress made of practical fabric like wool or sturdy cotton, possibly with an apron. Her clothes would be clean but mended.

Wants: To find a safe and stable home for her children and to overcome their financial ruin.

Flaw: Her overwhelming grief and the burden of her responsibilities make her vulnerable and prone to despair.

She begins in despair, facing eviction and homelessness. Her arc is one of unexpected relief and renewed hope as her son discovers the treasure, allowing her to pay off debts and secure a future.

A weary woman, her face streaked with tears, clutching a letter of eviction, looking at her children with deep sorrow.

Grief-stricken, resilient, honest, and responsible. Despite her despair, she is determined to provide for her children.

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An adult Australian woman, slender build, average height, with fair skin and a pale complexion. Her face is drawn with worry, and her eyes are red-rimmed from crying. Her light brown hair is pulled back in a simple, practical bun. She wears a dark grey, long-sleeved cotton dress with a high neckline, and a plain white apron tied at her waist. Her posture is slightly hunched, conveying sadness and exhaustion. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Old Bob ○ minor

pony elderly non-human

An old pony, likely with a shaggy coat and a somewhat weary appearance, but still capable of pulling a cart.

Attire: A simple leather harness and bridle, appropriate for pulling a spring-cart.

Wants: To return to the familiar comfort of the farm.

Flaw: His stubbornness and dislike for new routes.

A static character, serving as a minor obstacle for Charlie at the beginning of his journey.

An old pony, with a slightly shaggy coat, harnessed to a spring-cart, looking back over his shoulder with a stubborn expression.

Stubborn, set in his ways, and resistant to change, but ultimately obedient to Charlie's guidance.

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An elderly pony, medium build, with a shaggy brown coat and a grey muzzle. His mane and tail are a darker brown and slightly unkempt. He wears a simple, worn leather harness and bridle. He stands facing forward, head slightly turned as if reluctant, with a patient but stubborn expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 2 locations
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Allan's Farm

outdoor afternoon Warm, implying a summer or late spring season in South Australia.

Once a flourishing place by the River Torrens, now gone to decay and ruin. It is the family homestead, heavily mortgaged.

Mood: Melancholy, desolate, burdened by financial hardship.

The Allan family receives notice to quit, marking their forced departure and the beginning of their hardship.

River Torrens dilapidated farm buildings spring-cart old pony (Bob)
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A wide shot of a neglected Australian farmstead beside a slow-moving river, under a warm afternoon sky. Weathered timber fences lean precariously, and dry, sparse grass covers the ground around a small, decaying farmhouse with a corrugated iron roof. A few scraggly eucalyptus trees dot the distant landscape. The overall impression is one of abandonment and quiet sorrow. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Gumtree Hollow

outdoor afternoon Warm, dry, typical of an Australian summer or late spring.

A remote, rugged patch of land about two acres, consisting of crags and stones, with insufficient soil for cultivation. It is five miles from Allan's farm.

Mood: Wild, isolated, initially desolate, but soon becomes magical and hopeful.

Charlie discovers the fairy McKombo and unearths the hidden treasure within the hollow gum tree, changing his family's fortunes.

crags and stones ravine gigantic, hoary gum tree hollow trunk of the gum tree dilapidated hut spring-cart
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A deep, rocky ravine in the Australian bush, with jagged sandstone crags forming natural cuttings. Dominating the scene is an ancient, gnarled Eucalyptus tree with a massive, hollow trunk, its rough bark textured with age. Its wide, spreading branches, covered in leathery green leaves, form a dense canopy over a small, ramshackle hut made of rough-hewn timber and corrugated iron. The ground is stony and dry, with sparse, tough native grasses. Golden afternoon light filters through the eucalyptus leaves, casting dappled shadows. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.