IN the CLOUDS
by Atha Westbury · from Australian fairy tales
Adapted Version
Willie loves to watch birds fly. He dreams of flying too. One night, three small fairies came. They said, "Come fly with us." Willie told his parents. They laughed. "You had a dream," they said.
Willie knew it was real. One sunny morning, Willie walked. He saw the three small fairies. They sat under a very big tree. They waited for Willie there. Willie took off his small cap. He said, "Good morning, friends."
The fairies took Willie's hand. They walked to a quiet, green place. A very big balloon was there. It looked like a giant, round pear. It was ready to fly up high.
Willie got in the balloon car. The fairies got in too. The balloon went up very, very fast.
Willie looked down from high up. The earth got very, very small. Houses were like tiny, tiny dots. People were like small, black ants. They went into soft white clouds. The clouds looked like a big, sparkling sea.
Willie felt very, very cold. He could not breathe well up high. His teeth went chatter, chatter, chatter. "It is so cold here," he said.
Pippin had a special warm cloak. It was like the balloon cloth. They put it on Willie fast. Willie felt warm and good now. He could breathe well again.
The balloon went higher and higher. Willie saw many sparkly things. They fell all around them. They looked like bright, tiny diamonds.
Willie wanted to catch one. He put his hand out. He touched something very cold. It was thin, clear ice. It felt very cold.
Pippin smiled at Willie. "This is water vapor," he said. "Cold air makes ice. It falls down. It turns to water." "Then it is vapor again."
Pippin said, "We go down now." Willie saw wonders. They had shown him the big sky. The big balloon began to fall.
The balloon went down very fast. It landed by the river bank. Willie got out safely. He went home for his dinner.
Willie had a wonderful trip. He saw many new, exciting things. He will always remember them. He will remember the big, blue sky.
Original Story
IN THE CLOUDS.
They came to the boy one night when he was abed, and said they would take him with them in their fairy balloon.
Willie Fenton told his father and mother that he had seen the elfins, and what they had promised him, but they only laughed at him and told him he had been dreaming.
Our hero wasn’t to be convinced that it was only a dream. Hadn’t he seen them—three fairy creatures no higher than his top—enter his bedroom through the keyhole, and seat themselves on his pillow, and begin talking about the glorious sights to be seen in the clouds?
If Willie Fenton had been born up in a balloon his youthful fancy could not have been imbued with a greater passion for the sport. Indeed, since he was a child of four or five years old our youthful aeronaut had blown soap bubbles, and had watched them soar away in the sun, glistening with all the hues of the rainbow, and his dreams at night and aspirations by day had been to emulate those daring spirits who surpassed the mighty eagle in his flight into the bright blue sky above the clouds.
Willie’s home, situated on Mount Pleasant, was in the vicinity of many a romantic spot calculated to favour the elves in their adventure, and one fine morning, as the lad was returning from a neighbouring farm, he espied his three nocturnal visitors seated under a large gum-tree awaiting him. Willie recognised them in a moment, and doffing his cap said, “Good-morning, gentlemen.”
The fairies rose and saluted him, and answered that they were quite ready to fulfil their promises. Our hero thanked them for their kindness, and at the same time expressed himself quite ready to accompany them. Whereupon the three elves conducted him in silence along a narrow ravine which opened out on a still, quiet glen on the banks of the river. Fastened securely between two huge trees, Willie beheld a great, pear-shaped thing, swaying to and fro with the motion of the breeze, and at which the elves pointed and said, “Behold, our cloud car.”
“IT WAS A GRAND BALLOON.”
Yes, it was a grand balloon, already inflated and with a cage attached, bordered with wild roses and creepers, that reached from the apex of the monster down to the car beneath, which hung suspended, like a flower-pot in a balcony. How it surged and struggled desperately with the wind, as if it were endowed with life, and wished to escape from fastenings that held it, and soar upward! And how frail it appeared, as Willie approached and examined it! Was it made of cloth? No, too fine for cloth. Cotton? Nay, it was too soft for cotton, or silk either. Yet the whole fabric seemed no weightier than a gossamer. The fairies smiled at the boy’s curiosity, and invited him to enter the car. Our little hero had no sooner complied than the elfins seated themselves at his side. And one of them, who had a bright diadem glittering upon his breast, stood up and waved his hand as a signal, when instantly the balloon shot aloft with inconceivable velocity.
The young mortal closed his eyes and held his breath for one brief moment; but when he looked forth, the earth appeared to be miraculously vanishing from his sight. Although the ascent was fearfully rapid, the motion of the balloon was quite imperceptible. The morning was bright and sunny, the sky a deep, Prussian blue, and as the boy craned his neck over the cage and gazed below, what a glorious sight met his view. There stretched beneath him were the golden valleys of his birthplace, with hundreds of farms dotting the landscape, and no bigger than a child’s toy. From his elevated position the houses were as so many dots, and the people in the fields as tiny ants. The flowing Torrens, that had seemed so broad and deep, appeared as a silver thread, and the high cliffs and hills were on a level with the dull round earth. Willie Fenton felt not the least alarm; on the contrary, his courage rose with the balloon, as it sped upward to the sky. The elfin with the diadem threw out some pieces of paper, which seemed to drop like stones. This, however, was not so, but only the effect of the terrible rate at which they were travelling. Higher, higher, still higher. Now they disappeared from view, in a thick vapour forming the white clouds, which looked so light and fleecy from earth. The balloon did not remain long in these, but quickly rose into a clear atmosphere beyond. And here the scene changed to one splendid in the extreme. Above them nothing but the big round sun, and the deep azure of the heavens. Beneath no dingy earth, dim and gloomy, but a brilliant sea of sparkling cloud, rose tinted, dancing and flashing in the sun’s rays. The cloud completely hid everything below, and lay beneath like a huge, rolling billow, the top of which flashed back the sunlight till our hero almost fancied it was a wave of driven snow spangled with diamonds. How long Willie might have remained in his rapt trance of wonder it is hard to say, but he was aroused by a feeling of cold, and a difficulty in breathing.
“Our mortal friend will find it very chilly up here,” said Pippin, who wore the diadem, answering the boy’s unspoken words.
“It has grown very cold indeed, gentlemen,” rejoined Willie, his teeth chattering as he spoke.
“Ha, ha! Listen to him, Needle; hear him, Bobbin; he’s beginning to cry out already!” cried Pippin to his companions. “Cold, eh? Well, we have a cure for cold, and for frost and snow—whole mountains of it. Eh, Needle?” As Pippin spoke, he unrolled a parcel which had been lying unnoticed at the bottom of the car, and produced a cloak made of the same material as the balloon. Without more ado they enveloped Willie from head to heel in the garment, with just sufficient space left clear about his eyes so that he could see, the rest of him being completely covered. In a few moments he began to breathe more freely, and the rarity of the air made no impression upon him at all.
“You feel all right now, Willie Fenton?” questioned Bobbin. Willie mumbled, and nodded his head in the affirmative.
“Let us mount higher then, my brethren. Excelsior!” exclaimed Pippin of the diadem. “Bold indeed the mortal who first conceived and carried out the idea of making the unstable element water subservient to his genius, as witness the ships that come and go on the bosom of the ocean; but it is left to us, the elves of Australia, to curb the air and make it do our bidding. Higher and higher go we, to show this mortal the wonders of the upper world.”
Upward still, beyond the cloud which breaks for a moment and gives them a glimpse of the sea, and the coast-line away to the westward seeming no broader than a single thread. And now the cold became intense, but the fairies and their companion felt it not, for their gaze was fixed upon a sight that no emperor or king had ever seen—and perchance never would. If all the diamonds in that rich valley visited by Sinbad the Sailor, also all the gems which Aladdin’s lamp could have procured, and all that ever have been seen in the world had been pressed into the service—they would have failed utterly in producing one tithe of the strange sight Willie now saw. The whole dome of the balloon was covered as it were in a diamond mantle. A shower of glittering gems was falling in all directions, apparently coming from the blue void above, and sprinkling down, with a fluttering motion like that of butterflies, and then disappearing in the vast abyss below.
Lost in amazement at this marvellous vision, the boy frees one of his hands, and reaches to catch one of the heavenly gems; but he discovers the diamond shower is in reality only thin sheets of newly-formed ice.
The elves laugh at him and the look of wonder on his face. And Pippin explains in a grave tone, “Boy, we have entered a region where some watery vapour hath been, which the cold hath turned into ice, and now being heavier than the atmosphere falls fluttering to the earth. Towards the earth, I say, since I know well it will never reach it, because before it can do so it will encounter a warmer region, when the ice will again become water and the water vapour. Do you understand?”
“Oh yes. It’s the vapour which makes the clouds, isn’t it?” answered Willie.
“Just so,” replied the elfin. “And now having fulfilled our promise, we will descend again to old mother earth.”
Like a streak of light the fairy balloon shot downward through the glittering, diamond shower, through the mist and cloud, until the bright landscape appeared in view. The elfins, Pippin, Needle, and Bobbin, landed Willie safely by the river-bank, and the boy reached home just in time for dinner.
* * *
The three elves still haunt that dell by the Torrens, so if any of my readers are anxious for a trip in the fairy balloon, I have no doubt Messrs. Pippin & Co. will be only too glad to oblige them—that is, if they are at home.
Story DNA
Plot Summary
Willie Fenton, a boy obsessed with flight, is visited by fairies who promise him a trip in their magical balloon. Despite his parents' disbelief, the fairies reappear and take Willie on an incredible journey high above the earth, through clouds, and into a region of sparkling ice showers. The elves explain the natural phenomena, provide him with a special cloak to withstand the cold, and ultimately return him safely home, having fulfilled their promise of showing him the wonders of the upper world.
Themes
Emotional Arc
curiosity to wonder to understanding
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story reflects a period when ballooning was still a marvel and scientific understanding of atmospheric phenomena was becoming more accessible, blending it with traditional fairy tale elements.
Plot Beats (14)
- Fairies visit Willie Fenton in his dreams, promising a trip in their balloon, but his parents dismiss it.
- Willie, who has always dreamed of flight, is convinced the dream was real.
- The fairies reappear to Willie under a gum-tree and invite him to join them.
- Willie is led to a grand, pear-shaped fairy balloon, already inflated and waiting.
- Willie enters the car with the elves, and the balloon shoots upward with incredible speed.
- Willie observes the earth shrinking below, then rises into and above the clouds, seeing a brilliant cloud sea.
- Willie experiences extreme cold and difficulty breathing at high altitude.
- The elves provide Willie with a special cloak, made of the same material as the balloon, which protects him from the cold and rarity of the air.
- The balloon ascends even higher, revealing a magnificent shower of glittering 'diamonds'.
- Willie tries to catch one of the 'diamonds' and discovers they are thin sheets of ice.
- Pippin, the lead elf, explains the scientific reason for the ice shower (water vapor turning to ice and falling).
- Having shown Willie the wonders, the elves begin their descent.
- The fairy balloon lands Willie safely by the river-bank, and he returns home for dinner.
- The narrator concludes by inviting readers to seek out the elves for their own balloon trip.
Characters
Willie Fenton ★ protagonist
A young boy, likely of average height and build for his age, with an active imagination and a keen interest in flight. His features are those of a typical child, perhaps with bright, curious eyes that reflect his wonder.
Attire: Simple, practical clothing suitable for an early 20th-century Australian child, such as a linen shirt, knickerbockers or trousers, and sturdy shoes. He wears a cap which he doffs to the elves, suggesting a common boy's cap of the period.
Wants: To experience the wonders of flight and see the world from above, fulfilling a lifelong dream inspired by soap bubbles and eagles.
Flaw: His mortal vulnerability to cold and the rarity of high-altitude air.
He begins as a dreamer dismissed by his parents and transforms into an actual adventurer who experiences the wonders of the upper atmosphere, confirming his childhood aspirations.
Curious, adventurous, brave, imaginative, polite.
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A young boy, around five years old, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a round, curious face with wide, bright blue eyes and fair skin. His light brown hair is slightly tousled. He wears a simple cream linen shirt, brown knickerbockers, and sturdy brown leather shoes. He holds a small, plain cap in his right hand. He has an expression of polite wonder. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Pippin ◆ supporting
A small fairy creature, no higher than a child's top, with delicate features. His form is ethereal, made of a material as fine as gossamer, suggesting a translucent or shimmering quality.
Attire: Simple, perhaps leaf-like or petal-like attire, but his most distinguishing feature is a bright diadem glittering upon his breast, indicating a leadership role among the elves.
Wants: To fulfill promises, explore the wonders of the upper world, and perhaps to share the unique experiences of the elves with a mortal.
Flaw: Perhaps a slight arrogance or enjoyment of a mortal's discomfort (as when Willie is cold).
Remains consistent as a knowledgeable and somewhat playful leader of the elves.
Leaderly, knowledgeable, a bit mischievous, proud of elfin achievements, helpful (in his own way).
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A tiny, ethereal male fairy creature, no taller than a child's spinning top, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has delicate, pointed ears, bright, intelligent green eyes, and a small, knowing smile. His skin is a pale, luminous green. His hair is fine and silvery, styled short. He wears a tunic made of shimmering, translucent green fabric, resembling a leaf, and a small, intricate golden diadem glitters on his chest. His posture is confident and slightly mischievous. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Needle ◆ supporting
A small fairy creature, no higher than a child's top, with delicate features, similar in size and composition to Pippin.
Attire: Simple, perhaps leaf-like or petal-like attire, consistent with his fairy nature.
Wants: To accompany Pippin and Bobbin on their adventures and fulfill their promises.
Flaw: Not explicitly shown, but shares the general fairy characteristic of being unaffected by mortal cold.
Remains consistent as a companion elf.
Observant, a follower, perhaps a bit amused by Willie's reactions.
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A tiny, ethereal male fairy creature, no taller than a child's spinning top, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has delicate, pointed ears, bright, curious blue eyes, and a small, gentle smile. His skin is a pale, luminous blue. His hair is fine and wispy, a light silver color. He wears a tunic made of shimmering, translucent blue fabric, resembling a dew-kissed petal. His posture is attentive and slightly leaning forward. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Bobbin ◆ supporting
A small fairy creature, no higher than a child's top, with delicate features, similar in size and composition to Pippin and Needle.
Attire: Simple, perhaps leaf-like or petal-like attire, consistent with his fairy nature.
Wants: To accompany Pippin and Needle on their adventures and fulfill their promises.
Flaw: Not explicitly shown, but shares the general fairy characteristic of being unaffected by mortal cold.
Remains consistent as a companion elf.
Inquisitive, a follower, perhaps a bit more direct in his questions than Needle.
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A tiny, ethereal male fairy creature, no taller than a child's spinning top, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has delicate, pointed ears, bright, inquisitive brown eyes, and a small, open mouth as if about to speak. His skin is a pale, luminous yellow. His hair is fine and curly, a light golden color. He wears a tunic made of shimmering, translucent yellow fabric, resembling a delicate flower petal. His posture is alert and questioning. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Willie's Bedroom
Willie's personal room where the three fairy creatures, no higher than his top, entered through the keyhole and seated themselves on his pillow.
Mood: mysterious, dreamlike, intimate
The elves first appear to Willie and promise him a trip in their fairy balloon.
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A cozy, dimly lit bedroom in a 19th-century Australian cottage, with a simple wooden bed and a patchwork quilt. Moonlight streams faintly through a window, casting soft shadows. Three tiny, luminous fairy figures are perched on a plump pillow, their forms slightly translucent. A small, ornate keyhole is visible on the closed wooden door. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Glen by the Torrens River
A still, quiet glen on the banks of the Torrens River, accessed via a narrow ravine. A great, pear-shaped balloon, bordered with wild roses and creepers, is fastened securely between two huge, mature Eucalyptus trees.
Mood: secluded, magical, expectant
Willie meets the elves and sees the fairy balloon for the first time, preparing for his ascent.
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A secluded, sun-dappled glen beside the gently flowing Torrens River in South Australia. Lush green native grasses and ferns cover the ground, leading to the river's edge. Two massive, ancient Eucalyptus trees with peeling bark stand prominently, between which a large, pear-shaped, gossamer-like balloon, adorned with vibrant wild roses and green creepers, sways gently. The morning sun casts long shadows and highlights the river's surface. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Above the Clouds
A brilliant sea of sparkling, rose-tinted clouds, dancing and flashing in the sun's rays, completely hiding the earth below. Above is the big round sun and the deep azure of the heavens. Later, a region of intense cold where the balloon is covered in a 'diamond mantle' of falling ice sheets.
Mood: awe-inspiring, ethereal, wondrous, then chilling
Willie experiences the wonders of flight above the clouds, seeing the earth shrink and then encountering the 'diamond shower' of ice.
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A breathtaking vista from high above, where a vast, undulating sea of brilliant white and rose-tinted cumulus clouds stretches to the horizon, reflecting the intense golden light of a large, clear sun directly overhead. The sky above is a deep, pure azure. Later, the scene shifts to an intensely cold, crystalline atmosphere where countless tiny, shimmering sheets of newly formed ice flutter downwards like diamonds, creating a sparkling 'mantle' around the viewer's perspective. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.