RAINBOW and the AUTUMN LEAVES

by Cyrus MacMillan · from Canadian Fairy Tales

folk tale origin story solemn Ages 8-14 1752 words 8 min read
Cover: RAINBOW and the AUTUMN LEAVES

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 451 words 2 min Canon 85/100

Long ago, folk talked. They shared stories. They lived in a big, green forest. Folk had big meetings. Turtle was very old and wise. He went to the sky. He came back for meetings. He liked the sky very much.

Folk heard about new people. New people would come to their land. Folk felt worried. They wanted to go to the sky. They wanted to be safe there. Turtle was safe in the sky.

Deer wanted to go to the sky. He saw Rainbow. Rainbow made paths to the sky. Deer asked, "Take me!" Rainbow said, "Wait." Deer waited. Rainbow said, "I will take you."

One day, Rainbow made a path. It was a path of many colors. Deer walked on the path. He went up to the sky. He met Turtle there. Deer liked the sky. He wanted to stay always.

Folk had a big meeting. Deer was not there. Folk looked for Deer. They could not find him. Turtle came to the meeting. Turtle said, "Deer is in the sky."

Turtle told folk, "Go to sky." They escaped. Turtle showed them the path. Rainbow made the path. It was a path of many colors. All folk could go.

Bear was very angry. Deer left without waiting. Bear said, "Deer left us." He was angry. "I will talk to him!" Bear was strong. He did not like this.

It was late autumn. Folk got ready to go. Rainbow made a path. It was bright and full of colors. Bear went first. Bear was brave and strong. He wanted to test the path.

Bear asked, "Why leave?" He said, "Wait."

Deer was not timid now. He felt strong. Deer asked, "Who are you?" They pushed. They bumped and shoved. They fought on the path.

The sky shook a little. Bear and Deer fought hard. Other folk saw them. They were worried. They sent Wolf. Wolf went to stop the fight.

Wolf stopped the fight. Bear and Deer stopped. They were a little tired. They had some small bumps. They went away. They rested from fighting.

All other folk went up. They walked on Rainbow's path. They found a new home. It was a safe home in the sky.

Red and brown drops fell. They fell from the path. They fell onto the leaves below. The leaves changed color. They became autumn colors.

Bear and Deer were not friends. They did not play as friends. This is why leaves change color. They turn red and brown. This is why some folk are not friends.

And that is how the leaves got their pretty red and brown colors in autumn. And why some folk still like to keep their distance from each other.

Original Story 1752 words · 8 min read

RAINBOW AND THE AUTUMN LEAVES

In olden days, long before the Indians came to Canada, all the animals talked and worked like men. Every year after midsummer they held a great council at which they were all present. But it happened once in the summer before the council met, that they all wanted to go to the sky to see what the country up there was like. None of them could find a way to go. The oldest and wisest creature on all the earth was Turtle. One day he prayed to the Thunder God to take him to the sky, and his prayer was soon answered. There was a great noise, as if the earth had been split asunder, and when the people next looked for Turtle he was nowhere to be found. They searched everywhere without success. But that evening, when they looked upwards, they saw him in the sky, moving about like a black cloud. Turtle liked the sky so well that he decided to live there always and to send his descendants, later, to the earth. And the sky-people agreed to keep him. They asked him, "Where do you want to dwell?" And he answered, "I should like to dwell in the Black Cloud, in which are the ponds and streams and lakes and springs of water, for I always dwelt near these places when I was young." So he was allowed to have his wish. But when the Great Council of the animals met on earth in the time of the harvest-moon, he was always present. He came in the Black Cloud, but he always went back to the sky after the Council was ended. And the other animals envied him his good fortune, and they wished that they could go with him.

After a time the animals were greatly distressed and angered by the rumour that a new race of creatures was coming from far over the ocean to inhabit their land. They talked it over very carefully, and they all thought how fortunate it would be if they could all go to the sky with old Turtle, and live like him, free from fear and trouble and care. But they were puzzled to know how to get there, for Turtle had never told any of them the way.

One day Deer, wandering about alone in the forest, as was his custom, came across Rainbow, who often built a path of many colours to the sky. And he said to Rainbow, "Carry me up to the sky, for I want to see Turtle." But Rainbow was afraid to do it, for he wished first to ask the Thunder God for permission, and he put Deer off, and to gain time he said, "Come to me in winter, when I stay for a time on the mountain near the lake. Then I will gladly carry you to the place where Turtle dwells."

THROUGHOUT THE LONG WINTER MONTHS DEER LOOKED LONGINGLY FOR RAINBOW

Throughout the long winter months Deer looked longingly for Rainbow, but Rainbow did not come. Life was growing harder on the earth, and the animals were in terror of the new race that was soon to come to their land, and Deer was very timid and impatient. At last, one day in the early summer, Rainbow came again, and Deer hastened to meet him. "Why were you false to me?" he asked; "I waited for you all winter long on the mountain by the lake, but you did not come as you promised. I want to go to the sky now, for I must see Turtle." Rainbow answered, "I cannot take you now. But some day, when there is a Fog over the lake, I shall come back to drive it away. Come to me then, and I shall take you to the sky and to the place where Turtle dwells. This time I will not deceive you."

Rainbow consulted the Thunder God, and received permission to do as Deer wished. Soon afterwards the Fog one day rolled in a thick bank across the lake, and Deer hurried out to wait for Rainbow. Sure enough, Rainbow came down, as he had promised, to drive the Fog away. He threw his arch of many colours from the lake to the blue hills far away, and the Fog at once disappeared from the place. And he said to Deer, who stood watching him, "Now I will keep my promise. Follow my many-coloured path over the hills and the forests and the streams, and be not afraid, and you will soon reach Turtle's home in the sky." Deer did as he was told, and soon he reached the sky. Turtle was glad to see him, and Deer liked the country so well that he decided to stay for ever. And he roamed over the sky everywhere, moving like the wind from place to place.

When midsummer had passed and the harvest-moon had come and the Great Council again met together, Deer was absent for the first time in his life. The animals waited long for him to appear, for they needed his advice, but he did not come. They sent the Birds out to find him. Black Hawk and Woodpecker and Bluejay all sought him in the forest, but they could not find a trace of him. Then Wolf and Fox scoured the woods far and near, but they came back and reported that he could not be found anywhere. At last Turtle arrived at the meeting of the Great Council, as was his custom, coming in his Black Cloud, in which were the ponds and lakes and streams and springs of water. And Bear said, "Deer is absent from the Council meeting. Where is Deer? We cannot meet without him, for we need his advice." And Turtle replied, "Deer is in the sky. Have you not heard? Rainbow made a wonderful pathway for him of many varied colours, and by that he came to the sky. There he is now," and he pointed to a golden cloud scurrying across the sky overhead.

Turtle advised that the animals should all go to the sky to live until they could be sure that the new race of creatures would bring them no harm. And he showed them the pathway that Rainbow had made, stretching from the earth in wonderful colours. The animals all agreed at the Great Council to take Turtle's advice. But they were all very angry at Deer for leaving them without warning, for they thought that all the animals should either stay together faithfully on the earth or go all together to the sky. Bear showed the greatest anger and annoyance. Because of his great strength, he had no fear of the new race that was said soon to be coming, and he had always been inclined to look with scorn on Deer's timid and impatient ways. "Deer has forsaken us," he said; "he deserted us in the hour of our danger, and that is contrary to forest laws and to our code of defence." And he thought to himself, "I shall punish him for this when the time comes."

In the late autumn, the time agreed upon came for the animals to leave the earth, and Rainbow again made his bright path for them to the sky. Bear was the first to go up because he was the leader, and because with his great weight he wanted to test the strength of the bridge of burning colours over which they had to pass. When he had almost reached the sky, he met Deer on the path waiting to welcome the animals to their new home. And he said to him in anger, "Why did you leave us behind, without warning, for the land of the Turtle? Why did you desert the Great Council? Why did you not wait until all could come together? You are a traitor to your comrades, and you have been false to our faith." And Deer answered, also in anger, "Who are you to doubt me or my faith? None but the Wolf may ask me why I came or question my fidelity. I will kill you for your insolence." Deer had grown very proud since he had gone to live in the sky, and he was no longer timid as he had been on earth. His eyes flashed in his fury, and he arched his neck and lowered his antlered head, and rushed madly at Bear to push him from the path.

But Bear was not afraid, for he had often tested his strength with Deer upon the earth. His low, hoarse growls sounded all over the sky, and he prepared to fight. They came together with a shock. For a long time they battled, until the bridge of burning colours trembled and the heavens shook from the force of the conflict. The animals waiting by the lake at the end of the path looked up and saw the battle above them. They feared the results, for they wanted neither Bear nor Deer to die. So they sent Wolf up to the sky to put a stop to the contest. When Wolf reached the combatants, Bear was bleeding freely, for Deer with his antlers had pierced his neck and side. Deer, too, was bleeding where Bear's strong claws had torn a great wound in his head. Wolf soon stopped the battle, and Bear and Deer went away to dress their wounds. Then the other animals went up to the sky over Rainbow's flaming path. And they decided to live in the sky and to send their descendants back to earth when the new race of creatures should come. And they can still sometimes be seen, like clouds hurrying across the sky, in the shape they had on earth.

But the blood of Bear and of Deer dropped from them as they moved to the sky from the scene of their battle along the Rainbow road. It fell freely upon the leaves of the trees beneath them, and changed them into varied colours. And every year when autumn comes in the north country, the leaves take on again the bright and wondrous colours given to them by the blood of Bear and Deer when they fought on the Rainbow path ages and ages ago. And Bear and Deer have never since been friends, and their descendants no longer dwell together in peace, as they did in the olden days.



Story DNA folk tale · solemn

Moral

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Plot Summary

In ancient times, animals could speak and held councils. Fearing a new race, Deer seeks escape to the sky via Rainbow, eventually succeeding and deciding to stay. The other animals, advised by Turtle, decide to follow, but Bear is angered by Deer's perceived desertion. On the Rainbow path to the sky, Bear confronts Deer, leading to a fierce battle that is stopped by Wolf. The blood spilled by Bear and Deer falls to earth, forever coloring the autumn leaves, and their descendants remain enemies, explaining the origin of both the colorful foliage and the enduring conflict between certain animals.

Themes

originconflictfear of the unknownbetrayal

Emotional Arc

peace to conflict to lasting division

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: etiological explanation

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking animals, animals living in the sky, Rainbow as a physical path to the sky, Thunder God answering prayers, blood transforming natural elements
Rainbow (path to escape/new world)Autumn leaves (symbol of lasting conflict/consequence)Turtle (wisdom/connection between worlds)

Cultural Context

Origin: Canadian Indigenous (Mi'kmaq, specifically from Cyrus MacMillan's collection of Canadian Wonder Tales)
Era: timeless fairy tale

This story is part of a collection of Indigenous Canadian folklore, often used to explain natural phenomena and animal characteristics.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. Animals in olden days talk and hold councils; Turtle is the first to go to the sky and return for meetings.
  2. A rumor of a new race coming to earth causes fear and distress among the animals, who wish to escape to the sky.
  3. Deer repeatedly asks Rainbow to take him to the sky, and after some delay, Rainbow agrees.
  4. Rainbow creates a path, and Deer ascends to the sky, where he meets Turtle and decides to stay permanently.
  5. Deer is absent from the Great Council, prompting a search and Turtle's revelation of his location.
  6. Turtle advises all animals to go to the sky to escape the new race, showing them Rainbow's path.
  7. Bear expresses great anger at Deer's perceived desertion and vows revenge.
  8. In late autumn, the animals prepare to ascend; Bear goes first to test the path.
  9. Bear confronts Deer on the Rainbow path, accusing him of betrayal.
  10. Deer, now proud and no longer timid, challenges Bear, and they engage in a violent battle.
  11. The battle shakes the heavens, and the other animals send Wolf to stop the fight.
  12. Wolf intervenes, and Bear and Deer separate to tend their wounds.
  13. The other animals ascend to the sky, deciding to live there and send descendants back later.
  14. The blood of Bear and Deer falls from the Rainbow path onto the leaves below, changing them to autumn colors.
  15. Bear and Deer remain enemies, and their descendants never dwell together in peace, explaining the origin of autumn leaves and animal enmity.

Characters 6 characters

Turtle ◆ supporting

animal (turtle) ageless non-human

An ancient, wise turtle, likely large and robust, with a dark, weathered shell. His movements are slow and deliberate on earth, but in the sky, he moves like a black cloud.

Attire: None, as an animal.

Wants: To find a peaceful dwelling place, to help his fellow animals find safety.

Flaw: His ancient age might imply a lack of physical speed, though his wisdom compensates.

He remains a consistent figure of wisdom and guidance, providing a solution for the other animals.

A large, dark turtle moving like a black cloud in the sky.

Wise, prayerful, content, resourceful, benevolent.

Image Prompt & Upload
An ancient, large, dark-shelled turtle, with a weathered, leathery head and wise, calm eyes. He is depicted as if moving through the sky, his form resembling a dark, wispy cloud. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Deer ★ protagonist

animal (deer) adult non-human

A graceful, slender deer with strong, branching antlers. Initially timid, he becomes proud and fierce after living in the sky. His fur would be a natural brown, possibly with lighter undersides.

Attire: None, as an animal.

Wants: To escape the coming 'new race' and find safety in the sky with Turtle.

Flaw: Impatience, timidity (initially), pride, quick temper, perceived disloyalty.

Transforms from a timid, anxious creature into a proud, aggressive one after experiencing the freedom of the sky, leading to conflict with Bear.

A deer with large, sharp antlers, eyes flashing with fury, poised to charge.

Initially timid, impatient, anxious. Later, proud, fierce, quick to anger, disloyal (from Bear's perspective).

Image Prompt & Upload
A proud adult deer standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has sleek brown fur, large branching antlers, and expressive brown eyes that flash with fury. His neck is arched, and his head is lowered slightly in a challenging posture. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Rainbow ◆ supporting

magical entity (natural phenomenon) ageless non-human

A shimmering, ethereal arch of many vibrant colors, stretching from earth to sky. It has no solid form but manifests as a path.

Attire: Itself is a 'wardrobe' of pure, radiant color.

Wants: To fulfill its role as a bridge to the sky, while respecting the divine authority of the Thunder God.

Flaw: Bound by the rules and permissions of the Thunder God, cannot act independently.

Initially hesitant to help Deer, it eventually receives permission and fulfills its promise, becoming the conduit for all animals to the sky.

A magnificent, multi-colored arch spanning from the earth to the sky.

Cautious, obedient (to Thunder God), true to its word (eventually).

Image Prompt & Upload
A magnificent, vibrant arch of many colors, stretching from the ground upwards towards the sky. The colors are distinct and bright, forming a clear, ethereal pathway. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Thunder God ○ minor

deity ageless non-human

Not explicitly described, but implied to be a powerful, unseen force associated with great noise and the sky. Perhaps a looming, powerful presence in the clouds.

Attire: Not applicable.

Wants: To maintain order, to respond to the prayers of the wise.

Flaw: None apparent.

A consistent, powerful background presence that enables key events.

A dramatic, rumbling dark cloud with flashes of light, symbolizing his presence.

Powerful, responsive to prayer, authoritative, grants permission.

Image Prompt & Upload
A vast, dark, and turbulent cloud formation in the sky, with subtle flashes of internal light and a sense of immense power. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Bear ⚔ antagonist

animal (bear) adult non-human

A large, powerful bear with thick fur, immense strength, and a formidable presence. He is depicted as having a low, hoarse growl. He bleeds freely from wounds during the fight.

Attire: None, as an animal.

Wants: To maintain group loyalty and forest laws, to punish perceived traitors, to ensure the safety of the animals.

Flaw: Pride, quick temper, inability to forgive perceived disloyalty.

His anger at Deer's perceived betrayal leads to a violent confrontation, resulting in a permanent rift between their species.

A large, powerful bear with a low, hoarse growl, ready to fight.

Strong, fearless, proud, loyal (to the group), scornful of timidity, quick to anger when betrayed, judgmental.

Image Prompt & Upload
A large, powerful brown bear standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has thick, shaggy fur, a strong muzzle, and eyes that convey anger and determination. His posture is assertive and ready for confrontation, with a low, rumbling growl implied. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Wolf ◆ supporting

animal (wolf) adult non-human

A lean, agile wolf, likely with grey or brown fur, known for scouring the woods. His presence is authoritative enough to stop a fierce battle.

Attire: None, as an animal.

Wants: To find Deer, to stop the dangerous conflict between Bear and Deer.

Flaw: None explicitly stated.

Plays a crucial role in ending the destructive conflict, preventing further harm.

A lean, grey wolf standing between two fighting animals, commanding peace.

Resourceful (in searching), authoritative, peacemaker.

Image Prompt & Upload
A lean, agile grey wolf standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has sleek, dense fur and intelligent, keen eyes. His posture is firm and authoritative, suggesting a peacemaking presence. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 3 locations
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The Great Council Meeting Place

outdoor night Autumn, under the harvest-moon, implying cool, clear nights.

A clearing or significant natural gathering spot on earth, likely within a forest, where all the animals convene annually after midsummer, under the harvest-moon. It is a place of serious discussion and decision-making.

Mood: Solemn, communal, sometimes tense with debate and concern.

The animals hold their annual council, discuss the coming new race, and decide to follow Turtle to the sky.

Forest clearing Harvest-moon overhead Gathered animals (Bear, Wolf, Fox, Birds, etc.) Turtle arriving in a 'Black Cloud'
Image Prompt & Upload
A wide, ancient forest clearing bathed in the soft, ethereal glow of a large harvest moon. Tall, dark coniferous trees with rough bark encircle the open space, their branches silhouetted against the night sky. The ground is covered in fallen pine needles and scattered mossy rocks. In the center, various animals are gathered, their forms distinct in the moonlight. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Mountain near the Lake

outdoor Winter (cold, possibly snowy), then early summer (clear, then foggy).

A specific mountain overlooking a lake, where Rainbow sometimes appears. This is where Deer waited for Rainbow during winter and where the fog later rolled in.

Mood: Anticipatory, isolated, later tense with the arrival of fog.

Deer waits for Rainbow, Rainbow promises to return, and later creates the path to the sky from here.

Mountain peak or slope Large, still lake Dense forest surrounding the lake and mountain Fog bank rolling across the lake Rainbow arching from lake to distant hills
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A vast, serene lake at the base of a rugged, pine-covered mountain range, shrouded in a thick, ethereal bank of white fog that hovers just above the water's surface. The distant blue hills are barely visible through the mist. Overhead, a vibrant, multi-colored rainbow arches majestically from the lake's edge, disappearing into the clear sky above the mountain peaks. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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The Sky / Rainbow Path

transitional day Clear, bright, cloud-filled 'sky country'.

The ethereal, boundless realm above the earth, accessed via Rainbow's 'many-coloured path' or 'bridge of burning colours'. It is where Turtle and later Deer reside, and where the climactic battle occurs.

Mood: Magical, wondrous, later violent and turbulent.

Deer travels to the sky, the animals follow, and Bear and Deer fight on the Rainbow path, leading to the origin of autumn leaves' colors.

Vibrant, glowing rainbow bridge Fluffy golden clouds Vast blue expanse of sky Ponds, streams, lakes, and springs within the 'Black Cloud' (Turtle's dwelling) Falling drops of blood changing leaf colors below
Image Prompt & Upload
A breathtaking, luminous rainbow arching across an endless expanse of brilliant blue sky, serving as a solid, glowing pathway. Fluffy, golden-edged cumulus clouds drift lazily around and beneath the path, creating a sense of immense depth. Below, the distant earth's forests are visible, with individual leaves beginning to show splashes of red and orange where drops of blood fall from the fighting animals. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.