SPARROW'S SEARCH for the RAIN

by Cyrus MacMillan · from Canadian Fairy Tales

folk tale origin story solemn Ages 8-14 1970 words 9 min read
Cover: SPARROW'S SEARCH for the RAIN

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 178 words 1 min Canon 40/100

A wise man lived by the sea. He had a kind daughter. She was very wise. Many young men wanted her. She wanted a special friend. She wanted to play.

The young men felt sad. She did not like them. They asked Whirlwind for help. Whirlwind liked tricks. They asked him for a trick.

Whirlwind played a trick. He blew her hat off. It flew into the sea. The hat was gone. The Wise Daughter felt sad. Her clothes were dirty. Her hair was messy.

The Wise Elder was upset. He told The Chief. The Chief listened. The Chief said Whirlwind must go. Whirlwind left the village. He went far away.

Rain was Whirlwind's best friend. Rain could not see. Rain chose to go too. Rain could not be alone.

Whirlwind and Rain were gone. The land grew very dry. No wind blew. No rain fell. Plants were thirsty. Animals were thirsty. People felt sad. Everyone was hot.

The Chief was worried. Chief said, "Come back!" He sent Fox to find them. Fox was clever. Fox searched far

Original Story 1970 words · 9 min read

SPARROW'S SEARCH FOR THE RAIN

Long ago, in a village near the sea, many Indian people were living. Among them was a very nice old warrior who had been given great power at his birth, and who, therefore, could do many wonderful deeds. There was nothing that was beyond his understanding, for he knew all things. His wife had long been dead, but he had one daughter. She was very beautiful and gentle, and she was as nearly perfect as any woman could be. She took no interest in frivolous things and she lived a very quiet life, but all the people liked her well, and she was always welcome wherever she went. Her old father was very proud of her, and he said boastfully, "She has inherited much of my wisdom, and some day she will marry a great man." But the girl on her part had little thought of marriage or of men, for she said they had small minds, and she would rather live alone than listen always to their boastfulness and their foolish chatter.

Soon the daughter's fame spread far and wide through the sea-coast villages, and many suitors came seeking for her hand. But her father said, "I have nothing to say. She will make her own choice. She must please herself. For to-day children please themselves and not their parents." And she said, "I will marry only some one who can amuse me and interest me and keep me company. I have scant liking for dull people." One day Loon came to see her. He was very good looking although he was somewhat tall and skinny, and his neck was a bit longer and more scrawny than ordinary, but he wore good clothes and he had great skill as a fisherman. He came because he thought he was very handsome, and he believed that his good looks would win the maiden. But she had no love for Loon, for he had not a word to say. When she talked to him he only stared, and at last he burst out into loud and foolish laughter. Then the maiden said, "You have a small mind like the others," and in disgust she withdrew from his presence.

Then Fox came in an effort to win the maiden as his wife. And for a whole day he cut capers, and chased his tail round and round in a circle, trying to amuse the serious girl. But he did not succeed very well, and like Loon he departed in despair. And many others came, but they met the same fate, and at last the girl decided to see no more of them, but to live alone with her father. The young men of the village were all very angry because the girl had spoken of them all so scornfully, and often they talked among themselves of her proud and haughty air. "She calls us Scattered-Brains," said one. "She says we have small minds," said another. "She must pay for these insults," said a third. So they vowed that they would somehow break her proud spirit and bring her sorrow because of her ideas and her decision to stay single all her life. One of the great men of the village was Whirlwind. He could make himself invisible, and he was often guilty of many wicked pranks. So the young men went to him and asked his aid in humbling the pride of the haughty maiden. As they were talking to him, they saw the girl approaching not far off. And quite unawares, Whirlwind rushed towards her and knocked her down in the mud and tore her hat from her head and swept it into the sea. The young men looked on at her plight and they all laughed loudly, and the girl was very much ashamed. She went back home and told her father what had happened, and showed him her soiled clothes and her blown hair falling about her face. Her father was very angry, and he said, "Whirlwind must pay for this. He shall be banished at once."

Then her father went to the Chief and made complaint against Whirlwind, and the Chief decreed that Whirlwind must leave the village forthwith. He did not consider very carefully what the result of this decree might be, and he acted hastily and without thought, for he feared to differ from the wise man. So Whirlwind prepared to leave the place. Now his best friend was Rain. Rain had been born without eyes. He was black blind, and Whirlwind always had to lead him along wherever he wished to go. So Rain said, "If you are leaving the village, I want to leave it too, for I cannot live here without you. I will be helpless if I have no one to lead me." So the two set out together, Whirlwind leading old Rain along by his side. Where they went no man knew, for they had told nobody of their destination. They were gone for many months before the people missed them very much. Then their absence began to be felt in all the land, for there was no wind and there was no rain.

At last the Chief summoned a council, and the decree of banishment against Whirlwind was revoked. The people decided to send messengers to the two wandering ones to tell them what had happened and to bring them back. So they first sent Fox out on the quest. Fox went through the land for many weeks, running as fast as he could over many roads, in and out among marshy lake shores and over high wooded mountains. He searched every cave and crevice, but he had no success. Not a leaf or a blade of grass was stirring, and the country was all parched and the grass was withered brown and the streams were all getting dry. At last, after a fruitless search, he came home and shamefully confessed that his quest had failed.

Then the people called on Bear to continue the search. And Bear went lumbering over the earth, sniffing the air, and turning over logs and great rocks with his powerful shoulders, and venturing into deep caverns. And he made many inquiries, and he asked the Mountain Ash, "Where is Whirlwind?" But Mountain Ash said, "I do not know. I have not seen him for many months." And he asked the Red Fir, and the Pine, and the Aspen, which always sees Whirlwind first, but they were all ignorant of his whereabouts. So Bear came home and said, "Not a trace of either of them have I found."

The Chief was very angry because of the failure of Fox and Bear, but the wise man said, "The animals are useless in a quest like this. Let us try the birds. They often succeed where the animals fail." And the Chief agreed, for the land was in great distress. Many fishing-boats lay silent on the sea near the coast unable to move because Whirlwind was away, and the wells and streams were all dry because Rain was absent, and the grass and the flowers were withering to decay. So they called the birds to their aid. The great Crane searched in the shallows and among the reeds, thrusting his long neck into deep places, and Crow looked among the hills, and Kingfisher flew far out to sea, but they all came back and said, "We, too, have failed. The wandering ones are nowhere on the land or upon the sea." Then little Sparrow took up the search. Before he set out, he plucked from his breast a small down-feather and fastened it to a stick no bigger than a wisp of hay. He held the stick in his bill and flew off. For many days he went towards the south-land, all the time watching the feather hanging to the stick in his bill. But it hung there motionless. One day, after he had travelled a great distance, he saw the down-feather moving very gently, and he knew that Whirlwind must be not far away. He went in the direction from which the feather was blowing. Soon he saw beneath him soft green grass and wonderful flowers of varied colours, and trees with green leaves and many rippling streams of running water. And he said to himself, "At last I have found the wanderers." He followed a little stream for some distance until it ended in a cave in the hills. In front of the cave many flowers were blooming and the grass was soft and green, and the tall grasses were nodding their heads very gently. He knew that those he was seeking were inside, and he entered the cave very quietly. Just beyond the door a fire was smouldering and near it lay Rain and Whirlwind both fast asleep. Sparrow tried to wake them with his bill and his cries, but they were sleeping too soundly. Then he took a coal from the fire and put it on Rain's back, but it spluttered and fizzled and soon went out. He tried another, but the same thing happened. Then he took a third coal, and this time Rain woke up. He was much surprised to hear a stranger in the cave, but he could not see him because he was blind. So he woke up Whirlwind to protect him.

Then Sparrow told them of the great trouble in the north country and of the great hardship and sorrow their absence had brought to the people, and of how sadly they had been missed and of the decision of the council to call them back. And Whirlwind said, "We shall return to-morrow if we are so badly needed. You may go back and tell your people that we are coming. We shall be there the day after you arrive." So Sparrow, feeling very proud of his success, flew back home. But when he arrived after many days, he went first to his own people to tell them the good news. And the Sparrow-people all gathered together and held a feast of celebration, and they twittered and danced and made a great hub-bub in their excitement because Rain was coming back on the morrow. Then Sparrow went to the Chief and said, "Oh, Chief, I have found Rain and Whirlwind and to-morrow they will be here," and he told the story of his flight to the south and of his discovery. And the Chief said, "Because of your success, you will never be hunted for game or killed for food."

The next morning the two travellers who had been so long away came back to the land. Whirlwind came first and great clouds of dust foretold his coming, and the sea dashed high against the rocks, and the trees shrieked and tossed their heads, all dancing gaily because of his return. When Whirlwind had passed by, Rain came along following close, because of his blindness. For several days Rain stayed with the people and the flowers bloomed and the grass was green again and the wells and streams were no longer dry. And since that time Wind and Rain have never long been absent from the Atlantic Coast. And to this day the Sparrow-people know when Rain is coming, and to signal his approach they gather together and twitter and hop along and make a great hub-bub, just as they did when their ancestor found him by means of his down-feather in the olden days. But the Indians have been true to the Chief's promise, and they will not hunt Sparrows for game nor kill them for food or for their feathers. For they remember that of all the birds it was old Sparrow who long ago searched successfully for the Rain.



Story DNA folk tale · solemn

Moral

Even the smallest and most overlooked can achieve great things, and pride can lead to unforeseen consequences for all.

Plot Summary

A wise old warrior's discerning daughter rejects all suitors, angering the village's young men. They conspire with the mischievous Whirlwind to humiliate her, leading to Whirlwind's banishment. His blind friend, Rain, leaves with him, causing a severe drought and stillness that devastates the land. After powerful animals and birds fail to find them, a humble little Sparrow uses a unique method to track down Whirlwind and Rain in a hidden, lush cave. Sparrow convinces them to return, restoring balance to nature, and is forever honored by his people and the community.

Themes

consequences of prideinterconnectedness of natureperseverance of the humblejustice and reconciliation

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs society
Ending: moral justice
Magic: old warrior's great power and understanding, Whirlwind's ability to become invisible and cause mischief, Rain being a personified, blind entity, animals and birds speaking and undertaking quests
the maiden's hat (symbol of her dignity/vulnerability)the down-feather (symbol of humble ingenuity)the parched land (symbol of suffering and imbalance)

Cultural Context

Origin: Indigenous Canadian (likely Mi'kmaq or similar Atlantic Coast First Nations)
Era: timeless fairy tale

This story reflects the deep connection Indigenous peoples have with their environment and the spiritual significance of natural phenomena like wind and rain. The 'Indian people' reference points to First Nations cultures of the Atlantic Coast of Canada.

Plot Beats (17)

  1. An old warrior's beautiful and wise daughter rejects many suitors, deeming them dull and small-minded.
  2. The rejected young men, angered by her scorn, conspire with the mischievous Whirlwind to humiliate her.
  3. Whirlwind knocks the maiden down, tears off her hat, and sweeps it into the sea, causing her great shame.
  4. The maiden's father, enraged, complains to the Chief, who hastily banishes Whirlwind from the village.
  5. Whirlwind's blind friend, Rain, chooses to leave with him, as he cannot survive alone.
  6. Their absence causes a severe drought and stillness, paralyzing the land and sea, leading to widespread suffering.
  7. The Chief revokes the banishment and sends Fox to find them, but Fox fails after a long search.
  8. Bear is then sent on the quest, but he too fails to find any trace of Whirlwind or Rain.
  9. The Chief, on the wise man's advice, sends birds, but Crane, Crow, and Kingfisher all return unsuccessful.
  10. Little Sparrow takes up the search, using a down-feather on a stick to detect the wind's presence.
  11. Sparrow travels south, finds a lush area, and discovers Whirlwind and Rain asleep in a cave.
  12. Sparrow wakes Rain by placing a hot coal on his back, and Rain wakes Whirlwind.
  13. Sparrow informs them of the suffering in the north and the council's decision to call them back.
  14. Whirlwind and Rain agree to return, and Sparrow flies back to announce their coming, first to his own people.
  15. Sparrow tells the Chief, who promises that sparrows will never be hunted for food.
  16. Whirlwind and Rain return, bringing wind and rain back to the land, restoring life and movement.
  17. The Sparrow-people continue to twitter and hop when rain approaches, honoring their ancestor's deed, and Indians uphold the promise not to harm sparrows.

Characters 8 characters

The Maiden ★ protagonist

human young adult female

Of average height and slender build, she possesses a graceful demeanor. Her movements are quiet and reserved, reflecting her inner calm.

Attire: She wears simple, practical clothing suitable for a village near the sea, likely made of natural fibers like deerskin or woven plant materials, possibly adorned with subtle, traditional patterns. After Whirlwind's prank, her clothes are 'soiled', indicating they are not easily replaceable fine garments.

Wants: To live a life of intellectual stimulation and companionship, avoiding 'dull people' and 'foolish chatter'. She seeks a partner who can genuinely interest and amuse her.

Flaw: Her pride and scornful attitude towards those she deems 'small-minded' makes her vulnerable to the resentment and retaliatory actions of others.

Initially proud and dismissive, her humiliation by Whirlwind leads to her father's intervention, which inadvertently causes a severe drought. While she doesn't directly change, her experience is the catalyst for the story's main conflict and resolution, highlighting the consequences of pride and hasty actions.

Her serene, discerning expression, often accompanied by a slight, almost imperceptible frown when unimpressed.

Gentle, wise, discerning, quiet, independent, proud.

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A young Indigenous woman of the Atlantic Coast, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has long, dark, straight hair, a gentle oval face, dark brown eyes, and smooth, warm brown skin. She wears a simple, well-made deerskin tunic dress, possibly with subtle geometric patterns embroidered at the hem, and soft moccasins. Her posture is composed and dignified, with a thoughtful, discerning expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Old Warrior ◆ supporting

human elderly male

An old man, likely of sturdy build from a lifetime of activity, though now showing the signs of age. His presence commands respect due to his inherent power and wisdom.

Attire: Wears traditional clothing befitting a respected elder and warrior, perhaps a deerskin tunic, leggings, and a cloak, possibly adorned with feathers or shell beads, signifying his status and wisdom.

Wants: To ensure his daughter's happiness and respect, and to uphold justice when she is wronged.

Flaw: His pride in his daughter and his own power can lead to hasty decisions, as seen in his demand for Whirlwind's banishment without considering the consequences.

He acts as a catalyst for the story's central conflict by demanding Whirlwind's banishment, which leads to the drought. He learns the consequences of hasty judgment through the suffering of his people.

His wise, deeply lined face with piercing dark eyes, framed by long, grey hair, and a proud, unyielding expression.

Wise, powerful, proud, protective, somewhat boastful, quick to anger when his daughter is wronged.

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An elderly Indigenous man of the Atlantic Coast, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a strong, weathered face with deep lines, dark, intelligent eyes, and long, braided white hair. He wears a sturdy deerskin tunic, adorned with subtle quillwork, and a simple woven belt. His posture is upright and commanding, with a wise and stern expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Loon ○ minor

human young adult male

Tall and skinny, with a neck that is 'a bit longer and more scrawny than ordinary'. He is described as 'very good looking' despite these quirks.

Attire: Wears 'good clothes', implying well-made traditional attire, perhaps indicating some status or wealth, but not necessarily elaborate.

Wants: To win the Maiden's hand based on his good looks.

Flaw: His inability to engage in meaningful conversation and his foolish laughter, which reveals his 'small mind'.

Fails in his attempt to woo the Maiden and departs in despair.

His long, scrawny neck and a blank stare that breaks into sudden, inappropriate laughter.

Vain, silent, foolish, lacking conversational skills, easily resorts to inappropriate laughter.

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A tall, slender Indigenous man of the Atlantic Coast, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a handsome, somewhat angular face, dark eyes that tend to stare, and a noticeably long, thin neck. His dark hair is neatly kept. He wears a well-crafted deerskin tunic and leggings, with a simple woven belt. His expression is initially blank, then shifts to a wide, somewhat foolish grin. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Fox ○ minor

animal adult male

A typical red fox, agile and quick, with reddish-brown fur, a bushy tail, and keen eyes.

Wants: Initially, to amuse the Maiden and win her hand. Later, to find Whirlwind and Rain for the village.

Flaw: His inability to genuinely amuse the Maiden, and his failure to find Whirlwind and Rain despite his efforts.

Fails as a suitor, then fails as a messenger, highlighting the difficulty of the quest.

A red fox chasing its own bushy tail in a circle.

Playful, persistent (initially), easily discouraged, diligent (in his search), ultimately unsuccessful.

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A vibrant red fox, standing on all fours, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. It has sleek reddish-brown fur, a bushy tail with a white tip, and bright, alert amber eyes. Its posture is agile and energetic, with a curious expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Whirlwind ⚔ antagonist

elemental spirit ageless non-human

Invisible, but his presence is manifested as a powerful, disruptive force. When he returns, 'great clouds of dust foretold his coming, and the sea dashed high against the rocks, and the trees shrieked and tossed their heads'.

Attire: N/A (invisible)

Wants: To humble the proud Maiden, and later, to stay with his blind friend Rain.

Flaw: His susceptibility to being manipulated by the young men, and his pride, which leads to his banishment.

Acts as an antagonist by humiliating the Maiden, leading to his banishment and the subsequent drought. He returns to restore balance, but his character remains largely unchanged, representing a force of nature.

A swirling vortex of dust and leaves, with trees bending violently in its path.

Mischievous, wicked, prankster, resentful, loyal (to Rain).

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A dynamic representation of a powerful, invisible force, depicted as a swirling column of dust, leaves, and debris, with a strong gust of wind visibly bending tall trees in the background. The air around it shimmers with raw energy. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Rain ◆ supporting

elemental spirit ageless non-human

Described as 'black blind', implying a physical manifestation that is dark or obscured, perhaps like a heavy cloud. His presence brings green grass, flowers, and rippling streams.

Wants: To stay with his only guide and friend, Whirlwind.

Flaw: His blindness, which makes him utterly dependent on Whirlwind.

His departure with Whirlwind causes a devastating drought, highlighting his crucial role in the ecosystem. His return restores life to the land, emphasizing his benevolent nature.

A dark, formless figure being gently guided by an invisible force, with a sense of profound blindness.

Dependent, loyal (to Whirlwind), surprised, easily awakened by discomfort.

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A dark, amorphous figure, resembling a heavy, swirling cloud, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. It has no discernible eyes, conveying a sense of profound blindness. Its form is somewhat indistinct, suggesting its elemental nature. Its posture is slightly hesitant, as if waiting to be led. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Sparrow ★ protagonist

animal adult male

A 'little Sparrow', implying a small, agile bird with typical sparrow plumage: brown, grey, and streaked feathers.

Attire: N/A (natural plumage)

Wants: To find Whirlwind and Rain and end the drought, saving his people and the land.

Flaw: His small size makes it difficult to rouse the sleeping elemental spirits.

Transforms from a 'little Sparrow' to the hero who saves the land, earning eternal protection for his kind. He learns the value of persistence and ingenuity.

A small sparrow holding a tiny stick with a single down-feather in its beak, flying purposefully.

Determined, observant, resourceful, persistent, proud, heroic.

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A small, determined sparrow, with mottled brown and grey feathers, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. It has bright, alert black eyes and a tiny, pointed beak. In its beak, it holds a thin stick, from which a single, delicate white down-feather hangs. Its posture is poised and ready for flight, with a focused expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Chief ◆ supporting

human adult male

A leader of the village, likely of a strong and respected build, reflecting his authority.

Attire: Wears traditional regalia befitting a Chief, perhaps a tunic adorned with significant beadwork or quillwork, and possibly a headpiece with feathers, signifying his leadership.

Wants: To maintain order and well-being in his village, and to resolve the crisis of the drought.

Flaw: Acts 'hastily and without thought' when banishing Whirlwind, fearing to differ from the wise man.

Initially makes a hasty decision that leads to disaster, but later demonstrates wisdom by seeking solutions and rewarding the hero, learning the importance of careful consideration.

A dignified Indigenous Chief, wearing a feathered headpiece, with a concerned yet resolute expression.

Authoritative, somewhat hasty (initially), concerned for his people, grateful, just.

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A dignified Indigenous Chief of the Atlantic Coast, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a strong, mature face, dark, serious eyes, and dark hair, possibly adorned with a simple, traditional feathered headpiece. He wears a richly decorated deerskin tunic, possibly with intricate beadwork or quillwork, and a woven sash. His posture is authoritative and composed, with an expression of deep concern. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 2 locations
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Sea-coast Village

outdoor Initially temperate, transitioning to severe drought with no wind or rain, parched earth, and withered vegetation.

A traditional Mi'kmaq village situated near the Atlantic coast, characterized by dwellings like wigwams or longhouses, with fishing boats on the nearby sea. The land becomes parched and withered brown during the drought, with dry wells and streams.

Mood: Initially peaceful, then shifts to distress and desperation due to the drought, later returning to joy and relief.

The home of the maiden and her father, where the initial conflict with Whirlwind occurs, and where the people suffer from the drought before Rain and Whirlwind return.

Wigwams or longhouses Atlantic coastline Fishing boats Parched earth Withered grass and flowers Dry streams and wells Crashing waves (upon Whirlwind's return)
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A Mi'kmaq village on the Atlantic coast, with several conical wigwams made of birch bark and spruce poles, nestled among sparse, wind-swept trees. The ground is dry and cracked, with patches of withered brown grass. In the distance, the sea is calm and still under a hazy, cloudless sky, with several traditional Mi'kmaq canoes beached on the shore. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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The South-land Cave

indoor Lush and verdant, contrasting sharply with the drought-stricken north. Mild and moist, with gentle breezes.

A hidden cave in the hills of a lush, verdant south-land. The entrance is surrounded by soft green grass, vibrant flowers of varied colors, and trees with green leaves. Inside, a fire smolders, providing warmth and light.

Mood: Secluded, peaceful, and life-sustaining, a stark contrast to the suffering north.

The secret refuge of Rain and Whirlwind, discovered by Sparrow, where he convinces them to return to the north.

Cave entrance Soft green grass Varied colored flowers Trees with green leaves Rippling streams leading to the cave Smouldering fire inside the cave Tall grasses nodding gently
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A hidden cave entrance nestled into a hillside, framed by vibrant green ferns and moss-covered rocks. A small, clear stream trickles over smooth pebbles and flows past clusters of bright wildflowers in shades of red, blue, and yellow. Inside the cave, a small, smouldering fire casts a warm, flickering glow on the rough, damp stone walls. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.