THE LAIDLY WORM

by Flora Annie Webster Steel · from English Fairy Tales

fairy tale transformation hopeful Ages 8-14 1467 words 7 min read
Cover: THE LAIDLY WORM

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 406 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once upon a time, in a big castle, lived a King. His wife died. His son, Prince Wynde, went away. The King married a pretty lady. She was not kind. She became the Mean Queen.

The King had a daughter. Her name was Princess May. Princess May was not happy. She did not like the new Queen. But Princess May was polite. She welcomed the new Queen.

The new Queen came to the castle. People saw Princess May. They said she was very pretty. This made the Mean Queen angry. She did not like Princess May.

The Mean Queen used magic. She turned Princess May. Princess May became a big, scary worm. She would stay a worm. Prince Wynde must come. He must give three special kisses.

Princess May was a big, scary worm. It made people scared. The worm lived by the sea. It needed milk every day. People brought milk for it.

Prince Wynde heard about the worm. He thought of his sister. He built a special wooden ship. He wanted to go home. He sailed across the sea.

The Mean Queen sent bad magic. She sent big storms. She wanted to stop Prince Wynde. His special ship was safe. The magic could not hurt it.

The Mean Queen made the big worm stop. It pushed Prince Wynde's ship. The ship could not land. Prince Wynde tried many times. The worm pushed it away.

Prince Wynde was very smart. He found another place. He landed on a beach. He got ready to meet the worm. He took out his sword.

The big worm spoke. It had his sister's voice. "Please put your sword down," it said. "Give me three special kisses." Prince Wynde stopped.

Prince Wynde knew it was his sister. He put his sword away. He gave the big worm one kiss. Then he gave it two kisses. He gave it three kisses.

The big worm turned back. It was Princess May again! She was not a worm. She was his sister. Prince Wynde was very happy.

Prince Wynde talked to the Mean Queen. He used magic. He turned her into a little toad. The Mean Queen became a toad. She hopped away fast.

Prince Wynde and Princess May were happy. They lived together in the castle. The mean Queen was a toad. She lived near the castle. Being kind is strong magic. Love can fix bad things. Mean people do not win.

Original Story 1467 words · 7 min read

THE LAIDLY WORM

In Bamborough Castle there once lived a King who had two children, a son named Childe Wynde, and a daughter who was called May Margret. Their mother, a fair woman, was dead, and the King mourned her long and faithfully. But, after his son Childe Wynde went to seek his fortune, the King, hunting in the forest, came across a lady of such great beauty that he fell in love with her at once and determined to marry her.

Now Princess May Margret was not over-pleased to think that her mother's place should be taken by a strange woman, nor was she pleased to think that she would have to give up keeping house for her father the King. For she had always taken a pride in her work. But she said nothing, though she stood long on the castle walls looking out across the sea wishing for her dear brother's return; for, see you, they had mothered each other.

Still no news came of Childe Wynde; so on the day when the old King was to bring the new Queen home, May Margret counted over the keys of the castle chambers, knotted them on a string, and after casting them over her left shoulder for luck—more for her father's sake than for the new Queen's regard—she stood at the castle gate ready to hand over the keys to her stepmother.

Now as the bridal procession approached with all the lords of the north countrie, and some of the Scots lords in attendance, she looked so fair and so sweet, that the lords whispered to one another of her beauty. And when, after saying in a voice like a mavis—

"Oh welcome, welcome, father,

Unto your halls and towers!

And welcome too, my stepmother,

For all that's here is yours!"

she turned upon the step and tripped into the yard, the Scots lords said aloud:

"Forsooth! May Margret's grace

Surpasses all that we have met, she has so fair a face!"

Now the new Queen overheard this, and she stamped her foot and her face flushed with anger as she turned her about and called:

"You might have excepted me,

But I will bring May Margret to a Laidly Worm's degree;

I'll bring her low as a Laidly Worm

That warps about a stone,

And not till the Childe of Wynde come back

Will the witching be undone."

Well! hearing this May Margret laughed, not knowing that her new stepmother, for all her beauty, was a witch; and the laugh made the wicked woman still more angry. So that same night she left her royal bed, and, returning to the lonely cave where she had ever done her magic, she cast Princess May Margret under a spell with charms three times three, and passes nine times nine. And this was her spell:

"I weird ye to a Laidly Worm,

And such sail ye ever be

Until Childe Wynde the King's dear son

Comes home across the sea.

Until the world comes to an end

Unspelled ye'll never be,

Unless Childe Wynde of his own free will

Sail give you kisses three!"

So it came to pass that Princess May Margret went to her bed a beauteous maiden, full of grace, and rose next morning a Laidly Worm; for when her tire-women came to dress her they found coiled up in her bed an awesome dragon, which uncoiled itself and came towards them. And when they ran away terrified, the Laidly Worm crawled and crept, and crept and crawled down to the sea till it reached the rock of the Spindlestone which is called the Heugh. And there it curled itself round the stone, and lay basking in the sun.

Then for seven miles east and seven miles west and seven miles north and south the whole country-side knew the hunger of the Laidly Worm of Spindlestone Heugh, for it drove the awesome beast to leave its resting-place at night and devour everything it came across.

At last a wise warlock told the people that if they wished to be quit of these horrors, they must take every drop of the milk of seven white milch kine every morn and every eve to the trough of stone at the foot of the Heugh, for the Laidly Worm to drink. And this they did, and after that the Laidly Worm troubled the country-side no longer; but lay warped about the Heugh, looking out to sea with its terrible snout in the air.

But the word of its doings had gone east and had gone west; it had even gone over the sea and had come to Childe Wynde's ears; and the news of it angered him; for he thought perchance it had something to do with his beloved sister May Margret's disappearance. So he called his men-at-arms together and said:

"We must sail to Bamborough and land by Spindlestone, so as to quell and kill this Laidly Worm."

Then they built a ship without delay, laying the keel with wood from the rowan tree. And they made masts of rowan wood also, and oars likewise; and, so furnished, set forth.

Now the wicked Queen knew by her arts they were coming, so she sent out her imps to still the winds so that the fluttering sails of silk hung idle on the masts. But Childe Wynde was not to be bested; so he called out the oarsmen. Thus it came to pass that one morn the wicked Queen, looking from the Keep, saw the gallant ship in Bamborough Bay, and she sent out all her witch-wives and her impets to raise a storm and sink the ship; but they came back unable to hurt it, for, see you, it was built of rowan wood, over which witches have no power.

Then, as a last device, the Witch Queen laid spells upon the Laidly Worm saying:

"Oh! Laidly Worm! Go make their topmast heel,

Go! Worm the sand, and creep beneath the keel."

Now the Laidly Worm had no choice but to obey. So:

"The Worm leapt up, the Worm leapt down

And plaited round each plank,

And aye as the ship came close to shore

She heeled as if she sank."

Three times three did Childe Wynde attempt to land, and three times three the Laidly Worm kept the good ship from the shore. At last Childe Wynde gave the word to put the ship about, and the Witch Queen, who was watching from the Keep, thought he had given up: but he was not to be bested: for he only rounded the next point to Budley sands. And there, jumping into the shoal water, he got safely to land, and drawing his sword of proof, rushed up to fight the awesome Worm. But as he raised his sword to strike he heard a voice, soft as the western wind:

"Oh quit thy sword, unbend thy bow,

And give me kisses three,

For though I seem a Laidly Worm

No harm I'll do to thee!"

And the voice seemed to him like the voice of his dear sister May Margret. So he stayed his hand. Then once again the Laidly Worm said:

"Oh quit thy sword, unbend thy bow,

My laidly form forget.

Forgive the wrong and kiss me thrice

For love of May Margret."

Then Childe Wynde, remembering how he had loved his sister, put his arms round the Laidly Worm and kissed it once. And he kissed the loathly thing twice. And he kissed it yet a third time as he stood with the wet sand at his feet.

Then with a hiss and a roar the Laidly Worm sank to the sand, and in his arms was May Margret!

He wrapped her in his mantle, for she trembled in the cold sea air, and carried her to Bamborough Castle, where the wicked Queen, knowing her hour was come, stood, all deserted by her imps and witch-wives, on the stairs, twisting her hands.

Then Childe Wynde looking at her cried:

"Woe! Woe to thee, thou wicked Witch!

An ill fate shalt thine be!

The doom thou dreed on May Margret

The same doom shalt thou dree.

Henceforth thou'lt be a Laidly Toad

That in the clay doth wend,

And unspelled thou wilt never be

Till this world hath an end."

And as he spoke the wicked Queen began to shrivel, and she shrivelled and shrivelled to a horrid wrinkled toad that hopped down the castle steps and disappeared in a crevice.

But to this day a loathsome toad is sometimes seen haunting Bamborough Keep; and that Laidly Toad is the wicked Witch Queen!

But Childe Wynde and Princess May Margret loved each other as much as ever, and lived happily ever after.



Story DNA fairy tale · hopeful

Moral

True love and loyalty can break the most powerful curses, and wickedness eventually meets its just reward.

Plot Summary

After his wife's death, a King remarries, bringing a beautiful but wicked Queen into Bamborough Castle. The Queen, consumed by jealousy over Princess May Margret's beauty, curses her into a monstrous 'Laidly Worm'. The Worm terrorizes the land until May Margret's brother, Childe Wynde, returns from sea. Despite the Witch Queen's magical attempts to stop him, Childe Wynde, protected by his rowan wood ship, eventually confronts the Worm. Recognizing his sister's voice, he gives the Worm three kisses, breaking the curse and restoring May Margret. As justice, Childe Wynde then transforms the wicked Queen into a loathsome toad, and he and his sister live happily ever after.

Themes

jealousysibling loveperseverancejustice

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: repetition, rule of three, poetic verse integration

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: moral justice
Magic: transformation spells, witches and imps, magical protection (rowan wood), curses and counter-curses, talking animals/monsters
the Laidly Worm (symbol of transformation and suffering)rowan wood (protection against evil)three kisses (breaking the spell)

Cultural Context

Origin: English
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story is a retelling of a traditional Northumbrian ballad, 'The Laidly Worm of Spindlestone Heugh', reflecting local legends and beliefs about magic and ancient castles.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. A King, after his wife's death and son Childe Wynde's departure, marries a new, beautiful lady.
  2. Princess May Margret, the King's daughter, is displeased but accepts the new Queen.
  3. Upon the Queen's arrival, lords praise May Margret's beauty, angering the Queen.
  4. The Queen, a witch, curses May Margret to become a 'Laidly Worm' until Childe Wynde returns and gives her three kisses.
  5. May Margret transforms into a terrifying dragon-like worm and terrorizes the land, demanding daily milk offerings.
  6. News of the Laidly Worm reaches Childe Wynde, who suspects it's connected to his sister's disappearance and sails home in a rowan wood ship.
  7. The Witch Queen sends imps and raises storms to stop Childe Wynde, but the rowan wood protects his ship.
  8. The Queen then compels the Laidly Worm to prevent Childe Wynde's ship from landing at Bamborough.
  9. Childe Wynde eventually lands at Budley sands and prepares to fight the Worm.
  10. The Laidly Worm speaks with May Margret's voice, asking for three kisses instead of a fight.
  11. Childe Wynde, recognizing his sister's voice, kisses the Worm three times.
  12. The Laidly Worm transforms back into Princess May Margret.
  13. Childe Wynde confronts the wicked Queen and curses her to become a Laidly Toad, which she does.
  14. Childe Wynde and May Margret live happily ever after, while the toad haunts the castle.

Characters 4 characters

May Margret ★ protagonist

human young adult female

Of fair and sweet countenance, with a graceful form. She is described as having a beauty that surpasses all others encountered by the lords.

Attire: Initially, she would wear the fine, yet practical, attire of a medieval princess managing a castle, likely a kirtle or gown of wool or linen, possibly with a surcoat, in colors suitable for her station. After her transformation, she is naked, requiring her brother's mantle.

Wants: To maintain her role and protect her family's legacy, to be reunited with her brother, and ultimately, to be freed from her curse.

Flaw: Her initial naivety regarding the stepmother's true nature, and her vulnerability to powerful magic.

Transforms from a beautiful princess into a monstrous Laidly Worm due to a curse, then is restored to her human form through her brother's love and courage. She learns the true nature of evil and the enduring power of familial love.

Her transformation from a beautiful maiden to a colossal, serpentine dragon, and then back again.

Proud (of her work), loving (towards her brother and father), dutiful, initially naive (laughing at the witch's threat), forgiving (asking for forgiveness for her 'laidly form').

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A young noblewoman standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a fair, sweet face with soft features and kind eyes. Her light brown hair is long and styled in a simple, elegant braid. She wears a deep blue wool kirtle with long sleeves, a cream linen chemise peeking at the neck, and a simple silver belt. Her posture is graceful and slightly reserved. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Childe Wynde ★ protagonist

human young adult male

A strong and determined young man, capable of leading men-at-arms and sailing a ship. His build would be athletic and capable, fitting for a prince seeking his fortune and later battling a monster.

Attire: Wears the attire of a medieval prince and warrior, including armor or sturdy traveling clothes. Upon rescuing his sister, he wraps her in his 'mantle', suggesting a cloak of fine, warm fabric.

Wants: To seek his fortune, to investigate the rumors of the Laidly Worm, and to rescue his beloved sister.

Flaw: His initial impulse to fight the worm with violence rather than understanding.

Travels the world, then returns to confront the monster plaguing his homeland, only to discover it is his cursed sister. He overcomes his initial instinct for violence with love, breaking the curse and restoring his sister and peace to the land.

A determined young prince, sword drawn, confronting a massive serpentine creature, then embracing it.

Brave, determined, loving (towards his sister), resolute, intelligent (outsmarting the witch's attempts to stop him).

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A young prince standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a strong, determined face with a square jaw and serious brown eyes. His short, dark brown hair is practical and slightly windswept. He wears a sturdy tunic of forest green wool, leather breeches, and tall brown leather boots. A heavy, dark blue wool mantle is draped over one shoulder. He holds a polished steel longsword in his right hand, point down. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Witch Queen ⚔ antagonist

human (witch) adult female

Initially described as a lady of 'great beauty', which is a deceptive facade for her wicked nature. After her transformation, she becomes a 'horrid wrinkled toad'.

Attire: As the new Queen, she would wear rich, elaborate gowns of silk and velvet, likely in dark or jewel tones, adorned with jewels, befitting a powerful queen, though her true nature suggests a preference for more sinister or dramatic styles. She would have a regal, imposing presence.

Wants: To secure her position as Queen, to eliminate any perceived rivals (May Margret), and to wield her magical power.

Flaw: Her overwhelming vanity and jealousy, which lead her to act rashly and cruelly. Her magic is powerless against rowan wood.

Begins as a beautiful, cunning witch who curses May Margret out of jealousy. Her attempts to thwart Childe Wynde fail, leading to her own downfall and transformation into a loathsome toad, a permanent punishment for her wickedness.

A beautiful, regal queen with a sinister glint in her eyes, transforming into a hideous, warty toad.

Vain, jealous, wicked, vengeful, powerful (magically), cunning, cruel.

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A regal adult woman standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a strikingly beautiful but stern face with sharp features, high cheekbones, and piercing dark eyes. Her long, dark hair is styled in an elaborate updo, adorned with a simple silver circlet. She wears a flowing gown of deep emerald green velvet with wide sleeves and intricate silver embroidery along the hem and cuffs. Her posture is imperious and rigid, with a subtle sneer on her lips. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The King ○ minor

human adult male

No specific details, but as a King, he would likely be of a dignified and imposing stature.

Attire: Wears the royal attire of a King, likely rich robes and a crown, suitable for a monarch of Bamborough Castle in medieval Northumbria.

Wants: To find companionship after the death of his first wife, to rule his kingdom.

Flaw: His susceptibility to the Witch Queen's beauty, leading him to overlook her true nature.

Remarries, unknowingly bringing a witch into his family, which leads to his daughter's curse. He is largely passive in the resolution of the conflict.

A somber king, perhaps with a crown slightly askew, caught between his grief and new love.

Mournful, susceptible to beauty, perhaps somewhat naive or easily swayed by charm.

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An elderly king standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a kind, weary face with a neatly trimmed grey beard and gentle blue eyes. His balding head is adorned with a simple gold crown set with a single ruby. He wears a long, flowing robe of deep crimson velvet, trimmed with ermine fur, over a dark tunic. His posture is slightly stooped with an air of quiet dignity. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 4 locations
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Bamborough Castle Walls

transitional Implied temperate, often windy coastal weather

Ancient stone battlements of a formidable castle, overlooking a vast expanse of the sea. The stone is weathered, and the air is often brisk with sea winds.

Mood: Melancholy, watchful, isolated, anticipation

Princess May Margret stands here, longing for her brother's return and contemplating her new stepmother's arrival.

High stone battlements View of the sea Distant horizon Wind-swept air
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A wide shot of ancient, rough-hewn stone castle battlements, overlooking a turbulent, grey-blue sea under a dramatic, cloud-streaked sky. The stone shows centuries of weathering, with patches of dark moss in crevices. The horizon is vast and empty, suggesting isolation. The light is cool and diffused, hinting at a northern climate. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Bamborough Castle Gate and Yard

transitional afternoon Clear, possibly breezy

The main entrance to Bamborough Castle, featuring a sturdy gate and a spacious inner yard. The architecture is robust, typical of a Northumbrian medieval fortress, built with local stone. The yard is likely paved with cobblestones.

Mood: Formal, tense, public, ceremonial

May Margret greets her father and stepmother, handing over the castle keys, and the Queen overhears the lords praising May Margret's beauty, leading to the curse.

Sturdy castle gate Cobblestone yard Stone steps leading into the yard Procession of lords and the King's retinue
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A grand, imposing medieval castle gate made of heavy oak and iron, set within thick, rough-hewn stone walls. The gate opens into a wide, sunlit cobblestone yard where a formal procession is just entering. Sunlight casts long shadows across the textured stone and the uneven ground. The atmosphere is one of solemn ceremony mixed with underlying tension. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Spindlestone Heugh (Rock and Shore)

outdoor Cold, windy, coastal, often overcast

A prominent, rugged rock formation known as the Heugh, situated directly on the Northumbrian coastline. The surrounding area consists of wet sand, tidal pools, and exposed rock. The sea is often rough, and the air is cold and salty. A stone trough is later placed at its foot.

Mood: Desolate, eerie, wild, exposed, foreboding

The Laidly Worm resides here, terrorizing the countryside. Childe Wynde lands nearby and confronts the Worm, breaking the spell with three kisses.

Spindlestone Heugh (large rock) Wet sand and tidal pools Rough sea Stone trough at the base of the rock Rowan wood ship in the bay
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A dramatic, windswept Northumbrian coastline featuring a massive, dark, jagged rock formation, the 'Spindlestone Heugh,' rising from the wet, dark sand. The foreground shows glistening tidal pools reflecting a grey, overcast sky. The sea beyond is turbulent and foamy, crashing against the shore. A simple, weathered stone trough sits at the base of the rock. The light is harsh and cold, emphasizing the desolate nature of the landscape. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Bamborough Castle Stairs

indoor day Indoor, no specific weather

A grand, internal stone staircase within Bamborough Castle, likely wide and made of worn, ancient stone. The walls are thick, and the lighting is probably dim, relying on natural light from high windows or torches.

Mood: Tense, climactic, finality, justice

Childe Wynde confronts the wicked Queen on the stairs, cursing her to become a Laidly Toad.

Wide stone staircase Thick castle walls Wicked Queen standing alone
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A wide, imposing stone staircase inside a medieval Northumbrian castle. The steps are worn smooth from centuries of use, and the walls are thick, rough-hewn stone. Light filters dimly from a high, narrow window, casting long shadows down the stairwell. The air feels heavy with anticipation. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.