15\. Look at the Rain

by George MacDonald · from The Light Princess

fairy tale transformation hopeful Ages 8-14 3644 words 16 min read
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Once there was a princess. She could float. She never cried. But one day, she cried and cried.

Princess Lily cried a lot. Big tears fell down. They fell on her dress. They fell on the floor. She never cried before. Not one time. Not one tear. But now she could not stop. She cried and cried. She cried for a long time. Her eyes were red. Her cheeks were wet. Her heart was sad.

Outside, a special rain fell. The sun still shone. Big drops fell down. They fell to the ground. The drops looked like jewels. They were red and blue. They were green and yellow. The sky was bright. The palace was in a rainbow. The rain filled the lake. The lake got very full. The rain was so pretty. It was a nice rain. But Princess Lily did not see it. She just cried and cried. She did not look outside. She did not see the colors. She was too sad.

Princess Lily stopped crying. She took a deep breath. She wiped her eyes. She wanted to stand up. She tried to get up. But she could not. She fell down. She tried again. She fell down again. It was very strange. She felt heavy. She felt the ground under her. She did not feel it before. She tried many times. She fell and fell. She fell on her hands. She fell on her knees. She could not stand up. This was new to her. This was very odd. She did not know what to do. She sat on the floor. She looked at her hands. She looked at her feet. Why were they so heavy?

Nurse Nana heard Princess Lily fall. She heard the bumps. She heard the thuds. Nurse Nana ran to her. Nurse Nana was very happy. She clapped her hands. She had a big smile. She said, "My dear child!" She said, "You have weight now!" She said, "You can feel the ground!" Princess Lily rubbed her arm. It was sore. She rubbed her leg. It was sore too. She said, "Oh, is this it?" She felt so heavy. She felt like a big rock. She did not like it. It felt strange to her. It felt bad to her. She wanted to float again.

Prince Leo was in his bed. He was getting well too. He heard the noise. He heard Nurse Nana. He was happy too. He said, "Hurrah!" He asked about the lake. "How is the lake?" he asked. Nurse Nana told him. "The lake is full," she said. "It is very full." Prince Leo smiled a big smile. He said, "That is good." He said, "We are all happy now."

All the people were happy. They all smiled. They cheered out loud. They danced in the streets. Babies laughed and played. Dogs barked and ran. King Arthur told stories. Queen Rose sat with him. She held his hand. King Arthur gave out gold coins. Queen Rose gave out jars of honey. They all shared food. They all shared joy. It was a happy day. Princess Lily was happy too. She still cried a little bit. But she was happy inside. She smiled through her tears.

Prince Leo and Princess Lily will marry. But first she must learn to walk. This is not easy at all. She falls down a lot. She bumps her knees. She bumps her arms. She bumps her chin. She is like a baby. She must start from the start. She tries to walk. She falls down. She tries again. She falls down. It is hard work. She does not like it. She feels sad at times. She wants to walk so much. She wants to run and play. She wants to dance. But she must learn first. One step at a time. One foot, then the next. She holds on to chairs. She holds on to walls. She tries each day.

Princess Lily said, "This is so hard!" She said, "I was better before." She wanted to float again. Prince Leo lifted her up. He carried her like a baby. He was strong and kind. He gave her kisses. He said, "No, this is not it." He said, "Let me show you." He held her close to him. He helped her stand up tall. He helped her take one step. He was there for her. He held her hand tight. His love helped her a lot. His love made her strong. He made her feel safe. He made her feel happy. He made her brave.

Princess Lily smiled at him. She gave Prince Leo a kiss. A soft, sweet kiss. She said, "This is better." She said, "I like this." She liked his hugs a lot. She liked his kind words. She liked his help. She felt happy with him. She felt strong with him. She did not mind falling now. He was there to help her up. His love was good and warm. She felt warm inside. She felt very happy. She looked at his face. She saw his kind eyes. She smiled a sweet smile. He smiled back at her.

Princess Lily learned to walk. It took a long time. It took many, many days. Prince Leo helped her each day. He was a good teacher. He was very kind. She fell less and less now. She walked more and more. She also loved the lake. The lake was very deep now. She could swim in it! She swam with Prince Leo. They made big splashes. They laughed a lot. They played in the water. It was so much fun. She liked her new life. She liked to walk. She liked to swim. She liked it all.

Aunt Greta lived near the lake. The lake got very big. The water went up and up. It went under her house. Her house fell down. Aunt Greta had to leave. She went far, far away. She was not a problem now. She was gone for good. Princess Lily did not see her. Princess Lily was happy.

Princess Lily and Prince Leo lived with joy. They had children. Their children were boys and girls. All their children could walk. They could run fast. They could jump high. They could play all day. They felt the ground. They had weight. They were happy children. They played each day. They ran in the sun. They swam in the lake. Princess Lily and Prince Leo were happy. They were good parents. They loved their children. All the people were happy. They were happy for all time.

Original Story 3644 words · 16 min read

15. Look at the Rain!

The princess burst into a passion of tears, and fell on the floor. There she lay for an hour, and her tears never ceased. All the pent-up crying of her life was spent now. And a rain came on, such as had never been seen in that country. The sun shone all the time, and the great drops, which fell straight to the earth, shone likewise. The palace was in the heart of a rainbow. It was a rain of rubies, and sapphires, and emeralds, and topazes. The torrents poured from the mountains like molten gold; and if it had not been for its subterraneous outlet, the lake would have overflowed and inundated the country. It was full from shore to shore.

But the princess did not heed the lake. She lay on the floor and wept, and this rain within doors was far more wonderful than the rain out of doors.

For when it abated a little, and she proceeded to rise, she found, to her astonishment, that she could not. At length, after many efforts, she succeeded in getting upon her feet. But she tumbled down again directly. Hearing her fall, her old nurse uttered a yell of delight, and ran to her, screaming,—

"My darling child! she's found her gravity!"

"Oh, that's it! is it?" said the princess, rubbing her shoulder and her knee alternately. "I consider it very unpleasant. I feel as if I should be crushed to pieces."

"Hurrah!" cried the prince from the bed. "If you've come round, princess, so have I. How's the lake?"

"Brimful," answered the nurse.

"Then we're all happy."

"That we are indeed!" answered the princess, sobbing.

And there was rejoicing all over the country that rainy day. Even the babies forgot their past troubles, and danced and crowed amazingly. And the king told stories, and the queen listened to them. And he divided the money in his box, and she the honey in her pot, among all the children. And there was such jubilation as was never heard of before.

Of course the prince and princess were betrothed at once. But the princess had to learn to walk, before they could be married with any propriety. And this was not so easy at her time of life, for she could walk no more than a baby. She was always falling down and hurting herself.

"Is this the gravity you used to make so much of?" said she one day to the prince, as he raised her from the floor. "For my part, I was a great deal more comfortable without it."

"No, no, that's not it. This is it," replied the prince, as he took her up, and carried her about like a baby, kissing her all the time. "This is gravity."

"That's better," said she. "I don't mind that so much."

And she smiled the sweetest, loveliest smile in the prince's face. And she gave him one little kiss in return for all his; and he thought them overpaid, for he was beside himself with delight. I fear she complained of her gravity more than once after this, notwithstanding.

It was a long time before she got reconciled to walking. But the pain of learning it was quite counterbalanced by two things, either of which would have been sufficient consolation. The first was, that the prince himself was her teacher; and the second, that she could tumble into the lake as often as she pleased. Still, she preferred to have the prince jump in with her; and the splash they made before was nothing to the splash they made now.

The lake never sank again. In process of time, it wore the roof of the cavern quite through, and was twice as deep as before.

The only revenge the princess took upon her aunt was to tread pretty hard on her gouty toe the next time she saw her. But she was sorry for it the very next day, when she heard that the water had undermined her house, and that it had fallen in the night, burying her in its ruins; whence no one ever ventured to dig up her body. There she lies to this day.

So the prince and princess lived and were happy; and had crowns of gold, and clothes of cloth, and shoes of leather, and children of boys and girls, not one of whom was ever known, on the most critical occasion, to lose the smallest atom of his or her due proportion of gravity.

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Story DNA fairy tale · hopeful

Moral

True love and emotional vulnerability can help one overcome their deepest flaws and find true happiness.

Plot Summary

After a lifetime without tears or physical gravity, a princess finally weeps, causing a magical rain and restoring her gravity. She struggles to adapt to her new weight, constantly falling, but her loving prince patiently teaches her to walk, redefining 'gravity' as the emotional weight of love and connection. Through his affection and her own perseverance, she embraces her humanity, leading to a happy marriage and a life of balance, while her cruel aunt faces a fitting demise.

Themes

identitylovesacrificegrowth

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: lush
Techniques: metaphorical language, personification

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs self
Ending: happy
Magic: a princess born without gravity, a magical rain of jewels, a lake whose level is tied to the princess's gravity
gravity (symbolizing emotional weight, responsibility, and love)the lake (symbolizing the princess's emotional state and the source of her curse)tears (symbolizing emotional release and humanity)

Cultural Context

Origin: Scottish (George MacDonald)
Era: timeless fairy tale

This story is the conclusion of 'The Light Princess,' a longer work by George MacDonald, a Victorian author known for his fantasy and fairy tales. The concept of 'gravity' is used both literally and metaphorically, reflecting a deeper understanding of human weight, responsibility, and love.

Plot Beats (11)

  1. The princess, after a lifetime without tears, bursts into a passionate, hour-long cry, coinciding with an unprecedented, jewel-like rain outside.
  2. As her tears abate, the princess attempts to rise but finds she cannot, repeatedly falling down.
  3. Her old nurse, delighted, exclaims that the princess has 'found her gravity,' much to the princess's discomfort.
  4. The prince, also recovered, expresses joy and asks about the lake, which is now brimful.
  5. General rejoicing spreads throughout the country, with everyone celebrating the change.
  6. The prince and princess are betrothed, but the princess must first learn to walk with her new gravity, which is a painful and difficult process.
  7. The princess complains about her newfound gravity, but the prince redefines 'gravity' as his loving support, carrying and kissing her.
  8. The princess accepts his affection, returning a sweet smile and a kiss, finding this 'gravity' more agreeable.
  9. She slowly reconciles with walking, finding consolation in the prince's teaching and the ability to swim in the now-deepened lake.
  10. The princess takes minor revenge on her aunt, who is later killed when her house is undermined by the lake and collapses.
  11. The prince and princess live happily ever after, having children who are all born with proper gravity.

Characters 6 characters

The Princess ★ protagonist

human young adult female

Of average height and slender build, she previously floated without gravity, suggesting a delicate, almost ethereal appearance. After regaining gravity, she is prone to falling, indicating a lack of physical coordination initially.

Attire: Prior to regaining gravity, her clothing would have been light and flowing, perhaps a simple, elegant gown of fine linen or silk in soft pastels, allowing for her weightless existence. After regaining gravity, she would wear practical, yet still regal, dresses, perhaps of a heavier fabric like wool or brocade, suitable for a princess in a Northern European setting, though she might prefer simpler attire for her swimming lessons.

Wants: To regain a sense of normalcy and comfort, which she finds in the Prince's affection and the ability to swim. Ultimately, to live a happy life with her beloved.

Flaw: Her lack of gravity made her detached and unable to truly connect or experience the world. After regaining it, her physical clumsiness and initial discomfort with her new state are her weaknesses. She is also somewhat self-pitying at first.

She transforms from a detached, floating, emotionally stunted princess into a grounded, physically capable, and loving woman. She learns to embrace the 'gravity' of life, both literally and figuratively, finding happiness and connection.

A young woman in a flowing gown, initially floating effortlessly, then later stumbling and falling, but always with a delicate, almost ethereal quality.

Initially petulant and easily frustrated, as evidenced by her 'passion of tears'. She is also somewhat self-centered, complaining about the 'unpleasant' feeling of gravity. However, she shows a capacity for joy and affection, especially towards the Prince, and a willingness to learn, despite the pain.

Image Prompt & Upload
A young woman with fair skin and delicate features, with long, light blonde hair flowing freely. She wears a simple, flowing gown of pale blue linen. She is in the act of falling gracefully, one hand reaching out, a surprised but gentle expression on her face. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Prince ◆ supporting

human young adult male

Strong enough to carry the Princess 'like a baby' and jump into the lake with her. He is likely of a robust, athletic build, befitting a fairy tale prince.

Attire: He would wear fine, yet practical, princely attire suitable for a Northern European setting, perhaps a tunic and breeches of rich wool or velvet, in colors like deep blue or forest green, with sturdy leather boots. He might wear a simple, unadorned circlet or a feathered cap.

Wants: To see the Princess happy and to marry her. He is driven by love and a desire to help her overcome her unique challenge.

Flaw: Perhaps a slight over-indulgence of the Princess's complaints, though this is framed as part of his loving nature.

He remains consistently loving and supportive, serving as a catalyst for the Princess's growth rather than undergoing a significant personal transformation himself.

A strong, kind-faced young man, often seen gently holding or supporting a delicate young woman.

Joyful, affectionate, patient, and understanding. He is delighted by the Princess's recovery and takes great pleasure in teaching her and showing her affection.

Image Prompt & Upload
A young man of athletic build, with short, dark brown hair and kind, warm brown eyes. He wears a deep blue velvet tunic with silver embroidery at the collar, light grey breeches, and tall brown leather boots. He stands with a confident, open posture, a gentle smile on his face. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Her Old Nurse ◆ supporting

human elderly female

Likely a woman of sturdy build, with the signs of age such as wrinkles and perhaps a slightly stooped posture from years of service. Her movements are quick when excited.

Attire: She would wear the practical, modest clothing of a royal nurse in a Northern European setting: a dark, long-sleeved woolen dress, a white linen apron, and a simple white cap covering her hair. Her clothes would be well-worn but clean.

Wants: The well-being and happiness of the Princess, whom she has cared for since birth.

Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but perhaps a tendency towards emotional outbursts when deeply moved.

She remains a constant, loving presence, celebrating the Princess's transformation.

An elderly woman in a white cap and apron, with an expression of overwhelming joy and affection.

Devoted, excitable, and deeply affectionate towards the Princess. She is observant and knowledgeable about the Princess's condition, celebrating her recovery with unbridled joy.

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An elderly woman with a kind, wrinkled face and bright, observant blue eyes. Her grey hair is neatly tucked under a plain white linen cap. She wears a dark grey woolen dress with long sleeves and a crisp white linen apron tied at her waist. She stands with a slightly stooped but alert posture, a wide, joyful smile on her face. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The King ○ minor

human adult male

Likely a man of dignified bearing, perhaps with a touch of paternal warmth. His physical description is not detailed, but he would carry the gravitas of a monarch.

Attire: Regal but comfortable attire, perhaps a rich velvet tunic over a fine linen shirt, with breeches and soft leather shoes, suitable for telling stories indoors. Colors might be deep reds or purples, signifying royalty.

Wants: The happiness and well-being of his family and his kingdom.

Flaw: Not explicitly stated.

Remains a benevolent ruler, celebrating his daughter's happiness.

A kindly king, perhaps with a crown slightly askew from his relaxed state, sharing stories.

Benevolent, generous, and joyful. He celebrates his daughter's recovery by telling stories and sharing his wealth.

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An adult man of dignified bearing, with a neatly trimmed grey beard and kind, wise blue eyes. He wears a rich, deep red velvet tunic with gold embroidery, a white linen shirt underneath, and dark breeches. A small, simple golden crown rests on his head. He sits comfortably, a gentle, benevolent smile on his face. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Queen ○ minor

human adult female

Likely a woman of graceful bearing, complementing the King. Her physical description is not detailed.

Attire: Elegant but comfortable royal attire, perhaps a gown of fine silk or brocade in a soft color like lavender or cream, suitable for listening to stories indoors. She might wear a simple, elegant necklace.

Wants: The happiness of her family and her people.

Flaw: Not explicitly stated.

Remains a benevolent figure, celebrating her daughter's happiness.

A graceful queen, listening intently, perhaps with a pot of honey nearby.

Attentive, generous, and joyful. She listens to the King's stories and shares her honey with the children.

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An adult woman of graceful bearing, with elegantly styled light brown hair and gentle, attentive green eyes. She wears a flowing gown of lavender silk with delicate silver embroidery at the neckline. A simple golden circlet rests on her head. She sits with a poised and serene posture, a soft, warm expression on her face. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Her Aunt ⚔ antagonist

human elderly female

Suffers from gout in her toe, suggesting an older age and perhaps a less active lifestyle. Her physical description is not detailed, but she is implied to be a negative presence.

Attire: Likely dark, heavy clothing, perhaps a severe gown of dark wool or brocade, reflecting her unpleasant personality. She would wear practical, closed shoes to accommodate her gouty foot.

Wants: To cause misfortune to the Princess, though her specific motivations for the curse are not detailed in this excerpt.

Flaw: Her physical ailment (gout) and her own malicious nature, which ultimately leads to her downfall.

She meets a grim end, buried in the ruins of her house, a consequence of her past actions.

An elderly woman with a pained, sour expression, perhaps clutching a gouty foot.

Antagonistic and presumably resentful, as she was the one who cursed the Princess. Her fate suggests she was not a good person.

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An elderly woman with a gaunt, sour face and thin, dark grey hair pulled back severely. She has sharp, narrow eyes and thin lips. She wears a severe, dark purple woolen gown with a high collar and long sleeves. She stands with a rigid, slightly hunched posture, one foot slightly raised as if in pain, a scowl on her face. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
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Princess's Chamber in the Palace

indoor day Extraordinary rain of rubies, sapphires, emeralds, and topazes, with the sun shining simultaneously; the palace is 'in the heart of a rainbow'.

A lavish room within a European-style palace, likely with ornate furnishings, where the princess falls to the floor in a fit of tears. The room is indirectly illuminated by the extraordinary 'rain of jewels' outside, casting colorful, shimmering light through windows.

Mood: Initially sorrowful and intense, transitioning to joyous and miraculous as the princess regains her gravity and the country rejoices.

The princess regains her gravity after a lifetime of weightlessness, leading to universal rejoicing and her betrothal to the prince.

Princess on the floor weeping Old nurse Prince in bed Windows showing rainbow light and jewel-rain Ornate palace interior
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An opulent European palace interior, possibly Rococo or Baroque, with large arched windows through which an impossible, vibrant light streams. The light is fractured into intense, jewel-toned colors – deep ruby reds, sapphire blues, emerald greens, and topaz yellows – as if reflecting from countless falling gemstones. Dust motes dance in the colorful shafts of light, illuminating rich tapestries and gilded furniture. The floor is polished wood or marble, reflecting the kaleidoscopic light. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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The Lake and its Cavern

outdoor day Extraordinary rain of rubies, sapphires, emeralds, and topazes, with the sun shining simultaneously; torrents pour from mountains; the lake is 'brimful'.

A mysterious, deep lake, initially contained within a cavern, but which eventually wears through its roof and doubles in depth. The surrounding landscape features mountains from which torrents pour like molten gold during the magical rain.

Mood: Magical, powerful, and later, a place of joyful play and freedom for the princess.

The lake rises to its full capacity during the magical rain, symbolizing the princess's regained 'fullness' of being. Later, it becomes a place where the princess joyfully practices her new gravity with the prince.

Brimful lake Mountains with 'molten gold' torrents Subterranean outlet Princess and prince splashing in the lake Worn-through cavern roof
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A vast, deep lake nestled within a dramatic, rugged mountain landscape. During an impossible rain, the sun shines, creating a double rainbow effect over the water. Torrents of water, shimmering like molten gold, cascade down the craggy, dark rock faces of the mountains into the lake. The lake itself is a deep, clear blue, reflecting the vibrant, jewel-toned sky. The surrounding vegetation is sparse but hardy, clinging to the rocky slopes. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.